Horror Saya. Ek chudil ki prem kahani (Completed)

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[rhyme_boy]

Bella apne bap mukhiya ko gav me har jagah dhudhne lagi. Use apne pita ko dhudhne me koi dilchaspi nahi thi. Komera ne uske andar jo jaher bhara tha. Or bella ki mardo ke prati rizav ka asar tha ki vo har mardo ko niharne ka moka dhudhne lagi. Pure gav me ghumne ke bad apni maa ke yaar joravar singh ki haweli pahoch gai. Thakur shab betth kar hukka pi rahe the. Jab unke samne bella aai to hukke ka dhuaa gale me hi fas gaya. Jorawar singh jor jor se khasne lage. Patli kamar or sundar chahere vali bella jan buch kar dupatta ghar hi chhod aai thi. Ghagra choli me patli kamar vali bella aapni lambi choti hilate hue itthlati hui thakur shab ke samne khadi ho gai.

Hukke ke dhue se jorawar singh jor jor se khas raha tha. Bella ne moke par itthlate hue tont bhi mar diya.

Bella ; buddhe ho gae ho thakur chacha.

Jorawar lalchi najar se bella ko dekhte hue bola.

Jorawar singh ; (smaile) budha to tera baba ho gaya me to ab bhi tujse bhyah kar ke maa bana du tuje.

Bella ; hmmm rahene de chacha. Tere fefdo me to dam nahi. Or ham kisi se kam nahi. Tu ye bata ki mere baba ko dekha kya???

Jorawar ; mere pas tere baba kabhi aaya he kya. Ha teri maa kaha hogi ye mujse kabhi bhi puchh le.

Bella ; jati hu chacha ab tu to dinge hi hakta rahega.

Jorawar hasne laga bella jese hi nikli bahar tipu se takra gai. Dubla patla tipu jab takraya to dono hatho ne bella ke bhopu anjane me dab gae. Bella takrake thoda dur hui. To tipu ko dekh kar muskurate hue boli.

Bella ; (smaile) oy hoy tipu tu??? Kab aaya.

Tipu ne najre niche kar li.

Tipu ; kal kal hi aaya.

Tipu or bella bachpab ke dost the. Dono talab me khub nahate. Or bella tipu ko chakma de kar kisi ke sath rang raliya mana ne ke lie nikal jati. Fir achanak se bella uske samne aa jati. Tipu bhi kuchh karna chahta tha. Par tab usme himmat nahi thi. Vo raziya or bella dono ko apas me jodne ki kosis karta. Aaj paheli bar bella ko 32 ke boobs ke tach se badan me hal chal mach gai.

Bella ; (smaile) to chale nadiya me. Bahot din ho gae shath khele.

Tipu ko dar lagne laga. Ab bella or jyada sundar or bhari hui si lagne lagi thi.

Tipu ; m m me ab bacha nahi hu.

Bella ; (smaile) hmm vo to me khud hi dekhungi. Abhi bhi bacha he ya bada ho gaya. Me nadiya ja rahi hu aana he to aaja.

Bella tipu ke pas se nikal gai. Tipu ne palat kar bella ko jate dekha to bella apni kamar matkate hue ja rahi thi. Tipu kuchh der sochta raha. Fir vo bhi nadi ki taraf jane laga. Tipu bahot darpok tha. Vo soch raha tha kya nashib he subah raziya chachi or ab bella dono maherban. Tipu ko dar lag raha tha ki koi use bella ke pichhe jate dekh na le.
Vo kuchh wakt laga kar nadi kinare pahoch gaya. Vo pahoch kar charo taraf dekhne laga. Use bella kahi dikhai hi nahi di. Tabhi use pani me dubki lagane ki aavaj aai. Usne palat kar dekha to. Uske hosh udd gae.

Bella pani me kud chuki thi. Dhundhli chhabi me bella pani ke andar nangi dikhne lagi. Tipu ko nahane se jyada to ye jan ne me dilchaspi thi ki bella sach me nangi he ya kuchh pahen bhi rakha hoga. Tabhi bella ubhar kar aai. Or puri nangi jal pari ki tarah pani me terne lagi.

Bella ke khule bal uski khuli pitth tak ter ke laherane lage. Bella ki patli pitth or kamar, uski hips or lambi kese jesi tange. Tipu sochta hi rahe gaya ki vo pani me kude ya nahi.
Lekin bella ki yoni se esi madak gandh aa rahi thi ke vo tipu ko hi nahi bahot sare nar pishaj ko bhi akarshit kar rahi thi. Chudelo ki tarah nar pishajo ko bhi ek dusre ka shikar chhin ne ki adat hoti he. Or komera ne bella ke sharir me ek zaher dal diya tha. Jis se vo use bheed me bhi dhudh sake. Vahi jaher se kai aare pishaj akarshit hone lage. Vo sare shikar ke lie rat ko gav me to aae. Par har ghar me lehsuno ki gandh se vo kuchh na kar pae or vo sare nadi ki gaheraiyo me pani ke andar hi chhip gae. Vo saro ko sahevas ki bhavna satane lagi. Bella ki yoni se ajib si madak gandh aa rahi thi. Bella bhi pani ke andar tak gota lagane lagi.
Vo nangi thi or lahero ka pani jab uske ango ko chhukar nikalta ahib si gud gudi macha raha tha. Bella pani me utar kar gaheraiyo me ankhe band kar ke ek jagah par sthir ho gai. Achanak kuchh hath aae or uske badan pe rengne lage.

Band ankho se bella ke har hisse par koi na koi hath use shahela raha tha. Tange zange yoni nabhi kamar yovan uroj kandhe hath muh sab jagah. Bella ko ajib sa nasha chadhne laga. Uski shanso ke bulbule upar ja rahe the. Par bella inshan thi.
Use shans na milne ki ghutan hui or vo ek zatke se upar aai. Ek hath ne uska ek pau pakad liya. Bella chhutne ki kosis karne lagi. Bella chatpatane lagi. Tabhi ek bhayanak chhikh sab ko sunai di. To sare hath fir gaheraiyo me chhip gae. Tipu to dar ke vaha se bhag gaya. Bella zat se upar kinare par to aai. Par gav ki taraf ke bajae vo jungle ke kinare pahoch gai. Ek aavaj bella ko sunai dene lagi. Vo aavaj to bahot bhayanak thi. Par vo aavaj bella ko akarshit karne lagi.

Aao mere pas aao. Mene hi tumhe bachaya he. Mujse daro nahi. Aao aao.

Bella ka sharir sunn pad gaya. Bella khadi hui or jungle ki taraf chalne lagi. Bella apna hosh hi bhul gai. Nangi bella ke badan se pani tapak raha tha. Vo bahot hi jyada madak or sundar lagne lagi. Achanak kisi ne uska hath pakda or baho me lekar ek pad se chipka liya. Bella ne dekha ki ek balist sharir vala nar pishaj bade bal sundar chahera par dato se vahi chudel use baho me lie dahad raha he.

Usne bella ki ek tang utthai or uski zange mashalne laga. Uska bada sa ling bella ki yoni ko sahela raha he.

Bella ; ahhh kon ho tum ahhh.

Oomar ; me oomar hu. Ek pishaj. Tum bahot sundar ho. Dill kar raha he tumhe apna bana lu.

Bella ; ahhh sss tum bhi bahot sundar ho. Kitne bal shali sss me to tumpar akarshit ho gai. Muje apni bana lo.

Dono ek lab jud gae. Bella ek pishaj se dari nahi balki usme hi kho gai. Ek jabardast chuban ke bad bella ko jor ki vomit hui. Vomit hote hi bahot sare kide nikle. Jok, kankhura, kokroj, or bhi bahot sare.

Oomar ; lo ab tum aazad ho. Ab batao vo kon he.

Bella ; me nahi janti vo budha he roj aata he. Me uske vas me ho jati hu. Muje chakkar aa rahe he.

Bella usme kho gai. Dono ke badan apas me jud gae. Inshan or chudel (pishaj) ka ek ankha milan huaa or bella ko apna sab se nirala sahvas ka anubhav huaa. Dono nange ghane pedo ki chhv me lete hue. Ek dusre ko bade pyar se dekhte he. Bella ko ehsas huaa paheli najar me use pyar huaa. Oomar kumurta ka chhota bhai tha.
Vo bhi bella par akarshit ho gaya or bella se pyar ho gaya. Bella ko bhi ehsas huaa ki uski talas ab khatam ho gai. Or use jesa pyar chahiye vo mil gaya he.

Oomar ; vo shayad komera he. Tum daro mat. Ab tum meri ho. Jao apne ghar jao. Rat me aa jana. Me tumhara intjar karunga.

Bella oomar ke seene me sar chhupakar bade pyar se boli.

Bella ; ammm hmm muje kahi nahi jana. Ab me tumhare sath hi rahungi.

Oomar ; me tumhe yaha se kahi dur le jaunga. Tum meri ho ab. Jaoo rat ko aa jana. Koi tumhe nahi chhu sakta.

Bella khadi hui or jane lagi. Bella ko face pe alag hi muskan thi. Bella bhagne lagi or dobara nadi me kud gai. Bella ne nadi par ki or tipu ko dekhne lagi. Tipu ek patthar ke pichhe chhupa huaa tha. Bella ne use dhudh liya.

Bella ; are tipu tu yaha kaha chhup ke bettha he me tuje kab se dhudh rahi hu.

Tipu ; hmmm hmm vo aavaj.

Tipu bahot dara huaa tha. Bella joro se hasti he.

Bella ; (jor se haste hue) are darpok kahi ke. Ha ha ha.

Tipu bela ko haste hue dekh raha tha. Use bella ki jeebh medhak jesi lag rahi thi.

Bella ke sharir se jaher pura nahi nikla tha. Jo kuchh dino me uski jaan lene vala tha.



Jaha gav se bella kahi or thi. Or uske bap mukhiya ki lash ek pad pe latki mili. Ye kam lina ke lie sattu ne kiya tha. Lash ghar ke bahar la di gai thi. Or uski biwi hatth pit pit ke jor jor se ro rahi thi. Chopal me baki ke gav vale ikhatthe hue. Ab bari thi ki mukhiya ki jagah kon lega. Sab chahte the ki dhima jesa bahadur mukhiya ki jagag le. Par jorawar singh khud aage aaya. Or bolna chalu kiya.

Jorawar singh ; dekho bhaiyo ab mukhiya ji ab nahi rahe. Ab turant unki jagah lene vala koi chahiye.

Gav ki chopal pe sare ikhattha hote to admi aurat sare aate the. Bas panchayat me aurate nahi aate the. Jorawar bolta or bheed ke pichhe khadi raziya pe jorawar ki najar gai. Raziya ki najar bhi jorawar pe thi. Jorawar ko laga ki raziya bich me bolegi or uska mukhiya ban ne ka shapna chur chur ho jaega. Raziya bhi sirf thakur shab ko hi dekh rahi thi.

Jorawar ; abhi jab tak koi naya mukhiya chuna nahi jata me ye jagah sambhalunga.

Jorawar bolte bolte raziya ki taraf dekhta he. Raziya muh me ungli daba kar mukura rahi thi. Pahele to jorawar raziya ki muskan dekh kar dar gaya fir dhire dhire use viswas ho gaya ki raziya to kuchh or hi chah rahi he. Jorawar hasna nahi chahta tha. Par uski dhadhi muchho me ek lalachi muskan ter gai. Jorawar ko uska abhas huaa to vo chopal se niche utar gaya.
Sare mukhiya ke ghar ki taraf jane lage. Mukhiya ki lash ko nadi ke pas lejane lage. Jorawar bhi mud mud kar aurto ke bich khadi raziya ko dekh kar chhoti si lalachi muskan details he. Raziya bhi dato me saree ka pallu daba kar jorawar ko muskurakar dekh rahi thi. Raziya jesi jawan gav ki sab se sundar aurat ko pane ki hasrat palne lagi. Jorawar bheed se nikalta he or apne ghar ki taraf Jane lagta he. Raziya samaz gai vo kya chahta he. Raziya bhi bheed se nikal kar chupke se jorawar ki haweli ki taraf chal deti he. Jorawar ki haweli me koi nahi tha. Sare to mukhiya ki shamshan yatra me the. Jorawar ghar pahoch kar kapte hatho se hukka jalane laga. Mukhiya ke samne ek dam se laherati balkhati khule balo vali raziya aa gai.

Raziya gana ga rahi thi. Mera piya gaya pardesh. Raziya ki aavaj bahot surili thi. Jorawar apni lalchi aavaj me bola.

Jorawar ; hha haa ri raziya. Ha.

Raziya joro se hasti he.

Raziya ; (smaile) eee thakur. To tu ab naya mukhiya banega. To mera pati kyo nahi. Hmm???

Raziya ki boli se jorawar ke arman tut gae. Hakikat me bol to lina rahi thi. Kyo ki raziya ke man pe to lina ka kabu tha.

Raziya ; (smaile) dar mat tu mukhiya bhi banega or tuje me bhi milungi. Magarrrr...

Mukhiya apne ghutno ke dard ke bavjud zatke se khada huaa. Or raziya ko baho me bhar liya. Raziya ka sparsh pa kar joravar pagal ho gaya. Raziya jorawar ko zatak deti he.

Raziya ; nahiii sss yaha nahi.

Jorawar ko hoss aaya jab razia uspe bhari padi or ashani se use zatak diya

Jorawar ; haa fir kaha??? (Sock)

Raziya ; (kamukh muskan) sare mukhiya ko jala kar nadi me naha kar apne apne ghar jaenge tab.

Jorawar hasne laga. Raziya pichhe jorawar ko smaile karte hue dekhte dekhte jane lagi. Jorawar apni dhoti me hath dal deta he. Or mutthi ko jor se dabata he. Jorawar ghar se nikalta he or nadi kinare mukhiya ki chita jal rahi thi vaha pahoch gaya. Use to bas intjar tha ki sare log yaha se jae.
Intjar to khatam huaa par raziya nahi aai. Vo aati bhi to kese. Raziya ke samne lina haste hue aai or raziya ke hath me pani ka ghada thama diya. Raziya muskurati he or pani ka ghada lekar nadi ki taraf chalne lagi. Vaha jorawar singh ko laga raziya use chutiya bana rahi he. Vo vapas dhire dhire gav ki taraf khisak ne laga. Kuchh mard nadi ki taraf nahane ke lie aa rahe the. Par jab uski najar raziya pe gai to jorawar ke kadam apne aap ruk gae. Mathe par ghada lie raziya aa rahi thi. Khubsurat chahere ke sath jab tane hue varx or patli kamar gaheri nabhi, or sutva pet dikha to jorawar ke mukh par gandi lalchi muskan or dhoti me bada sa tambu ban gaya.

Ab jorawar bhi use dekh kar puchhe mud gaya or pahele hi nadi me utar gaya. Vo nahane ka dhong karne laga. 3 ladke pani me kud kud kar nahane ka maja le rahe the. Ab jorawar ke pas intjar karne ke ilava koi chara nahi tha. Raziya aai or jorawar ki lachari par muskurate hue pani me utar gai. Vo pani me utar kar ghade ko dhone ka nataj karti rahi.

Raziya ne saree fek di thi. Jorawar ki najar to raziya ke unnat vraxo par hi thi. Vo ladke chale gae or raziya bahar nikal kar saree paher ne lagi. Mukhiya ne charo taraf dekha. Raziya kinare par betth gai. Or ghaghra upar kar ke pani me apne pau laherane lagi.

Raziya ke gore gore pau dekh kar jorawar lalach me raziya ki taraf badhne laga.jorawar raziya ke karib aaya or zatke se raziya ki saree khich li. Raziya muskura kar jorawar ki ankho me dekhti he.

Jorawar dhire se uske pas ghutne or apne hatho ke panje kutto jese aage badhta he. Tabhi ladko ki pani me dubki lagane ki aavaj aai. Jorawar patthar ke pichhe chale gaya or dekhne laga. Raziya muskurate hue apne muh pe hath rakhti or gardan na me hilati he. Raziya ki ye chanchal ada jorawar ki jan le rahi thi. Jorawar ek bar sar uttha kar vo ladko ko dekhta he. Ladke ja rahe the. Jorawar jese hi raziya ki taraf muh karta he to raziya use dikhai nahi deti.
Jorawar dae bae dekhne laga to sirf blouse or ghaghre me raziya kamar matkate hue bilkul dhire dhire ek pad ki taraf ja rahi thi. Raziya pura gila badan pad ka sahara lekar betth jati he.

Raziya ankhe band kar ke jor jor se shanse lene lagi. Jis se uske bade or gore boobs up down hone lage. Jorawar uske pas gaya or vapas ghutno ke bal betth kar raziya ke pau ki ungliya ko muh me bhar leta he.

Raziya ; sss ahhh budhsu ssss. Tu bada kamina he.

Raziya bol ke smaile karte hue jorawar ki ankho me dekhti he. Raziya ki kamukh mushkan dekh kar jorawar se raha nahi gaya or raziya pe tut pada raziya ka ek boobs pakad kar jor se mashalta he or raziya ke hottho ko apne hottho se jod kar jor jor se chumne laga.

Raziya ; ammmmm ssss am mm...

Tabhi vapas un ladko ke apas me bate karne ki aavaj aane lagi. Raziya ne jorawar ko zatak diya.

Raziya ; lagta he vo isi taraf aa rahe he. Me jati hu.

Raziya khadi ho gai or ja kar saree uttha kar pahen ne lagi.

Jorawar ; to fir kab milegi.

Jorawar patthar ke pichhe se hi raziya se puchhta he. Raziya ne fatafat saree lapet li thi. Or pani ka ghada bhi uttha liya tha.

Raziya ; (smaile) rat ko aa jana. Par aadhi rat aana 1 bj.

Raziya bolkar muskurate hue jane lagi or jorawar vahi chhupa raha. Gav ke un ladko par jorawar ko bahot gussa aa raha tha. Jorawar unke pas gaya or gusse se bola.

Jorawar ; (gusse me) gav ke mukhiya ki mout ho gai or tum yaha khi khi kar ke moj se naha rahe ho. Jao sab.

Jorawar ka gav me kafi dab daba tha.




Subah se sham ho gai. 2 bora chandi lekar dhima kahi na ghum sakta tha. Na unhe chhod kar kahi ja sakta tha. Vo ek pad ke niche sham tak hi bettha raha. Andera ho gaya. Usne dono boro ko pad ke pichhe chhupaya or pani dhudhne laga. Use dur ek haddpamp dikha. Vo vaha ja kar hadnal hilata he. Or zuk kar muh laga kar pani pine laga. Rat ki chahel pahel band ho chuki thi. Sirf kuchh dukane hi khuli thi.
Dhima jaha pani pi raha tha vaha andera tha. Use kisi aurat ke hasne ki avaj aai. Usne upar dekha. Lakdi ke ek khambe par kumurta thi. Vo andhera hote hi aa gai thi. Or use dhudh liya tha. Dhima ne upar sar utthaya or kumurta ko dekha. Vo bade bade nakhun ek yodha ki tarah betthi hui thi.

Dhima ; bas bas meri biwi itni bhayanak he ki koi maheman bhi mere ghar nahi aane vale.

Kumurta ne upar se dhima ke sar pe ek bar mara. Dhima ne apne sar ko hath lagaya or bar uttha kar khane laga.

Dhima ; pata he subah se bhukha hu. Or tum ye bar khila rahi ho.

Dhima ki narajgi ek pyare pati jesi thi. Jispe kumurta ko dhima pe bahot pyar aata he. Dhima kumurta ko dekh kar apni narajgi jata raha tha or kumurta muskurate hue dhima ko dekh rahi thi. Tabbi ek jor ka danda dhima ke sar pe pada or dhima jamin pe gir gaya. Uske sar se khoon bahe raha tha. Or vo behosh ho gaya. Use marne vala namar tha.namar bhi subah se hi dukan se nikalne ke bad se dhima par najar rakhe bettha tha. Jab kumurta ko dhima se bat karte dekha to chudel pakadne ki lalach me usne dhima par var kar diya. Kyo ki vo chudelo se ladhne ki takat rakhta tha. Par insano se ladne ki takat usme kam thi. Or dhima bhi swasth sharir ka malik tha. Jab dhima pe war huaa to kumurta bokhla gai.
Usne ye parwah nahi ki ki koi inshan dekh bhi raha hoga. Us jagah kuchh admi bhi aa rahe the. Par kumurta ne bokhla kar ek jump mari or bich raste me aa gai.

Kumurta jor se chikhti he. Vo namar par jump karti he. Namar hath me kuchh pawdar jesi koi chij thi. Vo kumurta par fekta. Aane vale logo ne dekha unhe samaz nahi aai or vo dekhne ke lie ruk gae. Kumurta par jese vo chij giri kumurta vaha se hat ke deewar pe chipak ke namar ko bahot gusse se dekhti he. Namar fir mantar padhte padhte kumurta par mutthi pe mutthi bhar kar vo chij fekta raha. Kumurta jese jamin par giri usne kumurta ke charo taraf gol chakara bana diya. Kumurta fas gai. Or badi ashani se kaid ho gai.
Dekhne vale jo log the dar gae. Unhe abhi bhi vishwas nahi tha ki vo bhut dekh rahe the. Kyo ki shaheri log bhut preto pe viswas nahi karte. Kumurta gusse se boli.

Kumurta ; (gusse me chikh kar) tune mere pati ko mara tuje hinda nahi chhodungi.

Namar ; are chal ja ja. Ab tuje batata hu me kon hu.

Namar ne mantar padhna suru kiya or kumurta ko ek botal me kaid kar liya.

Namar botal uttha kar hasne laga. Jo kuchh log the vo baba baba bolkar namar ke pau me gir jate he. Unhone bhi botal ko dekha or dar gae. Botal me ek jinda puri nangi ladki dekh kar logo ki ankhe chondiya gai. Dhima behosh vahi pada raha. Ghayal.




Andhera hote hi raziya ka deewana dipu raziya ki ghar ki taraf chal diya. Tipu ko dar bhi bahot lag raha tha. Usne pahochte hi darwaja khat khataya. Or dae bae dekhne laga koi use dekh to nahi raha he. Tabhi darwaja khula or dulhan ki tarah saji dhaji raziya ne darwaja khola. Jab tipu ki najar raziya pe gai to tipu ke hosh hi udd gae. Vo thuk tak andar nahi nigal pa raha tha. Masum or khubsurat chahere vali raziya. Gahene singar kali ankhe gore mukhde par lal bindi. Kasa huaa blouse or ubharo ka to kahena hi kya.

Tipu kuchh bol hi nahi paya. Jab ubharo se niche kamar pe najar gai to patli Lamar pe sone ki sakad gajab lag rahi thi. Gore gore pet par sunhari chain. Or saree bhi kamar ki haddiyo pe tiki thi. Puri nabhi dikhai de rahi thi. Tipu ne to kabhi kalpna tak nahi ki thi. Raziya use milegi or is roop me milegi. Raziya muskurati he.

Raziya ; (smaile) tipu tu aa gaya.

Tipu ke to hosh hi gayab the. Vo bhala kya bol pata.

Tipu ; (dhimi aavaj) ha ha chachiiiii.....

Raziya muh par hath kar ke sharmate hue surili aavaj me hasti he. Tipu pe to upar wala maherban tha ki use hosh hi nahi tha uske sath kya ho raha he.

Raziya ; (smaile) andar aaja.

Raziya mudi or andar chali gai. Tipu vahi khada raha. Use hoh tab aaya jab raziya ki aavaj fir sunai di.

Raziya ; andar aaja or darwaja band kar de.

Jab tipu ko hosh aaya to vo ghabra kar dae bae dekhta he or andar aa kar zat se darwaja band kar deta he. Tipu jese hi muda uske fir hosh udd gae. Khubsurat raziya charpai par pau pasar ke betthi use kamukh najaro se dekh rahi thi.

Raziya kamukh najro se tipu ko dekhte hue saree ka pallu pau ki taraf se halke se upar kiya. Uske gore gore pau ki pindliya dekh kar tipu ke kachhe me bhuchal aa gaya. Raziya ne apna hath tipu ki taraf utthaya. Tipu hosh me nahi tha. Vo dhire dhire khudba khud tipu ki taraf badhne laga. Raziya ne haste hue tipu ka hath pakada or apni baho me khich liya.
Dubla patla tipu jab raziya ki baho me gira raziya ne use jor se bhich liya. Tipu ka muh raziya ke unnat urojo me dhas gaya. Raziya ke badan ki garmi, urojo ki naram komalta or baho me bharne se hi tipu akhri paydan pe pahoch gaya. Tipu ke kachhe me charrr se pichkari chhut gai or tipu dhila pad gaya. Jaha uske hath raziya ki pitth ko kash ke dabae vo dhile pad gae.

Raziya ; kya huaa tipu. Bolo ha bolo.

Tipu ; chachi vo chachi mera.

Raziya muskura kar tipu ko thoda alag kiya or pant ki taraf gilapan ko dekha to vo joro se hasne lagi.

Raziya ; (smaile) koi bat nahi bhatije ji teri chachi yahi he. Ek bar or kosis kar lena.

Raziya khadi hui or apni saree fek kar aaine ke samane khadi ho gai. Tipu ko kuchh karne ki jarurat nahi thi. Raziya khadi hui or uske puchhe vala hissa dekha to tipu ke kachhe me fir gudgudi suru ho gai. Raziya aanine me dekhte hue apne balo ko bandh rahi thi. Raziya ki tang blouse me khuli pitth or kamar ke hisse ki shadar banavat ko dekh kar utavla hone laga. Raziya ka ghaghra (saya) ke nade ki dor khul chuki thi. Ghaghra thoda sarak jane se aadhe gore gore kulhe or kulho ke bich ki lakir bhi dekhne lagi thi.

Raziya jese hi muskurate hue mudi uska ghaghra niche gir gaya. Tipu fir khula muh kar ke raziya ko dekhta raha.

Raziya ; (smaile) kya huaa tipu tu to kai bar dekh chuka he.

Tipu kya bolta kato to khoon na nikle. Bas Itna hi bol paya

Tipu ; chachi.....

Raziya ne tipu ki ankho me muskura kar dekhte hue hath pichhe leja kar door khichi or blouse ko aazad kar diya. Tipu ko to umid se jyada mil raha tha. Use pata nahi tha jab umid se jyada mil sakta he to chhin bhi sakta he. Puri nangi raziya kamar matka kar laherate hue muskurate hue tipu ki ankho me dekhte hue uski taraf aai. Or tipu ko daboch kar uske upar late gai. Apni dono koniyo ko tipu ki chhati pe tek kar muskurate hue boli.

Raziya ; (smaile) kesa lag raha he tipu.

Tipu ; bahot achha lag raha he chachi ahh..

Raziya ki koni se tipu ko dard hone laga. Raziya ne tipu ko baho me jakad kar palat diya. Tipu raziya ke upar aa gaya. Raziya ke jo fule or tane hue boobs the. Jinhe sirf nanga dekhne ki tamanna karta tha aaj uski dubli patli chhati se dabe hue the. Raziya jese tipu ko nigal jaegi. Tipu thoda thoda niche hote hue raziya ke boobs pe apne muh marne laga. Vo hadbada raha tha kya kare kya ba kare. Kabhi ek boobs ko joro se mashalta kabhi ek ko muh me bhar leta. Raziya ka bhi man bahekne laga. Use bahot maza aa raha tha. Raziya ne tipu ke sar pe hath laga kar niche dhakela. Raziya pichhli bar yoni chusai ka maja le chuki thi. Vo chahti thi mukhiya ki tarah vo bhi use vahi maja de. Tipu bhi shaher me rahe kar sab janta tha. Par kabhi moka hi nahi mila.
Tipu ke sar pe dabav huaa to uske hotth pet or nabhi ko chhute hue kamar ke niche tak pahoch gae. Use hottho pe kuchh gilapan sa laga to ek bar usne muh upar kiya. Fir raziya ko dekha. Vo mushkurate hue use hi dekh rahi thi. Raziya ne thodi kamar se utthi or tipu ka muh apni dono tango ke bich jor se daba diya. Tipu bechara paheli bar kisi ki yoni chum raha tha.
Tipu ke hottho ke dabav padte hi raziya ankhe band kar ke jor ki siskari bharti he.

Raziya ; ahhh ssss sabasss tipu ssss dekha na chachiiii kitni achhi heeee....

Tipu ko pahele to ghirna hui fir use bhi maja aane laga raziya ankhe band kar ke apni yoni chatai ka maja lene lagi. Dono hatho se apne hi boobs ko jor jor se masahlate chikhne lagi.

Raziya ; aaahhhhhsss.... Tipuuuuu... Ssss..

Raziya ko bahot maja aane laga uske andar ek jor ka tufan mach gaya use esa laga jese vo hawao me udne lagi ho. Achanak jor se usne apni pichkari tipu ke muh pe chhod di. Vo joro se muskurate hue hafne lagi.

Raziya ; (ankhe band santusti) tipu re sss bahot achha laga.

Raziya ne aankhe kholi or pyari si muskan ke sath tipu ki taraf hath badhaya.

Raziya ; (smaile) aaja....

Tipu khada huaa or raziya ka hath pakad leta he. Raziya ne tipu ka hath pakda or khich ke apne karib kiya. Tipu ek hath se hadbadate hue apni pant kholne laga. Jese uski pant or undarwer niche hui raziya muskurate hue tipi ke land ko apni mutthi me bhar leti he. Raziya tipu ki ankho me muskurate hue dekhte tipu ka chhota sa land aage pichhe karti he. Ek dam dhime. Tipu kab se bekar tha. Raziya ke mulayam komal hatho ka jadu vo jyada zel nahi paya. Uski pichkari bhi firse chhut gai or sidha raziya ke face pe fuaara chhut gaya. Raziya ne apni ankhe band kar li.

Tipu ki ankhe band ho gai thi. Raziya tipu ke virya ko apne muh or hottho pe malne lagi. Raziya ne virya se sani ungli ko muh me dal liya. Achanak tipu ko kisi ne kandhe par pichhe se pakda. Tipu ne pichhe dekha to ek bhayanak shakal vali chudel thi. Tipu chila kar niche gir gaya.

Tipu ; chachiiiiii.....

Lina ne tipu ki ek tang pakdi or uae khichte hue rasoi ki taraf lejane lagi. Tipu raziya ki taraf dekh ke chilata raha.

Tipu ; chachi chachi bachao muze chachi chachi.

Magar tipu ki chachi to tipu ki halat dekh kar jor jor se has rahi thi. Tipu ki ungliya tak jamin me ghisad kar nakhuno ke nishan bana rahi thi. Lina tipu ko ghasit kar rasoi me le gai. Or tipu ki chikh raziy sun kar jor jor se has rahi thi. Jese raziya ko hi in sab chijo me maja aa raha ho. Tipu chachi chachi chikhta raha par uski chachi ne hi use mout ke muh me dhakel diya. Kuchh der bad tipu ki aavaj band ho gai. Raziya ki ankhe band ho gai.


Rat ke andhere me bella par bhi kale saye ka ashar suru ho gaya. Uske ghar me komera aa chuka tha.

Komera ne dekha bella rat ke andhere me kahi jane ki kosia kar rahi he. Bella ki najar komera par gai to vo chilane lagi. Komera ne bhi apna bhayanak roop dikhaya

Bella behosh ho gai. Komera bella ke pas aaya. Or uski gardan ko sahenalne laga.

Komera ; mera shikar koi nahi chhin sakta. Tune oomera ko chun kar galti kar di. Ab tuje me bahot bhayanak mout dunga. Ab tu har roz maregi.

Komera ne gale pe apne dat gadha diye. Or khoon pine laga. Komera ne sabhi nar pishajo ko apne sath jod liya tha. Uski maa savita jo dusre kamre me thi uspe bhi var ho chuka tha. Bahot sare nar pishajo ne savita ko bhogna suru kar diya tha. Dusre kanre se bhi savita ki chikhe nikalne lagi. Bahot se nar pishajo ne savita ko noch noch kar mar dala.



Vahi raziya ke ghar ek or maheman aadhi rat me pahoch gaya. Or darwaja khatkhatane laga. Kuchh der pahele hi raziya ne lina ke hatho tipu ko marwa diya. darwaja khat khatane ki aavaj sunkar fir raziya ki ankhe khuli or vo khadi hui. Vo fir se saree pahen kar singar karne lagi. Jese pardesh se uska piya lot aaya ho. Jorawar darwaja pit ta raha.

Jorawar ; ri jaldi kar kab se bahar khada hu.

Jorawar bahar khada dar raha tha ki koi dekh na le. Lekin andar se bas surili aavaj hi aa rahi thi.

Raziya ; (smaile) baba ruko aa rahi hu.

Jorawar raziya ki aavaj sunkar or raziya ke katili badan ko yaad kar ke apni dhoti me apne land ko bich bich kar mashal raha tha. Tabhi darwaja khula or dulhan si taiyar hui raziya uske samne aa gai.

Vahi khubshurat chahera gahene singar ubhre hue tane unnat uroj. Patli kamar nabhi ke niche tak kasha huaa sutva pet. Or kamar me sone ki patli sakad. Chand ki roshni me bhi raziya ka roop kuchh alag hi najar aa raha tha. Jorawar ne turant hi lapak kar raziya ko baho me bhar liya.

Raziya ; ahhh sss are koi dekh lega andar sss ahhhh...

Raziya ne jorawar ko dhakel diya. Jorawar jamin par niche gir gaya. Jorawar jese uttha apne aap ko sambhalne laga. To raziya aandar ja chuki thi. Andar se bas yahi aavaj aai.

Raziya ; (smaile) andar aa jao thakur. Or darwaja band kar dena.

Budha thakur Jawan raziya ko bhogne ki lalach me khada huaa or jaldi se andar aa kar turant darwaja andar se band kar deta he. Jorawar jese palta uske samne bhi raziya ka vesa hi jalwa jesa tipu ne dekha tha. Raziya pau pasar kar betthi apne jalwe dikha rahi thi.

Jorawar bhag kar raziya pe kud pada vo jyada hi Utawla ho gaya tha. Usne jate hi raziya ko baho me bhar kar chumna suru kar diya raziya bhi pura sath dene lagi. Dono ek dusre ke hottho ko ese chum rahe ho jese dono me race lagi ho. Dono hi utavale raha nahi gaya. Raziya ne apna ghagra or jorawar ne apni dhoti upar kar ke apni apni jagah le li. Raziya ke dono tago ke bich Jorawar ne jor lagana suru kar diya. Jese hi dono fako ke bich garam lohe jesa kuchh andar gaya raziya ne apni ankhe band kar ke Jorawar ki pitth me apne nakhun ghusa diya.

Raziya ; ssss ahhhhh thakurrrr ssss.

Jorawar bhi josh me aa gaya par raziya ko jyada bardas hi nahi huaa sirf 5,6 dhakke hi lage. Tipu se yoni ka raspan karwane se uski bhukh jag chuki thi. Or raziya ka pani andar hi chhut gaya. Raziya dhili pad gai. Uske pani ne rasta bhi chikna bana diya. Or jor jor ke dhakke lagne lage. Par antim charam sukh jorawar ke nashib me hi nahi tha. Uski gardan pe achanak kisi ke dat gadh gae. Lina ne jorawar ko dato se pichhe ki taraf se jakad liya.
Lina ne jabde ki takat se hi lete hue jorawar ko uttha diya or pichhe khich liya. Jorawar ka dam nikalne laga. Or uski ankhe bahar aa gai. Jorawar ka virya to ghasit te hue jamin par hi nikal gaya. Lina ne vahi raziya ke samne hi gardan pe joro se jabde par war kar ke jinde ka hi khoon pina suru kar diya. Jorawar to usko marne vale ka chahera bhi nahi dekh Paya. Raziya ghuno ke bal kamukh najro se kutiya ke jese niche aai or do teen kadam aage aake jorawar ka virya farsh par se jeebh laga kar kutiya ke jese hi chatne lagi.
Jorawar ki ankhe band ho gai. Ek hi rat me raziya 2 mardo ko lina ke hatho marwa chuki thi. Lina ne jorawar ka bhar pet khoon piya or apna sar upar utthaya. Lina ka aadha roop badal chuka tha. Vo sar upar kar ke angdai le rahi thi.

Raziya ki ankhe fir bhari ho gai or vahi jamin par hi vo behosh ho gai.


Vahi bella par sitam kam nahi ho raha tha. Use hosh bhi aaya par komera uske samne hi khada tha. Uske badan pe ek bhi kapda nahi tha.

Komera ; (smaile bhayanak) mujse dhokha tera oomer bhi tere samne marega.

Bella ; (rote hue) nahiiii....

Bella ke palang ke charo taraf bade bade kale badhe hath ubhar aae. Lina ghabra ne lagi. Vo dar se rote hue bistar pe hi sukud gai. Hath uske charo taraf badan pe rengne lage.

Bella sirf chilati hi rahi.

Bella ; nahi nahiii... Nahi........

PAGE # 23
Kaafi Lamba update diya Shetan ji....

Kya Bawaal Update diya hai yaar..... BC haath hi nahi ruka..... tel alag nikal gaya padhte padhte (abhi sach mein tel yaani paseene ki baat kar raha hu )

Bella (jo pehle hi chudakkad kism ki ladki hai aur Komera ka zeher ke nashe mein) apne baap ko dhundne Jorawar thakur ke ghar pohochti hain jahan usey Tipu waha milta hai aur wo bachpan ki tarah usey nadi mein nahane ke liye bulati hai (chutiya hai... suna nahi wo bulati hai magar jaane ka nahi saala chala gaya bakra banne)

Tipu Bella ke pichhe chala jata hai aur waha bella ko nanga nahate hue dekhta hai..

Lekin Bella ki chut ki gandh se paani mein pishaach uske peechhe padh jate hain aur usey paani mein le ja kar uske jism se khelte hain... (saale harami .. nangi ladki dekhi nahi ke aa gaye lund khada kar ke bhogne )

Lekin usey Pishacho se chudne se Oomar bacha leta hai aur usey Komera ke zeher se bhi kuch hadd tak mukt kar deta hai....
Dono ko ek nazar mein pyaar ho jata hai .. aur dono garma garam chudai bhi kar lete hain... aur Oomar usey Komera se bachane ka wada bhi krta hai

Wahi gaao mein Mukhiya ki shav ped se tanga hua milta hai aur Jorawar moka dekh kar khud ke wo pad sambhalne ki baat keh deta hai aur log maan jate hain. (saala lalchi kutta)
Aur Raziya wahi par hi jorawar ko apne jism ko le kar dore daalti haI aur usey Nadi kinare bulati hai ------ Shetan ji ... ye pura nain matakka in dono kya kya sundarta se likha hai aapne......... haiiiiii maza aa gaya... main to masalta hi reh gaya ------------------ apni aankhein

Jorawar bhi apna khada lund le kar nadi kinare pohoch jata hai... aur Raziya achchi tarah se rijjha kar apne jism ki numaish se, apna joban aur mamme dikha kar tadpati hai.... aur usey apne ghar bulati hai raat mein
(Yaar ye Raziya maar daalegi... is ki aadaayein ... pura loda taan deti hain aur saara juice nikaal deti hain uff)

Dusri tarah sheher mein, Dhima raat ko araam karne ke liye bethta hai to uski Mulakat Kumurta se hoti hai... lekin is baat se bekhabar ke Namar usey dekh raha hai.... uska sar par hamla karta hai aur usey behosh kar Kumurta ko bottle mein Qaid kar leta hai....
( Bhai ye padh kar sach mein bura laga..... is behen ke pakode Namar ki gaand maarni chahye) - Bohot sundar fight scene likha aapne ye)

Back to Raziya, Tipu bechara apni maut ko dawat deta hua ...Raziya ke ghar pohochta hai jahan usey bade nasheele andaz mein milti hai.... bechara Raziya ke gale lagte hi pant mein apna maal jhaad deta hai (ab Raziya aise gale lagayegi to hamara bhi nikal jayega tipu kya chiz hai)

Khair Tipu Raziya ki chut chusta hai aur uske upar Raziya paani bhi nikalti hai lekin jese hi Raziya Tipu ka nanga lund pakadti hai... uski fir se taai taai fish ho jati hai
Itne mein Lina usey daboch kar andar le jati hai aur uska raspaan kar daalti hai....

Raziya fir se Tipu ki kahani dohrayi aur Jorwara bhi lund ke nashe mein Raziya ke ghar pohocha... aur dono kaam krida ke nashe mein ek dusre mein dube hue they... aur jab Jorawar Raziya ko chod chod kar apne maal nikalne wala tha... wese hi Lina ne usey dabocha aur wahi uska khoon chus liya lekin itne mein us ka virya zameen par hi nikal gaya ...

jise Raziya ek pagal aurat ki tarah zameen se hi chaatne lagi.... (Ye Raziya par Lina ke vash ka asar hai )

Udhar Bella ki paas fir se Komera aata hai aur usey pata chal jata hai ki Oomar ne uska shikar chhin liya tha... to usne Savita ko bhi marwa daala
Aur wahi Bella ka bhi khoon chusne laga.... lekin maara nahi abhi tak...

Dekhte hain aagey Bella ke saath kya hota hai......

Ufffffff............... ye update padh ke to sach mein energy nikal gyi saari....... pant alag kharab ho gayi ... (chai gir gyi thi bhai)

 

[Shetan]

PAGE # 23
Kaafi Lamba update diya Shetan ji....

Kya Bawaal Update diya hai yaar..... BC haath hi nahi ruka..... tel alag nikal gaya padhte padhte (abhi sach mein tel yaani paseene ki baat kar raha hu )

Bella (jo pehle hi chudakkad kism ki ladki hai aur Komera ka zeher ke nashe mein) apne baap ko dhundne Jorawar thakur ke ghar pohochti hain jahan usey Tipu waha milta hai aur wo bachpan ki tarah usey nadi mein nahane ke liye bulati hai (chutiya hai... suna nahi wo bulati hai magar jaane ka nahi saala chala gaya bakra banne)

Tipu Bella ke pichhe chala jata hai aur waha bella ko nanga nahate hue dekhta hai..

Lekin Bella ki chut ki gandh se paani mein pishaach uske peechhe padh jate hain aur usey paani mein le ja kar uske jism se khelte hain... (saale harami .. nangi ladki dekhi nahi ke aa gaye lund khada kar ke bhogne )

Lekin usey Pishacho se chudne se Oomar bacha leta hai aur usey Komera ke zeher se bhi kuch hadd tak mukt kar deta hai....
Dono ko ek nazar mein pyaar ho jata hai .. aur dono garma garam chudai bhi kar lete hain... aur Oomar usey Komera se bachane ka wada bhi krta hai

Wahi gaao mein Mukhiya ki shav ped se tanga hua milta hai aur Jorawar moka dekh kar khud ke wo pad sambhalne ki baat keh deta hai aur log maan jate hain. (saala lalchi kutta)
Aur Raziya wahi par hi jorawar ko apne jism ko le kar dore daalti haI aur usey Nadi kinare bulati hai ------ Shetan ji ... ye pura nain matakka in dono kya kya sundarta se likha hai aapne......... haiiiiii maza aa gaya... main to masalta hi reh gaya ------------------ apni aankhein

Jorawar bhi apna khada lund le kar nadi kinare pohoch jata hai... aur Raziya achchi tarah se rijjha kar apne jism ki numaish se, apna joban aur mamme dikha kar tadpati hai.... aur usey apne ghar bulati hai raat mein
(Yaar ye Raziya maar daalegi... is ki aadaayein ... pura loda taan deti hain aur saara juice nikaal deti hain uff)

Dusri tarah sheher mein, Dhima raat ko araam karne ke liye bethta hai to uski Mulakat Kumurta se hoti hai... lekin is baat se bekhabar ke Namar usey dekh raha hai.... uska sar par hamla karta hai aur usey behosh kar Kumurta ko bottle mein Qaid kar leta hai....
( Bhai ye padh kar sach mein bura laga..... is behen ke pakode Namar ki gaand maarni chahye) - Bohot sundar fight scene likha aapne ye)

Back to Raziya, Tipu bechara apni maut ko dawat deta hua ...Raziya ke ghar pohochta hai jahan usey bade nasheele andaz mein milti hai.... bechara Raziya ke gale lagte hi pant mein apna maal jhaad deta hai (ab Raziya aise gale lagayegi to hamara bhi nikal jayega tipu kya chiz hai)

Khair Tipu Raziya ki chut chusta hai aur uske upar Raziya paani bhi nikalti hai lekin jese hi Raziya Tipu ka nanga lund pakadti hai... uski fir se taai taai fish ho jati hai
Itne mein Lina usey daboch kar andar le jati hai aur uska raspaan kar daalti hai....

Raziya fir se Tipu ki kahani dohrayi aur Jorwara bhi lund ke nashe mein Raziya ke ghar pohocha... aur dono kaam krida ke nashe mein ek dusre mein dube hue they... aur jab Jorawar Raziya ko chod chod kar apne maal nikalne wala tha... wese hi Lina ne usey dabocha aur wahi uska khoon chus liya lekin itne mein us ka virya zameen par hi nikal gaya ...

jise Raziya ek pagal aurat ki tarah zameen se hi chaatne lagi.... (Ye Raziya par Lina ke vash ka asar hai )

Udhar Bella ki paas fir se Komera aata hai aur usey pata chal jata hai ki Oomar ne uska shikar chhin liya tha... to usne Savita ko bhi marwa daala
Aur wahi Bella ka bhi khoon chusne laga.... lekin maara nahi abhi tak...

Dekhte hain aagey Bella ke saath kya hota hai......

Ufffffff............... ye update padh ke to sach mein energy nikal gyi saari....... pant alag kharab ho gayi ... (chai gir gyi thi bhai)

Amezing. Kya la jawab review hai. Ekdam parfect comment ke hisab se review. Jese update ho. Ek alag hi tarah ka signature andaz.
Chudele hamesha bhramit karti hai. Vo kisi se bhi kam karva sakti hai. Aap aage bhi ese sexual seen ka pura maza le paoge. Lot of thanks yaar.

 

[rhyme_boy]

Amezing. Kya la jawab review hai. Ekdam parfect comment ke hisab se review. Jese update ho. Ek alag hi tarah ka signature andaz.
Chudele hamesha bhramit karti hai. Vo kisi se bhi kam karva sakti hai. Aap aage bhi ese sexual seen ka pura maza le paoge. Lot of thanks yaar.

Aap ne sahi kaha

ab ye kahani ki chudele humein bhi to bhramit kar ke kuch kuch karwa rahi hain..... hahaha

 

[Shetan]

Thankyou so much rhyme_boy.

 

[rhyme_boy]

Namar botal ko zole me dalkar shaher se bahar nikal gaya. Kuchh duri par ek khander tha. Purane shamay me use angrejo ne banaya tha. Andar bahot se namar ke lie kam karne vale admi the. Jo namar ke hisharo pe kam kiya karte the. Namar kala ilam karta tha. Uske aate hi kale kapde vale admiyo ne namar ko gher liya. Namar ne kumurta ko kaid kiya vo botal dikhai. Sab ke chahere par mushkan fel gai.
Sab ke hatho me bhala tha. Or kisi 2 ke hatho me bhale ki nok ki jagah gol sariye ka chakar tha. Namar ne botal ko jamin par feka. Jese kumurta badi hui dono chakar vale admiyo ne zatke se uske gale me chakkar dal diya. Baki ke admiyo ke pas bhale the. Jiski mutth par chandi ka pani chadhaya huaa tha.
Kumurta fir se kaid ho gai. Kumurta ko un admiyo ne bhale chuboe. Jaha bhala lagta vaha vaha kumurta ke badan me dhuaa nikalta or vo jagah jalne lagti. Kumurta dard ke mare janwaro ke jese chikhti. Un kale kaode vale admiyo ko kumurta ko pareshan karne me bahot maja aa raha tha.

Namar ; le aao andar ise.

Vo sare admi kumurta ko jakad kar andar lane lage. Aage ja kar dekha. Sadi hui shakal ki ek or chudel namar ke aage hath jode ghutno par betthi thi.

Chudel ; malik thoda sa to khoon de do. Bahot din se bhukhi hu. Janwar ka khoon hi sahi malik.

Namar us chudel ke gidgidane par khush ho raha tha. Us chudel ki aavaj bhi kisi tep rekodar ke kharab ho jane par jesi aavaj aati he vesi thi. Or shakal to ek dam sadi hui baddi. Kisi budhiya ke jesi thi.

Namar ; fikar mat kar migga. Ye dekh ye nai le aaya hu. Usko bachane iska ashik jarur aaega. Vo inshan he. Tuje uska shikar karna he.

Migga khush ho jati he. Komera achanak akadti he. Par use kale kapde vale admi jakad ke rakhte he.

Kumurta ; sun inshani chudel agar use ek kharoch bhi aai to tera sar tod kar shetan ke kadmo me rakh dungi.

Migga ; are bevkuf ab koi fayada nahi he. Ab yahi malik he hamare. Me to khud jab inshan thi tab malik ki biwi thi. Inhone to muje chudel banaya he.

Migga pedayasi chudel nahi thi. Vo pahele inshan thi. Kali shaktiyo ki puja kar ke vo dayan bani or fir dhire dhire ek chudel mada pishaj me tabdil ho gai. Kumurta ko dakke de kar aage lejaya gaya. Or ek lohe ki khurshi par bettha diya. Aas pas bahot sare kale kapde vale log the. Sab ke hatho me chandi ke hathiyar. Kurshi par bittha kar kumurta ke balo ko katne lage.

Kumurta ka chahera pura safed pad gaya tha. Kumurta ko janjiro se jakda gaya. Tabhi namar bola.

Namar ; ye koi inshani chudel nahi he. Ye inshani chudel he. Ise pani me bandho varna garmi inse jyada bardas nahi hoti.

Kumurta ko ek esi jagah bandha gaya jisme pani tha. Komera ko janjiro me jakad kar bandh diya gaya.



Namar ek ruabi chal me kumera ke gol gol ghumne laga.

Namar ; tumhe.... Malum he me tumhara kya karunga???

Kumurta apne bandhe hue hatho ko ek bar zatakti he. Or sar it thati he.

Kumurta ; bol tuje kya chahiye. Rupya pesa dhan dolat sab dungi.

Namar jor jor se hasne laga.

Namar ; tuje kya lagta he. Ye sara kachra pane ke lie mene tuje pakda he. Me tujse vivah karunga. Bache peda karunga. Or jo kuwari aulad hogi uski bali dekar siddhi hasil karunga. Navjat sisu ki bali pa kar shetan khush hoga. Or muje anmol kali sakti dega. Me raj karunga. Ha ha ha.

Kumurta ; teri ye hasrat kabhi puri nahi ho sakti.



Vahi raziya ki ankhe khuli. Pura ghar chamak raha tha. Zadu pochha sab kam pahele se ho rakha tha. Pas me ek dari par bahot sare pakwan the. Raziya hamesha subah nah dho kar Kuchh rukha sukha khati thi. Par nind khulte hi samane bahot tarah tarah ka khana dekh kar bina muh dhoe hi khane par tut padi.

Raziya ; (smaile) ahhh murga..

Raziya ne ek murge ki tangdi utthai or khane lagi. Bahot swadist tha. Tabhi rasoi se lina bahar aai. Or muskurate hue raziya ko dekhne lagi. Raziya ki najar bhi lina par gai to raziya use dekh kar muskurane lagi.

Lina ; (smaile) or khao tumhe rani ki tarah rakhungi.

Raziya khadi hui or lina ke pas ja kar lina ko gale laga leti he. Jese vo uski bahen ho.

Raziya ; (smaile) aaj tumhe kishi navjawan ka khoon pilaungi.

Lina mushkurati he. Raziya fir bache kuche pashuo ko lekar kisi ko rizane or apni hawas mitane ke irade se nadi ki taraf chali gai. Apne balo ko bandhkar vo nadi ki taraf dekhne lagi.


Raziya sirf ek saree me hi thi. Vo pani me utri or nahane lagi. Aaj use dekhne koi bhi nahi aaya. Raziya naha dho kar apna ghada bharti he or ghar ki taraf apni mastani kamar matkate chal padi. Vo jese gav me pahochi use kuchh bheed dikhai di. Raziya us bheed ki taraf jane lagi. Thoda karib pahochi to kamli gav ki bhudhi aurat tipu ki maa ke rone ki aavaj aai. Raziya bheed ko hata kar vaha pahochi. Tipu ki maa bahot fut fut kar ro rahi thi.
Uski stithi bahot daya janak thi.

Kammo ; (rote hue) hy mera ek hi beta tha. Sali chudel ne mar diya. Are uski khud ki aulad mare to pata chale. Koi maa hoti to mera dard samazti.

Kammo ka rona dekh kar raziya ka dill betth gaya. Pas me hi tipu ki lash padi thi. Puri sukhi or kali pad gai thi. Sharir me bilkul bhi khoon nahi bacha tha. Raziya kabhi tipu ki lash ko dekhti kabhi uski maa ko rota huaa dekhti. Raziya ne apni ankhe band kar li to use rat vala kissa yaad aane kaga. Tipu ko lina ghasit kar andar rasoi me leja rahi thi or vo raziya ko bachane ke lie chilla raha tha.

Chachi bachao chachi...

Lekin raziya to uski halat pe has rahi thi. Raziya vaha se hat gai. Vo bheed se bahar aai. Use sar me joro ka dard hone laga. Use pata to chal gaya ye sab lina ka kiya he or vo uske vash me he. Lina ne dhima ko ese kai ilaj karte dekha tha. Vo ek khet me gai. Or haldi ki gatth ukhadne lagi. Achanak raziya ke sar me joro ka dard suru ho gaya. Vo dard raziya sahe bhi nahi pa rahi thi. Raziya jan chuki thi ye sab lina hi raziya ko rokne ke lie kar rahi he.
Par jese tese raziya ne haldi ki 2 ghatth ukhadi or hath me lekar chal padi. Raziya ko dard ki vajah se chala bhi nahi ja raha tha. Vo jese tese ghar tak pahochi. Uske ghar ke bahar lehsuno ki mala tangi hui thi. Raziya ne use khich kar tod di. Or darwaje par jor se hath mara. Lina samne khadi thi.

Lina ; (gusse me) mat karo mene tumhe koi nukshan nahi pahochaya he.

Raziya ne lehsuno ki mala lina ke aage kar di. Lina jese dar gai ho vo pichhe ho gai. Raziya lina se bilkul nahi dari. Lina ke bal lina ke chagere par aa gae. Balo ke bich uski ankh ekdam samne dikh rahi thi.

Raziya lina ke samne aage badhne lagi. Lina bhag kar rasoi me ghus gai. Or darwaja band kar diya. Raziya ne Darwje par jor lagaya to thoda sa khul gaya. Lina ne raziya ko darane ke lie apna bhayanak chahera banaya.


Ek bar to raziya ruk gai par fir usne vapas uske samne lehsuno ki mala aage kar di. Lina ek dam se pichhe ho gai. Raziya rasoi ke andar ghusi. Andar jorawar ki lash ulti latki hui thi or uska khoon niche ek bade patile me tap tap gir raha tha. Lina ne vapas roop badal ke masum ladki ban gai. Or rone jesi surat bana kar raziya ki taraf rote hue aai. Vo esi acting karti ke jan ne ke bavjud daya aa jae.

Lina ; (rote hue) mene tumhare lie kya nahi kiya. Akhir tum mere sath esa kyo kar rahi ho.

Lina jese hi nazdik aai raziya ne fir lahesun ki mala uski taraf kar di. Lina pichhe ko gir gai.

Raziya ; (gusse me) bahot khel liya tune mera istemak kar ke ab tere jal me nahi fasungi.

Lina ; (rote hue) esa mat karo me tumhare hath jodti hu. Me to tumhare pati ki hi gulam hu na.

Raziya ; ye natak ab band kar me janti hu is mashumiyat ke pichhe kitna bhayanak chahera chhupa huaa he.

Lina ek dam se rona chhod kar hasne lagi.

Lina ; (bhayanak hasi) is mala se tu muje mar degi. Yaad rakh me teri nahi tere pati ki gulam hu.

Lina aage aane lagi. Vo chahti thi dar se raziya lahesun ki mala fek de. Vo lahesun se na darne ki acting kar ne lagi. Par jab raziya ne ek zatke se lahesun ki mala aage ki to lina ek dam se chila kar pichhe hat gai.

Raziya ; ab aai na kabu me.

Lina ne raziya par fir jor lagaya raziya ko ek dam se sar me tez dard huaa. Raziya ne silbate ka patthar utthaya or lina ki taraf mala kar ke nikalne lagi. Raziya rasoi se bahar aai or darwaje par mala fasa di. Ab lina andar se nikak nahi sakti thi. Chhat se nikalti to dhup se mar jati or darwaje par lahesun ki jan leva gandh.
Raziya ne apne pati ki sari pusteni kitab nikali. Usme se ek kitab jo us din raziya ne dhima ko padhte dekha tha. vahi kitab nikali or chitra dekhne lagi. Raziya ko haldi ki gatth or lahesun ko milana samaz aaya. Sar dard ko sahete hue ghade se pani lekar silbate se kut ke raziya ne haldi or lahesun ka pani banaya. Ek hi zatke me vo pi gai. Raziya ne jese pani piya use kali kali vomit hui. Jese muh se dizal nikala ho. Vomit me kale kale bichhu bhi nikale. Vo bichhu chal kar razoi ke andar darwaje ke niche jane lage. Raziya ne baki pani bhi piya or fir vomit hui. Andar se bahot sare bichhu uske pet me se nikle. Raziya ka sar dard khatam ho gaya. Or vo jamin par betth gai.
Raziya ki ankhe lal ho gai or use chakkar aane lage.




Dhima ko hassh tab aaya jab din ka ujala ho gaya. Pura muh khoon sukh jane se lal or Kala. Muh pe makhiya bhi bilak rahi thi. Use sar me bahot dard bhi ho raha tha. Dhima ne ghum ke dekha uska bora jisme chandi thi vo vahi pada huaa he. Dhima ne us taraf rukh kiya jaha rat me vo haddpamp se pani pi raha tha. Or uski biwi use chhed rahi thi. Hadpamp ke niche sar rakh kar usne apna sar dhoya. Aas pas kuchh dukane thi. Sab use hi dekh rahe the. Dhima ek dukan ke pas gaya or dukandar se puchha.

Dhima ; yaha lohar ki dukan kaha he??

Dukandar ne bataya.

Dukandar ; vo dukan he par uske pas koi jata nahi he. Aage bajar me badhiya dukan he.

Dhima ; sukriya.

Dhima jese hi muda dukandar bola.

Dukandar ; are aap ko chot lagi he aap pahele aspatal chale jaiye vo raha abhi khula bhi he.

Dhima ; ji nahi muje bahot kam he.

Dhima batai us lohar ki dukan ki taraf chalne laga. Dukandar ne use fir toka.

Dukandar ; vo kam ki chije nahi banata vo galat logo ka saman banata he.

Dhima kuchh sune bina us lohar ki dukan ki taraf badhne laga. Vo dukan ke bahar khada ho kar dukan ko dekhne laga. Pakki par purani dukan. Bahar se to chhoti dikh rahi thi.
Dukan khuli thi par koi dikhai nahi de raha tha. Dhima andar gaya. Andar tarah tarah ke chaku, khanajar bane latke hue the. Vo dukan jyadatar poket mar chor uchake saman kharida karte he.
Dhima ne dekha ek 6.5 fut ka ek admi mota hatta katta muh me sigaret takriban dhima ki hi umar ka tha. Dhima ne use aavaj di.

Dhima ; bhai shab poo bhai shab.

Lohar muda or dhima ki or dekhte hue bola.

Lohar ; kon aa gaya sala jo muje itni ijat se bula raha he.

Lohar dhima ke pas aaya.

Lohar ; kaho kya chahiye chaku chhuri, khanjar , kulhadi.

Dhima ; sab ek ek magar lohe par chandi ki parat chaddhani he. Ye lo chabdi.

Lohar hasne laga.

Lohar ; tu pagal to nahi ho gaya he.

Dhima ; jitna chandi me diya hu. Uska aadha sona dunga. Kam kab tak ho jaega.

Lohar ; tu meri firki to nahi le raha dekh pahele me Mumbai ka dada tha. Shabpati ki to yahi tapka dunga.

Dhima ; nahi nahi me zutth nahi bol raha. Sach kah raha hu. Me tumhe sona pakka dunga.

Lohar ; thik he sham ko aa jana.

Dhima dukan se bahar nikal ne laga. Lohar ne use fir toka.

Lohar ; ek bat batao kya karoge in hathiyaro pe chandi laga kar.

Dhima pichhe muda or jos ruab me bola.

Dhima ; rat ko chimkadad marenge.

Lohar soch me pad gaya. Dhima bahar nikala or vapas jane ka sadhan talash ne laga. Use pata tha use kya karna he. Dhima ne vapas jane ke lie dekha. Ek bus rojana time tha. Dhima usme betth gaya. Dhima ke pas ab bhi pese nahi the. Us se tikat lene ko kaha to dhima kuchh bol nahi paya. Dhima ko dhakka de kar bus se utar diya. Bus chal padi. Dhima bus ko jate dekha. Achanak dhima bhaga or bus ke pichhe sidiyo pe latak kar bus ke upar chadh gaya.





Rat bhar pishajo ke balatkar se bella behosh ho gai. Uski maa to mar chuki thi. Pura khoon sukh gaya tha. Mukhiya ki mout ki vajah se padosi ghar khana pani puchh ne gae. Logo ne jese hi darwaja band dekha log soch me pad gae. Logo ne darwaja dhakel ne ki kosia ki. Par vo andar se babd tha. Bahar se aavaj dene par bhi darwaja nahi khula to logo ne dhakka diya or darwajq khul gaya. Andar logo ne dekha savita ki lash puri nangi padi hui thi or pura sharir kala pad gaya tha. Abdar aae to dekha bella bhi puri nangi chadar me lipti behosh thi. Logo ne dono ko utthane ki kosis ki. Bella ko to hosh aaya par savitri kabhi nahi utthi.




Namar kumutra ko bhogne ki taiyari kar raha tha. Kumutra ke bal namar ke pas the. Na chahte hue bhi use uski bat man ni padegi. Namar apni hawas mitane ke lie kumutra ko taiyar rahene ka,adesh de chuka tha. Vo aaya or dekha kumutra pau me janjiro se bandhi hui he or use rizane ke lie dayniya chahera banae ek janwar bandha ho vesi acting kar rahi thi.

Kumutra ; sss me bahot sundar hu. Tum muje zel nahi paoge.

Namar hasta he. Or bola.

Namar ; vo to tuje me bata dunga kon kis ko,zelta he. Chal khadi ho ja.

Kumutra khadi nahi ho rahi thi. Namar jor se chila kar bola.

Namar ; mene kaha khadi ho ja.

Kumutra jor se chilati he or uski avaj bhi badal gai.

Kumutra ; josh me to ye le.

Kumutra puri nangi asman me hath kar ke khadi ho gai. Uske chila kar khade hote hi ashman me chimkadaro ka bada zud chi chi kar ke gol gol ghumne lage.

Kumutra ke sharir ki banavat dekh kar bamar ke rongte khade ho gae. Bahot hi jabardast or sundar banavat thi kumutra ki. Namar kumutra ko gardan se pakadta he or zatke,se zukata he. Uske pichhe aa kar apni dhoti ki gatth khol deta he. Or dono tango ke bich kumutra ki sundar chut pe topa ragad kar bola.

Namar ; ssss sali tu to bahot shakti shali chudel he. Sach batana tu kisi kabile ki rani he na. Ssss tuje pa kar tera zund bhi mere hisharo pe nachega sss.

Namar ne jor se zatka diya. Or pura land abdar utar diya. Namar ne andar dalte hi ek ajib se sukun se apni ankhe band kar li or ashaman ki taraf apna sar uttha liya. Use ek minit bhi nahi huaa usne chila kar apna land bahar nikala. uska land khoon khoon jese kisi janwar ne chaba liya ho vesa khoon khoon ho gaya.

Namar ; aaaaaa...... Aaaaaaa sali haramjadi tune bataya kyo nahi tu pet se he.

Kumutra uski halat dekh kar jor jor se hasne lagi.

Kumutra ; achha huaa na. Mere bacho ko bahar aane se pahele khoon mil gaya. Ha ha ha.

Namar ka,aadha land kumutra ke pet me pal rahe bacho ne chaba liya tha. Namar uske,aadhe land ko pakad ke andar bhagne laga. Kumutra ko namar ki,dhasha dekh kar bahot maja aa raha tha.



Dhima bus ke upar chadh ke gav ke akhri gav tak pahoch gaya. Aage ka rasta use pedal hi tay karna tha. Dhima bus se utar kar jungle ki taraf chalne laga. Jungle ko to vo achhe se janta hi tha. Use kese bhi kumutra ke zund tak pahochna tha. Vo usi ped ki taraf chal diya jaha usne kumutra se shadi ki thi. Us wakt bahot se chudeli bache the. Jo chhote the. Jiska kumutra khayal rakhti thi. Dhima usi ped ki talash me andar tak ghus gaya. Ghane pedo ki chhav me dhup ka namo nishan nahi tha.
Panchhiyo or kido ki kal kal ki aavaje. Umas or bahot garmi bhi thi. Dhima andar tak ghus gaya. Andar use kuchh aurato ke hasne ki madhur aavaj aane lagi. Dhima janta tha esi jagah par jo aurate milegi vo kon hogi. Bas use dar ye tha ki kahi kumutra ki jagaj koi or chudelo ka kabila se na samna ho. Dhima ko teen bahot sundar aurate dikhi. Jo puri nangi thi. gaheno or singar kiye vo aurate dhima ko hi dekh rahi thi.


Vo teeno ese dhima ke pas khilkhiati bhag kar aai jese sari uski biwiya ho. Teeno ne use baho me lekar bola.

Chudel 1 ; (smaile) musafit rasta bhul gae na. Fikar mat karo tum sahi jagah aae ho.

Dhima ; are meri bat ....

Chudel 2 ; (smaile) chhodo aao pyas lagi hogi pahele tumhe ham sharbat pilate he.

Chudel ne ek sone ka jug pata nahi kaha se nikala. Dhima ko yaad aaya vahi sharbat jis se madhu mey ka rog ho gaya tha. Dhima ne has kar us jug ko liya or pina suru kar diya. Vo teeno chudele hi he ye dhima ko viswas ho gaya. chudele bhi dhima ko sharbat pita dekh kar khush ho rahi thi.

Chudel 3 ; shabash pio or pio.

Dhima ; muje tumhari rani se milna he.

Chudel chok gai or ek dusre ka muh dekhne lagi.

Chudel 2 ; tum jante ho adam ham kon he.

Dhima ; ha tum teeno chudel ho.

Chudel1 ; fir bhi yaha hamare pas aae.

Chudel 3 ; jarur koi gadbad he ye hame fasane ke lie chara he.

Dhima ; koi tumhe fasane vala nahi he. Me tum sab ki madad lene aaya hu. Pahele ye batao tumhari rani kon he.

Chudel 1; pahele apni pahechan batao.

Dhima ; me kumutra ka pati hu.

Chudel 3 ; matlab tum kahena chahte ho tum kumutra ke jode ho???

Dhima ; ha or use kisi baba ne pakad liya he. Muje tumhari madad chahiye.

Chudel ek dusre ka muh dekhne lagi. Fir chudel 2 chudel 3 se boli.

Chudel 2 ; ise sukhuda ke pas le chalo.

Chudel 3 dhima ko ek pad ke niche surang me le gai. Niche ek rani jesi chudel jiska name sukhuda tha. Uske pas le gai. Udhar or bhi chudel thi. Or unka bhai oomar bhi tha. Unke samne ek hiran mara huaa pada tha. Or vo sare uska khoon pi rahe the. Sukhuda dhima ek inshan ko dekh kar apne hottho pe lage khoon ko chat te hue dhima ko dekhti he.

Sukhuda ; ek inshan adam hamare kabile me jinda. Kya raz he.

Chudel 3 ; iska kahena he ye kumutra ka pati he.

Sukhuda ; Rani ka joda??

Dhima ; muje tumhari madad chahiye.

Sukuda ; chup raho inshan. Tum nashib vale ho jo hamare shamne jinda ho.

Dhima ; me kumutra ka pati hu.

Sukuda ; tum se bad me puchha jaega.

Chudel 3 ; pad se puchho vo sab jante he.


Sari chudel dhima ko lekar usi pad ke niche aa gai jaha dhima ki shadi hui thi. Sari chudel ghutno ke bal kai der ankhe band kiye zumane lagi. Kuchh der bad sukhuda boli.

Sukhuda ; ye sach kahe raha he. Ye hamari rani ka joda he. Ise mere pas le aao.





Raziya ko kuchh der bat hosh aaya. Use mahesus huaa raziya ke sar me ab vo dard nahi he. Pura badan pasina pasina ho rakha tha. Raziya utthi or apne pati ki vo kitab dekhne lagi. Raziya soch me pad gai dhima chandi ki bat kar raha tha. Par chitra me to kuchh patthar jesa kuchh he. Use padhte to aata nahi tha. Raziya ne socha ek dav khelna hoga. Use chabdi ka istemal karna hoga. Par garib ghar me chabdi kaha. Sirf uske pas ek joda payal thi. Or vo koi hathiyar nahi ban sakti thi. Raziya soch me pad gai.
Andar se bhi lina band thi. Or ese ro rahi thi jese kisi mashum ko kaid kar liya ho.

Lina ; (rote hue) akhir mene kya bigada. Apni bahen ki tarah mana. Ghar ka sara kam nokaro ki tarah kiya. Khana khilaya. Or muje hi paraya kar diya. Kya muje vo apna nahi manti. Is se to achha he me mar jau. Aaj ke bad kisi se pyar nahi karungi. Kisi se dill nahi lagaungi.

Raziya par lina ke jadui zaher ka asar to khatam ho gaya tha. Par fir bhi lina ki esi pyari masum bate sun kar raziya ki ankho me anshu aa gae. Raziya khadi hui or rasoi ke Darwaje tak pahochi. Tabhi raziya ke ghar ke darwaje ko bahar se kisi ne pita. Vo sattu tha.

Sattu ; are rani kholo. Raziya re khol de meri jaan.

Sattu ne lina ka khel bigad diya. Raziya ko pata chal gaya ye chudel chhal kar rahi he. Raziya ne anshu pochhe or kuchh dhudhne lagi. Vo apni chandi ki payal dhudh rahi thi. Raziya ko payal to nahi mili par diwali puja ka ek chandi ka sikka mila. Bahot purane jamane ka asli chandi ka sikka. Raziya ne sikka hatho me liya or mutthi band kar di. Sattu ka darwaja pitna band ho gaya. Raziya ye to jan gai thi sattu lina ko bachane aaya he. Raziya ne rasoi ke pas gai or darwaje par latki lahesun ki mala hata kar darwaje ko halke se dhakela. Andar andhera tha. Andar lina ek lal kapda odhe masum ban kar muh fere khadi thi.

Lina ne ahista se raziya ki taraf bahot hi dayniya muh baba kar rote hue dekha.

Lina ; (rote hue) kyo kar rahi ho mere sath ese. Me tumhari sagi nahi hu is lie. Kya me tumhari chhoti bahen jesi nahi hu.

Lina ne bol kar sar rote hue zuka liya.

Raziya ko fir lina par daya aa gai. Uski ankho me fir se anshu aa gae.

Raziya ; (rote hue) nahi meri bahen muhe maf kar de. Tu to meri chhoti bahen he.

Lina ne apne anshu pochhe or raziya ki taraf bade pyar se ek pyari mushkan se dekha. Lina ne fir ankho se mohit karna jadu karna suru kiya.

Lina ; (pyari mushkan) mene to tumhe sahi se jina sikhaya. Tum kitni khubshurat ho. Kya is sundar jawani ko tum jayar kar dogi sss aao mere pas aao.

Lina ne apne badan se kapda fek diya or jamin par late gai.

Lina ; sss aao mere pas aao. Tumhe nine ka asli tarika me tumhe sikhaungi. Sss aao.

Lina ese bolne lagi ki uski aavaj se raziya ke badan me ek zur zuri si hone lagi. Ek ajib sa nasha hone laga. Dono tango ke bich gilapan mahesus hone laga. Lina palat gai. Or ek billi ki tarah palat kar sar utthate hue boli.

Lina ; aao ssss tumhe pyar ki jarurat he. Sss aao me bhujaungi tumhari pyas. Aaao.

Raziya dhimi kadmo se apne aap hi lina ki or jane lagi. Lina ne raziya ka hath pakda or ahista se apni baho me le liya lina ne raziya ko letaya or uske hottho par apne hotth rakh diye. Ek ajib si tadap raziya ke dill me hone lagi. Lina ne raziya ke muh me kuchh ajib sa dhuaa chhodna suru kar diya.

Lina ke muh se dhuaa nikal raha tha or vo raziya ke muh me jane laga. Achanak raziya ne ek zapta mata or chandi ka sikka lina ke muh me andar tak thus diya. Lina tadap ne lagi. Raziya ne ekdam chust lina ko baho me jakad liya. Vo sikka lina nigal chuki thi. Lina tadap se khadi hui.
Raziya bhi uspar latak gai. Lina ne raziya ko ek khich kar mara. Raziya jamin pe giri. Tadap se lina rasoi par kar ke ghar ka main darwaja tak tod ke nikal gai. Vo galti se bhari dhup me aa gai. Sattu darwaje se lina ko bachane ke lie bich me aaya. Lina use bhi lapet te hue chali gai. Sattu to side me gira par lina dhup me aag ki tarah jalne lagi. Aas pas jo log raziya ke ghar ki taraf aa rahe the. Unhone bhi kina ko jalte hue dekha. Lina chilate hue jalne lagi or dhire dhire rakh ho gai. Raziya ke chahere par khoon nikal aaya tha. Raziya ek yodha ki tarah apne chahere par laga khoon hatho se pochhti he. Or khadi hui.

Raziya ; (josh me) narak me jao.


Sham ho chuki thi or dhima ko khule ashman ke niche pesh kiya gaya. Shukuda rani ki tarah bethi hui thi.

Sukhuda ; hame maf karna thodi sakhtai baratni padti he. Tum hamari rani ke jode ho.

Dhima gusse me bola.

Dhima ; muje samaz nahi aa raha tum log itni der kyo kar rahi ho. Jab ki vo tumhari rani he.

Sukhuda ; kyo ki ham chudele he. Pishaj he. Chimkadad ki prajati se hamara janam huaa he. Ham suraj ki roshni badash nahi kar sakte. Hame andhera hone ka intjar karna hoga.

Bohot Umdaah Update.... Bilkul kisi film ki tarah scene chalte hue imagine kar pa raha tha.......

Namar, Kumutra ko qaid kar ke apne adde par le aya jaha uski biwi (insani chudel) bhi qaid hai.....
usne Kumurta ko torture karna shuru kar diya..... uske baal kaat kar usey zanjeero mein qaid kar diya (is haramkhor ki gaand maar leni chahye.. saale ki himmat kese hui hamari pyari chudel ko torture karne ki .. .. is ke peechhe saand chhorna padega jo iski gaand maare achche se )

Fir baad mein Namar apna shetaani plan batata hai..... ke wo chudel ko chod kar usse bachche peda kar uski bali chadayega (chutiya aadmi)

Dusri taraf Raziya jaagti hai to usey mast khana milta hai jo Lina ne diya hota hai aur fir wo apne naye shikar ki aur jati hai.... lekin gaon mein ja kar usey hosh ata hai aur wo Dhima ke bataye hue tareeke ko yaad kar ke khud pe hue jaadu ka ilaaj karne ke liye haldi dhund lati hai (hmmmm Raziya ko wapas se akal aa gyi thodi ab to.. )
Ghar pohochne par Raziya ... Lina ko lehsun ke zariye kaabu mein rakhti hai...

Khair raziya Lehsun aur haldi se apna jadu ka ilaaj kar apne body se zeher bichhu sab nikaalti hai....

Idhar sheher mein Dhima ko hosh ata hai.. aur wo ek lohar se mil kar chandi chadha hathyaar banane ke liye kehta hai

Udhar Gaon mein wapas chale to bechari Bella ka balatkaar ke kaaran haal bura hai ...( saale Komera harami.. ) Komera ne apne dosto bhayyo se bhi bella ko chudwa diya shayad.....aur uski maa ko bhi nanga kar ke khatam kar diya.....

ab ata hai sexy but horror scene.... Namar Kumutra ko chodne ke liye tayyar hai.. Kumutra nangi hoti hai aur Namar ko apna gazab jism dikhati hai....(haiiiii yhaan usey kaun nahi chodna chahega aise badan ko)
Aur jese hi Namar apna loda Kumurta ki khubsurat chut mein daalta hai.... waapas uska aadha kata hua lund bahar ata hai khoon mein latpat.....

kumurta ke bachche ne uska lulla kaat liya hota hai... (hahaha... sahi hai aise gandu ka ye hi haal hona chhaye tha... ye ab aadhe lund se kya karega)

Wahi DHima Kumurta ka kabila dhundne nikalta jaha usey 3 nangi chudele milti hain jo usey apni raani sukhuda ke paas le jati hai jahan uska investigation kar ke usey Kumurta ka pati sweekar liya jata hai

Waha Gaon mein Lina Raziya ko rijhane ki koshish karti hai aur Sattu bhi usey bachaane ke liye Raziya ko rijhaane aata hai....

Aur yahaan Lina aur Raziya ki chuma chaati hoti hai lekin raziya chalaki se usey chandi ka sikka khila deti hai... Aur Lina maut ke ghaat utar jati hai...... (Lina ko hi chod diya Raziya ne yahaan .. haha.. ab dekhte Sattu ka kya haal hota hai)

Bohot badiya Shetan ji.... (ek do jagah naam ka mix up hua hai likhte samay aur kuch chhoti moti mistake jise ignore kiya ja skta hai.. lekin jo agar na ho to aur achcha )

Maza aa gaya .. aagey ka episode dekhte hain......

 

[Shetan]

Bohot Umdaah Update.... Bilkul kisi film ki tarah scene chalte hue imagine kar pa raha tha.......

Namar, Kumutra ko qaid kar ke apne adde par le aya jaha uski biwi (insani chudel) bhi qaid hai.....
usne Kumurta ko torture karna shuru kar diya..... uske baal kaat kar usey zanjeero mein qaid kar diya (is haramkhor ki gaand maar leni chahye.. saale ki himmat kese hui hamari pyari chudel ko torture karne ki .. .. is ke peechhe saand chhorna padega jo iski gaand maare achche se )

Fir baad mein Namar apna shetaani plan batata hai..... ke wo chudel ko chod kar usse bachche peda kar uski bali chadayega (chutiya aadmi)

Dusri taraf Raziya jaagti hai to usey mast khana milta hai jo Lina ne diya hota hai aur fir wo apne naye shikar ki aur jati hai.... lekin gaon mein ja kar usey hosh ata hai aur wo Dhima ke bataye hue tareeke ko yaad kar ke khud pe hue jaadu ka ilaaj karne ke liye haldi dhund lati hai (hmmmm Raziya ko wapas se akal aa gyi thodi ab to.. )
Ghar pohochne par Raziya ... Lina ko lehsun ke zariye kaabu mein rakhti hai...

Khair raziya Lehsun aur haldi se apna jadu ka ilaaj kar apne body se zeher bichhu sab nikaalti hai....

Idhar sheher mein Dhima ko hosh ata hai.. aur wo ek lohar se mil kar chandi chadha hathyaar banane ke liye kehta hai

Udhar Gaon mein wapas chale to bechari Bella ka balatkaar ke kaaran haal bura hai ...( saale Komera harami.. ) Komera ne apne dosto bhayyo se bhi bella ko chudwa diya shayad.....aur uski maa ko bhi nanga kar ke khatam kar diya.....

ab ata hai sexy but horror scene.... Namar Kumutra ko chodne ke liye tayyar hai.. Kumutra nangi hoti hai aur Namar ko apna gazab jism dikhati hai....(haiiiii yhaan usey kaun nahi chodna chahega aise badan ko)
Aur jese hi Namar apna loda Kumurta ki khubsurat chut mein daalta hai.... waapas uska aadha kata hua lund bahar ata hai khoon mein latpat.....

kumurta ke bachche ne uska lulla kaat liya hota hai... (hahaha... sahi hai aise gandu ka ye hi haal hona chhaye tha... ye ab aadhe lund se kya karega)

Wahi DHima Kumurta ka kabila dhundne nikalta jaha usey 3 nangi chudele milti hain jo usey apni raani sukhuda ke paas le jati hai jahan uska investigation kar ke usey Kumurta ka pati sweekar liya jata hai

Waha Gaon mein Lina Raziya ko rijhane ki koshish karti hai aur Sattu bhi usey bachaane ke liye Raziya ko rijhaane aata hai....

Aur yahaan Lina aur Raziya ki chuma chaati hoti hai lekin raziya chalaki se usey chandi ka sikka khila deti hai... Aur Lina maut ke ghaat utar jati hai...... (Lina ko hi chod diya Raziya ne yahaan .. haha.. ab dekhte Sattu ka kya haal hota hai)

Bohot badiya Shetan ji.... (ek do jagah naam ka mix up hua hai likhte samay aur kuch chhoti moti mistake jise ignore kiya ja skta hai.. lekin jo agar na ho to aur achcha )

Maza aa gaya .. aagey ka episode dekhte hain......

Bahot hi shandar review. rhyme_boy. muje esa lagta hai ki is kahani ko dobara aap ke karan hi jindgi mili hai. Varna to sayad log is kahani ko bhula chuke the. Thankyou so much. Superb signature style.

 

[mistyvixen]

Nikobal tapu par ek jaungli ilake me ek pichhda huaa gav tha. Shaher ke log bhi is gav ke bare me jante the. Ye gav ka name Ahmad pur tha. Ye gav bhut pret ki kai dant katha or ajib ajib si kahaniyo ke lie mashur tha. Us gau me ek pariwar tha. Jisme sirf 2 hi log the. Dhami or rajiya. Dhami vese to ek tantrik tha. Par uska man na tha. Ye vidhya use kudrat ki den he. Jo kisi ki madad karne ke lie upar wale ne di he. Is lie vo logo ki madad karta. Or badle me koi pese nahi leta. Vo apne pita ki chhoti si jamin par kheti badi kar ke apna gujar basar karta.
Uski biwi rajiya use jab vo kam umar ka tha. Tab ek samundar me jahaj dub jane ke hadae me jinda mili thi. Us wakt vo bhi usi ke age sal ki thi. Dhima or rajiya ko dhima ke maa bap. Sittu or janya ne pala tha. Par jab dhima 18 sal ka huaa. Us wakt tak uske maa bap bimari se mar gae. Wakt chalte dhima or rajiya Jawani me kadam rakha. Apas me sath bade hone ke karan unme pyar ho gaya. Or dono ne shadi kar li. Rajiya vese peshe se dai thi. Kisi bhi aurat ke pet me bacha he to vo bacha rajiya hi nikalti. Gav me hi nai aas pas ke 2 gav me bhi vo hi thi. Jo delevari karvati thi. Koi lalach kiye bina. Jo mile use dene vale ke hatho se khushi se le leti. Jyada tar log khushi se anaj hi diya karte the. Juar makka ya dhan.


Lekin ek rat jawan ladka. Apne kheto me pani de raha tha. Takriban sabhi ke khet. Gav se dur the. Bich me jungle bhi tha. Or ek nadi bhi thi. Vo ladke ka name jiva tha. Vo rat ko nadi ke pani ko apne kheto me nali bana kar pani de raha tha. Chandni rat thi. Or vo akela. Use jungli bhediyo ki rone ki aavaj aane lagi. Uska kam to bahot jaruri tha par vo darne laga. Vo jaldi jaldi kam khatam kar ke gav ki taraf mud gaya. Usne bhi kai bhuto ki kahani suni thi. Par kabhi use kuchh dikha nahi. Vo gav ki taraf chaldiya. Chalte chalte kache raste par. Apni torch light ki roshni se bahot sahara mil raha tha. Vo chalte chalte gav se nazdik aa rahi nadi tak pahocha.
Us nadi me jyada pani nahi tha. Sirf bich ke hisso me sade 4 fit pani tha. Gav vale bhi use pedal hi par karte the. Jiva bhi nadi ke pas pahocha to use kisi ne aavaj di.

Are beta is budhiya ko bhi nadi par karwa do.

Jiva ne pichhe mud ke dekha to ek bahot hi jyada umar vali ek budhiya thi. Jiva ne uske face pe torch mari.

Budhiya ki sakal dekh kar vo chilaya. Or pichhe ko gir gaya.

Jiva ; aaaa aaaaa aaa.

Budhiya ; are beta dar kyo rahe ho. Me koi dayan hu kya. Jyada budhi hu. Nadi par nahi kar sakti.

Jiva ne apne aap ko sambhala or bola.

Jiva ; (dar) par par aap ho kon. Or jana kaha he???

Budhiya ; beta mukhiya ke ghar jana he. Uski beti ka hath mangne ja rahi hu apne bete ke lie.

Jiva ; par itni rat ko???

Budhiya ; jab nikli thi to rat thi beta. Par budhi hu. Chalte chalte rat ho gai. Nadi par nahi kar sakti to yaha betth gai. Tu par kara de.

Jiva ; me kese par karaunga.

Budhiya ; jawan chhokra he. Pitth par bettha le.

Jiva soch me pad gaya. Budhiya ka wajan jyada to hoga nahi. Or pani ka bahav bhi kam tha. Uska dar bhi kam ho gaya. Usne socha madad karne me koi dikat nahi he.

Jiva ; thik he budhiya aa betth.

Vo budhiya jiva ke kandhe pakad kar betth gai. Or jiva ko koi vajan nahi lag raha tha. Vo khada huaa or nadi par karne ki taraf chal diya. Nadi par karte karte vo budhiya se bate karne laga.

Jiva ; (smaile) ha budhiya to tu bela ka rista mangne aai hamare gav.

Budhiya ; achha tu bhi bela ko janta he.

Jiva ; (smaile) to kon nahi janta. Vo mere gav ki sabse sundar ladki he.

Budhiya ; hmmm to tu bhi bela ka deewana he.

Jiva janta tha. Mukhiya ki beti sabse chalu he. Or sab se thuk chuki he. Vo sundar he. Lekin sab uae pelna chahte the. Par shadi koi nahi karna chahta tha. Bade budhe, jawan sab ki rani thi vo. Kisi ko niras nahi karti thi. Or uske chakkar me koi fas gaya. Jiva nahi chahta tha ki koi ka rista aae or vo uske bite kal ko jan kar rista tod de. Is lie vo muh band karte hue chalte raheta he.

Budhiya ; are tu bolega nahi to kya muje pata nahi. Ye to beta pagal huaa ja raha he. Me janti hu bela ko. Tum sabki to rani he.

Jiva ko chalte chalte hasi bhi aati he.

Budhiya ; tune bhi to khub isi nadi me pakda he. Or tere kheto me subah aati to tune bhi khub moj kari he uske sang.

Jiva heran ho gaya. Jo bate use or sirf bela ko pata thi. Vo bate ek budhiya jo vo paheli bar dekh raha he. Use keae pata. Usi wakt nadi ke pani ka bahav bhi achanak badhne laga. Or vo sambhal sambhal kar chalne laga. Lekin budhiya bindas bate kar rahi thi. Has has kar. Or use esa lagne laga ki ab budhiya ka wajan ek dam se badhne laga he.

Budhiya ; lekin ab tu uske sath kabhi bhi rang raliya nahi bana paega. Ab vo tuje kabhi nahi dekh paegi.

Tabhi jiva chok gaya. Kyo ki use ehsas huaa ki pitth pe betthi budhiya ke jo pav the uske panje use pav pe lagne lage. Jab usne uske pav pakad ne ki kosia ki to use ehsas huaa ki uske pau ulte he. Vo ghabra gaya. Or vo budhiya jor jor se hasne lagi. Budhiya ne uski gardan paki or pani me dubana suru kar diya. Jiva tadapne laga. Par vo thak bhi gaya or uska jor nahi chal raha tha. Dhire dhire vo bahot pani pi gaya. Or vo tadapne laga. Dhire dhire usne himmat chhod di.


Subah subah dhima soya huaa tha use aurto ki rone ki aavaj aane lagi. Jiva ne ankhe khol ke sar utthaya to raziya bhag kar aai.

Raziya ; are uttho Gav me musibat aa gai.

Dhima ; are par huaa kya he.

Raziya ; nadi me jiva ki lash mili he.

Sorry bahut late start kar rhe hoon...matlab Jiva bhoot ban gaya??

Btw nice start

 

[mistyvixen]

Rat ke wakt raziya puri nude apne pati dhima ki baho me so rahi thi. Dhima ke majbut kandho pe apna sar tikae leti hui raziya bahot gaheri nind me thi. Achanak rat ko kisi ne uske ghar ka door nock kiya. Raziya ki nind khuli or vo apne pati ko jagati he.

Raziya ; ji suno koi darwaje par he.( nind me)

Dhima ; (nund me) to aavaj do na. Puchho kon he.

Raiziya ; aap bhi na. Achha ruko.

Raziy Apne bad an pe saree lapet te hue bolti he.

Raziya : ji kon???

Bahar se gav ki ek youn aurat ki aavaj aai.

Bijli ; me bijli bol rahi hu bhabhi kajri ko dard suru ho gaya.

Raziya ; aati hu ruko.

Raziya ne apni saree thik se paheni or apne pati ko bata kar vo bijli ke sath nikal jati he. Vo jis ghar me gai. Us ghar ki bahu kajri ki paheli delivari thi. Raziya ne jate ke sath order dena suru kar diya.

Raziya ; jaldi chaku garam kar tu bella or bijli tu pani garam kar. Sima tu saf kapda lekar aa.

Sab raziya ke order ko follow karte he. Kajri ko bahot dard hota he. Par raziya ki suz buz se kajri ek sundar or swasth bache ko janam deti he. Sab se pahele use raziya hi god me leti he. Bache ki rone ki aavaj se ghar me khushiyo ki laher fel gai.

Raziya ; (smaile) le kajri mubarak ho. Tuje beta peda huaa he.

Raziya bache ko kajri ke pas dikhane lai. Kajri ne apne kano ke zumke jo sone ke the. Use utare or vo zumke bache ke sar pe war kar raziya ko de diye. Raiziya bahar aai. Bahar kajri ka sasur humam singh khada tha. Vo gav ka bada jamin dar tha. Or vo bhi raziya ka deewana tha.

Raziya ; (smaile) mubarak ho hukam chacha ladka huaa he. Ab to pota bhi aa gaya. Ban gae tum dada.

Hukam sing ; (smaile) to bata bhi de raziya kya legi. Bajra du ya juar.

Raziya ; hat chacha tu raha kanjus. Mene kisi se manga na he. Par tu gav ka bada jamindar. Subah ek bori dhan bhijwa dena.

Hukam sing ki najar raziya ki khuli hui chhati pe gai. Jiski sundar gali tak ka joban saf zalak raha tha. Or raziya bhi vo dekh ke hasne lagi.

Hukam sing ; are dhan kya ek pipa ghee bhi bhijwa dunga.

Raziya haste hue akeli vaha se nikal gai. Rat ke andhere me vo apne ghar ki taraf jane lagi. Hatho me lalten lie vo akeli jab aadhe raste par pahochi usne dekha sattu akela bejan sarir ki tarah sidha chalta huaa nadi ki taraf ja raha he. Raziya vahi chhup gai. Usne lalaten ko buzaya or sattu ka pichha karne lagi. Raziya sarkando ki aad me chhup jati he. Chandni rat me sattu pani ke karib pahoch gaya. Or achanak gayab ho gaya. Raziya ek dam ghabra gai.
Usne saf saf dekha sattu na to pani me gaya na uski ankho se kahi dur. Fir achanak vo gayab kese ho gaya. Raziya ghabra gai. Or kuchh wakt intjar karne ke bad vo apne ghar aa gai. Use rat bhar nind nahi aai. Subah subah jab dhima uttha to usne raziya ko dekha vo bistar chhod nahi rahi he. Bas apni ankhe band kar ke leti hui he.

Dhima ; re teri tabiyat to thik he. Kya huaa??

Raziya ne ankhe kholi or dhima ko dekha. Vo raziya ke man ko padh leta he. Vo jan gaya ki jarur usne koi hawa dekhi he. Vo ghutne ke bal betth kar raziya ke sar pe hath lagata he. Lekin vo normal thi. Use bukhar nahi tha. Dhima smaile karta he or bola.

Dhima ; tu to badi himmat wali he. Ab bata kya dekha tune.

Raziya ; nahi koi bat nahi he.

Dhima ; ari bata na kya dekha tune. Kuchh to dekha he tune.

Raziya sochne lagi or rat jo huaa he vo kissa dhima ko suna deti he. Dhima bahot dhyan se sun ne ke bad khada huaa or ek sandukh nikal ke laya. Usme moti kitab nikalta he.

Raziya ; ab is se kya pata chalega.

Dhima ne kuchh panne plate or ek chitra raziya ko dikha kar bolta he.

Dhima ; ye dekh iske kabje me he vo sattu.

Raziya ; ye kya he. Ye konsa bhut he ye??

Dhima ; ye he asli chudel.

Raziya ; achha matlab sattu dayan ke kabje me he.

Dhima ; nahi dayan ke kabje me nahi chudel ke kabje me he.

Raziya ; to dayan or chudel dono ek nahi hote???

Dhima ; nahi. Jo dayan hoti he vo aadhi inshan hi hoti he. Vo rup nahi badal sakti. Vo shetan ki puja karti he or wakt badalte aage ja kar ek chudel banti he.

Raziya ; achha to chudel alag hoti he.

Dhima ; chudel bhi do tarike ki hoti he. Ek jo dayan se banti he. Or ek chudel jo pishaj ke vansh ki hoti he. Or vo unke vans me bache ko bhi janam deti he. Pishaj me nar or mada dono hoti he. Apna rup bhi ye badal sakte he. Or inhe mittha khoon jyada pasand hota he.

Raziya ; to dono ka pata kese chalega???

Dhima smaile karta he.

Dhima ; dono ke pav ulte hote he. Hamare panje jese aage hote he. Vese unke pichhe hote he. Par pishaj chudel hame dhokha dene ke lie apne pav aage kar sakte he. Kuchh wakt ke lie. Or koi bhi chudel ho vo khoon hi piti he.

Raziya ; to sattu ka bhi vo khoon hi piegi. Tab to vo mar jaega???

Dhima hasne laga.

Dhima ; ye bhi jaruri nahi. Par pakka vo chudel ke kabje me he ya nahi. Kai bar chudel shikar se soda karti he. Use khilati pilati he. Taki vo tandurast rahe. Badle me thoda khoon piti he. Kai bar vo dhokha karti he. Use itna mittha khilati he ki use madhu meh ho jae. Or vo apni lambi jibh se uske sarir ko chat ti raheti he. Sarir se apne aap khoon kam hota raheta he.

Raziya ; tumne kabhi chudel dekhi he kya???

Dhima sochta he fir smaile karte hue. Raziya ki god me sar rakh deta he.

Raziya ; are bolo na. Kahe muje paheliyo me rakh rahe ho.

Dhima ; chudel kabhi dhup bardas nahi kar sakti lekin fir bhi vo din me aksar mil jaya karti he. Bagicho me, ya aam ke ya fir imli ke pedo pe. Nibu or kathal ke pedo pe bhi ye raheti he. Inki duniya bhi alag hoti he. Ese hi ek bar meri mulakat ho chuki thi.

Raziya ; kab??? Muje bhi batao. Kesi hoti he vo.

Dhima ne raziya ki god me apna sar rakha or smaile karte hue apni aap biti sunai.

Dhima ; ye us wakt ki bat he jab mene nai nai jawani me kadam rakha tha. Jungle me jadi buti or nuske dhudhne ke lie me bhatakta raheta tha. Ek bar me kafi aage nikal gaya. Muje bich jungle me kisi ladki ki gun guna ne ki aavaj aa rahi thi. Me soch me pad gaya. Kyo ki vo aavaj itni surli thi ki mujse raha nahi gaya. Me jan na chahta tha ki ye aavaj he kis ki. Me pagalo ki tarah jungle me bhagne laga. Pedo or tehni ko hatae laga.
Jungle itna ghana tha ki usme dhup to kahi pahoch hi nahi pa rahi thi. Lekin vo aavaj muje apni taraf khich rahi thi. Ant me vo aavaj jiski thi vo muje dikh gai. Jungle me ek kuaa tha. Pas hi ek bad ka bada sa ped tha. Vo us bad ke ped se zula zulte hue gun guna rahi thi. Itni sundar thi vo ki ek pal mene use dekha or dekhte rahe gaya.

lal rang ke kapdo me. Uski ankhe, uska chahera. Uske vadan ki gori kaya. Me soch me pad gaya. Itni sundar ladki bhagwan ne kese banai hogi. Me uske pas pahocha. Uski najar mujpe gai. Or vo muje mushkurate hue dekhti rahi. Me uski sundarta dekh ke magna mukt ho gaya. Lekin vo hase ja rahi thi. Usne kaha

Aao mere pas aao. Mere sath kheloge.

Me kuchh soch hi nahi pa raha tha. Me uski taraf khicha chala gaya. Usne bade pyar se mera hath pakda. Or usi zule par apne pas bettha liya. Vo boli.

Kon ho tum kya name he tumhara.

Mene kaha me dhima. Pas me hi gav he mere. Tum kon ho.

Vo ; me is jungle ki rani hu. Tum rasta bhatak gae hona??

Mene fir aas pas dekha. Tabhi muje hosh aaya. Ki ha me sach me rasta bhatak gaya hu. Mera gav pas nahi bahot dur chhut gaya he. Or muje ab hosh aaya.

Vo ; tumhe bukh lagi he na.

Me soch me pad gaya. Ise kese pata he. Mene apna sar ha me hilaya.

Vo ; (mohak smaile) or pyas bhi lagi hogi.

Mene dobara sar ha me hilaya. Usne najane kaha se ek chandi jese rang ka jug nikala or mere hatho me thama diya.

Vo ; (smaile) ye lo pio. Is se tumhari pyas bhuj jaegi.

Mene use piya to vo pani mittha or bahot swadist tha. Vo pani jese usme gud ka ras mila ho.

Vo ; ye fulo ka sharbat he. Tumhe pasand aaya na??.

Mene ha me sar hilaya or apna muh laga kar vo pura jug pi gaya. Vo sach me bahot swadist tha. Jab mene muh se jug hataya mere samne bahot sari mithaiya thi. Laddu peda, halwa, rasgulla. Mere muh me pani aane laga. Or me sari mitthai tad ne laga.

Vo ; (smaile) khao ye sab tumhare lie hi he.

Me un mitthaiyo pe tut pada. Vo bahot swadist thi. Or muje joro ki bhukh bhi lagi thi. Me khate gaya. Mera pet bhar gaya. Jab mene dekha vo zule se khadi ho kar mere samne aa gai. Me uski sarir ki banavat ko dekhta hi rahe gaya.

Vo sayad samaz gai hogi. Vo apni surili avaj me khil khila kar hasne lagi.

Vo ; (smaile) kya dekh rahe ho??

Uski surili aavaj me kamukhta thi. Ek ajib si chahat mere dill me fel gai.

Me ; tum bahot sundar ho.

Vo ; (smaile) each.....??? Fir mere sath raho. Mere dost ban kar, mere sathi ban kar, ya prit ban kar.

Or vo bol kar fir hasne lagi.

Vo ; (smaile) aao mere sath snan karo naha lo mere sath.

Or vo chalne lagi. Me bhi uske pichhe chal diya. Vo jab chal rahi thi to uski patli kamar ki lachak or uske kulhe ki matak dekh kar muje kuchh kuchh hone laga. Me nahi janta tha ye dill me ek ajb si becheni kyo ho rahi thi. Vo muje akarshit kar chuki thi. Jab chalte chalte vo gardan pichhe kar ke haste huee muje dekhti to mere dill ki dhakane badh jati. Or vo ek nale ke pas jakar ruki.
Me bhi khada ho gaya. Vo mushkurate hue muje dekhti rahi or apni chunri nikal kar fek di. Or pani me utar gai. Esa laga jese vo pani me sama gai ho. Jab pani me dubki laga kar usne apna sar upar utthaya to me us se apni najare hata nahi paya. Hatho me kamal ka ful liye jab vo ek angdai si li to meri najar uske khubshurat chahere se uske stano tak gai. Uske kya ubhar the. Ese ubhar mene aaj tak kisi bhi aurat ke nahi dekhe. Uski patli kamar or gaheri nahi ko dekh kar me mohit ho gaya.

Jab uska badan pani se biga to uski choli uske stano se chipak gai. Or aar par dikhne laga. Me vyakul ho gaya use nangna dekhne ke lie.

Vo ; (smaile) aao na. Mere pas aao.

Me pani me utar gaya. Usne mera hath pakda or meri baho me aa gai. Uska chhuna muje ek alag hi ehsas dila raha tha. Usne mera hath pakda or apne stano par rakh diya. Mene bade halke se uske komal mulayam stano ko dabaya.

Vo ; ssss ahhhh (smaile) kesa laga.

Usne kab meri dhoti me hath dal kar mere sisna ko pakda muje khud pata nahi chala. Me koi or hi anand ki duniya me chala gaya. Usne meri gardan ko chuma fir mere galo ko apni lambi jeebh se chata
Me ye bhi nahi soch paya ki uski jeebh tikhi or nokili thi. Usne mere hotho ko chuma. Uske muh se aa rahi khushbu or uske naram gulabi hotho ka swad me baya nahi kar sakta.

Vo ; (smsile) kesa laga??

Me bas usme khoya sirf ha me sar hilaya. Vo apni surili aavaj me khil khila kar hasne lagi. Or mere hoto par apne hoth rakh kar ras pan karne lagi. Muje ajib sa nasha chha ne laga. Or meri ankho ke samne andhera chha gaya. Sayad me us wakt behosh ho gaya.

Nice story. Buddha is perfect villain.

Lekin yaar index kyu nhi daal rkha ismein

 

[Shetan]

Nice story. Buddha is perfect villain.

Lekin yaar index kyu nhi daal rkha ismein

Thankyou so much. Ye kahani kai rahasyo se bhari hai. Sirf start dekh kar chhod doge to bahot kuchh miss karoge. Lot of thanks mistyvixen.

 

[dhalchandarun]

Bohot Umdaah Update.... Bilkul kisi film ki tarah scene chalte hue imagine kar pa raha tha.......

Namar, Kumutra ko qaid kar ke apne adde par le aya jaha uski biwi (insani chudel) bhi qaid hai.....
usne Kumurta ko torture karna shuru kar diya..... uske baal kaat kar usey zanjeero mein qaid kar diya (is haramkhor ki gaand maar leni chahye.. saale ki himmat kese hui hamari pyari chudel ko torture karne ki .. .. is ke peechhe saand chhorna padega jo iski gaand maare achche se )

Fir baad mein Namar apna shetaani plan batata hai..... ke wo chudel ko chod kar usse bachche peda kar uski bali chadayega (chutiya aadmi)

Dusri taraf Raziya jaagti hai to usey mast khana milta hai jo Lina ne diya hota hai aur fir wo apne naye shikar ki aur jati hai.... lekin gaon mein ja kar usey hosh ata hai aur wo Dhima ke bataye hue tareeke ko yaad kar ke khud pe hue jaadu ka ilaaj karne ke liye haldi dhund lati hai (hmmmm Raziya ko wapas se akal aa gyi thodi ab to.. )
Ghar pohochne par Raziya ... Lina ko lehsun ke zariye kaabu mein rakhti hai...

Khair raziya Lehsun aur haldi se apna jadu ka ilaaj kar apne body se zeher bichhu sab nikaalti hai....

Idhar sheher mein Dhima ko hosh ata hai.. aur wo ek lohar se mil kar chandi chadha hathyaar banane ke liye kehta hai

Udhar Gaon mein wapas chale to bechari Bella ka balatkaar ke kaaran haal bura hai ...( saale Komera harami.. ) Komera ne apne dosto bhayyo se bhi bella ko chudwa diya shayad.....aur uski maa ko bhi nanga kar ke khatam kar diya.....

ab ata hai sexy but horror scene.... Namar Kumutra ko chodne ke liye tayyar hai.. Kumutra nangi hoti hai aur Namar ko apna gazab jism dikhati hai....(haiiiii yhaan usey kaun nahi chodna chahega aise badan ko)
Aur jese hi Namar apna loda Kumurta ki khubsurat chut mein daalta hai.... waapas uska aadha kata hua lund bahar ata hai khoon mein latpat.....

kumurta ke bachche ne uska lulla kaat liya hota hai... (hahaha... sahi hai aise gandu ka ye hi haal hona chhaye tha... ye ab aadhe lund se kya karega)

Wahi DHima Kumurta ka kabila dhundne nikalta jaha usey 3 nangi chudele milti hain jo usey apni raani sukhuda ke paas le jati hai jahan uska investigation kar ke usey Kumurta ka pati sweekar liya jata hai

Waha Gaon mein Lina Raziya ko rijhane ki koshish karti hai aur Sattu bhi usey bachaane ke liye Raziya ko rijhaane aata hai....

Aur yahaan Lina aur Raziya ki chuma chaati hoti hai lekin raziya chalaki se usey chandi ka sikka khila deti hai... Aur Lina maut ke ghaat utar jati hai...... (Lina ko hi chod diya Raziya ne yahaan .. haha.. ab dekhte Sattu ka kya haal hota hai)

Bohot badiya Shetan ji.... (ek do jagah naam ka mix up hua hai likhte samay aur kuch chhoti moti mistake jise ignore kiya ja skta hai.. lekin jo agar na ho to aur achcha )

Maza aa gaya .. aagey ka episode dekhte hain......

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Kaafi Lamba update diya Shetan ji....

Kya Bawaal Update diya hai yaar..... BC haath hi nahi ruka..... tel alag nikal gaya padhte padhte (abhi sach mein tel yaani paseene ki baat kar raha hu )

Bella (jo pehle hi chudakkad kism ki ladki hai aur Komera ka zeher ke nashe mein) apne baap ko dhundne Jorawar thakur ke ghar pohochti hain jahan usey Tipu waha milta hai aur wo bachpan ki tarah usey nadi mein nahane ke liye bulati hai (chutiya hai... suna nahi wo bulati hai magar jaane ka nahi saala chala gaya bakra banne)

Tipu Bella ke pichhe chala jata hai aur waha bella ko nanga nahate hue dekhta hai..

Lekin Bella ki chut ki gandh se paani mein pishaach uske peechhe padh jate hain aur usey paani mein le ja kar uske jism se khelte hain... (saale harami .. nangi ladki dekhi nahi ke aa gaye lund khada kar ke bhogne )

Lekin usey Pishacho se chudne se Oomar bacha leta hai aur usey Komera ke zeher se bhi kuch hadd tak mukt kar deta hai....
Dono ko ek nazar mein pyaar ho jata hai .. aur dono garma garam chudai bhi kar lete hain... aur Oomar usey Komera se bachane ka wada bhi krta hai

Wahi gaao mein Mukhiya ki shav ped se tanga hua milta hai aur Jorawar moka dekh kar khud ke wo pad sambhalne ki baat keh deta hai aur log maan jate hain. (saala lalchi kutta)
Aur Raziya wahi par hi jorawar ko apne jism ko le kar dore daalti haI aur usey Nadi kinare bulati hai ------ Shetan ji ... ye pura nain matakka in dono kya kya sundarta se likha hai aapne......... haiiiiii maza aa gaya... main to masalta hi reh gaya ------------------ apni aankhein

Jorawar bhi apna khada lund le kar nadi kinare pohoch jata hai... aur Raziya achchi tarah se rijjha kar apne jism ki numaish se, apna joban aur mamme dikha kar tadpati hai.... aur usey apne ghar bulati hai raat mein
(Yaar ye Raziya maar daalegi... is ki aadaayein ... pura loda taan deti hain aur saara juice nikaal deti hain uff)

Dusri tarah sheher mein, Dhima raat ko araam karne ke liye bethta hai to uski Mulakat Kumurta se hoti hai... lekin is baat se bekhabar ke Namar usey dekh raha hai.... uska sar par hamla karta hai aur usey behosh kar Kumurta ko bottle mein Qaid kar leta hai....
( Bhai ye padh kar sach mein bura laga..... is behen ke pakode Namar ki gaand maarni chahye) - Bohot sundar fight scene likha aapne ye)

Back to Raziya, Tipu bechara apni maut ko dawat deta hua ...Raziya ke ghar pohochta hai jahan usey bade nasheele andaz mein milti hai.... bechara Raziya ke gale lagte hi pant mein apna maal jhaad deta hai (ab Raziya aise gale lagayegi to hamara bhi nikal jayega tipu kya chiz hai)

Khair Tipu Raziya ki chut chusta hai aur uske upar Raziya paani bhi nikalti hai lekin jese hi Raziya Tipu ka nanga lund pakadti hai... uski fir se taai taai fish ho jati hai
Itne mein Lina usey daboch kar andar le jati hai aur uska raspaan kar daalti hai....

Raziya fir se Tipu ki kahani dohrayi aur Jorwara bhi lund ke nashe mein Raziya ke ghar pohocha... aur dono kaam krida ke nashe mein ek dusre mein dube hue they... aur jab Jorawar Raziya ko chod chod kar apne maal nikalne wala tha... wese hi Lina ne usey dabocha aur wahi uska khoon chus liya lekin itne mein us ka virya zameen par hi nikal gaya ...

jise Raziya ek pagal aurat ki tarah zameen se hi chaatne lagi.... (Ye Raziya par Lina ke vash ka asar hai )

Udhar Bella ki paas fir se Komera aata hai aur usey pata chal jata hai ki Oomar ne uska shikar chhin liya tha... to usne Savita ko bhi marwa daala
Aur wahi Bella ka bhi khoon chusne laga.... lekin maara nahi abhi tak...

Dekhte hain aagey Bella ke saath kya hota hai......

Ufffffff............... ye update padh ke to sach mein energy nikal gyi saari....... pant alag kharab ho gayi ... (chai gir gyi thi bhai)

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Yadi aap review aise likhte ho to aapki story fadu hogi.