- 5,170
- 12,522
- 189
thank you so much bro...please keep reading and commentingWaiting...
thank you so much bro...please keep reading and commentingWaiting...
thank you so much bro...please keep reading and commentingNice update
Nice update
Keep it
Waiting for next
thank you so much bro...please keep reading and commentingWaiting...
Vinni is upset, but she knows her brother's nature, as you explained her thoughts, she is just confused due to his behaviour and obviously angry. Well, no sister would understand at first, she would obviously ask that if he needs sexual satisfaction then why don't he go for a girlfriend. But the thing is he is addicted to incest and it is very dangerous once you start thinking about your family members in your sexual fantasy, then you don't get satisfaction easily outside. I too went through that phase, but time heals, as it is unacceptable in any society, well even you have consented sex ( as it is a must) with your partner.UPDATE 47
Usne jaise hi darwaja khola tha waise hi band kiya aur wahan se bhag gayi. Ham dono ke to hosh hi ud gaye the aur ham dono hi badhawas ek doosre ko dekhe ja rahe the. Hame to yeh bhi hosh nahi raha tha ke hamne kapde bhi pehanne hain.
Maine hi kuchh der baad maa ko bola ke maa apni nighty pehno. Maine maa ko nighy pakdai maa ne pehni aur main bhi apne kapde pehan ke apne room ki or mein chala gaya aur jakar let gaya. Par neend meri ankhon se koson door thi.
Main yahi soche ja raha tha ke akhir chhutki ham dono ke baare mein kya soch rahi hogi. Uske ansu bata rahe the ke wo kuchh achha to soch nahi rahi hogi. Isi tarah sochte sochte pata nahi mujhe bhi kab neend aa gayi.
Subah jab main utha to samne vini nazar aayi, wo mujhe dekhte hi good morning bolti thi par aaj usne mujhe dekh ke muh fer liya, main dekh raha tha ke shayad usne maa se bhi baat nahi ki thi kyunki wo khud hi kitchen se pani lekar pi rahi thi. Warna wo maa se chilla chilla kar mangti rehti hai.
Mere aur maa ki nazren mili aur ham dono ne hi isharon isharon mein yeh bola ke vini naraz hai. To maine yeh janchne ke liye usse batchit ke lehje se bola.
Main...good morning chhutki...thodi josh bhari awaz mein.
Vini...muh bana ke dhimi si awaz mein...morning. Isne good nahi bola yeh to confirm tha ke hamme se kisi ki bhi morning good nahi hone wali.
Fir woh wahan ruki nahi sidhe bathroom mein chali gayi fresh hone. Kuchh der baad wo naha dhokar school wali dress pehan kar bahar aayi aur chupchap dining table par baith gayi.
Subah uthte hi ek ghante mein bisiyon kisse sunane wali hamari chhutki aaj aise baithi thi mano usne muh par tape laga rakhi ho. Maine bhi uske baad usse koi baat nahi ki kyunki main use thoda time dena chahta tha. Maa ne use jyada bulana munasib nahi samjha aur routine ke hisab se uska lunch box pack kar diya.
Wo lunch box apne bag mein daal ke itni tezi se bahar nikli mano koi uske pichhe pada ho. Papa ne yeh baat notice ki aur mujhse bolne lage.
Papa...vinu yeh aaj chhutki ko kya ho gaya hai, bade gusse mein lag rahi thi aur dekho na kaise bhagti hui gayi hai ghar se bahar.
Main...pata nahi papa, is billi ka pata thode hai kab gurrane lage aur kab khelne lage.
Papa meri baat sunkar hansne lage aur apne akhbar padhne mein mast ho gaye. Main sidha kitchen mein maa ke paas jakar khada ho gaya.
Main...maa lagta hai vini kafi naraz hai. Use pata chal gaya ab to hamare baare mein.
Maa...vinu kal raat jo bhi hua sahi nahi hua. Use pata nahi lagna chahiye tha. Pata nahi ab kya hoga. Dekhne se hi lag raha hai wo ham dono se bahut naraz hai.
Main...maa main use aapse behtar jaanta hun. Wahan mere aur neeru di ke baare mein pata lagne par usne koi khas react nahi kiya tha.
Fir maine dhyan se socha o teri yeh main kya bol gaya main to apne aur neeru di ke baare mein maa ke samne bol gaya. Yeh kya ho raha hai mere saath mere saare raaz sabhi ke samne khul rahe hain. Ab main maa ke reaction ka intzar karne laga.
Maa...achha to tu neeru ke saath bhi sex kar chuka hai.
Main...maa ab aapse jhuth nahi bolunga. Haan maine neeru di ke saath sex kiya hai. Kehkar maine gardan jhuka li.
Maa...muskurate hue...bete main teri maa hun. Tu mujhse kuchh nahi chhupa sakta. Mujhe shak pehle se tha par wahan teri usse nazdikiyan aur wo tum logon ka bewkufi bhara drama mujhe kya samajh nahi aata ke kya chal raha tha. Aur sach kahun to mujhe to lag raha hai ke tune ritu ke saath bhi kiya hai. Kyunki wo shadi mein tujhse touch hone ka koi bhi mauka nahi chhodti thi.
Main...muskurate hue...haan maa main samajh sakta hun ke aap meri maa ho mujhse badi jyada experienced ho isliye aap baaton ko achhe se samajhti ho. Haan maa maine ritu di ke saath bhi sex kiya hai...main muskuraye ja raha tha.
Maa...muskura rahi thi lagatar...wah mere sher. Bahut jor hai mere bete mein.
Main hahaha karke hansne laga fir maine bhi nashta kiya aur apne kaam par nikalne laga to mujhe yaad aaya ke aaj to riya ko bhi chhodna hai. To maine vini ke room mein jake dekha ke riya ready hai ya nahi.
Riya apne ready hone ko final touch de rahi thi. Halanki usne deep make up nahi kiya tha par ready hoke wo ekdam apsara lag rahi thi. To maine bhi mazak mein kaha.
Main...arey wah aaj to ekdam tota lag rahi hai riya.
Riya...muskurate hue...chup karo beshram bhai. Bhala apni behan ko koi aise bolta hai kya….par ek second ruk ke wo fir boli...waise sach main sahi lag rahi hun kya?
Main...sahi bol rahi hai. Sach mein tu ekdam top class lag rahi hai riya.
Riya...thanks bhai. Bas mujhe do minute do main breakfast kar lun fir ikathe hi nikalte hain aap mujhe office drop kar do.
Main...haan haan tabhi to aya hun. Par jaldi karna mujhe late ho raha hai.
Riya...tabhi to bol rahi hun ke do minute lagaungi bas.
Main..arey aise to das minute laga le nashta aram se karna chahiye.
Riya thik hai bhai wait karo jara. Fir das minute mein ham nikal padte hain aur thodi hi der mein simran, manik ke office mein pahuch jaate hain.
Simran ne punjabi suit pehna hua tha jiska gala kafi deep tha. Simran ne riya ko manik ke saath chhod ke mujhe apne saath liya aur apne office mein aa gayi to maine uske kaan mein kaha.
Main...simran tera bayan wala boob kafi dikh raha hai. Simran ka hath ekdam se apne boobs par gaya ke kya sach mein uska boob dikh raha hai par aisa kuchh nahi tha to main khilkhila ke hans pada kyunki maine uske saath prank kiya tha.
Simran...haramjade kutte, tu kabhi nahi sudharne wala. Hamesha mazak hi sujhta hai tujhe.
Main...tere se nahi karunga maza to aur kisse karunga meri jaan.
Simran...main teri koi jaan vaan nahi hun harami. Jaake apni behan ko jaan bol kutte.
Main …..hanste hue….wo to manti hi nahi hai. Tu hi kuchh gur de mujhe ke wo meri jaan ban jaye.
Simran...hanste hue...to fir to behan chod bane bina manega nahi.
Main...jab tera bhai behan chod hai to main ban jaun to koi tufan aa jayega kya.
Simran...nahi toofan to koi nahi ayega balke maze karega har roz.
Main...waise ek baat kahun, ek din tujhe bhi chodna hai maine dekh lena.
Simran...muskurate hue...sapne dekh bas tu.
===OOO===
Udhar vini bhi apni soch mein gum thi.
Vini...man hi man...yeh bhai ko ho kya raha hai. Yeh koi girl friend kyun nahi bana leta. Pehle neeru di, fir maa, mere par bhi yeh galat nigah rakhta hai. Kya ho gaya hai ise. Aisa kyun ban gaya hai yeh.
Wo fir sochti rahi. Kal riya di se bhi kafi chipak raha tha. Pata nahi use bhi na pata le. Handsome to hai hi ise dhang bhi bahut hai kisi ko bhi pata leta hai. Ritu iski udahran hai.
Mujhe kuchh karna chahiye. Par main kar bhi kya sakti hun. Ise samjha hi sakti hun. Par kya wo mere kehne se samjhega. Mujhe to nahi lagta. Wo is raah par ab kaafi aage badh chuka hai. Mujhe nahi lagta ke wo rukne wala hai ab.
Wo isi soch mein doobi thi ke uski friend neha ne use toka,
Neha...arey vinita kis gehri soch mein doobi hai tu. chal aaja canteen chalte hain kuchh khate hain yaar.
Vini...tu ja neha mera mood nahi hai, wo sach mein kafi udas lag rahi thi dekhne mein.
Neha...uske gaal par hath rakhte hue...kya hua yaar. Tu kafi sad lag rahi hai. Kya hua tujhe. Koi problem hai to mujhse share kar sakti hai tu.
Vini...man hi man...ab ise kya bataun ke kya problem hai. Kya kahun ke mera bhai apni maa behno ko chodta hai. Bhala yeh baat main isse kaise share kar sakti hun. Lekin usne bahana banate hue kaha. Tu ja neha darasal mujhe periods aaye hain, isliye mera mood off hai.
Neha...man mein...lagta to nahi. Yeh problem periods wali nahi hai baat kuchh aur hai. Par kar bhi kya sakte hain agar yeh share nahi karna chahti to. Fir wo use bolke ke achha main chalti hun. Wahan se chali jaati hai.
===OOO===
Sham ko riya jab wapis aati hai to wo kafi excited thi. Kyunki meri behan hone ki wajah se use office mein kafi achha response mila tha. Ab uski training mein koi dikkat preshani nahi hone waali thi.
Wo to usi wakt PG mein shift hone ko bol rahi thi par maine use bola ke main use subah le jaunga. Bas aaj raat bhar ruk jaye. Use bhi raat ko rukne mein koi problem nahi thi.
Sham ko bhi vini ka muh bigda hua tha. Usne kisi se bhi dhang se baat nahi ki, yahan tak ke riya se bhi nahi, halanki use pata tha ke riya kal se PG mein shift hone ja rahi hai.
Riya ne uska mood kharab hone ka reason janna chaha. Par jab usne use dhang se jawab nahi diya to riya ne bhi aage kuchh puchhna thik nahi samjha.
Ab main aur maa bhi preshan ho chuke the. Kyunki vini ham dono ki hi pyari thi. Ham use is tarah se preshan nahi dekh sakte the. Par ab kar bhi kya sakte the. Maine ab man hi man ek decision liya. “Main vini se is baare mein baat karunga.”
===OOO===
always brother.you are right bro their haste made it waste, but we cant do anything after doing, they were caught by chhutki, let us see what happens next, I am really thankful to you sir for your valuable review. You go in the depth of story and notice each and every point of it, and after that you give your review, which is really an honor for me. please keep reading and commenting on it because it fills my heart with extreme happiness
yes bro, she is upset due to her brother's behavior and worried also, she wants her brother to become normal but i think its not possible for him to become normal, actually his mother is a very cool lady from very beginning even before he became an incest....Vinni is upset, but she knows her brother's nature, as you explained her thoughts, she is just confused due to his behaviour and obviously angry. Well, no sister would understand at first, she would obviously ask that if he needs sexual satisfaction then why don't he go for a girlfriend. But the thing is he is addicted to incest and it is very dangerous once you start thinking about your family members in your sexual fantasy, then you don't get satisfaction easily outside. I too went through that phase, but time heals, as it is unacceptable in any society, well even you have consented sex ( as it is a must) with your partner.
Everything is going south for Vinay, he even spilled his relations with Neeru di and Ritu in front of her mother, but her mother was cool with all that, as she had a choice. But she lauded him, that was surprising, and she is not that worried that her only daughter found out about her sexual encounters with his son. Anyway, they would have to sort that out, cause they love her too much.
Getting in Riya's pants isn't gonna be easy for Vinay, cause she is showing no interest, well who knows, what lies in the chest of time.
Fantastic update waiting for next
बहुत बहुत धन्यवाद आपका सर जीmain sach mein aapki lekhni ka bahut bada fan hun mahi ji. main koi aise hi aapki lekhni ki tarif nahi karta, aap sach mein tarif ke kabil ho. ek aur baat aapki contest mein story blatkari se mohabbat, art ka ek behatarin namoona tha, dekhiye review dena harek ka adhikar ke kaisa bhi de, lekin maine dekha ke review dene walon ne aapki story aur uske characters ke saath insaaf nahi kiya, yeh baat mujhe to buri lagi hi, yahan par ek aur bahut badi lekhika hain unko bhi buri lagi, lekin ham kar bhi kya sakte hain kisi ki soch ko to badal nahi sakte na.
rahi baat aapki story padhne ki to main sach keh raha hun mahi ji mere paas samay ki bahut hi kami rehti hai aaj bhi main himachal pradesh audit par aya hua hun aur do din audit work chalega, main apne updates likhne ke liye bahut mushkil se time nikal paata hun par meri dili tamanna hai ke main aapki story ko poora padhun aur uspar review dun. maine us update tak padhi jab abhi wo apni sabse chhoti behan manisha ke sampark mein nahi aata. wahan se lekar end tak padh ke main review jarur dunga.
par aap please meri story par review dete rahen taki mera hausla bana rahe.
aapka bahut bahut dhanyavaad
aapka bahut bahut dhanyavaad mahi ji...haan ab competition to khatam ho gaya hai to un baton par jyada tippani karne ka koi fayda nahi hai. waise logon ko is tarah se kisi ka manobal girane ka koi hak nahi hai. khair soch apni apni hai. mahi ji mujhse kitne hi log accounts sikhne aate hain, agar main unka manobal gira dun to wo ek din mein hi isko chhod ke bhag jayen. main unme ek alag hi utsah bhar deta hun jisse jo kaam unhone ek saal mein sikhna hai wo 6 mahine mein hi sikh jaate hain.बहुत बहुत धन्यवाद आपका सर जी
आप जैसे मंझे हुए रचनाकार अगर ऐसा कह रहे हैं तो हम मान ले रहे हैं आपकी बात। आप जिन लेखिका की बात कर रहे हैं उन्होंने भी मुझसे यही बात कही है। संजू सर (वर्षा ऋतु)ने भी यही कहा। हमारा मानना है कि कोई भी रचनाकार वो कितना बड़ा क्यों न हो। उसकी भी कहानी में गलतियां होती हैं। और वो भी एक ही कहानी सब की पसंद की नहीं लिख सकता। यहां पर सब का कलेवर अलग अलग है।
इसलिए आप कितनी भी अच्छी कहानी लिख ले, वो सभी को पसंद नहीं आ सकती। तो उन लोगों को भी मेरी कहानी जैसी लगी उनकी प्रतिक्रिया उसी तरह से थी। ये सब तो चलता रहता है। मैं उस कहानी को थोड़ा बहुत बदलाव के साथ यहां लिखूँगी।
आप को जब समय मिले तब पढ़िएगा मेरी कहानी। मैंने बस आपको याद दिलाया था। और आपकी कहानी अन्य कहानियों से थोड़ा हटकर है जो मैंने पहले भी कहा है, लेकिन आपको तो पता है कि पिछले कुछ दिनों से प्रतियोगिता चल रही थी तो हम वहां व्यस्त थे, इसलिए आपकी कहानी पर टिप्पणी नहीं कर पाए। अब प्रतियोगिता खत्म हो गई है तो अब नियमित टिप्पणी आएगी हमारी।