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Fantasy Saurya - ek youdha (Completed)

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Hi friend maine xforum pr kafi stories padi hai aur ab mai bhi apni ek story post karne ja raha hu ab jyada wakt na lete huye
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Main Bansoa pahuch gaya aur mere saath tha wo aadmi jisne Agnidanav ko maara tha wo mujhse mere baare m puche jaa raha tha hum dono hi uske baagi p baith nikal gaye University k oor.

Aage

Baggi m wo kuch bhi bol nhi raha tha bas mujhe ghure jaa raha tha jaise pahchan ne ki kosis kr raha ho.
Main to bas bahar k nazaron ko dekhe jaa raha tha bada hi aacha nazara tha yaha ka har taraf rang birange ped paudhe lage hue the aur unpe ajeeb s pr bade pyaare jiv baitge the.
Thodi hi der m hum pahuch gaye university k main gate k paas aab mujhe thoda sa dar lagne laga k kahi main pakda gaya to itne m wo aadmi bola.
Aadmi-Chalo nanhe dost dekhte hai kaha tak jaate ho tum
Saayad usse sak ho gaya tha mujhpe aur ye baat kaafi thi meri faadne ki. Maine uski oor dekha to wo bas muskurate hue chala gaya waha s ander.
Saare new students ek line m lage hue the main bhi darte hue ussi line m jaa laga. Yaha s inka sequrity check shuru hota tha idhar hamare bags ko achhe s cheak kiya jaata tha aur hamara pahachan patr manga jaata tha.
Abhi main dekh hi raha tha k ik student k pahachan patr m kuch gadbad nikal aayi aur fir usko pakad kr le gaye mere aage wala ladka pata nhi kis prajati ka tha wo bola.
Ladka- Iski to aaj ache s lagni hai maine sunna h yaha p pakde jaane walo ko Daanavo ko de diya jaata hai.
Sabhi line m khade log usse dekhne lage.
Dhire dhire line aage badhti rahi fir aaya mera no. gate k bagal m hi ek board laga hua tha usme prajati k type aur unke colours likhe hue the guards k madad k liye. Maine dekha k elf ka colour green hota hai. Main dhire dhire aage badhne laga aur bas yahi maana raha tha k main yaha s paar ho jaun.
Main gate p pahucha aur fir kya tha gate k colours change hone lage par wo ruk hi nahi raha tha matlab kabhi red kabhi green kabhi blue bas aise hi rang badalte chala jaa raha tha. Jisse dekh guards karib aane lage mere unhe laga hoga k ye galat hai. Ab wo jaise hi mere paas pahuche gate ka colour green ho gaya. Guards n ek baar meri taraf dekha.
Guard1- Aisa to pahle nhi hua kabhi gate to turant hi bata deti hai colour to phir...
Guard2- Haa sahi kaha pr ab to gate sahi colour hi dikha rahi hai na fir kya kare.
Guard1- Kya kisi professor s baat kare iske baare m sayad ho kuch....arey wo dekho professor Henry idher hi khade hai jao unse puch kr aawo.
Guard2 chala gaya professor Henry k paas aur unko saari baate batai aur meri oor ishara kr mujhe dikhaya. wo meri oor chal pade.
Henry- Arre nanhe dost kya baat hai tum fir mil gaye. (guards s) Jaane do ishe ye sahi hai isme koi problem nhi hai.
Guard1- yes professor.
Henry- Haa to nanhe dost chalo aao mere saath kuch baate ho jaaye aur main tumhe univesity bhi ghuma dunga.
Main kuch bolta usse pahle hi ek guard bol pada
Guard2- Sir ye chala jaayega aap q bekar m.
Henry(gusse m)- Tum meri fikr na karo wahi acha hai apne kaam s kaam rakho(mere s pyar s) ha to nanhe dost chale kya hum dono,samaan yahi chod do ye pahucha denge unhe.
Main naa bolna to chahta tha pr fir laga k ye mujhe iss university k baare m sab bata dega bas mujhe isse acche s baat karni hai waise bhi proffesor hai ye yaha ka.
Main- Haa chalo pr mera naam Saurya hai to mujhe wahi balaye ye nanha dost avha nhi lagta.
Henry(hasta hua)- Ha ha bilkul ab Saurya hi bulaunga to chale.
Fir hum dono hi jaane lage.
Wo thodi thodi der pr meri oor dekhta rahta jab mujhse raha nhi gaya to maine puch liya.
Main- Aap aise mujhe q dekh rahe ho baar baar koi problem hai kya.
Henry- Hmmm saayad pata nhi q pr tumhari ye aakhen kisi elf ki tarah nhi lagti aur ye jiski tarah lagti hai wo ab rahi nhi.
Main- Kya matlab hai aapka main kuch samjha nhi.
Henry- Chalo tumhe kuch dikhata hu sayad samjh jaao.
Fir wo mujhe administrative block m le gaya wahi pr ek wall pr bahut saare photos pade the kuch students ki group photos thi to kuch teachers ki aur waise hi bahut saari.
Henry(ek k taraf ishara kr)- isme s kisi ko jaante ho tum.
Maine pahle gaur s dekha phir.
Main- Nahi q kya hai inme.
Henry- kuch nhi sayad koi gatli hui hai mujhse.
Main- kya galti.
Henry - Baad m bataunga dost abhi mujhe jaana hai kisi k paas tum jao apne room m.
Itna bol wo chala gaya.
Main- Arre pr mera room hai kaha.(pr usne sunna hi nhi.)
Main bhi aise hi badbadate hue waha s chal pada bahar ki oor.

Chaliye dekhte hai ye Henry ji kaha jaa rahe hai.
Henry(khud s)- Maine jab s uss elf ladke ko dekha tabhi s lag raha tha ye wahi hai pr wo to gate bhi paar kr aaya matlab wo elf to hai aur agar wo elf hai to wo nahi ho sakta pr uski wo aakhen wo to elf ki nhi lagti wo to........ jaisi thi saayad mujhe Master s baat krni chahiye uske baare m khaash ye wahi ho.
Wo ye sab sochte hue Headmaster k office k darwaje pr pahuch gaya.
Darwaja khud hi khul gaya.
Headmaster- Haa to khatam kr diya usse bhi.
Henry- Aur kya krta wo gaddari p utar aaya tha wo Maarcuss k senna m jaane wala tha to maine pahle hi usse maar diya.
Headmaster- Chalo koi nahi pr ek aur buri khabar aayi hai.
Henry- Kya ab kya ho gaya pata nhi ye kab khatam hoga.
Headmaster- Daityalok aur saath hi vetal lok dono hi uss Maarcuss k saath ho gaye hai.
Henry- Master ye buri khabar mujhe kya sabhi ko pata hi thi sab jaante the k ye log fir s uske saath ho hi jaayenge ab hame bhi apni seena taiyaar rakhni hogi.
HeadMaster- Hmm sahi kaha pr ek baat aur hai iss baar Maarcuss n yaha university m apne kuch log bheje hai jasusi k liye shayad unhe pata chal gaya hai hamara.
Henry- Hmm main bhi aapse kuch baat krna chahta tha wo maine kisi ko dekha hai jiski aakhen bilkul........ jaisi hai pr wo ek elf hai aur gate n bhi usse jaane diya.
Headmaster- Saayad koi ittefak ho waise bhi hum to jaante hi hai k gate kabhi galat nhi hota.
Henry- haa pr uski aakhen wo to...
Headmaster- Tum thake hue ho jao aaram karo aaj sham prograam bhi hai naye students k liye unhe unka group jo dena hai.
Henry- ji master main jaata hu.
Itna bol nikal gaya wo waha s aur bahar aate hi fir s saurya k baare m sochne laga.

Chaliye inko yahi chodte hai aur hum Earth p chalte hai jaha hamari khun ki pyaasi Mohini hai.
Aaj Pradeep Mohini ko Madavpur le jaa raha hai usse apni dost ki beti banaa kr (18 saal ka age gap).
Mohini- Bhai main maa s kaise milungi wo to mujhe pahchane gi bhi nhi.
Pradeep- Dekh main na tujhe waha apne dost ki beti kah kr introduce krwaunga samjhi fir tujhe hi waha apni ek pahchan banani hogi.
Mohini- Thik hai bhai...Arre haa ek baat to batao aapne shadi kr li kya yaha pr.
Pradeep-(sad sa face banna) Haa krni hi padi sabhi n pareshan kr diya tha kya kya nhi kiya inn logo n meri shadi k chakar m to mujhe bhi krni hi padi.
Mohini- ooh to qapne kisi inshan s ki ya koi aur matlab bahar s koi.
Pradeep- Insan hi thi pr aab wo badal gayi hai.
Mohini- kya matlab badal gayi hai.
Pradeep- Dekh tujhe pata hai agar koi hum jaisa magical creature kisi non magical creature like insan k saath sambandh m aata hai to dhire dhire wo non magical creature bhi magical hone lag jaata hai aur uske paas bhi powers aa jaaki hai.
Mohini- Nahi mujhe to pata nhi iske baare m maine kabhi aisa kuch nhi sunna.
Pradeep- Hmmm chal tujhe m earth k bhasa m samjhata hu dekh agar ek lohe k tukde ko hum kisi chumbak k saath rakh dete hai to wo lohe ka tukda bhi to waqt k saath chumbak jaisa ho jaata hai thik waise hi.
Mohini- Accha aisa hai prr ek baat batao fir aapne bhabhi ko control krna kaise shikhaya.
Pradeep(sad sa)- Nhi shikha paa raha naa. Ab tum log hi usse shikhao wo to pagal ho gayi hai pata hai tumhe usko 12 saal pahle shaktiyan mili maine aur Alex n miil kr unko daba diya pr pata nhi usse kya shujha wo yog shadhana karne lagi aur fir uski saari saktiyan jaag gayi hai pr control hota nhi usse.
Mohini- Achha unko inn sab k baare m fir kya bataya aapne.
Pradeep- Maine usse kuch bhi nhi bataya wo khud hi sab jaan jaati hai koi bhi koi bhi magical creature yaha tak tum bhi usse bach nhi paaogi wo sabke dimag ko padh sakti hai har kisi k bas ussi s usko sab pata chal gaya .
Mohini- Achha pr unhone react kaise kiya tha.
pradeep- Arre wo pareshan hone k jagah ulta khush ho gayi thi wo Harry porter k adi fan hai aur uski icha bhi thi k wo ek magician ban jaaye aur ye ho bhi gaya pr haa maine usse iske baare m kisi ko bhi batane s manna kiya hai.
Mohini-Ek baat batao maine jab aapse shadi k baare m pucha to aap udas q ho gaye.
Pradeep- Arre wo usse na tum logo k baare m bhi pata chal gaya tha aur wo tumse milna bhi chahti thi aur maine manaa kr diya mujhe kaha pata tha k mujhe tumhe yaha lana hoga bas fir ho gayi ladayi.
Mohini- Achha kiya bhabhi n bahut sahi hai wo arre unka naam to bataya hi nhi naa apne kya naam hai unka.
Pradeep- Kiran(ye hai apni RAW wali kiran jo ab waha ache s post pr hai aur issi k kaaran pradeep n turant hi Kappa ki training shuru karwa di)
Mohini-Hmm Acha naam hai chalo ab unse hii aap dono k baare m baat karungi.

Chaliye inko chod aaj hum apne Maarcuss bhaiya k paas chalte hai.

Ek bada sa mehal tha tuta hua darawna saa jaaha din k ujale m bhi roshni jaane s darti thi har waqt andhera rahta tha waha aur ussi andhere k saath rahta tha hamara Maarcuss jo badi hi khush tha yaha ho bhi q naa usko aadadi mil gayi uski aadhi s jyada taakaten wapas mill gayi jo usko maarne wala tha wo maar gaya aur kya chahiye tha usse haa wo ladkiyan bhi hamesha mil jaati thi usko unko bogne k liye aur baad m khaane k bhi kaam aa jaati thi uske.
Abhi tak Universe k lagbhag saare black creatures aur kuch white creatures ko bhi milla chuka tha wo khud s aur aage kaise kisko maarna hai ye sochta rahta tha.
Aaj ussi andher mahal m ek meeting chal rahi thi jisme uske saare gulam loko k raaja aaye hue the wo saare kisi bade yudh ki ranneeti bana rahe the k tabhi koi bolta hai hai .
A1- Hey Maharajaon k Maharaj Maarcuss aapke kahe anusar hamne Bansoa m apne jaasus bhej diye hai pr unme s do pakde gaye aur unhe wahi k daanavo ko de diya gaya hai
Maarcuss- (muskura kr) chalo abb ek hi baar m saare loko pr kabja hoga.
A3- pr kaise maharaj waha s kya hoga.
Maarcuss- Tum sabhi ko pata to hoga hi naa k waha pr saare loko k raj kumar rajkumari jaate hai saath hi sabhi loko k bade bade logo k bache bhi to agar hum unhe ..haahaahaaha..samjhe na.Ab batao A3 tumhara kya karu
Sabhi bas A3 k oor dekh rahe the aur wo bas ye soch raha tha k kaise uske muh s ye sawal nikal gaya.
A3 n apna haath aage kiya aur apni talwar s usko kaath daala fir jo khun uska nikalne laga wo ek katore m daala aur usko Maarcuss ki oor sarka diya.
Maarcuss- Hmm ye sahi socha tumne pr tum bhul gaye saayad k Maarcuss ko gardan s nikla khun pasand hai to kya bolte ho main kuch....
Abhi Maarcuss kuch bolta usse pahle hi A3 n apni gardan uda di aur Maarcus k katore m khun chala gaya thoda sa.Fir Maarcuss n bade Chao s wo khun pii liys.
Maarcuss- kisi ko aur bhi kuch puchna hai kya to puch le.
koi kuch bhi nhi bola sab chup baithe the sabko pahle s hi pata hota hai Maarcuss s sawal puchne kaa matlab hua Maut aur koi bhi wo nhi chahta tha.
Marcuss- Koi nhi chalo achi baat hai, Vetal raj aapko ek kaam deta hu kuch log hai abhi bhi jo ye dikhane ki kosis m hai k Elika ka wansaj jinda hai mujhe wo chahiye jaha kahi bhi ho wo.
Itna bol wo waha s gaayab ho chala gaya aur dhire dhire saare log bhi chale gaye.

Chaliye hum bhi chalte hai wapas Bansoa:-
Hero k pass

Main abhi ghum ghum kr dekh raha tha puri jagah ko har chiz ko q ki sab kuch naya naya sa tha yaha aaj tak maine bas Pariyon aur Jinno ko hi to dekha tha haa aur bhi the kuch vetal daanav wo saare pr kabhi sabhi ko ek saath ek jagah pr nhi dekha tha.
Yaha saare prajati k log ek saath the kisi ki naak labhi kisi k kaan lambe kisi ka puch too kisi ka kuch aur bahut kuch tha dekhne ko yaha.
Abhi main yahi sab kr raha tha k ek billi jaisa dikhne wala ladka aaya mere pas.
Ladka- Elf tujhe raj kumar bulla rahe hai.
Main- kon bulla raha hai.
Ladka(ek oor ishara kr)- Raj kumar bulla rahe hai.
Maine jaise hi uss Raj kumar ko dekha wahi jameen pr gir gaya haste haste wo dikh hi aisa raha tha uska sar Frog jaisa tha aur uska sarir kisi moote aadmi jaisa.
Mujhe hasta dekh saayad usse gussa aa gaya aur wo aa gaya meri oor aur shidhe apni talwar mere oor kr bola.
Ladka(frog wala)- Tu tu mujhe dekh has raha tha mujhe dekh aree elf k bachhe tunne galti kar di.Tu janta hai main Ronit hu ronit Prince of Daitya lok
Main(khada hote)- Sorry dost pr wo tumhaa hahaha haa haa sorry.
Ronit- Aaj tu nhi bachega elf aaj tujhe kacha chaba jaunga chal apni talwar nikal aur lad mujhse main tumhe chunauti deta hu.
Main- Dost main yaha ladne nhi aaya hu.
Itne m Benry waha aa gaya bhid ko dekh usne bhi cunauti wali baat sun li thi.
Henry- Nanhe dost.. Saurya tumhe isse ladna hi hoga ye iss university ka rule hai agar koi aapko challenge kare to apko usse accept karna hi hoga agar nhi kiya to aap uske gulam ho jaoge. Haarne pr aapke points jo saare students k hote hai unko kaat diya jayega aur agar jite to aapko points milega saath hi uss challenge karne waale ko aapki koi bhi ek baat manni hogi samjhe.
Maine haa m sar hilla diya.
Ab manna to kr nhi sakta tha q ki iss mendhak jaise ladka ka gulam banna kabhi nhi.
Main- Thik hai pr kya yahi p ladna hai.
Ronit- Haa elf.
Main-(sochne laga) Deep ko to Alex ne sulla diya aur talwar mere paas hai nhi aab kaise ladu.
Tabhi ander s aawaj aayi.
Aawaj- Q be laudu wo kappa ki talwar kya apni gaand khujane ko rakhi hai tune.
Main- ye ye kon bola.
Awaj- Kon bola kya main bola main...mera naam arre tune to mere ko naam diya hi nhi chal naam de mere ko.
Main-Tu hai kon.
Aawaj- Arre wo laudu Alex n jagaya mere ko main tere ander ka andhera bole to burayi hu pr tera dost hu yaar aapan bidu log samjha naa.Main tere ko wo sab batayega jo tujhe pata hona chahiye samjha.
Main- Haa aur ab ache s baat karo.
Aawaj- Ache s to kiya maine aur kaise karu acha wo chod pahle naam bata mujhe mera.
Main- Hmmm Black saurya tu mere andar ki burayi hai na.
Aawaj - chal thik hai kaam chala lega main.
Main- Kya kappa ki talwar yahi hai.
B.S- Haa yahi hai wo laudu to iske baare m bhul gaya tha aab sunn bulla usse aur iss mendhak s sakal wale ko ache s sabak shikha samjha kya.
Ronit- Kya hua Elf kya soch raha hai.
Main- soch raha hu tujhse kya karau tujhe harane k baad.
Ronit- Teri too(itna bol wo meri oor daud pada).
Main(maan m)-Sword of kappa

Mere haath m aa gayi wo talwar aur maine usse bas ek dhire s war kiya yaa kahu block kiya uss ronit ko aur uss bechare ki talwar hi tut gayi.
Sabhi log pahle to mere yu talwal laane s hairan the fir uss talwar ko dekh hairan hue(jo jaante the usse) aur fir Ronit k talwar tutne s aur bhi jyada hairan.
Ronit pahle to dang rah gaya aisa hote dekh lekin fir mujhe muskurate dekh gussa ho gaya.
Ronit- Tumne ye talwar to tod di pr aab bach nhi paayoge.
Usne pani aakhen band ki aur kuch budbudaya aur uske haath m ek kaali talwar aa gayi.
B.S- waah beta pahle din hi black sword apni ho jaani hai sunn kappa k talwar s light chod uss mendhak s sakal wale k aakhon m uska dhyan tut jayega fir tu hamla kr uspe aur haa harane k baad usse yahi Black sword manga samjha na.
Main- haa.
Fir kya tha maine thik waise hi kiya wo black sword liye daud pada meri oor aur maine pahle to uski aakhon m roshni daali talwar s jisse usse dikhna band ho gaya kuch der k liye aur ussi waqt maine uspe hamla kar diya jisse wo gir pada aur maine apni talwar uske gale p laga di.
Usne bhi jab ye mehsus kiya to wo bhi haar maan liya.
Waha khade saare log bas mujhe ghure jaa rahe the kisi ko samajh m nhi aa raha tha kaise react kare.
Main- Haa to Ronit main jeet gaya aur ab tumhe meri ek baat manni hogi niyam k anusar hai na(muskurate hue).
Ronit(gusse m)- haa bolo kya chahiye tumhe.
Main-(Black Sword ki oor ishara kr) wo talwar.
Mera itna kahna tha k uske rang hi udd gaye pr phir usne jo kiya agar Henry bich m nahi aata to main usse wahi pr maar deta.
Wo sword ko utha kuch bola aur ek kutil muskan k saath meri oor daud laga di main bhi usse aisa karte dekh chaukana ho gaya. Usne uss sword s koi ray chodi jo meri oor aa rahi thi
Mujhe bada gussa aaya k jab ye salla haar gaya to isse to chup chap de deni thi naa sword phir ye aisa q kr raha hai.
B.S- Oo teri bhai apni talwar aage kar aur fire bol jaldi.
Maine waisa hi kiya aur Kappa ki talwar aag ugalne lagi aur wo aag jaa lagi Ronit k pairon m aur uss ray pr bhi jo usne chodi thi.
Wo jalne laga aag ki lapton s wo chilla raha tha pr mera gussa control hi nhi hua.
Uske kapde aadhe jal chuke the kuch hi der m aur Black Sword bhi uske haat s chut kr gir gayi thi.
B.S- Chal bula uss sword ko jor s chilla black sword samjha.
Main(chilla kr)- Black Sword
Wo talwar waha s gayab ho mere pass aa gayi mere dono haato m ek ek talwar thi.
Uss Black sword k aane s pata nhi kaise mera gussa kai gunna badh gaya aur maine dono talwar liye Ronit jo k jal raha tha usko maarne daud pada.
Pr Henry bich m aa gaya aur apne magic s mujhe behosh kr diya saath hi uss Mendhak s sakal wale ko bhi.
Behosh hote hi main pahuch gaya kahi aur aur mere saamne khada tha main khud hi.
Main- Main kaha hu aur wo Ronit kaha gaya usse to mai...
B.s- Oo bhai saant hoja yaar tu pahle baith yaha dhyaan m aur control kr uss black sword ko dhund usse apne ander samjha aur jab tk ye hoo na jaata tu hosh m nhi aayega.
Main- nhi pahle mujhe usko maarna hai fir hi kuch aur karunga.
B.S- Dekh bhai baat maan jab tk tu usse control nhi krta tab tk tu Ronit ka kuch nhi kr sakta q ki tu to behosh hoga to chup chap baith jaa idhar dhyan m.
Maine thodi naa nukur aur ki to B.S n mujhe samjha bujha kr bitha diya Dhyan m.
Badi muskil hui iss Black Sword ko kaabu krne m pr aakhir m maine usse kr hi liya mujhe 2 din lag gaye the isme aur main 2 din s behosh pada tha wahi University k hospital m iss baat s anjan k meri wajah s waha kya kya raita fail gaya hai.

Wahi 7 dino m Mohini ji badi achi dost ban gayi thi Kiran ki aur kiran ko shikha bhi rahi thi apne powers ko ache s control krna usne waha k logo s ghulne milne ki kosis bhi ki jaise m Tiya Tanya Saifali aur baakiyon s aur kuch had tak usme kaamiyab bhi rahi pr wo inn do dino m Alka s baat nhi kr paayi thi q k wo kisi s naa to jyada baat krti thi aur naa hi milna pasand krti thi aur ye sab dekh Mohini ko dukh bhi hua tha.

Note- Har jagah ka apna time period hai.

Agle update m dekhte hai kya hua university m Saurya k behosh hone k baad inn 2 dino m
Mast update h Bhai
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UPDATE-42

Ab Tak
Main Bansoa pahuch gaya aur mere saath tha wo aadmi jisne Agnidanav ko maara tha wo mujhse mere baare m puche jaa raha tha hum dono hi uske baagi p baith nikal gaye University k oor.

Aage

Baggi m wo kuch bhi bol nhi raha tha bas mujhe ghure jaa raha tha jaise pahchan ne ki kosis kr raha ho.
Main to bas bahar k nazaron ko dekhe jaa raha tha bada hi aacha nazara tha yaha ka har taraf rang birange ped paudhe lage hue the aur unpe ajeeb s pr bade pyaare jiv baitge the.
Thodi hi der m hum pahuch gaye university k main gate k paas aab mujhe thoda sa dar lagne laga k kahi main pakda gaya to itne m wo aadmi bola.
Aadmi-Chalo nanhe dost dekhte hai kaha tak jaate ho tum
Saayad usse sak ho gaya tha mujhpe aur ye baat kaafi thi meri faadne ki. Maine uski oor dekha to wo bas muskurate hue chala gaya waha s ander.
Saare new students ek line m lage hue the main bhi darte hue ussi line m jaa laga. Yaha s inka sequrity check shuru hota tha idhar hamare bags ko achhe s cheak kiya jaata tha aur hamara pahachan patr manga jaata tha.
Abhi main dekh hi raha tha k ik student k pahachan patr m kuch gadbad nikal aayi aur fir usko pakad kr le gaye mere aage wala ladka pata nhi kis prajati ka tha wo bola.
Ladka- Iski to aaj ache s lagni hai maine sunna h yaha p pakde jaane walo ko Daanavo ko de diya jaata hai.
Sabhi line m khade log usse dekhne lage.
Dhire dhire line aage badhti rahi fir aaya mera no. gate k bagal m hi ek board laga hua tha usme prajati k type aur unke colours likhe hue the guards k madad k liye. Maine dekha k elf ka colour green hota hai. Main dhire dhire aage badhne laga aur bas yahi maana raha tha k main yaha s paar ho jaun.
Main gate p pahucha aur fir kya tha gate k colours change hone lage par wo ruk hi nahi raha tha matlab kabhi red kabhi green kabhi blue bas aise hi rang badalte chala jaa raha tha. Jisse dekh guards karib aane lage mere unhe laga hoga k ye galat hai. Ab wo jaise hi mere paas pahuche gate ka colour green ho gaya. Guards n ek baar meri taraf dekha.
Guard1- Aisa to pahle nhi hua kabhi gate to turant hi bata deti hai colour to phir...
Guard2- Haa sahi kaha pr ab to gate sahi colour hi dikha rahi hai na fir kya kare.
Guard1- Kya kisi professor s baat kare iske baare m sayad ho kuch....arey wo dekho professor Henry idher hi khade hai jao unse puch kr aawo.
Guard2 chala gaya professor Henry k paas aur unko saari baate batai aur meri oor ishara kr mujhe dikhaya. wo meri oor chal pade.
Henry- Arre nanhe dost kya baat hai tum fir mil gaye. (guards s) Jaane do ishe ye sahi hai isme koi problem nhi hai.
Guard1- yes professor.
Henry- Haa to nanhe dost chalo aao mere saath kuch baate ho jaaye aur main tumhe univesity bhi ghuma dunga.
Main kuch bolta usse pahle hi ek guard bol pada
Guard2- Sir ye chala jaayega aap q bekar m.
Henry(gusse m)- Tum meri fikr na karo wahi acha hai apne kaam s kaam rakho(mere s pyar s) ha to nanhe dost chale kya hum dono,samaan yahi chod do ye pahucha denge unhe.
Main naa bolna to chahta tha pr fir laga k ye mujhe iss university k baare m sab bata dega bas mujhe isse acche s baat karni hai waise bhi proffesor hai ye yaha ka.
Main- Haa chalo pr mera naam Saurya hai to mujhe wahi balaye ye nanha dost avha nhi lagta.
Henry(hasta hua)- Ha ha bilkul ab Saurya hi bulaunga to chale.
Fir hum dono hi jaane lage.
Wo thodi thodi der pr meri oor dekhta rahta jab mujhse raha nhi gaya to maine puch liya.
Main- Aap aise mujhe q dekh rahe ho baar baar koi problem hai kya.
Henry- Hmmm saayad pata nhi q pr tumhari ye aakhen kisi elf ki tarah nhi lagti aur ye jiski tarah lagti hai wo ab rahi nhi.
Main- Kya matlab hai aapka main kuch samjha nhi.
Henry- Chalo tumhe kuch dikhata hu sayad samjh jaao.
Fir wo mujhe administrative block m le gaya wahi pr ek wall pr bahut saare photos pade the kuch students ki group photos thi to kuch teachers ki aur waise hi bahut saari.
Henry(ek k taraf ishara kr)- isme s kisi ko jaante ho tum.
Maine pahle gaur s dekha phir.
Main- Nahi q kya hai inme.
Henry- kuch nhi sayad koi gatli hui hai mujhse.
Main- kya galti.
Henry - Baad m bataunga dost abhi mujhe jaana hai kisi k paas tum jao apne room m.
Itna bol wo chala gaya.
Main- Arre pr mera room hai kaha.(pr usne sunna hi nhi.)
Main bhi aise hi badbadate hue waha s chal pada bahar ki oor.

Chaliye dekhte hai ye Henry ji kaha jaa rahe hai.
Henry(khud s)- Maine jab s uss elf ladke ko dekha tabhi s lag raha tha ye wahi hai pr wo to gate bhi paar kr aaya matlab wo elf to hai aur agar wo elf hai to wo nahi ho sakta pr uski wo aakhen wo to elf ki nhi lagti wo to........ jaisi thi saayad mujhe Master s baat krni chahiye uske baare m khaash ye wahi ho.
Wo ye sab sochte hue Headmaster k office k darwaje pr pahuch gaya.
Darwaja khud hi khul gaya.
Headmaster- Haa to khatam kr diya usse bhi.
Henry- Aur kya krta wo gaddari p utar aaya tha wo Maarcuss k senna m jaane wala tha to maine pahle hi usse maar diya.
Headmaster- Chalo koi nahi pr ek aur buri khabar aayi hai.
Henry- Kya ab kya ho gaya pata nhi ye kab khatam hoga.
Headmaster- Daityalok aur saath hi vetal lok dono hi uss Maarcuss k saath ho gaye hai.
Henry- Master ye buri khabar mujhe kya sabhi ko pata hi thi sab jaante the k ye log fir s uske saath ho hi jaayenge ab hame bhi apni seena taiyaar rakhni hogi.
HeadMaster- Hmm sahi kaha pr ek baat aur hai iss baar Maarcuss n yaha university m apne kuch log bheje hai jasusi k liye shayad unhe pata chal gaya hai hamara.
Henry- Hmm main bhi aapse kuch baat krna chahta tha wo maine kisi ko dekha hai jiski aakhen bilkul........ jaisi hai pr wo ek elf hai aur gate n bhi usse jaane diya.
Headmaster- Saayad koi ittefak ho waise bhi hum to jaante hi hai k gate kabhi galat nhi hota.
Henry- haa pr uski aakhen wo to...
Headmaster- Tum thake hue ho jao aaram karo aaj sham prograam bhi hai naye students k liye unhe unka group jo dena hai.
Henry- ji master main jaata hu.
Itna bol nikal gaya wo waha s aur bahar aate hi fir s saurya k baare m sochne laga.

Chaliye inko yahi chodte hai aur hum Earth p chalte hai jaha hamari khun ki pyaasi Mohini hai.
Aaj Pradeep Mohini ko Madavpur le jaa raha hai usse apni dost ki beti banaa kr (18 saal ka age gap).
Mohini- Bhai main maa s kaise milungi wo to mujhe pahchane gi bhi nhi.
Pradeep- Dekh main na tujhe waha apne dost ki beti kah kr introduce krwaunga samjhi fir tujhe hi waha apni ek pahchan banani hogi.
Mohini- Thik hai bhai...Arre haa ek baat to batao aapne shadi kr li kya yaha pr.
Pradeep-(sad sa face banna) Haa krni hi padi sabhi n pareshan kr diya tha kya kya nhi kiya inn logo n meri shadi k chakar m to mujhe bhi krni hi padi.
Mohini- ooh to qapne kisi inshan s ki ya koi aur matlab bahar s koi.
Pradeep- Insan hi thi pr aab wo badal gayi hai.
Mohini- kya matlab badal gayi hai.
Pradeep- Dekh tujhe pata hai agar koi hum jaisa magical creature kisi non magical creature like insan k saath sambandh m aata hai to dhire dhire wo non magical creature bhi magical hone lag jaata hai aur uske paas bhi powers aa jaaki hai.
Mohini- Nahi mujhe to pata nhi iske baare m maine kabhi aisa kuch nhi sunna.
Pradeep- Hmmm chal tujhe m earth k bhasa m samjhata hu dekh agar ek lohe k tukde ko hum kisi chumbak k saath rakh dete hai to wo lohe ka tukda bhi to waqt k saath chumbak jaisa ho jaata hai thik waise hi.
Mohini- Accha aisa hai prr ek baat batao fir aapne bhabhi ko control krna kaise shikhaya.
Pradeep(sad sa)- Nhi shikha paa raha naa. Ab tum log hi usse shikhao wo to pagal ho gayi hai pata hai tumhe usko 12 saal pahle shaktiyan mili maine aur Alex n miil kr unko daba diya pr pata nhi usse kya shujha wo yog shadhana karne lagi aur fir uski saari saktiyan jaag gayi hai pr control hota nhi usse.
Mohini- Achha unko inn sab k baare m fir kya bataya aapne.
Pradeep- Maine usse kuch bhi nhi bataya wo khud hi sab jaan jaati hai koi bhi koi bhi magical creature yaha tak tum bhi usse bach nhi paaogi wo sabke dimag ko padh sakti hai har kisi k bas ussi s usko sab pata chal gaya .
Mohini- Achha pr unhone react kaise kiya tha.
pradeep- Arre wo pareshan hone k jagah ulta khush ho gayi thi wo Harry porter k adi fan hai aur uski icha bhi thi k wo ek magician ban jaaye aur ye ho bhi gaya pr haa maine usse iske baare m kisi ko bhi batane s manna kiya hai.
Mohini-Ek baat batao maine jab aapse shadi k baare m pucha to aap udas q ho gaye.
Pradeep- Arre wo usse na tum logo k baare m bhi pata chal gaya tha aur wo tumse milna bhi chahti thi aur maine manaa kr diya mujhe kaha pata tha k mujhe tumhe yaha lana hoga bas fir ho gayi ladayi.
Mohini- Achha kiya bhabhi n bahut sahi hai wo arre unka naam to bataya hi nhi naa apne kya naam hai unka.
Pradeep- Kiran(ye hai apni RAW wali kiran jo ab waha ache s post pr hai aur issi k kaaran pradeep n turant hi Kappa ki training shuru karwa di)
Mohini-Hmm Acha naam hai chalo ab unse hii aap dono k baare m baat karungi.

Chaliye inko chod aaj hum apne Maarcuss bhaiya k paas chalte hai.

Ek bada sa mehal tha tuta hua darawna saa jaaha din k ujale m bhi roshni jaane s darti thi har waqt andhera rahta tha waha aur ussi andhere k saath rahta tha hamara Maarcuss jo badi hi khush tha yaha ho bhi q naa usko aadadi mil gayi uski aadhi s jyada taakaten wapas mill gayi jo usko maarne wala tha wo maar gaya aur kya chahiye tha usse haa wo ladkiyan bhi hamesha mil jaati thi usko unko bogne k liye aur baad m khaane k bhi kaam aa jaati thi uske.
Abhi tak Universe k lagbhag saare black creatures aur kuch white creatures ko bhi milla chuka tha wo khud s aur aage kaise kisko maarna hai ye sochta rahta tha.
Aaj ussi andher mahal m ek meeting chal rahi thi jisme uske saare gulam loko k raaja aaye hue the wo saare kisi bade yudh ki ranneeti bana rahe the k tabhi koi bolta hai hai .
A1- Hey Maharajaon k Maharaj Maarcuss aapke kahe anusar hamne Bansoa m apne jaasus bhej diye hai pr unme s do pakde gaye aur unhe wahi k daanavo ko de diya gaya hai
Maarcuss- (muskura kr) chalo abb ek hi baar m saare loko pr kabja hoga.
A3- pr kaise maharaj waha s kya hoga.
Maarcuss- Tum sabhi ko pata to hoga hi naa k waha pr saare loko k raj kumar rajkumari jaate hai saath hi sabhi loko k bade bade logo k bache bhi to agar hum unhe ..haahaahaaha..samjhe na.Ab batao A3 tumhara kya karu
Sabhi bas A3 k oor dekh rahe the aur wo bas ye soch raha tha k kaise uske muh s ye sawal nikal gaya.
A3 n apna haath aage kiya aur apni talwar s usko kaath daala fir jo khun uska nikalne laga wo ek katore m daala aur usko Maarcuss ki oor sarka diya.
Maarcuss- Hmm ye sahi socha tumne pr tum bhul gaye saayad k Maarcuss ko gardan s nikla khun pasand hai to kya bolte ho main kuch....
Abhi Maarcuss kuch bolta usse pahle hi A3 n apni gardan uda di aur Maarcus k katore m khun chala gaya thoda sa.Fir Maarcuss n bade Chao s wo khun pii liys.
Maarcuss- kisi ko aur bhi kuch puchna hai kya to puch le.
koi kuch bhi nhi bola sab chup baithe the sabko pahle s hi pata hota hai Maarcuss s sawal puchne kaa matlab hua Maut aur koi bhi wo nhi chahta tha.
Marcuss- Koi nhi chalo achi baat hai, Vetal raj aapko ek kaam deta hu kuch log hai abhi bhi jo ye dikhane ki kosis m hai k Elika ka wansaj jinda hai mujhe wo chahiye jaha kahi bhi ho wo.
Itna bol wo waha s gaayab ho chala gaya aur dhire dhire saare log bhi chale gaye.

Chaliye hum bhi chalte hai wapas Bansoa:-
Hero k pass

Main abhi ghum ghum kr dekh raha tha puri jagah ko har chiz ko q ki sab kuch naya naya sa tha yaha aaj tak maine bas Pariyon aur Jinno ko hi to dekha tha haa aur bhi the kuch vetal daanav wo saare pr kabhi sabhi ko ek saath ek jagah pr nhi dekha tha.
Yaha saare prajati k log ek saath the kisi ki naak labhi kisi k kaan lambe kisi ka puch too kisi ka kuch aur bahut kuch tha dekhne ko yaha.
Abhi main yahi sab kr raha tha k ek billi jaisa dikhne wala ladka aaya mere pas.
Ladka- Elf tujhe raj kumar bulla rahe hai.
Main- kon bulla raha hai.
Ladka(ek oor ishara kr)- Raj kumar bulla rahe hai.
Maine jaise hi uss Raj kumar ko dekha wahi jameen pr gir gaya haste haste wo dikh hi aisa raha tha uska sar Frog jaisa tha aur uska sarir kisi moote aadmi jaisa.
Mujhe hasta dekh saayad usse gussa aa gaya aur wo aa gaya meri oor aur shidhe apni talwar mere oor kr bola.
Ladka(frog wala)- Tu tu mujhe dekh has raha tha mujhe dekh aree elf k bachhe tunne galti kar di.Tu janta hai main Ronit hu ronit Prince of Daitya lok
Main(khada hote)- Sorry dost pr wo tumhaa hahaha haa haa sorry.
Ronit- Aaj tu nhi bachega elf aaj tujhe kacha chaba jaunga chal apni talwar nikal aur lad mujhse main tumhe chunauti deta hu.
Main- Dost main yaha ladne nhi aaya hu.
Itne m Benry waha aa gaya bhid ko dekh usne bhi cunauti wali baat sun li thi.
Henry- Nanhe dost.. Saurya tumhe isse ladna hi hoga ye iss university ka rule hai agar koi aapko challenge kare to apko usse accept karna hi hoga agar nhi kiya to aap uske gulam ho jaoge. Haarne pr aapke points jo saare students k hote hai unko kaat diya jayega aur agar jite to aapko points milega saath hi uss challenge karne waale ko aapki koi bhi ek baat manni hogi samjhe.
Maine haa m sar hilla diya.
Ab manna to kr nhi sakta tha q ki iss mendhak jaise ladka ka gulam banna kabhi nhi.
Main- Thik hai pr kya yahi p ladna hai.
Ronit- Haa elf.
Main-(sochne laga) Deep ko to Alex ne sulla diya aur talwar mere paas hai nhi aab kaise ladu.
Tabhi ander s aawaj aayi.
Aawaj- Q be laudu wo kappa ki talwar kya apni gaand khujane ko rakhi hai tune.
Main- ye ye kon bola.
Awaj- Kon bola kya main bola main...mera naam arre tune to mere ko naam diya hi nhi chal naam de mere ko.
Main-Tu hai kon.
Aawaj- Arre wo laudu Alex n jagaya mere ko main tere ander ka andhera bole to burayi hu pr tera dost hu yaar aapan bidu log samjha naa.Main tere ko wo sab batayega jo tujhe pata hona chahiye samjha.
Main- Haa aur ab ache s baat karo.
Aawaj- Ache s to kiya maine aur kaise karu acha wo chod pahle naam bata mujhe mera.
Main- Hmmm Black saurya tu mere andar ki burayi hai na.
Aawaj - chal thik hai kaam chala lega main.
Main- Kya kappa ki talwar yahi hai.
B.S- Haa yahi hai wo laudu to iske baare m bhul gaya tha aab sunn bulla usse aur iss mendhak s sakal wale ko ache s sabak shikha samjha kya.
Ronit- Kya hua Elf kya soch raha hai.
Main- soch raha hu tujhse kya karau tujhe harane k baad.
Ronit- Teri too(itna bol wo meri oor daud pada).
Main(maan m)-Sword of kappa

Mere haath m aa gayi wo talwar aur maine usse bas ek dhire s war kiya yaa kahu block kiya uss ronit ko aur uss bechare ki talwar hi tut gayi.
Sabhi log pahle to mere yu talwal laane s hairan the fir uss talwar ko dekh hairan hue(jo jaante the usse) aur fir Ronit k talwar tutne s aur bhi jyada hairan.
Ronit pahle to dang rah gaya aisa hote dekh lekin fir mujhe muskurate dekh gussa ho gaya.
Ronit- Tumne ye talwar to tod di pr aab bach nhi paayoge.
Usne pani aakhen band ki aur kuch budbudaya aur uske haath m ek kaali talwar aa gayi.
B.S- waah beta pahle din hi black sword apni ho jaani hai sunn kappa k talwar s light chod uss mendhak s sakal wale k aakhon m uska dhyan tut jayega fir tu hamla kr uspe aur haa harane k baad usse yahi Black sword manga samjha na.
Main- haa.
Fir kya tha maine thik waise hi kiya wo black sword liye daud pada meri oor aur maine pahle to uski aakhon m roshni daali talwar s jisse usse dikhna band ho gaya kuch der k liye aur ussi waqt maine uspe hamla kar diya jisse wo gir pada aur maine apni talwar uske gale p laga di.
Usne bhi jab ye mehsus kiya to wo bhi haar maan liya.
Waha khade saare log bas mujhe ghure jaa rahe the kisi ko samajh m nhi aa raha tha kaise react kare.
Main- Haa to Ronit main jeet gaya aur ab tumhe meri ek baat manni hogi niyam k anusar hai na(muskurate hue).
Ronit(gusse m)- haa bolo kya chahiye tumhe.
Main-(Black Sword ki oor ishara kr) wo talwar.
Mera itna kahna tha k uske rang hi udd gaye pr phir usne jo kiya agar Henry bich m nahi aata to main usse wahi pr maar deta.
Wo sword ko utha kuch bola aur ek kutil muskan k saath meri oor daud laga di main bhi usse aisa karte dekh chaukana ho gaya. Usne uss sword s koi ray chodi jo meri oor aa rahi thi
Mujhe bada gussa aaya k jab ye salla haar gaya to isse to chup chap de deni thi naa sword phir ye aisa q kr raha hai.
B.S- Oo teri bhai apni talwar aage kar aur fire bol jaldi.
Maine waisa hi kiya aur Kappa ki talwar aag ugalne lagi aur wo aag jaa lagi Ronit k pairon m aur uss ray pr bhi jo usne chodi thi.
Wo jalne laga aag ki lapton s wo chilla raha tha pr mera gussa control hi nhi hua.
Uske kapde aadhe jal chuke the kuch hi der m aur Black Sword bhi uske haat s chut kr gir gayi thi.
B.S- Chal bula uss sword ko jor s chilla black sword samjha.
Main(chilla kr)- Black Sword
Wo talwar waha s gayab ho mere pass aa gayi mere dono haato m ek ek talwar thi.
Uss Black sword k aane s pata nhi kaise mera gussa kai gunna badh gaya aur maine dono talwar liye Ronit jo k jal raha tha usko maarne daud pada.
Pr Henry bich m aa gaya aur apne magic s mujhe behosh kr diya saath hi uss Mendhak s sakal wale ko bhi.
Behosh hote hi main pahuch gaya kahi aur aur mere saamne khada tha main khud hi.
Main- Main kaha hu aur wo Ronit kaha gaya usse to mai...
B.s- Oo bhai saant hoja yaar tu pahle baith yaha dhyaan m aur control kr uss black sword ko dhund usse apne ander samjha aur jab tk ye hoo na jaata tu hosh m nhi aayega.
Main- nhi pahle mujhe usko maarna hai fir hi kuch aur karunga.
B.S- Dekh bhai baat maan jab tk tu usse control nhi krta tab tk tu Ronit ka kuch nhi kr sakta q ki tu to behosh hoga to chup chap baith jaa idhar dhyan m.
Maine thodi naa nukur aur ki to B.S n mujhe samjha bujha kr bitha diya Dhyan m.
Badi muskil hui iss Black Sword ko kaabu krne m pr aakhir m maine usse kr hi liya mujhe 2 din lag gaye the isme aur main 2 din s behosh pada tha wahi University k hospital m iss baat s anjan k meri wajah s waha kya kya raita fail gaya hai.

Wahi 7 dino m Mohini ji badi achi dost ban gayi thi Kiran ki aur kiran ko shikha bhi rahi thi apne powers ko ache s control krna usne waha k logo s ghulne milne ki kosis bhi ki jaise m Tiya Tanya Saifali aur baakiyon s aur kuch had tak usme kaamiyab bhi rahi pr wo inn do dino m Alka s baat nhi kr paayi thi q k wo kisi s naa to jyada baat krti thi aur naa hi milna pasand krti thi aur ye sab dekh Mohini ko dukh bhi hua tha.

Note- Har jagah ka apna time period hai.

Agle update m dekhte hai kya hua university m Saurya k behosh hone k baad inn 2 dino m
Nice update bhai
 
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