Fantasy Saurya - ek youdha (Completed)

Ristrcted · Apr 11, 2020

Hi friend maine xforum pr kafi stories padi hai aur ab mai bhi apni ek story post karne ja raha hu ab jyada wakt na lete huye
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Ristrcted · May 30, 2020

UPDATE- 55

Ab tak

Bansoa m us gudiya ka aaatank badta hi jaa raha tha wahi Earth p Alex Varsha ko rijhane ki kosis m laga tha. Wahi dusri oor Paridhi ek kadam aur aage badh chuki thi yaani uss Arm dealer ko wo pakad chuki thi jo usko Plane blast karne wale terrorist group k pass le jaati.

Aage.

Pahle Bansoa chalte hai jaha Main khana khane k baad Battle ground m tha sabhi k saath.
Main- Maana hum usko khatam nhi kr satke pr kya usse rok bhi nhi sakte.
Headmaster- Maine apne hisab s har wo tarika aazma liya hai pr kamiyab nhi ho paya.
Margret- Wo jo tumne wo locket di thi naa usse kuch nhi ho sakta kya.
Main- Nhi Margret wo bas kisi ko dream magic s bacha sakta hai.
N.mom- Main kuch bolu.
Main- Haa boliye.
N.mom- Jaha tak mujhe pata hai koi bhi apni puri shaktiyon ko kisi chiz m bina kisi madad k nhi daal sakta.
Rita- To aap kah rahi ho koi tha jisne Menka ki madad ki thi.
N.mom- Haa koi to hoga warna ye mumkin hi nhi aur fir ye bhi to socho wo gudiya aazad kaise hui iss university m kaise aayi.
Headmaster- Jaha tak university m aaane ka sawal hai to wo yahi thi issi university k ander pr koi uss jagah nhi jaa sakta tha siway kuch logo k.
Main- Kya wo gudiya yahi thi pr q mera matlab itni khatarnak chiz ko yaha q rakha tha.
Headmaster- Saurya tum bhul rahe ho ye universe ki sabse surakshit jagaho m s ek hai yaha koi bhi nhi aa sakta iss gudiya ko aazad karane.
Main- Nhi aa sakta tha q ki ab wo gudiya aazad ho gayi hai.
Henry- Ek baat to clear hai ye kaam kisi naye student yaa naye staff member n ki hogi q ki agar koi purana hota to wo ye pahle hi kar chuka hota.
Main- Saayad tum sahi ho pr kuch hai jo choot raha hai.
Rita- Kya tumhe lagta hai in sab m Jordon ka haath hai.
Main- Kuch kuch.
Margret- Pr wo aisa q karega matlab usko kya jaroorat pad gayi Bansoa khali karane ki.
Main- Bansoa khali karana to uska maksad tha hi nhi agar aisa hota to wo gudiya sangeeta madam tak naa pahuchti q ki unki maut k baad to waise bhi wo gudiya khatam ho jaati naa yaha wo kuch aur hi soch raha tha.
Henry- Kya ho sakta hai.
Mian- Kuch baaton p agar gaur kiya jaaye to hame ye sab pata lag sakta hai pr uske liye 2 logo k baare m jaanna hoga pahla wo jisne Menka ki madad ki thi uss gudiya m apni saari takat daalne m aur dusra wo jisne uss Gudiya ko aazad karaya hai. Headmaster aap Menka k baare m sab pata lagaiye aur Henry tum uske baare m jisne uss gudiya ko aazad karaya hai.
Henry- Pr uska pata kaise chalega.
Headmaster- wo jo bhi hoga usne apni koi kimti chiz di hogi tabhi wo uss kaidkhane tk gaya hoga jaha Gudiya kaid thi.
Main- Ab ye kya hai.
Headmaster- Uss kaidkhane m jaane k kewal 2 raste hai pahla ek mantra jo sirf mere pass hai abhi aur dusra ye ki aap apni koi sabse priya vastu ko usse de. Maine wo mantra kisi ko bataya nhi hai yaha tak Margret ko bhi nhi to wo jo bhi hoga usne dusra raasta hi chunna hoga aur uss chiz s hum pata laga sakte hai iska.
Henry- wo kaise.
H.master- Wo saari chize ussi kaidkhane m chali jaati hai mujhe bas wo chiz dhundni hai. Henry mujhe lagta hai tum Menka k baare m pata karo aur main dekhta hu usko jisne gudiya ko kaid s nikala.
Henry- thik hai.
Hum logo ne fir iss meeting ko yahi rok diya aur soone chale gaye.

Wahi dusri oor Earth pe Subah hui thi sabhi apne apne kaamo m lage the.
Alex Varsha k pass jane ko nikal raha tha wo uske gufa k pass pahucha aur apne dragon rup m aa gaya fir wo ander jaata hai.
Varsha pata nhi kya kr rahi thi.
Alex- Kaisi ho varsha.
Varsha ne ek bsar uski taraf dekha aur fir apne kaam m lag gayi aur thik hoo bol diya.
Alex jo pure tau m aaya tha k aaj wo Varsha ko patta hi lega wo Varsha k aisa karne s kuch nervous sa ho gaya.
Alex- Wo Varsha mujhe tumhe kuch batana hai.
Varsha- Hmm
Alex- Wo main Dragon prince ho dragon world ka hone wala raja.
Varsha- Haa pata hai mujhe to.
Alex- Mere pass agni manni hai.
Varsha- mere papa n di thi tumhe hai na ab uska kya.
Alex- Main Samrath Saurya ka dragon hu.
Varsha- haa pata hai aur kuch.
Alex chup ho gaya usko samajh nhi aa raha tha ab wo kya bole.
Varsha- Waise tum mujhe roop badalna kab shikha rahe ho yaha rah kr m boor ho rahi hu.
Alex-(Maan m) Haa ye sahi hoga isko roop badalna shikha deta hu fir isko yaha kahi ghumane le jaunga sayad kuch kaam ban jaaye.
Alex- Haa abhi shikha deta hu waise bhi ab thoda waqt hi lagega.
Alex n Varsha ko vo shikhaya aur varsha ne ek ladki kaa roop le liya.
Alex to muh phade bas dekh raha tha usko ghughrale baal, badi badi hari aakhen, gulabi hoonth, sone sa chamakta badan.
Alex- Waah tum to tum to kamaal ki lag rahi ho iss roop m.
Varsha- Iss roop s kya matlab hai kya main dragon roop m achhi nhi lagti.
Alex- Arre nhi mera wo matlab nhi tha tum har roop m acchi lagti ho.
Varsha- Shukriya aacha mujhe naa Kiran didi k pass jaana hai.
Alex- Q
Varsha- Wo unhone mujhse bola tha jab main roop badalna sheekh jaungi to wo mujhe yaha ghumayegi.
Alex- Wo to main bhi kr dunga kya tum mere saath chalogi.
Varsha- Haa thik hai pr mujhe kuch kapde chahiye, ek phone jisse baat karte hai wo aur bhi bahut kuch.
Alex- Haa thik hai chalo main tumhe sab dila dunga.
Alex Varsha k saath nikal jaata hai.
Guffa k bahar ek car khadi thi jisse Alex waha aaya tha.
Ussi car m baith nikal chalte hai dono ek naye mall m P&P mall kuch hi din hue the isse khulle yaha bahut bada mall tha.
Varsha jisko sab kuch Mohini aur kiran n samjha diya tha wo bhi bikul waise hi karti rahi. Alex bhi usko shoping karwata raha uski tariif karta raha pr mall m kuch log the jinko Varsha ko dekh kuch kuch ho raha tha.
"Bhai dekh kra maal aayi hai yaar ek baaar bas ye mill jaye fir to maja hi aaa jaye" - ek aadmi bola.
A2- Abbe naam bol mera usko khud pair faila kr baith jayegi jaa.
A3- Bhai pr uske saath wo ladka(Alex) kon hai dekho kitne dole sholle bana rakhe hai.
A2- Abbe hoga koi usse hame kya hame to uss item s matlab hai.
Ye 5 log the pachon chal pade Varsha ki oor jo Electronic section m phone dekh rahi thi.
Alex usko sab bata raha tha.
Tabhi ek aadmi aata hai uske paas.
A5-(Varsha s) Aae Chamiya chal bhai tere ko bulla rahe hai.
Varsha ko to samjh nhi aaya k ye banda kya bakke jaa raha hai pr Alex uska to gusse s chahra hi laal ho gaya.
Ek punch maara usne uss A5 ko aur wo wahi dher ho gaya.
Varsha bas Alex ko dekhne lagi.
Varsha- Isko q maara.
Alex- Ek min ruko main abhi aaya tum yahi rahna.
Varsha usse puchti rahi pr Alex usne to uss A5 ki tange pakdi aur Electronic section k beech m le jaa kr.
Alex(Chillate hue)- Iss chutiye ka bhai kon hai kisne bheja tha isko.
Baaki k charo uske saamne pahuch gaye.
A1- Tu jaanta hai kiske aadmi p haath uthaya tune ab to uss chamiya k saath teri...
Wo aage kuch bol hi nhi paya q ki Alex ne ek flying kick de dali uske chahre p aur wo gir pada.
A4- Aee tere ko pata hai hum kon hai.
Alex - Kiska aadmi hai usse mere ko kuch nhi lena samjha ye bata isko waha kisne bheja.
A2- Maine bheja bol kya kr lega tu saale ek phone ek phone s tera khandan ko uthwa lunga main.
Alex uske pass gaya aur usko apna phone diya.
Alex- Bsdk socha tha bas tere ko maar nikal jaunga pr ab to tere saath wo bhi jayenge jinko tu bullane wala hai chal no. dail kr main idher hi baitha hu main bhi dekhta hu kon sa top hai tu.
A2 ne pahle to A3,A4 ko kuch ishara kiya jiske baad dono daud pade Alex ki oor par Alex ne dono ko ek ek tapad m hi sulla diya.
A2 ye dekh todha ghabra gaya usne fir call lagaya apne baap ko jo k pradesh ka Health minister tha.
Usne call kr apne baap ko sab bata diya.
Aadmi- Ruk tu wo aate hi honge fir dekh tere saamne nanga....aaaahhh
Uss aadmi ki jibh kat kr niche giri hui thi wo dard s chilla raha tha.
Alex haath m ek khoon s shana hua khanjar liye khada tha.
Alex- uske baare m sochna bhi mat samjha.
Pata nhi bheed m s kisi ladki ko kya shuja k wo chillane lagi.
Ladki- Lund kaat do saale ka bahut fudakta rahta hai bhadwa.
Ek baar to puri bheed ki focus hi uspe chali gayi aur uske thik 10 sec baad ek aur chikh gungi mall m jab sabhi ne dekha to uss aadmi ka sach m Alex n kaat diya tha.
Alex waha s washroom gaya udher haath dhoye apna aur chal diya varsha k saath bahar ki oor kisi ki bhi himmat hi nhi hui usko rokne ki.
Dono car m baithe aur nikal gaye waha .
wo ladki jo chillayi thi wo bhi bhag gayi.
Thodi der baad waha mall m kuch gadiya aa ruki jinme s kuch gunde aur policewale bhi nikle pr ab to sab khatam ho chuka tha bas bheed khadi thi waha uss aadmi ko ghere.
Police kuch karti usse pahle media bhi aa gayi waha.
Reporter- Gaur s dekhiye ye wahi jagah hai jaha pr aaj hamare pradesh k Health minister k bete ki kisi ne....cut oo teri ye to sach m kaat diya re.
Reporter(Police s)- Sir jinda hai chal diye narak side.
P1- Arre mar jaaye oohi sahi hai saala baap beta dunno jina haram kr rakha hai tang aa chuke the hum bhi.
R- sir kiya kaun hai e nek kaam.
P1- Arre dekh rahe h camra m aaya hoga u ruko tanik.
Police wale dekhte rahe pr na to cctv camera m na hi kisi k mobile k video m Alex k saqal aaya tha aur koi bhi usko pahchanta bhi nahi tha.
Alex ne sab gayab kr diya tha.
Alex udher s nikal chala gaya Varsha k saath kagi oor.

Wahi dusri oor ek grah jaha dur dur tak koi dikhayi nhi de raha tha bas lava hi lava bah raha tha. Ussi lava m s ek kalla dragon nikalta hai.
Wo dragon idher udher dekhta hai koi bhi nhitha waha.
B.dragon- Kiski himmat hui mujhe jagane ki.
"Kaise ho mere gulam "-ek awaj aayi.
B.dragon uss awaj ko sunn bahut khush hua.
B.dragon- maalik aap aazad ho gaye aur mujhe lene aaye hai.
Maarcuss- Haa mere gulam haaa ek kaam h tumhare liye.
B.dragon- Boliye malik kya aadesh hai.
Maarcuss-Bansoa m jao waha tabahi machani hai itni tabahi k university m chippe logo ko bahar aana pade.
B.Dragon- Jisa aap kahe malik pr.
Maarcuss- Wo maara gaya wo gaddar tha maine maar diya usse ab tum hi mere dragon sena k senapati ho.
B.dragon- Sukhriya malik.

Aur Maarcuss ki awaj ani band ho gayi aur wo B.Dargon bhi udd gaya kahi jaane k liye.

Wahi Earth pr hi Paridhi uss armdealer ko interrogate kr chuki thi yaa kahu to maar chuki thi usse ek jagah ka pata chala tha jaha ek deal honi thi 4 din baad aur un terrorists m s kuch waha aane wale the.

Paridhi ne pahle iski report kiran ko di phir target practice k liye chali gayi.

Wahi Alex dwara kiye gaya kaand hi dikhaya jaa raha tha har jagah T.V p.
Shamm ho gayi thi Alex Pradeep k ghar pahucha uske haathon m kuch suitcases the saath m Varsha bhi thi. Dono ka Kiran n acche s welcome kiya Varsha ko apna cousin bata kr.

King · May 30, 2020

Bechara Alex bhi ladkiyo ke nakhre na samjh pa raha :haha:

Black water · May 30, 2020

Fabulous update bhai

Vickey1211 · May 30, 2020

Ristrcted said:
UPDATE- 55

Ab tak

Bansoa m us gudiya ka aaatank badta hi jaa raha tha wahi Earth p Alex Varsha ko rijhane ki kosis m laga tha. Wahi dusri oor Paridhi ek kadam aur aage badh chuki thi yaani uss Arm dealer ko wo pakad chuki thi jo usko Plane blast karne wale terrorist group k pass le jaati.

Aage.

Pahle Bansoa chalte hai jaha Main khana khane k baad Battle ground m tha sabhi k saath.
Main- Maana hum usko khatam nhi kr satke pr kya usse rok bhi nhi sakte.
Headmaster- Maine apne hisab s har wo tarika aazma liya hai pr kamiyab nhi ho paya.
Margret- Wo jo tumne wo locket di thi naa usse kuch nhi ho sakta kya.
Main- Nhi Margret wo bas kisi ko dream magic s bacha sakta hai.
N.mom- Main kuch bolu.
Main- Haa boliye.
N.mom- Jaha tak mujhe pata hai koi bhi apni puri shaktiyon ko kisi chiz m bina kisi madad k nhi daal sakta.
Rita- To aap kah rahi ho koi tha jisne Menka ki madad ki thi.
N.mom- Haa koi to hoga warna ye mumkin hi nhi aur fir ye bhi to socho wo gudiya aazad kaise hui iss university m kaise aayi.
Headmaster- Jaha tak university m aaane ka sawal hai to wo yahi thi issi university k ander pr koi uss jagah nhi jaa sakta tha siway kuch logo k.
Main- Kya wo gudiya yahi thi pr q mera matlab itni khatarnak chiz ko yaha q rakha tha.
Headmaster- Saurya tum bhul rahe ho ye universe ki sabse surakshit jagaho m s ek hai yaha koi bhi nhi aa sakta iss gudiya ko aazad karane.
Main- Nhi aa sakta tha q ki ab wo gudiya aazad ho gayi hai.
Henry- Ek baat to clear hai ye kaam kisi naye student yaa naye staff member n ki hogi q ki agar koi purana hota to wo ye pahle hi kar chuka hota.
Main- Saayad tum sahi ho pr kuch hai jo choot raha hai.
Rita- Kya tumhe lagta hai in sab m Jordon ka haath hai.
Main- Kuch kuch.
Margret- Pr wo aisa q karega matlab usko kya jaroorat pad gayi Bansoa khali karane ki.
Main- Bansoa khali karana to uska maksad tha hi nhi agar aisa hota to wo gudiya sangeeta madam tak naa pahuchti q ki unki maut k baad to waise bhi wo gudiya khatam ho jaati naa yaha wo kuch aur hi soch raha tha.
Henry- Kya ho sakta hai.
Mian- Kuch baaton p agar gaur kiya jaaye to hame ye sab pata lag sakta hai pr uske liye 2 logo k baare m jaanna hoga pahla wo jisne Menka ki madad ki thi uss gudiya m apni saari takat daalne m aur dusra wo jisne uss Gudiya ko aazad karaya hai. Headmaster aap Menka k baare m sab pata lagaiye aur Henry tum uske baare m jisne uss gudiya ko aazad karaya hai.
Henry- Pr uska pata kaise chalega.
Headmaster- wo jo bhi hoga usne apni koi kimti chiz di hogi tabhi wo uss kaidkhane tk gaya hoga jaha Gudiya kaid thi.
Main- Ab ye kya hai.
Headmaster- Uss kaidkhane m jaane k kewal 2 raste hai pahla ek mantra jo sirf mere pass hai abhi aur dusra ye ki aap apni koi sabse priya vastu ko usse de. Maine wo mantra kisi ko bataya nhi hai yaha tak Margret ko bhi nhi to wo jo bhi hoga usne dusra raasta hi chunna hoga aur uss chiz s hum pata laga sakte hai iska.
Henry- wo kaise.
H.master- Wo saari chize ussi kaidkhane m chali jaati hai mujhe bas wo chiz dhundni hai. Henry mujhe lagta hai tum Menka k baare m pata karo aur main dekhta hu usko jisne gudiya ko kaid s nikala.
Henry- thik hai.
Hum logo ne fir iss meeting ko yahi rok diya aur soone chale gaye.

Wahi dusri oor Earth pe Subah hui thi sabhi apne apne kaamo m lage the.
Alex Varsha k pass jane ko nikal raha tha wo uske gufa k pass pahucha aur apne dragon rup m aa gaya fir wo ander jaata hai.
Varsha pata nhi kya kr rahi thi.
Alex- Kaisi ho varsha.
Varsha ne ek bsar uski taraf dekha aur fir apne kaam m lag gayi aur thik hoo bol diya.
Alex jo pure tau m aaya tha k aaj wo Varsha ko patta hi lega wo Varsha k aisa karne s kuch nervous sa ho gaya.
Alex- Wo Varsha mujhe tumhe kuch batana hai.
Varsha- Hmm
Alex- Wo main Dragon prince ho dragon world ka hone wala raja.
Varsha- Haa pata hai mujhe to.
Alex- Mere pass agni manni hai.
Varsha- mere papa n di thi tumhe hai na ab uska kya.
Alex- Main Samrath Saurya ka dragon hu.
Varsha- haa pata hai aur kuch.
Alex chup ho gaya usko samajh nhi aa raha tha ab wo kya bole.
Varsha- Waise tum mujhe roop badalna kab shikha rahe ho yaha rah kr m boor ho rahi hu.
Alex-(Maan m) Haa ye sahi hoga isko roop badalna shikha deta hu fir isko yaha kahi ghumane le jaunga sayad kuch kaam ban jaaye.
Alex- Haa abhi shikha deta hu waise bhi ab thoda waqt hi lagega.
Alex n Varsha ko vo shikhaya aur varsha ne ek ladki kaa roop le liya.
Alex to muh phade bas dekh raha tha usko ghughrale baal, badi badi hari aakhen, gulabi hoonth, sone sa chamakta badan.
Alex- Waah tum to tum to kamaal ki lag rahi ho iss roop m.
Varsha- Iss roop s kya matlab hai kya main dragon roop m achhi nhi lagti.
Alex- Arre nhi mera wo matlab nhi tha tum har roop m acchi lagti ho.
Varsha- Shukriya aacha mujhe naa Kiran didi k pass jaana hai.
Alex- Q
Varsha- Wo unhone mujhse bola tha jab main roop badalna sheekh jaungi to wo mujhe yaha ghumayegi.
Alex- Wo to main bhi kr dunga kya tum mere saath chalogi.
Varsha- Haa thik hai pr mujhe kuch kapde chahiye, ek phone jisse baat karte hai wo aur bhi bahut kuch.
Alex- Haa thik hai chalo main tumhe sab dila dunga.
Alex Varsha k saath nikal jaata hai.
Guffa k bahar ek car khadi thi jisse Alex waha aaya tha.
Ussi car m baith nikal chalte hai dono ek naye mall m P&P mall kuch hi din hue the isse khulle yaha bahut bada mall tha.
Varsha jisko sab kuch Mohini aur kiran n samjha diya tha wo bhi bikul waise hi karti rahi. Alex bhi usko shoping karwata raha uski tariif karta raha pr mall m kuch log the jinko Varsha ko dekh kuch kuch ho raha tha.
"Bhai dekh kra maal aayi hai yaar ek baaar bas ye mill jaye fir to maja hi aaa jaye" - ek aadmi bola.
A2- Abbe naam bol mera usko khud pair faila kr baith jayegi jaa.
A3- Bhai pr uske saath wo ladka(Alex) kon hai dekho kitne dole sholle bana rakhe hai.
A2- Abbe hoga koi usse hame kya hame to uss item s matlab hai.
Ye 5 log the pachon chal pade Varsha ki oor jo Electronic section m phone dekh rahi thi.
Alex usko sab bata raha tha.
Tabhi ek aadmi aata hai uske paas.
A5-(Varsha s) Aae Chamiya chal bhai tere ko bulla rahe hai.
Varsha ko to samjh nhi aaya k ye banda kya bakke jaa raha hai pr Alex uska to gusse s chahra hi laal ho gaya.
Ek punch maara usne uss A5 ko aur wo wahi dher ho gaya.
Varsha bas Alex ko dekhne lagi.
Varsha- Isko q maara.
Alex- Ek min ruko main abhi aaya tum yahi rahna.
Varsha usse puchti rahi pr Alex usne to uss A5 ki tange pakdi aur Electronic section k beech m le jaa kr.
Alex(Chillate hue)- Iss chutiye ka bhai kon hai kisne bheja tha isko.
Baaki k charo uske saamne pahuch gaye.
A1- Tu jaanta hai kiske aadmi p haath uthaya tune ab to uss chamiya k saath teri...
Wo aage kuch bol hi nhi paya q ki Alex ne ek flying kick de dali uske chahre p aur wo gir pada.
A4- Aee tere ko pata hai hum kon hai.
Alex - Kiska aadmi hai usse mere ko kuch nhi lena samjha ye bata isko waha kisne bheja.
A2- Maine bheja bol kya kr lega tu saale ek phone ek phone s tera khandan ko uthwa lunga main.
Alex uske pass gaya aur usko apna phone diya.
Alex- Bsdk socha tha bas tere ko maar nikal jaunga pr ab to tere saath wo bhi jayenge jinko tu bullane wala hai chal no. dail kr main idher hi baitha hu main bhi dekhta hu kon sa top hai tu.
A2 ne pahle to A3,A4 ko kuch ishara kiya jiske baad dono daud pade Alex ki oor par Alex ne dono ko ek ek tapad m hi sulla diya.
A2 ye dekh todha ghabra gaya usne fir call lagaya apne baap ko jo k pradesh ka Health minister tha.
Usne call kr apne baap ko sab bata diya.
Aadmi- Ruk tu wo aate hi honge fir dekh tere saamne nanga....aaaahhh
Uss aadmi ki jibh kat kr niche giri hui thi wo dard s chilla raha tha.
Alex haath m ek khoon s shana hua khanjar liye khada tha.
Alex- uske baare m sochna bhi mat samjha.
Pata nhi bheed m s kisi ladki ko kya shuja k wo chillane lagi.
Ladki- Lund kaat do saale ka bahut fudakta rahta hai bhadwa.
Ek baar to puri bheed ki focus hi uspe chali gayi aur uske thik 10 sec baad ek aur chikh gungi mall m jab sabhi ne dekha to uss aadmi ka sach m Alex n kaat diya tha.
Alex waha s washroom gaya udher haath dhoye apna aur chal diya varsha k saath bahar ki oor kisi ki bhi himmat hi nhi hui usko rokne ki.
Dono car m baithe aur nikal gaye waha .
wo ladki jo chillayi thi wo bhi bhag gayi.
Thodi der baad waha mall m kuch gadiya aa ruki jinme s kuch gunde aur policewale bhi nikle pr ab to sab khatam ho chuka tha bas bheed khadi thi waha uss aadmi ko ghere.
Police kuch karti usse pahle media bhi aa gayi waha.
Reporter- Gaur s dekhiye ye wahi jagah hai jaha pr aaj hamare pradesh k Health minister k bete ki kisi ne....cut oo teri ye to sach m kaat diya re.
Reporter(Police s)- Sir jinda hai chal diye narak side.
P1- Arre mar jaaye oohi sahi hai saala baap beta dunno jina haram kr rakha hai tang aa chuke the hum bhi.
R- sir kiya kaun hai e nek kaam.
P1- Arre dekh rahe h camra m aaya hoga u ruko tanik.
Police wale dekhte rahe pr na to cctv camera m na hi kisi k mobile k video m Alex k saqal aaya tha aur koi bhi usko pahchanta bhi nahi tha.
Alex ne sab gayab kr diya tha.
Alex udher s nikal chala gaya Varsha k saath kagi oor.

Wahi dusri oor ek grah jaha dur dur tak koi dikhayi nhi de raha tha bas lava hi lava bah raha tha. Ussi lava m s ek kalla dragon nikalta hai.
Wo dragon idher udher dekhta hai koi bhi nhitha waha.
B.dragon- Kiski himmat hui mujhe jagane ki.
"Kaise ho mere gulam "-ek awaj aayi.
B.dragon uss awaj ko sunn bahut khush hua.
B.dragon- maalik aap aazad ho gaye aur mujhe lene aaye hai.
Maarcuss- Haa mere gulam haaa ek kaam h tumhare liye.
B.dragon- Boliye malik kya aadesh hai.
Maarcuss-Bansoa m jao waha tabahi machani hai itni tabahi k university m chippe logo ko bahar aana pade.
B.Dragon- Jisa aap kahe malik pr.
Maarcuss- Wo maara gaya wo gaddar tha maine maar diya usse ab tum hi mere dragon sena k senapati ho.
B.dragon- Sukhriya malik.

Aur Maarcuss ki awaj ani band ho gayi aur wo B.Dargon bhi udd gaya kahi jaane k liye.

Wahi Earth pr hi Paridhi uss armdealer ko interrogate kr chuki thi yaa kahu to maar chuki thi usse ek jagah ka pata chala tha jaha ek deal honi thi 4 din baad aur un terrorists m s kuch waha aane wale the.

Paridhi ne pahle iski report kiran ko di phir target practice k liye chali gayi.

Wahi Alex dwara kiye gaya kaand hi dikhaya jaa raha tha har jagah T.V p.
Shamm ho gayi thi Alex Pradeep k ghar pahucha uske haathon m kuch suitcases the saath m Varsha bhi thi. Dono ka Kiran n acche s welcome kiya Varsha ko apna cousin bata kr.

Mast update h Bhai
Maza aa gya

Avir · May 30, 2020

Nice one

Shahrukh · May 30, 2020

Awesome update

Vickey1211 · May 30, 2020

Silentreader0 · May 30, 2020

Awesome updates

aks 21 · May 30, 2020

superb one bhai

abhi1008 · May 30, 2020

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UPDATE- 12

ABTAK
MOM AUR MAASI CHAT P APNI BAATEN KHATAM KAR APNE APNE ROOM MAIN SOONE CHALE GAYE PR AANE WALE TUFAN KA UNKO PATA NAHI THA

AAGE

RAAT KA WAQT THA EK CAR SAHAR KI OOR AA RAHI THI. USME KUL 3 LOG THE EK AADMI , EK AURAT AUR EK LADKI.CAR LADKI DRIVE KAR RAHI THI. CAR M BAITHE SAARE LOG BADE HI KHUSH NAJAR AA RAHE THE.
CHALIYE DEKHTE HAI YE KAHA JA RAHE HAI.
AURAT-BETA ABHI KITNI DER AUR LAGEGI HAME WAHA JANE MAIN.
AADMI- BETA JARA APNI MUMMY KO BOLO SABR RAKHE HAM SUBAH TAK HI PAHUCH PAAYENGE.
AURAT- BETA TUM JARA APNE PAPA S BOLO MUJHSE BAAT KARNE KI JARURAT NAHI.
LADKI - KYA MUMMY PAPA YE KYA LAGA K RAKHA HAI EK TO RAAT H 3 BAJ RAHE HAI AUR AAP LOG BAS LADE JAA RAHE HO.
AURAT-BETA MAIN KAHA LAD RAHI HU TERE PAPA S MAIN TO INSE BAAT BHI NAHI KARNA CHAHTI PR EK YE HAI JO BAHANA BANA K MUJHSE BAAT KR RAHE HAI.
AADMI- ARRE MERI JAAN AB MAAF BHI KAR DO BHUL GAYA THA EXTRA TYRE RAKHNA MUJHE KYA PATA THA K CAR PUNCURE HO JAYEGI.
LADKI- HA MUMMY PAPA N THODI NA JAAN BUJH KAR TYRE PUNCURE KIYA THA TAKI HUM LATE HO JAYE.
AAURAT- DEKHO SURU HO GAYI AAPNE PAPA KI CHAMCHI.
LADKI- AB AAP MUJHSE JYADA PYAR SAIFALI(GUDIYA) S KARTI HO TO HAMNE BHI AAPNI TEAM BANA LI.
AADMI - AUR NAHI TO KYA.
AAURAT - THIK HAI TO TUM DONO WAHA TEAM - TEAM KHELTE RAHNA AUR MAIN AAPNI GUDIYA K SATH USKE YAHA HI RAHUNGI AUR TUM DONO KI WAHA PE ENTRY BHI BAND KRWA DUNGI.
LADKI- ESSE KAISE ENTRY BAND KRWA DOGI AAP MAIN BHI GUDIYA K PASS RAHUNGI,MAIN TO JAATE HI USKE ROOM M SIFT HO JAUNGI.AAP DONO KO JANHA MAN KARE WAHA CHALE JANA.
AADMI- HA YE SAHI HAI JINKE LIYE COLLAGE N GHAR DIYA HAI WAHI LOG US GHAR M NAHI RAHENGE WAAH TO MAIN KYA WAHA BAITH MACHHAR MARUNGA.
AURAT- AAPNE UNHE HAMRE AANE KI KHABAR DI THI NA.
AADMI- MAINE USSE AAJ S 2 DIN BAAD AANE KA BATAYA THA TAKI UNKO SURPRISE DE SAKE.
LADKI- WOW PAPA AB AAYEGA MAJA HUM NA SUBAH SUBAH WAHA JAKE UNKO SURPRISE DENGE. GUDIYA BHI KHUSH HO JAYEGI.
AAURAT- HA YE SAHI HAI.

INKO AAPNE RASTE JAANE DETE HAI CHALIYE TAB TK HUM KAHI AUR CHALTE HAI

EK VAN HAI JO KI BADI HI TEJ RAFTAR M JAA RAHI HAI ISS VAN M KUCH LOG BAITHE HUE HAI AUR 3 BOORIYAN BHI HAI ISME TO. VAN EK BADE GHAR K SAAMNE S GUJARTI HAI AUR 3 NO BOORIYON KO WAHI GIRA K CHALI JAATI HAI.GHAR KA GUARD YE DEKH CHILLATE HUE USS VAN K PICHHE BHAGTA HAI PR WO VAN TO KABKI AANDERE M GAYAB C HO GAYI THI.
GUARD WAPAS AATA HAI UN BOORIYON K PAAS AUR DARTE HUE UNKO KHOLNE K LIYE JATA HAI BOORIYA KHOLTE HI DAR K MAARE USKA KHOON SUKH JAATA HAI. WO TURANT PHONE NIKALTA HAI AUR GHAR K ANDER CALL LAGATA HAI SURU MAIN TO KISI N PHONE NAHI UTTAYA PR DOBARA TRY KARNE PR KISSI N CALL PICK KIYA.
GUARD-(KAPTE HUE) SAAB BAHAR CHOTE SAAB KI LASH PADI HAI BORI M
JISNE CALL UTHAYA THA USKO TO YAKIN HI NAHI HO RAHA THA JIS BHAI KI JIS BHAI KI W DIN PAHLE BLAST M MOUT HO GAYI USKI LAASH KAHA S AA GAYI.
UDHAR S - YE KYA BAAK RAHE HO MADAN .
GUARD(MADAN) - SAAB MAIN SACH KAH RAHA HU IDHAR 3 LAASH PADE HAI GATE P EK VAN S KISI N YAHA CHODA AUR BHAG GAYE. EK LAASH CHOTE SAAB KI HAI EK UNKE DOST SANJAY SAAB KI AUR EK PATA NAHI KISKI HAI.
UDDHAR S- MADAN TUM UNKO AB TOUCH BHI NAHI KAROGE MAIN AA RAHA HU.
CALL CUT

ABHI CALL CUT HI HUA THA K USKA PHONE PHIR BAJA.
PHONE- MIL GAYI AAPNE BHAI KI BODY. USKE SATH NA 2 AUR KO BHI BHEJA HAI TERE LIYE MLA SURENDER SINGH.
SURENDER - KON BOL RAHA HAI MADAR***D.
PHONE- ARRE TERI JUBAN TO TERE KARNAMO KI TARAH HI KAALI HAI.CHAL BATA TA HU K MAIN KAUN HU, MAIN HU TERE BHAI KO BERAHMI S MARENE WALA TU JB USKI BODY DEKHEGA NA TO TUJHE PATA CHALEGA K MAIN KYA CHIZ HU.
SURENDER- BSDK ABHI TERE KO PATA NHI KI KISSE PANGA LIYA HAI TUNNE AB APNI MOUT K DIN GINNA SURU KR LE. MERE BHAI KO MAAR K TUNE SAHI NHI KIYA.
PHONE-ABE OO CHUTIYE TU TO MUJHE SAHI GALAT MAT HI SIKHA. KYA TERI FAMILY KO PATA HAI K TU DON HAI AGAR TU CHAHTA HAI K PATA N CHALE UNHE AUR TERA YE DHONG CHALTA RAHE TO MERI BAAT SUNO IN LAASHO K BAARE M SIRF TERE KO AUR ANKIT KAPOOR(SANJAY KAPOOR KA BHAI) KO HI PATA CHALNA CHAHIYE WARNA SAARI DUNIYA K SAMNE TUM DONO KI POLL KHOL DUNGA LAASHO K SAATH EK PEN DRIVE BHI BHEJI HAI JISSE ANKIT K SAATH HI DEKHNA TAKI DONO EK SAATH HI SAMAJH JAO.
CALL CUT
SURENDER(MAAN M)- YE KON SA DUSMAN AAGAYA AB HAMARE MUJHE SABHI KO BULANA CHAHIYE WO APNE ROOM M GAYA JANHA USKI BIWI SO RAHI THI.SURENDER N ALMARI K SAFE S EK PHONE NIKALA AUR USME EK "URGENT MEETING NOW" TYPE KR SABKO BHEJ DIYA. MESSAGE BHEJNE K BAAD WO BAHAR NIKLA AUR UN LAASHO K PASS PAHUCHA. APNE BHAI KI LAASH KI ESSI HALAT DEKH WO GUSSA AUR EMOTIONAL HO GAYA PR FIR KHUD KO CONTROL KR LAASON KO DEKHNE LAGA. USKO EK PENDRIVE MILLA JISPE "K" LIKHA THA. USNE PEN DRIVE NIKALI AUR MADAN S BOL KR 3 NO LAASHON KO APNI CAR M RAKHNE KO BOLA AUR KHUD TAIYAAR HONE CHALA GAYA.

Karib 15 min baad Surender apni car leke nikal gaya aur kuch dur jaane k baad ek hotel m pahuch gaya. Hotel k bahar lagbhag abhi 20 log hatho m guns leke khade the .
Surender utra aur unme s kuch ko laasho ko meeting room m laane ko bol chala gaya.
Meeting room m uske alawa 3 aur log the.ye sabhi Dons the alag alag illako k.Inme Ankit kapoor bhi tha.
(Baaki dono ko main D1 aur D2 kahunga)
D2 jo in sab ka boss tha wo bola.
D2-Bolo surender(surn) tumne raat k 11 baje hame yaha q bulaya wo bhi itna urgentlty.
Surn.-(Ankit ki oor dekh bola) Ankit tumhara bhai kaha hai abhi.
Ankit-wo to kuch din phle kisi deal k liye gaya tha Shivpur fir sayad wapas chala gaya ho Delhi.
Surn.-kya tumne usse baat ki hai uske baad .
Ankit - arre abhi kuch dino s ek tender k picche pada tha isliye usse baat hi nhi kr paya.
D1-Surender tum isse ye sub q puch rahe ho aur ye meeting q bulayi hai.
Abhi D1 ki baat khatam hi hui thi k room ka darwaja kula aur kuch log ander laashon ko leke aaye aur chale gaye.
Ankit apne bhai k laash ko dekh kr usse bahut bada jhatka laga wo apne bhai k bahut hi close tha aur uski essi halat dekh wo baukhla gaya aur Surender ka gala pakad liya. Wahi baki k dono ko samaj nhi aa raha tha k ye hua kya hai.Phir un done n Surender ko Ankit k pakad s chudwaya aur fir
D2- saant ho jao Ankit yaha p sirf Sanjay ki hi nahi balki lucky ki bhi laash hai.Mujhe nahi lagta k issne inko kuch kiya hoga.
D1- Ha boss aap sahi kahte hai pr in dono k sath iss Guddu ki laash yaha kaise.
Surender fir unhe saari baat batata hai sath hi call wali baat bhi.
Ankit ye sun aur gussa ho jatta hai pr kuch krta nhi.Fir sabhi log pendrive m kya hai dekhne ko taiyaar ho jaate hai.
Pendrive k ander kuch documents the aur ek audio file tha.
jab sabhi n documents khole to unka to dimag hi ghum gaya ye documents m sabut the Ankit aur Surender k khilaf k kaise wo gair kaanoni kaam karte hai.
Fir us Audio clip ki baari thi.
Clip- Ha to Surender mujhe lagta hai tunne aur Ankit ne apne bhaiyon ki laashen dekh li hogi aur tum dono k khilaf k saare sabut bhi. Ab dhyan s meri baaton ko sunno tum dono ko kissi bhi tarah s Pankaj Chauhan ko India wapas laana hoga aur haa agar apni pahchan duniya k saamne nhi lana chahte to in 3no k baare m kisi ko kuch pata nhi chalna chahiye jab tak pankaj India n aajae.Uske baad tum dono ki jaise aur jo bhi ichha ho karo in laashon ka pr agar kisi aur ko pahle pata chala to..
Aur haa Main apna naam to batana hi bhul gaya Main hu King.
{ Ye saare kaam karne to maine Sameera dinner k baad room m anne k baad bola tha krne ko taki mujhe Pankaj mil sake jinda ussi ki madad s to main apne pariwar ko ek kar sakta hu }

Audio file sunne k baad ander baithe logo n king ki baat maan ni hi sahi samji.

Next Morning

Aaj bhi wahi sab hua tha mere sath wo dard, ray bla...bla...bla...

Aaj bhi main 4 baje uth gaya jab main utha to mujhe bahut si aawaje sunayi de rahi thi jaise m kisi k kharate ki pani k tap tap ki aur bhi choti choti chizo ki awaze.Ye sab sun main baith gaya k tabhi mujhe mera gym room dikhai dene laga.pr ye kaise ho sakta hai yaha to diwaar thi mere kuch samajh m nahi aaya main dhere dhere gym k taraf badne laga todhe door jane p mere sir p chot lagi jo ki diwar s lagi thi.Main us diwar ko dekh nhi sakta tha pr chu skta tha ye mere ko bada ajeeb laga ab main fir s ghooma bathroom ki or aur yaha bhi same tha no diwar main fir aage bada aur iss baar bhi mujhe chot lagi diwar s chot lagne k baad mujhe kisi k hasne ki aawaje sunayi dene lagi. Ye awaj Didi ki thi.
Shilpa Didi- arre aap to bilkul buddhu ho wo bhi bahut bade ek baar jab chot lag gai to fir q gaye chot khane.
Main - Didi ye kya ho raha hai mujhe ye diwaae dikhai q nhi de rahi hai jabki mai unhe chu skta hu kya hai ye sab?
Didi- Aap bhi na arre aapko apne 5th chakra jagane k baad aapki ye purani power "Super vision or Super listening ability" milli hai.
Main - kya
Didi - haa ab jab bhi aap kisi darwaje ya diwaar ko gaur s dekhoge to unke aar paar dekh sakte ho aur waha ki awaje bhi sun sakte ho.
Main-oooh.Pr abhi aapne kaha tha purani power uska kya matlab hai.
Meri ye baat sun Didi toda paresan ho gayi k unhone galti kr di hai pr khud ko sambhal kr.
Didi- arre maine aisa kab kaha lagta hai aapke kaan baj rahe hai.
Main- Sayad aur ek baat aap sun lo ab na aap mujko ye aap-aap nhi bologi samjhi bada hi ood lagta hai yaar aapko meri kasam.
Meri ye baat sun Didi ka para chad gaya wo apni power s shidha pahuch gayi mere room m aur aate hi ek laafa jad diya.
Chaaataaak .
Aur boli.
Didi- Aainda s ye kasam de k baate mat manwaya karna warna dekh lena pahle tujhe maarungi fir khud ko.
Main-(gaal sahalate hue) arre aap to aise baate kr rahi ho jaise aap meri patni ho.
Didi(apne maan m)-Patni hi to hu m
{Ek baat clear kr deta hu Didi mere maan ki baat sun sakti hai pr main unke maan ki baat nhi jaan sakta}

Didi-tum aaj k baad mujhe bhi aap- aap nhi bologe ab tumhe meri kasam hai aur aage s ye kasam wali baate mat karna.
Main-Thik hai didi jaise aap kaho pr aapko bhi apne boss p haath nhi uthana chahiye(majak m)
Didi- Ab s tu koi boss woss nhi hai mera main badi hu na tere s ab tu jo bhi karega mujhse puch k hi karega.
Main-thik hai pr base p meri kuch izzat hai usko rahne dena fir main aapki saari baate manuga. Chalo ab aur kuch baaki hai yaa main fresh hone jaun abhi ek baat to baski hai pr wo main tujhe car m bataungi.aaj s tu mere saath hi base p jayega.
Main-aur fufa ji unka kya.
Didi-unko main sambhal lungi.chal ab main chalti hu.
ye bol wo mere room s gayab ho gayi aur main fresh ho kr gym room m chala gaya. Fir karib 5:40 m ghar s nikal gaya park ki taraf.
Mere ghar s niklte hi kuch essa hua ghar m ki .....

Ab tak k saare updates ek se badh kar ek hai........toh hero family ko ek karne mein laga hua hai.....good

Awesome story & writing skill

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