Fantasy Saurya - ek youdha (Completed)

Ristrcted · Apr 11, 2020

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Killerpanditji(pandit) · Jul 26, 2020

Ristrcted said:
UPDATE - 88 (Mega update)

Ab tak

Alex aur Varsha ki bacchi aayi hui thi future se Maarcuss ke saath...Marcus ne bacchi ko mujhe saunpa aur mar gaya. Abhi sabko uss bacchi ka pata chal chuka tha...

Aage

Bacchi Alex ki goad mein thi. Alex aur Varsha dono ke hi haath bachhi ke sar pe tha aur unko pata nahi kyun bahut gussa aa raha tha.

Yaha thoda sa waqt lagna hai tabtak hum ghum aate hai Parilok...

Parilok mein wahi andhera faila tha Saurya to waha se nikal gaya tha kyunki uska ab koi kaam hi nahi baccha tha waha par uske hisab se...

Mahel ke ek room mein Mohini ka interview chal raha tha.

Shilpa- To tum bhi unse shadi karna chahti ho.

Mohini- ji

Paridhi jo iss waqt taiyaar ho rahi thi wo bhi boli.

Paridhi - Tum aanti ho naa usnki kitni patniyan hai aur.....

Mohini - Ji sab pata hai mujhe aur ussi ke karan to main itne saal intezar karti rahi. Uss kaid mein jaha mujhe mere hi pita ne daal diya tha.

Puja- Didi mere hisab se ye bilkul sahi hai. isne hum dono ko bhi to sab yaad dilwaya.

Priya - hmm didi sahi hai ye.

Shilpa jo sayad kuch confirm karna chahti thi usne ek khanjar nikala aur usse Mohini ke haath par ek cut maar diya.

Sabhi usko hi dekhne lage par Mohini muskura rahi thi.

Uska khoon chamak raha tha aur ye dekh kar Shilpa ne apne magicc se usko wapas thik kar diya.

Shilpa- Thik hai Mohini hame manjur hai tumhara aur Saurya ka rista.

Ab sabhi Shilpa ko dekhne lage.

Shilpa- Ab kya hua tum sab ko mere faisle se aitrazz hai kya.

Sabhi ne naa mein sar hillaya.

Shilpa- Hmm to chalo ab ready ho jaao jaldi se ye sab khatam kar.

Bas fir kya tha Paridhi aur baaki sab ready hue.

Paridhi ko le jaaya gaya fir Parilok ke singhashan ki oor jaha usko baithaya gaya.

Uski taajposhi ki gayi, Taaj jaise hi uske sar par rakha gaya uska to roop hi badal gaya wo pahle se to khubshurat thi hi ab uski skin ekdum se sone si chamakne lagi.

Ussi chamak ke saath puar Parilok ek baar jagmaga utha.

Parilok ek baar fir se roshan ho gaya tha.

Sabhi log bade khush hue.

Pihu- Didi Maa

Paridhi(sabhi se)- Aap sahi bhojan ka luft uthaiye hum aate hai.

Paridhi singhasan se uthi aur chal padi apni Maa ke kamre ki oor aur uske pochhe chal padi baaki ki toli.

Room mein pahuch kar.

Padridhi ko pata to tha nahi ki karna kya hai to usne Shilpa ki oor dekha.

Shilpa- Paridhi mujhe laga tha ki sirf hum dono honge tomuskil ho jaayegi par ab jab hum saare yahi hai to koi dikkat ki baat nahi hai (Pihu se) tum jao aur gate bahar se lock kar do.

Pihu- par main.....

Shilpa- Nahi Pihu abhi nahi chalo jaao hum baad mein tumhe bulla lenge.

Pihu naa chahti hui bhi chali gayi bahar. Wahi ander

Shilpa- Chalo sab milkar ghera banao inke aas pass.

Sabhi ne wahi kiya.

Shilpa- Sabke haath ek dusre ke haaton mein hona chahiye....Paridhi tumhara dhyaan bas Rani Pari pe hona chahiye samjhi.

Paridhi - hmm

thodi hi der mein Paridhi ke aankhon se ek roshni nikli jo shidhi Rani Pari par padi aur wo ekdum se baith gayi.

Rani pari- kya hua tha yaha main iss tarah.....tum sab tum sab ko sab yaad aa gay....Mohini tum bhi ho ...Samrath ki kaha hai....

Pata nahi kitna kuch ek hi baar mein puchne lagi wo

Paridhi - Maa ab aap thik to ho naa kuch ajeeb...

Rani pari- Tum..tumhari tajposhi ho gayi...tumne mujhe thik kiya beta.

Paridhi- Hum sabne kiya chalo ab aap aaram karo yaha.

Sabhi wahi baith gaye aur Pihu bhi aa gayi waha par.

Chaliye ab hum ek nazar Bansoa parbhi daal aate hai jaha Margret apne Dada, Sangeeta aur Rita aur Henry ke saath ek room mein thi.

Rita- hmm batao kyun bulaya hai hame yaha.

Margret- Hmm samajh nahi aa raha....sayad sapna tha mera par fir bhi batta rahi hu.

Henry- sapna...sach mein tum hame yaha sapna sunnane layi ho..

Margret- hmm

Headmaster - Henry sun lete hai naa iski baatein (margret se) hmm bolo.

Margret- Dadu maine dekha main mar rahi thi aap sab bhi mar gaye the ek choti si dragon ki bacchi thi jo mujhe waha se yaha laayi aur main apne hi saamne khadi hui th...fir uss bacchi ne mujhe mere hi sharir ko chune kaha aur bas main behosh ho gayi thi.....par issi bich mujhe ek planet dikha kuch sakalen dikhi jinke saath main thi aap sab the..aur aur

Headmaster- Haa bolo aur kya.

Margret- Ye planet khali ho chuka tha yaha ke taikhane se wo nikal chukke the.

Abhi tak to Headmaster ko viswass nahi ho raha tha par jab baat aayi taikhane ki unke kaan khade ho gaye.

Headmaster- Taikhana par yaha to koi taikhana hi nahi hai..

Margret- Hai yaha par taikhana hai aur uska pata aapko hai..

Henry- Kya ye sach hai Headmaster.

Headmaster- hmm sach hai par ye waqt baat karne ka nahi hai agar isne jo bhi bola wo sach hai to hum mussibat main hhai aur isse bachne ka tarika bas ek hi hai yaha se nikalna.

Margret- Dadu aapke pass ek kitab hai naa usss kitab ko yahi chodna hai aapko aur humme ussi planet pe jaana hai jiska jikr mere sapne mein aaya tha.

Rita- Headmaster kya ye sahi hoga....matlab bas iski baat ko...

Margret- Rita tum apne bhai aur Pita ko maarne ka soch rahi ho kyunki unke rahte hue tum Henry se shadi nahi kar sakti.......aur kuch bolu.

Rita- nahi samajh gayi .... Henry chalo jaldi se sab suru karo.

Headmaster- hmm ye pura ka pura planet khali kardo saare spirits ko yaha se jaane ko bol do aur fountain of worrior ka paani nikalo yaha se.

Sabhi apne apne kaamo mein lag gaye.

Chaliye inhe yaha chod hum Earth pe chalte hai jaha Saurya yaani main khada dekhe jaa raha tha Alex aur Varsha ko kabhi unki aankhon mein gusssa aa jaata to kabhi aashu.

Bas yahi sab chal raha tha.

Kappa - Chalo yaar iss Maarcus ko jala dete hai.

Main- Hmm chalo sayad tab tak ye don bhi thik ho jaaye.

Kaal sarp ne apna muh se aag ka gola feka uspe aur Maarcuss ki body jalne lagi.

Main- jab yahi karna tha to rukke hue kyun the.

Kaal sarp - mujhe gussa aa raha tha ispe tumpe khud pe bas issiliye ye kiya.

Abhi wo bol hi raha tha ki waha ek bahut hi tez chamak hui.

Maarcuss ki body jo jal rahi thi uske raakh ek hone lage aur wahi chamakne lagi thi.

Main- ye kya hai aur aisi chamak.

Kappa- tumhara taufa..

Maine acche se dekha to ye meri talwar thi jo maine Maarcuss ko di thi par ye ussse thodi si alag lag rahi thi.

Main usko uthane gaya to waha ek saaya aa gaya.

Saaya- Ye talwar tumhari aur meri hai dono mill chuki hai aur isko bas tum hi chala sakte ho...iska istemal karo aur aane wale khatre ko khatam karo.

Main - Maarcuss tum...

Saaya gayab ho gaya wo talwar khud ba khud mere haath mein aa gayi aur main uss jagah se kahi aur hi pahuch gaya.

Main- Ye kon si jagah hai main yaha kaise.

Talwar- Mera malik banna hai to sabit karo khud ko agar naa kar paaye to....

Chaliye inn sab ko chod kar hum wapas chalte hai Alex ke pass jaha wo abhi bhi waise hi khada tha.

Kaal sarp- Ye Saurya ko kya hua ye bhi murat ki tarah khada ho gaya.

Waha koi tha hi nahi jo uski baaton ka jawab de pata N.mom thi to par wo bhi kisi soch mein gum thi pata nahi kya....

Kaal sarp ne unki orr dekha aur unko awaj lagaya aur wo hosh mein aa gayi.

N.mom- mujhe yaha se jaana hai abhi warna Saurya ko khatra hai mujhe mere planet par le chalo jaldi se.

Kaal sarp- par ye to yahi hai aakhirr baat kya hui.

N.mom- mujhe le chalo..

Kaal sarp ne bhi unko waha se le jaana hi sahi samjha aur unko waha se le gaye.

Chaliye ek baar hum ek jhalak Alex aur Varsha ke dimmag mein chal rahi baaton ko dekhte hai.

Varsha ek jail jaise kamre mein band thi apni beti ko goad mein liye hue.

Tabhi waha par Fready aa jata hai aur usse uski Bacchi ko chinne lagta hai Varsha apne dragon ke roop mein aa jaati hai aur fir...abhi wo kuch karti usse pahle hi ek aur parchayi waha aa jaati hai.

Parchayi- Varsha main tumhari beti ko tumtak pahuca dunga tumaha Alex bhi tumhe wapas kar sakta hu par tumhe mujhpe bharosha karna hoga.

Varsha Alex kaa naam sun kar bolti hai.

Varsha- kya ye ho sakta hai.

Parchayi- Ho sakta hai aur ho ga bhi bas tumhe meri madad karni hai iss Fready ko jaldi se yaha se hatao main wada karta hu tumhe tumhari bacchi mil jaayegi saath mein Alex bhi.

Varsha ne wahi kiya aur apne muh se aag ke gole fenkne lagi Fready par lekin ye ek maayajal tha....darasal hua ye tha ki wo prchayi fready thi jisne Varsha pe kaabu paa liya tha aur jo Fready jispe varsha hamla kar rahi thi wo darasal Maarcuss tha jo Varsha ki bacchi ko lene aaya tha taaki wo past mein jaa sake aur Saurya se baat kar sake usko batla sake ki kya hua hai yaha.

Isse pahle wo kuch karta Varsha ne hamla kar diya uspe aur uski halat kharab ho gayi par wo bhi apna bachaw karne ke chakarr mein Varsha ko ghayal kar chuka tha... bas issi baat ka to intezar kar raha tha wo Fready usne Varsha ke bache ko utha liya waha se par tabhi uss baccchi ne uss Fready ko ek jhatka diya. Fready hill bhi nahi paa raha tha wo wahi par gir gaya. Marcuss ki halat pahle se hi kharab thi Varsha ki halat bhi thik nahi thi.

Wo bacchi udti hui apne Maa ke paas gayi aur uska haath Varsha ke sar pe chala gaya jisse Varsha ko bahut kuch pata chal gaya ki Alex ki maut kaa karan Maarcuss hai ussi ne sabko maara tha ussi ki vhal thi ye saath hi usko Maarcuss ke saath ho rahi gaddari ka bhi pata chala aur uske yaha aane ka maksad bhi.

Varsha ki halat bigad rahi...wo bahut jakhmi ho gayi thi. Baat darasal aisi thi ki Varsha bahut din se wahi kaid mein thi aur uske saath hi aur bhi jo the wo bhi.

Maarcuss - Main jaanta bharose ke layak nahi hu par ab na a tu tumhare paas aur naa hi mere passs koi raasta baccha hai mujhe apni bacchi saunp do main isko tumdono tak pahucha dunga.

Varsha - Baaki sab ka kya kya w....

Maarcusss- Nahi maine sabka socha hua hai unn sab ko bhi wapas le jaunga..tumhe bhi le jaana chahta tha par ye ho naa sakka mujhe maaf kar do..meri madad karo main aise nahi rah sakta..

Varsha- thik hai le jaao isko magar yaad rakhna agar kuch aur hua to tum...

Maarcuss- Meri baat maano maine bhi dekha hai mera anjam kaisa hoga jo main nahi chahta issiliye ye kar raha hu. Agar fir bhi yakin naa ho to apni bacchi pe aatma kawach laga do.

Varsha ko ye sahi laga waise bhi wo marne hi wali thi to usne baat maan li Maarcuss ki aatmakawach laga diya apnio beti ke upar aur bhej diya usko Maarcuss ke saath aur khud maar gayi.

Maarcuss ki goad mein aate hi uss bacchi ne sabse pahla kaam kiya Margret ke pass jaane ka usko waha se past mein bheja aur bhi kuch kaam kiye aur fir aa gayi Maarcuss ke saath Saurya ke pass.

Aaj ke liye itna hi next update mein dekhiye Kya Saurya uss talwar ko paa sakta hai agar haa to kis tarah se aur ye N.mom ko kya hua aur bhi bahut kuch to banne rahiye

Zabardast update dost

Shahrukh · Jul 26, 2020

Awesome update bhai keep posting

Avi9545 · Jul 26, 2020

Nice update

Awan baba · Jul 26, 2020

Wah fantastic update dia ha bahi maza Aa geya

Black water · Jul 26, 2020

Fantastic update bhai ?

Ristrcted said:
UPDATE - 87

Ab tak

Mohini ne Priya aur Puja ko sammohit kiya tha unke maan mein mere liye pyaar paida karne ke liye

Ab aage

Dono mujhe ghure jaa rahi thi mujhe pata nahi kyun bada ajeeb saa lag raha tha. Upar se wo Mohini ki 90 % wali baat alag mujhe pareshan kare jaa rahi thi.

Main khada tha ab wo dono hi meri oor badhne lagi dhere dhere aur pata nahi kyun Mohini ke chahre par ek muskan aa gayi main usko dekhne hi laga tha ki Puja aur Priya dono hi mere upar jhapat padi.

Main- Arre ye ho kya raha hai....arre chodo mujhe .....hato arre ye ye kya hai.....Mohini hatao inko dekho ye...

Mohini- Bas thodi der fir ye thik ho jaayegi aur inko sab yaad bhi aa jaayega.

Main- ye ho kya ......aaaahhhh aarre kaaat kyun rahi ho aaaahhh Mohini alag karo inko...

Mohini - Bas 1 minute aur ye bas hone hi wala hai tum bas thoda aur sah lo

Main- Ye ho kya raha hai inko ye aise kyun ka......uuummmmmmmmhhh

Priya- Waah mazza aa gaya

Puja- Haa choti bahut mazza aaya

Main- Arre utho mere upar se kar kya rahi ho tum dono

Mohini- chalo ab sab ho gaya.

Puja aur Priya ne ek baar Mohini ki oor dekha phir meri oor.

Puja- Ye kon hai

Priya ne aas paas dekha to uske hosh udd gaye.

Priya- Didi hum hum kamre mein nahi hai ye ye koi aur jagah hai dekho

Puja ne bhi yaha waha dekha aur fir mujhse dur ho gayi apne kapde thik karne lagi.

Puja- Aapko saram nahi aati khule mein ye sab karte hue aur ye ladki kon hai

Main- Main kar raha tha....arre maine chua tak naa hai tum dono ko tum dono hi chadh gayi mere upar aur mujhe bol rahi ho.

Priya- Par hum room mein the aapne hi hame bulaya apne pass hai naa Didi.

Puja- Haa choti wahi to par hum yaha kaise.

Mohini- Didi log wo naa baad mein pata karte hai abhi chalte hai paridhi didi ki tajposhi ho rahi hai aur hum late ho rahe hai.

Puja- Kya unki tajposhi aur mujhe pata bhi nahi (mujhse) ab khade kya ho chalo bhi

Main- Haa chalo.

Maine portal khola aur usme se hote hue hum pahuch gaye parilok jo pura andhere mein tha.

Priya - Ye kya hua hai yaha sab aise kaise ho gaya.

Maine ek baar Mohini ko dekha to usne ishare mein rukne ko bola.

Mohini- Didi wo Rani Pari behosh hai issiliye sab aisa hai.

Paridhi- Kya wo behosh hai par kaise...

Shilpa- Puja Priya tum dono

Shilpa ne hame dekh liya tha aur unn dono ko dekh kar to aur bhi khush ho gayi thi. Ishare se mujhse pucha ye sab yaha kaise. Maine bhi MOhini ki oor ishara kar diya.

Shilpa- Chalo ab tum tinno mere saath kuch baat karni hai aur Samrath aap yahi ruko.

Main kuch bolta usse pahle hi wo saare chale gaye the. Main wahi par ghumne laga apni yaadein tazza karne laga.

Chaliye inn janab ko chodte hai aur hum Bansoa mein chalte hai jaha kuch log pyaar mohabat ki baatein kar rahe the ek garden mein. Samajh to gaye hi hoge.

Ji haa ye the Henry aur Rita dono hi ek dusre se mitti mitti baatein kar rahe the.

Wahi Margret jo thi wo class mein thi. Abhi kuch soch hi rahi thi ki usko chakar aane lage aur wo gir gayi.

Jaise hi ye hua ek professor usko waha ke medical mein le gaya aur turant hi headmaster ko khabar di.

Headmasyer waha pahuch gaye unke saath sangeeta bhi thi.

Margret ki jaanch ki jaa hi rahi thi ki wo chillate hue uthhi aur uthte hi aas pass dekhne lagi.

Bas issi waqt koi tha jo Bansoa se bahar chala gaya ab kya hua tha wo to aage pata chalega.

Chaliye wapas chalte hai hum Parilok jaha sab kuch taiyaar tha tajposhi ke liye.

Saare niwasi raj mahel mein aaye hue the sabhi ke haathon mein kuch na kuch tha jisse wo roshni kar rahe the.

Yaha ka niyam tha tajposi ke waqt koi bhi mardjaat waha nahi hota tha issi liye mujhe bhi waha se bahar bhej diya. Main confuse sa ki agar kuch kaam nahi tha to Shilpa ne bllaya hi kyun mujhe.

Abhi main aise hi soch raha tha ki Alex ki awaj aayi mujhe.

Alex- Ek kaam ho gaya hai aur saayad Varsha bhi ab anne wali hai to tum taiyaari karo

Main - Hmm samjh gaya tum usko dekho aur ek kaam karo Kaal Sarp ko Pritvi par jaaane ko bolo abhi issi waqt main bhi nikal raha hu.

Alex- Par tajposi

Main- Arre mera koi kaam nahi hai waha ab jaldi se kaal sarp ko bejho aur tum Varsha ke saath lage raho.

Alex- thik hai tum pahucho wo nikal rahe hai.

Main bhi portal kholte hue pahuch gaya Earth par R.G ke pass.

Main- Maa Papa kaise hai abhi.

R.G- Abhi thik hai par koi bhi halchal nahi honi shuru hui hai abhi.

Main- Hmm thik hai inka acche se dhyaan rakho waqt najdeek hai aur iss baar inhe kuch hone nahi dunga.

R.G- Hmm thik hai waise wo jadi butti le aaya hu jo aapne bola tha.

R.G ne mujhe ek jadi butti di aur main usko lekar nikal gaya.

Abhi Kaal sarp ko waqt lagna tha to main chala gaya uss jaha mujhe Kappa aur orange mani milli thi. Orange manni se hi orange book tak pahucha tha main.

Main pahuch gaya uss haweli ke pass.

Kappa- Tumhe bas mujhe dhundhna hai aur chuna hai bas aur main gayab ho jaaunga waha se aur fir tum uss orange Moti ki madad se le lena wo orange book aur meri talwar bhi.

Main- Kappa tumhari talwar kya waha hogi matlab tumhari ek hi talwar thi wo maine Maarcuss ko de di thi....

Abhi hum baatein hi kar rahe the ki ek bijli kadki bhayanak aawaj hui aur ek kalla saaya humare saamne bahut hi buri halat mein aa khada hua...kala sa libas pehne hue tha wo haathon mein ek bacchi thi uski.

Saaya- Saurya ye lo iska dhyaan rakhna

Main- kon kon ho tum aur ye kiski bacchi hai.

Saaya- Waqt nahi mere pass isko lo aur meri lash ko jalla dena.

Usne wo bacchi mujhe di aur fir gir gaya yaa yun kaho maar gaya.

Main uske pass gaya usko dhyaan se dekhne laga jo chahra dhaka hua tha usko bahar nikal kar dekha...

Ajeeb sa chahera tha uska jalla hua par uski aankhen pahchni si lag rahi thi..

Main- Kappa isse kahi dekha hai saayad humne...

Kappa ki koi awaj nahi aayi maine ek do baar aur bhi try kiya par koi jawab nahi.

Maine fir bacchi ko dekha baddi hi pyari thi wo aur saath hi jaani pahchanhi bhi lag rahi thi abhi neend mein thi wo ek pyaari si muskan uske chahre par thi.

Kappa- Alex

Main- Haa baal to........oooo teri ye Alex ki beti hai apne Alex ki Varsha ki beti hai ye.

Kappa- Hmm unhi ki hai main tab se issi ko dekh raha hu ye koi aam dragon nahi hai Saurya ye sabse alag hai iski shaktiyan itni hai ki koi iske saamne nahi tik sakta.... agar galat nahi hu main to ye hi MAarcuss ko yaha laayi hai.

Main - Maarcuss kaha hai wo aur ye bacchi usko yaha kaise kya bol rahe ho yaar tum bhi

Kappa- wo jo marra pada hai usko dekh jaa kar acche se wo Maarcuss hi hai.... maine kaha tha wo khud aayega...

Main- wo maarcuss hai par uski ye halat kaise..

Kappa- Kuch nahi jo uske gulam the unhone kisi ke saath millkar iski ye halat kar di hai aur ye kisi tarah bachte bachhate yaha bhag aaya hai iss bacchi ke saath.

Main - Gulam...... kahi tum unn pancho ki baat to nahi kar rahe naa wo Jordon Fready aur baaki tinno..

Kappa - Hmm wahi log haa unhi ki baat kar raha hu main...

Main- Par tumhe kaise pata ye sab

Kappa- Iss bacchi ne dikhaya mujhe sab kuch tumhe bhi dikhayegi ye.... par usse pahle isko iski Maa ke paas le chalo.

Main- hmm ye sahi hai chalo hum Niharika ke planet par chalte hai.

Kappa- Nahi pahle isko Jalla lete hai aur waise hum Alex aur Varsha ko ki ye lo tumhari beti jo future se aayi hai tumse milne.

Abhi hum baatein hi kar rahe the ki entry hui Kaal Sarp ki. Jo thoda sa gusse mein lag raha tha.

Kaal sarp- Kya hai ye tumne mujhe waha aane ko bola tha aur ab yaha aa gaye bata diya hot......ye bacchi bilkul meri Varsha ki tarah dikh rahi hai kon hai ye.

Main- Hmm ye....ye jo hai wo....hmm ye Varsha aur Alex ki Beti hai future se aayi hai

Kaal sarp ek baar to mujhe aise dekhne laga jaise koi bhoot khada ho uske saamne fir usne dhere se uss bacchi ko chuwa

Jo bacchi abhi tak soo rahi thi uski aankhen khul gayi. Usne roona shuru kar diya.

Kaal sarp ne mujhse uss bacchi ko le liya maine usko rookne ka socha par Kappa ne manna kar diya.

Kaal sarp ki goad mein jaane ke baad shuru mein to wo aur bhi royi saath hi Kaaal sarp ki aankhen gusse se lal ho gayi thi.

Kappa- Saurya Alex aur Varsha ko yaha bulana hoga ab bas wahi dono hai jo indono ko shant karwa sakte hai.

Main- Baat kya hai Kappa mujhe bhi batao

Kappa - Unn dono ko bulla lo wahi tumhe sab bata sakte hai.

Main- thik hai.

Maine ek portal khola Niharika ke planet ko jaane ke liye aur usse ander gaya aur jaldi se Alex aur Varsha ko waha se apne saath laya iss dauran N.Mom bhi milli aur wo bhi mere saath chali aayi.

Saayad sahi waqt par hum saare pahuch gaye warna Kaal Sarp aur wo bacchi waha se jaane wale the.

Kaal sarp ki najar jab ek baar Varsha ki oor gayi to uski aankhon mein jo gussa tha uski jagah ab aashuon ne leli thi.

Wo uss bacchi ko liye hue Varsha ki oor badha.

Varsha waise to dikhati thi ki wo nafrat karti hai apne pita se par uske aankhon mein iss tarah aanshu dekh usko bhi thoda ajeeb laga aur wo bhi uski oor badhi chali gayi.

Varsha- Papa aap roo kyun...

Varsha ki bhi aankhen bhar aayi thi bas itne mein hi wo aage kuch bol hi nahi paayi..

Alex jo ye sab dekh raha tha usko jyada kuch samjh nahi aa raha tha par tabhi uski nazar padi uss bacchi par jo Kaal sarp ke goad mein thi aur abhi Alex ko hi dekhe jaa rahi thi.

Uske chote se chahre par ek manmohak muskan thi jisko dekh koi bhi apni saari pareshaniyan bhul jaaye.

Alex dhere dhere uski oor badhne laga.

Wahi wo bacchi jo abhi Kaal sarp ki goad mein thi uske chote chote pankh nikal aaye aur uska roop ek chota dragon ka ho gaya. Wo udti hui Kaal sarp ke goad se Alex ke pass aa gayi.

Kaal sarp jo uss bacchi ko goad mein liye tha wo muskurane laga.

Varsha - Papa ye kon hai aur ye....

Kaal sarp- Ye tumhari beti hai Varsha meri naatin tumhari aur Alex ki beti hai ye...dekho kaise apne pita ke saath mill rahi hai

Varsha to shocked rah gayi ab koi bhi rah jaata aise situation mein.

Wahi dusri oor Alex ki goad mein wo bacchi jaa chuki thi aur wapas se insani bacche ke roop mein aa gayi thi aur apne haath pair yaha waha fek rahi thi.

Alex bhi usko dekh kar lhush ho raha tha.

N.mom- Alex tumne sunna na ye tumhari aur Varsha ki bacchi hai..

Alex- Haa Bacchi hai .....Kya meri bachhi hai meri aur Varsha ki sach bol raho ho aap..

Main- Alex Varsha Ye sach hai ye tum dono ki bacchi hai jo yaha Maarcuss ke saath aayi hai.

Maarcuss ka naam sun kar wo dono soch mein pad gaye.

Varsha jo abhi Kaal sarp ke paas khadi thi wo khud se Alex ke pass aa gayi.

Uska haath khud se uss bacchi ke sar pe chala gaya saath hi Alex ka bhi haath aur dono ke hi aankhen band ho gayi.

Hum sab unn tinno ko dekh rahe the.

Kaal sarp- Wo apne mata pita ko sab dikkha rahi hai sab kuch jo hua tha. Chalo hum iss Maarcuss ko jala dete hai. Saurya tumhare liye kuch lekar aaya hai ye Maarcuss.

Main - Mere liye ???

Kaal sarp- Hmm tumhare liye hamare liye hum sabke liye.... tumhe isko jalana hoga.

Aaj ke liye itna hi....Ab fir se regular updates millege

next update mein dekhte hai aakhir ye bacchi dikha kya rahi hai sabko, Parilok mein kya chal raha , saath hi wo Nani wala scene aur ek jhalak Maarcuss ke saath aakhir hua kya jo wo iss tarah se yaha aa gaya....

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Black water · Jul 26, 2020

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UPDATE - 87

Ab tak

Mohini ne Priya aur Puja ko sammohit kiya tha unke maan mein mere liye pyaar paida karne ke liye

Ab aage

Dono mujhe ghure jaa rahi thi mujhe pata nahi kyun bada ajeeb saa lag raha tha. Upar se wo Mohini ki 90 % wali baat alag mujhe pareshan kare jaa rahi thi.

Main khada tha ab wo dono hi meri oor badhne lagi dhere dhere aur pata nahi kyun Mohini ke chahre par ek muskan aa gayi main usko dekhne hi laga tha ki Puja aur Priya dono hi mere upar jhapat padi.

Main- Arre ye ho kya raha hai....arre chodo mujhe .....hato arre ye ye kya hai.....Mohini hatao inko dekho ye...

Mohini- Bas thodi der fir ye thik ho jaayegi aur inko sab yaad bhi aa jaayega.

Main- ye ho kya ......aaaahhhh aarre kaaat kyun rahi ho aaaahhh Mohini alag karo inko...

Mohini - Bas 1 minute aur ye bas hone hi wala hai tum bas thoda aur sah lo

Main- Ye ho kya raha hai inko ye aise kyun ka......uuummmmmmmmhhh

Priya- Waah mazza aa gaya

Puja- Haa choti bahut mazza aaya

Main- Arre utho mere upar se kar kya rahi ho tum dono

Mohini- chalo ab sab ho gaya.

Puja aur Priya ne ek baar Mohini ki oor dekha phir meri oor.

Puja- Ye kon hai

Priya ne aas paas dekha to uske hosh udd gaye.

Priya- Didi hum hum kamre mein nahi hai ye ye koi aur jagah hai dekho

Puja ne bhi yaha waha dekha aur fir mujhse dur ho gayi apne kapde thik karne lagi.

Puja- Aapko saram nahi aati khule mein ye sab karte hue aur ye ladki kon hai

Main- Main kar raha tha....arre maine chua tak naa hai tum dono ko tum dono hi chadh gayi mere upar aur mujhe bol rahi ho.

Priya- Par hum room mein the aapne hi hame bulaya apne pass hai naa Didi.

Puja- Haa choti wahi to par hum yaha kaise.

Mohini- Didi log wo naa baad mein pata karte hai abhi chalte hai paridhi didi ki tajposhi ho rahi hai aur hum late ho rahe hai.

Puja- Kya unki tajposhi aur mujhe pata bhi nahi (mujhse) ab khade kya ho chalo bhi

Main- Haa chalo.

Maine portal khola aur usme se hote hue hum pahuch gaye parilok jo pura andhere mein tha.

Priya - Ye kya hua hai yaha sab aise kaise ho gaya.

Maine ek baar Mohini ko dekha to usne ishare mein rukne ko bola.

Mohini- Didi wo Rani Pari behosh hai issiliye sab aisa hai.

Paridhi- Kya wo behosh hai par kaise...

Shilpa- Puja Priya tum dono

Shilpa ne hame dekh liya tha aur unn dono ko dekh kar to aur bhi khush ho gayi thi. Ishare se mujhse pucha ye sab yaha kaise. Maine bhi MOhini ki oor ishara kar diya.

Shilpa- Chalo ab tum tinno mere saath kuch baat karni hai aur Samrath aap yahi ruko.

Main kuch bolta usse pahle hi wo saare chale gaye the. Main wahi par ghumne laga apni yaadein tazza karne laga.

Chaliye inn janab ko chodte hai aur hum Bansoa mein chalte hai jaha kuch log pyaar mohabat ki baatein kar rahe the ek garden mein. Samajh to gaye hi hoge.

Ji haa ye the Henry aur Rita dono hi ek dusre se mitti mitti baatein kar rahe the.

Wahi Margret jo thi wo class mein thi. Abhi kuch soch hi rahi thi ki usko chakar aane lage aur wo gir gayi.

Jaise hi ye hua ek professor usko waha ke medical mein le gaya aur turant hi headmaster ko khabar di.

Headmasyer waha pahuch gaye unke saath sangeeta bhi thi.

Margret ki jaanch ki jaa hi rahi thi ki wo chillate hue uthhi aur uthte hi aas pass dekhne lagi.

Bas issi waqt koi tha jo Bansoa se bahar chala gaya ab kya hua tha wo to aage pata chalega.

Chaliye wapas chalte hai hum Parilok jaha sab kuch taiyaar tha tajposhi ke liye.

Saare niwasi raj mahel mein aaye hue the sabhi ke haathon mein kuch na kuch tha jisse wo roshni kar rahe the.

Yaha ka niyam tha tajposi ke waqt koi bhi mardjaat waha nahi hota tha issi liye mujhe bhi waha se bahar bhej diya. Main confuse sa ki agar kuch kaam nahi tha to Shilpa ne bllaya hi kyun mujhe.

Abhi main aise hi soch raha tha ki Alex ki awaj aayi mujhe.

Alex- Ek kaam ho gaya hai aur saayad Varsha bhi ab anne wali hai to tum taiyaari karo

Main - Hmm samjh gaya tum usko dekho aur ek kaam karo Kaal Sarp ko Pritvi par jaaane ko bolo abhi issi waqt main bhi nikal raha hu.

Alex- Par tajposi

Main- Arre mera koi kaam nahi hai waha ab jaldi se kaal sarp ko bejho aur tum Varsha ke saath lage raho.

Alex- thik hai tum pahucho wo nikal rahe hai.

Main bhi portal kholte hue pahuch gaya Earth par R.G ke pass.

Main- Maa Papa kaise hai abhi.

R.G- Abhi thik hai par koi bhi halchal nahi honi shuru hui hai abhi.

Main- Hmm thik hai inka acche se dhyaan rakho waqt najdeek hai aur iss baar inhe kuch hone nahi dunga.

R.G- Hmm thik hai waise wo jadi butti le aaya hu jo aapne bola tha.

R.G ne mujhe ek jadi butti di aur main usko lekar nikal gaya.

Abhi Kaal sarp ko waqt lagna tha to main chala gaya uss jaha mujhe Kappa aur orange mani milli thi. Orange manni se hi orange book tak pahucha tha main.

Main pahuch gaya uss haweli ke pass.

Kappa- Tumhe bas mujhe dhundhna hai aur chuna hai bas aur main gayab ho jaaunga waha se aur fir tum uss orange Moti ki madad se le lena wo orange book aur meri talwar bhi.

Main- Kappa tumhari talwar kya waha hogi matlab tumhari ek hi talwar thi wo maine Maarcuss ko de di thi....

Abhi hum baatein hi kar rahe the ki ek bijli kadki bhayanak aawaj hui aur ek kalla saaya humare saamne bahut hi buri halat mein aa khada hua...kala sa libas pehne hue tha wo haathon mein ek bacchi thi uski.

Saaya- Saurya ye lo iska dhyaan rakhna

Main- kon kon ho tum aur ye kiski bacchi hai.

Saaya- Waqt nahi mere pass isko lo aur meri lash ko jalla dena.

Usne wo bacchi mujhe di aur fir gir gaya yaa yun kaho maar gaya.

Main uske pass gaya usko dhyaan se dekhne laga jo chahra dhaka hua tha usko bahar nikal kar dekha...

Ajeeb sa chahera tha uska jalla hua par uski aankhen pahchni si lag rahi thi..

Main- Kappa isse kahi dekha hai saayad humne...

Kappa ki koi awaj nahi aayi maine ek do baar aur bhi try kiya par koi jawab nahi.

Maine fir bacchi ko dekha baddi hi pyari thi wo aur saath hi jaani pahchanhi bhi lag rahi thi abhi neend mein thi wo ek pyaari si muskan uske chahre par thi.

Kappa- Alex

Main- Haa baal to........oooo teri ye Alex ki beti hai apne Alex ki Varsha ki beti hai ye.

Kappa- Hmm unhi ki hai main tab se issi ko dekh raha hu ye koi aam dragon nahi hai Saurya ye sabse alag hai iski shaktiyan itni hai ki koi iske saamne nahi tik sakta.... agar galat nahi hu main to ye hi MAarcuss ko yaha laayi hai.

Main - Maarcuss kaha hai wo aur ye bacchi usko yaha kaise kya bol rahe ho yaar tum bhi

Kappa- wo jo marra pada hai usko dekh jaa kar acche se wo Maarcuss hi hai.... maine kaha tha wo khud aayega...

Main- wo maarcuss hai par uski ye halat kaise..

Kappa- Kuch nahi jo uske gulam the unhone kisi ke saath millkar iski ye halat kar di hai aur ye kisi tarah bachte bachhate yaha bhag aaya hai iss bacchi ke saath.

Main - Gulam...... kahi tum unn pancho ki baat to nahi kar rahe naa wo Jordon Fready aur baaki tinno..

Kappa - Hmm wahi log haa unhi ki baat kar raha hu main...

Main- Par tumhe kaise pata ye sab

Kappa- Iss bacchi ne dikhaya mujhe sab kuch tumhe bhi dikhayegi ye.... par usse pahle isko iski Maa ke paas le chalo.

Main- hmm ye sahi hai chalo hum Niharika ke planet par chalte hai.

Kappa- Nahi pahle isko Jalla lete hai aur waise hum Alex aur Varsha ko ki ye lo tumhari beti jo future se aayi hai tumse milne.

Abhi hum baatein hi kar rahe the ki entry hui Kaal Sarp ki. Jo thoda sa gusse mein lag raha tha.

Kaal sarp- Kya hai ye tumne mujhe waha aane ko bola tha aur ab yaha aa gaye bata diya hot......ye bacchi bilkul meri Varsha ki tarah dikh rahi hai kon hai ye.

Main- Hmm ye....ye jo hai wo....hmm ye Varsha aur Alex ki Beti hai future se aayi hai

Kaal sarp ek baar to mujhe aise dekhne laga jaise koi bhoot khada ho uske saamne fir usne dhere se uss bacchi ko chuwa

Jo bacchi abhi tak soo rahi thi uski aankhen khul gayi. Usne roona shuru kar diya.

Kaal sarp ne mujhse uss bacchi ko le liya maine usko rookne ka socha par Kappa ne manna kar diya.

Kaal sarp ki goad mein jaane ke baad shuru mein to wo aur bhi royi saath hi Kaaal sarp ki aankhen gusse se lal ho gayi thi.

Kappa- Saurya Alex aur Varsha ko yaha bulana hoga ab bas wahi dono hai jo indono ko shant karwa sakte hai.

Main- Baat kya hai Kappa mujhe bhi batao

Kappa - Unn dono ko bulla lo wahi tumhe sab bata sakte hai.

Main- thik hai.

Maine ek portal khola Niharika ke planet ko jaane ke liye aur usse ander gaya aur jaldi se Alex aur Varsha ko waha se apne saath laya iss dauran N.Mom bhi milli aur wo bhi mere saath chali aayi.

Saayad sahi waqt par hum saare pahuch gaye warna Kaal Sarp aur wo bacchi waha se jaane wale the.

Kaal sarp ki najar jab ek baar Varsha ki oor gayi to uski aankhon mein jo gussa tha uski jagah ab aashuon ne leli thi.

Wo uss bacchi ko liye hue Varsha ki oor badha.

Varsha waise to dikhati thi ki wo nafrat karti hai apne pita se par uske aankhon mein iss tarah aanshu dekh usko bhi thoda ajeeb laga aur wo bhi uski oor badhi chali gayi.

Varsha- Papa aap roo kyun...

Varsha ki bhi aankhen bhar aayi thi bas itne mein hi wo aage kuch bol hi nahi paayi..

Alex jo ye sab dekh raha tha usko jyada kuch samjh nahi aa raha tha par tabhi uski nazar padi uss bacchi par jo Kaal sarp ke goad mein thi aur abhi Alex ko hi dekhe jaa rahi thi.

Uske chote se chahre par ek manmohak muskan thi jisko dekh koi bhi apni saari pareshaniyan bhul jaaye.

Alex dhere dhere uski oor badhne laga.

Wahi wo bacchi jo abhi Kaal sarp ki goad mein thi uske chote chote pankh nikal aaye aur uska roop ek chota dragon ka ho gaya. Wo udti hui Kaal sarp ke goad se Alex ke pass aa gayi.

Kaal sarp jo uss bacchi ko goad mein liye tha wo muskurane laga.

Varsha - Papa ye kon hai aur ye....

Kaal sarp- Ye tumhari beti hai Varsha meri naatin tumhari aur Alex ki beti hai ye...dekho kaise apne pita ke saath mill rahi hai

Varsha to shocked rah gayi ab koi bhi rah jaata aise situation mein.

Wahi dusri oor Alex ki goad mein wo bacchi jaa chuki thi aur wapas se insani bacche ke roop mein aa gayi thi aur apne haath pair yaha waha fek rahi thi.

Alex bhi usko dekh kar lhush ho raha tha.

N.mom- Alex tumne sunna na ye tumhari aur Varsha ki bacchi hai..

Alex- Haa Bacchi hai .....Kya meri bachhi hai meri aur Varsha ki sach bol raho ho aap..

Main- Alex Varsha Ye sach hai ye tum dono ki bacchi hai jo yaha Maarcuss ke saath aayi hai.

Maarcuss ka naam sun kar wo dono soch mein pad gaye.

Varsha jo abhi Kaal sarp ke paas khadi thi wo khud se Alex ke pass aa gayi.

Uska haath khud se uss bacchi ke sar pe chala gaya saath hi Alex ka bhi haath aur dono ke hi aankhen band ho gayi.

Hum sab unn tinno ko dekh rahe the.

Kaal sarp- Wo apne mata pita ko sab dikkha rahi hai sab kuch jo hua tha. Chalo hum iss Maarcuss ko jala dete hai. Saurya tumhare liye kuch lekar aaya hai ye Maarcuss.

Main - Mere liye ???

Kaal sarp- Hmm tumhare liye hamare liye hum sabke liye.... tumhe isko jalana hoga.

Aaj ke liye itna hi....Ab fir se regular updates millege

next update mein dekhte hai aakhir ye bacchi dikha kya rahi hai sabko, Parilok mein kya chal raha , saath hi wo Nani wala scene aur ek jhalak Maarcuss ke saath aakhir hua kya jo wo iss tarah se yaha aa gaya....

Next update (mega update)

Fantastic update bhai ?

Vickey1211 · Jul 26, 2020

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UPDATE - 88 (Mega update)

Ab tak

Alex aur Varsha ki bacchi aayi hui thi future se Maarcuss ke saath...Marcus ne bacchi ko mujhe saunpa aur mar gaya. Abhi sabko uss bacchi ka pata chal chuka tha...

Aage

Bacchi Alex ki goad mein thi. Alex aur Varsha dono ke hi haath bachhi ke sar pe tha aur unko pata nahi kyun bahut gussa aa raha tha.

Yaha thoda sa waqt lagna hai tabtak hum ghum aate hai Parilok...

Parilok mein wahi andhera faila tha Saurya to waha se nikal gaya tha kyunki uska ab koi kaam hi nahi baccha tha waha par uske hisab se...

Mahel ke ek room mein Mohini ka interview chal raha tha.

Shilpa- To tum bhi unse shadi karna chahti ho.

Mohini- ji

Paridhi jo iss waqt taiyaar ho rahi thi wo bhi boli.

Paridhi - Tum aanti ho naa usnki kitni patniyan hai aur.....

Mohini - Ji sab pata hai mujhe aur ussi ke karan to main itne saal intezar karti rahi. Uss kaid mein jaha mujhe mere hi pita ne daal diya tha.

Puja- Didi mere hisab se ye bilkul sahi hai. isne hum dono ko bhi to sab yaad dilwaya.

Priya - hmm didi sahi hai ye.

Shilpa jo sayad kuch confirm karna chahti thi usne ek khanjar nikala aur usse Mohini ke haath par ek cut maar diya.

Sabhi usko hi dekhne lage par Mohini muskura rahi thi.

Uska khoon chamak raha tha aur ye dekh kar Shilpa ne apne magicc se usko wapas thik kar diya.

Shilpa- Thik hai Mohini hame manjur hai tumhara aur Saurya ka rista.

Ab sabhi Shilpa ko dekhne lage.

Shilpa- Ab kya hua tum sab ko mere faisle se aitrazz hai kya.

Sabhi ne naa mein sar hillaya.

Shilpa- Hmm to chalo ab ready ho jaao jaldi se ye sab khatam kar.

Bas fir kya tha Paridhi aur baaki sab ready hue.

Paridhi ko le jaaya gaya fir Parilok ke singhashan ki oor jaha usko baithaya gaya.

Uski taajposhi ki gayi, Taaj jaise hi uske sar par rakha gaya uska to roop hi badal gaya wo pahle se to khubshurat thi hi ab uski skin ekdum se sone si chamakne lagi.

Ussi chamak ke saath puar Parilok ek baar jagmaga utha.

Parilok ek baar fir se roshan ho gaya tha.

Sabhi log bade khush hue.

Pihu- Didi Maa

Paridhi(sabhi se)- Aap sahi bhojan ka luft uthaiye hum aate hai.

Paridhi singhasan se uthi aur chal padi apni Maa ke kamre ki oor aur uske pochhe chal padi baaki ki toli.

Room mein pahuch kar.

Padridhi ko pata to tha nahi ki karna kya hai to usne Shilpa ki oor dekha.

Shilpa- Paridhi mujhe laga tha ki sirf hum dono honge tomuskil ho jaayegi par ab jab hum saare yahi hai to koi dikkat ki baat nahi hai (Pihu se) tum jao aur gate bahar se lock kar do.

Pihu- par main.....

Shilpa- Nahi Pihu abhi nahi chalo jaao hum baad mein tumhe bulla lenge.

Pihu naa chahti hui bhi chali gayi bahar. Wahi ander

Shilpa- Chalo sab milkar ghera banao inke aas pass.

Sabhi ne wahi kiya.

Shilpa- Sabke haath ek dusre ke haaton mein hona chahiye....Paridhi tumhara dhyaan bas Rani Pari pe hona chahiye samjhi.

Paridhi - hmm

thodi hi der mein Paridhi ke aankhon se ek roshni nikli jo shidhi Rani Pari par padi aur wo ekdum se baith gayi.

Rani pari- kya hua tha yaha main iss tarah.....tum sab tum sab ko sab yaad aa gay....Mohini tum bhi ho ...Samrath ki kaha hai....

Pata nahi kitna kuch ek hi baar mein puchne lagi wo

Paridhi - Maa ab aap thik to ho naa kuch ajeeb...

Rani pari- Tum..tumhari tajposhi ho gayi...tumne mujhe thik kiya beta.

Paridhi- Hum sabne kiya chalo ab aap aaram karo yaha.

Sabhi wahi baith gaye aur Pihu bhi aa gayi waha par.

Chaliye ab hum ek nazar Bansoa parbhi daal aate hai jaha Margret apne Dada, Sangeeta aur Rita aur Henry ke saath ek room mein thi.

Rita- hmm batao kyun bulaya hai hame yaha.

Margret- Hmm samajh nahi aa raha....sayad sapna tha mera par fir bhi batta rahi hu.

Henry- sapna...sach mein tum hame yaha sapna sunnane layi ho..

Margret- hmm

Headmaster - Henry sun lete hai naa iski baatein (margret se) hmm bolo.

Margret- Dadu maine dekha main mar rahi thi aap sab bhi mar gaye the ek choti si dragon ki bacchi thi jo mujhe waha se yaha laayi aur main apne hi saamne khadi hui th...fir uss bacchi ne mujhe mere hi sharir ko chune kaha aur bas main behosh ho gayi thi.....par issi bich mujhe ek planet dikha kuch sakalen dikhi jinke saath main thi aap sab the..aur aur

Headmaster- Haa bolo aur kya.

Margret- Ye planet khali ho chuka tha yaha ke taikhane se wo nikal chukke the.

Abhi tak to Headmaster ko viswass nahi ho raha tha par jab baat aayi taikhane ki unke kaan khade ho gaye.

Headmaster- Taikhana par yaha to koi taikhana hi nahi hai..

Margret- Hai yaha par taikhana hai aur uska pata aapko hai..

Henry- Kya ye sach hai Headmaster.

Headmaster- hmm sach hai par ye waqt baat karne ka nahi hai agar isne jo bhi bola wo sach hai to hum mussibat main hhai aur isse bachne ka tarika bas ek hi hai yaha se nikalna.

Margret- Dadu aapke pass ek kitab hai naa usss kitab ko yahi chodna hai aapko aur humme ussi planet pe jaana hai jiska jikr mere sapne mein aaya tha.

Rita- Headmaster kya ye sahi hoga....matlab bas iski baat ko...

Margret- Rita tum apne bhai aur Pita ko maarne ka soch rahi ho kyunki unke rahte hue tum Henry se shadi nahi kar sakti.......aur kuch bolu.

Rita- nahi samajh gayi .... Henry chalo jaldi se sab suru karo.

Headmaster- hmm ye pura ka pura planet khali kardo saare spirits ko yaha se jaane ko bol do aur fountain of worrior ka paani nikalo yaha se.

Sabhi apne apne kaamo mein lag gaye.

Chaliye inhe yaha chod hum Earth pe chalte hai jaha Saurya yaani main khada dekhe jaa raha tha Alex aur Varsha ko kabhi unki aankhon mein gusssa aa jaata to kabhi aashu.

Bas yahi sab chal raha tha.

Kappa - Chalo yaar iss Maarcus ko jala dete hai.

Main- Hmm chalo sayad tab tak ye don bhi thik ho jaaye.

Kaal sarp ne apna muh se aag ka gola feka uspe aur Maarcuss ki body jalne lagi.

Main- jab yahi karna tha to rukke hue kyun the.

Kaal sarp - mujhe gussa aa raha tha ispe tumpe khud pe bas issiliye ye kiya.

Abhi wo bol hi raha tha ki waha ek bahut hi tez chamak hui.

Maarcuss ki body jo jal rahi thi uske raakh ek hone lage aur wahi chamakne lagi thi.

Main- ye kya hai aur aisi chamak.

Kappa- tumhara taufa..

Maine acche se dekha to ye meri talwar thi jo maine Maarcuss ko di thi par ye ussse thodi si alag lag rahi thi.

Main usko uthane gaya to waha ek saaya aa gaya.

Saaya- Ye talwar tumhari aur meri hai dono mill chuki hai aur isko bas tum hi chala sakte ho...iska istemal karo aur aane wale khatre ko khatam karo.

Main - Maarcuss tum...

Saaya gayab ho gaya wo talwar khud ba khud mere haath mein aa gayi aur main uss jagah se kahi aur hi pahuch gaya.

Main- Ye kon si jagah hai main yaha kaise.

Talwar- Mera malik banna hai to sabit karo khud ko agar naa kar paaye to....

Chaliye inn sab ko chod kar hum wapas chalte hai Alex ke pass jaha wo abhi bhi waise hi khada tha.

Kaal sarp- Ye Saurya ko kya hua ye bhi murat ki tarah khada ho gaya.

Waha koi tha hi nahi jo uski baaton ka jawab de pata N.mom thi to par wo bhi kisi soch mein gum thi pata nahi kya....

Kaal sarp ne unki orr dekha aur unko awaj lagaya aur wo hosh mein aa gayi.

N.mom- mujhe yaha se jaana hai abhi warna Saurya ko khatra hai mujhe mere planet par le chalo jaldi se.

Kaal sarp- par ye to yahi hai aakhirr baat kya hui.

N.mom- mujhe le chalo..

Kaal sarp ne bhi unko waha se le jaana hi sahi samjha aur unko waha se le gaye.

Chaliye ek baar hum ek jhalak Alex aur Varsha ke dimmag mein chal rahi baaton ko dekhte hai.

Varsha ek jail jaise kamre mein band thi apni beti ko goad mein liye hue.

Tabhi waha par Fready aa jata hai aur usse uski Bacchi ko chinne lagta hai Varsha apne dragon ke roop mein aa jaati hai aur fir...abhi wo kuch karti usse pahle hi ek aur parchayi waha aa jaati hai.

Parchayi- Varsha main tumhari beti ko tumtak pahuca dunga tumaha Alex bhi tumhe wapas kar sakta hu par tumhe mujhpe bharosha karna hoga.

Varsha Alex kaa naam sun kar bolti hai.

Varsha- kya ye ho sakta hai.

Parchayi- Ho sakta hai aur ho ga bhi bas tumhe meri madad karni hai iss Fready ko jaldi se yaha se hatao main wada karta hu tumhe tumhari bacchi mil jaayegi saath mein Alex bhi.

Varsha ne wahi kiya aur apne muh se aag ke gole fenkne lagi Fready par lekin ye ek maayajal tha....darasal hua ye tha ki wo prchayi fready thi jisne Varsha pe kaabu paa liya tha aur jo Fready jispe varsha hamla kar rahi thi wo darasal Maarcuss tha jo Varsha ki bacchi ko lene aaya tha taaki wo past mein jaa sake aur Saurya se baat kar sake usko batla sake ki kya hua hai yaha.

Isse pahle wo kuch karta Varsha ne hamla kar diya uspe aur uski halat kharab ho gayi par wo bhi apna bachaw karne ke chakarr mein Varsha ko ghayal kar chuka tha... bas issi baat ka to intezar kar raha tha wo Fready usne Varsha ke bache ko utha liya waha se par tabhi uss baccchi ne uss Fready ko ek jhatka diya. Fready hill bhi nahi paa raha tha wo wahi par gir gaya. Marcuss ki halat pahle se hi kharab thi Varsha ki halat bhi thik nahi thi.

Wo bacchi udti hui apne Maa ke paas gayi aur uska haath Varsha ke sar pe chala gaya jisse Varsha ko bahut kuch pata chal gaya ki Alex ki maut kaa karan Maarcuss hai ussi ne sabko maara tha ussi ki vhal thi ye saath hi usko Maarcuss ke saath ho rahi gaddari ka bhi pata chala aur uske yaha aane ka maksad bhi.

Varsha ki halat bigad rahi...wo bahut jakhmi ho gayi thi. Baat darasal aisi thi ki Varsha bahut din se wahi kaid mein thi aur uske saath hi aur bhi jo the wo bhi.

Maarcuss - Main jaanta bharose ke layak nahi hu par ab na a tu tumhare paas aur naa hi mere passs koi raasta baccha hai mujhe apni bacchi saunp do main isko tumdono tak pahucha dunga.

Varsha - Baaki sab ka kya kya w....

Maarcusss- Nahi maine sabka socha hua hai unn sab ko bhi wapas le jaunga..tumhe bhi le jaana chahta tha par ye ho naa sakka mujhe maaf kar do..meri madad karo main aise nahi rah sakta..

Varsha- thik hai le jaao isko magar yaad rakhna agar kuch aur hua to tum...

Maarcuss- Meri baat maano maine bhi dekha hai mera anjam kaisa hoga jo main nahi chahta issiliye ye kar raha hu. Agar fir bhi yakin naa ho to apni bacchi pe aatma kawach laga do.

Varsha ko ye sahi laga waise bhi wo marne hi wali thi to usne baat maan li Maarcuss ki aatmakawach laga diya apnio beti ke upar aur bhej diya usko Maarcuss ke saath aur khud maar gayi.

Maarcuss ki goad mein aate hi uss bacchi ne sabse pahla kaam kiya Margret ke pass jaane ka usko waha se past mein bheja aur bhi kuch kaam kiye aur fir aa gayi Maarcuss ke saath Saurya ke pass.

Aaj ke liye itna hi next update mein dekhiye Kya Saurya uss talwar ko paa sakta hai agar haa to kis tarah se aur ye N.mom ko kya hua aur bhi bahut kuch to banne rahiye

Mast update h bhai
Maza aa gya

Black water · Jul 26, 2020

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UPDATE - 88 (Mega update)

Ab tak

Alex aur Varsha ki bacchi aayi hui thi future se Maarcuss ke saath...Marcus ne bacchi ko mujhe saunpa aur mar gaya. Abhi sabko uss bacchi ka pata chal chuka tha...

Aage

Bacchi Alex ki goad mein thi. Alex aur Varsha dono ke hi haath bachhi ke sar pe tha aur unko pata nahi kyun bahut gussa aa raha tha.

Yaha thoda sa waqt lagna hai tabtak hum ghum aate hai Parilok...

Parilok mein wahi andhera faila tha Saurya to waha se nikal gaya tha kyunki uska ab koi kaam hi nahi baccha tha waha par uske hisab se...

Mahel ke ek room mein Mohini ka interview chal raha tha.

Shilpa- To tum bhi unse shadi karna chahti ho.

Mohini- ji

Paridhi jo iss waqt taiyaar ho rahi thi wo bhi boli.

Paridhi - Tum aanti ho naa usnki kitni patniyan hai aur.....

Mohini - Ji sab pata hai mujhe aur ussi ke karan to main itne saal intezar karti rahi. Uss kaid mein jaha mujhe mere hi pita ne daal diya tha.

Puja- Didi mere hisab se ye bilkul sahi hai. isne hum dono ko bhi to sab yaad dilwaya.

Priya - hmm didi sahi hai ye.

Shilpa jo sayad kuch confirm karna chahti thi usne ek khanjar nikala aur usse Mohini ke haath par ek cut maar diya.

Sabhi usko hi dekhne lage par Mohini muskura rahi thi.

Uska khoon chamak raha tha aur ye dekh kar Shilpa ne apne magicc se usko wapas thik kar diya.

Shilpa- Thik hai Mohini hame manjur hai tumhara aur Saurya ka rista.

Ab sabhi Shilpa ko dekhne lage.

Shilpa- Ab kya hua tum sab ko mere faisle se aitrazz hai kya.

Sabhi ne naa mein sar hillaya.

Shilpa- Hmm to chalo ab ready ho jaao jaldi se ye sab khatam kar.

Bas fir kya tha Paridhi aur baaki sab ready hue.

Paridhi ko le jaaya gaya fir Parilok ke singhashan ki oor jaha usko baithaya gaya.

Uski taajposhi ki gayi, Taaj jaise hi uske sar par rakha gaya uska to roop hi badal gaya wo pahle se to khubshurat thi hi ab uski skin ekdum se sone si chamakne lagi.

Ussi chamak ke saath puar Parilok ek baar jagmaga utha.

Parilok ek baar fir se roshan ho gaya tha.

Sabhi log bade khush hue.

Pihu- Didi Maa

Paridhi(sabhi se)- Aap sahi bhojan ka luft uthaiye hum aate hai.

Paridhi singhasan se uthi aur chal padi apni Maa ke kamre ki oor aur uske pochhe chal padi baaki ki toli.

Room mein pahuch kar.

Padridhi ko pata to tha nahi ki karna kya hai to usne Shilpa ki oor dekha.

Shilpa- Paridhi mujhe laga tha ki sirf hum dono honge tomuskil ho jaayegi par ab jab hum saare yahi hai to koi dikkat ki baat nahi hai (Pihu se) tum jao aur gate bahar se lock kar do.

Pihu- par main.....

Shilpa- Nahi Pihu abhi nahi chalo jaao hum baad mein tumhe bulla lenge.

Pihu naa chahti hui bhi chali gayi bahar. Wahi ander

Shilpa- Chalo sab milkar ghera banao inke aas pass.

Sabhi ne wahi kiya.

Shilpa- Sabke haath ek dusre ke haaton mein hona chahiye....Paridhi tumhara dhyaan bas Rani Pari pe hona chahiye samjhi.

Paridhi - hmm

thodi hi der mein Paridhi ke aankhon se ek roshni nikli jo shidhi Rani Pari par padi aur wo ekdum se baith gayi.

Rani pari- kya hua tha yaha main iss tarah.....tum sab tum sab ko sab yaad aa gay....Mohini tum bhi ho ...Samrath ki kaha hai....

Pata nahi kitna kuch ek hi baar mein puchne lagi wo

Paridhi - Maa ab aap thik to ho naa kuch ajeeb...

Rani pari- Tum..tumhari tajposhi ho gayi...tumne mujhe thik kiya beta.

Paridhi- Hum sabne kiya chalo ab aap aaram karo yaha.

Sabhi wahi baith gaye aur Pihu bhi aa gayi waha par.

Chaliye ab hum ek nazar Bansoa parbhi daal aate hai jaha Margret apne Dada, Sangeeta aur Rita aur Henry ke saath ek room mein thi.

Rita- hmm batao kyun bulaya hai hame yaha.

Margret- Hmm samajh nahi aa raha....sayad sapna tha mera par fir bhi batta rahi hu.

Henry- sapna...sach mein tum hame yaha sapna sunnane layi ho..

Margret- hmm

Headmaster - Henry sun lete hai naa iski baatein (margret se) hmm bolo.

Margret- Dadu maine dekha main mar rahi thi aap sab bhi mar gaye the ek choti si dragon ki bacchi thi jo mujhe waha se yaha laayi aur main apne hi saamne khadi hui th...fir uss bacchi ne mujhe mere hi sharir ko chune kaha aur bas main behosh ho gayi thi.....par issi bich mujhe ek planet dikha kuch sakalen dikhi jinke saath main thi aap sab the..aur aur

Headmaster- Haa bolo aur kya.

Margret- Ye planet khali ho chuka tha yaha ke taikhane se wo nikal chukke the.

Abhi tak to Headmaster ko viswass nahi ho raha tha par jab baat aayi taikhane ki unke kaan khade ho gaye.

Headmaster- Taikhana par yaha to koi taikhana hi nahi hai..

Margret- Hai yaha par taikhana hai aur uska pata aapko hai..

Henry- Kya ye sach hai Headmaster.

Headmaster- hmm sach hai par ye waqt baat karne ka nahi hai agar isne jo bhi bola wo sach hai to hum mussibat main hhai aur isse bachne ka tarika bas ek hi hai yaha se nikalna.

Margret- Dadu aapke pass ek kitab hai naa usss kitab ko yahi chodna hai aapko aur humme ussi planet pe jaana hai jiska jikr mere sapne mein aaya tha.

Rita- Headmaster kya ye sahi hoga....matlab bas iski baat ko...

Margret- Rita tum apne bhai aur Pita ko maarne ka soch rahi ho kyunki unke rahte hue tum Henry se shadi nahi kar sakti.......aur kuch bolu.

Rita- nahi samajh gayi .... Henry chalo jaldi se sab suru karo.

Headmaster- hmm ye pura ka pura planet khali kardo saare spirits ko yaha se jaane ko bol do aur fountain of worrior ka paani nikalo yaha se.

Sabhi apne apne kaamo mein lag gaye.

Chaliye inhe yaha chod hum Earth pe chalte hai jaha Saurya yaani main khada dekhe jaa raha tha Alex aur Varsha ko kabhi unki aankhon mein gusssa aa jaata to kabhi aashu.

Bas yahi sab chal raha tha.

Kappa - Chalo yaar iss Maarcus ko jala dete hai.

Main- Hmm chalo sayad tab tak ye don bhi thik ho jaaye.

Kaal sarp ne apna muh se aag ka gola feka uspe aur Maarcuss ki body jalne lagi.

Main- jab yahi karna tha to rukke hue kyun the.

Kaal sarp - mujhe gussa aa raha tha ispe tumpe khud pe bas issiliye ye kiya.

Abhi wo bol hi raha tha ki waha ek bahut hi tez chamak hui.

Maarcuss ki body jo jal rahi thi uske raakh ek hone lage aur wahi chamakne lagi thi.

Main- ye kya hai aur aisi chamak.

Kappa- tumhara taufa..

Maine acche se dekha to ye meri talwar thi jo maine Maarcuss ko di thi par ye ussse thodi si alag lag rahi thi.

Main usko uthane gaya to waha ek saaya aa gaya.

Saaya- Ye talwar tumhari aur meri hai dono mill chuki hai aur isko bas tum hi chala sakte ho...iska istemal karo aur aane wale khatre ko khatam karo.

Main - Maarcuss tum...

Saaya gayab ho gaya wo talwar khud ba khud mere haath mein aa gayi aur main uss jagah se kahi aur hi pahuch gaya.

Main- Ye kon si jagah hai main yaha kaise.

Talwar- Mera malik banna hai to sabit karo khud ko agar naa kar paaye to....

Chaliye inn sab ko chod kar hum wapas chalte hai Alex ke pass jaha wo abhi bhi waise hi khada tha.

Kaal sarp- Ye Saurya ko kya hua ye bhi murat ki tarah khada ho gaya.

Waha koi tha hi nahi jo uski baaton ka jawab de pata N.mom thi to par wo bhi kisi soch mein gum thi pata nahi kya....

Kaal sarp ne unki orr dekha aur unko awaj lagaya aur wo hosh mein aa gayi.

N.mom- mujhe yaha se jaana hai abhi warna Saurya ko khatra hai mujhe mere planet par le chalo jaldi se.

Kaal sarp- par ye to yahi hai aakhirr baat kya hui.

N.mom- mujhe le chalo..

Kaal sarp ne bhi unko waha se le jaana hi sahi samjha aur unko waha se le gaye.

Chaliye ek baar hum ek jhalak Alex aur Varsha ke dimmag mein chal rahi baaton ko dekhte hai.

Varsha ek jail jaise kamre mein band thi apni beti ko goad mein liye hue.

Tabhi waha par Fready aa jata hai aur usse uski Bacchi ko chinne lagta hai Varsha apne dragon ke roop mein aa jaati hai aur fir...abhi wo kuch karti usse pahle hi ek aur parchayi waha aa jaati hai.

Parchayi- Varsha main tumhari beti ko tumtak pahuca dunga tumaha Alex bhi tumhe wapas kar sakta hu par tumhe mujhpe bharosha karna hoga.

Varsha Alex kaa naam sun kar bolti hai.

Varsha- kya ye ho sakta hai.

Parchayi- Ho sakta hai aur ho ga bhi bas tumhe meri madad karni hai iss Fready ko jaldi se yaha se hatao main wada karta hu tumhe tumhari bacchi mil jaayegi saath mein Alex bhi.

Varsha ne wahi kiya aur apne muh se aag ke gole fenkne lagi Fready par lekin ye ek maayajal tha....darasal hua ye tha ki wo prchayi fready thi jisne Varsha pe kaabu paa liya tha aur jo Fready jispe varsha hamla kar rahi thi wo darasal Maarcuss tha jo Varsha ki bacchi ko lene aaya tha taaki wo past mein jaa sake aur Saurya se baat kar sake usko batla sake ki kya hua hai yaha.

Isse pahle wo kuch karta Varsha ne hamla kar diya uspe aur uski halat kharab ho gayi par wo bhi apna bachaw karne ke chakarr mein Varsha ko ghayal kar chuka tha... bas issi baat ka to intezar kar raha tha wo Fready usne Varsha ke bache ko utha liya waha se par tabhi uss baccchi ne uss Fready ko ek jhatka diya. Fready hill bhi nahi paa raha tha wo wahi par gir gaya. Marcuss ki halat pahle se hi kharab thi Varsha ki halat bhi thik nahi thi.

Wo bacchi udti hui apne Maa ke paas gayi aur uska haath Varsha ke sar pe chala gaya jisse Varsha ko bahut kuch pata chal gaya ki Alex ki maut kaa karan Maarcuss hai ussi ne sabko maara tha ussi ki vhal thi ye saath hi usko Maarcuss ke saath ho rahi gaddari ka bhi pata chala aur uske yaha aane ka maksad bhi.

Varsha ki halat bigad rahi...wo bahut jakhmi ho gayi thi. Baat darasal aisi thi ki Varsha bahut din se wahi kaid mein thi aur uske saath hi aur bhi jo the wo bhi.

Maarcuss - Main jaanta bharose ke layak nahi hu par ab na a tu tumhare paas aur naa hi mere passs koi raasta baccha hai mujhe apni bacchi saunp do main isko tumdono tak pahucha dunga.

Varsha - Baaki sab ka kya kya w....

Maarcusss- Nahi maine sabka socha hua hai unn sab ko bhi wapas le jaunga..tumhe bhi le jaana chahta tha par ye ho naa sakka mujhe maaf kar do..meri madad karo main aise nahi rah sakta..

Varsha- thik hai le jaao isko magar yaad rakhna agar kuch aur hua to tum...

Maarcuss- Meri baat maano maine bhi dekha hai mera anjam kaisa hoga jo main nahi chahta issiliye ye kar raha hu. Agar fir bhi yakin naa ho to apni bacchi pe aatma kawach laga do.

Varsha ko ye sahi laga waise bhi wo marne hi wali thi to usne baat maan li Maarcuss ki aatmakawach laga diya apnio beti ke upar aur bhej diya usko Maarcuss ke saath aur khud maar gayi.

Maarcuss ki goad mein aate hi uss bacchi ne sabse pahla kaam kiya Margret ke pass jaane ka usko waha se past mein bheja aur bhi kuch kaam kiye aur fir aa gayi Maarcuss ke saath Saurya ke pass.

Aaj ke liye itna hi next update mein dekhiye Kya Saurya uss talwar ko paa sakta hai agar haa to kis tarah se aur ye N.mom ko kya hua aur bhi bahut kuch to banne rahiye

Fabulous update bhai

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Scorpionking · Jul 26, 2020

Fast update bhai maza aa gaya.age dekhte hai kya hota hai waiting for next.

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