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Fantasy Saurya - ek youdha (Completed)

Kya mujhe mere likhne ka tarika change karna chahiye

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Hi friend maine xforum pr kafi stories padi hai aur ab mai bhi apni ek story post karne ja raha hu ab jyada wakt na lete huye
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Posted bro
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Superb Update Bro...
Waiting For Next
Thanks Reza bhai
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Amazing update
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Update - 58 (continues)


Maine ek portal khola aur Margret ko aage jaane ko bola. Jaise hi wo portal ke uss oor gayi maine portal band kar diya.

B.S- Abbe ye kya kiya ?

Main- Usko battle groud bhej diya taaki uss Black dragon se nipat saku.

Maine fir ek portal banaya jo ussi jagah tha jaha humpe aag se hamla hua tha. Wo ab yaha nahi tha aur ye illaka jalla hua tha aag hi aag thi har jagah. Maine apni stick se jitna ho sake utni aag bhujhane laga par aaj sayad meri kismat kharab thi.

Main ye kar hi raha tha ke mere pichhe se kisi ke hasne ki aawajen aane lagi. Maine mud kar dekha to waha ek aurat uss gudiya ko liye khadi thi yaani uss gudiya ke vas mein thi. Usne mere uper kisi ray se attack kiya par main jhuk kar usse bach gaya.
Gudiya mere upar waise hi rays se attack karti rahi aur main kisi tarah bachta raha. Maine bahut se jaadu try kiye uss aurat par ki wo uss gudiya ke vas se nikal jaaye par kuch bhi kaam nahi aaya.

Main abhi kuch aur karta usse pahle dusri musibat aa gayi mere picche se wo black dragon wo pahuch gaya udher aur usne wapas se hamla karna shuru kar diya.

Main dono taraf se ghir chukka tha ab bhagne ke alawa koi raasta nahi dikh raha tha.

B.S- Abbe jo ek ke liye soch kar aaya tha wo dono ke saath kar sayad kaam kar jaaye.

Main- Haa ye bhi karke dekh leta hu.

Gudiya ne ek ray fekka meri oor maine ek potal banaya jiske ek chhor se wo ray ander gaya aur dusre chhor se wo bahar gaya aur siddhe Black Dragon ke puch par lagi.
Black dragon ko bahut dard hua isse aur saath hi uska gussa bhi badh gaya.
Wo dard aur gusse mein chikhne laga aur apne aag fekne ki tiwrata bada di.

Main to bas intezar kar raha tha iska main portal kholta jiske ek shirre se wo aag ke golle ander jaate aur dusre shiree se Black dragon ke sharir par hi lagte jisse usko dard hone laga aur dekhte hi dekhte uski halat kharab ho gayi aur wo udata hua waha se chala gaya ab bache the main aur wo aurat jisme haath mein wo gusiya thi.

Main- B.S bhai isko kaise rooku ab.

B.S- Saurya tere mein ab utni taakat naa rahi ke tu isko pakad paaye. Isko bhi bhaga dete hai.

Main- Haa tu sahi hai mujhe takawat mehsus ho rahi hai kuch kuch. Ab bata kaise bagaye isko.

B.S- Saayad Kappa ki talwar kaam aa jaaye waise bhi wahi hai jo black magic ko abhi tak todne mein kaam aa raha hai.

Main- Hmm sahi bola usko bhi dekh lete hai.
Maine Kaapa ki talwar ko yaad kiya par wo nahi aayi.

B.S- Tu bahut thak chuka hai bhai ab kuch nahi ho sakta chal nikal yaha se.

Main- Par wo aurat uska kya.

B.S- Hum kuch nahi kar sakte bhai khass... Abbe wo raakh uss ladki ki raakh tere pass hai naa usko fek iss aurat par ye nikal jaayegi iske vas se.

Main- Kyun naa main ye raakh uss gudiya par hi daal du?

B.S- Tere mein utni takat nahi bachi hai bhai ke tu fir uss gudiya ko sambhal paaye. Uss rakh ke lagne ke kuch der baad tak wo gudiya bahut khatarnak ho jaayegi aur tu abhi kamjor hai meri baat maan abhi bas uss aurat ko aazad kara de hum kal uss gudiya ko pakad lenge.

Main- Thik hai.

Maine thodi si raakh nikali uss ladki ki aur usko uss aurat ke upar fek diya jiske baad wo aurat hawa mein ghumne lagi aur fir jamin pe girne wali thi ke maine usko wind magic se baccha liya par uske baad meri bhi aakhen band ho gayi.

Wahi dusri taraf Earth par alag hi jhamela chal raha tha.

Alex aur Varsha dono mein hi bahas ho rahi thi dono full nashe mein the.

Tabhi pata nahi Varsha ko kya hua usne Alex ke baal pakad kud ki oor khicha aur apne chahre ke bilkul karib le aayi aur fir lip to lip ek jordar kiss kar di.

Chaliye thoda picche chalte hai ye jaan ne ke liye ki hua kya tha yaha inke saath.

Kiran varsha ko pahle to beauty parlour le gayi thi fir kuch shoping karwayi aur kuch samjha kar ghar le gayi.

Varsha bhi Uske kahe anusar ghar par pura ban than kar baith gayi kuch der baad Alex ghar ke ander aaya aur uski nazar jaise hi Varsha par padi wo bas usko dekhta hi rah gaya par varsha wo muh banna kar waha se uth kar chali gayi.
Alex ke saath Pradeep bhi tha.
Pradeep- Chal bhai tera mood set karne ki saari taiyaari ho gayi hai.

Alex- Yaar Varsha naaraz hai kya mujhse dekha kaise muh banna chali gayi.

Pradeep- Kab aur wo naraz kyun hogi tere se tu chal mere saath .

Pradeep Alex ko chaat par le gaya jaha kappa ne pahle se intezam kar rakhe the. Kappa ne ek jaddi butti laayi thi jo bahut nashili hoti hai jisse kisi ko bhi nasha ho sakta hai usne uss jaddi butti ko milla diya bear ki bottles mein.

Wahi nichhe Alex ke jaane ke baad.
Varsha(Kiran se)- Didi wo to upar chala gaya.
Kiran- Haa to tu bhi jaa naa par baat nahi karni hai bas uske saamne gussa hone ki acting karo.
Varsha- Par wo to Pradeep bhai ke saath gaye upar naaa.
Kiran- Arre tum jao to Pradeep ko mein dekhti hu.
Kiran ne pradeep ko nichhe bulla liya.
Varsha upar gayi to dekha ke Kappa aur Alex baithe the haathon mein ek bottle liye.
Varsha ne utshukta purvak Kappa se puch a ke ye kya hai kappa ke bolne se pahle Alex ne bol diya ye bear hai isse insan pite hai aur saath hi usko bhi offer kar diya binna uss jaddi butti ke baare mein jaane.
Kappa- Arre yaar isse nahi pachegi ye.
Alex- Arre ye Dragon hai aur hum dragons ko inn bears se kuch nahi hota (Varsha se) Ye lo try karo bahut accha hai.
Varsha ne usse naa le kar Kaapa se bottle maangi. Kappa ne shuru mein manna kiya par fir haar maan kar bottle de diya.
Kappa(Khud se)- Kappa beta ab bhag yaha se dono dragons ko jab chadegi to pata nahi kya hoga.

Kappa waha se nikal gaya ab waha sirf Alex Varsha aur bear ki bottles hi bachi thi.

Varsha ne ek sip liya yo usko kadwi lagi aur usne bear muh se nikal di aur ajeeb sa muh banane lagi jisko dekh Alex ko hassi aa gayi.

Alex ko khud par hasta dekh Varsha ko gussa aane laga usne fir bear ki bottle uthayi aur ek sip mein bottle hi khali kar di.

Varsha- Dusri do.

Alex ne usko dusra bhi pass kar diya Varsha wo bhi pi gayi. Alex ki thoda thoda pitta raha aur fir dono par uss jaddi butti ka asar hone laga.

Varsha- Tum mujhpe has rahe the naa?.
Alex- Haa tum par has raha tha.
Varsha- Mujhse baat mat karo main naraz hu tumse.
Alex- Main karunga baat tumse batao kyun naraz ho.
Varsha-Tumne mujhe daata naa iss liye ab aur baat nahi.
Alex- Main to karunga baat tum kya kar logi.
Varsha- Main baat nahi karungi.
Alex- Nahi tumhe karna hoga..

Yahi chooti si baat par bahas shuru hui dono ke bich aur wo jaddi butti ka asar badhta chala jaa raha tha dono ke upar bas saayad yahi baat rahi hogi Varsha bechari apne plan ko bhul gayi nashe mein aur Alex ko kiss kar baithi.

Kiss tutne ke baad

Alex bas Varsha ko dekhe jaa raha tha par wo wo to nashe ke kaaran behosh ho chuki thi ab par kiss ke dauran usne Alex ke hoothon pe kaat liya tha.

Alex bas usko dekhta raha aur fir waise hi upar usko neend aa gayi.

Chaliye dekhte hai aage kya hota hai
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Nice Bro....??
but update chota tha koi bat nahi.....
Next update zabardast Dena
Bhai kal kaa bola tha par need aa gayi to jitna tha wahi post kar diya par aaj ka update bada hoga
 

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