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Fantasy Saurya - ek youdha (Completed)

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Hi friend maine xforum pr kafi stories padi hai aur ab mai bhi apni ek story post karne ja raha hu ab jyada wakt na lete huye
story p chalte h jaise jaise log milte rahenge unke bare m batata jaunga .
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UPDATE- 62

Ab tak

Maarcuss ne Jordon ko Bansoa par hamla karne ke liye bol diya tha.

Aage

Maarcuss in sab baaton ko samajhne ki kosis kar raha tha. Alex ka Bansoa mein hona uske saath kisi lady dravon ka hona dono ke hi ander uss agni manni ki shaktiyan. Ek elf jiske pass Elf naa hone ke dhero saare kaaran hona aur bhi bahut kuch aisa hi.

Achanak se uske dimmag mein aaya iss Elf aur Alex ka koi chakkar to nahi matlab koi connection to nahi hai. Connection ka naam aate hi uski ghanti baji aur usne apni aakhen band kari aur baith gaya dhyaan mein.

Chaliye isko chod hum Jordon ke pass chalte hai jo apni seena ko ladai ke liye taiyaar karane gaya tha.

Jordon- Mere bahadur sipahiyon aaj hume apne Maharaj ko unke prati hamari wafadari dikhane ka waqt aa gaya hai aaj hum sab ko Bansoa par hamla karna hai.

Bansoa ka naam aate hi jo seena abhi tak uchal khood rahi thi saare saant ho gaye.

Jordon- Hame Bansoa par hamla kar apne bhaiyon ko chudana hai.

Itne mein ek shipahi bola.

Shipahi- Seenapati ji par waha to Fountain of worriors hai hum kaise jitenge.

Jordon ne us shipahi ka galla kaat diya.

Jordon- Kisi ke maan mein aur koi sawal hai to puchle hum kuch hi der main niklenge waha ke liye.

Koi kuch nahi bola sabhi ko pata tha agar muh khola to gardan katti par ye bhi pata tha sabhi ko ki Bansoa paar jeet hasil karna mumkin nahi.

Sabhi bemaan hi sahi par taiyaar hone lage wahi Jordon waha se seedha B.dragob ke pass gaya.

Jordon- B.dragon shipahi saare dar rahe hai fountain of worrior se.

B.dragon- Chinta mat karo tum bas unko taiyaar hone do main khud bhi tere saath chalunga.

Jordon- Thik hai .

Dono hi taiyaar ho gaye the aur seena bhi fir kya tha chal pade aakraman karne saare.

Bansoa pahuchte pahuchte unko thoda time lag gaya shaam ho rahi thi waha.

B.dragon- Abhi tum sab yahi ruko main dekh kar aata hu sabhi jagaho ko.

B.dragon nikal gaya aur apni paini nigahoon else dekhne laga charo oor. Har taraf bas sannata hi chaya tha kuch aur nahi kewal sannata. Iss sannate ko dekh B.dragon ko laga sabhi University mein chale gaye honge to wo bhi university ki oor dekhne laga sabse pahle nazar padi uski Fountain of worriors par jaha ek boond bhi paani nahi tha.

B.dragon ander chala gaya University ke wo apni nayi takat kaa istemal karna chahta tha par waha kuch bhi nahi tha koi nahi tha waha.

Wahi dusri taraf seena aur Jordon jo B.dragon ka intezaar kar rahe the wo chup chap khade the ki tabhi.

Booooooom Booooom boooooom

Bahut se dhamake hone lage aur charo taraf dhuan hi dhuan chaa gaya tha.

Jordon Dhua ke uss paar dekhne ki kosis kar raha tha. Tabhi ek pathar udta hua aaya uske paas aur Jordon ne usko hawa mein hi rook liya.

"Abhi bhi waisi hi furti hai tere mein" -Aawaj


Iss awaj ko sunn Jordon ko to jaise koi khajana mill gaya ho usne bhi apni Earth element ki power ka use kar ke uss awaj ki taraf patthar fekna surru kar diya.

"Aare Jordon abhi nahi dost abhi haalat kharab hai hum sab ki abhi nahi " - Awaj.

Jordon - Thik hai to chalo tum charo Maharaj tumse milkar bahut khush honge. (Chilla kar) B.Dragon kaha ho tum.

Awaj- Wo nahi raha usne khud ki hi balli de di aur hame aazad karaya.

Jordon- Kya! par kaise.

Aawaj- Hum tumhe sab batayenge par hame iss waqt Maharaj ke pass le chalo wo hi hame durrust kar sakte hai.

Jordon ne sena ko pura grah barbad karne ko bol diya aur unn logo ke saath Maarcuss ke pass laut aaya.

Maarcuss abhi dhyaan se utha hi tha. Maarcuss ne un sabhi ko dekha aur bahut khuss hua usne sabhi ko thik kar diya.

Maarcuss(chiilaa kar)- B.dragon yaha aao.

Jordon- Maharaj usne apni bali de di inn sab ko chudane ke liye.

Maarcuus ko bahut bada jhatka laga ye sunn kar.

A1- Haa Maharaj wo ab nahi raha. Ye sab uss Headmaster ka kiya dharaya hai Bansoa khali karne se pahle hi kaid khane par bahut kadda jaadu laga gaya tha wo jiski wajah se ye sab hua hai. B.dragon jab hamare paas aaya kaidkhane mein apni ek pyaari chiz ka sauda kar ke to uske paas uske pankh nahi the hum samajh gaye B.dragon ne apne pankh de diye yaha aane ko wahi jab wo hamara taikhana kholne aaaya to usko apni kisi aur chiz ka sauda karna tha yahi jaadu wo Headmaster kar gaya tha aur iss saude mein B.dragon ne apna dil de diya jisse uski maut ho gayi.

Maarcuss- Headmaster tunne ye accha nahi kiya. Jordon jao aur usko mere saamne le aawo.

Jordon- Maharaj pura ka pura grah hi khali hai koi bhi nahi hai waha.

Maarcuss- To wo saare bhag gaye par kab tak kab tak bachenge mere kahar se.

Chaliye inko yahi chod hum chalte hai Moon par Headmaster ke pass jo abhi baithe hue the ek table par apne naye base par aur unke saamne pada tha B.dragon kaa dil.

Ab ye unke pass kaise aaya ye dekhte hai .

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Headmaster jab Sabhi ko unke kaam samjha kar khud bhi gayab hue the to pahle wo pahuche the library mein jaha unhone sabhi kitaben sammet li aur uske baad pahuche the uss kaid khane mein jaaha wo charo fasse the.

Headmaster ne apni chadi uthayi aur ek kitab li fir kuch mantra padne lage jisse hua ye ki wo taikhane jaha ye charo band the unn sabhi ke darwaje chamakne lage bahut jyaada.

Headmaster- Darwajon jo bhi tumhe khole unki sabse pyaari chiz unse chin lena.

Unka utna bolna tha saare darwaje normal ho gaye aur Headmaster waha se nikal aaye.

Fir jab B.dragon ko apne dil ki aur pankh ki bali deni padi aur uske baad wo charon waha se nikal gaye uss waqt Headmaster apne Anywhere door se waha pahuch B.dragon ke pankh aur dil utha le aaye apne pass.

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Headmaster ne uss dil ko aur unn pankhon ko choota karke ek seesi mein rakh liya aur ek saitaani haasi hasne lage.

Wahi yaha se door Earth par inn sab mein 2 din beet chuke the sabhi jo Earth par naaye aaye the unko ab tak baakiyon ne sab samjha diya tha yaha ke baare mein aur wo samajh bhi gaye the aur aaj 3rd din tha subah se hi Kiran , Mohini ,Varsha aur Saurya ki training karayi jaa rahi thi. Wahi unke jagah ab clones kaam kar rahe the RAW mein.

Saari training khatam hote hote 3no ladkiyon ki haalat kharab ho gayi thi. Unko bas fighting aur magic ki hi training di jaa rahi thi. Mohini ko waise to dono aate the par puri tarah se nahi iss liye uski bhi training .

Training khatam hui dopahar ke 3 baje ke kareeb. 3 no hi thaki haari si baith gayi.

N.mom ne unke liye kuch jadi buttiyon se dawaiyan banna di thi taakat ki jinke kaaran wo jaldi hi fresh mahsus karne lagi.


Training khatam hui hi thi ki Kiran ka phone baja ek important mission ke baare mein usko bataya gaya. Iss mission ke liye usko Paridhi ka naam bhi suggest kiya gaya jo usko bada ajeeb laga.

Ye baat usne sabhi ke saamne bola.

Main- Paridhi ko suggest kiya gaya hai iske piche koi kaaran hoga ek kaam karo mujhe bhi uske saath iss mission par bhejo main bhi dekhta hu kyun Paridhi ko bulaya jaa raha hai.

Kiran- Thik hai main abhi kar deti hu. Waise ye mission aaj raat ka hi hai aur wo bhi ek jungle wale illake mein. Khabar milli hai ke kuch logo ne India ki kuch khufiya files chura li hai aur unka sauda karne wale hai ek farmhouse mein jo jungle ke illake mein padta hai.

Main- Farmhouse kiska hai.

Kiran- Koi NRI banda hai Raunak chand kake ussi ka hai par wo waha nahi rahta ab wo to sayad Australia mein settle ho gaya hai.

Main- Hmm aur kuch pata hai kya.

Kiran- Nahi bas itna hi pata hai. Main tumhara jaana bhi fix karati hu.

Main- thik hai.


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Bahut badiya update bhai aur sex scene bhi zaberdust hai
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Awesome update
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Mast update h Bhai
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