Fantasy Saurya - ek youdha (Completed)

Ristrcted · Apr 11, 2020

Hi friend maine xforum pr kafi stories padi hai aur ab mai bhi apni ek story post karne ja raha hu ab jyada wakt na lete huye
story p chalte h jaise jaise log milte rahenge unke bare m batata jaunga .
so lets go

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Avir · Apr 23, 2020

Nice one

janu2016 · Apr 23, 2020

update dear

Yellow Flash · Apr 23, 2020

AAS · Apr 23, 2020

Suparb story bhai

Killerpanditji(pandit) · Apr 23, 2020

Nice update

Abbasi · Apr 23, 2020

Very Nice, Fantastic, Awesome update ..................
Keep it up bro ................
Waiting for next update ...............

Ristrcted · Apr 24, 2020

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AAB TAK

MAINE APNE AUR SHILPA DID K CLONES BANA K UNKO SABHI K SATH SHOPING P BHEJ DIYA AUR MAIN AUR SHILPA DIDI PAHUCH GAYE BASE PR ISMILE K PAAS ABHI MAIN USSE SAARI INFO LE HI RAHA THA K SAMEERA ROOM MAI AAJATI HAI AUR JHUK K DIDI S
SAMEERA - JINNO KI MALIKA KO IS NACHIZ KA SALAAM.

AAGE
MAIN TO USKE MUH S YE SUN SHOCK HO GAYA ABHI KUCH BOLTA USSE PAHLE HI S.DIDI JOR JOR S HARNE LAGI AUR BOLI.
S.DIDI- DEKH TO SAMEERA ISKA (MERA) MUH DEKH KAISA HO GAYA YE SUN KR. CHAL AB NATAK BAND KR OR KHADI HOJA.
SAMEERA S.DIDI KI BAAT SUN CHOWK GAYI PR SAYAD S.DIDI N USSE ISHARE S KUCH KAHA TO WO KHADI HO KR.
SAMEERA(HASTE HUE)-HA YAAR MUH TO DEKHO ISKA.
MAIN(KHUD KO SAMBALKR)- EK MIN YEHO KYA RAHA HAI SAMEERA TUM AGENT11 KO YE JINNO WALI MALIKA Q BULLA RAHI HO AUR TUM DONO HASSE KYUN JA RAHI HO.
S.DIDI- ARRE USKO PATA CHAL GAYA HAI K MAIN TERE AUR KING K BAARE M SAB JANTI HU AUR YE MALIKA WALI BAAT TO SIRF AISSE HI MAJAK THI.
SAMEERA- HA MALIKA I MEAN SHILPA SAHI BOL RAHI HAI WAISE BHI KYA JIN HOTE HAI.
S.DIDI-(MERE KO) OOE TU YAHA KUCH KAAM S AAYA THA NA WO KAR AUR NIKAL.
MAIN-DIDI MAIN AAPKA BOSS HU AAPNE BOLA THA NA K BAHAR MERI IMAGE MAT BIGADNA.
S.DIDI(MUH BANNA K)- BAHAR MERI IMAGE KE BACCHE MAIN TERE S BADI HU SAMJHA MERI JB MARJI HOGI JO MARJI HOGI MAIN WAHI KARUNGA.
MAIN- PR..
S.DIDI- JYADA BOL MAT YAAD HAINA MAIN TERE KYA KR SAKTI HU.
UNKA ISHARA WO PORNSTAR WALI INCIDENT KA THA MAIN SAMAJH GAYA AUR CHUP CHAP ROOM S NIKAL GAYA INFO TOMAINE ISMAILE S LE HI LI THI.
MAINE USKA PHONE AUR BAAKI SAARA SAMAN UTHAYA AUR CHAL DIYA USKE ADDE P USSKI GETUP M.
WAHI MERE JAANE K BAAD ROOM MAIN.
PAHLE TO DIDI N EK CHUTKI BAJAYI AUR USSI K SATH ISMILE BEHOSH HO GAYA FIR BOLI.
S.DIDI- HAASH BACH GAYI.
SAMEERA- MALIKA YE SAB KYA THA.
S.DIDI- WO SAB CHODO TUMHE KISNE BATAYA K MUJHE SAB YAAD AA GAYA HAI.
SAMEERA- MALIKA WO TO KAL PITAJI AAYE THE UNHONE HI HUM TINO KO BATAYA K RED BOOK P SAMRATH N KAABU KR LIYA HAI TO MUJHE LAGA AAP SABHI KI POWERS AUR YAADE WAPAS AA GAYI HO.
S.DIDI- TO SENAPATI JI KO PATA CHAL GAYA TAB TO HAME EK BAAR JINLOK JAANA HI HOGA. SAMEERA EK KAAM KARO APNE SATHIYON KO BULAWO AUR FIR HUM JINLOK CHALENGE BAHUT WAQT HO GAYA APNE LOGO S MILE.
SAMEERA ITNA SUNTE HI APNI AAKHEN BAND KARTI HAI AUR FIR ROOM MAI SAMEER AUR RITWIK PRAKAT HO JAATE HAI.
WO BHI AATE HAI AUR JHUK K S.DIDI KA ABHIWADAN KRTE HAI.
FIR S.DIDI EK CHUTKI BAJATI HAI AUR SAARE LOG PAHUCH JAATE HAI JINLOK.

JINLOK K BAARE M BATA DU YEH EK BADA HI AJEEB LOK HAI. IS LOK K 2 BHAG HAI 1 BHAG M HAMESHA ANDHERA RAHTA HAI AUR EK BHAG M UJJALA. ANDHERE WALE BHAG M WO JIN RAHTE HAI JO K BURRE SHAKTIYON K PRABHAV M HO YA FIR GADDAR HO. UNLOGO N AAPNA EK ALAG HI RAJYA BANA RAKHA HAI.WAHA K LOG DIKHNE M LAL YA FIR KAALE RANG K HOTE HAI.
AB UJAALE WALE BHAG M ISS JAGAH PR WO JIN RAHTE HAI JO SANTIPRIYA HAI AUR APNE RAJYA K PRATI IMANDAR HAI.YAHA P LOG LIGTH COLOURED HOTE HAI.
YAHA ABHI AAYE DIN JHAGDE HOTE RAHTE HAI ANDHERE WALE AUR UJJALE WALE HISSO K BICH AUR AB UJJALE WALA HISSA BS EK CHOTA SA AREA COVER KRTA HAI.
SHILPA SABHI KO LEKAR JINLOK MAI APNE MAHAL M PAHUCH GAYI WAHA PAHUCHTE HI USSE AB TAK JINLOK MAI JO KUCH BHI HUA THA SAB PATA CHAL GAYA.USSE AATE HI MAHARAJ(MAHAMANTRI) APNI JAGAH S UTHA AUR S.DIDI K SAAMNE JHUK KR UNKA ABHIWADAN KIYA BAAKIYON N BHI WAHI KIYA.
S.DIDI(SABHI S)- KHADE HO JAYIYE.
ITNA BOL WO APNI PURANI JAGAH P JAA BAITHI JO KI UNKA SHINGHASAN THA SAURYA K SINGHASAN K BAGAL WALA.
UNKE BAITHTE HI EK TEJ ROSHNI CHAARO TARAF FAIL GAYI. YE ROSHNI JINLOK K AANDHERE WALE HISSE M BHI GAYI THI AUR ISSKA PRABHAW YE HUA K WO SAARE DARD S TADAPNE LAGE AUR CHIPNE LAGE APNI GHARO M.
WAHI ULLALE WALE HISSE M TO SABKO JAISE AUR POWERS MIL GAYI HO.WO BAHUT KHUSH HO GAYE.
SENAPATI- MALIKA AAPNE YAHA AA KR HAMARI SHAKTIYON KO PUNH JAGA HUMPE BADA HI UPKAR KIYA HAI.
S.DIDI- MAINE TO BAS APNE RAJYA K LOGO KO EK TAOFA DIYA HAI UNKI NISHTHA K LIYE JO SAMRATH AUR MERE PRATI HAI UNKE DIL M.
MAHAMANTRI- MALIKA AAP AKELE AAYI HAI SAMRATH KISI OOR LOK MAI GAYE HAI KYA.
S.DIDI FIR UNKO SAARI BAATE BATATI HAI SRAAP K BAARE M AUR KB TAK MERI YAADE WAPAS AAYEGI.
SABHI YE BAATEN JAAN KHUSH HO GAYE AUR DUKHI BHI K KAISE UNKE SAMRATH KO YE SAB SAHNA PAD RAHA HAI.
S.DIDI(SENAPATI S)- HUM AAPKE SHUKRAGUJAR HAI K AAPNE HAMARI GAIR HAAJRI M SAMRATH(SAURYA) K SURAKSHA K LIYE APNE BACCHO(SAMEERA & SAMEER) KO DHARTI PR BHEJA (MAHAMANRI S) AAPNE BHI RITWIK KO BHEJA USKE LIYE DHANYAWAD.
MAHAMANTRI- MALIKA YE HAMARA DHARM HAI K HUM AAPNE RAJA K SHURAKSHA KA DAITVA UTHAYE ISKELIYE AAP SUKRIYA NA KAHE.
S.DIDI N KUCH DER AUR WAHI APNE RAJYA K BAARE M PATA KIYA FIR WAHA S WAPAS AA GAYI BAAKI K 3NO K SAATH. ABHI WO ANDHERE WALE HISSE KA KUCH KR NHI SAKTI THI.

CHALIYE INHE CHOD HUM CHALTE HAI HERO K PAAS.
MAIN ISMILE KA ROOP LE USKE ADDE P PAHUCH GAYA. ABHI 11 BAJ RAHE THE. ANDER AATE HI MERA GUSSA BADNE LAGA. SAALE K AADE P DRUGS HI DRUGS THE AUR TO AUR BAHUT SAARI LADKIYAN BANDI PADI THI EK KOONE M AUR SAARI ROO RAHI THI.
ABHI MAIN YE SAB DEKH HI RAHA THA K KOI AAYA MERE PICCHE S.
G1-BHAI WO MALL WALA CHOKRA JISNE APNE PANTER LOGO KO MAARA THA NA WO AAJ FIR MALL M HAI AUR BHAI KYA GAJAB GAJABITEM HAI USKE SAATH PUCHO MAT RAAT RANGEEN HO JAYEGI HAMARI.
MAIN TO PAHLE S HI GUSSE M THA AUR AB TO YE SAALE MERE FAMILY K BAAARE M BOL RAHA THA MAINE WAHI PADI EK GUN NIKALI AUR SAALE K BHEJE M UTAR DI. WAHA KHADE SAARE LOG HAMARI TARAF DEKHNE LAGE.
MAIN(ISMILE)-YE SALA POLICE KA KHABRI HOTA AUR KISI KO PATA BHI NAHI. YE (EK KI OOR ISHARA KR) ISKI BODY KO KAAT KAAT KR KUTTO KO KHILANE KA HOTA SAMJHA NA.
WO- HA BHAI.
MAIN(ISMILE)- WO MALL WALA CHOKRA AUR USKI FAMILY S KOI NHI BHIDNE KO HOTA WO APUN KA SHIKAR HOTA SAMJHA KYA.
SAB-OK BHAI.
MAIN(ISMILE)-(G2 S) ABBE SUN YE LADKIYON KO KHANA PANI DE DENA ACHHE S KHAYAL RAKHNA.
G2- PR Q BHAI
MAIN(ISMILE)- ABBE GHONCHU MARKET MAI DEFECTIVE MAAL CHALNA HOTA YA FIR ACCHA MAAL.
G2-ACCHA MAAL BHAI.
MAIN(ISMILE)- TO INKO KHANA PANI DE AUR ACHHE S KHAYAL RAKH TAKI DEFECTIVE NA HO JAYE SAMJHA.
G2- JI BHAI.

AT KALP-AASHRAM
R.G-(APNE SISYA S)DEKHO UNDONO KO KUCH HI WAQT M HOSH AA JAYEGA AUR WO YAHA S JANA CHAHENGE APNE PARIJANNO K PAAS PRNTU ABHI ISKA WAQT NAHI HUA HAI.
SISYA - GURUDEV AAP HI KOI UPAY BATAYE JISSE WO YAHA S NA JAYE.

R.G- HAME UNKI SMRITI KO BANDNA HOGA TAKI UNHE APNE ATIT KA KUCH YAAD NA AAYE JAB TAK HUM NA CHAHE.
ABHI R.G N ITNA BOLA HI THA K UNKE KUTIYA M KOI AAYA AUR USKO DEKH R.G AUR USKA SISYA DONO HI JHUK GAYE.
R.G-JINNO KI MALIKA AAP KA SWAGAT HAI ISS ASHRAM MAI.AAPNE AANE KA KAST Q KIYA MUJHE BULLA LETI.
S.DIDI- R.G YE KAST TO AAPNE HI KARWAYA HAI MUJHSE AGAR MAIN NA AATI TO AAPNE INDONO KI SMRITI BAND DI HOTI JO KE AAPKE LIYE ACCHA NHI HOTA.
R G- MAIN SAMJHA NHI MALIKA.
S.DIDI- AAPKO SAB GYAT HO JAYEGA PR ABHI THODA WAQT HAI AAP BAS INDONO KO JAB BHI HOSH AAYE KISHANPUR K HAWELI(BHOOTIYA HAWELI HERO K GAON KA) M PAHUCH DE .
R.G-(KHUSH HO) KYA WAQT AA GAYA HAI USKA.
S.DIDI- HAA WAQT NIKAT HI HAI .
ITNA BOL WO GAYAB HO GAYI.

CHALIYE AB HUM MALL CHALTE HAI HERO K CLONE K PAAS.
ABHI 7 BAJ RAHE HAI PR SAARE GENTS K CHAHRE P BAARAH BAJE HUE HAI SABHI K HAATHO M NA JANE KITNE BAGS THE WO MALL S NIKAL PARKING KI OOR JA RAHE THE AISA NHI THA K MALL WALO N INKE SAMAAN KO CAR TK PAHUCHANE KO NHI BOLA THA PR SAARI LADIES GANG NE MALL WALO KO MAANA KR SAARA SAMAN GENTS KO LE JANNE BOLA THA.
MALL S NIKAL SABHI EK HOTEL M PAHUCHE AUR JAISA TAY HUA THA BAHAR DINNER KRNE KA WAHI KRNE K LIYE.
HOTEL M SABHI FAMILY WALE HISSE M CHALE GAYE AUR SABHI EK BADE S TABLE P BAITH GAYE.
KHANA ORDER KIYA AUR 8 BAJE K KARIB HOTEL S NIKAL GAYE PR HOTEL M KISI KO AJEEB S BHAV K SAATH CHOD GAYE.
WO JO BHI THA MERI FAMILY K AANE S UNKE JAANE TAK UNHE HI GHURTA RAHA KABHI KHUSH HO JATA TO KABHI DUKHI.
MERI FAMILY K NIKALNE K KUCH DER BAAD WO HOSH M AAYA AUR BAHAR KI TARAF JAA KR HAME DHUNDHNE LAGA PR HUM USSE NAHI MILLE. USNE BAHUT DHUNDHNE K BAAD KISI KO CAAL KIYA.
WO-(ROOTE HUE)MOM SANJU BUA JINDA HAI AUR ISSI SAHAR M HAI.
UHDER S- TUNNE FIR DRINK KI HAI NA KITNI BAAR BOLA TERE KO PR SAMAJHTI HI NAHI.
WO- MOM MAIN SACH BOL RAHI HU WO JINDA HAI. AAP NA **** HOTEL M AA JAO.
UDHER S- BETA AGAR YE SACH HAI TO YE BAAT ABHI KISI KO PATA NA CHALE UNKO ABHI KHATRA HAI SAMJHI TUNE KISI AUR KO CALL TO NAHI KIYA NA.
WO- NAHI MOM PR KYA MAIN DAD KO BOLU.
UDHER S- NAHI BETA TUM UDHER HI RAHO MAIN AA RAHI HU OK.

DOSTO AB GUESS KR BATAO K YE KON HAI HOTEL WALA/WALI AUR ISKI MOM KON HAI.

AGAR MERE S KISI CHARACTER KA DISCRIPTION CHUT GAYA HO TO AAP MUJHE BATA DENA

Yellow Flash · Apr 24, 2020

crazyrex · Apr 24, 2020

Very nice and fantastic update

Kalyansurya · Apr 24, 2020

Very nice update bhai ....
Apne hero ke character ko thoda strong bnao bhai
Sorry but bhai wo samrat hai fir be abe ki story se chutiya jaisa lagta hai
Hero ko mistress bnao like hero ko pta sab ho but dhekhawa kre ki kuch pta nai
Baki choice aapki hai mujse jyada aapko pta hai story ka

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Fantasy Saurya - ek youdha (Completed)

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