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I don't think so..Mujhe nahi laga logo interest kam hua balke interest bad chila hai .. view kuch kam huye the lekin woh update ke na ane seq
Q ki ye mera sochna hi kaam khtm story khtm....phir new story ki uski item kaise chudi......to new item chudao...usme focus bna rhta hi...bhai...aur mja bhi aata hi....mi aapki writing skil pr question nhi kiya but story ko dekh lo last me writer ko jbersdasti bnd krni pdti hi....aap dekh lo maximum ka yhi haal hi....tbhi kha new carector le kr aao uski chuadi krwao...seetal ka smarpan jaisi story,aur waffao ka imtehan jaisi story ka yhi haal hua jo ki best writing skil pr likhi gyi thi...
Try kre aapI don't think so..Mujhe nahi laga logo interest kam hua balke interest bad chila hai .. view kuch kam huye the lekin woh update ke na ane se
Abhi to last update chudai hui hi...jo ho gyi....to ab kanika ki chudai me kuch ...nhi bacha ...wo to sbhi story me same he rhta hi...important hi story ko writer kaisa finish deta hi first chudai ke baad...q ki baat to uske baad ki he hi, q ko ab chudai ke liye koi q pdhega...ager kuch interesting nhi rha to...q ki jo fantesy thi wo khtm...I don't think so..Mujhe nahi laga logo interest kam hua balke interest bad chila hai .. view kuch kam huye the lekin woh update ke na ane se
People like this can't do something on they own and always give unsolicited expert advice on everything. Who tf asked about your hot takes on this story?q
Q ki ye mera sochna hi kaam khtm story khtm....phir new story ki uski item kaise chudi......to new item chudao...usme focus bna rhta hi...bhai...aur mja bhi aata hi....mi aapki writing skil pr question nhi kiya but story ko dekh lo last me writer ko jbersdasti bnd krni pdti hi....aap dekh lo maximum ka yhi haal hi....tbhi kha new carector le kr aao uski chuadi krwao...seetal ka smarpan jaisi story,aur waffao ka imtehan jaisi story ka yhi haal hua jo ki best writing skil pr likhi gyi thi...
Fantasies never end...Kabhi khatam nahi hote, sex hone ke bad hi story khatam ho jate hai ie konsi rule hai bhai? Koi story suru bhi ho sakta hai .. aise categorise karne ka keya faydaAbhi to last update chudai hui hi...jo ho gyi....to ab kanika ki chudai me kuch ...nhi bacha ...wo to sbhi story me same he rhta hi...important hi story ko writer kaisa finish deta hi first chudai ke baad...q ki baat to uske baad ki he hi, q ko ab chudai ke liye koi q pdhega...ager kuch interesting nhi rha to...q ki jo fantesy thi wo khtm...
Bhai uske liye bhut accha plot hona chiye....Jo turn de story ko bnarsi paan wala adhuri chuti kisi aur ne new turn diya ..aaj haalet dekho....ab bnd hone ko hi...to ya to writer ke pss kuch bhut accha ho jisse old incident log bhul jaye nhi to normal sex story rh jayegi....koi bhi aaya bja kr chela gya.....jalim ko to wo ab kbhi rok he nhi skti....to dekhte hi writer ke pss kitna best option hiFantasies never end...Kabhi khatam nahi hote, sex hone ke bad hi story khatam ho jate hai ie konsi rule hai bhai? Koi story suru bhi ho sakta hai .. aise categorise karne ka keya fayda
A run bhai aap ne ye galat bat kah di..Abhi to last update chudai hui hi...jo ho gyi....to ab kanika ki chudai me kuch ...nhi bacha ...wo to sbhi story me same he rhta hi...important hi story ko writer kaisa finish deta hi first chudai ke baad...q ki baat to uske baad ki he hi, q ko ab chudai ke liye koi q pdhega...ager kuch interesting nhi rha to...q ki jo fantesy thi wo khtm...
Inke saath ye hi ki finish dete hi story ko...to dekhte hi wo kaisa hogaFantasies never end...Kabhi khatam nahi hote, sex hone ke bad hi story khatam ho jate hai ie konsi rule hai bhai? Koi story suru bhi ho sakta hai .. aise categorise karne ka keya fayda
Ye negative lene ki baat hi....yhi kha ki bhut accha plot hua to moveon hogi....but story aapki hi to apne according try kro jo likh skte ho aap...story ka to ye hi jb tk acchi to pdhi gyi nhi to stopA run bhai aap ne ye galat bat kah di..
Banarasi paan bana, disha masoom wife, sanskari wife, badhe ghar ki bahu, esi kai story hai ji sex ke bad bhi story chal rahi hai...
En me writar Or raider dono ka aacha risponsh hai..
Kabhi to nigetive coment ke alawa koi aachi bhi comment diya karo bhai...
Har story me me aap ese hi comennt dete ho..
Yadi sex ke bad aap ko story nahi padhni hai to aap vo story dekha hi na karo...