Fantasy Saurya - ek youdha (Completed)

Ristrcted · Apr 11, 2020

Hi friend maine xforum pr kafi stories padi hai aur ab mai bhi apni ek story post karne ja raha hu ab jyada wakt na lete huye
story p chalte h jaise jaise log milte rahenge unke bare m batata jaunga .
so lets go

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Avir · May 18, 2020

Waiting next

Killerpanditji(pandit) · May 18, 2020

Excellent update

Avi9545 · May 18, 2020

Jabardast update tha bhai

Vickey1211 · May 18, 2020

Ristrcted said:
UPDATE- 44 (continues)

Ab tak

Iss update k pichle bhag m aapne dekha k priya ka 2 ladke rape karna chahte the pr ain waqt p waha ek ladki aa jaati hai aur uske baad wo ladki apne logo ki madad s priya ko apne saath le jaati hai aur saath hi apne aadmiyon s ye bhi khati jaati hai k un ladko ko sabak shikhaye. Wahi dusri oor koi bahanji type ladki apne Saurya s tkra jaati hai aur sayad usse dar k bhag jaati hai.

Aage

Chaliye pahle to hum Bansoa ki oor chalte hai jaha apna hero class m jata hai wo prof. Fun wali class.

Main class m pahucha to waha p saare students aaye hue the aur prof.Fun bhi.
Abhi prof. ussi ladki ko jo mujhse takra kr giri thi usse late na aane ki nashihat de rahe the.
Tabhi unki nazar mujhpe padi unhone us ladki ko janne ko bola aur fir mere s.
Fun- Aaiye aaiye janab kaise aana hua yaha.
Main- wo prof. main wo class dhundne m late ho gaya.
Fun- Aaj first day hai tumhara issi liye chod raha hu warna bahut bura hota chalo baith jao.
Maine dekha ki class m bas ek last bench p hi jagah khali thi main chal diya wahi baith gaya akela.

Class shuru hui aaj hame magic stick k itihas k baare mai thi. Sabhi class p focus kr rahe the wahi wo ladki thodi thodi der p meri oor dekh rahi thi aur bahut jyada dari hui thi.
Class khatam hui aur sarre log nikalliye waha s abhi ek break tha main chal diya library ki oor wahi kitab dhundhne jiske baare m mujhe Henry n bataya tha.
Labrary bahut badi thi main to dekh kr hi chakara gaya sayad hi itni badi library Earth p hogi kahi.
Maine librarian s baat ki uss kitab k baare m to usne bola k wo kitab koi Niharika naam ki ladki k paas hai aur wo thodi der m aati hi hogi usse wapas karne (uska time khatam ho gaya hoga book rakhne ka).
Main- Thik hai main tab tk koi aur book dekh leta hu.
Main aise hi kitabe dekhne laga k tabhi mujhe ek kitab dikhi purani si jiska naam tha "Mother of Lords" by Jagdeep.
Maine jaise hi usse dekha samajh gaya k ye Mother Elika k baare m hoga main wo kitab apne paas rakh liya.
Tabhi mujhe wahi chasmish ladki mili jisse m takraya tha.
Wo kisi ko dhund rahi thi aur haato m wahi kitab liye thi jo mujhe chahiye tha mujhe laga yahi hai wo Niharika naam ki ladki jiske baare m librarian n bola tha.
Main uske paas jaa uska naam liya tab wo dusri oor dekh rahi thi aur jaise hi usne mujhe dekha.
Niharika- A..aap dekho mujhe kuch mat krna please main to galti s please mujhe maaf kr do.
Main to bas dekhta raha yaar jaan na pahchan aur ye mujhse maafi maange jaa rahi hai.
Main- arre pr maafi q maang rhi ho ye to batao.
Niharika- wo main wo aapse takra gayi thi wo galti s hua tha maine jaan bujh kr nhi kiya tha please mujhe maaf kr do.
Main- Hain ! Tum uss baat k liye itna maafi maang rahi ho itti si baat k liye.
Niharika- Wo mujhe laga aap gussa ho jaoge wo black sword k power k wajah s aur mujhe sazza de doge.
Main- Kya black sowrd....
Librarian- ssshhhhh ye library hai bahar jaa kr gappe ladao samjhe yaha nhi.
Main - ok
Main uss Niharika ko saath le canteen chal gaya.
Main- Haa ab bolo kya bol rahi thi...Haa arre uspe maine control kr liya hai ab mujhe gussa nhi aata.
Niharika apne chasme adjust kr mujhe ghurte hue.
Niharika- Impossible ek Elf kabhi bhi black sword ko control nhi kr sakta pr tumne to kappa ki talwar ko bhi kaabu kiya hua hai.
Usne mere kaan khinche hue.
Niharika- Ye ye asli hai yaa nakli.
Main- Aaahh kya kr rahi ho ye asli hai main elf hi hu.
Niharika- Achha tum elf ho chalo thik hai batao elf world yaha s kitni duri p hai.
Main- Hmm wo wo haa wo bahut dur hai.
Niharika- wo to main bhi janti hu pr kitni dur.
Main- Wo main nhi jaanta.
Niharika- Abhi ka elf king kitne saal ka hai.
Main- arre wo to buddhe hai.
Niharika - umar batao umar.
Main- Yahi koi 70 80 saal k honge.
Niharika- Haa ab tum fas chuke ho nakli elf Abhi k elf raja 5037 saal k hai. Pr ek baat samajh nhi aa rahi k tum gate k paar aaye kaise.
Main- Ooye madam main elf hi hu.
Niharika- Nahi wo to main maan hi nhi sakti pr main tumhara ye raaz raaz hi rakh sakti hu pr.
Main- Pr kya.
Niharika- Mujhe wo dono talware dekhni hai dhikhaoge plz plz plz.
Main- Nhi bilkul nhi.
Niharika- Plz bas ek baar dikhado maine bahut kuch padha hai unke baare m bas ek baar plz nazdeek s dekhne dona.
Main- Nhi bola na matlab nhi.
Niharika- Plz dikha do na main pure saal tumhari padhayi m madad karungi plz ab to maan jao.
Main- Tum oor meri madad tumhe pahle kuch aata bhi hai ya nhi.
Niharika- Ooye mister kya bola mujhe kuch nhi aata tum jante ho main kon hu iss university k entrence m top kiya hai maine samjhe.
Main- Entrence???
Niharika- Hooa tumhe uske baare m bhi nhi pata to tum yaha aaye kaise main main abhi sabko batati hu.
Main- Ruk jaa meri maa ruk dekh mujhe naa yaha k baare m jyada pata nhi hai to kya tum mujhe.
Niharika- Pahle wo dikhao jo maine bola hai tabhi kuch hoga.
Main- Yaha p kaise
Niharika- Chalo Garden of Spirit m chalte hai waha koi nhi hoga.
Main- q
Niharika- tumhe ye bhi pata nhi.
Main- kya pata nhi.
Niharika- Kuch nhi chalo hum chalte hai.
Hum dono pahuch gaye waha pr waha jaate hi ek unicorn ki spirit Niharika k paas aa gayi aur uske saath khelne lagi.
Main- Ye kya hai.
Niharika- Ye ye meri spirit hai matlab hum dono jude hue hai. Tumhara bhi koi spirit hoga hai na.
Main- pata nhi.
Niharika- Ruko hmm tum apni aakhe band karo aur maan m Spirit bolo wo jo bhi hoga aa jaayega tumhare paas.
Maine thik waisa hi kiya aur pura garden ek baar hil gaya.
Niharika ko uske spirit n sambhala hua tha.
Ek Eagle lion waha p aa jata hai jiska sar aur panje lion ka tha aur sarir egale jaisa. Usse dekh Unicorn aur baaki k jitne bhi spirits yaha waha ho rahe the saare jhuk gaye uske saamne aur wo mere saamne.
Niharika- T....tummm..nhi. aap Mother Elika k wansaj ho jo Marcuss ko maarega.
Main(maan m )- Arre yaar isse bhi pata chal gaya B.S kaha hai tu gadhe.
B.S(ubasi leta hua)- Kya hua be q .... ooye tune Eagle lion ko q bula liya pagal hai kya.
Main- Arre main to apne spirit ko bulla raha tha pr ye aa gaya.
B.S- Pr q mere bhai q bulla raha tha tu usse.
Main- wo to main bas dekhna chahta tha k mera spirit kon hai.
B.S- Haa ye sahi hai dekhna chahta tha chutiye bahut bada raiyta failaya hai tuna iss baar ab uss Maarcuss ko pata lag jaana hai tere yaha hone ka...Abbe ye unicorn yaha kaise.
Main- wo ye uss ladki Niharika ka hai.
B.S- Kya baat krta hai bhai tu chal kuch to sahi hua bach gaya bete tu warna aaj hi plan fail hona tha.
Main- Plan kon sa plan.
B.S- Abbe apni seena banane ka plan chutiye chal ab chod iss baat ko aur Eagle lion ko bol wapas jaane ko.
Main- thik hai.
Main(Eagle lion s)-Dost abhi waqt nhi aaya hai tum chale jao wapas.
Eagle lion n naa m gardan hilla di.
Main- Jao dost warna musibat ho jaayegi jao tum .
Bahut manane pr wo gaya.
B.S- Chlo balla tali haa ab uss ladki ko bhi bol unicorn ko wapas bheje Spirit world m uski wajah s yaha saare spirits dare hue hai.
Main- Dare hue hai pr q.
B.S- Dekh dost tu spirit world k baare m nhi jaanta ye unicorn wo eagle lion ye saare iss world m tabhi bulaye jaate hai jab yudh shuru hona ho issi liye inhe dekh baaki k saare spirits dare hue hai isse bhi wapas bhijwa.
Main- Thik hai.
Main(Niharika s)- Arre utho bhi kab tak uu hi jhuki rahogi tum chalo uth jao mujhe baat krni hai kuch.
Niharika- Pahle to mujhe maaf kare jo maine aapko canteen m itna kuch bola uske liye.
Main- Kya tum bhi accha maaf kiya ab khadi ho jao aur meri baat sunno.
wo khadi hui.
Main-Niharika tumhe apne unicorn ko wapas bhejna hoga uski wajah s yaha saare spirits dare hue hai.
Niharika- Nhi aisa naa kahe ek ye hi to mera dost hai ab ye bhi chala gaya to main akeli ho jaungi.
Main- Arre main hu na main tumhara dost ban jaunga pr isse wapas bhej do warna sab gadbad ho jaayegi.
Niharika- Kya aap sach m mujhse dosti karoge.
Main- Haa jarur karunga chalo ab isse wapas bhej do.
Niharika n ek baar unicorn k aakhon m dekah aur fir dono k hi aakho s aashu girne lage aur unicorn chala gaya.
Main Niharika k paas gaya.
Main- Acha meri ek baat aur suno tum kisi s bhi mere baare m nhi kahogi samjhi naa.
Niharika n bas haa m sar hila diya.
Main- Acha chalo class m bhi jana hai.
Hum dono hi chal diye class ki taraf.
B.S- Bhai iska dhyan rakhna ye bahut khaas hai bhavisya k liye isse bhi apne saath milla lo.
Main- Kya matlab.
B.S- Wo kitab jo tunne apne haath m rakhi hai usse padh sab samajh jaayega pr isse kuch mat batana samjha.

Chaliye inko yahi chod hum chalte hai Earth pr jaha ek bade s villa m ek bade s room k bistar p Priya leti hui thi aur ussi k paas baithi thi usse bachane wali.
Priya ko hosh aaya aur jaise normally logo k reactions hote hai waise hi uske bhi the.
Priya- main kaha hua aur aap aap kon ho.
Ladki- Aaram s aap safe ho ab wo aapko do ladko n pakad liya tha aur maine aapko bachaya aur apne saath le aayi apne ghar Jaipur.
Priya - kya pr mujhe to kuch bhi yaad nhi.
Ladki- Aapko un dono n behosh kr diya tha aap kal s behosh ho pr chinta na karo aapko kuch bhi nhi hua hai aap bilkul thik ho.
Priya- Bahut bahut shukriya jo aapne mujhe bachaya main aapka...
Ladki- Arre ab ye dialog chodo aur fresh ho kr aao aap fir aapko ek mast item dikhana hai.
Priya- Nahi mujhe kuch nhi dekhna mujhe mere collage chod do please.
Ladki- Thik hai pr fresh to ho jao aap yaha bahut sare kapde hai koi bhi use kr lena.
Priya - ok.
Ladki priya ko bathroom dikhati hai aur fir room s bahar aa jati hai.
Bahar ek bhuda admi baitha tha.Raja k jaise kapde badi badi muche.
Aadmi- Uth gayi wo puja
Puja- Ji Daduuth gayi pr wo jaane ki jid kr rahi hai.
Aadmi- wo to karegi hi beta usse ghar ki yaad aa rahi hogi chalo usse aane do main baat karta hu.
Puja- Love u daadu aap bahut ache ho.
Thodi der m Priya niche aati hai uske gale m ek locket tha jisse abhi tak uss aadmi n nhi dekha tha pr ab jaise hi uski nazar uspe gayi uske chahre k haw bhaw hi badal gaye.
Aadmi- Beta aapka naam kya hai.
Priya- Ji main priya Purohit.
Naam sun Aadmi k haw bhaw aur badal gaye.
Aadmi- Maa ka naam.
Priya- Ji wo unka naam kalpana purohit hai.
Aadmi- Bache kya aapke paas uski ko tasweer hai.
Puja- Kya baat hai daadu aap ek dum s pareshan ho gaye.
Aadmi- Ruko puja beta tumhe sab pata chsl jaayega pr pahle hame confirm hone do.
Priya- Haa hai na wo mere hostel k room m hai.
Aadmi- Apka hostel kaha hai beta.
Priya- wo DU north campu...
Aadmi n phone nikal aur Raghu ko phone lagaya.
Aadmi- Raghu DU jao waha s priya puroht k room m jaa kr dekho ki waha Kalpana ki photo hai kya.
Raghu- Bade sahab kya wo mil gayi hai.
Aadmi- sayad tum abhi pata karo.
Raghu- Ji hujur.
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Aadmi- Beta aap aaiye hum khana khate hai.
Priya- Ji mujhe coll...
Aadmi- Bache aap ko pata hai aap kiske mehman ho aap Ranjeet Rana k mehman ho aur ye ladki hai Puja Rana hamari poti auur Rana estate ki malkin chalo ab chup chap khana khao hum aise hi kisi mehman ko jaane nahi dete.
Karib aadhe ghate baad Villa k paas ek helicopter utra jisse Raghu niche aaya.
Wo ander pahucha Ranjeet wahi baitha tha.
Ranjeet- Kya hua kya ye wahi thi.
Raghu- Maalik ye wahi hai wo photo Kalpana madam ki hi hai pr uspe...
Ranjeet- Pr kya Raghu saaf saaf bolo.
Raghu- Malik wo bhi nhi rahi.
Ranjeet- Nhi ye kya bol rahe ho raghu wo bhi chod gayi apne iss bhude baap ko.
Tabhi uper s Puja aur Priya niche aa gayi.
Puja apne Dada ko aise dekh.
Puja- Kya hua dadu sab thik to hai na aap aise Raghu kya hua inhe batao
Raghu- Baby ji wo aapki bua kalpana madam nhi rahi ye baat sun inko.
Puja- Kya bua nhi rahi pr kab kaise.
Raghu- Ye to Priya madam hi bata sakti hai.
Priya- Main main kaise.
Ranjeet khada hota hai aur Priya ka haath pakad ek room ki oor le jata hai aur waha ka darwaja khol deta hai.
Priya ander ka nazara dekh dang rah jaati hai ander uski Maa ki tasweeren padi thi bahut saari.
Priya- Ye ye yaha kaise.
Ranjeet- Ye meri beti ki tasweeren hai aur tum meri naatin ho.
Priya- Pr ye kaise.
Puja- To ye ye meri bahan hai.
Ranjeet- Haa ye teri bahan hai (priya s) beta kya hua kalpana k saath.
Priya- wo Maa ko kuch bimari ho gayi thi jiski wajah s wo mujhe akela chod chali gayi yahi pichle saal.
Ranjeet- kya usne kabhi hamare baare m nhi bola.
Priya- Nhi wo to kabhi kuch nhi boli.
Raghu- Malik wo tab bhi naraz thi humse.
Puja- Pr q dadu aapne mmujhe bhi nhi bataya kuch...
Ranjeet- Beta wo hamari wajah s aapke fufaji n apni jaan de di jis wajah s apki bua hamse naraz ho chali gayi Priya k saath aur aaj milli bhi to uski maut ki khabar sayad yahi sazza hai meri ki apni ladli ko ek aakhri baar dekh bhi na saka.(Priya s) Beta ab aap yahi rahoge apne iss budhe nana k paas.
Priya- Pr mera collage.
Puja- Tum ab mere saath hamare collage m padhogi samjhi aur mere saath hi rahoge.
Priya shuru m to nhi maani pr fir usse Ranjeet aur Puja n mana hi liya.

Next update m Rita aur daitya raj k bich kya hota hai wo dekhna hai

Mast update h Bhai
Maza aa gya

Aryanv · May 18, 2020

Ristrcted said:
UPDATE- 44 (continues)

Ab tak

Iss update k pichle bhag m aapne dekha k priya ka 2 ladke rape karna chahte the pr ain waqt p waha ek ladki aa jaati hai aur uske baad wo ladki apne logo ki madad s priya ko apne saath le jaati hai aur saath hi apne aadmiyon s ye bhi khati jaati hai k un ladko ko sabak shikhaye. Wahi dusri oor koi bahanji type ladki apne Saurya s tkra jaati hai aur sayad usse dar k bhag jaati hai.

Aage

Chaliye pahle to hum Bansoa ki oor chalte hai jaha apna hero class m jata hai wo prof. Fun wali class.

Main class m pahucha to waha p saare students aaye hue the aur prof.Fun bhi.
Abhi prof. ussi ladki ko jo mujhse takra kr giri thi usse late na aane ki nashihat de rahe the.
Tabhi unki nazar mujhpe padi unhone us ladki ko janne ko bola aur fir mere s.
Fun- Aaiye aaiye janab kaise aana hua yaha.
Main- wo prof. main wo class dhundne m late ho gaya.
Fun- Aaj first day hai tumhara issi liye chod raha hu warna bahut bura hota chalo baith jao.
Maine dekha ki class m bas ek last bench p hi jagah khali thi main chal diya wahi baith gaya akela.

Class shuru hui aaj hame magic stick k itihas k baare mai thi. Sabhi class p focus kr rahe the wahi wo ladki thodi thodi der p meri oor dekh rahi thi aur bahut jyada dari hui thi.
Class khatam hui aur sarre log nikalliye waha s abhi ek break tha main chal diya library ki oor wahi kitab dhundhne jiske baare m mujhe Henry n bataya tha.
Labrary bahut badi thi main to dekh kr hi chakara gaya sayad hi itni badi library Earth p hogi kahi.
Maine librarian s baat ki uss kitab k baare m to usne bola k wo kitab koi Niharika naam ki ladki k paas hai aur wo thodi der m aati hi hogi usse wapas karne (uska time khatam ho gaya hoga book rakhne ka).
Main- Thik hai main tab tk koi aur book dekh leta hu.
Main aise hi kitabe dekhne laga k tabhi mujhe ek kitab dikhi purani si jiska naam tha "Mother of Lords" by Jagdeep.
Maine jaise hi usse dekha samajh gaya k ye Mother Elika k baare m hoga main wo kitab apne paas rakh liya.
Tabhi mujhe wahi chasmish ladki mili jisse m takraya tha.
Wo kisi ko dhund rahi thi aur haato m wahi kitab liye thi jo mujhe chahiye tha mujhe laga yahi hai wo Niharika naam ki ladki jiske baare m librarian n bola tha.
Main uske paas jaa uska naam liya tab wo dusri oor dekh rahi thi aur jaise hi usne mujhe dekha.
Niharika- A..aap dekho mujhe kuch mat krna please main to galti s please mujhe maaf kr do.
Main to bas dekhta raha yaar jaan na pahchan aur ye mujhse maafi maange jaa rahi hai.
Main- arre pr maafi q maang rhi ho ye to batao.
Niharika- wo main wo aapse takra gayi thi wo galti s hua tha maine jaan bujh kr nhi kiya tha please mujhe maaf kr do.
Main- Hain ! Tum uss baat k liye itna maafi maang rahi ho itti si baat k liye.
Niharika- Wo mujhe laga aap gussa ho jaoge wo black sword k power k wajah s aur mujhe sazza de doge.
Main- Kya black sowrd....
Librarian- ssshhhhh ye library hai bahar jaa kr gappe ladao samjhe yaha nhi.
Main - ok
Main uss Niharika ko saath le canteen chal gaya.
Main- Haa ab bolo kya bol rahi thi...Haa arre uspe maine control kr liya hai ab mujhe gussa nhi aata.
Niharika apne chasme adjust kr mujhe ghurte hue.
Niharika- Impossible ek Elf kabhi bhi black sword ko control nhi kr sakta pr tumne to kappa ki talwar ko bhi kaabu kiya hua hai.
Usne mere kaan khinche hue.
Niharika- Ye ye asli hai yaa nakli.
Main- Aaahh kya kr rahi ho ye asli hai main elf hi hu.
Niharika- Achha tum elf ho chalo thik hai batao elf world yaha s kitni duri p hai.
Main- Hmm wo wo haa wo bahut dur hai.
Niharika- wo to main bhi janti hu pr kitni dur.
Main- Wo main nhi jaanta.
Niharika- Abhi ka elf king kitne saal ka hai.
Main- arre wo to buddhe hai.
Niharika - umar batao umar.
Main- Yahi koi 70 80 saal k honge.
Niharika- Haa ab tum fas chuke ho nakli elf Abhi k elf raja 5037 saal k hai. Pr ek baat samajh nhi aa rahi k tum gate k paar aaye kaise.
Main- Ooye madam main elf hi hu.
Niharika- Nahi wo to main maan hi nhi sakti pr main tumhara ye raaz raaz hi rakh sakti hu pr.
Main- Pr kya.
Niharika- Mujhe wo dono talware dekhni hai dhikhaoge plz plz plz.
Main- Nhi bilkul nhi.
Niharika- Plz bas ek baar dikhado maine bahut kuch padha hai unke baare m bas ek baar plz nazdeek s dekhne dona.
Main- Nhi bola na matlab nhi.
Niharika- Plz dikha do na main pure saal tumhari padhayi m madad karungi plz ab to maan jao.
Main- Tum oor meri madad tumhe pahle kuch aata bhi hai ya nhi.
Niharika- Ooye mister kya bola mujhe kuch nhi aata tum jante ho main kon hu iss university k entrence m top kiya hai maine samjhe.
Main- Entrence???
Niharika- Hooa tumhe uske baare m bhi nhi pata to tum yaha aaye kaise main main abhi sabko batati hu.
Main- Ruk jaa meri maa ruk dekh mujhe naa yaha k baare m jyada pata nhi hai to kya tum mujhe.
Niharika- Pahle wo dikhao jo maine bola hai tabhi kuch hoga.
Main- Yaha p kaise
Niharika- Chalo Garden of Spirit m chalte hai waha koi nhi hoga.
Main- q
Niharika- tumhe ye bhi pata nhi.
Main- kya pata nhi.
Niharika- Kuch nhi chalo hum chalte hai.
Hum dono pahuch gaye waha pr waha jaate hi ek unicorn ki spirit Niharika k paas aa gayi aur uske saath khelne lagi.
Main- Ye kya hai.
Niharika- Ye ye meri spirit hai matlab hum dono jude hue hai. Tumhara bhi koi spirit hoga hai na.
Main- pata nhi.
Niharika- Ruko hmm tum apni aakhe band karo aur maan m Spirit bolo wo jo bhi hoga aa jaayega tumhare paas.
Maine thik waisa hi kiya aur pura garden ek baar hil gaya.
Niharika ko uske spirit n sambhala hua tha.
Ek Eagle lion waha p aa jata hai jiska sar aur panje lion ka tha aur sarir egale jaisa. Usse dekh Unicorn aur baaki k jitne bhi spirits yaha waha ho rahe the saare jhuk gaye uske saamne aur wo mere saamne.
Niharika- T....tummm..nhi. aap Mother Elika k wansaj ho jo Marcuss ko maarega.
Main(maan m )- Arre yaar isse bhi pata chal gaya B.S kaha hai tu gadhe.
B.S(ubasi leta hua)- Kya hua be q .... ooye tune Eagle lion ko q bula liya pagal hai kya.
Main- Arre main to apne spirit ko bulla raha tha pr ye aa gaya.
B.S- Pr q mere bhai q bulla raha tha tu usse.
Main- wo to main bas dekhna chahta tha k mera spirit kon hai.
B.S- Haa ye sahi hai dekhna chahta tha chutiye bahut bada raiyta failaya hai tuna iss baar ab uss Maarcuss ko pata lag jaana hai tere yaha hone ka...Abbe ye unicorn yaha kaise.
Main- wo ye uss ladki Niharika ka hai.
B.S- Kya baat krta hai bhai tu chal kuch to sahi hua bach gaya bete tu warna aaj hi plan fail hona tha.
Main- Plan kon sa plan.
B.S- Abbe apni seena banane ka plan chutiye chal ab chod iss baat ko aur Eagle lion ko bol wapas jaane ko.
Main- thik hai.
Main(Eagle lion s)-Dost abhi waqt nhi aaya hai tum chale jao wapas.
Eagle lion n naa m gardan hilla di.
Main- Jao dost warna musibat ho jaayegi jao tum .
Bahut manane pr wo gaya.
B.S- Chlo balla tali haa ab uss ladki ko bhi bol unicorn ko wapas bheje Spirit world m uski wajah s yaha saare spirits dare hue hai.
Main- Dare hue hai pr q.
B.S- Dekh dost tu spirit world k baare m nhi jaanta ye unicorn wo eagle lion ye saare iss world m tabhi bulaye jaate hai jab yudh shuru hona ho issi liye inhe dekh baaki k saare spirits dare hue hai isse bhi wapas bhijwa.
Main- Thik hai.
Main(Niharika s)- Arre utho bhi kab tak uu hi jhuki rahogi tum chalo uth jao mujhe baat krni hai kuch.
Niharika- Pahle to mujhe maaf kare jo maine aapko canteen m itna kuch bola uske liye.
Main- Kya tum bhi accha maaf kiya ab khadi ho jao aur meri baat sunno.
wo khadi hui.
Main-Niharika tumhe apne unicorn ko wapas bhejna hoga uski wajah s yaha saare spirits dare hue hai.
Niharika- Nhi aisa naa kahe ek ye hi to mera dost hai ab ye bhi chala gaya to main akeli ho jaungi.
Main- Arre main hu na main tumhara dost ban jaunga pr isse wapas bhej do warna sab gadbad ho jaayegi.
Niharika- Kya aap sach m mujhse dosti karoge.
Main- Haa jarur karunga chalo ab isse wapas bhej do.
Niharika n ek baar unicorn k aakhon m dekah aur fir dono k hi aakho s aashu girne lage aur unicorn chala gaya.
Main Niharika k paas gaya.
Main- Acha meri ek baat aur suno tum kisi s bhi mere baare m nhi kahogi samjhi naa.
Niharika n bas haa m sar hila diya.
Main- Acha chalo class m bhi jana hai.
Hum dono hi chal diye class ki taraf.
B.S- Bhai iska dhyan rakhna ye bahut khaas hai bhavisya k liye isse bhi apne saath milla lo.
Main- Kya matlab.
B.S- Wo kitab jo tunne apne haath m rakhi hai usse padh sab samajh jaayega pr isse kuch mat batana samjha.

Chaliye inko yahi chod hum chalte hai Earth pr jaha ek bade s villa m ek bade s room k bistar p Priya leti hui thi aur ussi k paas baithi thi usse bachane wali.
Priya ko hosh aaya aur jaise normally logo k reactions hote hai waise hi uske bhi the.
Priya- main kaha hua aur aap aap kon ho.
Ladki- Aaram s aap safe ho ab wo aapko do ladko n pakad liya tha aur maine aapko bachaya aur apne saath le aayi apne ghar Jaipur.
Priya - kya pr mujhe to kuch bhi yaad nhi.
Ladki- Aapko un dono n behosh kr diya tha aap kal s behosh ho pr chinta na karo aapko kuch bhi nhi hua hai aap bilkul thik ho.
Priya- Bahut bahut shukriya jo aapne mujhe bachaya main aapka...
Ladki- Arre ab ye dialog chodo aur fresh ho kr aao aap fir aapko ek mast item dikhana hai.
Priya- Nahi mujhe kuch nhi dekhna mujhe mere collage chod do please.
Ladki- Thik hai pr fresh to ho jao aap yaha bahut sare kapde hai koi bhi use kr lena.
Priya - ok.
Ladki priya ko bathroom dikhati hai aur fir room s bahar aa jati hai.
Bahar ek bhuda admi baitha tha.Raja k jaise kapde badi badi muche.
Aadmi- Uth gayi wo puja
Puja- Ji Daduuth gayi pr wo jaane ki jid kr rahi hai.
Aadmi- wo to karegi hi beta usse ghar ki yaad aa rahi hogi chalo usse aane do main baat karta hu.
Puja- Love u daadu aap bahut ache ho.
Thodi der m Priya niche aati hai uske gale m ek locket tha jisse abhi tak uss aadmi n nhi dekha tha pr ab jaise hi uski nazar uspe gayi uske chahre k haw bhaw hi badal gaye.
Aadmi- Beta aapka naam kya hai.
Priya- Ji main priya Purohit.
Naam sun Aadmi k haw bhaw aur badal gaye.
Aadmi- Maa ka naam.
Priya- Ji wo unka naam kalpana purohit hai.
Aadmi- Bache kya aapke paas uski ko tasweer hai.
Puja- Kya baat hai daadu aap ek dum s pareshan ho gaye.
Aadmi- Ruko puja beta tumhe sab pata chsl jaayega pr pahle hame confirm hone do.
Priya- Haa hai na wo mere hostel k room m hai.
Aadmi- Apka hostel kaha hai beta.
Priya- wo DU north campu...
Aadmi n phone nikal aur Raghu ko phone lagaya.
Aadmi- Raghu DU jao waha s priya puroht k room m jaa kr dekho ki waha Kalpana ki photo hai kya.
Raghu- Bade sahab kya wo mil gayi hai.
Aadmi- sayad tum abhi pata karo.
Raghu- Ji hujur.
Call cut
Aadmi- Beta aap aaiye hum khana khate hai.
Priya- Ji mujhe coll...
Aadmi- Bache aap ko pata hai aap kiske mehman ho aap Ranjeet Rana k mehman ho aur ye ladki hai Puja Rana hamari poti auur Rana estate ki malkin chalo ab chup chap khana khao hum aise hi kisi mehman ko jaane nahi dete.
Karib aadhe ghate baad Villa k paas ek helicopter utra jisse Raghu niche aaya.
Wo ander pahucha Ranjeet wahi baitha tha.
Ranjeet- Kya hua kya ye wahi thi.
Raghu- Maalik ye wahi hai wo photo Kalpana madam ki hi hai pr uspe...
Ranjeet- Pr kya Raghu saaf saaf bolo.
Raghu- Malik wo bhi nhi rahi.
Ranjeet- Nhi ye kya bol rahe ho raghu wo bhi chod gayi apne iss bhude baap ko.
Tabhi uper s Puja aur Priya niche aa gayi.
Puja apne Dada ko aise dekh.
Puja- Kya hua dadu sab thik to hai na aap aise Raghu kya hua inhe batao
Raghu- Baby ji wo aapki bua kalpana madam nhi rahi ye baat sun inko.
Puja- Kya bua nhi rahi pr kab kaise.
Raghu- Ye to Priya madam hi bata sakti hai.
Priya- Main main kaise.
Ranjeet khada hota hai aur Priya ka haath pakad ek room ki oor le jata hai aur waha ka darwaja khol deta hai.
Priya ander ka nazara dekh dang rah jaati hai ander uski Maa ki tasweeren padi thi bahut saari.
Priya- Ye ye yaha kaise.
Ranjeet- Ye meri beti ki tasweeren hai aur tum meri naatin ho.
Priya- Pr ye kaise.
Puja- To ye ye meri bahan hai.
Ranjeet- Haa ye teri bahan hai (priya s) beta kya hua kalpana k saath.
Priya- wo Maa ko kuch bimari ho gayi thi jiski wajah s wo mujhe akela chod chali gayi yahi pichle saal.
Ranjeet- kya usne kabhi hamare baare m nhi bola.
Priya- Nhi wo to kabhi kuch nhi boli.
Raghu- Malik wo tab bhi naraz thi humse.
Puja- Pr q dadu aapne mmujhe bhi nhi bataya kuch...
Ranjeet- Beta wo hamari wajah s aapke fufaji n apni jaan de di jis wajah s apki bua hamse naraz ho chali gayi Priya k saath aur aaj milli bhi to uski maut ki khabar sayad yahi sazza hai meri ki apni ladli ko ek aakhri baar dekh bhi na saka.(Priya s) Beta ab aap yahi rahoge apne iss budhe nana k paas.
Priya- Pr mera collage.
Puja- Tum ab mere saath hamare collage m padhogi samjhi aur mere saath hi rahoge.
Priya shuru m to nhi maani pr fir usse Ranjeet aur Puja n mana hi liya.

Next update m Rita aur daitya raj k bich kya hota hai wo dekhna hai

Nice update

Shahrukh · May 18, 2020

Zaberdust update bhai

AAS · May 18, 2020

Nice update

Black water · May 18, 2020

Nice update

Naina · May 18, 2020

Brilliant update writer sahab.... Extraordinary :applause:

Chinturocky · May 18, 2020

Behtareen update Bhai,
Mujhe ye kahani achanak super se super duper lagane lagi hai isaki detailing ki wajah se, please bhai side kirdar ko bhi achchhe se dikhana aur strong banana Tabhi kahani me gahrai aati hai sirf hero heroine aur villain se maja nahi aata.

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