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Fantasy Saurya - ek youdha (Completed)

Kya mujhe mere likhne ka tarika change karna chahiye

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Hi friend maine xforum pr kafi stories padi hai aur ab mai bhi apni ek story post karne ja raha hu ab jyada wakt na lete huye
story p chalte h jaise jaise log milte rahenge unke bare m batata jaunga .
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Superb update bhai
Thanks xander cage bhai
keep reading and posting
 

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UPDATE- 46

Aab tak
Hero ko Crystal wale sraap k baare m pata chala. wo headmaster k paas gaya aur ek list li jisme aaj tak k wo saare log the jinko wo sraap laga tha aur wo list le Henry k paas pahucha pr tabhi 2 dhamake hue aur jab hero dhamake wali jagah p pahucha to waha Niharika ek sunahare armor m khadi thi dono talwar haath m liye bilkul change ho gai thi wo par talwar chodte hi wo pahle jaisi ho gayi aur behosh bhi.

Aage

Niharika ko hosh aaya wo mere goad m thi aur khud ko aise dekh wo jhat s uth gayi.
Main- Wo kya tha.
Niharika- Kya kya tha.
Main- Tumne talwar ko chua tha na.
Niharika- Wo talwaron n bola mujhe k hame uthao to maine utha liye.
Msin- Kya talwaro n bola main kya pagal hu.
B.S- Tu pagal nhi tu chutiya hai samjha wo sach bol rahi hai.
Main- Pr talwar kaise bol sakte hai.
B.S- chutiye jab ek talwar n tujhe paida kr dala to ye to bas bol rahe the.
Main(Niharika s)- Accha suru s batao mere jaane k baad kya hua tha.
Niharika- Wo jab tum gaye naa to main unn talwaron ko dekh rahi thi bas dekh hi rahi thi k black sword s aawaje aane lagi aur fir wo kappa wali talwar wo bhi bolne lagi k hame uthao hame ek karo hame jod do. Mujhe laga mera koi waham hoga pr wo aawajen tej hone lagi wo mujhe khud ko uthane ko bol rahi thi to maine utha li pr uske baad ka mujhe kuch yaad nhi.
B.S- Chal ab main sure hu k ye wahi hai Henry s bol iske ghar jaaye wo jo list wala kaam hai wo bhi pura ho jayega aur haa iski Maa ko bhi yaha laane ko bolo wo udher safe nhi hogi.
Main- Mujhe bhi batao kya hua hai.
B.S- Tere ko bola kitab padh pr nhi abhi tak khola bhi nhi unko tune.
Main- Arre wo to bus...
B.S- Ab bahane mat bana samjha wo Mother of lords wali book padh sayad usme kuch mil jaaye.
Main- Abhi padhu.
B.S- Haa abhi padh aur iske saath rah pr usse pahle Henry ko bol jo bola maine.
Main - Thik hai bhai.
Maine pahle Henry ko wo kaam bataya fir wo kitab padhne laga wahi Niharika bed p leti hui thi sayad usse kuch ajeeb sa lag raha tha.
Maine Raat bhar m wo kitab puri padh dali wahi Niharika k room m wo to soo rahi thi.
Kitab m mujhe bahut kuch milla jaise Mother Elika k baare m uss school k baare m unke saare chizo aur shaktiyon k baare m saath unn chizo k baare m bhi jo unhone apne shisyon ko diya tha.
Main padh hi raha tha abhi aadhi book baaki thi pr ab aage k saare pages khali the maine ek do baar fir cheak bhi kiya pr wo khali hi the ye mujhe bahut ajeeb laga

Main- B.S ye book aadhuri hai.
B.S- Ye puri hi hai bas aage ki likhi baate kahi aur chali gayi hai.
Main- Kaha gayi wo baate.
B.S- wo unko jab aana ho aa jayegi abhi to tum jao aur aaram karo iss waqt koi bhi nhi aane wala yaha jao.
Maine usse jyada kuch nhi kaha q ki thaka hua main bhi tha to main bhi chal diya apne kamre m soone ko.
Meri neend Niharika k darwaja pitne s khuli wo jor jor s darwaja pitte ja rahi thi.
Main utha aur darwaja khola.
Main- Kya hua yaar q subah subah...
Niharika- Arre class ka time ho gaya hai proff.Fun n bola tha late na hone ko aur tum ho k..
Main- Oo arre tum chalo m turant pahuchta hu.
Maine usse bahar bheja aur taiyaar ho gaya jhat s aur nikal pada Proff. Fun ki class k oor kismat achi thi meri k unke class m aane s 2 sec pahle ho m waha pahuch gaya
Niharika n pahle hi mere liye jagah bana kr rakhi thi main bhi wahi baith gaya uske bagal m. Class shuru hui aaj bhi magical sticks k baare m hi bataya jaa raha tha pr aaj uske banawat k baare m baat ho rahi thi.
Class m mera bilkul bhi maan nhi lag raha tha kuch sawal aaye the mere dimag m uss kitab ko padh jinke baare m main soch raha tha.
Class khatam hui aur hum dono bahar aa gaye. Hum dono spirit garden ki oor jaa rahe the k tabhi Henry n mujhe awaj di wo aa chuka tha Niharika k ghar s uski Maa ko le kr.
Main- Niharika ek min yaha wait karo main Prof. Henry s baat kr k aata hu.
Niharika- ok
Main Henry k paas gaya.
Main- Henry kaam ho gaya tum unhe apne saath to laaye ho na.
Henry- Haa pr.
Main- Pr kya.
Henry- Tum khud hi dekh lo aur uss Ladki ko bhi le chalo.
Main- kya baat hai Henry.
Henry- Tumhara saq sahi tha unki jaan ko khatra tha jb main waha pahucha to kuch log unpe hamla krne aaye the pr maine unko bacha liya hai pr wo thodi ghayal hai aur ...
Main- Aur kya.
Henry- Wo apne praan tyagna chahti hai.
Main- Kya pr q wo aisa q kr rahi hai.
Henry- Issilye to bol raha hu chalo tum aur uss ladki ko bhi le lo kya pata usse dekh wo apna maan badal le.
Main(Niharika ko awaj de)- Chalo hame kahi jaana hai.
Wo mere paas aaayi.
Niharika- Kya hua kaha jaana hai.
Main- Arre chalo to..
Wo bhi bina kuch bole hamare saath chalne lagi aur fir hum tino ussi diwar k paas pahuche.
Niharika- Yaha kya hai....ye ye kya ho raha hai ye diwar to...
Hua ye k jab Niharika n pucha k yaha kya hai ussi waqt Henry n wo eent p apni magic stick rakh di jisse wo diwar darwaja ban gaya.
Main- Chup raho Niharika tumhe sab bata dunga pr abhi kuch mat bolna.
Wo chup ho gayi aur hum sab pahuch gaye Battle ground k darwaje pr wo darwaja khula aur ussi k saath Niharika ka muh bhi.
Henry- wo uss taraf hai Rita uske saath hai.
Hum dono chal diye uss taraf Henry k piche piche.
Jab hum waha pahuche to Niharika ki Maa kuch bade hi chintit lag rahi thi wo Rita s baat kr rahi thi.
N.Mom- Rita tumhe bhi aabhash ho gaya hoga wo fir aayega meri bachi ko to Samrth bacha lenge pr wo mujhse sab kuch pata kr lega isse acha hai main praan tyaag du.
Niharika- Maaa aap yaha aur ye kya bole jaa rahi ho aap.
Apni beti ko dekh unse raha nhi gaya aur wo usse gale laga li aur usko chumne lagi pr Niharika ko to gussa aa gaya tha wo sunn kr.
Niharika- Chodo mujhe aur ye batao aap kya bole jaa rahi thi.
N.Mom- Kuch bhi to nhi.
Rita- Main batati hu ye jo tumhari maa hai wo apni jaan denna chahti thi.
Niharika- Maa ye main kya sun rahi hu aap...
N.Mom- beta ye jaruri hai sabhi k liye warna wo jaag jaayega wo wapas aa jayega aur fir.
Main- Aur fir maara jayega wo bhi Niharika k haato yahi uski niyati hai aur aapko apni jaan dene ki koi jarurat nhi aap aaj s yahi rahoge iss jagah hamare anumati k bina koi bhi nhi aa sakta.
Unhone meri oor dekha.
N.Mom- Beta aap jante nhi sayad usse wo Maarcuss ka shahgird hai wo har baar jagta hai jab bhi cyrstal chamakta hai aur fir mere pariwar ka koi na koi bali chad jata hai uske.
Main- Iss bar aisa kuch nhi hoga main jo hu yaha Niharika k saath aur aap chinta naa karo.
N.Mom- Bache tum samajh nhi rahe wo kya hai uske saamne tum jaise laakho elf kuch bhi nhi ho main janti hu Samrath meri beti ko baacha lenge usse pr uski maut sayad ye mumkin nhi abhi bina uss Sunahre Armor k.
Henry- Ek min ye ye sunahra armor hai kya koi batayega mujhe.
Main- Henry wo sunahra armor Mother Elika n apne priya shisya Jagdeep k liye banaya tha aur saath hiwo anguti bhi jo uss crystal main kaid padi hai uss Armor ki ye khasiyat hai k usse pahenne wala har ek astra s bacha rahta hai jab tk uske maan m koi burayi naa ho pr jaise hi burayi aati hai wo armor gayab ho jaata hai pr agar koi uspe kaabu paa le to wo lagbhag s ajey ban jaata hai.
N.Mom- Tumhe kaise pata hai ye sab tum kaise jante ho ye.
Rita- Ye Samrath Saurya hai Mother Elika k wansaj.
Itna sunte hi wo jhuk gayi mere saamne.
Main- Arre ye aap kya kr rahe ho khade ho jao.
Niharika- Maa ye sab kya ho raha hai ye sunahra armor aur wo kon hai jo jagta hai aur hamare pari...
N.Mom- Beta sab bataungi main jo bhi janti hu sab tumhe batati hu.
Main- Hmm to shuru ho jaiye aap.
N.Mom n pahle to wahi jagdeep ji k baare m bataya aur fir kaise unhone wo university ki sthapna ki uske baad.
N.Mom- Jitna maine sunna tha apne ghar aa kr unke baare m k wo (jagdeep) koi kitab likh rahe the jisme unhone Mother Elika k jiwan k baare m unki jindgi aur kaise unhone apne pran tyage aur q in sab k baare m. Wo kitab puri hui hi thi k unki hatya kr di gayi pr sabko yahi bataya gaya k unki prakritik mrityu hui hai.
Bahut saal beet gaye unsab ko hue fir shuru hua hamare pariwar k logo ki maut ka silsila jo bhi waha jata padne ko wo maar jata koi cyrstal ka sraap tha sayad yahi kahte the log. Aisa hi chalta raha fir kayi saal baad Niharika ka janm hua ye meri beti iske janm lete hi bahut kuch badal gaya hamare jiwan m ye na bachpan s hi apne spirit ko control kr sakti thi aur iska spirit animal bhi koi aam nhi balki Unicorn tha. Hum saare bahut khush the pr fir Raman iske papa ko university m janna pada padhayi k liye jab ye 2 mahine ki thi tabhi aur fir unki maut ki khabar milli hame 3 saal baad. Main tut gayi thi aur iski dadi unhone to apne praan hi tyag diye pr jaate jaate mujhe uss sunahre armor ka rahasya bata gayi k agar wo Niharika ko mile to wo usse kase control kare ye baat unko bhi unki saas s pata chali thi. Din dujre saal gujre meri beti badi hoti gayi aur fir isne bina bataye hi iss university ka entrence de diya aur top bhi kr gayi fir mujhse yaha admission lene k baare m bolne lagi pr maine manna kr diya q na karti manna kon si maa apni beti ko maut k muh m daal degi par fir ek din iska wo unicorn kisi Dragon k saath aaya aur mujhe achhe s samjhaya aur bharosa bhi dilaya k Niharika ko kuch bhi nhi hoga aur wo Samrath k seena ki pradhan seenanayak hogi koi bhi koi bhi usse chu nhi paayega aur wo hi badla legi apne pariwar k saare mauto ka. Shuru m to maine aana kaani ki pr fir maan bhi gayi aakhir meri beti itna mahan kaam jo krne wali thi.
Niharika- M..main seena nayak pradhan seena nayak wo bhi samrath k seena ki aap majak kr rahi ho na maa.
Abhi koi kuch bolta usse pahle Alex ki entry ho gayi.
Alex- Agar ye majak hota na to tum yaha nhi hoti Niharika bhavishya ko tumhari jarurat hai aur issi liye tum yaha ho.
Pahle to saare uske aage jhuk gaye siway mere.
Alex- Khade ho jaao sabhi (N.mom s) mujhe ye ummid nhi thi k aap maidan chod bhagne ka sochoge kya aap unhi Mariya ki par poti hai jinhone andhere k khilaf hui ladayi m apni jaan de di thi ya main galat hu.
N.mom ka sar pahle jhuk gaya fir.
N.Mom- Dragon prince mujhe laga ki wo Jordan mujhese wo saree raj ugalwa lega bas issi liye maine ye socha.
Niharika- Koi mujhe bhi batao ye ho kya raha hai q ki saari baate mere sar k uper s gayi hai.
Main- Tum chup raho samjhi (N.Mom s) shunahre armor ko laane k tarika mujhe pata hai aur wo ho bhi chuka hai pr ab aap mujhe usse control krne ka tarika bataye.
N.Mom- Kya Niharika ko wo mil gayi hai pr usse ye kappa ki talwar kaha s milli Black sword to maana ki Rita n de di hogi pr wo...
Rita- Tum bhul rahi ho yaha samrath bhi hai aur Kappa unka gulam.
Main-Gulam nhi dost hai wo mera (N.mom s) haa usse sab mil gaya hai ab tarika batlaiye.
N.Mom-Tarika unhi talwaron s hai apko un dono talwaro koek saath milla ek gole ka nirman karna hoga ek grey colour ka gola jisme Niharika ko jaana hoga aur ander dhyan m baithna higa pr ek aur chiz bhi chahiye wo anguthi. wahi anduthi Niharika ko jo shaktiyan milegi unhe stable rakhegi warna Niharika ko kuch bhi ho sakta hai .
Main- Ek baat bataiye jab isne dono talware uthai thi to ye bilkul badal gayi thi iski aakhe gulabhi ho gayi thi iske baal shunahre ho gaye the....
N.Mom- Kya kya aap sach bol rahe ho kya ye sach hai.
(Niharika ko gale laga usko chumne lagi) meri bacchi tu tu to main kya bolu samajh m nahi aa raha mere..
Henry- inhe kya hua.
Alex- Henry ye do aise mahayodhayon ki wansaj hai jiska mukabla Jordan k bas ki baat nhi wo wo isse chu bhi nhi sakta. Iska wo rup iski par nani Maariya ki den hai bas ek baar ye uss Shunahre Armor ko kaabu kr le ye Maarcuss ko bhi takar de degi.
Rita- Ye to badi toop nikli. pr ab hum wo anguthi kaise laaye.
Henry- arre usme kya hai main le aaunga usse.
Alex- Henry tum le to awoge pr ek baat dhayan s sunno ye sab tum logo ko jaldi krna hoga Jordan jaag chuka hai wo iss university m nhi aa sakta pr Maarcuss k jaasus wo to yahi hai.
Main- Hmmm Alex sahi bol raha hai ab hame ye sab sambhal k aur jaldi krna hoga.
Abhi tak Niharika ko uski maa gale lagaye chumme jaa rahi thi aur patta nhi kya kya kahe jaa rahi thi.
Main- To Niharika oo Sena nayak mahodaya aapko dhyan lagana aata hai.
Niharika- haa aata hai na mujhe (N.mom s) Maa chodo bhi dekho main koi bachhi nhi hu jo aap.
N.mom- Jyada bol mat samjhi chup chap rah.
Un dono ka ye pyar dekh mujhe Sanjama mom ki yaad aa gayi wo bhi mere saath aisa hi karti thi aur main bhi aise hi react krta.
Main- Alex Earth pr sab kaise hai Mohini ki training kaisi chal rahi hai.
Alex- Sab thik hai Saurya.
Main- Acha kya main unse contact nhi kr sakta kabhi.
Alex- Abhi to ye mumkin nhi hai saurya.
Main- Thik hai dost pr tum aate rahna unki khabar dene ko.
Alex- Thik hai .
Itna bol wo chala gaya ab yaha pr hum 5 log the Rita,Henry,Niharika uski maa aur main.
Main- Henry to ye kaam kab s shuru kare.
Henry- mera na ek question hai ye Jordan ye hai kaha mujhe ye samajh nhi aaya.
B.S- Waah aaj iss chutiye ne sahi question pucha hai. Chalo ab isse bolo k search magic ka use kare aur usse dhunde.

Main(Henry s)- Ek kaam karo wo Search magic usse dekho sayad pata chal jaaye.
Henry- Haa main abhi krta hu.
Usne apni aakhen band ki aur Search bola aur kuch der baad uska muh aisa ho gaya tha k pucho mat.
Rita- Kya hua jaan
Niharika- Jaan? ye kya hai.
N.mom- aie chup kar (Henry s) kya hua henry
Henry- wo iss university ko chod iss pure grah pr hai.
B.S- Haa ab samjha ye chalo ab isko bolo aaj raat hi kaam karne ko aur tum class m jao un jasuson ko saq na ho samjhe aur iss bulbul ko bhi lete jaa

Next update m delhte hai kaise niharika ko muilta hai wo ring saath hi earth p koi hai jiske baare m janne ka waqt ho gaya hai
Mast update h Bhai
Maza aa gya
 
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