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Fantasy Saurya - ek youdha (Completed)

Kya mujhe mere likhne ka tarika change karna chahiye

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Hi friend maine xforum pr kafi stories padi hai aur ab mai bhi apni ek story post karne ja raha hu ab jyada wakt na lete huye
story p chalte h jaise jaise log milte rahenge unke bare m batata jaunga .
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hello dost story bahut hi acchi tarah se likh rahe hain lekin ye kshma karnewali concept hazam nahin ho rahi hai kyunki vaise bhi hamare aajke kannon mein kisi ko dand milna sambhav nahin hai to saare log apnope huye atyachaar ko bhi kshma karte phire to logon ko paap karne ka jazba chad jayega . Vaise bhi aapki kahani purani adbhu aloukik ghatnavon par aadharit hai to ek baat yaad rakkhe dada nana aur baaki atyachariyon ka update likhna ki Geeta mein bhagvan Krishna ne kaha hai ki paap karnewala agar paapi hota hai toh paap sehnewala maha paapi hota hai to unlogon ko maafi dilwake phir ghar1 ki population badana nahin . jabki saurya ki maa par pichale janam mein huyi ghatna ke liye us gaon ki bohot nirdosh logon ki jaan bhi gayi to iss janam mein huye atyacharon par dada nana chacha mama logon ko saza dilwana naaki maa aur bete ko karuna ki murat banakar un logon ko maaf mat karvadena nahin to Bhagavadgita galat hojayegi.

Just request hai bhai baaki aap jaano lekin poore dil se likhneke liye tahe dil se shukriya .
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hello dost story bahut hi acchi tarah se likh rahe hain lekin ye kshma karnewali concept hazam nahin ho rahi hai kyunki vaise bhi hamare aajke kannon mein kisi ko dand milna sambhav nahin hai to saare log apnope huye atyachaar ko bhi kshma karte phire to logon ko paap karne ka jazba chad jayega . Vaise bhi aapki kahani purani adbhu aloukik ghatnavon par aadharit hai to ek baat yaad rakkhe dada nana aur baaki atyachariyon ka update likhna ki Geeta mein bhagvan Krishna ne kaha hai ki paap karnewala agar paapi hota hai toh paap sehnewala maha paapi hota hai to unlogon ko maafi dilwake phir ghar1 ki population badana nahin . jabki saurya ki maa par pichale janam mein huyi ghatna ke liye us gaon ki bohot nirdosh logon ki jaan bhi gayi to iss janam mein huye atyacharon par dada nana chacha mama logon ko saza dilwana naaki maa aur bete ko karuna ki murat banakar un logon ko maaf mat karvadena nahin to Bhagavadgita galat hojayegi.

Just request hai bhai baaki aap jaano lekin poore dil se likhneke liye tahe dil se shukriya .
Best wishes.
Thanks bhai
Ab aate hai maafi wale point p to apne hero k according na dhire dhire sazza dene m bada mazza aata hai har pal kisi ko ye ahsaas dilane m mazza aata hai ki wo galat tha. Ab aap hi batao yaar k agar hero sabhi ko ek saath laa de aur roj unko unki galti k baare m yaad dilaye kitna mazza ayega na fir bas yahi karna chahta hai wo.
Par bhai wo kahte hai na k waqt bada balwan hai dekhte hai kya hota hai.
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Waiting next
Will come soon bro
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Nice n fantastic update
Thanks bhai
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