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Fantasy Shiva the common man

Should i continued the story or ,it fills forced on you guys


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Secretshiva1

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Introduction
Dosto yeh kahani hai ek aise mamoole ladke ki jisne ki halat se Kabhi samjhota Nahi Kiya Jo jitna bhi jiya Apne tarike se jiya Apne sharton par jiya. Ek aisa ladka Jo naa Kabhi kamjor pada aur na hi Kabhi apna dukh Kisi se baant saka. Ji ha dosto ye kahani ek aise ladke SHIVA VERMA ki.
Dosto yeh kahani ek fantasy hone Bali hai toh ap sab se request hai ki Kisi aur chij ki ummid na rakhe me Apne taraf se Puri kosish karoonga use Pura Karne ki.
Phir ek naye writer ki kahani ko padhe aur isse achha banane me apna kimti sujhav dete rahe.
Apka apna SECRET SHIVA........
 

Secretshiva1

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Yeh kahani suru Hoti hai ek secret meeting se jisme ki desh ke Kai bade rajneta air Kai bade gang ke leader baithe hue hai aur behas chidi hui hai ki din ba din unka dhandha nukshan me jata ja Raha hai koi hai Jo ki inka maal lut kar adha police ko de Raha hai aur adhe ki koi bhi jankari Nahi mil paa rahi hai itne powerful hone ke baad bhi yeh log uss Ka Kuch bhi Nahi bigad paa rahe hai aisa Nahi hai ki inhone koshish na ki in logo ne Russia se highly trained fighters bhi bulaba kar Dekha liye the aur Japan se deadly ninja bhi par koi bhi uss ladke Ka Kuch bhi Nahi bigad paye.ise sab se pareshan ho lar inhone aaj yaha meeting Rakhi hai.jisme ki sabse khatranaak aur ameer hai (Jo ki inka ek Tarah se leader bhi hua).
Markus - Russia se Aaya Russian mafia Ka ek piyada Jo ki Apne dimaag aur jankari ke badolat India me itna bada aadmi ban Gaya hai.
Ab in sbka naam aur position bata du kon desh me kya aur kaga sabhalta hai.
Vishvajeet Rana - ye north me Markus ke kaamo anjaam deta hai bahut hi deadly aur havas se bhara hua inshan hai yeh logo ko marna aur unke bahu betion ki ijjat se khelna iska sabse pasandida kamm hai
Amarsingh kushbaha - ye aadmi Markus ke liye East me kaam karta hai baise toh yeh kafi Acha inshan hai in San me par jab ye gusse me hota hai toh ye Kisi ki Nahi chodta aur jita jgata janvar ban jata hai jiske liye Kuch bhi galat Nahi.
Amit Patel - yeh aadmi sunne me jitna bhi sidha ya Sant lagta ho par hai ek behsi darinda jiske liye dusro ki maut duniya ki sabse badi khusi ki Tarah hai.yeh Markus ke liye west ko sabhalta hai.
Samarjeet Rana - jaisa naam baisa kaam ise ladai me harana achhe achhon ke bas ki baat Nahi takat se Dara kar ye Apne opponent ko hara hi deta Russia se Aaye goons ko bhi isne Kadi takar Di thi Bo toh unhe sirf dekhna chahata tha toh iss liye unhe jaane Diya Verna iske aage achhe achhe trained professionals paani bharte hai. Ye Markus ke liye south me kaam dekhta hai.
Aur ab Aaye hai rajnetaon par
Bhagbandas singh- yeh hai India aa Ka terrorist minister jiska kaam hai India me badhte atankbadi hamlo ko rokna uar kam Karna Bo baat alag hai ki ye karta bilkul iska Ulta hai itna kamina ki koi Sahi paise de toh apni Bibi ko bhi Kisi se chudba de khud uska land pakad ke.
Inn San ke alava bhi Kai aur chote more log the yaha par Jo koi khas Nahi hai abhi.
Ye log aaj tak uss ladke ko alag alag jagh alag alag naamo se jante the Kisi ke liye Bo shiv Ka bahkt tha toh Kisi ke liya Arjun sa yodha par aaj jab yeh sb log yaha ikatta huye air apni saari jankari uss ladke ke bare me Markus ko batane lage toh Markus ko shak hua kahi ye ek hi inshan toh Nahi Jo plan kar ke sbhi ko mar Raha hai aur inka adha maal Apne sath le jata hai kyu ki uss ladke ke har hamle me Kuch chije common thi jaise ik ninja sward Kuch red arrow Kuch ninja blades aur har Kisi ki Kati hui gardan ji hai Bo ladka har Kisi ki Marne ke liya ya toh uski gardan uda deta tha ya uski Dil me ek rad tipped arrow mar deta tha Bo Kisi ki bhi Nahi jinda chodta tha Apne raste me aane bale ko Jo aaya matlab Gaya bhagban ke paas narak me. Ye bhi ek main reason tha ki Kisi ki bhi Uske bare me jayda nhai pata chal pata tha kyu ki use dekhne Bala jinda hi bachta tha.
Yaha sab log mil kar apas me lad rahe the ki ye mere area me pehle dikha tha ki mere area me jise sunkar Markus Ka gussa Uske control ke bahar home laga aur usne ek ninja blade un Charo logo (gunde Jo India me Markus ka liye kaam karte the )ke bich se hota hua minister ki topi sahit piche khade ek gaurd ko lag Gaya aur Bo bahi ek chikh ke Saath mar gaya.
Aur ab har taraf bas sannata
Markus- kyu be tum kutte ke pillon yaha toh aise lad rahe ho ki uss ladke ko mar Diya ho aur ab innam Lene Aaye hi ki Mene mara Mene mara. Par asal me ab tak na toh tum usko pakad paye aur na hi Uske bare me Kuch pata kar paye.
To be continued...
 

Secretshiva1

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Markus aage bolta hai sirf apni aiyashiyo me hi lage hue ho ab tak jao yaha se aur use dhudhne ke liye koi achha sa plan dhudhon aur pakad ke layo use haramjade ko yaha sab baha se Jane lage aur Markus me apne seat par Beth kar ek batan dabaya ik darbaja khula aur Bo usme Chala Gaya .
Iske baad hame dikhayi jati hai uss ldeke ki ek jahlak Jo ki bow and arrow,ninja sward aur ninja uniform me black leather jacket se Dhaka hua tha full covered chehre se leke pair tak.
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Aur Bo Apne computer par UN logo ki (Markus aur Uske logo ki) baate sun Raaha tha aur phir Bo bahan se jaane lagta hai ek gate se paar.
 

Rahul

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:congrats:for new story :flowers:
 

Secretshiva1

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Aur bhi bahut Kuch but phir bhi mene kosis ki hai apna best dene ki baaki aap sab batye ki kaisi lagi.
 
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