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Fantasy Saurya - ek youdha (Completed)

Kya mujhe mere likhne ka tarika change karna chahiye

  • nahi aise hi sahi hai

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Hi friend maine xforum pr kafi stories padi hai aur ab mai bhi apni ek story post karne ja raha hu ab jyada wakt na lete huye
story p chalte h jaise jaise log milte rahenge unke bare m batata jaunga .
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Ek Aur bahan mil gayi..
Ab fir se vo sab ek sath hoge Jo hero Maa Aur papa ke sath the...
Aur Nana Aur Dada aapna parivar kho denge...
Ab hero ke aapne safar ki suruat karni chahiye..
Aur safar hoga aapne Maa-baap ke sath huye atyachar karne vale har insan se badla Aur unko unke kiye ki saza Dena!!!
Dracula bhai ye saari chize hogi magar thode twist k saath bas wo parivar khone wali baat ko chod pahle to ye dekhte hai ki wo wapas saifali ko dekh react kaise krte hai kya wo wahi apna ortodox dimag chalate hai ya fir kuch aur..
 

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superb story bro :applause: :applause: .....maja aa gaya padh kr
THANKS BHAI.
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Wese thoda flash back abhi bhi bacha hua hai woh bhi lagta hai jaldi hi clear hone ja raha hai....
SAHI KAHA BHAI AAPNE WO JANM WALA AUR USS FORMULA KA SAURYA K BODY M PAHUCHNA AUR KYA WO FORMULA SIRF REGENERATION HI KARTA HAI YA KUCH AUR BHI ......
 

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SAHI KAHA BHAI AAPNE WO JANM WALA AUR USS FORMULA KA SAURYA K BODY M PAHUCHNA AUR KYA WO FORMULA SIRF REGENERATION HI KARTA HAI YA KUCH AUR BHI ......
Woh toh hai hi aur unhi mein yeh sawal bhi hain ki poonam aur baaqi behanon ko shefali ka sach kaise ma'aloom hua jabki woh sab toh use pehchanti hi nahin thi fir aisa kya hua ki woh sab behanen ek dusre ke liye apne maa baap se hi lad guzre....
Shefali ki parvarish karnevaali maa aur mohit ne toh woh ghar chhod diya tha uski zalaalat ke badle fir kyon woh dono usi ghar mein waapas aaye?
Deep ke pita ko kaise yeh raaz ma'aloom hua ki shefali unke dost ki beti hai wahi beti jise woh manhoos maante hain....
Shefali ke maayke/sasuraal yaani uske gaaon mein kya samasya hai jiska nidaan sirf shefali aur shaurya hi kar sakte hain....
Shaurya aur uski biwiyon ke pichhle janm ka Past like usi kitna patniyaan thi kahan kahan ki thi woh aur kaun us samay unka dushman tha aur us dushmani ki wajah kya thi... Shaurya ke is janm ka past jismein tanu bhi shaamil hai.....
 

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Woh toh hai hi aur unhi mein yeh sawal bhi hain ki poonam aur baaqi behanon ko shefali ka sach kaise ma'aloom hua jabki woh sab toh use pehchanti hi nahin thi fir aisa kya hua ki woh sab behanen ek dusre ke liye apne maa baap se hi lad guzre....
Shefali ki parvarish karnevaali maa aur mohit ne toh woh ghar chhod diya tha uski zalaalat ke badle fir kyon woh dono usi ghar mein waapas aaye?
Deep ke pita ko kaise yeh raaz ma'aloom hua ki shefali unke dost ki beti hai wahi beti jise woh manhoos maante hain....
Shefali ke maayke/sasuraal yaani uske gaaon mein kya samasya hai jiska nidaan sirf shefali aur shaurya hi kar sakte hain....
Shaurya aur uski biwiyon ke pichhle janm ka Past like usi kitna patniyaan thi kahan kahan ki thi woh aur kaun us samay unka dushman tha aur us dushmani ki wajah kya thi... Shaurya ke is janm ka past jismein tanu bhi shaamil hai.....
YAAR main bas uss flash back ki baat kr raha tha aur PLZ AAP EK BAAR AUR WO MEGA UPDATE PADE Q KI GALTI S MUJHSE WO AADURE M HI POST HO GAYA THA AUR SAYAD AAPNE USSI WAQT USKO PADH LIYA HO PR MAINE USSE FIR S EDIT KR PURA KR DIYA THA AUR USKE NICHE IISKE LIYE MAFFI BHI MANGI THI TO AGAR AAP DOBARA USSE PADE TO APKO KUCH JAWAB JARUR MIL JAYENGE AUR BAKKI K JAWAB AAGE MILTE RAHENGE.
AGAIN SORRY
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Nice update
THANKS BRO
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Nice n fantastic update
THANKS BRO
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Woh toh hai hi aur unhi mein yeh sawal bhi hain ki poonam aur baaqi behanon ko shefali ka sach kaise ma'aloom hua jabki woh sab toh use pehchanti hi nahin thi fir aisa kya hua ki woh sab behanen ek dusre ke liye apne maa baap se hi lad guzre....
Shefali ki parvarish karnevaali maa aur mohit ne toh woh ghar chhod diya tha uski zalaalat ke badle fir kyon woh dono usi ghar mein waapas aaye?
Deep ke pita ko kaise yeh raaz ma'aloom hua ki shefali unke dost ki beti hai wahi beti jise woh manhoos maante hain....
Shefali ke maayke/sasuraal yaani uske gaaon mein kya samasya hai jiska nidaan sirf shefali aur shaurya hi kar sakte hain....
Shaurya aur uski biwiyon ke pichhle janm ka Past like usi kitna patniyaan thi kahan kahan ki thi woh aur kaun us samay unka dushman tha aur us dushmani ki wajah kya thi... Shaurya ke is janm ka past jismein tanu bhi shaamil hai.....
PAGE NO 56 P HAI BHAI PLEASE READ IT AGAIN AND ENJOY IT.
SORRY AGAIN
THANKS BHI JO AAP ITNI DEEPLY STORY PD RAHE HO AAP SACH M BAHUT ACCHE READER HO BHAI
 
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