- 14,561
- 38,636
- 259
Horror Saya. Ek chudil ki prem kahani (Completed)
- Thread starterShetan
- Start date
- 282,292
Devilprince
New Member
- 14
- 18
- 3
- 14,561
- 38,636
- 259
Please thoda to intjar karo. Aaega or update bhi chhote chhote nahi honge. Ye vada
GuptAbhishek
Member
- 283
- 609
- 108
- 14,561
- 38,636
- 259
Saya part 2 aa chuka he
Saya dobara chudel ki prem kahani.
Aaj hi ek update diya. Page no 4
spritemathews
Well-Known Member
- 3,415
- 7,241
- 158
The credit goes to Shetan Writer
Here you go download the whole story, I really loved the story, hence I saved a copy
Last edited:
- 14,561
- 38,636
- 259
- 14,561
- 38,636
- 259
Raja maurya
Well-Known Member
- 5,072
- 10,584
- 173
Jabardast updateMuje aab koi story likhni nahi thi. Par aage na likhne se bahot sare raiders ka mood off ho raha tha. Logo ne long time tak comment or msg karke likhne ko kaha sirf is lie. To jyada time na kharab karke me aage likh rahi hu. Par story ka thodasa aage badhate hue.
To kahani aage badhti hui. Wakt kafi aage bit chala tha. Dhima or raziya ke ghar ki jindgi bhi badal gai thi. Jaha dhima uske ghar me rahe rahi chhoti kamsin umar ki khubshurat chudel shusumi jo use apni paheli chudel biwi se tofe me mili thi. Uske sath sambhog karte hue raziya chhup kar dekhti or dhima ke na hone par shusumi ke sath sam langik sambhog karti.
Par ab to teeno hi pure nagn avastha me ek hi bistar par hote. Raziya me kuchh alag hi badlav aa gaya tha. Jab vo apne pati dhima ko shusumi ke sath sambhog hote bade karib se dekhti to use badi ajib si becheni or ajb si khushi milti. Vo khud dono ko sahelati, vo zuk kar dono ke ango ko chumti or apne guptango ko khub chusvati chatvati.
Jab dhima ka bada kala mota ling shusumi ki chhoti si yoni ko chirta huaa andar jaata use vo zuk kar bade chav se dekhti. Raziya ki shusumi ke lie soch badal chuki thi. Shusumi use apni hi chhoti nabalik bahen si lagne lagi thi. Par wakt ke chalte raziya ne khud sambhog karna band kar diya tha. Kyo ki uska pet ful chuka tha. Or vo kabhi bhi wakt bache ko janam de sakti thi.
Vo to bas dekhti chhuti mushkurati or dono ka pura sath deti. Shusumi bhi masoom par behat khatarnak thi. Par bahar ki duniya se ab bhi anjan thi. Bahar ki duniya kesi he use sirf gyan hi tha. Kabi usne dekha nahi tha. Or na bahar ki musibato se vasta huaa. Shusumi ne apne gyan ko simit nahi rakha. Usne raziya ko padna likhna sikhaya. Or to or use bahot si kitabe apne jadu ke jariye raziya ko di.
Raziya bhi tantrik vidhya, kala jadu tone totke vasikaran sab sikh gai. Par use bhi istamal karne nahi mila. Isi ke sath gav ka mahol bhi kafi badal gaya. Raziya ki mikhiya pad se gav bahar ki musibato se bacha raha. Na koi gav ki nadi se dub ke mara or na hi koi chudel gav ke kisi inshan janvar ko mar pai. Par shusumi use rokna bhi raziya ko mushkil tha. Vo andheri rat me kishi bhi janvar ko muh ghusa kar khoon pi hi leti.
vese hi ek rat raziya or dhima dono bistar the. Dhima sirf apni langot pahene or raziya sirf ghaghra (petikot) or blouse me. Raziya ka pet jyada fula huaa tha is wajah se stano ka aakar bhi kafi badh chuka tha. Ye dekh ke dhima leti hui raziya ke ek stan ko sirf chhuta hi he ki raziya ne hath zatka.
Raziya ; (zuttha gussa) hat badmash mujse abhi kuchh nahi. (Smaile) abhi meri chhutki aaegi uske sath sirf
Dhima ; (smaile) wah jab biwi hi maja karae to us se jyada khush konsa pati hoga.
Raziya ke chahere par ekdam jabardast mushkan fel gai.
Raziya ; (smaile shararat) karaungi lekin mujse chhup kar nahi. Mere samne mere sath hi sirf.
Or raziya ne bolte hue dhima ke ling ko langot ke upar se pakad ke daboch diya jis se dhima ki ahhh... Nikal gai.
Raziya ; (gusse ka natak muh sikod kar) or mujse chhupkar kuchh kiya to ise ukhad ke fek bhi dungi.
Dhima ; (karahte hue ankhe band) ahhhhh... Sssss are baba nahi karunga. Pahele bulaoto.
Raziya bhi achmbhit ho gai ki shusumi he kaha. Vo fir face pe gussa karte hue boli.
Raziya ; (normal gussa) ye sali harmjadi fir kisi ke murge bakri mar dalegi. La dekhti hu.
Raziya lalten ki roshni kam kar ke darwaja kholti he or blouse ghaghre me hi bahar nikal gai. Ab gav me jyada makan to the nahi par use dhudhe kese. Aadhi nangi raziya har makan ke pas bane bado ke pas ja ja kar dekhne lagi. Tabhi use ek makan jo chhotu or chhote lal ka makan tha uske pas ke bade se meeeee....... Bakriyo ki aavaj aai. Lekin chudelo ka esa dar tha ki ghar se koi na nikla.
Raziya ; (gussa) to yaha ghusi he haram jardi.
Raziya gusse me chhotu or chhote lal ke bade me ghusi. Shusumi puri nangi janwaro ki tarah ghutne par bethi hui zuk ke ek mare hue bakre ke pet me muh ghusae hue thi.
Raziya ; (gussa) sali haramjadi tu fir kisi ka nukshan kar bethi.
Raziya ki aavaj sunke shusumi bethe hue hi palat kar pichhe dekhti he. Uska chahera pura khoon se sana huaa tha.
Raziya shusumi ke pas tez kadmo se badhi or shusumi ki chutd (hips) jo pyari or chhoti thi uspe ek chamat lagai.
Shusumi ; ssss malkin sss bahot pyas he thoda khoon pine do na.....
Raziya ; (gussa) das bar bol diya malkin nahi didi bol. Or ab to tune ise mar hi dala na. Ab kya pi ja khoon. Lekin aaj ke bad esa kiya na to ghar se bahar nikal dungi.
Shusumi bahot tez bakre ka khoon pine lagi. Vo use apne dono hatho se fad diya. Par raziya ko ab us se na dar lagta na khoon dekh kar dar lagta. Vo sara khoon pi kar uthi to raziya khoon se sani shusumi ka nashila chahera dekhti rahe gai.
Raziya shusumi ka badan dekh kar nashili ankho se mushkurati he or apna hath badha kar shusumi ke ek shtan ki nipple ko apni ungliyo se kuredne lagi. Shusumi chudel thi or chudelo ko sambhog inshano se bhi jyada pasand hota he. Shusumi ko nasha chhane laga.
Shusumi ; (nasha ankhe band) sssss malik so gae kya sss ahhhh sss sambhog ssss.
Jab shusumi ne dhima ke lie mailk bola to raziya ne shusumi ka ek shtan jor se nichod diya jo shusumi ko achha hi laga.
Raziya ; vaha tera koi malik nahi he.
Shusumi ; (ankhe niche sharam) maf karna jija se sambhog...... (Sharm)
Raziya ekdam se mushkurai.
Raziya ; (smaile) chal fir aaja ghar or ekdam se saj dhaj ke aana. Tuje dekh kar hi vo utavle ho jae. Or naha ke aana samzi.
Raziya bolke ghum kar jane lagi. Vo apne ghar pahochi. Vaha uska pati to pahele hi utavla tha.
Dhima ; (becheni utsukhta) vo mili?????
Raziya pati ki becheni dekh ke ekdam se mushkurai.
Raziya ; (sharati mushkan) ooo hoooo aa jaegi aa jaegi. Lo pahele ise chato.
Dhima pith tikae jamin par apne bichone par pichhe palang ko pitth tikae betha tha. Raziya apna ghaghra utha kar dono tange fela deti he. Or dhima ke muh ke pas apni yoni chipka deti he. Dhuma ki nak(nose) raziya ki chut ki fak me jese dhansi ki raziya ki aaahhh nikli.
Raziya ; (ankhe band nasha) ahhhh ssss daiyaaaaaa....
Tabhi ekdam se ghar ka darwaja khula or shusumi andar aai. Dhima or raziya dono ki najar bhi ekdam se darwaje par gai. Or vo dono shusumi ko hi dekhte rahe gae. Vo kamsin kali kapde nahi sirf gahene pahene hue machalti hui andar aai.
Raja maurya
Well-Known Member
- 5,072
- 10,584
- 173
Nice updateRaziya apne pati or shusumi se rat bhar chudai karwati rahi. Or bade karib se dekh kar khud dono ke badan ko sahelati rahi. Par vo teeno kab so gae unhe khud bhi pata nahi chala. Hakikat me shusumi soi nahi thi. Vo chudel thi. Or chudel kabhi rat me nahi soti. Achanak murge ki bang par jab dhima ki nind khuli to usne thoda sa sar upar kiya.
Raziya ab bhi us se chipak kar soi thi. Or shusumi ghar me puri nangi(nude) ghuma rahi thi. Jese hi shusumi ne dekha dhima uth gaya he. Shusumi ne turat ek pani ka jug dhima ko diya.
Shusumi ; malik......
Dhima ne ahista se raziya ko apne se alag kiya or pani lekar pi gaya. shusmi turat hi uske bagal me late gai. Jese hi dima khada hokar darwaja kholne gaya.
Raziya ; kya bat he badi jaldi utth gae. Aadhi rat to soe nahi. Fir jag kese aa gai.(smaile)
Dhima turat palta. Or biwi ke majak ka jawab mushkurate hue diya.
Dhima ; (smaile) jungle pani karne ja raha hu.
Raziya ; (sharati smaile) oooho kayo shubh shubah kisi se milne to nahi ja rahe.
Dhima ko apni biwi ka majak bahot pasand aaya.
Dhima ; (smaile) ari bavri halka hone ja raha hu.
Raziya ne bagal me leti shusumi ki taraf hishara karte hue kaha. Jo mashum bachi ki tarah anjan bani leti hui thi.
Raziya ; (smaile) vese halka to ye bhi kar degi.
Dhima or raziya dono ki najre shusumi pe gai.
Raziya ; (sharati smaile) kyo Shusi??? Bol kardegi na apne jija ko halka???
Shusumi bhi to nadan kamshin umar ki chudel thi. Vo turant hi sharma kar palat gai.
Jise dekh kar raziya jor se hasne lagi. Or ek hath aage badha kar shusumi ke kulhe ko mashal deti he.
Dhima ; (smaile) bas kar ab tu muje jane de.
Dhima jane laga to thoda jor se raziya fir majak kar deti he.
Raziya ; (thoda chila kar)(smaile) koi mil jae to vahi mat lag jana. Ghar le aana sath me karenge.
Dhima fir mushkurate hue ruka par kuchh bola nahi vapas chal diya.
Dhima subah subah jungle pani karne chale gaya. Par jab vo apne ghar ko vapis lot raha tha tab gav ki do bahue. Chhotu or chhota lal ki biwiya Dhansi or kajri bhi pani bhar ke gav ke andar jane ko hui. Or dono dewrani jethani ki najar dhima pe gai.
Dhansi ; (dhmi aavaj me) didi didi vo dekho jeth ji.
Kajri ; (dhimi aavaj sock) ha ri ye to dhima he.
Dhansi ; (ankhe nashili or aavaj) sssss didi inhe dekh kar to tan badan me aag lag gai. Kuchh karo na.
Kajri ; (smaile) ruk kuchh karti hu. Koi he to nahi.
Dhansi ; (dhimi aavaj par hadbadahat) are koi nahi he.
Tabhi kajri ne dhima ko aavaj di.
Kajri ; (smaile) areee oooo dewarji kaha se aa rahe ho subah subah.
Kajri raziya ki khas saheli thi. Uska badan bhi kasa huaa tha. Par raziya jitni sundar nahi thi. Fir bhi mardo ki nind haram karne layak jabadast badan tha. Raziya or kajri dono ki shadi ek hi din hui thi. Dono us wakt ki gav ki nai nai bahue thi. Is lie khas dosti ho gai. Vahi dhansi ki shadi ko abhi 2 sal hi hue the. Dono ke pati chhotu or chhota lal nashedi ban gae the. Is lie unme ab vo bat nahi thi.
Or dhansi to abhi nai shadi ki vajah se mast ladki hi thi. Use pati se aurat ban ne layak sbhog nahi mil paya tha. Usne abhi nas chatkane layak samhog ka sukh nahi mila tha. Dono hi dewrani jethani ek hi nav me sawar the. Is lie dono hi apne pati ki kamiyo ke karan sath hi koi rasta talas rahi thi. Or dono ki najre dhima par ruk gai thi. Dhima apne biwi ki khas shaheli kajri ko dekh kar mushkurata he or unki taraf aane laga.
Dhima ;(smaile) ha bhabhi kya bat he. Me to jungle ko gaya tha. Par tumhara ghar to is taraf he. Tum pani lie apne kheto ki taraf kaha chal di???
Dhima ke dill me un dono ke lie koi pap nahi tha. Vo to sirf dewar bhabhi ka mazak hi samaz raha tha. Upar se apni biwi ki shaheli to shali bhi hui. Vo sirf majak hi samaz raha tha. Par kajri or uski dewrani ke man to tan badan ki pyas bhujana tha.
Kajri ; ab kya batau khet ka kuaa sukh gaya he. Or gaiya rat ki pyasi hogi. Socha pani pila du. Or gaiya ka dudh nikal le.
Chhotu or chhote lal ke khet me bhi ek bada bana huaa tha. Or unki gay vahi bandhi hui thi. Sirf ghar ke pas bakri murhe the. Tabhi dhansi aadhe ghughat se muh ughad kar mushkurate hue kajri ke kan me kuchh boli. Or kajri mushkurane lagi.
Kajri ; (sharati smaile) dekh lo bahu kya kahe rahi he. Jeth ji ko kya pata gaiya ka dudh kese nikalte he. Kyo??? Nikal lete ho kya dudh??? Gaiya ka???
Dhima ko laga kajri uske maje le rahi he. Or majak me dhima pichhe na ho varna uski biwi ke samne kajri jyada mazak udaegi. Is se achha vo hi kajri ki khichai kar de. Par dhansi umar me or riste dono me chhoti thi is lie vo dhansi se majak masti nahi karta.
Dhima ; (smaile) are dudh to me esa nikalu ki than bhi kap jae . mashal ke pure than nichod du. Lao mere hatho me than.
Dhima ne jan buch kar ese hath aage kiya jese vo kajri ke stan apne hatho me bhar lega. Jis se ek bar darke kajri bhi haste hue ek bar pichhe ho gai. or kajri haste hue boli.
Kajri ; (smaile) kiska???
Dhima ; (sharati smaile) gaiya ka.
Dono dewrani jethani jor se hasi.
Kajri ; (smaile) to chalo hamare khet mw.
Dhima ; ha to chalo......
Vahi jab dhima apne ghar se nikla shusumi ne turant hi jadu se darwaja band kar diya. Par vo ulti pet ke bal leti hi rahi. Shusumi ka muh raziya ke zango ke pas tha. Shusumi ko raziya ki chut se koi gupt khushbu aa rahi thi. Kyo ki raziya pet se thi. Or swabhan yani bacha dene vali aurat ki khushbu bhut preto chudel or jinno ko bahot akarshit karti he. Shusumi dhire dhire apna muh raziya ki zango se chipka kar apni jeebh se chatne lagi. Raziya ne halke se shusumi ki nangi pith pe halke se hath mara. Vo khud bhi nangi hi thi. Or beth ke apne bikhre balo ko sawarne lagi.
Raziya ; chal ri ab khadi hoja ab sone ka wakt nahi he.
Kam ujale me bhi raziya ka chahera or kamukh badan jabardast akarshak lag raha tha. Par shusumi ko jo raziya ki yoni se aane vali madak khushbu bahot jyada akarshit kar rahi thi.
Shusumi ; (dimi aavaj me request) malkin aap ki yoni se bahot pyari khushbu aa rahi he. Ek bar jeebh lagane do na???
