Incest Sakshi aur Raj: wo Mohabbat jo meri zindagi ban gyi

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Hero - Raj (20 sal)
Raj ki maa - Sakshi (42 sal) - Main Heroine
Raj ki Behen - Neha (18 sal)
Raj ke papa(late) - Rajdeep

Raj ki Mausi - Radha (43 sal)
Radha ki Beti - Preeti (19 sal)

Out off family

Sakshi ki Best Friend from her school = Naina (35 sal)
Raj's Best Friend from his childhood = Saurabh
Raj's classmate = Shreya (20 sal)


Amit Sir(Sports Teacher) - 45 sal = Tharki (Ladkibaazi se badnaam hai)
Vineet(Awara Student) - 18 sal = Neha ki class me padhta hai

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For Readers:
→ Bhai apne option se mujhe likhne ki zabardasti mat karo. I can't able to write independently.
→ Suggestion dena hai to khushi-khushi do, acche ideas ho to DM bhi kar sakte ho.
→ Negative comments ko main seedha ignore kar doonga.
→ Ye story poori tarah romantic-love story nahi hai, aur bhi bahut kuch hai ismein.
→ Jo female characters 18+ hongi, wo hero (Raj) ki girlfriend ban sakti hain.
→ Regular update milte rahenge, tension na lo. (mostly Sunday & Thursday ko, thoda aage-piche ho sakta hai)
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→ Aur haan, ye story adhoori nahi chhodi jayegi — poori karke hi manoonga.

Thanks for reading ...

 

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Han bhai baat to tu sahi bola jitna bhi incest story hota hai sab story me pura pariwar hero ki nichhe ajata hai

Ha bo hi to jaise iss story mai maa ko pyar ho sakta hai bete se kyu ki bo akela hai, use sathi ki jarurat hai...but beti ko iss story mai bina bajaay hero ke liye feelings kese a sakta hai.. Kya behen normal bahar kise se pyar nahi kar sakta... Pata nahi yaar behen ko feeling ayi bhi kse

 

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RAJ KI VAAPSI: EK BHAAVUK PUNARMILAN

(Subah ke 4 baje, Saurabh ke ghar ki khidki se thandi hawa ka jhonka Raj ke chehre se takraata hai. Uski aankhein achanak khul jaati hain. Uska dil zor se dhadak raha hai, jaise kisi gehre, bhayanak sapne se abhi-abhi jaaga ho.)

Raj: (Apne maathe par paseena mehsoos karte hue, uski saansein tez ho rahi thin)
"Phir vahi sapna... Sakshi... Amit... nahi!"

(Vah bistar se hadbada kar uthta hai, jaise khud ko us bure khayal se azaad karna chahta ho. Uski ungliyaan apne aap phone ki taraf badhti hain. Screen on karte hi uski saansein ek pal ke liye tham si jaati hain.)

Raj: (Fati awaaz mein, jaise gale mein kuch atak gaya ho) "23 missed calls... 17 messages... saare Sakshi aur Neha ke... Hey Bhagwan!"

(Uski ungliyaan kaanpti hui message box kholti hain. Sakshi ke message padhte hue uski aankhein nam ho jaati hain. Har ek shabd mein Maa ki bepanah mohabbat aur chinta saaf jhalak rahi thi.)

"Raj, kahan ho tum?"
"Beta, jawab do na..."
"Mujhe maaf kar do... ghar aa jao babu, please..."

(Raj ka gala sookh jaata hai. Uske dil mein ek dard uthta hai, "Kitni masoom hai meri Sakshi, meri wajah se kitni pareshaan hui hai." Vah Sakshi ko message type karna shuru karta hai: "Sorry Maa..." Uski ungliyaan message box par thahar jaati hain. Ek 'Sorry' type karke hata deta hai. Vah message delete kar deta hai, zor se sir hilata hai.)

Raj: (Khud se kadak awaaz mein, apne andar ke dard ko dabaate hue) "Nahi... kamzori nahi dikhani. Sakshi... Neha... unhein meri taakat dekhni chahiye, mere aansoo nahi!"

(Vah khidki ke paas jaata hai. Bahar abhi bhi andhera hai. Uski aankhon mein ab ek nayi dridhta thi, ek naya sankalp. Yah sirf gusse ka nahi, balki prem ka sankalp tha.)

SUBAH 4:30 BAJE: GHAR KI DEHLEEZ PAR

(Subah 4:30 baje, Raj apne ghar ke saamne khada hai. Uski bike ka engine band hote hi charon taraf sannaata chha jaata hai. Uske dil mein ek ajab si ghabrahat thi.)

Raj: (Chaabi nikalte hue) "Aaj yah darwaza kholne mein itna dar kyun lag raha hai?"

(Vah dheere se chaabi ghumaata hai, ek halki si 'click' ki awaaz aati hai aur darwaza khul jaata hai. Poora ghar abhi bhi so raha hai. Hawa mein ek ajeeb si tanatani mehsoos hoti hai, jaise deewarein bhi usse sawaal kar rahi hon, "Kahan the tum?". Uske kadam dabe hue the)

(Vah chupchap apne kamre ki taraf badhta hai. Har kadam par uske andar ki uthal-puthal saaf jhalak rahi thi. Vah darwaza dheere se band kar deta hai, taaki koi jag na jaye. Kamre mein halki si subah ki raushni aa rahi thi.)

(Ghar ka darwaza dheere se kholta hai. Sannaata. Uske kamre mein...)

(Study table par uski nazar padti hai. Wahan ek plate mein thande ho chuke aloo ke parathe aur uske upar rakha ek letter. Uski aankhein bhar aati hain. Yah sirf parathe nahi the, yah Sakshi ka bepanah pyar tha, uski poori raat ki betaabi thi.)

Raj: (Un thande parathon aur letter ko dekhkar, uski awaaz mein dard aur pyar dono the) "Poori raat... mere liye... aur khud bhookhi rah gayi... meri Sakshi..."

(Usne kaanpte haathon se letter uthaya. Uski saansein tez ho gayin. Usne letter padhna shuru kiya.)

"Beta,
Tum mere sab-kuch ho. Tum bina bataye kyun chale gaye the? Mujhe kitni chinta ho rahi thi kya bataoon tumhe...? Raat bhar ek pal ko bhi neend nahi aai. Mera dil baitha jaa raha tha. Jab tum nahi hote ho, to yah ghar khaali-khaali lagta hai. Mere Raj... wapas aa jao babu, please... Mujhe tumhari zaroorat hai. Mujhe maaf kar do, agar meri baaton se tumhe thes pahunchi ho. Main bas... main tumhe khone se darti hoon.

Tumhari Maa,
Sakshi"

(Raj ki aankhon se garam aansoo tapak kar seedhe us patra par gire, jahan Sakshi ka naam likha tha. Aansoo sookh gaye the, par unki nami aur us patra ki saadgi mein Raj ko Sakshi ki aatma ka ehsaas hua. Uska dil pighal gaya. Yah sirf ek Maa ka pyar nahi tha, yah kuch aur tha, kuch anmol, kuch pavitra. Use mehsoos hua ki Sakshi ka har shabd uske dil ki gehrai se nikla hai, jahan sirf uske liye jagah hai. Is pal, Raj ne faisla kiya ki vah ab Sakshi ko kabhi khud se door nahi jaane dega, chahe kuch bhi ho jaye. Uska pyar ab sirf suraksha nahi, balki ek gehra, niswarth samarpan ban chuka tha.)

(Raj kaagaz uthata hai, kalam thaamta hai...)

RAJ KA LETTER: EK JAZBAATI IZHAAR

Raj ne khud ko akela paaya. Uske andar raat bhar ki bechaini ab bhi maujood thi. Uske dil mein ek dard utha.
Usne kalam uthai aur usi letter ke peeche, apne dil ka haal likhna shuru kiya, har shabd mein uski rooh ka dard aur pyar chhalakta raha tha:

"Meri pyaari Maa,

Tumhari chinta ne, tumhare pyar ne, aaj mujhe andar se poora pighla diya hai.
Ye parathe, jo tumne mere liye itni mohabbat se banaye hain, ye sirf aata aur aloo nahi, Maa... ye tumhare beintaha pyar ki gawaahi de rahe hain, tumhari neend-bhari raat ka saboot hain.
Mera pet bhookh se tadap raha hai, par main inhein chhoo bhi nahi sakta, Maa... kaise kha loon main ye, jab tak tumne khud kuch na khaya ho? Meri khushi ka pehla niwala to tumhare saath hi hai.

Kal raat... main ek paagal ki tarah tum par chillaya. Mere shabdon mein gussa tha, takleef thi, par dil mein sirf tumhari hifazat ki fikr thi. Mujhe maaf karna, Maa, agar mere shabdon ne tumhe dukh pahunchaya ho. Jab tumne kaha, 'Tumne meri izzat kharab kar di,' to us pal mere andar kuch toot gaya tha. Maa, tumhari izzat mere liye sab kuch hai, meri zindagi se bhi badhkar.

Mera pyar tumhe kaid karne ke liye nahi hai, Maa.
Tum aazad ho, ek khoobsurat panchhi ki tarah jo khule aasman mein udna chahta hai.
Main to bas tumhe us udaan mein, har mushkil se bachana chahta hoon, tumhare pankhon ko salamat rakhna chahta hoon.
Tum jahan bhi jao, meri dua, mera saath, aur mera vishwas hamesha tumhare saath rahega.
Tumhe duniya ki har khushi mile, yahi meri sabse badi khwahish hai.

Main tumse apni zindagi se bhi zyada pyar karta hoon, Maa. Ye pyar sirf ek bete ka nahi, balki us rooh ka hai jo tumhe har pal dekhta hai, tumhari khushi mein apni khushi paata hai.

(Usne apne haathon ko kuch pal ke liye roka, kuch gehra socha, aur phir apni aankhon mein nami liye, usne ek chhoti si kavita jodi, jo uske dil ke sabse gehre ehsaas bayan kar rahi thi):

"Jab bhi nazar milti hai tumse,
Ek ajab sa sukoon mil jata hai.
Dil mein koi geet sa bajta hai,
Aur waqt kahin tham sa jata hai.

Tumhari hansi mein ek jaadoo hai,
Jo rooh ko meri chhoo jaati hai.
Tumhari aankhon mein ek gehrai hai,
Jismein meri duniya kho jaati hai."

Ye sirf kuch shabd nahi hain, Maa... ye mera har ehsaas hai.

Tumhara,
Raj"

(Letter Ko Bade Hi Pyar Se Modkar, Raj Dheere Se Sakshi Ke Kamre Ki Taraf Badha. Darwaza Thoda Sa Khula Hua Tha, Jaise Uske Andar Aane ka intezar kar raha ho. Raj ek pal ke liye ruka, saans gehri ki, aur phir bade hi aaram se darwaza thoda aur khola.)

Sakshi chadar mein simti hui gehri neend mein so rahi thi. Halki si kiran uske masoom chehre par pad rahi thi, aur vo kisi khoobsurat, pari-si rajkumari jaisi lag rahi thi. Raj ke dil ki dhadkan tez ho gayi. Usne apni nazar uske masoom chehre par tiki di. Vo use do minute tak bina palak jhapkaya dekhta raha. Uske chehre par ek ajeeb si shanti thi, ek anokhi masoomiyat, jo Raj ke dil ko chhoo gayi. Uske man mein hazaron khayal daud rahe the, par sabse upar bas ek hi ehsaas tha – pyar aur gehri fikr ka.

Raj: (Man hi man) "Kitni sundar lag rahi ho Sakshi... bilkul meri sapnon ki rani... par tum to... meri..."

Uska man do hisson mein banta hua tha – ek taraf vo jaanta tha ki vo uski Maa hai, par doosri taraf uske liye ek aisi gehrai ka ehsaas tha, jo sirf mamta se kahin badhkar tha. Ye ek aisi bhavna thi, jismein vo Sakshi ko ek aisi partner ke roop mein dekh raha tha jise vo poori tarah samajhta, respect karta aur jiske saath vo har kadam par khada rahna chahta tha.


Usne dheere se apna phone nikala, uski tasveer li. Har click ke saath uska dil aur tez dhadak raha tha. Usne socha, "Sakshi, main tumhare baare mein kuch aisa mehsoos kar raha hoon, jo abhi tak samajh nahi pa raha. Ye koi physical attraction nahi, I am liking you as a person, as an ideal partner... par tum meri Maa ho." Uske dil mein ek anokha rishta ban raha tha, jahan pyar, samman aur gehri fikr ke taar itne ulajh gaye the ki vo khud bhi unhein suljha nahi pa raha tha.

Usne chupchap, bina koi awaaz kiye, vo likha hua letter Sakshi ki bed par, uske takiye ke paas rakh diya.

Ek aakhiri baar us masoom chehre ko dekha, aur phir dheere se kamre se bahar nikal gaya, apne jazbaaton ke samandar ko apne andar samete hue.
Usne use jagana theek nahi samjha.
Uske man mein bas ek hi baat thi – Sakshi ka sukoon, uski khushi.
Raj apne kamre me aake so gaya.


SUBAH 6 BAJE: EK NAYA EHSAAS

Subah ke 6 baj chuke the. Raat bhar ki bechaini aur adhoori neend ke baad, Sakshi ki aankhein khuli. Uske dil mein ab bhi Raj ki fikr ka ek bhaari bojh tha. Bistar se uthte hi uski nazar table par rakhe us letter par padi, jo Raj ne uske liye chhoda tha. Uske haath kaanp rahe the, jab usne dheere se us letter ko uthaya aur padhna shuru kiya.

Jaise-jaise usne Raj ke likhe har shabd ko padha, uski aankhein nam hoti gayin."
Tumhari chinta ne mujhe pighla diya," "Tumhari izzat mere liye sab kuch hai," aur phir vo chhoti si kavita... har pankti uske dil mein utarti ja rahi thi.
Jab uski nazar letter par pade Raj ke sookhe aansuon ke nishan par padi, to uska gala bhar aaya. Uske apne aansoo bekabu hokar behne lage.

Sakshi: (Rote hue, awaaz mein dard aur pyar ka mishran) "Ye kaisa pyar hai... ye kaisa bandhan hai... jo khud dard mein hote hue bhi meri fikr karta hai... mujhse maafi maangta hai? Mera Raj... mera bachcha... tune to mera dil hi jeet liya hai."

Use apni kahi hui baatein yaad aayin, uska gussa, uske kadve shabd. Use laga, usne kitni badi galti kar di thi. Raj ka yah letter sirf ek maafinama nahi tha, balki uske gehre, niswarth prem ka ek jeeta-jaagta saboot tha. Sakshi ka dil Raj ke pyar aur parwah se bhar gaya, ek aisa pyar jo usne pehle kabhi mehsoos nahi kiya tha. Yah mamta se kahin badhkar tha, ek aisa rishta jo shabdon se pare tha.

RAJ KE KAMRE MEIN: SUKOON AUR EK ANKAHA TANAV

Letter ko apne seene se lagaye hue, Sakshi dheere-dheere Raj ke kamre ki taraf badhi. Darwaza thoda sa khula tha. Usne himmat karke andar jhankaa. Raj gehri neend mein so raha tha, uska chehra thaka hua aur sooja hua tha. Uski laal aankhein, jo raat bhar royi hongi, Sakshi ke dil ko andar tak pighla gayin. Ek pal ke liye uske andar rahat ki lahar daud gayi – Raj ghar wapas aa gaya tha, vo surakshit tha. Par saath hi, ek ankaha sa tanav bhi hawa mein ghula hua tha.

Sakshi: (Phusphusate hue, uski awaaz mein mamta aur ek gehri komalta thi) "So ja mere bete... tu kitna thak gaya hai"

Use pata tha ki Raj der raat ghar aaya hoga, shayad soya bhi nahi hoga. Use jagana theek nahi tha. Vah nahi chahti thi ki uski neend mein koi disturb ho.

Vah chupke se kamre mein daakhil hui. Uski nazrein Raj par hi tiki hui thin, jaise vah use apni palkon se dhak lena chahti ho.

Usne dheere-dheere kamre ko saaf karna shuru kiya, bikhri hui cheezon ko sameta, par har pal uski aankhein Raj ke shant chehre par hi tiki rahti thin. Uski har harkat mein ek Maa ki mamta aur ek aise insaan ki parwah thi, jo uske liye duniya mein sabse zyada mayne rakhta tha.

(Kitchen Mein... Sakshi Raj Ke Liye Taza Parathe Banaati Hai, Jabki Uski Aankhon Se Aansoo Tapak Rahe Hain. Vah Letter Ko Apne Dil Se Lagaati Hai.)

Sakshi: (Man hi man)
"Tu sirf mera beta nahi... meri dhadkan ban gaya hai..."

RASOI MEIN: AANSUO SE SANE PARATHE

Raj ke kamre se nikalne ke baad, Sakshi seedhe rasoi mein gayi. Uske dil mein Raj ke liye umadte ehsaas the. Usne tave par Raj ke liye taza parathe banane shuru kiye.

Aata goonthte hue, belte hue, aur phir tave par senkte hue, uski aankhon se aansoo lagatar tapak rahe the. Ye aansoo dukh ke nahi the, balki Raj ke prati uske gehre pyar ke the.

Vah baar-baar Raj ke letter ko apne dil se lagaati, jaise uski har dhadkan Raj ke naam ho.

Sakshi: (Man hi man, uski awaaz mein pyar aur ek ankahee bhavna thi) "Tu sirf mera beta nahi... tu meri dhadkan ban gaya hai, Raj. Meri saansein tujhse hain, meri duniya tujhse hai. Mujhe nahi pata ye kaisa rishta hai, par ye meri zindagi ka sabse khoobsurat ehsaas hai. Tu meri zindagi ka vo hissa hai, jiske bina main adhoori hoon."

Uske har parathe mein uske aansoo aur pyar ka swaad ghul raha tha. Vah chahti thi ki Raj jab uthe, to use mehsoos ho ki uski Maa, uski Sakshi, uske saath hai, har pal, har kadam par.

Uske dil mein ab sirf mamta nahi thi, balki ek aisa gehra, pavitra aur anmol rishta tha, jise vah ab tak samajh nahi paai thi, par ab mehsoos kar rahi thi.

NEHA KA MASOOM HASTAKSHEP: EK ANKAHA AAKARSHAN

Subah ho chuki thi, par Neha ki aankhon mein raat bhar ki fikr aur aansuon ki nami ab bhi baaki thi. Raj ke achanak chale jaane se use bahut takleef hui thi.

Waise to vah Raj ko apne bade bhai ki tarah hi pyar karti thi, usse hamesha laad-dular milta tha.
Par, ab kuch dinon se uske dil mein ek ajeeb sa ehsaas panap raha tha – ek aisa khinchaav, jo sirf bhai-bahan ke rishte se thoda zyada tha.

Vah gupchup tareeke se Sakshi ke prati Raj ke dhyan se thodi jealousy mehsoos karne lagi thi.

Use Raj ka poora dhyan, uski poori duniya sirf apne liye chahiye thi.

NEHA KA RAJ KO JAGANA: EK BHAAVUK SUBAH

Apni aankhon mein aansoo liye aur dil mein Raj ki fikr liye, Neha turant Raj ke kamre ki taraf bhagi. Darwaza halka sa khula tha.
Usne dekha, Raj gehri neend mein so raha tha, uska chehra abhi bhi thaka hua aur udaas dikh raha tha.

Neha dheere se andar aai. Uska dil Raj ko aise dekh kar bhar aaya. Innocent Neha chupchap Raj ke bistar ke paas gayi aur peeche se use apni baahon mein bhar liya, jaise use apne andar samet lena chahti ho.

Neha: (Halke se hilate hue, awaaz mein chinta aur pyar ka mishran) "Bhaiya... Bhaiya... utho na."

Raj dheere se jaaga, thoda chaunk kar muda aur Neha ko aise apni baahon mein paakar hairan rah gaya. Neha ne use turant kaskar gale laga liya, jaise vah usse door jaane ke liye use maaf kar rahi ho.

Neha: (Aankhon mein aansoo liye) "Bhaiya, aap kahan chale gaye the? Mujhe kitni fikr ho rahi thi aapki."

Raj ka dil Neha ki masoomiyat aur uske sacche pyar ko dekhkar pighal gaya. "Sorry babu... bahut-bahut sorry," usne dheere se kaha.

"Babu, main tumhe pareshaan nahi karna chahta tha..." Phir uski nazar seedhe Neha ke chehre par tiki aur uska pehla sawal Sakshi ke baare mein tha.

"Tumne aur Maa ne raat ko kuch khaya ya nahi? Maa kaisi hai? Vo soyi thi ya nahi? Mujhe ek-ek baat batao." Raj ke har sawal mein Sakshi ke liye uski gehri fikr aur bechaini saaf jhalak rahi thi.

JEALOUSY AUR MASOOMIYAT KA TAKRAV

Jaise hi Raj ne Sakshi ke baare mein itne sawal poochhe, Neha ke chehre par ek pal ke liye udaasi aur halki si jealousy chha gayi.

Use laga, Raj ka sara dhyan abhi bhi Sakshi par hi tha.
Use chahiye tha ki Raj pehle uski fikr kare, usse pooche ki usne kya khaya ya nahi.

Par Raj ki har saans mein Sakshi ka naam tha.
Yah ehsaas Neha ko thoda akela mehsoos kara gaya, halaanki vah apni is bhavna ko samajh nahi paai.

Neha ne Raj ko bataya ki kaise Sakshi raat bhar soyi nahi thi, khana nahi khaya tha aur kitni pareshaan thi.
Raj ki aankhon mein pashchaataap gehra gaya.

CLIMAX: EK MASOOM SAWAL, EK GEHRA GHAAV

Phir, Neha ne Raj ka haath pakad liya, uski aankhon mein dekha aur ek aisi baat kah gayi, jisne Raj ke dil par gehra asar kiya. Uske shabd masoom the, par unmein ek aisa dard aur adhikar tha, jise Raj samajh nahi paya.

Neha: (Aankhon mein aansoo liye, bahut masoomiyat se, par poori shiddat se) "Bhaiya, aapko pata nahi hai main aapse kitna pyar karti hoon? Aise phir kabhi nahi karna aap, aap meri kasam khao! Maa ne ab tak khana bhi nahi khaya... usko raat ko neend bhi nahi aai. Aapne mera aur Maa ka nahi socha! Hamara aapke siva hai hi kaun?"

Neha ke is sawal ne Raj ko andar tak hila diya. Uske masoom shabd seedhe Raj ke dil par lage aur uska pashchaataap aur bhi badh gaya. Use laga, usne na sirf Sakshi ko, balki Neha ko bhi kitni takleef di thi.

Raj us pal Neha ke chehre par chhai us gehri bhavna ko nahi samajh paya. Use laga ki yah ek chhoti bahan ka apne bade bhai ke liye shuddh pyar aur dekhbhal hai, par Neha ki aankhon mein jo ek ankaha sa intezar tha, Raj use pakad nahi paya.

Yah uske liye keval ek bahan ka dar tha, jabki Neha ke andar Raj ke liye ek-tarfa, masoom pyar dheere-dheere panap raha tha, jise Raj kabhi samajh hi nahi paya. Yah ek aisa ehsaas tha jo Neha ke dil mein tha, par Raj ke liye hamesha ek ansuljhi paheli ban kar raha.

RASOI MEIN: ANKAHI NAZRON KA MILAN

Neha ke washroom jaane ke baad, Raj ne ek gehri saans li. Uska man abhi bhi Neha ke shabdon aur apne apraadh-bodh se bhara hua tha.
Par uske dil ka ek hissa use rasoi ki or kheench raha tha. Vah dheeme kadmon se rasoi ke darwaze tak pahuncha.

Aur phir, uski nazar us drishya par padi jisne use kuch pal ke liye wahin tham liya.

Sakshi, apni peeth uski taraf kiye, tave par parathe bana rahi thi. Subah ki halki roshni rasoi mein phail rahi thi, aur us roshni mein
Sakshi kisi apsara se kam nahi lag rahi thi. Uske baal uske kandhon par bikhre hai,

Raj uski mad-mast gaand ka diwana ho gaya hai, itni pyari gaand toh kisi heroine ki bhi nahi hogi, Raj ab Sakshi ke liye aur pagal hone laga

baad me Raj ki nazar uski nangi kamar par gayi aur wo usme hi kho gaya;

Sakshi ka har part sundar tha... bass aaj Raj ne use kareeb se dekha tha ek naye nazar se...

Raj use tak-taki lagaye dekhta raha, lagbhag paanch minute tak.



Uski aankhon mein ek ajeeb si chamak thi, ek aisi chahat jo usne pehle kabhi mehsoos nahi ki thi.
Vah sirf apni Maa ko nahi dekh raha tha, balki ek aisi aurat ko dekh raha tha jo uske dil ke sabse gehre konon mein utar chuki thi.

Sakshi ko apne 6th sense se mehsoos hua ki koi use dekh raha hai.

Uske honthon par ek halki si muskan tair gayi, aur uske gaalon par ek gulabi si laali chha gayi, jaise koi nayi-naveli dulhan apne pati ko dekh ke sharama rahi ho.

Usne bina Raj ko kuch dikhaye, dheere se palat gayi.

ANKAHA IQRAAR: AANKHON SE AANKHON KA SAFAR

Raj aur Sakshi ki nazrein milin. Ek pal ke liye poora brahmaand tham sa gaya.

Koi shabd nahi the, phir bhi unki aankhon mein ek-doosre ke liye athaah bhavnayein tair rahi thin.

Raj ki aankhon mein raat bhar ka dard, pachhutaava aur ek gehra pyar tha, jabki Sakshi ki aankhon mein rahat, chinta aur ek naya, anjana sa aakarshan tha.
Yah ek aisa pal tha jahan ankaha hi sab kuch kah raha tha. Unke dil ek-doosre se baat kar rahe the, bina kisi zubaan ke.

Raj ne apni nam aankhon se Sakshi ki or dekha aur badi mushkil se phusphusaya, "Main theek hoon..." Uski awaaz mein ek ajeeb si kamzori thi, jo uske andar ke toofan ko bayan kar rahi thi.

Aakhon se Pyar hona isi ko kehte hai, ki bina bole samne wala sab kuch samaj jaye

Sakshi ab khud ko rok nahi paai. Uske andar bhavnaon ka sailaab umad pada tha.
Vah dheere-dheere Raj ki or badhi, uske kadmon mein ek ankahee hichkichahat thi, par dil mein ek zabardast khinchaav.

Jab vah Raj ke kareeb pahunchi, to usne apna haath badhaya aur behad komalta se uske chehre ko chhua.

Uski aankhein aansuon se bhari thin, aur uske sparsh mein ek nayi, gehri bhavna ki khoj thi – yah sirf Maa ka sparsh nahi tha, balki kuch aur tha, kuch aisa jo unke rishte ko ek naya aayaam de raha tha.

Raj, jo pehle se hi bhavnaon mein dooba tha, Sakshi ke sparsh se pighal gaya. Uski aankhon se aansoo chhalak pade. Usne Sakshi ko kaskar gale laga liya, apne aansuon se uske kandhe ko bhigote hue.

Raj: (Bheegi hui aankhon aur kaanpti awaaz mein) "Mujhe maaf kar do Maa... mujhe maaf kar do. Main tumse bahut zyada pyar karta hoon... apni jaan se bhi zyada."
Uske har shabd mein uski aatma ka dard aur Sakshi ke liye uska aseem pyar tha.

Sakshi ne kuch nahi kaha. Uske honth khamosh the, par uski aankhein bol rahi thin.

Un aankhon mein Raj ke liye maafi thi, pyar tha, aur ek dridh sankalp tha ki vah sab kuch theek kar degi.

Uski aankhon ne Raj ko yah vishwas dilaya ki vah uske saath hai, aur shayad, yah bhi ki vah ab unke beech ke is anoothe bandhan ko pahchan chuki hai.
Yah ek aisa pal tha jahan shabdon se zyada, bhavnaon ka aadaan-pradaan ho raha tha, unke anokhe pyar ke nazuk aur vikasit hote swaroop par zor dete hue.

CHOT KA KHULASA: CHINTA AUR GEHRA LAGAAV

Jaise hi Raj ne Sakshi ko gale lagaya, Sakshi ki nazar uske haath par padi.
Raj ki shirt ki sleeve thodi upar khisak gayi thi, aur uski kalai par khoon ke sookhe nishan aur kharonchein saaf dikh rahi thin.
Sakshi ka dil ek pal ke liye dhakk se rah gaya. Vah Raj se alag hui aur uske haath ko apne haathon mein le liya.

Sakshi: (Aankhon mein dard aur gussa liye, awaaz kaanp rahi thi)
"Raj! Ye kya hai? Tumne aisa kyun kiya? Tum apne baare mein kabhi nahi sochte ho! Tumhe mera zara bhi khayal nahi hai? Agar tumne wapas aisi harkat ki, to mujhe kuch ho jayega! Kya tumhe iski parwah nahi hai?"

Uske shabdon mein sirf ek Maa ki daant nahi thi, balki ek aise insaan ka dar tha, jo Raj ko apni zindagi ka sabse aham hissa maanti thi. Uski chinta mein ek gehra, ankaha lagaav tha, jo ab khulkar saamne aa raha tha.

Raj ne aaj pahli baar Sakshi ki pyari aakhon me apne liye bete se zyada pyar dikha... aur wo apne chot ko Dhanyawad dene laga

Raj ne apni sooji hui aankhon se use dekha, aur use ehsaas hua ki Sakshi ka haal bhi kuch-kuch mere jaisa hai...



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RAJ KI VAAPSI: EK BHAAVUK PUNARMILAN

(Subah ke 4 baje, Saurabh ke ghar ki khidki se thandi hawa ka jhonka Raj ke chehre se takraata hai. Uski aankhein achanak khul jaati hain. Uska dil zor se dhadak raha hai, jaise kisi gehre, bhayanak sapne se abhi-abhi jaaga ho.)

Raj: (Apne maathe par paseena mehsoos karte hue, uski saansein tez ho rahi thin)
"Phir vahi sapna... Sakshi... Amit... nahi!"

(Vah bistar se hadbada kar uthta hai, jaise khud ko us bure khayal se azaad karna chahta ho. Uski ungliyaan apne aap phone ki taraf badhti hain. Screen on karte hi uski saansein ek pal ke liye tham si jaati hain.)

Raj: (Fati awaaz mein, jaise gale mein kuch atak gaya ho) "23 missed calls... 17 messages... saare Sakshi aur Neha ke... Hey Bhagwan!"

(Uski ungliyaan kaanpti hui message box kholti hain. Sakshi ke message padhte hue uski aankhein nam ho jaati hain. Har ek shabd mein Maa ki bepanah mohabbat aur chinta saaf jhalak rahi thi.)

"Raj, kahan ho tum?"
"Beta, jawab do na..."
"Mujhe maaf kar do... ghar aa jao babu, please..."

(Raj ka gala sookh jaata hai. Uske dil mein ek dard uthta hai, "Kitni masoom hai meri Sakshi, meri wajah se kitni pareshaan hui hai." Vah Sakshi ko message type karna shuru karta hai: "Sorry Maa..." Uski ungliyaan message box par thahar jaati hain. Ek 'Sorry' type karke hata deta hai. Vah message delete kar deta hai, zor se sir hilata hai.)

Raj: (Khud se kadak awaaz mein, apne andar ke dard ko dabaate hue) "Nahi... kamzori nahi dikhani. Sakshi... Neha... unhein meri taakat dekhni chahiye, mere aansoo nahi!"

(Vah khidki ke paas jaata hai. Bahar abhi bhi andhera hai. Uski aankhon mein ab ek nayi dridhta thi, ek naya sankalp. Yah sirf gusse ka nahi, balki prem ka sankalp tha.)

SUBAH 4:30 BAJE: GHAR KI DEHLEEZ PAR

(Subah 4:30 baje, Raj apne ghar ke saamne khada hai. Uski bike ka engine band hote hi charon taraf sannaata chha jaata hai. Uske dil mein ek ajab si ghabrahat thi.)

Raj: (Chaabi nikalte hue) "Aaj yah darwaza kholne mein itna dar kyun lag raha hai?"

(Vah dheere se chaabi ghumaata hai, ek halki si 'click' ki awaaz aati hai aur darwaza khul jaata hai. Poora ghar abhi bhi so raha hai. Hawa mein ek ajeeb si tanatani mehsoos hoti hai, jaise deewarein bhi usse sawaal kar rahi hon, "Kahan the tum?". Uske kadam dabe hue the)

(Vah chupchap apne kamre ki taraf badhta hai. Har kadam par uske andar ki uthal-puthal saaf jhalak rahi thi. Vah darwaza dheere se band kar deta hai, taaki koi jag na jaye. Kamre mein halki si subah ki raushni aa rahi thi.)

(Ghar ka darwaza dheere se kholta hai. Sannaata. Uske kamre mein...)

(Study table par uski nazar padti hai. Wahan ek plate mein thande ho chuke aloo ke parathe aur uske upar rakha ek letter. Uski aankhein bhar aati hain. Yah sirf parathe nahi the, yah Sakshi ka bepanah pyar tha, uski poori raat ki betaabi thi.)

Raj: (Un thande parathon aur letter ko dekhkar, uski awaaz mein dard aur pyar dono the) "Poori raat... mere liye... aur khud bhookhi rah gayi... meri Sakshi..."

(Usne kaanpte haathon se letter uthaya. Uski saansein tez ho gayin. Usne letter padhna shuru kiya.)

"Beta,
Tum mere sab-kuch ho. Tum bina bataye kyun chale gaye the? Mujhe kitni chinta ho rahi thi kya bataoon tumhe...? Raat bhar ek pal ko bhi neend nahi aai. Mera dil baitha jaa raha tha. Jab tum nahi hote ho, to yah ghar khaali-khaali lagta hai. Mere Raj... wapas aa jao babu, please... Mujhe tumhari zaroorat hai. Mujhe maaf kar do, agar meri baaton se tumhe thes pahunchi ho. Main bas... main tumhe khone se darti hoon.

Tumhari Maa,
Sakshi"

(Raj ki aankhon se garam aansoo tapak kar seedhe us patra par gire, jahan Sakshi ka naam likha tha. Aansoo sookh gaye the, par unki nami aur us patra ki saadgi mein Raj ko Sakshi ki aatma ka ehsaas hua. Uska dil pighal gaya. Yah sirf ek Maa ka pyar nahi tha, yah kuch aur tha, kuch anmol, kuch pavitra. Use mehsoos hua ki Sakshi ka har shabd uske dil ki gehrai se nikla hai, jahan sirf uske liye jagah hai. Is pal, Raj ne faisla kiya ki vah ab Sakshi ko kabhi khud se door nahi jaane dega, chahe kuch bhi ho jaye. Uska pyar ab sirf suraksha nahi, balki ek gehra, niswarth samarpan ban chuka tha.)

(Raj kaagaz uthata hai, kalam thaamta hai...)

RAJ KA LETTER: EK JAZBAATI IZHAAR

Raj ne khud ko akela paaya. Uske andar raat bhar ki bechaini ab bhi maujood thi. Uske dil mein ek dard utha.
Usne kalam uthai aur usi letter ke peeche, apne dil ka haal likhna shuru kiya, har shabd mein uski rooh ka dard aur pyar chhalakta raha tha:

"Meri pyaari Maa,

Tumhari chinta ne, tumhare pyar ne, aaj mujhe andar se poora pighla diya hai.
Ye parathe, jo tumne mere liye itni mohabbat se banaye hain, ye sirf aata aur aloo nahi, Maa... ye tumhare beintaha pyar ki gawaahi de rahe hain, tumhari neend-bhari raat ka saboot hain.
Mera pet bhookh se tadap raha hai, par main inhein chhoo bhi nahi sakta, Maa... kaise kha loon main ye, jab tak tumne khud kuch na khaya ho? Meri khushi ka pehla niwala to tumhare saath hi hai.

Kal raat... main ek paagal ki tarah tum par chillaya. Mere shabdon mein gussa tha, takleef thi, par dil mein sirf tumhari hifazat ki fikr thi. Mujhe maaf karna, Maa, agar mere shabdon ne tumhe dukh pahunchaya ho. Jab tumne kaha, 'Tumne meri izzat kharab kar di,' to us pal mere andar kuch toot gaya tha. Maa, tumhari izzat mere liye sab kuch hai, meri zindagi se bhi badhkar.

Mera pyar tumhe kaid karne ke liye nahi hai, Maa.
Tum aazad ho, ek khoobsurat panchhi ki tarah jo khule aasman mein udna chahta hai.
Main to bas tumhe us udaan mein, har mushkil se bachana chahta hoon, tumhare pankhon ko salamat rakhna chahta hoon.
Tum jahan bhi jao, meri dua, mera saath, aur mera vishwas hamesha tumhare saath rahega.
Tumhe duniya ki har khushi mile, yahi meri sabse badi khwahish hai.

Main tumse apni zindagi se bhi zyada pyar karta hoon, Maa. Ye pyar sirf ek bete ka nahi, balki us rooh ka hai jo tumhe har pal dekhta hai, tumhari khushi mein apni khushi paata hai.

(Usne apne haathon ko kuch pal ke liye roka, kuch gehra socha, aur phir apni aankhon mein nami liye, usne ek chhoti si kavita jodi, jo uske dil ke sabse gehre ehsaas bayan kar rahi thi):

"Jab bhi nazar milti hai tumse,
Ek ajab sa sukoon mil jata hai.
Dil mein koi geet sa bajta hai,
Aur waqt kahin tham sa jata hai.

Tumhari hansi mein ek jaadoo hai,
Jo rooh ko meri chhoo jaati hai.
Tumhari aankhon mein ek gehrai hai,
Jismein meri duniya kho jaati hai."

Ye sirf kuch shabd nahi hain, Maa... ye mera har ehsaas hai.

Tumhara,
Raj"

(Letter Ko Bade Hi Pyar Se Modkar, Raj Dheere Se Sakshi Ke Kamre Ki Taraf Badha. Darwaza Thoda Sa Khula Hua Tha, Jaise Uske Andar Aane ka intezar kar raha ho. Raj ek pal ke liye ruka, saans gehri ki, aur phir bade hi aaram se darwaza thoda aur khola.)

Sakshi chadar mein simti hui gehri neend mein so rahi thi. Halki si kiran uske masoom chehre par pad rahi thi, aur vo kisi khoobsurat, pari-si rajkumari jaisi lag rahi thi. Raj ke dil ki dhadkan tez ho gayi. Usne apni nazar uske masoom chehre par tiki di. Vo use do minute tak bina palak jhapkaya dekhta raha. Uske chehre par ek ajeeb si shanti thi, ek anokhi masoomiyat, jo Raj ke dil ko chhoo gayi. Uske man mein hazaron khayal daud rahe the, par sabse upar bas ek hi ehsaas tha – pyar aur gehri fikr ka.

Raj: (Man hi man) "Kitni sundar lag rahi ho Sakshi... bilkul meri sapnon ki rani... par tum to... meri..."

Uska man do hisson mein banta hua tha – ek taraf vo jaanta tha ki vo uski Maa hai, par doosri taraf uske liye ek aisi gehrai ka ehsaas tha, jo sirf mamta se kahin badhkar tha. Ye ek aisi bhavna thi, jismein vo Sakshi ko ek aisi partner ke roop mein dekh raha tha jise vo poori tarah samajhta, respect karta aur jiske saath vo har kadam par khada rahna chahta tha.


Usne dheere se apna phone nikala, uski tasveer li. Har click ke saath uska dil aur tez dhadak raha tha. Usne socha, "Sakshi, main tumhare baare mein kuch aisa mehsoos kar raha hoon, jo abhi tak samajh nahi pa raha. Ye koi physical attraction nahi, I am liking you as a person, as an ideal partner... par tum meri Maa ho." Uske dil mein ek anokha rishta ban raha tha, jahan pyar, samman aur gehri fikr ke taar itne ulajh gaye the ki vo khud bhi unhein suljha nahi pa raha tha.

Usne chupchap, bina koi awaaz kiye, vo likha hua letter Sakshi ki bed par, uske takiye ke paas rakh diya.

Ek aakhiri baar us masoom chehre ko dekha, aur phir dheere se kamre se bahar nikal gaya, apne jazbaaton ke samandar ko apne andar samete hue.
Usne use jagana theek nahi samjha.
Uske man mein bas ek hi baat thi – Sakshi ka sukoon, uski khushi.
Raj apne kamre me aake so gaya.


SUBAH 6 BAJE: EK NAYA EHSAAS

Subah ke 6 baj chuke the. Raat bhar ki bechaini aur adhoori neend ke baad, Sakshi ki aankhein khuli. Uske dil mein ab bhi Raj ki fikr ka ek bhaari bojh tha. Bistar se uthte hi uski nazar table par rakhe us letter par padi, jo Raj ne uske liye chhoda tha. Uske haath kaanp rahe the, jab usne dheere se us letter ko uthaya aur padhna shuru kiya.

Jaise-jaise usne Raj ke likhe har shabd ko padha, uski aankhein nam hoti gayin."
Tumhari chinta ne mujhe pighla diya," "Tumhari izzat mere liye sab kuch hai," aur phir vo chhoti si kavita... har pankti uske dil mein utarti ja rahi thi.
Jab uski nazar letter par pade Raj ke sookhe aansuon ke nishan par padi, to uska gala bhar aaya. Uske apne aansoo bekabu hokar behne lage.

Sakshi: (Rote hue, awaaz mein dard aur pyar ka mishran) "Ye kaisa pyar hai... ye kaisa bandhan hai... jo khud dard mein hote hue bhi meri fikr karta hai... mujhse maafi maangta hai? Mera Raj... mera bachcha... tune to mera dil hi jeet liya hai."

Use apni kahi hui baatein yaad aayin, uska gussa, uske kadve shabd. Use laga, usne kitni badi galti kar di thi. Raj ka yah letter sirf ek maafinama nahi tha, balki uske gehre, niswarth prem ka ek jeeta-jaagta saboot tha. Sakshi ka dil Raj ke pyar aur parwah se bhar gaya, ek aisa pyar jo usne pehle kabhi mehsoos nahi kiya tha. Yah mamta se kahin badhkar tha, ek aisa rishta jo shabdon se pare tha.

RAJ KE KAMRE MEIN: SUKOON AUR EK ANKAHA TANAV

Letter ko apne seene se lagaye hue, Sakshi dheere-dheere Raj ke kamre ki taraf badhi. Darwaza thoda sa khula tha. Usne himmat karke andar jhankaa. Raj gehri neend mein so raha tha, uska chehra thaka hua aur sooja hua tha. Uski laal aankhein, jo raat bhar royi hongi, Sakshi ke dil ko andar tak pighla gayin. Ek pal ke liye uske andar rahat ki lahar daud gayi – Raj ghar wapas aa gaya tha, vo surakshit tha. Par saath hi, ek ankaha sa tanav bhi hawa mein ghula hua tha.

Sakshi: (Phusphusate hue, uski awaaz mein mamta aur ek gehri komalta thi) "So ja mere bete... tu kitna thak gaya hai"

Use pata tha ki Raj der raat ghar aaya hoga, shayad soya bhi nahi hoga. Use jagana theek nahi tha. Vah nahi chahti thi ki uski neend mein koi disturb ho.

Vah chupke se kamre mein daakhil hui. Uski nazrein Raj par hi tiki hui thin, jaise vah use apni palkon se dhak lena chahti ho.

Usne dheere-dheere kamre ko saaf karna shuru kiya, bikhri hui cheezon ko sameta, par har pal uski aankhein Raj ke shant chehre par hi tiki rahti thin. Uski har harkat mein ek Maa ki mamta aur ek aise insaan ki parwah thi, jo uske liye duniya mein sabse zyada mayne rakhta tha.

(Kitchen Mein... Sakshi Raj Ke Liye Taza Parathe Banaati Hai, Jabki Uski Aankhon Se Aansoo Tapak Rahe Hain. Vah Letter Ko Apne Dil Se Lagaati Hai.)

Sakshi: (Man hi man)
"Tu sirf mera beta nahi... meri dhadkan ban gaya hai..."

RASOI MEIN: AANSUO SE SANE PARATHE

Raj ke kamre se nikalne ke baad, Sakshi seedhe rasoi mein gayi. Uske dil mein Raj ke liye umadte ehsaas the. Usne tave par Raj ke liye taza parathe banane shuru kiye.

Aata goonthte hue, belte hue, aur phir tave par senkte hue, uski aankhon se aansoo lagatar tapak rahe the. Ye aansoo dukh ke nahi the, balki Raj ke prati uske gehre pyar ke the.

Vah baar-baar Raj ke letter ko apne dil se lagaati, jaise uski har dhadkan Raj ke naam ho.

Sakshi: (Man hi man, uski awaaz mein pyar aur ek ankahee bhavna thi) "Tu sirf mera beta nahi... tu meri dhadkan ban gaya hai, Raj. Meri saansein tujhse hain, meri duniya tujhse hai. Mujhe nahi pata ye kaisa rishta hai, par ye meri zindagi ka sabse khoobsurat ehsaas hai. Tu meri zindagi ka vo hissa hai, jiske bina main adhoori hoon."

Uske har parathe mein uske aansoo aur pyar ka swaad ghul raha tha. Vah chahti thi ki Raj jab uthe, to use mehsoos ho ki uski Maa, uski Sakshi, uske saath hai, har pal, har kadam par.

Uske dil mein ab sirf mamta nahi thi, balki ek aisa gehra, pavitra aur anmol rishta tha, jise vah ab tak samajh nahi paai thi, par ab mehsoos kar rahi thi.

NEHA KA MASOOM HASTAKSHEP: EK ANKAHA AAKARSHAN

Subah ho chuki thi, par Neha ki aankhon mein raat bhar ki fikr aur aansuon ki nami ab bhi baaki thi. Raj ke achanak chale jaane se use bahut takleef hui thi.

Waise to vah Raj ko apne bade bhai ki tarah hi pyar karti thi, usse hamesha laad-dular milta tha.
Par, ab kuch dinon se uske dil mein ek ajeeb sa ehsaas panap raha tha – ek aisa khinchaav, jo sirf bhai-bahan ke rishte se thoda zyada tha.

Vah gupchup tareeke se Sakshi ke prati Raj ke dhyan se thodi jealousy mehsoos karne lagi thi.

Use Raj ka poora dhyan, uski poori duniya sirf apne liye chahiye thi.

NEHA KA RAJ KO JAGANA: EK BHAAVUK SUBAH

Apni aankhon mein aansoo liye aur dil mein Raj ki fikr liye, Neha turant Raj ke kamre ki taraf bhagi. Darwaza halka sa khula tha.
Usne dekha, Raj gehri neend mein so raha tha, uska chehra abhi bhi thaka hua aur udaas dikh raha tha.

Neha dheere se andar aai. Uska dil Raj ko aise dekh kar bhar aaya. Innocent Neha chupchap Raj ke bistar ke paas gayi aur peeche se use apni baahon mein bhar liya, jaise use apne andar samet lena chahti ho.

Neha: (Halke se hilate hue, awaaz mein chinta aur pyar ka mishran) "Bhaiya... Bhaiya... utho na."

Raj dheere se jaaga, thoda chaunk kar muda aur Neha ko aise apni baahon mein paakar hairan rah gaya. Neha ne use turant kaskar gale laga liya, jaise vah usse door jaane ke liye use maaf kar rahi ho.

Neha: (Aankhon mein aansoo liye) "Bhaiya, aap kahan chale gaye the? Mujhe kitni fikr ho rahi thi aapki."

Raj ka dil Neha ki masoomiyat aur uske sacche pyar ko dekhkar pighal gaya. "Sorry babu... bahut-bahut sorry," usne dheere se kaha.

"Babu, main tumhe pareshaan nahi karna chahta tha..." Phir uski nazar seedhe Neha ke chehre par tiki aur uska pehla sawal Sakshi ke baare mein tha.

"Tumne aur Maa ne raat ko kuch khaya ya nahi? Maa kaisi hai? Vo soyi thi ya nahi? Mujhe ek-ek baat batao." Raj ke har sawal mein Sakshi ke liye uski gehri fikr aur bechaini saaf jhalak rahi thi.

JEALOUSY AUR MASOOMIYAT KA TAKRAV

Jaise hi Raj ne Sakshi ke baare mein itne sawal poochhe, Neha ke chehre par ek pal ke liye udaasi aur halki si jealousy chha gayi.

Use laga, Raj ka sara dhyan abhi bhi Sakshi par hi tha.
Use chahiye tha ki Raj pehle uski fikr kare, usse pooche ki usne kya khaya ya nahi.

Par Raj ki har saans mein Sakshi ka naam tha.
Yah ehsaas Neha ko thoda akela mehsoos kara gaya, halaanki vah apni is bhavna ko samajh nahi paai.

Neha ne Raj ko bataya ki kaise Sakshi raat bhar soyi nahi thi, khana nahi khaya tha aur kitni pareshaan thi.
Raj ki aankhon mein pashchaataap gehra gaya.

CLIMAX: EK MASOOM SAWAL, EK GEHRA GHAAV

Phir, Neha ne Raj ka haath pakad liya, uski aankhon mein dekha aur ek aisi baat kah gayi, jisne Raj ke dil par gehra asar kiya. Uske shabd masoom the, par unmein ek aisa dard aur adhikar tha, jise Raj samajh nahi paya.

Neha: (Aankhon mein aansoo liye, bahut masoomiyat se, par poori shiddat se) "Bhaiya, aapko pata nahi hai main aapse kitna pyar karti hoon? Aise phir kabhi nahi karna aap, aap meri kasam khao! Maa ne ab tak khana bhi nahi khaya... usko raat ko neend bhi nahi aai. Aapne mera aur Maa ka nahi socha! Hamara aapke siva hai hi kaun?"

Neha ke is sawal ne Raj ko andar tak hila diya. Uske masoom shabd seedhe Raj ke dil par lage aur uska pashchaataap aur bhi badh gaya. Use laga, usne na sirf Sakshi ko, balki Neha ko bhi kitni takleef di thi.

Raj us pal Neha ke chehre par chhai us gehri bhavna ko nahi samajh paya. Use laga ki yah ek chhoti bahan ka apne bade bhai ke liye shuddh pyar aur dekhbhal hai, par Neha ki aankhon mein jo ek ankaha sa intezar tha, Raj use pakad nahi paya.

Yah uske liye keval ek bahan ka dar tha, jabki Neha ke andar Raj ke liye ek-tarfa, masoom pyar dheere-dheere panap raha tha, jise Raj kabhi samajh hi nahi paya. Yah ek aisa ehsaas tha jo Neha ke dil mein tha, par Raj ke liye hamesha ek ansuljhi paheli ban kar raha.

RASOI MEIN: ANKAHI NAZRON KA MILAN

Neha ke washroom jaane ke baad, Raj ne ek gehri saans li. Uska man abhi bhi Neha ke shabdon aur apne apraadh-bodh se bhara hua tha.
Par uske dil ka ek hissa use rasoi ki or kheench raha tha. Vah dheeme kadmon se rasoi ke darwaze tak pahuncha.

Aur phir, uski nazar us drishya par padi jisne use kuch pal ke liye wahin tham liya.

Sakshi, apni peeth uski taraf kiye, tave par parathe bana rahi thi. Subah ki halki roshni rasoi mein phail rahi thi, aur us roshni mein
Sakshi kisi apsara se kam nahi lag rahi thi. Uske baal uske kandhon par bikhre hai,

Raj uski mad-mast gaand ka diwana ho gaya hai, itni pyari gaand toh kisi heroine ki bhi nahi hogi, Raj ab Sakshi ke liye aur pagal hone laga

baad me Raj ki nazar uski nangi kamar par gayi aur wo usme hi kho gaya;

Sakshi ka har part sundar tha... bass aaj Raj ne use kareeb se dekha tha ek naye nazar se...

Raj use tak-taki lagaye dekhta raha, lagbhag paanch minute tak.



Uski aankhon mein ek ajeeb si chamak thi, ek aisi chahat jo usne pehle kabhi mehsoos nahi ki thi.
Vah sirf apni Maa ko nahi dekh raha tha, balki ek aisi aurat ko dekh raha tha jo uske dil ke sabse gehre konon mein utar chuki thi.

Sakshi ko apne 6th sense se mehsoos hua ki koi use dekh raha hai.

Uske honthon par ek halki si muskan tair gayi, aur uske gaalon par ek gulabi si laali chha gayi, jaise koi nayi-naveli dulhan apne pati ko dekh ke sharama rahi ho.

Usne bina Raj ko kuch dikhaye, dheere se palat gayi.

ANKAHA IQRAAR: AANKHON SE AANKHON KA SAFAR

Raj aur Sakshi ki nazrein milin. Ek pal ke liye poora brahmaand tham sa gaya.

Koi shabd nahi the, phir bhi unki aankhon mein ek-doosre ke liye athaah bhavnayein tair rahi thin.

Raj ki aankhon mein raat bhar ka dard, pachhutaava aur ek gehra pyar tha, jabki Sakshi ki aankhon mein rahat, chinta aur ek naya, anjana sa aakarshan tha.
Yah ek aisa pal tha jahan ankaha hi sab kuch kah raha tha. Unke dil ek-doosre se baat kar rahe the, bina kisi zubaan ke.

Raj ne apni nam aankhon se Sakshi ki or dekha aur badi mushkil se phusphusaya, "Main theek hoon..." Uski awaaz mein ek ajeeb si kamzori thi, jo uske andar ke toofan ko bayan kar rahi thi.

Aakhon se Pyar hona isi ko kehte hai, ki bina bole samne wala sab kuch samaj jaye

Sakshi ab khud ko rok nahi paai. Uske andar bhavnaon ka sailaab umad pada tha.
Vah dheere-dheere Raj ki or badhi, uske kadmon mein ek ankahee hichkichahat thi, par dil mein ek zabardast khinchaav.

Jab vah Raj ke kareeb pahunchi, to usne apna haath badhaya aur behad komalta se uske chehre ko chhua.

Uski aankhein aansuon se bhari thin, aur uske sparsh mein ek nayi, gehri bhavna ki khoj thi – yah sirf Maa ka sparsh nahi tha, balki kuch aur tha, kuch aisa jo unke rishte ko ek naya aayaam de raha tha.

Raj, jo pehle se hi bhavnaon mein dooba tha, Sakshi ke sparsh se pighal gaya. Uski aankhon se aansoo chhalak pade. Usne Sakshi ko kaskar gale laga liya, apne aansuon se uske kandhe ko bhigote hue.

Raj: (Bheegi hui aankhon aur kaanpti awaaz mein) "Mujhe maaf kar do Maa... mujhe maaf kar do. Main tumse bahut zyada pyar karta hoon... apni jaan se bhi zyada."
Uske har shabd mein uski aatma ka dard aur Sakshi ke liye uska aseem pyar tha.

Sakshi ne kuch nahi kaha. Uske honth khamosh the, par uski aankhein bol rahi thin.

Un aankhon mein Raj ke liye maafi thi, pyar tha, aur ek dridh sankalp tha ki vah sab kuch theek kar degi.

Uski aankhon ne Raj ko yah vishwas dilaya ki vah uske saath hai, aur shayad, yah bhi ki vah ab unke beech ke is anoothe bandhan ko pahchan chuki hai.
Yah ek aisa pal tha jahan shabdon se zyada, bhavnaon ka aadaan-pradaan ho raha tha, unke anokhe pyar ke nazuk aur vikasit hote swaroop par zor dete hue.

CHOT KA KHULASA: CHINTA AUR GEHRA LAGAAV

Jaise hi Raj ne Sakshi ko gale lagaya, Sakshi ki nazar uske haath par padi.
Raj ki shirt ki sleeve thodi upar khisak gayi thi, aur uski kalai par khoon ke sookhe nishan aur kharonchein saaf dikh rahi thin.
Sakshi ka dil ek pal ke liye dhakk se rah gaya. Vah Raj se alag hui aur uske haath ko apne haathon mein le liya.

Sakshi: (Aankhon mein dard aur gussa liye, awaaz kaanp rahi thi)
"Raj! Ye kya hai? Tumne aisa kyun kiya? Tum apne baare mein kabhi nahi sochte ho! Tumhe mera zara bhi khayal nahi hai? Agar tumne wapas aisi harkat ki, to mujhe kuch ho jayega! Kya tumhe iski parwah nahi hai?"

Uske shabdon mein sirf ek Maa ki daant nahi thi, balki ek aise insaan ka dar tha, jo Raj ko apni zindagi ka sabse aham hissa maanti thi. Uski chinta mein ek gehra, ankaha lagaav tha, jo ab khulkar saamne aa raha tha.

Raj ne aaj pahli baar Sakshi ki pyari aakhon me apne liye bete se zyada pyar dikha... aur wo apne chot ko Dhanyawad dene laga

Raj ne apni sooji hui aankhon se use dekha, aur use ehsaas hua ki Sakshi ka haal bhi kuch-kuch mere jaisa hai...



Aage kya hoga? Ye update kaisa laga Comment karo...
Agar Accha laga toh batao... mujhe likhne me thoda motivation milta hai

Nice update....

 

[xoxo0781]

badhiya update bhai, waiting for next update ...

Nice update....

Thank you

 

[xoxo0781]

Just outstanding update all the emotions between mom and son, the way you present it just awesome...... Just one query or it's my suggestions just plzz keep it between mom and son.. Don't involve sister..... It's just my suggestion as you can only add the mom son tag in the thread.... But just write what's your vision says, not mine further more the story is 10 /10 keep it up

Han bhai baat to tu sahi bola jitna bhi incest story hota hai sab story me pura pariwar hero ki nichhe ajata hai

Meri thodi alag soch hai

Bhai Raj ne kab haan bola hai Neha ko , aur Neha kuch nahi boli hai ab tak

Bhai attraction ka naam suna hai ki nahi,

agar thoda drama nahi hoga toh story boring hogi

Ha bo hi to jaise iss story mai maa ko pyar ho sakta hai bete se kyu ki bo akela hai, use sathi ki jarurat hai...but beti ko iss story mai bina bajaay hero ke liye feelings kese a sakta hai.. Kya behen normal bahar kise se pyar nahi kar sakta... Pata nahi yaar behen ko feeling ayi bhi kse

 

[king1969]

Bahut hi mazedar update

 

[bruttleking]

Aapki story pahle achi lag rahi thi lekin ab boriyat lag rahi hai sorry writer ji mai na aapko aur na aapki story ko bura bol raha hu shayad mujhe hi nahi pasand aa rahi hai shakshi jaisi aurat itni aasani klse kisi mard ke behkaave me aa gai mujhe bilkul bhi pasand ni aaya maine story aage padhne ki bahut koshish ki lekin ab man ni lag raha hai is story ko padhne me

 

[xoxo0781]

Aapki story pahle achi lag rahi thi lekin ab boriyat lag rahi hai sorry writer ji mai na aapko aur na aapki story ko bura bol raha hu shayad mujhe hi nahi pasand aa rahi hai shakshi jaisi aurat itni aasani klse kisi mard ke behkaave me aa gai mujhe bilkul bhi pasand ni aaya maine story aage padhne ki bahut koshish ki lekin ab man ni lag raha hai is story ko padhne me

Please don't follow me sir, mein khud likhna nahi chahta hun.
I am writing for fewer readers but I think some of them don't care about it

 

[xoxo0781]

Should I close the story?

Ye meri 1st story thi, ab mera dil thoda dukh gaya hai. I am feeling sad...

Mere pas kuch acche ideas the...
but seems like most of readers don't like my story...

Give me honest reply till Sunday (27th July)

After consideration & reality check, I will delete the story...

 

[Ranjit143]

Are yaar aise mat karo dil tut jayega
Sabne aap ki story ko pasand kar rahe hai
Plz close mat karna
Wo jo reader hai 4-5 update me sakshi or anil sir ke bich jo incident hua tha vah abhi bhul nahin pa raha hai aap tension mat lo aap likhe raha dheere dheere sab bhul jagenge
Ek do readers ki galti ki saja aap sabko kyon de rahe ho
Pls