Horror Sauda (deal of life) | exclusively for xforum | written by Love 1994 |

[King]

Awesome start bhai...
Khani start huwa ek journey se 3dost ek ex girlfriend aur uska fiancee ke bich jiska end ka abhi pata nhi...

 

[Devraj007]

पुराने यार के साथ उसका नया प्यार,
हो ना जाए ट्रिप पे कोई बवाल...
रीमा को बुला के सोनाली ने चली है क्या कोई चाल,
अगले अपडेट मे देखते हैं क्या है Love का फैलाया ये मायाजाल

 

[anandsngh12]

Bahut hi khubsurat aur Interesting hai pahla update.
Lagta hai ye trip me hi kuch rahasya chhupa hua hai jaisa ki kahani ka Title hai.
Reema ko dekh kar Arjun chounka kyo...?
Reema ka behaviour bhi uske prati thoda rukhapan liye huye nazar aaya.
Magar inn sabke beech arjun aur sonali ke beech ki bonding jabardast dikhi.
Ab ye kahani kya naya rahasya ujagar karti hai, ye to aage hi pata chalega.
Anyway wonderful & dilchasp started the story.
Waiting for next one..

 

[Rahul]

congratulations for new story love..pura thread congratulations se hi bhar gawa hai..update baad me padhunga mud off hai mera

 

[Aakash.]

First of all, I want to thank and congratulate you on writing a new story. I sincerely hope that everyone will like this story.
Thank You...
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[Iron Man]

Hey guys,

Bahut se log mujhe jante hai aur wo kyu ye batane ki jarurat nahi padegi

Toh har baar ke tarha mai fir hajir hu ek new story leke jo bahut hi majedar hai
Haa aap log bologe ki har baar yahi bolke story start karta hai aur aage update nahi deta
I know kafi baar kar chuka hu mai lekin is baar aap aur mai haa aap aur mai ghar me bethey bore ho rahe hai lekin ye sab ke liye jaruri bhi hai ki ham ghar me rahe

Haa lekin bore hona ye kuch thik nahi hai
Mere khas dost lover of darkness bhai ne bola hai ki

"aise samay me ye ham writer's ka farj banta hai ki ham aap ke entertainment ka khayal rakhe"
Wo khud bhi 16hr duty kar rahe hai aur roj apni story pe update bhi de rahe hai mai dil se unko is forum pe apni story aur bahar asal jindagi me wo jo kaam kar rahe hai uske liye dil se salute karta hu
Aur ye meri new short story puri tarha unhe dedicate karta hu

Ab aate hai story pe to ye ek short story hai jiske mushkil se 10 update ya usse kam update honge
Toh aap sab ke comments ka intazar rahega


Ek baar firse kehna chahunga ki Stay home stay safe

for new story

 

[Mr.X796]

Nice start bro

 

[Vikram Bhosle]

nice starting

 

[Aakash.]

I loved the way you started the story. The story is of a college group going on vacation together. 3 friends an ex-girlfriend and her fiance. This journey has just started, I think it is going to be a lot of fun.
The first update of the story was even better than I expected. You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...
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[lover of darkness]

bus love etne reply kafi hain , abh ham 4-5 din update nai denge