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Fantasy Saurya - ek youdha (Completed)

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Hi friend maine xforum pr kafi stories padi hai aur ab mai bhi apni ek story post karne ja raha hu ab jyada wakt na lete huye
story p chalte h jaise jaise log milte rahenge unke bare m batata jaunga .
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Awesome fabulous update
Shaurya ab University main study karega ga magic ka
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UPDATE - 40

Ab tak
Mohini kappa k saath mil kar baaki sabko dhundne m lagi hui thi aur main Pradeep k saath Alex apne dragon jo ki dragon world ka rajkumar tha usse mila aur saath hi dono n mujhe Maarcuss k saath hui yudh k baare m bataya.

Aage

Alex- Aur badla lene k liye pahle aapko apni magical training leni hogi saath hi main physical training bhi.
Main- Physical training to maine le li thi Baba s.
Alex- Pradeep tum bura mat maanna pr sayad tum dono ko hi nhi pata k Baba ko fighting ka bas thoda sa hi gyan tha aur Malik jisse aap badla lene wale ho wo wo fighting m nipurn hai uske samne koi bhi nhi tikta tha aur ab to wo aur bhi balwan ho lauta hoga.
Pradeep- ALEX tum kiski taraf ho hamare ya uski.
Alex- Maine to bas sach bola tha aur waise bhi jaha hum jaa rahe hai waha tumhe pata chal hi jayega.
Main- kaha jaa rahe hai hum.
Alex - Bansao planet pr jaha universe ki sabse badi jaadu aur weapon arts ki University hai. (Mere s) Maalik pr usse pahle aapko apna ye huliya badlna hoga.
Pradeep- Haa Saurya ruko bas wo aata hi hoga.
Main- Kon aa raha hai.
Alex- Malik dhariya rakhna shikho waha aapko iski badi jarurat padegi.
Thodi hi der m ek Mota sa Aadmi aa jata hai hamare paas jo kuch ajeeb tha.
Aadmi- Bolo kisko kya krana hai.
Alex- Mere malik ko Bansao planet jaana hai tum samajh rahe ho na.
Aadmi(Kutil muskan k saath)- ek oor mauka iss baar to unki suraksha praniali ko dhokha de k hi rahunga bada ghamand hai na unko.(Mere s)
Tum chalo mere saath (Alex s) Dost bahut bahut shukriya fir s mauka dene ka.
Alex- Koi baat nhi ab jao aur haa in sab k baare m kisi ko bhi pata na chale warna Malik khatre m pad sakte hai.
Main- ye kya ho raha hai koi mujhe bhi to batao.
Aadmi- Tum ladke banoge ya ladki ye batao pahle.
Main- Arre ye kisa sawal hai main ladka hu to ladka hi rahunga na.
Aadmi- Arre nhi dost wo kya hai na waha ladkiyon ko jyada attention milta hai bas issi liye puch liya. Chalo koi baat nhi ladka hi bana denge chalo mere saath.
Itna bol usne mera haath pakda aur hum dono hi gayab ho gaye aur pahuch gaye ek ajeeb s jagah pr.
Aadmi- Haa to dost welcome hai tumhara mere is lab mai.
Main- Ye lab hai pr yaha to kuch...
Aadmi-Tum sach m kya Mother Elika k wansaj ho ya kisi n bas ullu bana diya tumhe batao.Tumhe magic k m k baare m bhi kuch nhi pata.
Main- Yaar mujhe bhi aaj hi pata chala hai aur jisne bataya uspe mujhe khud s bhi jyada bharosha hai.
Aadmi- koi nahi main hu na acha ek sawal agar tumhe mauka diya jaaye universe k kisi bhi prajati k logo jaisa banne ka to tum kon sa chunoge insan ka chod kr bolna.
Main- Mujhe naa elf bade aache lagte the unke wo lambe lambe kaan unki wo green skin aur....aaaahhh ye kyu kiya.
Aadmi- Arre ye lo isse pi lo.
Main- Ye kya hai aur isme mera baal q milaya.
Aadmi- Tum bahut bolte ho yaar chup chap pilo ab isse mujhe ghar bhi jaana hai.
Maine wo glass khatam kr liya. Kya batau kitna ajeeb test tha uska.
Aadmi- Yaha ulti mat krna samjhe warna tumhe hi saaf krna hoga. Ye lo is goli ko nigal jao muh ka swad badal jaayega.
Maine jhat s uske haath s wo goli li aur usko nigal liya.
Salla goli aur kadvi thi aab to mujhse control hi nhi ho raha tha.
Aadmi-ab baas ye paani hai Bansoa ka isse pi lo fir koi bhi jaadu tumhe apne roop m nahi laa sakta.
Maine paani sunna to jhat s uske haath s glass liya aur usse pi gaya. Paani nhi ye to sharbat tha bhai bilkul mitha.
Main- To kya main elf banuga.
Aadmi- Haa thodi hi der m tum elf ban jaoge.Waise tum sach m usse haara doge na.

Main- kiski baat kr rahe ho Maarcuss ki kya.
Aadmi - Haa ussi ki.
Main- Dost main apni puri takat laga dunga uske liye tumhe sayad pata nhi ki maine uske wajah s kya kya khoya hai.
Aadmi(thoda muskura kr)- hmm sayad mujhe nhi pata. Ek baat batao Jay aur Nilam kaise hai.
Main- Ache hai unhe kya hona hai... Ek minute tum unn dono ko kaise jaante ho.
Aadmi- Bas aise hi hum dost hua krte the kabhi.
Abhi main kuch bolta k mujhe chakar sa aane laga aur main behosh ho gaya.Jab aakh khuli to saamne Pradeep Alex Mohini aur Kappa the.
Mohini- Ye to bahut cute lag raha hai isse to main...
Kappa- Saurya hai wo koi elf nhi jiska khoon pine ko khudi jaa rahi ho aap.
Pradeep- Mohini tum sayad apna control khoti jaa rahi ho tumhe khud p kaabu pana hoga aaj s hi dhyaan lagana shuru kr do.
Mohini(muh banate hue)- Thik hai thik hai. Haa ek baat puchni thi aapse wo Kaapa bol tu.
Kappa- Wo Pradeep bhai wo ye Didi bol rahi thi k wo kya wo mujrimon ka khoon pi sakti hai.
Mohini- Puri baat batao kappa.
Kappa- wo Didi bol rahi thi k hum dono mil kr mujrimon ko uda lenge matlab Didi ji unka khoon aur main baaki sab usse jurm bhi kam ho jaana hai na
Main-Tum dono k dono hi pagal ho gaye ho kya kaisi baate kr rahe ho.
Mohini- Tum to bolo mat dekha tha maine wo Daayan wala kaand jo tumne kiya tha. Aur hum ye koi aapne liye nhi krenge samjhe hum to bas pritvi s bure insano ko hatana chahte hai.

Pradeep- Haa haa pata hai mujhe kon kya krna chahta hai. Mohini hmmm din m bas ek manjur hai.
Mohini- Accha to din m ek fir raat m ek haa kam hai pr kaam chala lenge hum dono.
Pradeep- Main pure din m ek ki baat kr raha hu samjhe tum dono aur wo bhi mujhse cross check krwa kr.
Main- Kya bol rahe ho tum.
Pradeep- Kya arre bhai isse inhe shakti milti hai aur main to kahta hu dono ko na RAW m daal dete hai waha pr mujhse cross cheak bhi nhi krwana hoga.
MOhini- Haa ye sahi hoga chalo kappa hum abhi chalte hai Pradeep bhai hamara intezam kr do.
Main- Kya tum log paagal ho gaye ho RAW ki baat kr rahe ho tum sab RAW ki waha koi bhi aise hi muh uthaye nhi chala jaata.
Pradeep- Tu chup kr samjha arre main hu na main dekh lunga kaise inko bejna hai.
Mohini- Tum tumhe mujhe koi bhi bola mujhe jaante ho na main kon hu
Alex- Pradeep indono ko le jao yaha s main Malik ko Bansoa pahucha deta hu.
Pradeep- pr tum...
Alex- Chinta mat karo main jaanta hu mujhe kya krna hai tum jao aur haa Earth p jitne bhi hamare saathi hai sabko aagah kr dena waqt aane walla hai taiyaariyan kare.
Pradeep- thik hai.
Main- Kon sa waqt kya bake jaa rahe ho tum saare mujhe bhi to batao.
Alex- Malik mere pith pr baith jaaiye aap.
Main- Pahle ye Malik maalik kahna band karo samjhe aur batao kon s waqt ki baat kr rahe ho tum.
Alex- Yaha pr jo shield lagi hui hai Earth k chaaro taraf ye har saal balidaan mangti hai har saal koi aisa jo jaadu janta ho jo iss pritvi ka naa ho.
Main- Kya matlab hai tumhara balidan s aur kya yaha pr hamare jaise aur bhi hai pr baba n to bola tha k saare..
Alex- Haa saare bure log jaa chuke hai unke hisab s ye planet hi bekar ho gaya hai.
Iss baat ka pata jab sabko laga to dhire dhire log yaha aane lage bahar s yaha aane lage pr sirf wahi log uss shield ko paar kar paaye jo pure soul the jinme raati bhar bhi burayi nhi thi.Wo saare log hum sabhi k contact m aaye aur humne unhe yaha rahne ki ijjajat de di pr ek condition bhi lagayi k unme s kisi ek ko har saal khud ka balidan dena hoga taaki shield chalti rahe.
Main- ye ye to bahut bura hai
Alex- Bas yahi ek rasta tha hamare paas.
Main- Ek baat batao wo jo Aadmi aaya tha wo kon tha.
Alex-hmm wo main bad m bataunga tumhe abhi der ho rahi hai chalo baith jao.
Maine phir pucha pr wo kuch bhi nhi bola.
Hum dono hi phir nikal chale Bansoa k liye.

Chaliye chalte hai hum Aagni danav k paas uske planet pr.

Yaha p abhi wo agnidanav behosh pada tha aur uske paas hi baitha tha koi aadmi.
Kuch der m agnidanav ko hosh aa jaata hai. Wo uth kr turant hi uss aadmi k kadmo m ja girta hai.
Agnidanav- Maalik ye ye aapne kya kr diya malik main main aisa kaise ban gaya maalik mujhe fir s thik kr de malik thik kr de mujhe meri shakti wapas kr de malik.
Aadmi n usko apne pairo s dhaka de diya.
Aadmi- Hu hu hu ye to vardaan hai tumhare liye vardaan main tumhe mukt krta hu meri gulami s jao.
Ye sun ek pal to agnidanav k khusi ki koi seema hi nhirahi pr jab usse kuch yaad aaya wo jam sa gaya dar k maare aur khud hi apni talwar nikal apne garden p chala diya.
Aadmi- Chalo acha hai mujhe apne haath gande nhi krne pade pr mazza nhi aaya mujhe.
Itne m ek awaj aayi.
"Maar diya na usse chalo ab wapas aa jao mere paas"
Aadmi- Ji abhi aaya master
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Awesome fabulous update
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Thanks bhai
Haa ab wo jayega Bansoa aur Earth p rah kr Kappa uski jagah collage jayega aur Mohini k saath mil kr wo baakion ko dhundega.
Ab kahani dono taraf hi chalti rahegi .
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