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Fantasy Shiva the common man

Should i continued the story or ,it fills forced on you guys

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Update -3
Abhi forensic ki report aane me time tha to police baaki ke angle bhi investigate Karne lagi aur agle din dukaan kholi gayi, andar sab Kuch Normal tha Uske baad dukaan ke cctv footage dekhe Gaye toh pata Chala ki missing se do din pehle Mera Kisi se dukaan par bahut jhagda hua par hath Nahi uthe toh log jama Nahi hui bas but jhagda Kadi bada tha. Ye baat chacha ko pata chali toh chote chacha be Kaha jayiye aur pakad lijiye unhe, police bataya ki aaj Subha hi Inn baaki logo Ka bhi missing report register hui hai hum unhe dhudhne ki poori kosish karenge.
Udhar Ghar par Raat ko koi Sahi se so bhi Nahi pata aur subhe hotel hi papa Ka phone aa Gaya aur unhone Kaha ki Raat ko Bura Sapna Dekha ki shiva khatre me hai Kaha hai bo.itna sunte hi maa Ka Rona phir suru hi Gaya aur ab papa ki aur bhi dar lagne laga toh chachi ne phone leke bataya ki kya hua jise sunkar papa toh bokhla hi Gaye aur Bo turant agli train se baha se aane lage.
Par innsab se dur takreeban 500 kilometers dur ek sunsaan jagah par Kuch log ek admi ko bahut buri Tarah mar rahe the par chehra Dhaka hone se pehchan Nahi ho rahi this aur pata Nahi kyu koi aawaz bhi Nahi aa rahi thi Bo lag 2 ghante tak marte rahe aur thak kar jaane lage(Bo chaar aadmi the toh a1 a2.....)likhoonga.
A1-boss isse niche toh utar den
A3- kyu be tera kya damad lagta hai.
A2-nahi Bhai par niche utar detection hai aur dekhte hai ab jinda hai ya mar gaya.
A4-boss Sahi keh Raha hai ye
A3 ko bhi ye baat Sahi lagi aur uss ko niche utara gaya
aur jab Uske upar se kapda hataya gay toh ye toh shiva hi tha Khun laga hone ki bajah se pata bhi Nahi chal Raha tha har jagah se Khun Nikal Raha tha chehre se.
Un logo ne usske haat pair bandh rakhe the aur muh bhi band tha,phir in logo ne shiva ke upar thoda paani dala aur usse hosh me laye.
Shiva ki najar se...
Jab me dukaan se nikla toh tab tak sab thik tha sirf ek baat ki chod kar ki ek kaali Bina number ki caar Jo Subha se khadi thi Bo ab mere nikalte hi Mera picha Karne lagi tabiyat Sahi Nahi thi toh jaldi me helmet Lena bhi bhul Gaya aur jab town se nikla hi tha ki Kisi ne mere sir par Kuch bhari mara aur me bike se sath hi baha gir Gaya, aur ab jab meri aankh khuli maar ki bajah se toh mujhe bahut dard ho Raha tha sir me aur uske Kuch der baad mere pet me Kisi ne talbar ghusa Di muh bandha toh awaz Nahi Nikal rahi thi phir usne Bo talbar Nikal Di aur bahut jayda dard hua phir Kai Baar mere pet me talbar Mari gayi me phir se dard se behosh ho Gaya.
Thanks for reading....
 
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Secretshiva1 said:
Update -3
Abhi forensic ki report aane me time tha to police baaki ke angle bhi investigate Karne lagi aur agle din dukaan kholi gayi, andar sab Kuch Normal tha Uske baad dukaan ke cctv footage dekhe Gaye toh pata Chala ki missing se do din pehle Mera Kisi se dukaan par bahut jhagda hua par hath Nahi uthe toh log jama Nahi hui bas but jhagda Kadi bada tha. Ye baat chacha ko pata chali toh chote chacha be Kaha jayiye aur pakad lijiye unhe, police bataya ki aaj Subha hi Inn baaki logo Ka bhi missing report register hui hai hum unhe dhudhne ki poori kosish karenge.
Udhar Ghar par Raat ko koi Sahi se so bhi Nahi pata aur subhe hotel hi papa Ka phone aa Gaya aur unhone Kaha ki Raat ko Bura Sapna Dekha ki shiva khatre me hai Kaha hai bo.itna sunte hi maa Ka Rona phir suru hi Gaya aur ab papa ki aur bhi dar lagne laga toh chachi ne phone leke bataya ki kya hua jise sunkar papa toh bokhla hi Gaye aur Bo turant agli train se baha se aane lage.
Par innsab se dur takreeban 500 kilometers dur ek sunsaan jagah par Kuch log ek admi ko bahut buri Tarah mar rahe the par chehra Dhaka hone se pehchan Nahi ho rahi this aur pata Nahi kyu koi aawaz bhi Nahi aa rahi thi Bo lag 2 ghante tak marte rahe aur thak kar jaane lage(Bo chaar aadmi the toh a1 a2.....)likhoonga.
A1-boss isse niche toh utar den
A3- kyu be tera kya damad lagta hai.
A2-nahi Bhai par niche utar detection hai aur dekhte hai ab jinda hai ya mar gaya.
A4-boss Sahi keh Raha hai ye
A3 ko bhi ye baat Sahi lagi aur uss ko niche utara gaya
aur jab Uske upar se kapda hataya gay toh ye toh shiva hi tha Khun laga hone ki bajah se pata bhi Nahi chal Raha tha har jagah se Khun Nikal Raha tha chehre se.
Un logo ne usske haat pair bandh rakhe the aur muh bhi band tha,phir in logo ne shiva ke upar thoda paani dala aur usse hosh me laye.
Shiva ki najar se...
Jab me dukaan se nikla toh tab tak sab thik tha sirf ek baat ki chod kar ki ek kaali Bina number ki caar Jo Subha se khadi thi Bo ab mere nikalte hi Mera picha Karne lagi tabiyat Sahi Nahi thi toh jaldi me helmet Lena bhi bhul Gaya aur jab town se nikla hi tha ki Kisi ne mere sir par Kuch bhari mara aur me bike se sath hi baha gir Gaya, aur ab jab meri aankh khuli maar ki bajah se toh mujhe bahut dard ho Raha tha sir me aur uske Kuch der baad mere pet me Kisi ne talbar ghusa Di muh bandha toh awaz Nahi Nikal rahi thi phir usne Bo talbar Nikal Di aur bahut jayda dard hua phir Kai Baar mere pet me talbar Mari gayi me phir se dard se behosh ho Gaya.
Thanks for reading....
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Fantastic update Bhai great job ..and Bhai khani ko jitna triller or suspense daloge story read krne utha hi mjaa aata hai....anyway best of luck for next update ..
Waiting for next
 
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