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Fantasy Saurya - ek youdha (Completed)

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Hi friend maine xforum pr kafi stories padi hai aur ab mai bhi apni ek story post karne ja raha hu ab jyada wakt na lete huye
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Ab tak
Pradeep n mujhe bataya k main Mother Elika ka vanshaj hu jo k unke har ik chij ka utradhikari hai. Usne mujhe uss saitan ka naam bhi bataya jo k Pritvi pr tha jiske liye ye sab ho raha tha

Pradeep- Maarcuss

AAGE

Pritvi s bahut dur kahi ek daravna sa planet tha jaha pr bas chikhe hi sunayi de rahi thi. Yaha ek mahal numa kuch bana hua tha jiske darwaje k pr ek lambi katar lagi hui thi bahut hi lambi ladkiyon ki jaha tarah tarh ki ladkiyan khadi thi roo rahi thi wahi ander ek aag s bana hua danav baitha tha aur wo baari baari s sabhi adkiyon ko bhog raha tha k tabhi saari ladkiyan gayab ho jaati hai wo agni danav ye dekh baukhla uthta hai.
Agnidanav- Kon hai jiski itni juraat ho gayi k mere hi grah pr aa meri hi bandiyon ko uda le gaya. Saamne aao.

"tak tak tak tu tak tak tak tu tak tak tak tu"
Agnidanav- kon hai jo ye aawaje nikal raha hai himat hai to saamne aao.
"Hmmmm himmaaat himaaat to bahut hai pr saath m akal bhi hai mere paas"
AgniDanav- Kon hai kon hai saamne aao.
"Saamne jo aaya main to tu bhul jayega k kon hai tu jhuk jayega mere saamne bol aauu kya bol na"
Agnidanav-(haste hue)Lagta hai tujhke badi jaldi hai maut s milne ki jo mujhse aisi baate kr raha hai.
"Maut maut to khud darti hai mujhse k kahi agar mere saamne aa jaye to main uski le na lu ab dekhte hai tera kya hoga"
Issi awaj k saath wo saksh waha aa jata hai aur use dekhte hi apne agnidanav bhai ki puri fat jaati hai wo apne ghutno pr baith jaata hai.
Agnidanav- M..maa..maafi maalik maafi bhul hui jo aapko na pahchan paya.
Shaks- Arre dekh teri bhi fat gayi hai na ha ha ha ab galti kri hai to.
Agnidanav- nhi malik aisa naa kaho main main iss galti k praschatap k liye kuch bhi karne ko taiyar hu.
Jaise hi Agni danav n ye bola uss shaks ne uske sar p haath phera.
Agnidanav- nhiiii maaaliiiik nhiii aiiiisaaa naaaa

Aur wo beshosh ho gaya chaliye inko chodte hai aur hum chalte hai Earth p Collage m jaha ek alag hi hangama macha hua hai.

"Hum apne darshako ko dikhana chahte hai k kaise yaha pr 3 honahar students ki badi hi bhayavak tarike s hatya ki gayi hai.
Inke naam hai Ravi sharma,Abbas khan, David. Ye tino hi iss bade hi ijaatdaar gharo s talukat rakhte hai."
Abhi reporter itna bol hi raha tha k ek aawaj aayi.
"Lauda honhar banchod saale tino apne baap k kaali kamayi p aaye the yaha. Badwe agar abhi jinda hote na to...."
Reporter ne pahle to uski oor dekha phir camera man ko ishare s camera band krne ko bola fir apne maathe p aaya hua pasina pocha aur uski oor chal diya.
Reporter- Kaahe bhai kaahe hamri naukri ki maa bahan ek kare p lagal ho.Bahute muskil s to mili hai ee naukriya aur abhi jo tum kiye ho na sasura tumhre kaaran hum phi jaayege telande m. Uu live telecast tha ab dekho iee tino k baap ka krta hai tumre saath aur hamre saath bhi
Ladka- Arre ooo bhai pahle to galat report dete ho aur phir hamko hi samjha rahe ho.
Reporter- Haa to kaa kare hum tumhi batao saal ii channelwa jekar mike liye baithe hai na hum ii uii David k chacha k hai ab ii to nahi dikha sakte na k ii bhadwa drugs supply rape half murderwa ii sab k case liye baithal hai apan sar pr. Sunno hum to nikal rahe hai apan Patna k liye tum bhi bhag lo agar mil gaye ii sab k pariwar balan k na to maarwa diye jaaoge.
Ladka- Haat mujhe maarege wo saare chutiye hai wo chutiye himmat nhi unme k mera kuch kr sake samjha na....
"ghaaaii ghaaaii"
2 goliyan chali aur ladka wahi dher ho gaya pura sanata cha gaya waha pr. Reporter ki dar k maare fati jaa rahi thi.
"Sun be reporter ek nayi report bana iss launde n iss collage ko udane ka plan banaya tha jisko rokne k chakar m mere bhai aur uske doston ki maut ho gayi iss launde ko Pshyco killer saabit kr samjha na "
Reporter- j...jj.....ji sir.
"Chal shuru ho ja".
Reporter- Abhi abhi hame suchna mili hai k ***collage ko ek pshyco killer udane wala tha aur yahi baat jab iss collage k honhar students Ravi, Abaas aur David ko pata chala to unhone uss pshyco ko rokna chaha pr sayad ishwar ko kuch aur hi manjur tha ye tino hi uss Pshyco k haate chad gaye aur fir ussne inn 3 no ko tadpa tadpa kr maar dala. Abhi kuch der pahle hi ACP Mukharjee n aa kr uss Pshyco ka encounter kr diya.
Hum sabhi ko garv hona chahiye aise logo pr jo apni jaan ki parwah kiye bina hi lage rahte hai dusro ko bachane m
Main ***** Cameraman****k saath *****channel s"
ACP- kaahe be reporter sasura tumko dekhna chahiye tha na pahile ki ekar jaisan kouno baawli gaand to naahi hai iha hain batao.
Reporter- Sir hum hum to bas ohhi bol rahe the jo hamko kaha gaya tha hum pahile hi sabko samjha bhi diye the pr pata nhi kaha s ii budbakh aa gaya. Humko jaane do sir hum jaa rahe hai Patna uhhi rah lenge bas ek baar humko jaane do.
ACP- Arre ghabrao nhi bas uu cut de do fir chale jaana samjhe hum waise bhi sab sambhal lenge chaliye aap jaayiye. Arre Diwakar ji strechrwa le aaiye jara aur uthaiye ii 1 by 2 k. Saala jaun bhi maara hai ii tino k bahut badka talwarbaaj howega dekh rahe ho ek dum biche bich s kaata hai ohu eke waar m socho.
Itne m Diwakar naam ka ek constable aata hai aur charo body ko utha Ambulance m rakh deta hai.
Wahi issi bhid m :-
Kappa- Rajkumari wo ladka bekar m maara gaya.
Mohini- Arre tumko bhi logo ki chinta hoti hai kya mai to samajhti thi k tumhe koi fark nhi padta hoga tum bhi to unhe duba dete the paani m aur phir kha jaate the.
Kappa- Tab ki baat aur thi malkin pr ab aur nhi ab main aise hi thik hu.
Mohini- Chalo sahi hai waise m soch rahi thi k jab bhi aise gunehgaaro ko khun pi maut dungi to sharir tumhe de dungi pr koi baat nhi.
Kaapa- nhi malkin aap waisa hi kare maine bhi bade waqt s insani maans nhi khaya hai bada dil karta hai khane ko pr Saurya ka gulam hu uske aadesh k bina kaise.
Mohini- koi nhi kappa ab main hu na mil kr shikar karenge aur ha ye malkin malkin kya laga rakha hai tum Saurya k bhesh m ho samjhe mujhe naam s bulao yaa fir Didi kaho.
Kappa- Ji Didi ji.
Mohini- Chalo aab yaha s ghar bhi jana hai.

Dono waha s nikal pade ghar jaane ko.
Ghar pr Jay aur Nilam dono ko hi Collage m hue kaand ka pata chal gaya tha dono hi ghabraye hue the pr jaise hi apni beti ko thik thak dekha dono ki chinta thodi kam hui.
Nilam- Mohini beta tu thik to hai na maine sunna k collage m kya hua tha main to dar hi gayi thi.
Mohini- Aap bhi naa kuch bhi nhi hua mujhe yee hai na mera bodyguard iske rahte kya hona hai mujhko. Chalo ab khana lagao badi bhuk lagi hai.
Fir Nilam n meri yaani kappa s bhi haal chal pucha aur khana lagane chali gayi.
Dono n khana khaya fir chal diye apne rooms m.
Shaam ka waqt tha Mohini aa pahuchi Kappa k paas.
Mohini- Kappa ye tu kya baakiyon ko dhund sakta hai kya.
Kappa- Nhi na jab tak unki shaktiyan jagrit nhi hoti kaise dhundu unko main.
Mohini- hmm wahi to meri bhi dikat hai kappa pr kuch to krna hoga naa.
Kappa- Ek tarika hai waise agar aap bolo to main..
Mohini- Bata kya hai wo tarika.
Kappa- Jab main kaid tha saurya k ander tab bhi m bahar ki duniya ko dekh sakta tha. Maine jaha tk dekha hai bahut sare log hame social media pr yaani k Facebook twitter inn sab pe mil jaate hai to saayad wo bhi mil jaaye waise bhi naam to sabka pahle wala hi hona hai na.
Mohini- Kappa tera to dimag chalta bhi hai badhiya hai to chal dekhte hai.Pahle Priya ko dekhte hai.
Mohini n Priya type kiya facebook p.
Salla pahle to 50 angle priya hi aa gaye. Sabko dekha dekhte dekhte sham s raat ho gayi pr inko wo nhi mili.
Thak haar kr dono n ye idea chod diya aur fir raat ka khana khaya aur chale gaye apne rooms m.
Thodi der baad fir s Mohini kappa k paas gayi.
Mohini- Kappa yaar khun ki bahut talab lagi hui hai koi jugad hai kya.
Kappa- kya main kya kru kiska khun le aau main.
Mohini- Arre pata kr na aas paas to hoga na koi bure kaam krne wala bas ussi ko le aate hai fir krte hai apni party.
Kappa- Arre par ye kaise pata karu l kon bura hai kon acha hai batao aap.
Mohini- Baat to tune pate ki kari hai kappa lagta hai aaj aise hi sona hoga koi nhi kal kal sabse pahle issi baat k baare m kuch krna hai samjha na baaki baaten baad m.
Kappa- thik hai.
Mohini apne room m chali jaati hai soone ko.

Chaliye hero k paas bhi chalte hai dekhte hai ye maharaj kaha ghum rahe hai.
Main Pradeep k saath jaa raha tha mujhe kuch bhi pata nhi tha k kaha bas wo jaha ja raha tha main bhi chala jaa raha tha.
Pradeep fir ek jagah khada ho gaya aur chillaya Alex.
Main- arre ye Alex k baare m to bataya hi nhi tumne bas....oohh yeee too ekkk dd.dragon hai.
Alex ussi jagah aa chuka tha ek bahut hi bada dragon uski puch m aag lagi hui thi wo laal rang ka tha badi badi aakhen nilli rang ki bilkul meri jaisi.
Pradeep- Isse milo ye hai Alex tumhara apna chota sa dragon.
Main- ye mera hai ek min tumne jo kahani sunayi thi Manjulika wali usme bhi ye tha na pr ye to bol raha tha uss kahani m.
Alex- Maalik main to aise bhi baat krta hu.
Main- ye ye to bolta hai dekho ye bolta hai.
Pradeep- Ha ye bolta hai. Ab sun Alex Dragon world ka rajkumar hai matlab saahi khun samjha na aur Shahi Dragons ka malik shirf aur shirf Mother Elika k wansaj hi ho sakte hai jo k tu hai.
Main- Bhai ek baat batap tum mujhe unka wansaj bolte rahte ho kya koi aur nhi hai unka bas main hi hu kya.
Alex- Maalik ab to baas ek aap hi bache ho baaki unke sare wansaj maare jaa chuke hai uss Maarcuss k saath hue yudh m usne lagbhag sabhi ko hi maar diya tha pr wo bhi kam nhi the marte marte uss Maarcuss k saari shakti bhi chin li thi.
Main- kya usne sabhi ko....
Pradeep- ha dost sabhi ko aur ab baari hai badle ki tumhe hi marna hai usse tum hi maar sakte ho.
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UPDATE - 40

Ab tak
Mohini kappa k saath mil kar baaki sabko dhundne m lagi hui thi aur main Pradeep k saath Alex apne dragon jo ki dragon world ka rajkumar tha usse mila aur saath hi dono n mujhe Maarcuss k saath hui yudh k baare m bataya.

Aage

Alex- Aur badla lene k liye pahle aapko apni magical training leni hogi saath hi main physical training bhi.
Main- Physical training to maine le li thi Baba s.
Alex- Pradeep tum bura mat maanna pr sayad tum dono ko hi nhi pata k Baba ko fighting ka bas thoda sa hi gyan tha aur Malik jisse aap badla lene wale ho wo wo fighting m nipurn hai uske samne koi bhi nhi tikta tha aur ab to wo aur bhi balwan ho lauta hoga.
Pradeep- ALEX tum kiski taraf ho hamare ya uski.
Alex- Maine to bas sach bola tha aur waise bhi jaha hum jaa rahe hai waha tumhe pata chal hi jayega.
Main- kaha jaa rahe hai hum.
Alex - Bansao planet pr jaha universe ki sabse badi jaadu aur weapon arts ki University hai. (Mere s) Maalik pr usse pahle aapko apna ye huliya badlna hoga.
Pradeep- Haa Saurya ruko bas wo aata hi hoga.
Main- Kon aa raha hai.
Alex- Malik dhariya rakhna shikho waha aapko iski badi jarurat padegi.
Thodi hi der m ek Mota sa Aadmi aa jata hai hamare paas jo kuch ajeeb tha.
Aadmi- Bolo kisko kya krana hai.
Alex- Mere malik ko Bansao planet jaana hai tum samajh rahe ho na.
Aadmi(Kutil muskan k saath)- ek oor mauka iss baar to unki suraksha praniali ko dhokha de k hi rahunga bada ghamand hai na unko.(Mere s)
Tum chalo mere saath (Alex s) Dost bahut bahut shukriya fir s mauka dene ka.
Alex- Koi baat nhi ab jao aur haa in sab k baare m kisi ko bhi pata na chale warna Malik khatre m pad sakte hai.
Main- ye kya ho raha hai koi mujhe bhi to batao.
Aadmi- Tum ladke banoge ya ladki ye batao pahle.
Main- Arre ye kisa sawal hai main ladka hu to ladka hi rahunga na.
Aadmi- Arre nhi dost wo kya hai na waha ladkiyon ko jyada attention milta hai bas issi liye puch liya. Chalo koi baat nhi ladka hi bana denge chalo mere saath.
Itna bol usne mera haath pakda aur hum dono hi gayab ho gaye aur pahuch gaye ek ajeeb s jagah pr.
Aadmi- Haa to dost welcome hai tumhara mere is lab mai.
Main- Ye lab hai pr yaha to kuch...
Aadmi-Tum sach m kya Mother Elika k wansaj ho ya kisi n bas ullu bana diya tumhe batao.Tumhe magic k m k baare m bhi kuch nhi pata.
Main- Yaar mujhe bhi aaj hi pata chala hai aur jisne bataya uspe mujhe khud s bhi jyada bharosha hai.
Aadmi- koi nahi main hu na acha ek sawal agar tumhe mauka diya jaaye universe k kisi bhi prajati k logo jaisa banne ka to tum kon sa chunoge insan ka chod kr bolna.
Main- Mujhe naa elf bade aache lagte the unke wo lambe lambe kaan unki wo green skin aur....aaaahhh ye kyu kiya.
Aadmi- Arre ye lo isse pi lo.
Main- Ye kya hai aur isme mera baal q milaya.
Aadmi- Tum bahut bolte ho yaar chup chap pilo ab isse mujhe ghar bhi jaana hai.
Maine wo glass khatam kr liya. Kya batau kitna ajeeb test tha uska.
Aadmi- Yaha ulti mat krna samjhe warna tumhe hi saaf krna hoga. Ye lo is goli ko nigal jao muh ka swad badal jaayega.
Maine jhat s uske haath s wo goli li aur usko nigal liya.
Salla goli aur kadvi thi aab to mujhse control hi nhi ho raha tha.
Aadmi-ab baas ye paani hai Bansoa ka isse pi lo fir koi bhi jaadu tumhe apne roop m nahi laa sakta.
Maine paani sunna to jhat s uske haath s glass liya aur usse pi gaya. Paani nhi ye to sharbat tha bhai bilkul mitha.
Main- To kya main elf banuga.
Aadmi- Haa thodi hi der m tum elf ban jaoge.Waise tum sach m usse haara doge na.

Main- kiski baat kr rahe ho Maarcuss ki kya.
Aadmi - Haa ussi ki.
Main- Dost main apni puri takat laga dunga uske liye tumhe sayad pata nhi ki maine uske wajah s kya kya khoya hai.
Aadmi(thoda muskura kr)- hmm sayad mujhe nhi pata. Ek baat batao Jay aur Nilam kaise hai.
Main- Ache hai unhe kya hona hai... Ek minute tum unn dono ko kaise jaante ho.
Aadmi- Bas aise hi hum dost hua krte the kabhi.
Abhi main kuch bolta k mujhe chakar sa aane laga aur main behosh ho gaya.Jab aakh khuli to saamne Pradeep Alex Mohini aur Kappa the.
Mohini- Ye to bahut cute lag raha hai isse to main...
Kappa- Saurya hai wo koi elf nhi jiska khoon pine ko khudi jaa rahi ho aap.
Pradeep- Mohini tum sayad apna control khoti jaa rahi ho tumhe khud p kaabu pana hoga aaj s hi dhyaan lagana shuru kr do.
Mohini(muh banate hue)- Thik hai thik hai. Haa ek baat puchni thi aapse wo Kaapa bol tu.
Kappa- Wo Pradeep bhai wo ye Didi bol rahi thi k wo kya wo mujrimon ka khoon pi sakti hai.
Mohini- Puri baat batao kappa.
Kappa- wo Didi bol rahi thi k hum dono mil kr mujrimon ko uda lenge matlab Didi ji unka khoon aur main baaki sab usse jurm bhi kam ho jaana hai na
Main-Tum dono k dono hi pagal ho gaye ho kya kaisi baate kr rahe ho.
Mohini- Tum to bolo mat dekha tha maine wo Daayan wala kaand jo tumne kiya tha. Aur hum ye koi aapne liye nhi krenge samjhe hum to bas pritvi s bure insano ko hatana chahte hai.

Pradeep- Haa haa pata hai mujhe kon kya krna chahta hai. Mohini hmmm din m bas ek manjur hai.
Mohini- Accha to din m ek fir raat m ek haa kam hai pr kaam chala lenge hum dono.
Pradeep- Main pure din m ek ki baat kr raha hu samjhe tum dono aur wo bhi mujhse cross check krwa kr.
Main- Kya bol rahe ho tum.
Pradeep- Kya arre bhai isse inhe shakti milti hai aur main to kahta hu dono ko na RAW m daal dete hai waha pr mujhse cross cheak bhi nhi krwana hoga.
MOhini- Haa ye sahi hoga chalo kappa hum abhi chalte hai Pradeep bhai hamara intezam kr do.
Main- Kya tum log paagal ho gaye ho RAW ki baat kr rahe ho tum sab RAW ki waha koi bhi aise hi muh uthaye nhi chala jaata.
Pradeep- Tu chup kr samjha arre main hu na main dekh lunga kaise inko bejna hai.
Mohini- Tum tumhe mujhe koi bhi bola mujhe jaante ho na main kon hu
Alex- Pradeep indono ko le jao yaha s main Malik ko Bansoa pahucha deta hu.
Pradeep- pr tum...
Alex- Chinta mat karo main jaanta hu mujhe kya krna hai tum jao aur haa Earth p jitne bhi hamare saathi hai sabko aagah kr dena waqt aane walla hai taiyaariyan kare.
Pradeep- thik hai.
Main- Kon sa waqt kya bake jaa rahe ho tum saare mujhe bhi to batao.
Alex- Malik mere pith pr baith jaaiye aap.
Main- Pahle ye Malik maalik kahna band karo samjhe aur batao kon s waqt ki baat kr rahe ho tum.
Alex- Yaha pr jo shield lagi hui hai Earth k chaaro taraf ye har saal balidaan mangti hai har saal koi aisa jo jaadu janta ho jo iss pritvi ka naa ho.
Main- Kya matlab hai tumhara balidan s aur kya yaha pr hamare jaise aur bhi hai pr baba n to bola tha k saare..
Alex- Haa saare bure log jaa chuke hai unke hisab s ye planet hi bekar ho gaya hai.
Iss baat ka pata jab sabko laga to dhire dhire log yaha aane lage bahar s yaha aane lage pr sirf wahi log uss shield ko paar kar paaye jo pure soul the jinme raati bhar bhi burayi nhi thi.Wo saare log hum sabhi k contact m aaye aur humne unhe yaha rahne ki ijjajat de di pr ek condition bhi lagayi k unme s kisi ek ko har saal khud ka balidan dena hoga taaki shield chalti rahe.
Main- ye ye to bahut bura hai
Alex- Bas yahi ek rasta tha hamare paas.
Main- Ek baat batao wo jo Aadmi aaya tha wo kon tha.
Alex-hmm wo main bad m bataunga tumhe abhi der ho rahi hai chalo baith jao.
Maine phir pucha pr wo kuch bhi nhi bola.
Hum dono hi phir nikal chale Bansoa k liye.

Chaliye chalte hai hum Aagni danav k paas uske planet pr.

Yaha p abhi wo agnidanav behosh pada tha aur uske paas hi baitha tha koi aadmi.
Kuch der m agnidanav ko hosh aa jaata hai. Wo uth kr turant hi uss aadmi k kadmo m ja girta hai.
Agnidanav- Maalik ye ye aapne kya kr diya malik main main aisa kaise ban gaya maalik mujhe fir s thik kr de malik thik kr de mujhe meri shakti wapas kr de malik.
Aadmi n usko apne pairo s dhaka de diya.
Aadmi- Hu hu hu ye to vardaan hai tumhare liye vardaan main tumhe mukt krta hu meri gulami s jao.
Ye sun ek pal to agnidanav k khusi ki koi seema hi nhirahi pr jab usse kuch yaad aaya wo jam sa gaya dar k maare aur khud hi apni talwar nikal apne garden p chala diya.
Aadmi- Chalo acha hai mujhe apne haath gande nhi krne pade pr mazza nhi aaya mujhe.
Itne m ek awaj aayi.
"Maar diya na usse chalo ab wapas aa jao mere paas"
Aadmi- Ji abhi aaya master
 

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Woh aadmi tha kaun jisne shaurya ko elf mein tabdeel kiya? Woh jai aur neelam ko kaise jaanta hai? Kya jay aur neelam bhi koi saadhaaran insaan nahin hain? Dekhte hain bansoa mein kya kaand karta hai shaurya!
Yeh agni daanav aur yeh anjaan aadmi kahin marcuss ke ghulaam toh nahin na?
 
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