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Fantasy Saurya - ek youdha (Completed)

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Hi friend maine xforum pr kafi stories padi hai aur ab mai bhi apni ek story post karne ja raha hu ab jyada wakt na lete huye
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Hero Nd villian dono hi apni powers badhaane aur unpar qaabu paane mein lage hue hain dekhte hain ab villian baabu kya roda atkaayenge shaurya ki raah mein
 
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Nice update
 
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Awesome updates
 
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Chinturocky

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Last me kaun tantrik aa gaya,
Update behtareen hai.
 
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Zaberdust update bhai
 
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Fantastic update Bhai...
Mohini ka razz bhot hi dard Dene vala laga..
Ab dekhna ye he ki hero kese mohini KO pyar ke liye manayega???
Jab amber Dada ganv khali hath jayenge to kya hoga??
Aur Maa kese sabko ganv Jane ke liye taiyar karegi.???
Waiting for next update???
 
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UPDATE-34

AB TAK

Amber singh ko maine aur papa ne pick kiya hospital s aur pahuch gaye ghar p. wo sabhi s mile ghar m abhi wo kuch batane wale the ki maine unhe rook diya aur Maa ko unko khana khilane ko bola aur ye bhi bola ki kuch log aane wale hai uske baad hi wo apni kahani shuru kare.

Aage

Sabhi log khane k liye baithne hi wale the k papa ka phone baja aur unhone mujhe kuch ishara kiya.
Main bhi ishara samajh bahar chala gaya waha p meri 3 bahne Arti,Alisha aur Richa khadi thi dono chachiyon k saath. Main unko ander le kr aa gaya pr dono chachiyon ko dekh Puja aur Priya apni jagah s uth gayi aur jaane ko hui ki tabhi .
Papa- Puja & Priya jo bhi hua tha usme inki koi galti nhi thi.
Puja- Nahi chachu galti inki bhi thi ye bhi to chup rahi thi na maana indono n kuch kiya nhi pr chup rah kr bhi to unka saath diya na.
D.bua- Ek min arre unki baat to suun lo har waqt naak p gussa liye rahti ho.
Roshan Fufa-(dhere s) Ab tumhare hi ghar ki ladkiyan hai to kuch to lakchan aayenge hi.
Pr R.bua n sunn liya aur jhat s bol padi
R.bua- Aapka matlab kya hai jiju k didi aur main bhi hamesha gusse m hote hai.
R.fufa(Hadbada kr)- arre maine aisa kaha kuch bola hai aur tum meri baaton ko chodo (puja s) Beta aapki bua sahi kh rahi hai inn dono n kuch nhi kiya tha haa ye baat alag hai rooka bhi nhi unko...
Ridhi(c.chachi)- Puja Priya beta hamari baat to sunno uss waqt hum samajh nhi paaye the pr tum dono ki baaton n hamari aakhen khol di.
Priya- Kya pata ye temprory hi khuli ho phir s uss budhe bhudi(Dada-Dadi) ki baaton m aa band ho jayegi to kya fayda
Puja - Aur nahi to kya ya to aap sabhi chale jao ya main yaha s jaati hu.
Priya- Main nhi hum , hum dono hi jaate hai q rahe aap dono jaisi maayon k saath jo ek aurat ho aurat ka dukh na samajh sake ek bahu ho dusri bahu ki baate na samajh sake...
Maa- Baas ho gaya aab Puja Priya tum dono chup chap baith jao aur khana khao tumhe meri kasam hai aur aap sabhi bhi aaiye aur khana khaiye.
Salla ye kasam wali baate na log badi jaldi maan jate hai agar kasam dene wala aapka koi khass ho to.
Wahi hua Puja aur Priya chup chap baith gayi khana khane aur muh banate khane lagi wahi Maa ne dono chachiyon ko serve kiya khana aur Mom n baaki 3no ko.
Maa- Aap dono ko besan ka halwa pasand hai na Saurya k papa n khass aap dono k liye banwaya hai.
Ye kah unko halwa parosa.
Pahle to Maa aur Papa ka apne prati aisa rawaiya dekh unko uss waqt aapne chup rahne ka bahut dukh hua wo to khana bhi nhi kha rahe the.
Main-Arre chachi khao na khana Maa bahut acha khana banati hai.
Meri baat sun unho ne ek ek niwala uthaya pr wo un niwalo ko apne muh tak le jaate usse pahle hi unki aakhen jhalak aayi. Dono hi table s uthi aur Maa k pair pakd
Dono-(roote hue) hamme maaf kr do saifali plz hame maaf kr do agar hum uss din kuch bolte to sayad tum dono bhi hamare saath ghar m hi hote aur Saurya bhi.
Maa ne dono ko pahle uthaya.
Maa- ye kya kr rhi ho bhabhi aapne kuch nhi kiya hai.
Priya-(Muh banate hue)wahi to kuch kiya hi nahi.
Papa- Priya beta aise nhi bolte.
Priya- Ha ha pata hai.
Maa-(chachiyon ko table p bitha) aap khana khao pahle fir kuch aur baate bhi jaanni hai hame bhi aur aapko bhi.
Main-(Mom s)Mom wo jarra namak paas krna.
Mom n mujhe namak paas kiya pr kuch log mujhe aur Mom ko ghurne lage jinhe hamari khahani pata nahi thi.
Main- Arre aise kya dekh rahe ho Maa ne bola na khana kha lo phir sab pata chalega.
Sabhi apna khana khatam kr lete hai.
Fir s Jamawda lag jata hai hall m
Pahle to Maa ne unke saath kya kya hua wo khahani sunayi fir Mom n hamari kahani sunnayi iss sab m Amber ji aur Megha ji k aashu bahne lage.
Puja- Waise saurya ye log(dono chachi) yaha kaise aa gaye hamne to bataya nhi phir.
Papa- Puja ab bahut ho gaya chalo bhul jao wo sab Maa hai wo tumhari ayr priya tum bhi jao dono unke pass.
Sabhi k kahne p dono chali gayi apni Maa k paas
Puja - tunne bataya nhi kaise mille ye tumhe.
Main- wo di jab main aur papa gaye the na hospital tabhi waha hame Arti di mil gayi wo MBBS kr rahi hai na maine unki photo aapke phone m dekhi thi to unko pahchan liya fir kya tha hum unke paas gaye aur unko apne baare m aur aap dono k baare m batlaya fir unse bola ki sabko le yaha aa jaye aur dekho ab wo yahi hai.
Puja- tune mera phone cheak kiya tha na.
Main- aree aapne hi to dhikhaya tha photo sabhi ka.
Maa- ha ho gaya ab to saare aa gaye na (Amber s) ha to chacha ji aap kuch batla rahe the na uss waqt
Amber- Ha main wo gaon k baare m bata raha tha ki waha bhi tum sabhi k apne hai Main hu Megha hai Bade bhaiya Badi bhabhi hai fir Bishambher ji hai Deep tumhare bade chacha tumhari chachi Kunti ji hai bua Ajnu hai aur Fufa Anupam hai.
Richa- kya chachu k chachu pr Dadaji to...
Megha- nhi beta hum sahi kah rahe hai waha bhi tum sabhi ka pariwar hai jo tum sabhi ko waha bulla raha hai aur hum issi liye aaye hai yaha pr usse pahle.
Fir unhone gaon ki puri khahani sunnayi waha ki problem Maa ka mashiha hona aur saath hi waha k logo ki dikaton k baare m bhi jisse sun iss baar to D.bua aur A.maasi ko bhi bura lag raha tha.
Wahi jinhone iss jahani ko pahli baar sunna wo to bas puchon hi mat muh p haath rakhe Maa ko dekhe ja rahe the.
Richa- To aapka matlab hai k chachi hamari choti chachi uss gaon ko sraap s mukt karayengi pr kaise.
Megha- Beta ye to Sadhu Maharaj hi bata sakte hai.
Ridhi chachi- Kya sach m ye sraap wali baat sach ho sakti hai kya.
Megha- Beta ek baar bas ek bar hamare saath gaon chalo tumhe sab samajh aa jayega tum sabhi ko pata bhi nhi abhi k kitne logo ki ummid judi hai Saifali s kitne hi log na jaane kab s intezaar kr rahe hai iska.
D.bua- Pr kya in sab m saifali ko koi nuksaan nhi hoga iski koi jimmedaari le ga.
A.maasi- Ha boliye na hum kisi bhi kimat p isse kuch bhi hone nhi denge.
Mom-Dekhiye isne pahle hi bahut kuch saha hai ab aur nhi iske baare m bhi to sochiye aap to ab sab jaante bhi ho na bataya na humne sab aapko ab aap bataye ki kya isse hak nhi khusi s jinne ka kuch din bas kuch hi din bitte h isse yaha aaye Saurya s mille aur aap bol rahe ho k isse aisa kuch krne de jisme isko khatra hai nhi bikul bhi nhi.
R.Fufa- Aap dono s mil kr aur baat kr hame bahut acha laga pr hum aapki koi bhi madad nhi kr sakte.
Amber- pr beta..
Megha- nhi ye log sahi kah rahe hai(sabhi s) Bachon tum sabhi aise hi khush raho or khub taraki karo tumhare bich ka ye prem kabhi kam na ho bas badhta hi jaaye yahi uperwale s dua karungi aur main jyada kuch nhi kahungi ab bs ek baar soch kr dekhna unn logo k baare m jo na jaane kab s apni mashiha ka intezar kr rahe hai. (Amber s) chaliye ji inhe inki khushiyon k saath chode chalte hai aab jo chiz hogi hamare kismat m likhi wahi honi hai hum usse to badal nhi sakte na chalo chalte hai gaon.
Amber n pahle to kuch der Megha ko dekha fir
Amber- chalo ab hum shide gaon hi chalte hai(sabhi s) Khush rahna tum sabhi.
Wo dono hi chale gaye pahle to uss guest house gaye jaha ye log thahre hue the udhar gaye apna saman pack kiya abhi to wo jaa nhi sakte the saam jo hone wali thi pr unka maan bhi nhi tha Dada Nana aur baakiyon k saath rahne ka to wo dono hi nikal gaye saaman le ek hotel ki oor aur waha room book kr liya.

Wahi ghar m :-
Maa- kya humne sahi kiya kya mujhe jana nhi chahiye tha unke saath.
Papa- galat to mujhe bhi lag raha hai pr main thoda sa bhi risk nhi le sakta jab baat tumhari ho.
Maa - pr...
Pragati- yaar maasi aap na sochti bahut ho sabhi k baare m ab chodo wo saari baaten arre dekha na unho ne bhi to jyada jor nhi diya hame ab chodo ye sab.
Nidhima- ha maasi kya aap bhi.
Main- ha Maa dekho kisi ne kaha bhi hai jab jab jo jo hona hai tab tab so so hota hai ab agar wo sraap tutna hoga to jaror tootega pr abhi to party hogi iss ghar m aaj dekho meri sari bahne hai yaha p saath m do maami aur do chachi bhi.
Mom(hairat s)- Saurya tu party krne k baare m bol raha hai tu tabiyat to thik hai na teri.
Paridhi- kya hua aap aise q react kr rahi ho.
Mom- nhi beta isse party sabd s chidh hai aur aaj ye khud party krne ka bol raha hai bas issi liye.
Main-Oo meri pyari Mom ab main sab bhul chuka hu chodo na un baaton ko dekho abhi saam hone ko hai taiyaari karo na.
Maa- nhi tum sabhi bhai bahno ko jo krna hai kahi bahar ja k karo idher nhi samjhe.
Papa- sahi kaha jao tum saare jaha jana hai.
Sabhi n yahi baat kahi fir humne bhi yahi sahi samjha.
Puja- pr bahar to wo Daayan ghum rahi hai na.
C.chachi- Arre haa maine bhi uski video dekhi badi hi darawani thi wo beta tum sab kahi mat jao ghar p hi raho aur party fir kabhi kr lena.
D.bua- haa sahi kaha dekho bachon abhi tum kahi nhi jaa rahe samjhe chup chap ghar2 jao shaam hone ko hai jo krna hai kro pr no bahar samjhe na.
Sab- haa.
Hum saare bhai bahan chup chap ghar2 chale aaye wahi chachi aur mami saare chal diye apne maayke.
Ghar2 pahuche to waha Mohini didi ko patta nhi kya hone laga sayad sarab na milne ki wajah s unka sarir bagawat kr raha tha kal s unhone ek bund bhi nhi pi thi.
wo bas hame chod apne room m chali gayi maine shilpa ko uske piche bheja usse dekhne ko wahi baaki saare aise hi baaten karte rahe.
Abhi kuch hi der hua hoga k mera phone baja kiran ka call tha.
Kiran- Hello king
Main- ha bolo kya hua
Kiran- wo ek info milli thi Russian maffiya ki ek meeting hui hai India m hi aur uss meeting m Naresh Sharma jo k yaha ka jaana maana don hai usse pure India ka head banaya gaya hai aur uska pahla task tumhe dundhna hai.
Main-Naresh Sharma ooh I see. hmm ek kaam karo apne agents ko uspe nazar rkhne ko bolo.
Kiran- Thik hai king.
Main- Sunno kiran hmm dekho interrogation room m 2 bande honge unke saath pyar s khelo aur pucho unse wo kya jante hai iss Naresh Sharma k baare m.
Kiran- kya wo usse jaante hai.
Main- Ha mujhe saq hai wo ushi k liye kaam karte hai bas baahri duniya k liye ye Neta waali topi hai khair chodo isse tum jao aur pyar s puchna ok .
Kiran-Bahut pyar s puchungi waise ek aur baat thi pr sayad wo mil kr hi batana sahi hoga.
Main- chalo thik hai waise bhi main aa hi raha hu kal.
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Aise hi saam s raat ho gayi sabhi n khana khaya aur so gaye.
Shilpa mere room m aa gayi wo kuch pareshan s lag rahi thi.
Main- kya hua jaan udas q ho?
wo kuch bhi nhi boli main uske paas gaya to wo roone lagi aur boli.
Shilpa- Mohini bimaar hai usse usse blood cancer hai.
Main- kya bol rahi ho agar aisa hota to Alka maami hamse na kahti kya.
Shilpa- maine uska dimag padha hai wo saab jaanti hai uski maa bhi janti hai sab kuch issi liye to usse enjoy krne deti hai wo.
Main-kya matlab hai jaan shuru s batao. Aur tum to jin lok ki malika ho na tum to har marz ki dawa janti ho.
Shilpa- Mohini ko 16 saal ki umar m hi khun ki ulti honi shuru ho gayi thi Doctors ko dikhane p pata chala k usse cancer hai wo bhi last stage aur sayad uske pass 4-5 saal hi hai jinne ko Inke Maa Papa n bahut jagah try kiya pr kuch bhi nhi hua. Mohini ko bhi ye baat pata chal gayi jab wo 18 ki hui ki wo sayad 2-3 saal hi jinne wali hai pahle to wo thoda depressed rahi fir ye tay kiya ki jitni bhi jindgi bachi hai hasi khusi enjoy kr jiyegi. Fir Mohini wahi karne lagi din bhar wo party m rahne lagi ghumne lagi har jagah uske Maa Papa bhi usse puri chuut de diye the wo bas apni eklauti beti ko khus dekna chahte the.

Shilpa- maanti hu mere paas har marz ki dawa hai pr main kisi k jivan rekha to nhi badha sakti na uski jivan rekha bas itni hi hai gar wo iss bimari s na maari to kissi aur karan maar jaayegi.

Maine ye sunna bahut hi dukh hua mujhe k ye kya ho gaya unke saath. Maine Baba,Kappa aur R.G ko bula liya saath hi RaniPari aur Pihu ko bhi maine unhe iss samasya k baare m batlaya.
R.G- Malika sahi hai Samrath har koi jivan rekha nhi badha sakta kisi ka.
Baba ka bhi yahi khana tha.
Main(R.G s)- Aapne bola har koi nhi bada sakta kya matlab hai iska kon bada sakta hai jivan rekha Mohini ka
R.G- Dekhiye ye aapko sayad sahi na lage pr yahi aakhri upay hoga unki jivan rekha badhane ka.Agar aap ye krte ho to wo tb tk jivit rahengi jab tk aap.
Pihu- R.G kahi aap jiju k aatma unse jodna to nhi chahte
R.G- Rajkumari yahi ek rasta hai yaha pr anyatha Samrath ko ye satya swikar krna hoga.
Main- Nhi abhi unhe aur jina hai chahe uske liye main kuch bhi kr lunga.
Ranipari- Samrath sayad aap Pihu ki baat ka matlab na samajh paaye hai aapko Mohini ko apnana hoga usse har wo sukh dena hoga jo aap Paridhi ya Shilpa ya aapki baaki k patniyon ko dete.
Apko usse jismani sambandh banana hoga usse apni patni k rup m swikar krna hoga.
Main bilkul chup ho gaya mujhe ab samajh nhi aa raha tha k kya bolu.
Shilpa- kya hua kya soch rahe ho jaan jao aur uski jiwan rekha ko badha do main tumhari pahli patni hone k naate tumhe kahti hu jao.
Main- Aur baakiyon ka kya unka maat jaane bina kaise m ye kar sakta hu.
Ranipari- Samrath jaha tk mujhe pata hai un sabhi m s koi bhi ye nhi chahti k unke kaaran tumhe dukh pahuche jao aur apni bahan ko bacha lo.
Baba- Samrath main bhi yahi sahi samajhta hu apko yahi krna chahiye.
Main-Kappa tum q chup ho tum bhi to kuch batao dost
Kappa- Tumne mujhe apne gulam ko apna dost maana hai. Meri ek baat sune kripya kr usse apna le q ki ye niyati hai uski aur aapki bhi. Yaddi abhi aapke paas Y.book hoti to aap uski niyati dekh paate par abhi wo hai nhi yaha.
Pihu- Ha jiju maan lo na.
Main- Thik hai pr kaise kya kahu usse ja kr ki main tumhare saath sambhog krna chahta hu aur wo bhi maan le gi meri baat hai na. Ek to main ghar m bahuto ka dimag nhi pad pa raha uper s ye alag hai.
Iss baat ko sun Rani pari aur baba ek dusre ko ajeeb nazaro s dekhne lage.
Ranipari- Tum kiska kiska dimag nhi padh pa rahe ho.
Abhi main koi jawab deta k darwaje pr dastak hui.Saare log gayab ho gaye yaha tak Shilpa bhi bas main hi rah gaya ander.
Maine darwaja khola to dekha bahar Mohini khadi thi uske hoth p thode s khoon lage hue the aur chahra pura murjhaya hua tha.
Main- kya hua...aree ye khoon ye khoon kaise aaya apke honto p.
Unhone turant apna honth saaf kr liya.
Mohini- Saurya kya tu mujhe car k keys de sakta hai wo meri na kuch medicines s jo Maa k paas hai meri wali khatam ho gayi hai mujhe wo chahiye the.
Main- kis chiz k medicines.
Mohini- Arre wo na haa sar m dard rahta hai mere na ussi k medicines hai tu car k keys de main le aaa...
Dhaaaaadaaaaaaammmm
Main-Didi utho bhi didi kya hua.
Maine unko uthaya aur shidha kr bed p leta diya unko hosh m le aaya pani chidak kr.
Main- Didi kya hua aap thik to ho na aap aise gir kaise gayi.
Mohini- Aree kuch bhi to nahi wo na dieting kr rahi thi na ussi k wajah s...
Main- Sach nhi batana to mat batao na pr jhoot bhi mat bolo kah do nhi bata sakti.
Wo- nhi re sach kah rahi hu.
Main- Chalo mami s dawa le aate hai main car drive krta hu aap rasta bata dena.
Mohini-Arre nahi kya tu bhi pare...
Main-jyada bolo mat jitna kaha utna karo samjhi aap ab chal logi ya utha k le chalu.
Wo(hasti hui)- tu mujhe utha payega.
Maine bas unko utha liya aur shidi utar neeeche jaane laga. Wo ek tak meri aakhon m dekhti rahi pata nhi kya main bas unko car tak le gaya seatbelt lagayi aur nikal pada wo mujhe ajeeb s nazaron s dekhti rahi.

Chaliye hum dekhte hai k baaki saare kaha chale gaye matlab Ranipari pihu ye saare.
Wo saare gayab ho pahuch gaye the Shilpa didi k room m.
Shilpa- Mera aur Paridhi ka aur .....,....,..., ka to samajh m aata hai ki q Saurya dimag nhi padh pata pr Mohini ka q aur bhi sayad wo kisi k baare m bol raha tha na.
Baba-Malika wo unhi logo ka mastisk nhi padh paa raha jo usse jude hue the uske pichle janam m ya to usse judne wale the.
Shilpa- Matlab k Mohini bhi.
Ranipari- Ha Shilpa aur agar main sahi hu to ye unhi m s hai jinhone Saurya aur tum logo k maut ki khabar sunn apni jaan de di thi q Baba m sahi hu na.
Baba- Rani pari aap sahi ho parantu ye itni jaldi hoga iska aabhas mujhe nhi tha ab to wo(Mohini) kon h ye tab hi pata chalega jab uska aur Samrath ka milan hoga.
Kappa- Ha sahi kaha aapne chaliye isse unhi dono p chod dete hai.
Ye bol kappa wapas chala gaya apne jagah.
Dhire Dhire baaki bhi chale gaye Rani pari bhi ek baar Paridhi ko soota dekh chali gayi.

Wahi main aur Mohini pahuch gaye uske Nana k yaha wahi Alka maami khadi thi baahar hi unke aakhon s aashu gir rahe the par jaise hi unhone car k driving seat p mujhe dekha jhat s aapne aashu poach liye.
Jab hum waha pahuche.
Alka- Arre Saurya beta tum bhi aaye ho mujhe laga ye jhalli akele hi aane wali hai.
Main- Haa mami wo didi ko koi medicine chahiye thi aur unhe thodi kamjoori bhi aa rahi thi to main bhi aa gaya.
Maami n hame medicine di Didi medicine le car m baith gayi.
Main- Maami didi ko kya hua hai mujhe sach jaan na hai.
Alka- Arre beta wo to bas thodi kamjoori rahti hai usse aur baaki saara to uss sarab ki wajah s hai jisme wo dubi rahti hai hamesha.
Main- Didi to kuch aur hi bata rahi thi.
Alka - kya bataya teri didi n.
Main- Mami aapko to abhi unke saath hona chahiye na fir q apne unhe hamare yaha rahne diya.
Alka k aakhon m aashu aa gaye.
Alka- ye uski icha hai k eo tum logo k saath hi rahe.
Main- Aur aapka kya.
Alka ka aab apbe aashun s control chut raha tha.
Maine unka haath pakda aur gaadi m bitha diya.
Mohini-Arre Maa aap bhi aa rahi ho kya waha.
Main- Haa ye bhi chal rahi hai kuch baate karni hai issi liye.
Fir kya tha wo dono mujhse kahti rahi pr mai e car sidha ghar p hi rooka.
Main-Mohini didi aap jao rest karo main na mami ko room dikha deta hu.
Mohini n pahle to dekha hame fir wo chali gayi aur jaate waqt uske muh p ek ajeeb c pareshani thi.
Main- Maami mujhe sab pata hai.
Alka- kya pata hai tumhe ek to mujhe yaha le aaye ho uper s kuch bhi bol rahe ho.
Main- Main kuch bhi bol raha hu aap bol rahe ho kuch bhi mujhe pata hai k Mohini didi ko blood cancer hai aur wo wo bas kuch hi.
Alka-(roote hue) haa wo kuch hi dino ki... pr ye sab kuch meri aur tumhare mama k karmo ki wajah s hi to hua hai aur kya ho sakta hai ye sab hamare karan hi hua hai.
Main unko saant karate hue .
Main- Maami fir apne unko yaha akele q bheja bolo.
Alka- Ussi n kaha tha wo chahti thi mere aur apne papa ki taraf s maafi mange tum sabhi logo s pr pr ye ab...kya tum log maaf karoge uske papa ko nhi na
Main- mian karunga maaf unhe main kuch bhi karunga apni didi k liye unki khusi k liye aap dekhna unko kuch bhi nhi hoga
Mohini (piche s)- Jhooti umid mat do unhe badi muskil s unhe sambhala hai maine.
Main(mud kr)- aapko kuch nhi hoga main apka ilaj kahi s bhi karaunga.
Mohini-Huh nahi ab kuch nhi ho sakta saurya aur tu bhi bhul ja isse aur mere sath rah meri madad kr takki main Papa k taraf s maafi maang saku sabhi s aur wo unhe maaf kr de.
Main kuch na bola bas haa m sar hilla diya.
Mohini- chal aab jaa so ja bekar m maa ko yaha ke aaya.Maa chalo aap aao mere room m mujhe aaj aapke saath soona hai.
Mami bhi chali gayi unke saath aur main main bas dekhta raha unko. Maine ander hi ander ye tay kr liya tha k inki jivan aayu badhana hai to badhana hi hai.

Wahi kahi dur ek khandar tha pura andhere m duba hua khandhar wahi baitha thi ek ajeeb sa aadmi aakhen chamak rahi thi uski kaan kuch bade hue the bas ek parchayi sa hi to dikh raha tha wahi koi tha uske paas jisse wo ghure ja raha tha. Tabhi achanak uski aakhon s aag ki lapte niklti hai aur dekte ki dekhte uske saamne khada aadmi jal k raakh m badal gaya waha uski chikhe nikal rahi thi wahi iske hoothon p ek muskaan aati ja rahi thi jab wo jal gaya tb
Aadmi- Ha ha haaaahaaahaahaa ha aaj aaj maine fire eye p bhi kabhu paa liya jb tak wo yaha aayega main main sabhi powers p control kr lunga fir fir hoga aamna saamna hahaha haaahaahaa
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