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Fantasy Saurya - ek youdha (Completed)

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ABHI MERA CLONE KUCH BOL HI RAHA THA K ROOM MAI ACHANAK S PIHU AA GAYI. USSE DEKH CLONE N S.DIDI S PUCHA.
MAIN(C)- DIDI AB AAP ISSE Q LE AAYI AUR YE HAI KON ?
S.DIDI JO PIHU KO DEKH HADBADA GAYI THI KI KAHI YE MERE CLONE KO APNE RISTE K BAARE M NA BATA DE.
S.DIDI(JALDI S)- YE NA MERI FRIEND HAI PIHU ISSE MAINE APNE POWERS K BAARE M BHI BATA DIYA THA. ABHI MUJHE ISSE KAAM HAI TU JA YAHA S.
MAIN(C)-ARRE AISE KAISE AAP MUJHE MERE HI ROOM S NIKAL SAKTI HO HA.(PIHU KI OOR DEKH) WAISE DEKHNE M BADI SUNDER HAI AAPKI DOST BILKUL KISI PARI KI TARAH (USKI TARAF HAATH BADHA) HI MAIN HU SAURYA INKA BHAI KYA AAP MUJHSE DOSTI KAROGI.
PIHU PAHLE TO EK BAAR S.DIDI KI TARAF DEKHI FIR USNE MERE CLONE KO HAA BOL DIYA.
S.DIDI- SAURYA TUJHE NICHE SAB BULA RAHE HAI TERA RESULT HAI NA AAJ.
MAIN(C)- (PIHU KI OOR DEKH) PHLE TEST TO DENE DO DIDI WAISE KYA AAP HAME KISI EKKANT JAGAH P PAHUCHA SAKTI HO ABHI.
S.DIDI(MAAN M)- YE TO PIHU P LATTU HO GAYA HAI AUR BECHARI PIHU TO BAS ISSE APNE JIJU KA MAJAK SAMAJH RAHI HAI AB KYA KARU... HA ISS CLONE KO SAURYA K PAAS BHEJ DETI HU AUR FIR PIHU KO SAB BATA DETI HU.
S.DIDI-(CLONE KO GHOORTE HUE)- HA HA ABHI TUM DONO KO PAHUCHATI HU
ITNA BOLDIDI N EK CHUTKI BAJAYI AUR MERA CLONE MERE PAAS BASE P AA GAYA AUR MUJHME SAMA GAYA.

S.DIDI- PIHU TUM YAHA KYA KR RHI HO.
PIHU-DIDI MAIN TO PARIDHI DIDI S MILNE AAYI THI AAP SABHI KI YAADE WAPAS AA GAYI HAI ISS LIYE AUR YE JIJU AISSI BAATE Q KR RAHE THE.
S.DIDI- PIHU ABHI SIRF MERI HI YAADE WAPAS AAYI HAI WO TO ACCHA HUA K TU MERE PAAS AAYI NHI TO GADBAD HO JAATI.

PIHU- SIRF AAPKI YAADE PR RED BOOK TO AB JIJU K PAAS HAI NA AUR AAP BHI JINLOK GAYI THI TO MUJHE LAGA K..
S.DIDI(NAM AAKHON S) - NAHI PIHU ABHI KISI KO KUCH YAAD NAHI AAYA HAI SIWAY MERE AUR AB YE YAADE HI MERI DUSMAN BAN CHUKI HAI PATA HAI SAMRATH K PAAS HONE PR MAIN KAISE KHUD KO NIYANTRIT RAKH PAATI HU. UPER S YAHA HAMARA RISTA BHI TO BHAI BAHAN KA HAI TO MAIN KUCH KR BHI NHI SAKTI USKE SAATH.
PIHU- CHINTA NA KARO DIDI JIJU KO SAB YAAD AA JAYEGA. PR KYA MAIN EK BAAR SIRF APNI PARIDHI DIDI S MIL LU .
S.DIDI-PIHU BETA YE TO ABHI MUMKIN NAHI HAI
PIHU- Q DIDI MAIN NA APKI TARAH HI INSANI ROOP MAI MILUNGI UNSE BAS EK BAAR PLEASE DIDI.(ROONE JAISA MUH BANA)
S.DIDI- ARRE TU ROONA NHI MAIN TUMHE UNSE MILATI HU ABHI JAO AUR DOORBELL BAJAO THIK HA.
SUUN TUJHE HO FIGHTING AATI HAI NA.
PIHU-HAA MAINE PARIDHI DIDI S HI TO SHIKHI THI WO PARILOK KI BEST FIGHTER HAI.
S.DIDI-CHAL AB TUJHE USKA TRAINER BANA DETI HU TU BHI KHUSH HO JAYEGI AUR UNKO BHI WAPAS THODA LADNA AA JAYEGA.TU NA JAB AAYEGI TO MALL K INCEDENT K BAARE M BAAT KRNA OK.
PIHU-OK DIDI.
PIHU KHUSH HO GAYI AUR WO GAYAB HO PAHUCH GAYI DOORBELL BAJANE K LIYE.
WAHI SHILPA DIDI NICCHE CHALI GAYI.
MOM- SHILPA BETA TERA BHAI KAHA HAI USKO BOLA NHI AANE KO.
S.DIDI-WO..WO.. HA BATHROOM M HAI KUCH DER MAI AA JAYEGA.
MOM-YE BHI NA ROJ JALDI UTH JATA HAI AUR AAJ JAB ISKA RESULT HAI TO ITNA LATE.
ABHI KOI KUCH AUR BOLTA USSE PAHLE HI DOORBELL BAJI AUR SHILPA DIDI GATE KHOLNE CHAL DI.
GATE PR EK BAHUT HI CUTE C AUR SUNDER LADKI KHADI THI JO KI MERE UMAR KI LAG RAHI THI.
AATE HI WO S.DIDI K GALE LAG GAYI.
S.DIDI- TO AA GAYI TU CHAL AB ANDER BHI CHSL YA YAHI LATKI RAHEGI MERE UPER.
LADKI- ARRE YAAR AAP BHI NA CHALO ANDER AUR MILAO SAB S AUR UNSE BHI JINKE LIYE MAIN AAYI HU.
R.BUA- SHILPA BETA KON HAI YE PYARI C BACCHI.
LADKI- AUNTY MERA NAAM PIHU HAI AUR MAIN INKI DOST KI BAHAN HU.
R.BUA- ACCHA AAO BETA AAP ANDER AAO. TO AAP SHILPA S MILNE AAYI HO.
S.DIDI- NAHI YE TO PARIDHI DIDI S MILNE AAYI HAI.
PARIDHI APNA NAAM SUN CHOWK JAATI HAI.
PARIDHI- MERE S PR MAI N TO ISSE JANTI BHI NAHI
PIHU- (PARIDHI S) ARRE DIDI MAIN NA AAPSE WO MALL WALI BAAT K LIYE MILNE AAYI HU WO S.DIDI N MUJHE BULAYA THA ISKE LIYE.
MALL WALI GHATNA KA JIKR HOTE HI PARIDHI K RANG UDD GAYE AUR WO PHIR SHILPA KO DEKHNE LAGI GUSSE M .
MOM- MALL WALI BAAT YE KON SI BAAT HAI.
PIHU- WO AUNTY KYA HAI NA MALL M KOI DIDI KO...
PARIDHI-MALL M KOI MUJHE DUND RAHA THA MERA PURSE DENE K LIYE TO YE WAHI LADKI HAI( BAAT SAMBHALTE HUE).SHILPA CHALO ISSE HUM MERA ROOM DIKHATE HAI.
S.DIDI- CHALO CHALTE HAI.
FIR TINO UTHE AUR PARIDHI DIDI K ROOM M CHALE GAYE. WAHA JAATE HI.
P.DIDI-SHILPA TU PAGAL HAI KYA AAJ ISKI WAJAH S SAB PATA LAG JATA GHARWALO KO.
PIHU-ARRE DIDI USKE LIYE SORRY AUR AB NA MAIN AAPKO SELF DEFENCE KI TRAINING DENE AAYI HU.
P.DIDI- HAAINN!(S.DIDI S)YE LADKI KYA PAGAL WAGAL HAI KYA. YE ITNI CHOTI LADKI MERE KO KYA SELF DEFENCE SIKHAYEGI.
S.DIDI- AISA MAT BOLO DIDI YE NA BAHUT STRONG HAI SAURYA N BHI ISSI S SHIKA HAI FIGHTING. DEKHA THA NA MALL M.
P.DIDI- KYA TU SACH BOL RAHI HAI SHILPA ISS PIDDI N USSE SHIKHAYA HAI.
PIHU-(P.DIDI) DEKHO AB AAP MERA MAJAK UDDA RAHE HO(ITNA BOL USNE APNA MUH FULLA LIYA)
USKE CHAHRE KO DEKH PARIDHI KO HASSI AA GAYI.
P.DIDI- ARRE TUM TO GUSSA HO GAYI. SHILPA DEKH NA GUSSE M BHI KITNI PYARI LAGTI HAI YE EK DUM S DOLL KI TARAH. PATA NHI ESSA Q LAG RAHA HAI MAIN ISSE JANTI HU.
S.DIDI(MAAN M)- ARRE YE TO AAPKI JAAN HAI AAPKI CHOTI BAHAN
S.DIDI- SAYAD KISI AUR S ISKI SAKAL MILTI HOGI.
PIHU-AAPKO SHIKNA HAI K NAHI YE BATAO PAHLE. MUJHE LATE HO RAHA HAI.
P.DIDI-THIK HAI MAIN READY HU PR TUMKO HAM SABHI BAHNO KO SIKHANA HOGA.
PIHU(KHUSH HO)-THIK HAI MAIN AAP SABHI KO SIKHAUNGI PR SHILPA DIDI KO TO ISKI KOI JARURAT NHI
P.DIDI- WO Q BHALA.
S.DIDI- ARRE DIDI MUJHE PAPA N PAHLE HI YE SAB SHIKHA DIYA HAI.
P.DIDI- OOH( FIR PIHU KI OOR DEKH)TO MASTER AB AAP HAME KB S SHIKHANA SURU KAROGE.
PIHU-MASTER NAHI AAP MUJHE APNI BAHAN HI SAMJHO OK AUR KAL S AAP SABHI KI TRAINING SHURU.TB TK AAP SAARE JA KR APNE MOM DAD S BAAT KR LO.
FIR S TINNO NICHE CHALI GAYI AUR SABHI KO YE BAAT BATAYI. SAARE LOG BHI RAAZI HO GAYE FIR.
R.BUA-ARRE YE SAURYA Q NHI AA RAHA HAI. KUCH DER MAIN RESULT HAI USKA.
S.DIDI(MAAN M)-ARRE USKO TO YAHA LAYA HI NAHI.
S.DIDI-MAIN ABHI DEKH K AATI HU.
S.DIDI UTH KR TURANT CHALI GAYI AUR FIR MUJHE WAHA BULLA LIYA.
MAINE WAHA PR APNA EK CLONE CHOD DIYA Q KI AAJ KIRAN JO AANE WALI THI USSE MILNA BHI TO THA.
MAIN BHI NICHHE CHAL DIYA.
ABHI MAIN NICHHE AAYA HI THA K DAD MERE PASS AAYE AUR MUJHE GALE LAGA LIYA.
DAD-PROUD OF YOU MY SON PROUD OF YOU. TU PURE STATE M FIRST AAYA HAI.(STATE BOARD THA).
MOM-(DAD S)HAATO JI AB MUJHE BHI MERE BETE KO BADHAYI DENE DO.
ITNA BOL MOM MERE GALE LAG GAYI.
MOM- BETA AISE HI HAMESA SABSE AAGE RAHNA AUR KHUSH RAHNA.
SABHI N MUJHE BADHAYI DI.
FIR SABHI PARTY KI BAAT KARNE LAGE TO MAINE HI MANNA KR DIYA. MUJHE YE SAB CHIZ AACHE NHI LAGTE THE.
SAARE MAAN BHI GAYE WO BHI BADE AASHANI S JO MUJHE BADA AJEEB LAGA.
FIR MOM, P.MAASI AUR D.BUA ROOM M CHALI GAYI.
MOM-(D.BUA S) DEKHA NA AAPNE BILKUL APNE MOM DAD P GAYA HAI WO BHI PADHAYI M HAMESA AWAL AATE THE.
D.BUA- HA BILKUL SAHI KAHA.
P.MAASI-(D.BUA S) ACCHA BHABHI AAPNE ANNU DIDI KO AANE K LIYE MANNA LIYA NA.
D.BUA- BADDI MEHNAT S MAANI HAI TERI AANU DIDI. ACCHA SUNNO SANJU TU READY TO HAI NA IN SAB K LIYE.
MOM- HA READY HU AUR MAINE SABHI GENTS KO BHI SAMJHA DIYA HAI.
D.BUA(MAAN M)-AAJ BAHUT BADA DIN HOGA TERE LIYE SANJU BS EK BAAR WO AA JAYE.
D.BUA- GOOD.
P.MASSI-(MOM S) DIDI YE SAURYA PARTY K LIYE MANNA Q KR RAHA THA.
USSE TO KHUSH HONA CHAHIYE NA.
MOM(THODA SAD HO)- POONAM KUCH YAADE JUDI HAI USKI IS PARTY SABD S JO ACCHI NHI HAI.
D.BUA-KYA HUA KON C BAAT JUDI HUI HAI PARTY S.
MOM-DIDI AAJ NHI PHIR KISI DIN JARUR BATAUNGI.
WO TINO BAHAR AA GAYI JAHA SABHI BAITHE HUE THE PIHU BHI THI AUR SABHI BAATE KR RAHE THE.

CHALIYE INKO KHUSI MANANE DETE HAI AUR HUM KAHI AUR CHALTE HAI.

EK BAND PADA HUA KAPDE KA MIIL HAI JANHA KUCH LOG HAI AUR BAATE KR RAHE HAI.
"HA HA HA ARRE CHALO AB US ARPIT GUPTA KO BHI TO BATAO KAISE HMNE USKE PARIWAR KO TODA HAI."- EK AADMI BOLA ANDHERE S.

ARPIT GUPTA JO KI CHAIR P BANDHA HUA THA AUR USSI K SAATH USKA DOST DILAWAR SINGH BHI.

ARPIT - (AADMI S) TUM HO KAUN AUR Q HAMSE HI HAMARE PARIWAR KO TODWA DIYA TUNE (ROOTE HUE).
DILAWAR- AB BHI KUCH BAAKI HAI KYA PURE PARIWAR KO TO BIKHER DIYA TUNNE HAMARE.KHUD K HAATHON S APNE BACCHO KO MARWAYA HAI HUMNE. TU BHI HAME MAAR DE Q KI YE SACHHAI JAAN HUM JI NHI PAYENGE.
AADMI ANDHERE S BAHAR AATE HUE.
AADMI- Q NHI JI SAKTE MAIN JITA AA RAHA HU AAJ TK AAPNE BADLE K LIYE.WO TUM DONO HI THE NA JISNE MERI BIWI KO MERI SACCHAYI BATAYI THI. WO MUJHE CHOD KR CHALI GAYI MERE BACCHO K SAATH FIR KABHI WAPAS NHI AAYI. MAIN PYAR KRTA THA USSE.
USS AADMI KO DEKH DILAWER AUR ARPIT DONO HI EK SAATH.
DILAWAR/ARPIT- NARESH TUM YAHA.
NARESH(AADMI)-HA MAIN YAHA NARESH SHARMA, DON NARESH SHARMA JO KISI S NAHI HAARA THA. USSE TUM DONO N HARA DIYA USKA SAB KUCH CHIN KR.

DILAWAR- TUM YAHA KAISE TUMHE TO JAIL M HONA CHAHIYE.
NARESH- KUCH WAQT PAHLE HI BHAAG AAYA MAIN JAIL S PHIR ICCHA HUI KI JISKO MAINE BARBAD KIYA UNSE MIL LU TO TUM DONO KO YAHA BULLA LIYA. CHALO MAIN TUMHE APNE AADMIYON S MIL
WATA HU JINHONE TUMHARE SAATH MERE KAHNE P YE SAB KIYA.AAJAO MERE DOSTO.

USKA ITNA BOLNA THA K WAHA PR 3 LOG AA GAYE.
YE TINO THE SURENDRA SINGH , ANKIT KAPOOR AUR NANAJI KA ACCOUNTANT(SAMBHU TIWARI) .
BAAKI DONO KO DEKH ARPIT AUR DILAWAR KA REACTION NORMAL THA PR SAMBHU KO DEKH DONO CHOWK GAYE AUR GUSSA BHI AAYA.
DILAWAR-(SAMBHU S) NAMAK HARAM TU JIS THALI M KHATA HAI USSI M CHED BHI KRTA HAI. THU HAI TERI JINDGI P.KITNA BHAROSA KIYA TERE P BETA MANTA THA TUJHE APNA.
SABHU- MAINE TO KABHHI TUJHE BAAP NHI MAANA. PATA HAI MAINE Q KIYA TERE SAATH YE TAAKI TU BHI JAAN SAKE K KHUD K HAATHO BARBAAD HO KAISA LAGTA HAI.
ANKIT-(NARESH S)BOSS INKO YE SAB Q BATA RAHE HAI HUM INHE SIDHA GOI MAAR DETE HAI NA FIR WO SAALA KING USKO BHI MAARNA HAI.
SURENDRA- HA BOSS US SAALE NE HAMARE BHAIYON KO MAARA HAI. HUM KB TK UHI CHUP BITHE WO SALA PANKAJ BHI ABHI KUCH DIN BAAD AANE KA BOL RAHA HAI.
NARESH-(DONO S)SAHI WAQT KA WAIT KRO JB PANKAJ AAYE TB HI KUCH HO SAKTA HAI AUR RAHI BAAT INHE YE SAB BATANE KI TO YE ISLIYE K YE LOG TADPE KHUD K KIYE PR AB DEKHO KAL TO INHE JAIL HI JANA HAI NA WO TERRORIST FUNDING K MAAMLE M. TO INHE BHI TO PATA RAHE K KISNE INKO WAHA TK PAHUCHAYA AUR Q TAKKI YE APNI GALTI SAMJHE.
SAMBHU- BOSS MAIN TO KAHTA HU INGE MAAR HI DETE HAI.
NARESH- ARRE NHI SAMBHU MAIN TUMHARE JAJBAATO KO SAMJHTA HU PR MUJHE EK BAAT BATAO K KYA TUM INKO EK GOLI S MAAR KR KHUSH HO JAWOGE YA FIR INKO WAQT K HAATO TADAP TADAP KR APNI GALTI P ROOTE HUE MARTE DEKHNA CHAHOGE.
SAMBHU- BOSS 2ND WALA HI SAHI HAI.
NARESH-YE HUI NA BAAT SAMBHU CHALO AB INKO BEHOSH KR INKE GHARO M PAHUCHA DO AUR YAAD RAHE DAWA ITNI HONI CHAHIYE K DONO KL SUBAH S PAHLE NA UTHE SAMJHE NA.
SAMBHU- JI BOSS.
FIR UN LOGO N THIK WAISA HI KIYA JAISA K NARESH N KAHA THA KRNE KO.

CHALIYE AB HUM BASE CHALTE HAI JANHA KIRAN AA CHUKI HAI.
KIRAN KO YAHA LAANE KA KAAM SAMEER N APNE JIMME LIYA THA. WO TO USKE PICHHE HI LAGA HUA THA.
MAIN(C)- TO AAP HO KIRAN BAHUT SUNNA HAI AAPKE BAARE M ( USKI OOR HAATH BADATE HUE)
KIRAN BHI HAATH MILATI HUI.
KIRAN- BAATE TO RAW MAI AAPKI HOTI HAI AB KING.
USKA HAATH PAKAD K MUJHE USKE BAARE M SABKUCH PATA CHAL GAYA.
MAIN(C)(SAMEERA S)-ISKO ISKE SAARE DOCUMENTS DE DO AUR YE AAJ S HI JOIN KREGI.
SAMEERA- PR TUMNE TO...
MAIN(C)- HA AUR AB MAIN HO KAH RAHA HU NA.(KIRAN S) TO AAJ AAPKA AUR HAMARA MILNA HUA HAI TO Q NA AAPKO EK GIFT DIYA JAYE.
KIRAN(SAWALIYA NAZARON S)- GIFT KAISA GIFT.
MAIN(C)- BADA HI PYARA GIFT HAI RUKO(SAMEER S)
JAO AUR WO PURPLE COLOUR KA JO BOX HAI WO ISSE DE DO.
SAMEER(HAIRAT S)- WO PURPLE WALA SACH M.
MAIN(C)- HA SACH M.
SAMEER WO PURPLE BOX LE AAYA AUR MERE ISHARE PR USSE KHOLA.
US BOX K ANDER EK BADA HI KHATARNAK KNIFE SET RAKHA THA KUCH NINJA BLADES RAKHE THE AUR USKE SAATH HI THI EK NINJA SWORD AUR KUCH TORCHER KARNE K SAMAN.
KIRAN WO SAB DEKH KHUS HO GAYI Q KI USNE NINJA TRAINING LE RAKHI THI JO MUJHE USSE HATH MILATE HI PATA CHAL GAYA.
KIRAN- THANKS FOR THIS WONDERFUL GIFT.
MAIN(C)- ARRE YE TO BAS AADHA GIFT HAI ABHI AUR BAAKI HAI(INTERROGATION ROOM K OOR ISHARA KR) NAO WAHA TUM INHE ISTEMAL BHI KR SKTI HO PR EK SHART HAI
KIRAN- KYA BOLO.
MAIN(C)-MERE KAANO M CHIKHON KI AWAJ YAHA TK AANI CHAHIYE.AB JAO AUR SHURU HO JAO.
KIRAN JAISE HI ROOM M GAYI WAHA ISMILE KO DEKH USSE BAHUT KHUSI HUI AUR WO LAG GAYI USSE MAARNE MAI.ISMILE KI CHIKHE PURI BASE MAIN GHUNJ RAHI THI.

CHALIYE AB KALP-AASHRAM CHALTE HAI.
AAJ UNDONO KO HI HOSH AA GAYA AUR JAISA K SHILPA DIDI N R.G S KAHA THA UNHONE UNKO US BHUTIYA HAWELI M CHODNE KA KAAM APNE SHISYON KO SAUP DIYA.
R.G(DONO S)- HUM AAPKO ABHI JAHA LE JA RAHE HAI WAHI P AAPKA BETA AAPKO MILEGA. PR AAPKO USKE AANE KA INTAJAR KRNA HOGA.
AURAT- KYA HUM SHIDHA USKE PAAS NHI JAA SAKTE MERA BAHUT MAAN HAI USSE APNE SINNE S LAGANE KA (AADMI S) AAP BOLO NA INKO HAME USSE MILWA DE.
AADMI-(AURAT S)ABHI NHI WAISE BHI WO KUCH DINO M AA HI JAYEGA AUR JARUR KOI BAAT HOGI NAHI TO KYA YE HAME SIDHA USKE PAAS NAHI BHEJ DETE.
R.G-(AURAT S) PUTRI BAS KUCH HI DIN FIR WO TUM DONO S AAWASAY MILNE AAYEGA. AB TUMHE JANA CHAHIYE AUR HAA JO BAATE MAINE US RASAYAN
(FORMULA) K BAARE M BATAYI THI USSE BHI YAAD RAKHNA WO TUM DONO K SHARIR MAIN BHI HAI AUR JAGRIT BHI HAI AB YE TUM DONO PR HAI K TUMHE USKA KYA KRNA HAI.JO YOG SHADHNA MAINE BATAYI THI USSE AAWASAY KARTE RAHNA AUR APNE BETE KO BHI BATA DENA JAB WO MILLE.
DONO- THIK HAI.
R.G- CHALO AB JAO.

WO DONO NIKAL PADE R.G K KUCH SISYON K SAATH US BHOOTIYA HAWELI KI OOR.

GUESS TIME.
YE D.BUA MOM K LIYE KYA KRNE WALI HAI JO UNKA DIN BADA HOGA.
YE R.G KIN DONO KO BHEJ RAHA HAI BHOOTIYA HAWELI MAI AUR INKA BETA KON HAI.
AUR KYA NARESH PAHUCHA SAKEGA ARPIT AUR DILAWER KO JAIL.
Ab tak k saare update supreb , fantastic......awesome story line
with fantastic writing skills..
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awesome fabulous amazing update........................?
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waiting for next......................?
 

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? Hat's Up Bro......
What a super suspense Update......
Mind-blowing
Excellent writing skill
keep it up.......... :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause:
 

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Superb update bhai
 

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Update - 58 (continues)


Maine ek portal khola aur Margret ko aage jaane ko bola. Jaise hi wo portal ke uss oor gayi maine portal band kar diya.

B.S- Abbe ye kya kiya ?

Main- Usko battle groud bhej diya taaki uss Black dragon se nipat saku.

Maine fir ek portal banaya jo ussi jagah tha jaha humpe aag se hamla hua tha. Wo ab yaha nahi tha aur ye illaka jalla hua tha aag hi aag thi har jagah. Maine apni stick se jitna ho sake utni aag bhujhane laga par aaj sayad meri kismat kharab thi.

Main ye kar hi raha tha ke mere pichhe se kisi ke hasne ki aawajen aane lagi. Maine mud kar dekha to waha ek aurat uss gudiya ko liye khadi thi yaani uss gudiya ke vas mein thi. Usne mere uper kisi ray se attack kiya par main jhuk kar usse bach gaya.
Gudiya mere upar waise hi rays se attack karti rahi aur main kisi tarah bachta raha. Maine bahut se jaadu try kiye uss aurat par ki wo uss gudiya ke vas se nikal jaaye par kuch bhi kaam nahi aaya.

Main abhi kuch aur karta usse pahle dusri musibat aa gayi mere picche se wo black dragon wo pahuch gaya udher aur usne wapas se hamla karna shuru kar diya.

Main dono taraf se ghir chukka tha ab bhagne ke alawa koi raasta nahi dikh raha tha.

B.S- Abbe jo ek ke liye soch kar aaya tha wo dono ke saath kar sayad kaam kar jaaye.

Main- Haa ye bhi karke dekh leta hu.

Gudiya ne ek ray fekka meri oor maine ek potal banaya jiske ek chhor se wo ray ander gaya aur dusre chhor se wo bahar gaya aur siddhe Black Dragon ke puch par lagi.
Black dragon ko bahut dard hua isse aur saath hi uska gussa bhi badh gaya.
Wo dard aur gusse mein chikhne laga aur apne aag fekne ki tiwrata bada di.

Main to bas intezar kar raha tha iska main portal kholta jiske ek shirre se wo aag ke golle ander jaate aur dusre shiree se Black dragon ke sharir par hi lagte jisse usko dard hone laga aur dekhte hi dekhte uski halat kharab ho gayi aur wo udata hua waha se chala gaya ab bache the main aur wo aurat jisme haath mein wo gusiya thi.

Main- B.S bhai isko kaise rooku ab.

B.S- Saurya tere mein ab utni taakat naa rahi ke tu isko pakad paaye. Isko bhi bhaga dete hai.

Main- Haa tu sahi hai mujhe takawat mehsus ho rahi hai kuch kuch. Ab bata kaise bagaye isko.

B.S- Saayad Kappa ki talwar kaam aa jaaye waise bhi wahi hai jo black magic ko abhi tak todne mein kaam aa raha hai.

Main- Hmm sahi bola usko bhi dekh lete hai.
Maine Kaapa ki talwar ko yaad kiya par wo nahi aayi.

B.S- Tu bahut thak chuka hai bhai ab kuch nahi ho sakta chal nikal yaha se.

Main- Par wo aurat uska kya.

B.S- Hum kuch nahi kar sakte bhai khass... Abbe wo raakh uss ladki ki raakh tere pass hai naa usko fek iss aurat par ye nikal jaayegi iske vas se.

Main- Kyun naa main ye raakh uss gudiya par hi daal du?

B.S- Tere mein utni takat nahi bachi hai bhai ke tu fir uss gudiya ko sambhal paaye. Uss rakh ke lagne ke kuch der baad tak wo gudiya bahut khatarnak ho jaayegi aur tu abhi kamjor hai meri baat maan abhi bas uss aurat ko aazad kara de hum kal uss gudiya ko pakad lenge.

Main- Thik hai.

Maine thodi si raakh nikali uss ladki ki aur usko uss aurat ke upar fek diya jiske baad wo aurat hawa mein ghumne lagi aur fir jamin pe girne wali thi ke maine usko wind magic se baccha liya par uske baad meri bhi aakhen band ho gayi.

Wahi dusri taraf Earth par alag hi jhamela chal raha tha.

Alex aur Varsha dono mein hi bahas ho rahi thi dono full nashe mein the.

Tabhi pata nahi Varsha ko kya hua usne Alex ke baal pakad kud ki oor khicha aur apne chahre ke bilkul karib le aayi aur fir lip to lip ek jordar kiss kar di.

Chaliye thoda picche chalte hai ye jaan ne ke liye ki hua kya tha yaha inke saath.

Kiran varsha ko pahle to beauty parlour le gayi thi fir kuch shoping karwayi aur kuch samjha kar ghar le gayi.

Varsha bhi Uske kahe anusar ghar par pura ban than kar baith gayi kuch der baad Alex ghar ke ander aaya aur uski nazar jaise hi Varsha par padi wo bas usko dekhta hi rah gaya par varsha wo muh banna kar waha se uth kar chali gayi.
Alex ke saath Pradeep bhi tha.
Pradeep- Chal bhai tera mood set karne ki saari taiyaari ho gayi hai.

Alex- Yaar Varsha naaraz hai kya mujhse dekha kaise muh banna chali gayi.

Pradeep- Kab aur wo naraz kyun hogi tere se tu chal mere saath .

Pradeep Alex ko chaat par le gaya jaha kappa ne pahle se intezam kar rakhe the. Kappa ne ek jaddi butti laayi thi jo bahut nashili hoti hai jisse kisi ko bhi nasha ho sakta hai usne uss jaddi butti ko milla diya bear ki bottles mein.

Wahi nichhe Alex ke jaane ke baad.
Varsha(Kiran se)- Didi wo to upar chala gaya.
Kiran- Haa to tu bhi jaa naa par baat nahi karni hai bas uske saamne gussa hone ki acting karo.
Varsha- Par wo to Pradeep bhai ke saath gaye upar naaa.
Kiran- Arre tum jao to Pradeep ko mein dekhti hu.
Kiran ne pradeep ko nichhe bulla liya.
Varsha upar gayi to dekha ke Kappa aur Alex baithe the haathon mein ek bottle liye.
Varsha ne utshukta purvak Kappa se puch a ke ye kya hai kappa ke bolne se pahle Alex ne bol diya ye bear hai isse insan pite hai aur saath hi usko bhi offer kar diya binna uss jaddi butti ke baare mein jaane.
Kappa- Arre yaar isse nahi pachegi ye.
Alex- Arre ye Dragon hai aur hum dragons ko inn bears se kuch nahi hota (Varsha se) Ye lo try karo bahut accha hai.
Varsha ne usse naa le kar Kaapa se bottle maangi. Kappa ne shuru mein manna kiya par fir haar maan kar bottle de diya.
Kappa(Khud se)- Kappa beta ab bhag yaha se dono dragons ko jab chadegi to pata nahi kya hoga.

Kappa waha se nikal gaya ab waha sirf Alex Varsha aur bear ki bottles hi bachi thi.

Varsha ne ek sip liya yo usko kadwi lagi aur usne bear muh se nikal di aur ajeeb sa muh banane lagi jisko dekh Alex ko hassi aa gayi.

Alex ko khud par hasta dekh Varsha ko gussa aane laga usne fir bear ki bottle uthayi aur ek sip mein bottle hi khali kar di.

Varsha- Dusri do.

Alex ne usko dusra bhi pass kar diya Varsha wo bhi pi gayi. Alex ki thoda thoda pitta raha aur fir dono par uss jaddi butti ka asar hone laga.

Varsha- Tum mujhpe has rahe the naa?.
Alex- Haa tum par has raha tha.
Varsha- Mujhse baat mat karo main naraz hu tumse.
Alex- Main karunga baat tumse batao kyun naraz ho.
Varsha-Tumne mujhe daata naa iss liye ab aur baat nahi.
Alex- Main to karunga baat tum kya kar logi.
Varsha- Main baat nahi karungi.
Alex- Nahi tumhe karna hoga..

Yahi chooti si baat par bahas shuru hui dono ke bich aur wo jaddi butti ka asar badhta chala jaa raha tha dono ke upar bas saayad yahi baat rahi hogi Varsha bechari apne plan ko bhul gayi nashe mein aur Alex ko kiss kar baithi.

Kiss tutne ke baad

Alex bas Varsha ko dekhe jaa raha tha par wo wo to nashe ke kaaran behosh ho chuki thi ab par kiss ke dauran usne Alex ke hoothon pe kaat liya tha.

Alex bas usko dekhta raha aur fir waise hi upar usko neend aa gayi.

Chaliye dekhte hai aage kya hota hai
 
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