Fantasy Saurya - ek youdha (Completed)

Ristrcted · Apr 11, 2020

Hi friend maine xforum pr kafi stories padi hai aur ab mai bhi apni ek story post karne ja raha hu ab jyada wakt na lete huye
story p chalte h jaise jaise log milte rahenge unke bare m batata jaunga .
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aks 21 · Jul 13, 2020

Bohot hi jabardast update bhai

Arjun Singh 72 · Jul 13, 2020

Nice update

Nevil singh · Jul 13, 2020

Classified said:
UPDATE - 85

Ab tak

Mujhe ab Mohini ko uske powers dilane the taaki wo unn sab logo ko jo Vetal mein badal chuke the thik kar sake

Aage

Main Baba aur N.Mom ko lekar Earth aa gaya.

Main- Aap dono ko jaisa bola tha waisa hi karo baaki main kisi vetal ko lekar aata hu.

Baba- Samrath pata nahi kyun par mujhe lagta hai jab Mohini ko uski powers milegi wo khud pe control nahi kar paayegi.

Main- Pata hai mujhe issi liye to N.mom ko lekar aaya hu. Wo ye sambhal legi par usse pahle jo kaha tha wo karo aur dhyaan rahe unn dono ko chot nahi lagni chahiye.

Maine itna kaha aur portal khol diya dono ke liye aur dono chale gaye. Maine bhi ek portal khola aur chal diya American subcontinent .

Waha pahucha to halat bahut hi khatarnak hue the. Har taraf log lad rahe the maar kaat kar rahe the. Ye wahi log the jo Vetal mein badal chukke the.

Ek pal ke liye to main khud ko koosne laga ki ye sab meri wajah se ho raha tha.

Kappa- Abhi iska waqt nahi hai agar yahi karte rahe naa to ho gaya......tumhe abhi unn sab ko bachana hai kisi ek ko uthao aur le chalo saath.

Maine Kappa ki baat mante hue ek aadmi ko pakda aur usko behosh karke Portal se le aaya apne saath.

Wahi dusri oor N.mom aur Baba le aaye the unn tinno ko.

Yaha par tinno se matlab tha Shilpa, Paridhi aur Mohini. Tinnno ke tinno hi behosh pade the.

Main- Sameera aur Baakiyon ka kya kiya ?

Baba- Wo abhi Jinlok chale gaye Shilpa ke kahne par. Bahut muskil tha unn tinno ko yakin dilana ki Shilpa ko sab yaad aa chuka hai.

Main- hmm chalo ye bhi sahi hai. Ab shuru karte hai. N.mom shield banaiye.

N.mom- Taiyaar hai shield. Bas uss Vetal aur Mohini ko ander daalna hai.

Humne uss Vetal aur Mohini ko uss shield ke under chod diya.

Main- Baba wo love portion laaye ho naa R.D se.

Baba- Haa laya hu par mujhe nahi lagta ye sahi hoga.

Main- Yahi sahi hoga Baba. Aap bhi jaante ho Parilok ko kaise andhere se bahar lana hai aur kaise Rani pari ko thik karna hai.

Baba- Jaanta hu par fir bhi ye galat lag raha hai kisi ke dil mein khud je liye aise pyaar jagana sahi nahi hai tum swarti hote jaa rahe ho.

Main- Baba agar swarthi hota naa to sabhi ko lata yaha bas Paridhi aur Shilpa ko hi nahi samjhe aap ab chalo wo love portion mujhe do aur aap N. mom ke saath Mohini ko dekho tab tak main ye karta hu.

Baba- thik hai jaisi tumhari iccha.

Fir kya tha wo chale gaye aur main wo love portion liye badhne laga Shilpa ki oor.

Ander se dar bhi lag raha tha ki kahi galat to nahi kar raha par koi aur raasta hi nahi tha bas ye dono hi thi jo Rani Pari aur Pari lok dono ko wapas thik kar sakti thi.

Wahi dusri oor Baba aur N.mom ne uss Vetal ko hosh mein la diya tha.

Pahle to wo apne aas pass dekhne laga samajhne ki koshish karne laga ki wo yaha kaise fir uski nazar Mohini ki oor gayi jo behosh padi thi.

Bas wo Mohini ki taraf badhne laga dhere dhere par usko kaha pata tha wo kya karne jaa raha hai.

Apne daant bahar nikal wo pahuch gaya Mohini ke pass aur apna muh Mohini ke gardan par rakh diya. Apne daant uski gardan ke ander daal diya aur uska khoon chusne laga. Par ye jyada der nahi chala kyunki ab Mohini ke sareer se khoon uske muh mein nahi jaa raha tha balki uske daanton se wo taral(liquid) Mohini ke shareer mein jaa raha tha wo bhi uske naa chahte hue.

Mohini ki aankhen khul gayi wo ekdum se baith gayi wahi par. uski aankhen puri lal thi. Usne ke dhakka diya uss vetal ko aur wo door jaa gira. Wahi Mohini khadi hui aur khud ko dekhne lagi.

Wo vetal fir se khada hua aur daudhte hu Mohini ki oor. Mohini khud ko hi dekhe jaa rahi thi ki usne apna hath upar uthaya jisme uss vetal ki gardan aa gayi.

Vetal chatpatane laga. Mohini bas usko dekhe jaa rahi thi. fir achanak uske gale par apna muh rakh kar uske shareer se wo taral chuss liya par issi dauran uske muh khoon lag gaya jo uss vetal ke liye accha nahi hui.

Mohini ne naa sirf uss vetal ko insan bana diya balki uska saara khoon bhi chuss gayi aur wo wahi maar gaya.

Baba- Ye dekho ye ab bekabu hone wali hai.

N.mom- hmm pata hai aur ye bhi jaanti hu isko kaise rooka jaaye.

Baba- to intezar kis chiz ka kar rahi ho jaldi se wo karo.

N.mom- hmm

N.mom ne ek thaili jaisa kuch nikala jisme lal rang ka kuch tha.

Baba- ye kya hai

N.mom- khoon hai ye Saurya ka bas yahi hai jo usko shant kar sakta hai. Usne kaha tha ki Mohini uska khoon pinna chahti thi isse usko takat bhi milegi aur wo khud ko control bhi kar paayegi.

Baba- Itna sara khoon...par hum isko ustak kaise pahuchaye.

N.mom- Pahuchana kya hai wo khud aayegi aap dekhte jao.

Abhi wo baat kar hi rahe the ki Shield tutne ki awaj aayi. Mohini bahar aa chuki thi. Wo charo taraf dekh rahi thi uske hoonton par khoon laga hua tha.

Mohini yaha waha dekhne lagi aur uski nazar N.mom aur Baba par gayi. Wo daudti hui unke pass jane lagi.

Baba- ye to yhi aa raghi hai ab kya...

N.mom- bas shanti se khade raho hame kuch bhi nahi karegi ye.

Dono waise hi khade rahe aur Mohini unn dono ke pass aayi aur unpe jhapata maarne hi waali thi ke N.mom ne wo khoon wali thaili aage kar di. Mohini bhi ruk gayi aur uss Khoon ki thaili ko dekhne lagi. Kuch der dekhne ke baad wo ekdum se jhapat padi uss thaile par aur usko pinne lagi.

Usne pura khoon pi liya aur theek uske baad wo achanak se hawa mein udne lagi uski aankhen jo lal ho gayi thi ab bilkul normal ho gayi thi aur bhi jo changes aaye the usme wo sab bhi wapas pahle jaise ho gaye.

Thodi der hawa mein hi rahne ke baad wo jameen par aa gayi aur behosh ho gayi.

Baba- Ye to behosh ho gayi.

N.mom- haa sayad iske body ko thoda time lagega.

Wahi dusri oor main apna haath mein wo love portion liye khada tha Shilpa ke aage. himmat hi nahi ho rahi thi ye karne ki par karna to tha hi.

Maine wo love portion Shilpa par chidka aur fir Paridhi par bhi.

Main- Pata nahi sahi kar raha hu yaa nahi par yahi ek raasta hai mere paas.

Maine ye bola aur fir dono ke upar paani chidak diya jisse dono hi hosh mein aa gayi. Hosh mein aate hi sabse pahle dono ki nazar mujhpe padi.

Shilpa to jaanti thi mujhe par Paridhi se ye meri pahli mulakat thi to usne nahi pahchana.

fir dono hi yaha waha dekhne lage uss jagah ko samajhne ki koshish karne lage .

Shilpa- Saurya tu yaha kya kar raha hai main yaha kya kar rahi hu.....ye kon si jagah hai aur ye ladki ye kon hai.

Paridhi- Kon si jagah hai ye kahi tum mujhe kidnap to nahi kar aaye agar aisa hai to tum bahut pachtaoge....

Main bas wait kar raha tha kab wo love portion apna kaam pura kargi. Mujhe jyada intezar nahi karna pada.

Karib 2 second mein hi Paridhi mere galle lage hui thi. Abhi usko kuch yaad nahi aaya tha saayad ye bas uss love portin ka kammal tha agar yaad aata to dono ko hi aata. Isme bhi jyada intezar nahi karna pada mujhe.

Shilpa- Samrath , Paridhi

Paridhi- Shilpa didi .

Dono mujhe chod ek dusre ke galle lag gayi aur roone lagi.

Kuch der hue unn dono ka rona dhona chalta raha par jaise hi unki nazar mere upar padi dono ki dono hi mujhe gusse se ghoorne lagi.

Ab ye hua issliye kyunki Mohini mere galle gali hui thi aur chumme jaa rahi thi mujhe.

Paridhi- Ye kon hai didi aur hamare Samrath ke saath iss tarah.....

Shilpa- Pata nahi kon hai dekho tho isko kaise chipak rahi hai.

Dono hamare taraf aayi aur usko khinch kar alag kar diya.

Paridhi- kon hai ye aur ye aise kyun chipak rahi thi tumse.

Main- Ye ye vetal lok ki rajkumari hai

Mohini(jhuk kar)- Jinlok ki Malika aur Parilok ki Rajkumari ko Vetal lok ki Rajkumari ka pranam.

Paridhi- Vetal lok ki rajkumari ? Tum yaha kya kar rahi ho wo bhi hamare Samrath ke saath.

Mohini- Rajkumari Maine bahut intezar kiya hai inse milne ka aaj naa jaane kitne saal baad aur kya kya sah kar inse milli hu.

Shilpa- To tum bhi inse pyar karti ho

Paridhi- Didi ye kya.....

Main- Arre yaha duniya tabah hone par hai....meri baat sunno pahle

Paridhi-Bhadh mein jaaye duniya pahle ye jo ho raha hai wo clear karo.

Mohini- Hmm main inse pyar karti hu aur inse shadi bhi karna chahti hu par aap sabhi ke izzazat ke baad

Shilpa- tumhe pata hai naa inki pahle se kitni patniya hai.

Mohini- Hmm pata hai....par fir bhi main ye chahti hu aur ye jaruri bhi hai.

Paridhi- pahle hum test karenge uske baad.

Main- Aaee pagal tumhare test ke chakar mein mera pura plan fail ho jaayega tum sunno Parilok andhere mein hai Rani PAri behosh hai 2 din se tum dono unke pass jao abhi ke abhi. Mohini tumhe bahut kaam karna hai yaha Earth par hi nahi balki aur bhi bahut jagahon par. Log vetal ban chuke hai unke ander se tumhe wo taral bahar nikalna hai.

Paridhi- Kya Maa ko ye sab ho gaya aur mujhe pata bhi nahi...

Maine portal khol diya parilok ke liye aur Shilpa aur Paridhi dono hi ander chali gayi.

Aaj ke liye itna hi ab dekhte hai aage kya hota hai kya Shilpa aur Paridhi Parilok aur Rani pari ko sambhal paayenge aur Kya Mohini kar paayegi apna kaam

To bane rahiye

Writer - Ye kal jo bola tha wo hai agla update raat ko dega.

Tum mil gaye toh mujhse naaraj hai khuda,
Kahta hai ke tu ab kuch mangta nahi______Mohini.
Bahut sunder update hai.
Kab ke bichude hue hum aaj khan aake mile.____Shilpa, Pridhi.
Pyar amar hai yugo-yugo tak.

Reza · Jul 13, 2020

Superb Update Bro...
Waiting For Next

Ristrcted · Jul 14, 2020

UPDATE - 86

Ab tak

Maine Paridhi aur Shilpa dono ko Parilok bhej diya waha sambhalne ke liye aur khud Mohini ke saath uski madad ke liye ruk gaya.

Aage

To pahle hum chalte hai Parilok mein.

(Paridhi ke respect mein)

Maine kabhi nahi socha tha ki parilok ko iss tarah andhere mein dubba hua dekhungi. Bahut hi burra lag raha tha mujhe.

Main- Didi ye kya ho gaya dekho naa..

Shilpa- dekh rahi hu Paridhi aur isse nikalne ka upay bhi hai ere paas par usse pahle chal Raani pari se milte hai.

Main- Hmm chalo

Hum dono kisi tarah uss andhere mein hamare mahal mein pahuche. Waha se fir Maa ke kamre ki oor gaye.

Kamre mein Maa leti hui thi bed par bilkul bejaan aur unke bagal mein Pihu baithi roo rahi thi.

Main- Pihu

Pihu ne jaise hi meri awaj sunni meri oor dekhne lagi uske aashu aur bhi jaldi jaldi bahne lagi wo mere galle lag gayi .

Pihu- Didi aap aa gayi dekho naa Maa ko kya ho gaya hai main bahut der se utha rahi hu par utth hi nahi rahi ....Aap utaho naa unko ...

Shilpa- Beta shant ho jaao tum to hamari sabse bahadur bahan hoo na

Pihu- Shilpa didi aap bhi aaye ho...Maa ko thik kar do naa

Shilpa- Ussi liye to aaye hai chalo ab tum shant ho jaao aur jaa kar tajposhi ki taiyaari karao.

Main- Ye kya bol rahi ho Didi aap...

Shilpa- Paridhi bas yahi ek raasta hai hamare paas tumhe nayi rani pari banna hoga tabhi Parilok thik hoga andhere se bahar aa jaayega.

Main- Par Maa ka kya wo kaise thik hongi..

Shilpa- Ek baat batao jab bhi Parilok main koi bimari failti hai ya kuch hota hai to kon thik karta tha.

Pihu- Maa karti thi aur aaj....

Shilpa- Arre Pihu sab thik ho jaayega tu bas jaa aur taiyaari karwa...

Pihu bhi chali gayi usko viswash tha Shilpa aur mere upar.

Main- Kya main kar paungi didi matlab maa ke paas anubhaw tha mere paas nahi hai koi anubhaw.

Shilpa- Main hu naa...main bhi madad karungi teri bas ek baar teri tajposhi ho jaaye tu Rani pari ban jaa fir hum choti maa( rani pari) ko hum thi kar denge.

Chaliye ab yaha se dur chalte hai apne hero ke pass.

Main(Saurya)- Mohini ye kya kar rahi ho tum ?

Mohini- Kya kar rahi hu tumne bola tha naa logo ko wapas pahle jaisa karne ko to uske liye mujhe dhyaan lagana hoga ab chup raho...

Main- thik hai tum karo main tab tak baaki jagahon ka dekh kar aata hu.

Ab chalte hai thoda sa picche. Yaad hai Mohit ne Shurbhi apni Maa ko call kiya tha bataya tha unko ki unki aankhen wapas aa gayi hai.

To tab Shurbhi Nanaji ke ghar se nikli hamare paas aane ko par wo akeli nahi thi.

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Niharika ne Zafar ko maar diya tha aur mujhe bhi uski khabar de di thi.

Main uss waqt Mohit mamu ke saath ghar par tha Shurbhi nani ke aane ke intezar mein.

Mohit mamu ne mujhe bola tha ki hum Shurbhi nani ko surprise denge jab wo aaye to main darwaja kholu jisse wo aur jyada khush ho jaati.

Maine bhi wahi kiya par saayad kismat ko hume surprise dena tha.

Shurbhi nani ke saath meri Nani ji bhi aayi thi. Plan ke anushar maine gate khola aur

Main- supris........

Bas itna hi bol paya saamne Nani ji thi. Wo mujhe dekhe jaa rahi thi Shurbhi nani bhi mujhe dekhe jaa rahi thi aur main unn dono ko.

Mohit- Kon hai Saurya. Maa aayi hai naa main bh.....aap (Mujhse) tum jao saman pahucha diya naa ab kya yahi rahoge mere saath.

Naniji- Mohit beta kon hai ye.....mjhe pahchana hua kyun lag raha hai.

Mohit- Ji badi malkin ye saman pahuchne wala hai

Naniji- kitni baar bola hai mujhe badi maa bola kar

Mohit(Tanna marte hue)- Jo Maa bolte the unko to marwa diya aur mujhe bol rahi ho aap Badi Maa bolne ko mujhe bhi marwane ka irada hai....aap meri Maa ki malkin ho wahi raho aur kuch banne ki jarurat nahi.

Naniji kuch bhi nahi boli bas khadi rahi waise hi unki aankhen lablaba gayi thi.

S.nani- Mohit aise baat karte hai bado se....

Mohit- Agar log inke jaise hoo to isse bhi bura bolna chahiye wo to sanskar hai mere jo kam bol raha hu...Maa yaad hai naa Choti ko nikal diya tha ghar se inhone hi aur bhi batao....

Naniji se raha nahi gaya aur wo waha se daudti hui chali gayi unki aankhon se aanshu gir rahe the.

S.Nani- Mohit mere bacche ye sahi nahi kiya tunne aise baat nahi karni chahiye thi tujhe....aur Ye Saurya yaha kaise...

Mohit mama ne unko puri baat batayi ki kaise hum bus pe mille fir kis tarah Ghar mein Poonam maasi ki entry aur sabhi ko apne saath le jaana Mom ka mujhe yaha rahne ko kahna aur bhi bahut kuch bataya unhone.

S.nani- Saurya teri aankhen bilkul meri beti ki tarah dikhti hai re aur chahra bilkul Deep babu ki tarah kaash wo hote aaj yaha....

Abhi hum baat hi kar rahe the ki phone baja S.nani ka.

S.nani- Kyaa....par kaise abhi to wo yahi thi....Main main abhi aa rahi hu

Call cut.

Mohit- Kya hua Maa aap itna ghabrayi hui kyun hai.

S.nani- Didi ka accident ho gaya hai unko hospital le gaye hai log. Main jaa rahi hu tum yahi rukko aur Saurya ka khayal rakho.

Mohit- Thik hai jaao aap main hu idher.

Ussdin se Nani ji abhi tak hospital mein hi thi.

Flashback ends

Mohini khadi ho chuki thi.

Mohini- Hmm chalo main taiyaar hu ab par ek dikkat hai.

Main- Batao kya dikkat hai.

Mohini- Mujhe ye sab karne ke liye takat chahiye...

Main-Haa to batao kaise millegi takat

Mohini- hm tumhara khoon chahiye.

Main - Ye gajab hai yaar abhi kuch der hua hai mile hue aur tum khoon par khoon maange jaa rahi ho...

Mohini- Arre sach mein chahiye mujhe warna pura kaam nahi kar paunga.

Main- Arre majak kar raha tha le lo jitna lena hai.

Bas fir kya tha Mohini ne apna muh mere gardan pe rakha aur khoon chusne lagi.

Thodi der main uska kaam ho gaya aur fir wo mujhse alag ho gayi.

Mohini- Chalo ab portal kholo aur mujhe har uss planet par le chalo jaha ye dikkat hai.

Main- Arre pahle to yaha ka khatam kar lo fir kahi aur ka dekhna.

Mohini- Hmm ye bhi sahi hai.

Mohini ne apni aankhen band ki aur wo hawa mein udne lagi.

Hawa mein jaate hi uske sharir se kuch waves nikalne lage aur fir kareeb 5 minute baad hi uske charo taraf koi layer ban gayi kisi taral ki jo pata nahi kaha se aayi thi.

Thodi der baad wo taral Mohini ke muh mein se hote hue uske daato ke jariye uske sharir mein chale gaye.

Uske baad jo hua Mohini ko wo to aur bhi ajeeb tha Mohini ki skin kaali hone lagi.

Main- Ye kya hai tum thik to ho Mohini.

Mohini nicche aayi.

Mohini- Haa meri jaan mein thik hu aur lagta hai ab jaldi se main apne naye roop mein aane wali hu. Mohini Vetal lok ki Rani.

Main- Par ye kaise.....

Mohini- Hmm ye aise ki tumhara khoon aur wo taral milkar mujhe bahut shaktishali bana raha hai bahut hi jyada shaktishali....ab bas mujhe Vetalraj ki gaddi chinni hai aur main aaupcharik taur par bhi Vetal rani ban jaaungi.

Main- Hmm thik hai par wo hum baad mein karenge pahle hame sabko bachana hai.

Mohini- Thik hai tum mujhe le chalo har uss jagah jaha ye dikkat hai main sab dekh lungi.

Main usko lekar pahle Jinlok pahuch gaya kyun ki yaha jo Dark jinns the wo bhi vetal hi the.

Yaha par bhi Mohini ne waisa hi kiya jiske baad saare thik ho gaye bas ek dikkat rah gayi wo tha waha ka kala hissa dark region Jinlok ka jisko thik karne ke liye mujhe aur Shilpa dono ko waha hona padta jo abhi mumkin nahi tha.

Waha se nikal kar fir main Mohini ko har uss jagah le gaya jaha wo dikkat thi.

Itna jyada taral apne ander lene ke kaaran wo bilkul se kaali ho chuki thi uske hoont surkh lal ho gaye the aur uske baal wo bhi thode thode lal ho chale the dekhne mein uska ye roop bahut hi aakarshak tha.

Mohini- Arre aise kya dekh rahe ho ab.

Main- Yaar tum to matlab kya bataun.....

Mohini ne apni aankhen band ki aur fir apne pahle jaise roop mein aa gayi aur ussi waqt jaise main kisi nashe se bahar aaya tha aisa laga mujhe.

Main - Ye kya tha.

Mohini- Arre wo Vetal Rani ka roop tha kahte hai koi bhi iss roop ke aage tik nahi paata saayad sach hi kahte hai...aur main nahi chahti ki tum mere aakarshan jaadu ke jkaaran mere pass aao issliye badal diya.

Main - Hmm thik hai.

Shilpa- Samrath Paridhi ki tajposhi honi hai aap jaldi se aa jaaiye

Main- Hmm thik hai aa raha hu.

Shilpa- Haa aur uss Mohini ko bhi le aaiyega.....accha kya aap Puja aur Priya ko bhi.....

Main- Lana to chahta hu Shilpa par muskil hai mere pass ab wo love portion nahi hai aur iss waqt R.G bhi thik nahi hai ki usse maang lu.

Shilpa(Udas hokar) - Thik hai koi nahi aap dono aa jaao hum unke binna hi ye kar lenge.

Mohini- Kya hua aap ekdum se chup ho gaye the kyun.

Main- Arre kuch nahi wo Shilpa se baat kar raha tha aaj Paridhi ki tajposhi hai to bulaya hai humme

Mohini- Mujhe bhi bulaya hai kya..

Main - Haa tumhe bhi

Mohini- Accha fir ye Puja aur Priya ko bhi bulaya hoga naa.

Main- Hmm par wo nahi jaa sakti unko abhi tak kuch yaad nahi aaya hai aur naa hi mere paas ab wo love portion hai jisse main unke maan mein khud ke prati pyaar jaga saku.

Mohini- Main hu naa abhi aap ruko bas ek kaam karo unn dono ko mere saamne laa do.

Main- Tum kya karogi

Mohini- Sammohit karungi unko aur unke dimmag mein tumhare liye pyaar piada kar dungi isme hum vetal expert hote hai.

Main- Par kya ye sahi hoga.

Mohini- Hmm hoga ab chinta mat karo dono ko mere samne le aao.

Maine bhi Baba aur N.mom se bol dono ko lane ko bola

Karib 20 minute baad dono hi hamare saamne thi.

Mohini unki aankhon mein dekhne lagi aur kuch hi der mein wo dono hi katputliyon ki tarah khade the.

Mohini- Hmm to ab iss ladke ko dekho aur isse pyaar karna shuru kar do jab tum dono hosh mein aaogi tab isse beinteha pyaar karogi samje.

Wo dono bas haa mein sar hilla diye.

Thodi hi der baad dono ko hosh aaya dono hi mujhe ajeeb nazaron se dekh rahi thi.

Main- Mohini kuch gadbad to naa kar di naa tumne ye dono aise kyun ghur rahi hai mujhe.

Mohini- Arre thoda waqt lagta hai insab mein. Par result hamesha 90 percent success hi hota hai

Main- 90 percent se kya matlab hai agar success naa hua to.

Mohini- To fir aage dekha jaayega...

Aaj ke liye itna hi ab agle update mein dekhte hai kya Puja aur Priya ko bhi sab yaad aata hai yaa nahi , Paridhi ki tajposhi ke baad Rani pari aur pari lok thik hota hai yaa nahi iss Naniji ke accident ko kyun likha gaya hai yaha wo bhi.

To banne rahiye.

Sorry der se update dene ke liye Main fash gaya tha kisi chiz mein

Vk248517 · Jul 14, 2020

Awesome update bro

Vickey1211 · Jul 14, 2020

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UPDATE - 86

Ab tak

Maine Paridhi aur Shilpa dono ko Parilok bhej diya waha sambhalne ke liye aur khud Mohini ke saath uski madad ke liye ruk gaya.

Aage

To pahle hum chalte hai Parilok mein.

(Paridhi ke respect mein)

Maine kabhi nahi socha tha ki parilok ko iss tarah andhere mein dubba hua dekhungi. Bahut hi burra lag raha tha mujhe.

Main- Didi ye kya ho gaya dekho naa..

Shilpa- dekh rahi hu Paridhi aur isse nikalne ka upay bhi hai ere paas par usse pahle chal Raani pari se milte hai.

Main- Hmm chalo

Hum dono kisi tarah uss andhere mein hamare mahal mein pahuche. Waha se fir Maa ke kamre ki oor gaye.

Kamre mein Maa leti hui thi bed par bilkul bejaan aur unke bagal mein Pihu baithi roo rahi thi.

Main- Pihu

Pihu ne jaise hi meri awaj sunni meri oor dekhne lagi uske aashu aur bhi jaldi jaldi bahne lagi wo mere galle lag gayi .

Pihu- Didi aap aa gayi dekho naa Maa ko kya ho gaya hai main bahut der se utha rahi hu par utth hi nahi rahi ....Aap utaho naa unko ...

Shilpa- Beta shant ho jaao tum to hamari sabse bahadur bahan hoo na

Pihu- Shilpa didi aap bhi aaye ho...Maa ko thik kar do naa

Shilpa- Ussi liye to aaye hai chalo ab tum shant ho jaao aur jaa kar tajposhi ki taiyaari karao.

Main- Ye kya bol rahi ho Didi aap...

Shilpa- Paridhi bas yahi ek raasta hai hamare paas tumhe nayi rani pari banna hoga tabhi Parilok thik hoga andhere se bahar aa jaayega.

Main- Par Maa ka kya wo kaise thik hongi..

Shilpa- Ek baat batao jab bhi Parilok main koi bimari failti hai ya kuch hota hai to kon thik karta tha.

Pihu- Maa karti thi aur aaj....

Shilpa- Arre Pihu sab thik ho jaayega tu bas jaa aur taiyaari karwa...

Pihu bhi chali gayi usko viswash tha Shilpa aur mere upar.

Main- Kya main kar paungi didi matlab maa ke paas anubhaw tha mere paas nahi hai koi anubhaw.

Shilpa- Main hu naa...main bhi madad karungi teri bas ek baar teri tajposhi ho jaaye tu Rani pari ban jaa fir hum choti maa( rani pari) ko hum thi kar denge.

Chaliye ab yaha se dur chalte hai apne hero ke pass.

Main(Saurya)- Mohini ye kya kar rahi ho tum ?

Mohini- Kya kar rahi hu tumne bola tha naa logo ko wapas pahle jaisa karne ko to uske liye mujhe dhyaan lagana hoga ab chup raho...

Main- thik hai tum karo main tab tak baaki jagahon ka dekh kar aata hu.

Ab chalte hai thoda sa picche. Yaad hai Mohit ne Shurbhi apni Maa ko call kiya tha bataya tha unko ki unki aankhen wapas aa gayi hai.

To tab Shurbhi Nanaji ke ghar se nikli hamare paas aane ko par wo akeli nahi thi.

Flashback (2 din pahle)

Niharika ne Zafar ko maar diya tha aur mujhe bhi uski khabar de di thi.

Main uss waqt Mohit mamu ke saath ghar par tha Shurbhi nani ke aane ke intezar mein.

Mohit mamu ne mujhe bola tha ki hum Shurbhi nani ko surprise denge jab wo aaye to main darwaja kholu jisse wo aur jyada khush ho jaati.

Maine bhi wahi kiya par saayad kismat ko hume surprise dena tha.

Shurbhi nani ke saath meri Nani ji bhi aayi thi. Plan ke anushar maine gate khola aur

Main- supris........

Bas itna hi bol paya saamne Nani ji thi. Wo mujhe dekhe jaa rahi thi Shurbhi nani bhi mujhe dekhe jaa rahi thi aur main unn dono ko.

Mohit- Kon hai Saurya. Maa aayi hai naa main bh.....aap (Mujhse) tum jao saman pahucha diya naa ab kya yahi rahoge mere saath.

Naniji- Mohit beta kon hai ye.....mjhe pahchana hua kyun lag raha hai.

Mohit- Ji badi malkin ye saman pahuchne wala hai

Naniji- kitni baar bola hai mujhe badi maa bola kar

Mohit(Tanna marte hue)- Jo Maa bolte the unko to marwa diya aur mujhe bol rahi ho aap Badi Maa bolne ko mujhe bhi marwane ka irada hai....aap meri Maa ki malkin ho wahi raho aur kuch banne ki jarurat nahi.

Naniji kuch bhi nahi boli bas khadi rahi waise hi unki aankhen lablaba gayi thi.

S.nani- Mohit aise baat karte hai bado se....

Mohit- Agar log inke jaise hoo to isse bhi bura bolna chahiye wo to sanskar hai mere jo kam bol raha hu...Maa yaad hai naa Choti ko nikal diya tha ghar se inhone hi aur bhi batao....

Naniji se raha nahi gaya aur wo waha se daudti hui chali gayi unki aankhon se aanshu gir rahe the.

S.Nani- Mohit mere bacche ye sahi nahi kiya tunne aise baat nahi karni chahiye thi tujhe....aur Ye Saurya yaha kaise...

Mohit mama ne unko puri baat batayi ki kaise hum bus pe mille fir kis tarah Ghar mein Poonam maasi ki entry aur sabhi ko apne saath le jaana Mom ka mujhe yaha rahne ko kahna aur bhi bahut kuch bataya unhone.

S.nani- Saurya teri aankhen bilkul meri beti ki tarah dikhti hai re aur chahra bilkul Deep babu ki tarah kaash wo hote aaj yaha....

Abhi hum baat hi kar rahe the ki phone baja S.nani ka.

S.nani- Kyaa....par kaise abhi to wo yahi thi....Main main abhi aa rahi hu

Call cut.

Mohit- Kya hua Maa aap itna ghabrayi hui kyun hai.

S.nani- Didi ka accident ho gaya hai unko hospital le gaye hai log. Main jaa rahi hu tum yahi rukko aur Saurya ka khayal rakho.

Mohit- Thik hai jaao aap main hu idher.

Ussdin se Nani ji abhi tak hospital mein hi thi.

Flashback ends

Mohini khadi ho chuki thi.

Mohini- Hmm chalo main taiyaar hu ab par ek dikkat hai.

Main- Batao kya dikkat hai.

Mohini- Mujhe ye sab karne ke liye takat chahiye...

Main-Haa to batao kaise millegi takat

Mohini- hm tumhara khoon chahiye.

Main - Ye gajab hai yaar abhi kuch der hua hai mile hue aur tum khoon par khoon maange jaa rahi ho...

Mohini- Arre sach mein chahiye mujhe warna pura kaam nahi kar paunga.

Main- Arre majak kar raha tha le lo jitna lena hai.

Bas fir kya tha Mohini ne apna muh mere gardan pe rakha aur khoon chusne lagi.

Thodi der main uska kaam ho gaya aur fir wo mujhse alag ho gayi.

Mohini- Chalo ab portal kholo aur mujhe har uss planet par le chalo jaha ye dikkat hai.

Main- Arre pahle to yaha ka khatam kar lo fir kahi aur ka dekhna.

Mohini- Hmm ye bhi sahi hai.

Mohini ne apni aankhen band ki aur wo hawa mein udne lagi.

Hawa mein jaate hi uske sharir se kuch waves nikalne lage aur fir kareeb 5 minute baad hi uske charo taraf koi layer ban gayi kisi taral ki jo pata nahi kaha se aayi thi.

Thodi der baad wo taral Mohini ke muh mein se hote hue uske daato ke jariye uske sharir mein chale gaye.

Uske baad jo hua Mohini ko wo to aur bhi ajeeb tha Mohini ki skin kaali hone lagi.

Main- Ye kya hai tum thik to ho Mohini.

Mohini nicche aayi.

Mohini- Haa meri jaan mein thik hu aur lagta hai ab jaldi se main apne naye roop mein aane wali hu. Mohini Vetal lok ki Rani.

Main- Par ye kaise.....

Mohini- Hmm ye aise ki tumhara khoon aur wo taral milkar mujhe bahut shaktishali bana raha hai bahut hi jyada shaktishali....ab bas mujhe Vetalraj ki gaddi chinni hai aur main aaupcharik taur par bhi Vetal rani ban jaaungi.

Main- Hmm thik hai par wo hum baad mein karenge pahle hame sabko bachana hai.

Mohini- Thik hai tum mujhe le chalo har uss jagah jaha ye dikkat hai main sab dekh lungi.

Main usko lekar pahle Jinlok pahuch gaya kyun ki yaha jo Dark jinns the wo bhi vetal hi the.

Yaha par bhi Mohini ne waisa hi kiya jiske baad saare thik ho gaye bas ek dikkat rah gayi wo tha waha ka kala hissa dark region Jinlok ka jisko thik karne ke liye mujhe aur Shilpa dono ko waha hona padta jo abhi mumkin nahi tha.

Waha se nikal kar fir main Mohini ko har uss jagah le gaya jaha wo dikkat thi.

Itna jyada taral apne ander lene ke kaaran wo bilkul se kaali ho chuki thi uske hoont surkh lal ho gaye the aur uske baal wo bhi thode thode lal ho chale the dekhne mein uska ye roop bahut hi aakarshak tha.

Mohini- Arre aise kya dekh rahe ho ab.

Main- Yaar tum to matlab kya bataun.....

Mohini ne apni aankhen band ki aur fir apne pahle jaise roop mein aa gayi aur ussi waqt jaise main kisi nashe se bahar aaya tha aisa laga mujhe.

Main - Ye kya tha.

Mohini- Arre wo Vetal Rani ka roop tha kahte hai koi bhi iss roop ke aage tik nahi paata saayad sach hi kahte hai...aur main nahi chahti ki tum mere aakarshan jaadu ke jkaaran mere pass aao issliye badal diya.

Main - Hmm thik hai.

Shilpa- Samrath Paridhi ki tajposhi honi hai aap jaldi se aa jaaiye

Main- Hmm thik hai aa raha hu.

Shilpa- Haa aur uss Mohini ko bhi le aaiyega.....accha kya aap Puja aur Priya ko bhi.....

Main- Lana to chahta hu Shilpa par muskil hai mere pass ab wo love portion nahi hai aur iss waqt R.G bhi thik nahi hai ki usse maang lu.

Shilpa(Udas hokar) - Thik hai koi nahi aap dono aa jaao hum unke binna hi ye kar lenge.

Mohini- Kya hua aap ekdum se chup ho gaye the kyun.

Main- Arre kuch nahi wo Shilpa se baat kar raha tha aaj Paridhi ki tajposhi hai to bulaya hai humme

Mohini- Mujhe bhi bulaya hai kya..

Main - Haa tumhe bhi

Mohini- Accha fir ye Puja aur Priya ko bhi bulaya hoga naa.

Main- Hmm par wo nahi jaa sakti unko abhi tak kuch yaad nahi aaya hai aur naa hi mere paas ab wo love portion hai jisse main unke maan mein khud ke prati pyaar jaga saku.

Mohini- Main hu naa abhi aap ruko bas ek kaam karo unn dono ko mere saamne laa do.

Main- Tum kya karogi

Mohini- Sammohit karungi unko aur unke dimmag mein tumhare liye pyaar piada kar dungi isme hum vetal expert hote hai.

Main- Par kya ye sahi hoga.

Mohini- Hmm hoga ab chinta mat karo dono ko mere samne le aao.

Maine bhi Baba aur N.mom se bol dono ko lane ko bola

Karib 20 minute baad dono hi hamare saamne thi.

Mohini unki aankhon mein dekhne lagi aur kuch hi der mein wo dono hi katputliyon ki tarah khade the.

Mohini- Hmm to ab iss ladke ko dekho aur isse pyaar karna shuru kar do jab tum dono hosh mein aaogi tab isse beinteha pyaar karogi samje.

Wo dono bas haa mein sar hilla diye.

Thodi hi der baad dono ko hosh aaya dono hi mujhe ajeeb nazaron se dekh rahi thi.

Main- Mohini kuch gadbad to naa kar di naa tumne ye dono aise kyun ghur rahi hai mujhe.

Mohini- Arre thoda waqt lagta hai insab mein. Par result hamesha 90 percent success hi hota hai

Main- 90 percent se kya matlab hai agar success naa hua to.

Mohini- To fir aage dekha jaayega...

Aaj ke liye itna hi ab agle update mein dekhte hai kya Puja aur Priya ko bhi sab yaad aata hai yaa nahi , Paridhi ki tajposhi ke baad Rani pari aur pari lok thik hota hai yaa nahi iss Naniji ke accident ko kyun likha gaya hai yaha wo bhi.

To banne rahiye.

Sorry der se update dene ke liye Main fash gaya tha kisi chiz mein

Mast update h bhai
Maza aa gya

Reza · Jul 14, 2020

Superb Update Bro...
Waiting For Next

Avi9545 · Jul 14, 2020

Nice update

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