• If you are trying to reset your account password then don't forget to check spam folder in your mailbox. Also Mark it as "not spam" or you won't be able to click on the link.

Fantasy Saurya - ek youdha (Completed)

Kya mujhe mere likhne ka tarika change karna chahiye

  • nahi aise hi sahi hai

    Votes: 130 91.5%
  • haa (to comment kr mujhe advice d)

    Votes: 12 8.5%

  • Total voters
    142

Ristrcted

Now I am become Death, the destroyer of worlds
Staff member
Moderator
42,073
37,271
304
Hi friend maine xforum pr kafi stories padi hai aur ab mai bhi apni ek story post karne ja raha hu ab jyada wakt na lete huye
story p chalte h jaise jaise log milte rahenge unke bare m batata jaunga .
so lets go


Update 1update 2UPDATE 3update 4update 5
update 6update 7update 8update 9update 10
Update 11update 12update 13update 14update 15
update 16update 17update 18update 19update 10
Update 1update 2update 3update 4update 5
update 6update 7update 8update 9update 10
Update 1update 2update 3update 4update 5
update 6update 7update 8update 9update 10
Update 1update 2update 3update 4update 5
update 6update 7update 8update 9update 10
Update 1update 2update 3update 4update 5
update 6update 7update 8update 9update 10
Update 1update 2update 3update 4update 5
update 6update 7update 8update 9update 10
Update 1update 2update 3update 4update 5
update 6update 7update 8update 9update 10
Update 1update 2update 3update 4update 5
update 6update 7update 8update 9update 10
Update 1update 2update 3update 4update 5
update 6update 7update 8update 9update 10
Update 1update 2update 3update 4update 5
update 6update 7update 8update 9update 10
Update 1update 2update 3update 4update 5
update 6update 7update 8update 9update 10
Update 1update 2update 3update 4update 5
update 6update 7update 8update 9update 10
Update 1update 2update 3update 4update 5
update 6update 7update 8update 9update 10
Update 1update 2update 3update 4update 5
update 6update 7update 8update 9update 10
Update 1update 2update 3update 4update 5
update 6update 7update 8update 9update 10
Update 1update 2update 3update 4update 5
update 6update 7update 8update 9update 10
Update 1update 2update 3update 4update 5
update 6update 7update 8update 9update 10
Update 1update 2update 3update 4update 5
update 6update 7update 8update 9update 10
Update 1update 2update 3update 4update 5
update 6update 7update 8update 9update 10
Updateupdateupdateupdateupdate
updateupdateupdateupdateupdate
 
Last edited:

Black water

Vasudhaiv Kutumbakam
5,857
21,061
188
Fabulous update bhai
 

Akil

Well-Known Member
3,107
8,506
158
Dekhte hain kaise shaurya apni maa ko insaaf dila unpar lage kalank ko mitaayegaa.....
Aur kaise apne parivaar ko ek karega....
Full to emotional one
 
  • Like
Reactions: Ristrcted

Ristrcted

Now I am become Death, the destroyer of worlds
Staff member
Moderator
42,073
37,271
304
UPDATE - 27

AB TAK
NANAJI AUR DADAJI KO SADAK P LAANE K BAAD MAINE MAA KO WO SAB DIKHAYA JO WAHA HUA THA JAISE MERI DONO MAMIYON KA MAYKE CHALE JANA. PUJA AUR PRIYA KA APNE DADA KO ITNA KUCH KHNA AUR SAATH HI UNKA BHI GHAR CHOD JANA. FIR MOHIT MAMA AUR C.NANI KA GHAR AANA HAMSE MILNA.

AAGE:-

CHALIYE PAHLE ABHI DADAJI K YAHA CHALTE HAI AUR DEKHTE HAI KYA HUA PUJA AUR PRIYA K JAANE K BAAD.

WO TO NIKAL GAYE GUSSE M PAR APNI MAA AUR BAHNO K DIMAG M BADE SAWAL CHOD GAYE THE.
DADAJI TO ITNA SAB SUNNE K BAAD BAS APNE ROOM M HI PADE THE BILKUL AKELE. WAHI HALL M DONO CHACHA CHACHI AUR DADI BAITHI HUI SOCH RAHI THI K YE KYA HO GAYA.
B.CHACHI-(CHACHAON S)SUNNIYE AAP DONO HAMARI BACHIYON KO WAPAS LE AAIYE NA HUM UNHE SAMJHAENGE DOBARA SASUR JI S AISI BAATE NA KARE.
C.CHACHI- NHI DIDI WO DONO SAHI THI MUJHE NHI LAGTA UNDONO N KUCH BHI GALAT KAHA HAI HAA YE MANTI HU BOLNE KA TAREEKA GALAT JARUR THA.
C.CHACHA- YE KYA BAK RAHI HO TUM.
C.CHACHI- SAHI BOL RAHI HU MAIN MAA JI KI TARAH NHI HU JO APNE BACCHO KO EK GALTI K LIYE MARNE KO CHOD DU ITNI MAHAN NHI HU MAI.
C.CHACHA-(CHILLA KR) RIDHI TUMHE PATA BHI HAI TUM KYA BOL RAHI HO.
C.CHACHI(WAISE HI)- SAB PATA HAI MUJHE M KYA BOL RAHI HU AAKHIR KON S MAA BAAP APNE HI BACCHO KI JAAN KA DUSMAN BAN JAATE HAI AGAR AAP BHI UNHI BAAPON M SE HAI TO BATA DIJIYE MAIN KHUD APNI BETIYON KA DHYAN RAKH LUNGI.
C.CHACHI KA ITNA KAHNA THA K C.CHACHA N APNA HAATH UTHA DIYA UNPE.
CHAAATAAK
C.CHACHI UTHI AUR APNE ROOM M GAYI. THODI DER M HI RICHA K SAATH WO BHI APNA BAG LE NIKAL GAYI GHAR S AUR WAHI DADI ROOTI HUI BAITHI RAHI AUR DONO CHACHA MUH PHADE Q KI UNHE NHI PATA THA K JO C.CHACHI ITNI SHIDI HAI WO YE KAREGI JAATE HUE UNHONE BAS YE KAHA "PAPERS PAHUCH JAYENGE SIGN KR DENA"
UNKE JAANE K BAAD
B.CHACHI-(C.CHACHA S) YE TUNE KYA KIYA DEKH AB TO WO BHI CHALI GAYI. HEY BAG****N YE KYA HO RAHA HAI IS GHAR MAI.

CHALIYE INKO ROONE DETE HAI AUR HUM CHALTE HAI PUJA AUR PRIYA K PAAS.

PUJA AUR PRIYA GHAR S NIKAL APNE FRIEND K PAAS CHALI GAYI JO K COLLAGE HOSTEL M RAHTI THI.
COLLAGE KA NAAM TO YAAD HI HOGA AAP SABKO XYZ COLLAGE.
AB DONO CHALI GAYI APNE FRIEND K ROOM MAI. AB YE THAHRA HOSTEL AISE HI TO KOI AA NHI SAKTA HOSTEL M SHIFT HONE YAHI BAAT UNKI FRIENDS N UNHE BATAYA.
PRIYA- DI HUM GHAR S NIKAL TO GAYE AB YAHA RAHENGE KAISE YE TO HAME RAHNE KI PERMISSION HI NAHI DEGE.
PUJA - ARRE RUK MAIN KUCH JUGAD KARTI HU.
YE DONO PARESAN THE AUR SOCH RAHE THE AAGE KYA KRNA HAI.
YE EK GIRLS HOSTEL THA YAHA P COLLAGE K STUDENTS K SAATH STAFF BHI RAHTE THE.
PREMA JO KI XYZ COLLAGE M HI PADHATI HAI WO GALLARY S GUJAR RAHI THI USKI NAJAR INN DONO P PAD GAYI.
PREMA- HELLO AAP DONO KUCH PARESHAN LAG RAHE HO CAN I HELP YOU?
PRIYA-(PUJA K KAAN M)DI YE NA HAMARE COLLAGE M PADHATI HAI INSE BAAT KRE KYA PATA HELP KR DE.
PUJA- YES MAM ACTUALLY HUM NA RAHNE K LIYE KOI JAGAH DUND RAHE HAI BUT YAHA P JAGAH NHI HAI AUR NA HI YE HAME ALLOW KARENGE KYA AAP HAME ALLOW KRWA DOGE.
PREMA(SOCHTE HUE)- MAIN 1-2 DIN K LIYE TO KUCH KR SAKTI HU PR USKE BAAD TUM DONO KO KUCH APNA SOCHNA HOGA.
PUJA/PRIYA- THANK YOU SO MUCH MAM HUM ITNE TIME MAIN DEKH LENGE SAB KUCH.
AUR WO DONO HI SHIFT KR LETI HAI EK ROOM MAI.

BACK TO HERO :-
YAAR AAJ C.NANI K GHAR M AANE K BAAD TO MAIN GHAR S NIKAL HI NHI PA RAHA THA. MAIN KYA KOI BHI NHI NIKLA THA GHAR S SAB BAS BAATE HI KIYE JAA RAHE THE. YAHI KOI 11 BAHE HONGE K MERE PAAS EK CALL AAYA JO K SAMEERA KA THA.
MAIN THODA DUR JA KR.

SAMEERA- SAMRATH KYA AAP AAJ AA PAYENGE HMNE AAPKE AADESH ANUSHAR SAARE KAAM KR DIYE HAI.
MAIN- YE KAISE BAAT KR RAHI HO TUM. HUM DOST HAI SAMJHI..
SAMEERA- NHI SAMRATH AAP MERE RAJA HO AUR MAIN APKI SENA KI EK SHIPAHI.
MAIN- OOE SHIPAHI KI BACCHI JYADA CHAPAD CHAPAD MT KRO SAMJHI AUR PHKLE JAISE HI BAAT KRNA MERE S AUR UN DONO GADHO KO BHI BOL DENA.
WO- JI SAMRTH..I MEAN THIK HAI KING.
MAIN- CHALO YE SAHI HAI. HAA MAIN KUCH HI DER M AATE HAI. TB TK USS PANKAJ KO READY RAKHNA USKO KISI S MILANA BHI HAI.
WO- THIK HAI SAMJH GAYI
CALL CUT
MAIN FIR S SABHI K PAAS CHALA GAYA. KUCH DER UDHER HI BAITHA RAHA SOCHTE HUE FIR SHILPA S.
MAIN-(M2M) CHALO JAAN AAJ KISI KA GAME BAJANA HAI.
S.DIDI- CHALO.
S.DIDI UTHI AUR APNE ROOM KI OOR CHALI GAYI AUR MAIN BAHAR FIR MAINE 2 CLONES BANAYE EK MERA AUR EK UNKA AUR DONO KO HI WAPAS BHEJ MAIN AUR S.DIDI PAHUCH GAYE BASE P SAMERRA K PAAS WAHA JAA KR MAINE FIR EK CLONE BANAYA AUR USKO MAA KA ROOP DIYA USKO KUCH SAMJHAYA AUR PAHLE USKO PANKAJ K SAMNE BHEJA.
PANKAJ-(MAA KO DEKH)ARRE TO TU JINDA HAI CHAL ACCHA HI HAI EK BAAR YAHA S NIKAL JAAU FIR DEKH TUJHE KAISE PELTA HU.
MAA(C)-(DARTE HUE) NHI AISA MAT KRNA PLEASE MERE SAATH.(EK DUM S DARAWNI AWAJ ME) TU MUJHE PELEGA TU AAJ DEKH MAI KYA KRTI HU TERA(DARI C AWAJ M) PLEASE AISA JULM NA KRNA( DARAWNI AWAJ) AAJ TU MAUT KI BHIKH MANGEGA.
PANKAJ KO MAA KO AISE BAAT KRTE DEKH KUCH SAMAJH M NAHI AAYA
PANKAJ- KON HO TUM BOLO.
MAA(C) KA ACHANAK HI CHAHRA BADAL GAYA AUR KISI CHUDAIL KI TARAH HO GAYA.
MAA(C)- MAIN HAI TOHRI MAUT ABBE NA BACH PAAYI TOHE.
PANKAJ KI PHAT K CHAR HO GAYI YE SAB HOTE DEKH.
CLONE FIR S BADAL GAYA IIS BAAR KAPPA M AUR PANKAJ K SAARE KAPDE UTHAR DIYE.
PANKAJ DAR K MAARE KUCH BHI NHI BOL RAHA THA.
CLONE N USKO NANGA KR DIYA AUR FIR MAA KI AWAJ M BOLA.
CLONE- TUNE MERE SAATH JABARDASTI KI THI NA AAJ MAIN TERE SAATH KARUNGI.
PANKAHJ- NHI PLEASE MUJHE CHOD DO PLEASE TUM JO BHI HO PLEASE CHOD DO.
CLONE(MAA KI AWAJ M)- ARRE BHUL GAYE MUJHE MAIN HU SAIFALI JISKE SAATH TUM...
PANKAJ- SAIFALI MAAF KR DO WO TO UN KAMINE SANJAY AUR LUCKY K KARAN NAHI TO MAIN TO TUMHARI PUJA KRTA THA.
CLONE- AISA KYA TO PRASAD TO LETE JAO. MAIN KISI KA UDHAR NHI RAKHTI.
AUR ITNA KAH KR CLONE N EK CHOTE S BLLADE S USKE BODY P CUTS LAGANE SURU KIYE AUR TAB TAK KRTA HAI AB TAK USKA BODY CUTS S BHAR NA GAYA HO.
FIR CLONE N USKO CHAIR SAMET UTHAYA AUR EK NAMKIN PAANI K TUM M DHAKEL DIYA. PANKAJ DARD AUR JALAN S CHILLATA RAHA PR ABHI CLONE KA KAAM PURA NHI HUA THA.
CLONE N FIR EK BADE S TUBE S KOI CHIZ USSI NAMKIN PAANI JO AB LAL HO CHUKA THA USME GIRA DIYA US CHIZ K GIRTE HI PAANI KA RANG HI BADAL GAYA LAL S BROWN HO GAYA.
CLONE- AEE CHUTIYE SUN TU TO SCENTISFT HAI NA. CHAL BATA MAINE YE KON C CHIZ DAALI JISSE PANI KA RANG LAAL S BROWN HO GAYA AGAR JAWAB SAHIHUA TO TUJHE CHOD DUNGA .
DARD K KARAN USKE MUH S AB AAWAJ BHI NHI NIKAL RAHI THI CLONE N FIR S WAHI CHIZ EK BAAR AUR DAAL DI PASNI M AUR ISSI K SAATH EK BHAYANAK DARDBHARI CHIK K SATH PANKAJ JI APNE NARK K RASTE P NIKAL GAYE AUR CLONE MERE PAAS AA GAYA.
ITNA SAB KRNE M HI SAAM HO GAYI THI MAINE SAMEERA S BOLA K SURENDRA AUR US ANKIT KA DHYAN RAKHE WO D.FUFA K LIYE HAI.
USKO AUR BHI KUCH INSTRUCTION DE MAIN GHAR CHALA AAYA AUR CLONES KO APNE ANDER SAMA LIYA. MAINE ISMILE(C) KO BOLA K USS ADDE KO UDA DE AUR WAHA K LOGO KO BHI AUR MERE PASS WAPAS AA JAYE USNE BHI WAHI KIYA.

CHALIYE AB HUM RUSSIA CHALTE HAI.
RUSSIAN MAFFIYA HEAD QUATERS
G1- YE PANKAJ ACHANAK KAHA CHALA GAYA USKO ABHI BAHUT KAAM KRNA THA USS FORMULE .
G2- HAA AUR WO SALLA GAYAB HO GAYA. YE BOSS BHI NA BEKAR M USKO APNE SIR P CHADAYE RAKHTE HAI.
G3- SAHI KAHA PR ISS BAAR AGAR FORMULA N KAAM NHI KIYA TO BOSS KHUD USSE MAAR DENGE.
G1- HA SAHI KAHA PATANHI KB S BOSS KO SAPNE DIKHAYE JA RAHA HAI.
TABHI ROOM M EK AADMI AATA HAI.
SAARE GUNDE KHADE HO JAATE HAI.
G1- B..BB...BOSS WO P..PANKAJ KAHI CHALA GAYA.
BOSS- WHAT CHALA GAYA KAHA CHALA GAYA. USKA PHONE TRY KIYA YA NHI.
G1- KIYA BOSS BUT UTHA NHI RAHA HAI.
BOSS- AB YE KAHA CHALA GAYA TUM SAARE PATA KARO WO KAHA GAYA HAI. G2 TUM JAO AUR USKE ROOM JAHA WO RUKA HUA THA USKE AAS PAAS PATA KARO.
SAARE LOG NIKAL GAYE PANKAJ KA PATA LAGANE PR INKO KYA PATA K WO TO MAR CHUKA HAI.

WAHI NARESH, DONS KA BOSS PARESHAN HUA BAITHA THA USKE PALE YE NAHI PAD RAHA THA K EK JHATKE M USKE SAATHI GIRAFTAR KAISE HO GAYE AUR YE ARPIT AUR DILAWAR KANGAL KAISE HO GAYE YE BANDA KHUSH BHI THA AUR DUKHI BHI.
NARESH BAAR BAAR SAMBHU KO PHONE KIYE JA RAHA THA PR PHONE SWICHED OFF HI BATA RAHA THA AB INHE KYA MALUM K INKO BHI UTHAYA GAYA HAI.

AISE HI 2 DIN NIKAL JAATE HAI.

SUBAH 4 BAJE MERI NEED KHULI MAIN UTHA FRESH HUA TODHI DER DHYAN SHADANA KI FIR MAA PAPA K SAATH WO YOGA KI. YAHI SAB KARTE KARTE SUBAH K 8 BAJ GAYE SAARE LOG PAHUCH GAYE GHAR1 M KHANE K TABLE P. SAB NE KHANA KHAYA AUR SAARE GENTS NIKAL LIYE OFFICE SHIWAY MERE. BAKI K SAARE APNE KAAMIO M LAG GAYE C.NANI AB HAMARE SAATH HI RAHTI HAI MOHIT MAMA K SAATH.
PARIDHI DIDI D.BUA K PAAS GAYI AUR UBSE PUCHA.
PARIDHI DIDI-(D.BUA S) MOM WO MUJHE NA AAPSE EK BAAT PUCHNI THI.
D.BUA- HA BOLO BETA KYA BAAT HAI.
PARIDHI- WO MOM WO NA 2 LADKIYAN HAI JINKO ROOM KI JARURAT HAI TO MAIN SOCH RAHI THI UNKO GHAR2 M HI RAHNE KO BOL DU, WO NA APNE HI COLLAGE KI HAI PR KUCH PROBLEMS K WAJAH S UNKAO PAHLE WALI JAGAH CHODNI PADI.
D.BUA- KOI JARURAT NHI AISE HI KISI KO GHAR M RAKHNE KI.
PARIDHI- PR MOM MAINE TO UNKO GHAR DEKHNE AANE KO BOL DIYA HAI. MOM MERI FRIEND N MUJHE UNKI MADAD KARNE K LIYE PUCHA TO MAINE SOCHA K BULLA LETI HU UN LADKIYON KO.
D.BUA(THODA GUSSE M)- JB BULLA HI LIYA TO FIR PUCH Q RAHI HO AB. PAHLE MAIN UNSE MILUNGI FIR YE TAY HOGA K WO YAHA RAHEGI YA NHI SAMJHI AUR AAGE S AISA KUCH MAT KRNA.
PARIDHI(KHUSH HO)- OK MOM AND THANK YOU.
D.BUA- WO SAB CHOD YE BATA KB TAK AAYENE WO DONO.
PARIDHI- WO MOM BS AATE HI HONGE MAINE UNKO GHAR2 M BULAYA HAI UNKE AATE HI YAHA LE AAUNGI.
ITNA BOL WO GHAR2 M CHALI GAYI.
WAHI GHAR2 M MAIN BAITHA HUA THA MOM K SAATH AAJ WO MERE S MERE FUTURE K BAARE M BAATE KR RAHI THI K AAGE KYA KRNE KA SOCHA HAI...BLA..BLA...BLA..

HUM BAATE HI KAR RAHE THE K DOORBELL BAJI. MAIN DARWAJA KHOLNE JANE HI WALA THA K MAA UTH KR CHALI GAYI AUR DARWAJA KHOLTE HI
MAA- TUM DONO YAHA.

GUESS TIME:-
KON AAYA HOGA ABHI GHAR2 M.
 

Aryanv

Active Member
1,319
4,005
158
UPDATE - 26 (CONTINUES)

KARIB 7 BAJE K AAS PAAS JB SAARE BADE LOG FRESH HO NICCHE AAYE ,KOI GARDEN M CHALA GAYA KOI KHI AUR. DAD APNE AADAT ANUSAR T.V ON KR USSME NEWS DEKHNE LAGE. ABHI UNHONE NEWS LAGAYI HI THI K HEADLINE KO DEKH UNKO BAHUT BADA JATKA LAGA.
HEADLINE- GUPTA & SONS GROUPS AUR SINGH & SONS GROUPS HUYI KANGAL. MALIK AAYE RASTE PE.
IS NEWS KO DEKH DAD TO UCHAL HI PADE.
DAD- ARRE KAHA HO SABHI IDHER DEKHO KYA KAAND HO GAYA HAI ARRE DEEP JALDI AA IDHER VIKRAM DEKH TO SAHI.
SABHI UNKE AISE CHILLANE S HALL M T.V K PAAS AA GAYE.
MOM- AAP KYA PAGAL HO GAYE HO BACCHO KI TARAH CHILLA RAHE HO SUBAH SUBAH.
MAA- SANJU DIDI SUN TO LO JIJU KYA BOL RAHE HAI
DAD- TUM LOG T.V P DEKHO KYA KHABAR CHAL RAHI HAI.
ITNE M HEADLINE CHANGE HO GAYI THI.
HEADLINE- "MLA SHURENDRA AUR MAYOR ANKIT NE KIYA LAKHON KA GHOTALA. ABHI POLICE HIRASHAT M .

PAPA- ARRE YE TO WAHI HAI NA WO UN KAMINO K BHAI. ACHA HI HUA SAALO K SATH. TO YAHI KHABAR THI.
DAD- ARRE DEEP YE NHI ASLI KHABAR TO AISI HAI K JISSE DEKH TUM SABHI KHUSH HO JAOGE.
ITNE M WAPAS S PAHLE WALA HEADLINE AAYA .
DAD- WO DEKHO MAIN ISKI BAAT KR RAHA HU.
SARRE LOGO N JAB YE DEKHA TO UNKO BHI JHATKA LAGA.
MOM- KYA YE SACH M HUA HAI.
DAD- HA SANJU SACH M HUA HAI.
MAA- YE TO BAHUT BURA HUA PATA NHI WAHA SAB KAISE HONGE.
MAA KA ITNA KAHNA THA K SABHI LOG UNKO AISE GHURNE LAGE JAISE KOI ALIEN AAYA HO.
PAPA- YAAR MERI SAMJH M NAHI AATA TUM KIS MITTI S BANI HO EK TO UN LOGO N TUMHARE SAATH AISA KIYA, HAME MARWANE TAK KI KOSIS KI , HAME APNE BETE S DUR RAKHA AUR TUMHE FIR BHI UNKI CHINTA HO RAHI HAI.
MOM- DEKH CHOTI YE JO BHI UNKE SAATH HUA HAI NA UNKE KARMO KA NATIJA HAI SAMJHI AUR AB TU UNKE BAARE M KOI BAAT NHI KAREGI.
MAA- PR DIDI WO BHI TO HAMARE APNE HAI.
R.FUFA- DEKHO SAIFALI SIRF TUM UNKO APNA SAMAJHTI HO WO NHI SAMAJHTE TUMHE APNA. AGAR WO TUMHE APNA SAMMAJHTE TO KYA... MAIN TUMHE FIR S WO BAATE YAAD NHI DILANA CHAHTA ISLIYE BEHTER YAHI HOGA UNKE BARE M SOCHNA CHOD DO.
MAA- ACCHA THIK HAI PAR AAP UN BACHIYO K BAARE M TO SOCHO JO UN GHARO M HAI. INSAB M UNKI TO KOI GALTI NHI HAI NA.

MAA N YE BAAT KAHI THI PR KOI BHI WAHA UNKA SAATH DENE WALA NHI THA TO MAA BHI CHUP-CHAP MERI TARAF AA GAYI AUR MUJHE ROOM M AANE KO BOLA. MAINE SHILPA KO WAHI HALL M CHOD DIYA AUR CHAL DIYA MAA K ROOM M JAHA WO BAITH K RO RAHI THI.
MAIN UNKE PASS PAHUCH GAYA.
MAIN- KYA HUA MAA AAP AISE Q ROO RAHI HO.
MAA- BETA BAS APNI KISMAT P ROO RAHI HU PATA HAI AGAR MAIN NHI HOTI NA TO YE JO SAARE BAHAR APNE HI PARIWAR KI AISI HALAT DEKH KHUSH HO RAHE HAI WO AAJ UNKE SAATH HOTE.
MAIN- MAA AAP Q UN LOGO KI FIKR KRTE HO HAA. ACHA MERI BAAT SUNNO MAIN NA APKO DIKHATA HU K UN GHARO M KYA HO RAHA HAI MUJHE PAKKA YAKIN HAI WO AAJ BHI AAPKO HI ISKA DOSI MANTE HONGE.
MAINE ITNA BOLA AUR MAA KA HATH PAKDA.
ISSE HUA YE K AB WO BHI MERE SAATH WO SAB DEKH SAKTI THI JO MAIN DEKH SAKTA THA.
MAINE SIDHA APNI NAJAR APNE NANA K GHAR P DAALI.
YE WO WAQT THA JB MERE PUJYA NANAJI GHAR M PADHAR RAHE THE. UNKO CHODNE POLICE AAYI THI
{SAMEERA N KUCH INTEJAM KIYA HOGA.}
ABHI UNKI HALAT KUCH THIKNHI LAG RAHI THI SAYAD D.FUFA N MASK M HONE KA PURA FAYDA UTHAYA THA GAAL SHUJE HUE THE AAKHO K NICHE KAALE KALLE DHABE PADE THE LANGDATE HUE UNHONE GATE P ENTRY LI. ABHI UNKA GATE P AANA HI THA K GHAR MAI HALLA HONE LAGA HUA YE JAB NANAJI GHAR M ENTER HUE US WAQT MERE DONO MAMA KO PHONE AAYA K AAPKI COMPANY DUB CHUKI HAI AUR AB AAPKI SAARI PROPERTY BHI BANK SEIZE KARNE WALI HAI. UNKA BAS YE SUNNA THA K DONO BEHOSH HO GAYE WAHI BAAKI SAARE UNKO DEKHNE LAGE KISI KI NAZAR ABHI NANAJI P NHI GAYI THI.
NANAJI KO BHI YE DEKH JHATKA LAGA WO LAGDATE HUE PHONE K PAAS PAHUCHE AUR JAB UNHONE BHI WAHI BAAT SUNNI TO UNKO BAHUT GUSSA AAYA.
NANAJI(CHILLA KR)- AATE HI APNI MANHOOSIYAT FAILA DI US MANHOOS LADKI NE . IS BAAR TO USKO CHODUGA HI NHI.
UNKI BAAT SUN SAARE JO HOSH M THE WO SHOCK RAH GAYE Q KI NANAJI SIRF MAA KO HI MANHOOS BOLTE THE.
ABHI TK MAMAYON KO BHI PANNI CHIDAK HOSH M LAYA JA CHUKA THA WO BHI THODA SHOCK HUE YE SUN KR.
SHURBHI-(AASHU LIYE AAKHON M) MALIK KYA SAIFALI JINDA HAI.
NANAJI-(GUSSE M) NAAM MAT LO US MANHOOS KA DIKHAI NHI DETA USKE AANE S KYA HO GAYA HAMARA SAB KUCH LUT GAYA YE DEKHO MERE BACCHO KO BHI PATA NHI KYA HO GAYA.
UNKA BAS ITNA BOLNA THA K.
CHAAAATAAAAKKKK
CHAAAAAATAAAKKK
SHARMILA(NANI) N DE DALA 2 UNKE KAAN K NICHE AUR GUSSE M BOLI.
NANI- KHABARDAR JO MERI BETI KO MANHOOS KAHA TO PAHLE YE BATAO KAHA HAI MERI BACCHI.
AAJ PAHLI BAAR NANI N NANAJI P HAATH UTHAYA THA WO BHI PURE GHAR WALO K SAMNE. SAARE K SAARE LOG EKDUM S SHOCK M CHALE GAYE THE KISI KO BHI ISKI UMMID HI NHI THI AUR NANAJI UNKI TO PUCHO HI MAT .
NANI(CHILLA KR NANA S)- KAHA HAI MERI BETI BATAO MUJHE
UNKE YU CHILLANE S SARRE LOG SHOCK S BAHAR AAYE.
NANAJI BILKUL CHUP KHADE THE.
NANI S YE CHUPI BARDAS NHI HUI UNHONE TO TAPADO KI BAARISH HI KR DI NANAJI P YE DEKH DONO MAAMI JO MAMAYO K PAAS THI WO AA KR NANI KO SAMBHALTI HAI PR NANI TO BEHOSH HO CHUKI THI.
SABHI N UNKO UTHAYA AUR ROOM M LE GAYE KIRTI JO KHABHI APNI DADI KI TARAF DEKHTI BHI NHI THI WO AAJ UNKA ILAJ KRNE LAGI. THODI DER M NANI KO HOSH AAYA WO FIR S UTHNE KO HUI AUR NANAJI KO KHOJNE LAGI PR WO BHUDDHA TO SALLA JAM SA GAYA THA WAHI HALL M APNI PATNI S MAAR KHA KR.
ALKA MAMI KO LAGA K SAYAAD UNHE MOM (SANJU) K BAARE M BHI BATA DENA CHAHIYE
ALKA(NANI S)- MAA JI WO SANJU..
NANI- KYA HUA KYA SANJU BOL
ALKA- MAA JI WO SANJU JINDA HAI AUR ISSI SAHAR M HAI.
ALKA MAAMI KI BAAT S SAARE UNKO HI DEKHNE LAGE.
ALKA- WO MAA JI MOHINI N DEKHA THA USSE AUR USKE SAATH POONAM BHI THI.
AAJ KA DIN ISS PARIWAR K LIYE SHOCK S BHARA HUA THA.
NAINA MAMI- ( ALKA S) TUJHE PATA HAI NA TU KYA BOL RAHI HAI.
MOHINI- CHACHI MAA SACH BOL RAHI HAI WO SAARE ISSI SAHAR M HAI.
NANI-(MOHINI S) KYA SACH M TUNE UNKO DEKHA THA MERI BACHI BOL NA KYA WO THIK THE KHUSH TO THE NA WO ARRE YE BATA WO KAHA PR THE BATA NA.
MOHINI- MUJHE NHI PATA JB MAIN HOTEL S NIKLI TAB TK WO JAA CHUKE THE.
NANI(DONO MAMA S)- BETA TUM DONO APNI BAHNO KO DHUD LAO GE NA BOLO NA MERE BACHO.
WO DONO HI CHUP RAHE DONO M S KOI KUCH NHI BOLA AUR NANI FIR S BEHOSH HO GAYI.
IS BAAR KIRTI KO BHI KUCH SAMAJH N AAYA USNE TURANT EK AMBULANCE MAGWAYI AUR NANI KO HOSPITAL LE JAYA GAYA. WAHA PATA CHALA K NANI SHOCK KI WAJAH S COMA M JAA CHUKI HAI.
YE BAAT PATA CHALTE HI ALKA MAMI N MOHINI KO APNA SAMAN PACK KRNE BOLA AUR DONO HI CHAL DIYE ALKA MAMI K MAAYKE. SAATH HI MAAMI N RITESH MAMA KO DHAMKI DI K JB TK SAIFALI AUR SANJU GHAR NA AA JAYE WO DONO WAPAS NHI AAYEGI. KUCH AISA HI NAINA MAAMI N BHI KIYA SAMSHER MAMA K SAATH DONO K MAAYKE ISSI SAHAR M THE TO WO NANI KA KHYAL RAKH SAKTE THE. SAYAD UNKO ISS BAAT KA ANDAZA NHI THA K UNKE PATI AISA BHI KR SAKTE HAI.
WAHI SHURBHI( INKO AB CHOTI NANI LIKHUNGA) KO JB SAIFALI K JINDA HONE KI BAAT PATA CHALI TO WO MOHIT KO SAATH LE NIKAL PADI P.MASSI K GHAR UNKO YE KHUSHKHABRI SUNNANE.

YE SAB KUCH DEKH MAA KO PATA HI NHI CHALA K WO DUKHI HO YA FIR KHUSH UNKO BAS EK BAAT HI KHAYE JA RAHI THI K YE SAB UNKE KARAN HUA HAI.
MAA- DEKHA NA TUNE BETA SAB MERI HI WAJAH S HUA HAI.
MERE KO GUSSA AA RAHA THA MAA K BAAR BAAR AISA KAHNE P PR MAIN YE BHI JANTA THA KI YE SARI BAATE MAA K DIMAG M NANAJI AUR DADAJI K KARAN HI AAYI HAI.
MAINE UNKO KOI JAWAB NHI DIYA BAS DADAJI K GHAR KI KAHANI DIKHANE LAGA.
YAHA BHI USSI WAQT S CHALTE HAI JB DADAJI GHAR M AAYE.
DONO CHACHA KO BHI PATA CHALA K UNKA SAB KUCH BARBAD HO GAYA HAI BLA..BLA...BLA.
DADAJI- YE SAB USS KALMUHI K KARAN HUA HAI PAHLE MERE BETE KO CHIN LIYA FIR MERI BETIYON KO AUR AAJ MERA SAARA BUSINESS BHI USKO TO JINDA JALA DENA CHAHIYE.
YAHA P THODA ALAG SCENE BANA.
IS GHAR M 2 LADKIYAN AISI THI JINKO GUSSA BADA TEJ AATA THA AUR WO KISI K SAATH BURA HOTA NHI DEKH SAKTI THI AUR YAHA TO BAAT UNKE CHACHI KI THI PATA NHI UNHONE MAA KO DEKHA BHI THA YA NHI PR SUNNA JARUR THA APNI MAA(CHACHI S) S UNKE BAARE M WO BHADAK UTHI APNE DADA K ISS BAAT PR. WO DONO THI PUJA(BADE CHACHA KI LADKI) AUR PRIYA (CHOTE CHACHA KI LADKI).
{DONO M JYADA JAMTI NHI THI PR FIR BHI JB BAAT KISI K SAMAAN KI HO TO DONO EK HO JAATI THI}
PUJA- WAAH MR ARPIT GUPTA WAAH SAHI KAHA AAPNE SORRY TUMNE YE SAB KUCH MERI CHACHI KA KIYA HUA HAI. UNHONE HI BADLA LENE K LIYE YE KIYA HAI HAI NA.
ROHINI(BADI CHACHI)- YE KYA TARIKA HAI APNE DADAJI S BAAT KRNE KA.
PRIYA- CHACHI DIDI SAHI TARIKE S HI BAAT KR RAHI HAI(DADAJI S) HA TO TERE KO LAGTA HAI YE SAB CHOTI CHACHI K WAJAH S HUA HAI TU NA MERE KO YE PROOF KR K DIKHA BS.
RIDHI(CHILLA KR)- CHUP HO JA PRIYA WARNA ACCHA NHI HOGA.
PRIYA- MAIN CHUP HO JAUN THIK HAI MAIN CHUP HO JAUNGI PR MERI EK BAAT SUNLO KAHI AISA NA HO K EK DIN YE YAHI BUDDHA AAPKO BHI MANHOOS BOL AAPKI JAAN LENE P NAA PAD JAYE JAISE C.CHACHI K SAATH KIYA THA. US WAQT BHI MUJHE CHUP RAHNE KO BOLOGI AAP ARRE ACHA HUA K ISS GHAR KA KOI CHIRAG NHI AAYA ABHI TK AISE GHAR KO TO BADANA BHI NHI CHAHIYE.
PUJA- SAHI KAHA TUNNE PRIYA MUJHE TO AB SHARNM AATI HAI YE KAHTE HUE BHI K MAIN ISS GUPTA PARIWAR KI BETI HU AUR(BADI CHACHI K OOR DEKH) AAP MAA KAHI AISA NA HO K EK DIN AAPKI HI KISI BETI KO YE BUDDHA MANHOOS BOL MARWA DE TB BHI AAP ISSI KA SAATH DOGI NA.
MAIN AAJ HI YE GHAR CHOD JAA RAHI HU KAHI BHI RAH LUNGI PR ISS NARK M BILKUL NHI.
PRIYA - MAIN BHI AAPKE SAATH CHAL RAHI HU.
AUR ISSI K SAATH HI DONO N APNA SAMAN PAVCK KIYA AUR NIKAL CHALE APNE EK FRIEND K YAHA.

YE SAB DEKH MAN BHI SHOCK HO GAYA MUJHE NAHI PATA THA YE DONO ITNI KHUKHAR HO JAYEGI.
WAHI MAA BAS ROO RAHI THI TABHI PAPA N DOOR KNOCK KIYA. MAA APNE AASHU POCHNE LAGI.
PAPA- SAIFALI MOHIT BHAIYA AUR S.MAA(SHURBHI MAA) AAYE HAI.
MAA- MUJHE PATA HAI MAIN AA RAHI HU.
PAPA- PATA HAI PR KAISE.
MAIN- PAPA MAA AA RAHI HAI NA BAAD M PUCH LENA.(MAA S) AB AAP CHUP BHI KARO AUR ACHHE S MILNA MERE MAMA AUR NANI S.
MAA- BETA KYA TU PUJA AUR PRIYA KO YAHA LA SAKTA HAI.
MAIN- HAA PR JB AAP INSAB K LIYE KHUD KO JIMEDAR MANNA CHOD DOGI TAB AUR MAIN NANAI KO BHI THIK KR DUNGA MAGAR JAISA INE KAHA WAISA KARNE K BAAD.
MAA- MAIN KOSIS KARUNGI.
FIR MAIN AUR MAA BAHAR AA GAYE C.NANI TO MAA KO DEKH AASHUON M HI DUB GAYI AUR UNKE GALLE LAG BAHUT PYAR KIYA SAYAD MAA KO BHI ABHI ISS PYAR KI JARURAT THI. MOHIT MAMA BHI UNSE MIL BADE KUSH HUE FIR. C.NANI N SABKO JO NANA K YAHA HUA WO BATAYA JISSE SUN SAARE SHOCK RAH GAYE.

INKO YAHI CHOD CHALTE HAI UN VETALO K PAAS JO EARTH P KABJA KRNA CHAHTE HAI.
ZAFAR KI MAUT KI KHABAR UNTAK BHI PAHUCHI SIRF UNTAK HI NHI SAARE LOKON TAK PAHUCHI PR YE KISI KO PATA NAHI THA K USSE MARRA KISNE HAI.
awawesome update
 
Top