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Fantasy Saurya - ek youdha (Completed)

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Killerpanditji(pandit)

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UPDATE - 97

Ab tak

Haa to Main bhi pahuch gaya tha waha Niharika ke planet pe aur mujhe pata chala kyun nahi bulaya gaya mujhe....jab main unn 5cho ke pass pahucha par wo chali gayi dur....wo naraz thi ab unko manane ke liye maine kuch socha aur waha se nikal gaya aur Parilok aa gaya...

Ab aage

Main wait karne laga ki kab wo dono taiyaar ho aur main waha jaa saku....

Kuch der to nahi kahunga kyunki ye safeed jhoot hoga...bahot der lagane ke baad aayi dono aur hum nikal pade Niharika ke planet ki oor...

Waha pe mere naa hone ki wajah se kuch logo ka gussa bahut hi jyada badh gaya tha itna ki puccho mat...

Par ek baat thi wo sab gusse mein aur bhi acchi dikh rahi thi kya bataun kaisi dikh rahi thi...

Hum log unki taraf badh gaye...abhi unn logo ne dekha nahi tha mujhe...sirf Margret ne dekha tha jo usko mere baare mein kahti hai...

Margret- Samrath aa gaye wo dekho....

Paridhi- aane do usko hamme usse kya...aur tum bhi uski taraf mat dekho aisa lage ki wo hai hi nahi yaha...

Ye baat Paridhi ne zor se kahi thi taaki mujhe sunayi de...aadat thi uski aisi...

Pihu- Waah Jiju aapne to inn sab ko bahut gussa dilla diya wo bhi mere binna kuch kahe hi.....

Main- Tum kya kahna chahti ho....

Pihu- Arre jiju har baar main hi to fasati thi aapko iss baar khud fas gaye....

Main- Haa pata hai par iss baar inko manane mein madad kar de kyunki agar ye sab nahi maani naaa to pura plan kharab ho jaaayega mera....

Rani pari- Beta ek sujhaw deti hu....inko apne plan kharab hone ki wajah se mat manane ka socho balki pyar ki wajah se manane ka socho usse ye jaldi maan bhi jaayegi aur tum sab ke rishte mein majbuti bhi aayegi

Main kya bolta iss waqt wo sahi thi to maine bhi apna sar nicche jhuka liya....main bhi kitna bada pagal tha agar unn logo se kah deta naa ki mujhe jarurat hai tum logo ki to chahe kitni bhi naraz kyun naa ho wo aa jaati mere passs meri madad karne ko....

Rani pari- Ab sar nicche kyun kiye khade ho mujhe meri bacchiyon se milna hai chalo ab...

Main- Ji chaliye...

Hum sab chal diye unke pass...

Mujhe ab samajh nahi aa raha tha kya bolu...aur sayad issi baaat ko samjhte hue Pihu ne baat shuru ki aur unn sab ko awaj di...wo sab jo dusri taraf dekh rahe the hamari taraf muddi...

pancho- Pihu tum yaha...

Pihu bhi muh banate hue boli...

Pihu- Kyun aap sab ko kya laga aap sab nahi bulaoge to main nahi aaungi...haa bolo wo to jiju ne mujhe aur Maa ko bulayya warna hum sab miss kar dete...

Puja- Jiju ne...kya Saurya tumhe lene gaye the...

Pihu- Aur nahi to kya....

Pihu ki iss baat pe wo sab mujhe dekhne lagi aur maine bhi unko sorry bol diya...mujhe pata nahi tha ki ye bas itne mein maan bhi jaayegi...sahi hi kaha hai kisi ne ladkiyon ko samajhna namumkin hai...

Wo sab maan gayi...

fir kya tha Alex aur Varsha ki shadi hui....sabhi ne enjoy kiya...

Ab baari thi unko private space dene ki to uske liye pahle se hi bandobast ho chuka tha....bas dikkat ek thi aur wo Dristi ki usko kaun rakhega...

Log usko apne pass rakhne ko jhagad rahe the....Kiran ka kahna tha ki wo unke saath jaaayegi wahi Pihu bhi lagi padi thi usko parilok le jaane ke liye...

Annt mein ye tay hua ki jinka janna jaruri hai jaise jo log apna clone naa chod kar aaye ho unko wapas bhej diya jaaaye wahi bakki logo ko Niharika ke mahel mein rahne ka bandobast ho chuka tha...Dristi N.mom ke pass rahne wali thi...

to jaisa tay hua usssi hisab se Kiran aur Pradeep chale gaye waha Earth saath hi unke Mohini and team bhi nikal gayi...unone clone choda tha apna par fir bhi wapas chali gayi...koi kaam hoga unka...Rani pari bhi chali gayi apne lok mein par Pihu ko yahi chod gayi wo....

Ab Niharika ke planet pe bacche the main, Margret, Henry ,Rita aur bhi baaki ke log....

Chaliye ab hum direct subah ke waqt chalte hai...

Alex aur Varsha dono hi aasman mein udd rahe the...wo dono hi apni naayi powers ko jaanch rahe the..jo dono ko sambhog ke baad milli thi....iss baar Alex ne acche se dhyaan bhi laga liya tha taaki koi gadbad naa ho...

Alex aaya mere paas...

Alex- To Saurya ab deri nahi karte hai aur uss Jwala ko le aate hai...

Main- Hmm thik hai to batao kon chal raha hai...

Alex- Darasal hum dono hi aayenge waha....

Main- Thik hai par...

Varsha- Nahi Saurya humne soch liya hai hum dono hi jaayenge...

Main- thik hai ab main isme kya bolu...haa to kab chale...

Alex- Abhi...

Main- Arre yaar tum dono thoda time le lo...

Alex- Time hai kya hamare pass jaante tum bhi ho ye baat chalo ab jaldi se ready ho jao hum nikalte hai....

Main- hmm thik hai...

Main portal kholta usse pahle hi portal khul gaya...Haa wahi thi Drristi the chota packet...usne theek ussi jagah portal khola tha jaha se Jwala humme dikh raha tha...

Hum tinno ander gaye...main Alex ke pith pe baitha tha....humare ander aate hi portal band..

Alex- Varsha wo raha jwala...plan yaad hai naa

Varsha ne Alex ko dekha aur ishare mein haa kaha....aur chal di uske oor...

Main- Arre kon sa plan mujhe bhi batao....

Alex- Chup raho sab samajh jaaoge....

Main- Arre par hone kya wala hai ye to batao..

Alex- BAs dekhte jao tumhe yaha bas yahi dikhane ko laaye hai hum aur koi karan nahi tha....pichli baar to tum uss kitab ki wajah se aaye the....

Main- Kya kahna chaht.....arre ye kya kar rahi hai Varsha rukko tum jal jaogi....

Alex- Chup raho aur bas dekhte jao....

Main - Arre pagal ho kya wo Pavitra agni ki oor badh rahi hai...

Main usko kahta raha par wo mujhe chup rahne ko bolta gaya aur Varsha uss pavitra agni mein chali gayi...

Main- Alex ye kya kiya....ab w....

Baat puri hoti meri usse pahle hi Varsha bahar aayi uski skin puri shunahri ho gayi thi....

Varsha- Pheonix (zor se wo chilaayi)

Jwala jo abhi tak bas aise hi chakar maar raha tha uski awaj sun kar uski oor mudda...fir uss pavitra agni ki oor dekha jo ab waha nahi thi...

Ye dekh Jwala ko bahut hi jyada gussa aaya...

Jwala- Ye accha nahi kiya tumne mere ghar ko tabah kar ke...ab tum nahi bachogi....

Varsha- Dekhte hai kya hota hai.....

Jwala ne apne mus se aaag phenka Varsha ki oor par Varsha pe koi asar nahi hua...

Varsha - Bas itna hi dum hai....

Jwala ko gussa aayaa usne apne pankho mein jal rahi aag ko Varsha ki oor fenka....iss baar Varsha apni jagah se thoda picche chali gayi uss war ki wajah se...

Main- Alex kya kar rahe hai hum yaha chalo Varsha ki madad karte hai aur jaldi se ye kaam khatam karte hai...

Alex- Rukko abhi bas dekhte jao agar humari jarurat padi to wo bulla legi...

Varsha- Hmm takat to hai tumme par puri tarah istemal nahi kar paa rahe....

Jwala- Abhi dikhata hu...

Jwala apne jagah pe hi apne pankhon ko faila kar gol gol ghumne laga aur dekhte hi dekhte waha pe ek aag se baana hua cyclone ban gaya aur vo Varsha ki oor badhne laga...

Alex- Ab humme chalna chahiye sayad...

Main- Main to kab se bol raha hu...

Varsha uss cyclone ko dekh kar bas waise hi khadi rahi...

Alex aur main jaldi se ustak pahuche...

Alex ne uske haath padke aur waha se keech liya...

Varsha to jaise neend se jaagi ho iske baad...sayad ye uss cyclone ka asar tha...yaa fir kuch aur....waise bata du Dragons aag se attract hote hai....aur yaha Varsha ka waise ho jaana sayad ussi ka karan ho.....

Alex- thik ho naa tum...

Varsha- Haa par wo cyclone dekha naa kitna sunder tha wo....

Alex- Haa tha par w tumhe nukshan pahuchane wala tha ab jo karne aayi ho karo aur chalte hai mujhe jaldi se apni beti ke pass jana hai....

Varsha- Arre haa...waise bhi mujhe isse wo aag ka cyclone banana seekhna hai.....

Main- Arre tum dono ko kya ho gaya hai kuch bhi bol rahe ho....

Varsha waha se gayi aur apne muh se aag fenka Jwala ke upar....par Jwala ko ghanta fark naa pada usse....

Main- Alex tum kuch kar kyun nahi ra....

Abhi kuch bolta usse pahle ki Jwala ke tukde tukde ho gaye the...Main muh khole bas dekhe jaa raha tha...matlab aag se usko koi fark bhi nahi pada aur dekhte dekhte hi wo...tukdo mein bikhar gaya...

Varsha- Alex tumhari baari....

Alex turant hi waha se udta hua Jwala ke tukdo ke pass jaane laga aur unko apne aag se jalane laga....

Main kya bolu kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha ki ho kya raha hai matlab maine socha tha ki hum jaayenge Jwala ko maar denge wo raakh mein badal jaayega aur fir se ussi rakh se paida ho jaayega par yaha to kuch aur hi kar rahe the ye dono....waise kuch aur nahi kar rahe bas tarika dusra hai par kyun...

Alex ne uske har ek part ke jalla diya...fir kya tha jaisa ki pheonix ke saath hota hai wo wapas se apne raakh se jinda hote hai....wo saare rakh ek jagah aane lage...

Jaise hi wo ikatha hue....

Alex- Varsha abhi...

Alex ka bolna tha Varsha ne apne muh se aag chodna shuru kar diya uss raakh ki oor....par iss aag ki lapte badi ajeeb thi...pata nahi kyun....

Main abhi dekh hi raha tha ki acchanak se Varsha ki skin jo shunahri ho gayi thi pavitra agni mein jaane se wo wapas se pahle jaisi hone lagi thi....sayad wo uss pavitra agni ko Jwala ko de rahi thi....

Maine ye puchne ke liye Alex ki oor dekh uske aankhon mein aashu the....ab ye kyun the....

MAin- Alex kya ho raha hai aur tum...tum ye roo kyun rahe ho...

Alex- Varsha Pavitra agni ko wapas Jwala ko de rahi hai aur usse bahut jyada takleef ho rahi hai par mujhe dikhane ke liye wo wah dard chipa rahi hai....

Main- Par wo aisa kyun kar rahi hai...

Alex- Baad mein bataunga tumhe yaa tum khud jaan jaoge...

Hum baat kar rahe the utne der mein Varsha ka kaam pura ho gaya tha aur wo bahut hi jyada kamjor ho gayi thi...

Wo girne wali thi...ki tabhi ek portal khula aur usne hum sab ko...Jwala ko bhi jo abhi abhi apni raakh se wapas bana tha usko bhi apne ander keench liya....

Hum sab abhi Niharika ke planet pe the....Alex ne mujhe utara aur jaa kar turant girti hui Varsha ko sambhala...

Wahi Dristi bhi udti hui apni Maa ke paas chali gayi aur uske sar pe apna hath rakh diya....isse hua ye ki Varsha soo gayi...

Alex ne usko aur Dristi ko waha se uthaya aur Mahel mein le gaya...wahi uske room mein unko sulla diya...hum sab bhi gaye the unke picche...

Main- Kya hua Alex sab...

Alex- Wo bas soo rahi hai jab uthegi naa sab sahi rahega chalo ab inn dono ko aaram karne dete hai....wo Jwala kaha hai usse bhi mil aate hai....

Hum wapas bahar gaye jaha Jwala apne original size aur roop mein aa chuka tha par iss baar uske ander ki aag aur bhi jyada shaktisali lag rahi thi..

Hum waha pahuche to wo hum sab se milla usko sab yaad aa gaya tha yaha tak ki future ka bhi ki kaise kya hua tha....

Chaliye aaj ke liye itna hi agle update mein dekhte hai Time shield kaise banata hai Saurya aur saath hi kuch aur ghatnaye....
Nice update bro
 

Nevil singh

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UPDATE - 97

Ab tak

Haa to Main bhi pahuch gaya tha waha Niharika ke planet pe aur mujhe pata chala kyun nahi bulaya gaya mujhe....jab main unn 5cho ke pass pahucha par wo chali gayi dur....wo naraz thi ab unko manane ke liye maine kuch socha aur waha se nikal gaya aur Parilok aa gaya...

Ab aage

Main wait karne laga ki kab wo dono taiyaar ho aur main waha jaa saku....

Kuch der to nahi kahunga kyunki ye safeed jhoot hoga...bahot der lagane ke baad aayi dono aur hum nikal pade Niharika ke planet ki oor...

Waha pe mere naa hone ki wajah se kuch logo ka gussa bahut hi jyada badh gaya tha itna ki puccho mat...

Par ek baat thi wo sab gusse mein aur bhi acchi dikh rahi thi kya bataun kaisi dikh rahi thi...

Hum log unki taraf badh gaye...abhi unn logo ne dekha nahi tha mujhe...sirf Margret ne dekha tha jo usko mere baare mein kahti hai...

Margret- Samrath aa gaye wo dekho....

Paridhi- aane do usko hamme usse kya...aur tum bhi uski taraf mat dekho aisa lage ki wo hai hi nahi yaha...

Ye baat Paridhi ne zor se kahi thi taaki mujhe sunayi de...aadat thi uski aisi...

Pihu- Waah Jiju aapne to inn sab ko bahut gussa dilla diya wo bhi mere binna kuch kahe hi.....

Main- Tum kya kahna chahti ho....

Pihu- Arre jiju har baar main hi to fasati thi aapko iss baar khud fas gaye....

Main- Haa pata hai par iss baar inko manane mein madad kar de kyunki agar ye sab nahi maani naaa to pura plan kharab ho jaaayega mera....

Rani pari- Beta ek sujhaw deti hu....inko apne plan kharab hone ki wajah se mat manane ka socho balki pyar ki wajah se manane ka socho usse ye jaldi maan bhi jaayegi aur tum sab ke rishte mein majbuti bhi aayegi

Main kya bolta iss waqt wo sahi thi to maine bhi apna sar nicche jhuka liya....main bhi kitna bada pagal tha agar unn logo se kah deta naa ki mujhe jarurat hai tum logo ki to chahe kitni bhi naraz kyun naa ho wo aa jaati mere passs meri madad karne ko....

Rani pari- Ab sar nicche kyun kiye khade ho mujhe meri bacchiyon se milna hai chalo ab...

Main- Ji chaliye...

Hum sab chal diye unke pass...

Mujhe ab samajh nahi aa raha tha kya bolu...aur sayad issi baaat ko samjhte hue Pihu ne baat shuru ki aur unn sab ko awaj di...wo sab jo dusri taraf dekh rahe the hamari taraf muddi...

pancho- Pihu tum yaha...

Pihu bhi muh banate hue boli...

Pihu- Kyun aap sab ko kya laga aap sab nahi bulaoge to main nahi aaungi...haa bolo wo to jiju ne mujhe aur Maa ko bulayya warna hum sab miss kar dete...

Puja- Jiju ne...kya Saurya tumhe lene gaye the...

Pihu- Aur nahi to kya....

Pihu ki iss baat pe wo sab mujhe dekhne lagi aur maine bhi unko sorry bol diya...mujhe pata nahi tha ki ye bas itne mein maan bhi jaayegi...sahi hi kaha hai kisi ne ladkiyon ko samajhna namumkin hai...

Wo sab maan gayi...

fir kya tha Alex aur Varsha ki shadi hui....sabhi ne enjoy kiya...

Ab baari thi unko private space dene ki to uske liye pahle se hi bandobast ho chuka tha....bas dikkat ek thi aur wo Dristi ki usko kaun rakhega...

Log usko apne pass rakhne ko jhagad rahe the....Kiran ka kahna tha ki wo unke saath jaaayegi wahi Pihu bhi lagi padi thi usko parilok le jaane ke liye...

Annt mein ye tay hua ki jinka janna jaruri hai jaise jo log apna clone naa chod kar aaye ho unko wapas bhej diya jaaaye wahi bakki logo ko Niharika ke mahel mein rahne ka bandobast ho chuka tha...Dristi N.mom ke pass rahne wali thi...

to jaisa tay hua usssi hisab se Kiran aur Pradeep chale gaye waha Earth saath hi unke Mohini and team bhi nikal gayi...unone clone choda tha apna par fir bhi wapas chali gayi...koi kaam hoga unka...Rani pari bhi chali gayi apne lok mein par Pihu ko yahi chod gayi wo....

Ab Niharika ke planet pe bacche the main, Margret, Henry ,Rita aur bhi baaki ke log....

Chaliye ab hum direct subah ke waqt chalte hai...

Alex aur Varsha dono hi aasman mein udd rahe the...wo dono hi apni naayi powers ko jaanch rahe the..jo dono ko sambhog ke baad milli thi....iss baar Alex ne acche se dhyaan bhi laga liya tha taaki koi gadbad naa ho...

Alex aaya mere paas...

Alex- To Saurya ab deri nahi karte hai aur uss Jwala ko le aate hai...

Main- Hmm thik hai to batao kon chal raha hai...

Alex- Darasal hum dono hi aayenge waha....

Main- Thik hai par...

Varsha- Nahi Saurya humne soch liya hai hum dono hi jaayenge...

Main- thik hai ab main isme kya bolu...haa to kab chale...

Alex- Abhi...

Main- Arre yaar tum dono thoda time le lo...

Alex- Time hai kya hamare pass jaante tum bhi ho ye baat chalo ab jaldi se ready ho jao hum nikalte hai....

Main- hmm thik hai...

Main portal kholta usse pahle hi portal khul gaya...Haa wahi thi Drristi the chota packet...usne theek ussi jagah portal khola tha jaha se Jwala humme dikh raha tha...

Hum tinno ander gaye...main Alex ke pith pe baitha tha....humare ander aate hi portal band..

Alex- Varsha wo raha jwala...plan yaad hai naa

Varsha ne Alex ko dekha aur ishare mein haa kaha....aur chal di uske oor...

Main- Arre kon sa plan mujhe bhi batao....

Alex- Chup raho sab samajh jaaoge....

Main- Arre par hone kya wala hai ye to batao..

Alex- BAs dekhte jao tumhe yaha bas yahi dikhane ko laaye hai hum aur koi karan nahi tha....pichli baar to tum uss kitab ki wajah se aaye the....

Main- Kya kahna chaht.....arre ye kya kar rahi hai Varsha rukko tum jal jaogi....

Alex- Chup raho aur bas dekhte jao....

Main - Arre pagal ho kya wo Pavitra agni ki oor badh rahi hai...

Main usko kahta raha par wo mujhe chup rahne ko bolta gaya aur Varsha uss pavitra agni mein chali gayi...

Main- Alex ye kya kiya....ab w....

Baat puri hoti meri usse pahle hi Varsha bahar aayi uski skin puri shunahri ho gayi thi....

Varsha- Pheonix (zor se wo chilaayi)

Jwala jo abhi tak bas aise hi chakar maar raha tha uski awaj sun kar uski oor mudda...fir uss pavitra agni ki oor dekha jo ab waha nahi thi...

Ye dekh Jwala ko bahut hi jyada gussa aaya...

Jwala- Ye accha nahi kiya tumne mere ghar ko tabah kar ke...ab tum nahi bachogi....

Varsha- Dekhte hai kya hota hai.....

Jwala ne apne mus se aaag phenka Varsha ki oor par Varsha pe koi asar nahi hua...

Varsha - Bas itna hi dum hai....

Jwala ko gussa aayaa usne apne pankho mein jal rahi aag ko Varsha ki oor fenka....iss baar Varsha apni jagah se thoda picche chali gayi uss war ki wajah se...

Main- Alex kya kar rahe hai hum yaha chalo Varsha ki madad karte hai aur jaldi se ye kaam khatam karte hai...

Alex- Rukko abhi bas dekhte jao agar humari jarurat padi to wo bulla legi...

Varsha- Hmm takat to hai tumme par puri tarah istemal nahi kar paa rahe....

Jwala- Abhi dikhata hu...

Jwala apne jagah pe hi apne pankhon ko faila kar gol gol ghumne laga aur dekhte hi dekhte waha pe ek aag se baana hua cyclone ban gaya aur vo Varsha ki oor badhne laga...

Alex- Ab humme chalna chahiye sayad...

Main- Main to kab se bol raha hu...

Varsha uss cyclone ko dekh kar bas waise hi khadi rahi...

Alex aur main jaldi se ustak pahuche...

Alex ne uske haath padke aur waha se keech liya...

Varsha to jaise neend se jaagi ho iske baad...sayad ye uss cyclone ka asar tha...yaa fir kuch aur....waise bata du Dragons aag se attract hote hai....aur yaha Varsha ka waise ho jaana sayad ussi ka karan ho.....

Alex- thik ho naa tum...

Varsha- Haa par wo cyclone dekha naa kitna sunder tha wo....

Alex- Haa tha par w tumhe nukshan pahuchane wala tha ab jo karne aayi ho karo aur chalte hai mujhe jaldi se apni beti ke pass jana hai....

Varsha- Arre haa...waise bhi mujhe isse wo aag ka cyclone banana seekhna hai.....

Main- Arre tum dono ko kya ho gaya hai kuch bhi bol rahe ho....

Varsha waha se gayi aur apne muh se aag fenka Jwala ke upar....par Jwala ko ghanta fark naa pada usse....

Main- Alex tum kuch kar kyun nahi ra....

Abhi kuch bolta usse pahle ki Jwala ke tukde tukde ho gaye the...Main muh khole bas dekhe jaa raha tha...matlab aag se usko koi fark bhi nahi pada aur dekhte dekhte hi wo...tukdo mein bikhar gaya...

Varsha- Alex tumhari baari....

Alex turant hi waha se udta hua Jwala ke tukdo ke pass jaane laga aur unko apne aag se jalane laga....

Main kya bolu kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha ki ho kya raha hai matlab maine socha tha ki hum jaayenge Jwala ko maar denge wo raakh mein badal jaayega aur fir se ussi rakh se paida ho jaayega par yaha to kuch aur hi kar rahe the ye dono....waise kuch aur nahi kar rahe bas tarika dusra hai par kyun...

Alex ne uske har ek part ke jalla diya...fir kya tha jaisa ki pheonix ke saath hota hai wo wapas se apne raakh se jinda hote hai....wo saare rakh ek jagah aane lage...

Jaise hi wo ikatha hue....

Alex- Varsha abhi...

Alex ka bolna tha Varsha ne apne muh se aag chodna shuru kar diya uss raakh ki oor....par iss aag ki lapte badi ajeeb thi...pata nahi kyun....

Main abhi dekh hi raha tha ki acchanak se Varsha ki skin jo shunahri ho gayi thi pavitra agni mein jaane se wo wapas se pahle jaisi hone lagi thi....sayad wo uss pavitra agni ko Jwala ko de rahi thi....

Maine ye puchne ke liye Alex ki oor dekh uske aankhon mein aashu the....ab ye kyun the....

MAin- Alex kya ho raha hai aur tum...tum ye roo kyun rahe ho...

Alex- Varsha Pavitra agni ko wapas Jwala ko de rahi hai aur usse bahut jyada takleef ho rahi hai par mujhe dikhane ke liye wo wah dard chipa rahi hai....

Main- Par wo aisa kyun kar rahi hai...

Alex- Baad mein bataunga tumhe yaa tum khud jaan jaoge...

Hum baat kar rahe the utne der mein Varsha ka kaam pura ho gaya tha aur wo bahut hi jyada kamjor ho gayi thi...

Wo girne wali thi...ki tabhi ek portal khula aur usne hum sab ko...Jwala ko bhi jo abhi abhi apni raakh se wapas bana tha usko bhi apne ander keench liya....

Hum sab abhi Niharika ke planet pe the....Alex ne mujhe utara aur jaa kar turant girti hui Varsha ko sambhala...

Wahi Dristi bhi udti hui apni Maa ke paas chali gayi aur uske sar pe apna hath rakh diya....isse hua ye ki Varsha soo gayi...

Alex ne usko aur Dristi ko waha se uthaya aur Mahel mein le gaya...wahi uske room mein unko sulla diya...hum sab bhi gaye the unke picche...

Main- Kya hua Alex sab...

Alex- Wo bas soo rahi hai jab uthegi naa sab sahi rahega chalo ab inn dono ko aaram karne dete hai....wo Jwala kaha hai usse bhi mil aate hai....

Hum wapas bahar gaye jaha Jwala apne original size aur roop mein aa chuka tha par iss baar uske ander ki aag aur bhi jyada shaktisali lag rahi thi..

Hum waha pahuche to wo hum sab se milla usko sab yaad aa gaya tha yaha tak ki future ka bhi ki kaise kya hua tha....

Chaliye aaj ke liye itna hi agle update mein dekhte hai Time shield kaise banata hai Saurya aur saath hi kuch aur ghatnaye....

Atiuttam update mitr..
 
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