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Fantasy Saurya - ek youdha (Completed)

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Hi friend maine xforum pr kafi stories padi hai aur ab mai bhi apni ek story post karne ja raha hu ab jyada wakt na lete huye
story p chalte h jaise jaise log milte rahenge unke bare m batata jaunga .
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UPDATE 1
"Aree oo bhai ye bus Kishan pur jayegi kya ?" puchha kisi ne
conductor- nahi bhaiya e baswa to Madhavpur jayegi . Tumko jana hai ka ?
Madavpur ka naam sunte hi pata nahi kyun vyakti k chahre k rang hi udd gaye.
"are mohit babu aap aaj akele bus stand pr caleye hm apko apke bus tk chod dete hai." aate huye ek ladke ne kaha
Mohit - arre saurya tum ho kya ?
ladka - ha mohit babu pr aap akele yaha kyu aa gaye aur moti kaha hai .(ladke ne mohit k cahre ko dekha to use laga koi paresani hogi )
Mohit - moti ko hm hi gift pack krane beje hai aaj tumhare ghar jo party h uske liye ab aa hi gae ho to jalge chalo warna tumhari bahane hamse ruth jayegi.
Saurya - caliye hamara hath pkadiye aur chalte hai
mohit babu ne saurya ka hath pakda aur chal diye dusre bus s kishanpur ki traf.

bus pr baithte hi saurya sochne laga ki kya uski bahno ko uska gift pasand ayega bhi ya nhi . aur wahi mohit babu apne paresani k bare m sochne lage (jo baad m pata chalega) .
Aise hi 2 gante m dono log pahuch gaye Kishanpur aur dono hi bade kush lag rahe the ho bhi kyu na ek apni bahno k pass ja raha tha pure 2 saal bad aur ek apne dost k pass (saurya k papa ).

Baat ye hai ki saurya apna 12th k exam de kr waps apne gaon ja raha tha wo bhi pure 2 saal baad
(ab yaha s saurya ki jagah m likhunga )
Main bahut dino baad apne gaon apno k pass aa raha tha jaha m bada hua ye jagah bahut hi achi h yaha pr charo taraf sirf khet hi khet h jo ki dekhne m bahut sundar h aur bhi dekhne layak chije hai jaise yaha ka purana mandir,talab aur purani bhutiya haweli bhi

Main bus s utar kr yahi sab soch raha tha.maine ghar m kisi ko bhi aane k bare m nahi bataya tha isi liye koi b nahi aya mujhe lene . Bus stop pr hi mujhe moti mil gaya jo ki hath m kuch paked dabbe liye khada tha aur Mohit babu ka wait kr raha tha . wo abhi idhar udhar dekh hi rha tha ki Maine use aawaj de k bulaya wo jaldi s aya aur hmare liye riksaw ka intejam kiya aur hm chal diye ghar ki taraf .

yaha s hame ghar jane k liye kam s kam 20 minute lagne the m aur moti gaon k kubsurat najaro m kho gaye aur Mohit babu riksaw wale s bate krne lage .

Ab hm phuch gaye mere ghar. Ghar dekhne m jyada bada nhi tha. 2 majila ghar h jisme 5 kmre h aur 2 bathroom aur niche k floor p 2 room aur ek bathroom h ek room papa k hai aur ek hmesa band rhta h pata nhi kyun.
aur upar k floor pr 3 room aur ek bathroom h jisme s ek mera ek tiya aur taniya ka aur ek guest room.
chaliye ab apne pariwar s milwata hu .
Abhishek Dixit - dad (pese s kishan h hmari jyada jamin to nhi h fir bhi hmare gujar basar k liye thik h )
Sanjana Dixit - mom (house maker h bahut hi sweet aur sabko pyar krne wali )
Tiya and Tanya Dixit-sis(dono twins h hmesa sabko presan krna yhi inka kaam h abhi gaon k school m 10 m padai kr rhi h)
ye thi meri family .

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Hm pahuch gaye aur maine mohit babu ko riksaw s utara aur apna saman bhi kuch saman moti ko diya aur kuch khud le liya aur pahuch gaye m ghar k gate pr m bell bajane hi wala tha ki kisi n darwaja khola aur mujhe dekh ekdum s chowk gaya m bhi ese nhi janta tha pr dekhne m sabhya malum ho rahi thi main unko dekh hi rha tha ki piche s meri mom aai aur mujhe dekh kush hui aur paresan bhi . maine ye notice kar liya tha.

Mujhe laga ki ye meri mom ki koi friend hogi maine bhi unke pair chue pr unhone to mujhe gale hi laga liya . unke gale lag k mujhe bilkul apna sa mahsus ho raha tha kuch der aise rhne k baad muche apne kandhe pr gilapan mahsus hua jab maine dekha to wo roo rahi thi mujhe ye bahut hi ajib laga aur bura bhi. ab m kuch kahta usse pahle hi meri bahno ki entry ho gai jo ki apne friends ko invite krne gai thi birthday party k liye . Mujhe dekhte hi mere paas aai aur kud gai mere upar Bhaiya Bhaiya chillate hue . Jab ye sab ho raha tha tb wo aurat bas hame dekhe ja rhi thi aur muskura rahi thi aur mom apta nhi kyun kuch pareshan si dikh rahi thi.
Ab maine apni dono bahno ko kud s alag kiya aur unhe birthday wish kiya jise sun kr wo aurat meri mom ko kha jane wali najro s dekhe ja rhi thi.
Ab mai apni mom k pass gaya aur unke pair chue to unhone bhi muje gale laga liya aur wahi sabhi maa ka dialog chipkka diya "kitna ptla ho gaya h khhata nhi kya ..."
main- mom m bilkul fit hu pr aap kuch paresan najar aa rhi h.
mom - nahi beta m to kush hu ki tum aa gaye presan to pahle thi kyunki tumhari bahno n kaha tha jab tk tum na aaye tb tk ye dono khanna nhi khaye gi.(baat ko badalte hue).
maine done ki taraf dekha aur mom ko bola aap khana lagao . Abhi tak wo aurat hame hi dekhe jaa rhi thi . mom n unhe baithne ko kaha aur wo khud khana lane chali gai .
Abhi mom kitchen k ander hi gai thi k bahar s Mohit babu aur moti dono ander aye.
Mohit babu ko dekh kr wo aurat bol padi - are chottu tum yaha kya kr rhe ho.
Mohit babu to awaj sunte hi ghabra gaye .
Mohit - c..cho..choti Malkin aa..aaaap yahaa .
Moti ka bhi face bilkul waisa hi ho gya pr wo kuch na bola
aurat(kadk awaj m ) - kitni baar bola h didi bolne ko malkin nhi pr tum ho ki..
Awaj sun kr Mom kitchen s bahar ayi hatho m thali liye aur bahar jo dekha use dekh to ek dum s chintit hi ho gai. par khud ko sambhal kr boli -Choti maine hi mohit ko yaha k bare m batane s mana kiya tha kisiko.
Aurat - par q didi aap mujhe to bata sakti thi na ye sab ya aap mujhse bhi naraj ho(bolte hue unki awaj kuch bhari hone lagi)
Mai aur meri bahne bas ye sab dekhe jaa rhe the hme kuch samajh nhi aa raha tha .
Mom - nhi choti tum galat samaj rhi ho phle khana kha lo phir m tumhe batati hu.

Hm tino bhai bahan kb s chup baite the ki tabhi Tiya s raha nhi gaya aur usne puch hi liya .
Tiya-Mom ye aunty kon h ? aur y Mohit bhaiya inko choti malkin kyun bol rhe h ? aur y apko didi kyun bol rhi h ?
Mom - beta phle khanna kha lo phir batati hu
phir sabhi n khanna khaya aur baith gaye bate krne dopahar ka samay hua tha abhi.
Mohit - didi app bate karo m jara abhishek bhai s mil kr aata hu .(aur wo chale gaye moti k sath )
mom - beta y tumhari choti massi h.
ye hum tino k liya kisi boom s kum nhi tha chuki hme bataya gaya tha ki hamare parents annath h .
Main- pr mom apne to kaha tha ki aap aur dad annath ho .
mera bas itna hi khna tha ki wo aurat jor s chillayi mom k upar -Aanaathh! ye bataya h apne inko ki app aur jiju annath ho
Mom -Poonam maine aur tumhare jiju n wahi kiya jo hame sahi laga waise bhi us wakt hmne unse rista tod hi liya tha unlogo ki wajah s hamne bahut kuch khoya h( bolte bolte mom rone lagi )
main uth kr mom k pass gaya aur unko gale laga liya air chup karane laga . kuch der m mom chup hui to wo fir boli
mom- aaj bhi yaad h wo din jab papa n gudiya(Saifali) ko bas isliye ghar s dhaka de kr nikal diya qki wo deep s shaddi krna cahti thi pyar krti thi wo deep s aur dad n use nikal diya ghar s. main kabhi khud ko maaf nhi kar paungi ki mere samne meri gudiya k sath aisa kuch hua aur m dekhti rhi bus . us din hi maine abhishek k sath ghar chodne ka maan bana liya tha.

Main aur meri bahne to bas ye sab sun k shock m he the.
Poonam Mausi- pr ghar walo n apke aur jiju k mout ki khabar di thi hame aur maine to apni akhon s akpi aur jiju ki body dekhi thi us car blast k baad.

Mom kuch bolti usse phle hi ghar m 7 logo ki entry hui...
 
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