Fantasy Shiva the common man

[Secretshiva1]

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Update-2

Yaha desh ki rajdhani delhi se lagbhag 100 km dur ek gaun ke bade se Ghar me ek ladka jiska naam SHIVA VERMA hai jamin par leta Kuch soch Raha hai.ki Kitna badal Gaya hai yaha 4 saalon me.maa papa Bhai Behan chacha chachi bhabhiyan sab. Aur sochte sochte kab need lag gayi pata Nahi Chala jab tak ye sota hai tab tak baaki sab ke bare Jaan lete hai
Character's introduction
Shiva Verma - kahani Ka hero
Age-20 years
Rudra Verma - hero ke papa
Age-45 years
Parvati Verma - hero ki mammi
Age-42 years
Prashant Verma - hero Ka chota bhai
Age-18 years
Shikha Verma - hero ki Behan
Age -** years
Sourabh Verma - hero ke sabse chote chacha
Age-30 years
Meenu Verma - hero ki sabse choti chachi
Age -28 years
Aarav Verma - meenu chachi aur Saurabh chacha Ka ladka
Age -1.5 years
Hero ke dad 7 Bhai aur 3 behne hai dad dusre sabse bade bete hai baaki ke character abhi itne important Nahi unka story me aage pata Chal jayega.
Jab hero so Raha that ki tabhi uski maa uske paas aati hai aur aur darbaje se hi usse Dekh ti rehti hai aur yaad Karne lagti hai. Ki Bo 4 Saal pehle unka beta akele dukkan Gaya tha aur phir aaj se Kuch din pehle lota hai.aur rone lagti hai ye sab soch kar ki kaise Raha Hoga unka beta itni din Bina Kisi ki madad ke aur Bina Kisi se mile.Aur aisa kya hua tha uske Saath ki ek achha khasa 100 kilo Ka ladka ab bilkul sukh Gaya hai.aur itni saari choton ke nishan kahanse aaye.
jinhe dekh ke aurat baha khade khade uss din ki Yaad Karne lagti hai jab ek subah Bo so kar uthi aur Apne bade bete ki tasveer ko Dekh Kar rone lagi Jo ki ek aakhiri tasveer thi uss ladke ki( kyu ki usse photo khichna achha Nahi lagta tha) aur Jo aaj uthte hue hadbadahat me tut gayi thi kyu ki usne phir bahi darvna Sapna Dekha tha ki uska beta dard se tadap Raha hai aur maa maa pukar Raha aur Bo hadbadahat me uthi aur Bo tasveer tut gayi. Bo rote hue uss tuti tasveer ko Dekha kar kho gayi yaadon me.
Ki uska bada beta aaj se 4 Saal pehle Apne papa ke gair hazri unki dukaan sambhala Raha tha Kuch din se kaise achanak gayab ho Gaya tha Jo aaj tak Nahi mila.
Flashback
Hua yu tha ki unke bete ne dukaan se phone kiya ki mammi me aa Raha hu Ghar aaj tabiyat Kuch thik Nahi lag rahi hai toh maa be Kaha aaja koi baat Nahi baise bhi Kuch Dino me tere papa bhi aa jayenge kasmir se.Aur Bo ladka dukaan band kar ke Ghar ke taraf nikalne laga baise toh ye rasta Kuch jayda bada Nahi hai dukaan se Ghar Ka national highway hone ki bajah se kafi bhid bhi Hoti hai yaha par.lakin abhi Kuch Dino pehle jis town me uss ke papa ki dukaan thi baha government ne uss town me bypass Bana Diya tha jis se ki ab Kuch duri tak town ke bahar sunsaan ilaka tha.
Shiva dopahr 3 baje nikla tha dukaan se par ab Raat ke 8baj rahe the aur ab tak na laut ke Aaya tha maa ne Apne chote dever sourbh ko bheja usse dhudhne par ab tak unhe bhi Kuch pata Nahi Chala tha shiva Ka phone toh lag Raha tha par koi utha nhi Raha tha toh maa ko bhi bahut chinta hone lagi.Tab tak uske chote dever bhi bapas aa chuke the aur unke haat me that ek phone Jo Khun me Sana hua tha ye phone the unke bade ladke Ka jis se Bo aur dar gayi aur behosh ho gayi toh choti chachi meenu aur choti Behan Shikha ne unhe sambhala.unhe bistar par Lita kar.
Chote chacha shiva missing ki report likhbane Gaye police station aur uss Ka phone (jo ki usi town se bahar ke sunsaan raste me pada mila tha bhi de Diya) police ko mamla kafi pechida lag Raha tha dekhne me toh police ne bhi FIR darj kar li.
uss dukaan ke paas ke Kai log aur usske gaon ke kayi logon ke dabab me aakar police ne turqnt karbahi bhi suru kar Di thi.
jab police ne enquiry ki toh pata Chala ki ladka toh 03:15 par hi dukaan se Chala Gaya tha Ghar ki taraf.ye jankaari jaroori thi par Puri nahi police ne inquiry ki aage badhate hue ye confirm Karna chaha ki ye Khun hai kis Ka toh unhone isse janch ke liye bhej Diya forensic me jiski report aane me do din lagne bale the.
Thanks for reading bhailog agla update jald hi.....

 

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Introduction
Dosto yeh kahani hai ek aise mamoole ladke ki jisne ki halat se Kabhi samjhota Nahi Kiya Jo jitna bhi jiya Apne tarike se jiya Apne sharton par jiya. Ek aisa ladka Jo naa Kabhi kamjor pada aur na hi Kabhi apna dukh Kisi se baant saka. Ji ha dosto ye kahani ek aise ladke SHIVA VERMA ki.
Dosto yeh kahani ek fantasy hone Bali hai toh ap sab se request hai ki Kisi aur chij ki ummid na rakhe me Apne taraf se Puri kosish karoonga use Pura Karne ki.
Phir ek naye writer ki kahani ko padhe aur isse achha banane me apna kimti sujhav dete rahe.
Apka apna SECRET SHIVA........

Congratulations for new the three Bhai halat koi v ho plzz kahnai bich Mai Mt chorna kiw ki bahut se new writer Ate hai 2 update dekr gyab ho jate hai isliye Bhai Jo Josh SE aap ye story suru kiye ho wo Josh Kam hone mt Dena nhi to aapko story likhne ka MN nhi krega..Kahani ke update pehle SE likh KR rakho Bhai ...

 

[Secretshiva1]

Congratulations for new the three Bhai halat koi v ho plzz kahnai bich Mai Mt chorna kiw ki bahut se new writer Ate hai 2 update dekr gyab ho jate hai isliye Bhai Jo Josh SE aap ye story suru kiye ho wo Josh Kam hone mt Dena nhi to aapko story likhne ka MN nhi krega..Kahani ke update pehle SE likh KR rakho Bhai ...

I will make sure to give it a deserving ending.

 

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Update-1

Yeh kahani suru Hoti hai ek secret meeting se jisme ki desh ke Kai bade rajneta air Kai bade gang ke leader baithe hue hai aur behas chidi hui hai ki din ba din unka dhandha nukshan me jata ja Raha hai koi hai Jo ki inka maal lut kar adha police ko de Raha hai aur adhe ki koi bhi jankari Nahi mil paa rahi hai itne powerful hone ke baad bhi yeh log uss Ka Kuch bhi Nahi bigad paa rahe hai aisa Nahi hai ki inhone koshish na ki in logo ne Russia se highly trained fighters bhi bulaba kar Dekha liye the aur Japan se deadly ninja bhi par koi bhi uss ladke Ka Kuch bhi Nahi bigad paye.ise sab se pareshan ho lar inhone aaj yaha meeting Rakhi hai.jisme ki sabse khatranaak aur ameer hai (Jo ki inka ek Tarah se leader bhi hua).
Markus - Russia se Aaya Russian mafia Ka ek piyada Jo ki Apne dimaag aur jankari ke badolat India me itna bada aadmi ban Gaya hai.
Ab in sbka naam aur position bata du kon desh me kya aur kaga sabhalta hai.
Vishvajeet Rana - ye north me Markus ke kaamo anjaam deta hai bahut hi deadly aur havas se bhara hua inshan hai yeh logo ko marna aur unke bahu betion ki ijjat se khelna iska sabse pasandida kamm hai
Amarsingh kushbaha - ye aadmi Markus ke liye East me kaam karta hai baise toh yeh kafi Acha inshan hai in San me par jab ye gusse me hota hai toh ye Kisi ki Nahi chodta aur jita jgata janvar ban jata hai jiske liye Kuch bhi galat Nahi.
Amit Patel - yeh aadmi sunne me jitna bhi sidha ya Sant lagta ho par hai ek behsi darinda jiske liye dusro ki maut duniya ki sabse badi khusi ki Tarah hai.yeh Markus ke liye west ko sabhalta hai.
Samarjeet Rana - jaisa naam baisa kaam ise ladai me harana achhe achhon ke bas ki baat Nahi takat se Dara kar ye Apne opponent ko hara hi deta Russia se Aaye goons ko bhi isne Kadi takar Di thi Bo toh unhe sirf dekhna chahata tha toh iss liye unhe jaane Diya Verna iske aage achhe achhe trained professionals paani bharte hai. Ye Markus ke liye south me kaam dekhta hai.
Aur ab Aaye hai rajnetaon par
Bhagbandas singh- yeh hai India aa Ka terrorist minister jiska kaam hai India me badhte atankbadi hamlo ko rokna uar kam Karna Bo baat alag hai ki ye karta bilkul iska Ulta hai itna kamina ki koi Sahi paise de toh apni Bibi ko bhi Kisi se chudba de khud uska land pakad ke.
Inn San ke alava bhi Kai aur chote more log the yaha par Jo koi khas Nahi hai abhi.
Ye log aaj tak uss ladke ko alag alag jagh alag alag naamo se jante the Kisi ke liye Bo shiv Ka bahkt tha toh Kisi ke liya Arjun sa yodha par aaj jab yeh sb log yaha ikatta huye air apni saari jankari uss ladke ke bare me Markus ko batane lage toh Markus ko shak hua kahi ye ek hi inshan toh Nahi Jo plan kar ke sbhi ko mar Raha hai aur inka adha maal Apne sath le jata hai kyu ki uss ladke ke har hamle me Kuch chije common thi jaise ik ninja sward Kuch red arrow Kuch ninja blades aur har Kisi ki Kati hui gardan ji hai Bo ladka har Kisi ki Marne ke liya ya toh uski gardan uda deta tha ya uski Dil me ek rad tipped arrow mar deta tha Bo Kisi ki bhi Nahi jinda chodta tha Apne raste me aane bale ko Jo aaya matlab Gaya bhagban ke paas narak me. Ye bhi ek main reason tha ki Kisi ki bhi Uske bare me jayda nhai pata chal pata tha kyu ki use dekhne Bala jinda hi bachta tha.
Yaha sab log mil kar apas me lad rahe the ki ye mere area me pehle dikha tha ki mere area me jise sunkar Markus Ka gussa Uske control ke bahar home laga aur usne ek ninja blade un Charo logo (gunde Jo India me Markus ka liye kaam karte the )ke bich se hota hua minister ki topi sahit piche khade ek gaurd ko lag Gaya aur Bo bahi ek chikh ke Saath mar gaya.
Aur ab har taraf bas sannata
Markus- kyu be tum kutte ke pillon yaha toh aise lad rahe ho ki uss ladke ko mar Diya ho aur ab innam Lene Aaye hi ki Mene mara Mene mara. Par asal me ab tak na toh tum usko pakad paye aur na hi Uske bare me Kuch pata kar paye.
To be continued...

Osmmm Bhai ..nice story starting Mai ho villan ka PTA cl gya apne hero ka bare Mai v kuch kch bta Diya bahut khub Bhai

 

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Update-2

Yaha desh ki rajdhani delhi se lagbhag 100 km dur ek gaun ke bade se Ghar me ek ladka jiska naam SHIVA VERMA hai jamin par leta Kuch soch Raha hai.ki Kitna badal Gaya hai yaha 4 saalon me.maa papa Bhai Behan chacha chachi bhabhiyan sab. Aur sochte sochte kab need lag gayi pata Nahi Chala jab tak ye sota hai tab tak baaki sab ke bare Jaan lete hai
Character's introduction
Shiva Verma - kahani Ka hero
Age-20 years
Rudra Verma - hero ke papa
Age-45 years
Parvati Verma - hero ki mammi
Age-42 years
Prashant Verma - hero Ka chota bhai
Age-18 years
Shikha Verma - hero ki Behan
Age -** years
Sourabh Verma - hero ke sabse chote chacha
Age-30 years
Meenu Verma - hero ki sabse choti chachi
Age -28 years
Aarav Verma - meenu chachi aur Saurabh chacha Ka ladka
Age -1.5 years
Hero ke dad 7 Bhai aur 3 behne hai dad dusre sabse bade bete hai baaki ke character abhi itne important Nahi unka story me aage pata Chal jayega.
Jab hero so Raha that ki tabhi uski maa uske paas aati hai aur aur darbaje se hi usse Dekh ti rehti hai aur yaad Karne lagti hai. Ki Bo 4 Saal pehle unka beta akele dukkan Gaya tha aur phir aaj se Kuch din pehle lota hai.aur rone lagti hai ye sab soch kar ki kaise Raha Hoga unka beta itni din Bina Kisi ki madad ke aur Bina Kisi se mile.Aur aisa kya hua tha uske Saath ki ek achha khasa 100 kilo Ka ladka ab bilkul sukh Gaya hai.aur itni saari choton ke nishan kahanse aaye.
jinhe dekh ke aurat baha khade khade uss din ki Yaad Karne lagti hai jab ek subah Bo so kar uthi aur Apne bade bete ki tasveer ko Dekh Kar rone lagi Jo ki ek aakhiri tasveer thi uss ladke ki( kyu ki usse photo khichna achha Nahi lagta tha) aur Jo aaj uthte hue hadbadahat me tut gayi thi kyu ki usne phir bahi darvna Sapna Dekha tha ki uska beta dard se tadap Raha hai aur maa maa pukar Raha aur Bo hadbadahat me uthi aur Bo tasveer tut gayi. Bo rote hue uss tuti tasveer ko Dekha kar kho gayi yaadon me.
Ki uska bada beta aaj se 4 Saal pehle Apne papa ke gair hazri unki dukaan sambhala Raha tha Kuch din se kaise achanak gayab ho Gaya tha Jo aaj tak Nahi mila.
Flashback
Hua yu tha ki unke bete ne dukaan se phone kiya ki mammi me aa Raha hu Ghar aaj tabiyat Kuch thik Nahi lag rahi hai toh maa be Kaha aaja koi baat Nahi baise bhi Kuch Dino me tere papa bhi aa jayenge kasmir se.Aur Bo ladka dukaan band kar ke Ghar ke taraf nikalne laga baise toh ye rasta Kuch jayda bada Nahi hai dukaan se Ghar Ka national highway hone ki bajah se kafi bhid bhi Hoti hai yaha par.lakin abhi Kuch Dino pehle jis town me uss ke papa ki dukaan thi baha government ne uss town me bypass Bana Diya tha jis se ki ab Kuch duri tak town ke bahar sunsaan ilaka tha.
Shiva dopahr 3 baje nikla tha dukaan se par ab Raat ke 8baj rahe the aur ab tak na laut ke Aaya tha maa ne Apne chote dever sourbh ko bheja usse dhudhne par ab tak unhe bhi Kuch pata Nahi Chala tha shiva Ka phone toh lag Raha tha par koi utha nhi Raha tha toh maa ko bhi bahut chinta hone lagi.Tab tak uske chote dever bhi bapas aa chuke the aur unke haat me that ek phone Jo Khun me Sana hua tha ye phone the unke bade ladke Ka jis se Bo aur dar gayi aur behosh ho gayi toh choti chachi meenu aur choti Behan Shikha ne unhe sambhala.unhe bistar par Lita kar.
Chote chacha shiva missing ki report likhbane Gaye police station aur uss Ka phone (jo ki usi town se bahar ke sunsaan raste me pada mila tha bhi de Diya) police ko mamla kafi pechida lag Raha tha dekhne me toh police ne bhi FIR darj kar li.
uss dukaan ke paas ke Kai log aur usske gaon ke kayi logon ke dabab me aakar police ne turqnt karbahi bhi suru kar Di thi.
jab police ne enquiry ki toh pata Chala ki ladka toh 03:15 par hi dukaan se Chala Gaya tha Ghar ki taraf.ye jankaari jaroori thi par Puri nahi police ne inquiry ki aage badhate hue ye confirm Karna chaha ki ye Khun hai kis Ka toh unhone isse janch ke liye bhej Diya forensic me jiski report aane me do din lagne bale the.
Thanks for reading bhailog agla update jald hi.....

Fantastic update Bhai..apna hero 4 year bad Ghar aaya hai....4 year SE tha Khan wo Kiya KR RHA tha it a high trained kaise hua I hope aane wale update Mai SB ka jawab mil jayega waiting for next update bhai

 

[Raguhalkal]

Welcome and congrats

 

[John Cena]

Zabardast story ha boss keep it up

 

[OFFICIALSK]

Mast update bhai............... keep writing

 

[Raja thakur]

Nice updates