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Fantasy Shiva the common man

Should i continued the story or ,it fills forced on you guys

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Avir

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Secretshiva1 said:
Update-20
Phir kuch der aise hi baat hoti rahi phir me deepak se kal milne ka bol kar kirti ke sath nikal aaya ghar ke liye.
Ab aage...
Deepak se mil kar jab mein aur kirti ghar pahooche ghar me sabne khana khaya aur phir mein room me aa kar aaram karne laga ki tabhi mera phone baja, mene screen par dekha toh PRIVATE NUMBER show ho raha tha. mein usse baat ki aur phir phone rakh kar so gaya.
Agle din
Subah ko jab mein utha toh sabhi abhi tak so rahe the, mein chat par chala gaya. Yaha roj ki tarah koi bhi nahi tha mein ek chair rakh kar baha chat par hi beth gaya. Aur aaj ke sapne ke baare me sochne laga.
Sapne me-
Yaha par ek ladka jungle me ek tree ke paas khada tha jiska chera nahi dikh raha tha. Charo aur jungle ki shanti phaili hui thi ki Achanak iss shanti ko chirte hue ek teer uss ladke ki taraf aa rahi hoti hai jab teer ek dum paas aa jati hai toh ye ladka badi hi teji se uss teer ko pakad leta hai.
Phir do teer ek saath aati hai jise bhi ye ladka kafi achhe se pakad kar phek deta hai.
Phir do teer aur aati hai jise pakad kar ladka jaise hi phek raha hota hai ki Achanak se do aur teer uske dono hathon me lag jaati hai aur uss shant jungle me ek chikh goonj jati hai.
Phir teero ka aana aur tej hota jata hai bo ladka apni puri kosish lar raha hota hai unhe rokne ki par teer itne jaldi jaldi aa rahe the ki rok pana muskil hota ja raha tha.
Aalhir teero ka aana tab jake ruka jab uss ladke ke poore body me har jagah kai saare teer dhans chuke the.
Phir se entry hoti hai uss thode iss aadmi ki

Phir se bo isara karta hai aur ek saath baha kai ninja aa jate hai pedon ke piche se phir unme se ek aata uss ladke ko check karta hai, jab use yakeen ho jata hai ye mar gaya toh wo phir se usse utha ke usi bade se hall ke chote se kua me daal deta hai aur iss baar phir bo mara hua ladka thodi der me uss kue se achanak bahar ko chalang lagata hua nikalta hai.
Aur meri aankh khul jati hai.
Mein chair par se uth kar dekhta hu.phir niche jakar dekha toh sabhi log jaag chuke the. phir sabhi fresh ho kar breakfast karne table par ikhtha hote hai.sab breakfast kar rahe hote hai ki tabhi mera phone bajta hai.
Phone deepak ka tha
Mein- hello.
Deepak- aur mere lal kaha hai.
Mein- ghar par hu bas nashta kar raha hu.
Deepak- tabhi me sochu abhi tak koi gaali kaise na di maalik ne.
Mein- phone kaise kiya janab.
Deepak- aaj mein dukaan se chuthhi le raha hu aur tu mere paas aa raha hai aaj bo bhi akela.
Mein- thik hai kaha milega?
Deepak- mere ghar ke paas aa jaiyo.
Mein- ok.
Phir mene phone kaat diya.
Kirti- kiska phone tha?
Mein- deepak ka, keh raha hai aaj bo aur me ghumne ja rahe hai.
Kirti- wow maja aayega me bhi chal...
Mein- sochna bhi mat deepak ne saaf mana kiya hai me akele hi aau.
Kirti- toh me yaha kya karoongi.
Badi mami- tum na ek kaam karo taiyar ho jao aaj hum dono shopping jayenge aaj inki bhi chutti hai.
Bade mama- aee chutti hai toh kya mein nahi ja raha kisi ke saath shopping par.
Ye sun kar badi maami ka chera thoda sa utar gaya, jo ki nani ne dekh liya.
Nani- kaise nahi jayega mein bhi dekhti hu, tu bahu ko kese naraj karta hai.
Ye sun kar maami khush ho gayi kyun ki unki chal kaam kar gayi thi.
Asal me badi maami hamesha hi aisa karti hai jis kaam ke liye mama mana kar dete hai bo hi kaam ke liye maami nani ke saamne phir se poochti hai aur jaise hi mama mana kare maami naraj hone ka natak karti hai phir nani mama ko dant kar maami ki baat manwa hi deti hai.
Bade mama- dekho mammi mein nahi jane bala iske saath, ye hamesha hi aisa karti hai ab delkho kaise has rahi hai. Mujhe dekh kar me nahi jane bala.
Mein- mama, maami apko nahi aapke piche dekh kar has rahi hai.
Jaise hi mama kuch kehte ki nana ne unka kaan pakd liya.
Nana- haa toh kon kaha nahi jayega.
Mama- aaah aah papa chodo dard ho raha hai arre mene toh kaha ki ye taiyaar ho jaye me jaoonga iske saath.
Kirti- bhaiya inke saath kya matlab aap mujhe nahi le jaaoge.keh kar kirti bhi naraj hone ki acting karne lagi.
Nana kaan ko aur kas kar pakadte hue.
Nana- kar diya na kirti beti ko naraja ab teri saja ye hai ki tu dono ko leke jayeag aur dono ko ghuma kar layega.bol le jayega na dono ko.
Mama- haa haa le jaoonga dono ko ab toh kaan chod do.
Nani- ye achhi baat hai tu inko le ja shopping kara de aur raat ko dinner kara kar aaram se aa jana. Me shiva ka aur apna khana hi bana loongi.
Mein- nahi nani mera bhi mat banana ab deepak ke saath ja raha hu pata nahi kya plan ho uske toh mera bhi rehne do. Mein bhi bahar hi kha loonga.
Nani- sahi hai beta tu bhi ghum aa deepak ke saath jab tu nahi tha toh bo bichara bahut udaas ho gaya tha roj hi phone karke tere baare me poochta tha.
Sab udaas ho gaye bo din yaad kar ke.
Kirti- kya baat hai maami ji aaj sabhi ko bahar bhej rahi ho kahi aisa toh nahi ki aaj mere liye ek aur bhai lane ka plan bana rahi ho.
Nani- (gussa hone ki acting karte hue) ruk tu abhi batati hu bhai ki bachhi. Abhi batati hu.
Phir sab ke chehre par khushi ki lahar tair jati hai.
Phir sab log taiyar ho kar nikal jate hai.
Mama, maami, kirti, aur mama ka ladka ye sabhi alaga car se nikal gaye shopping karne.
Aur mein- nikal gaya deepak ke ghar ko.
Deepak ke ghar ke bahar pahooch kar horn bajata hu.toh deepak balkani me aata hai.
Deepak- ruk aaya abhi.
Mein- jaldi aa.
Deepak- papa mammi me jaa raha hu ghumne saam tak aaoonga.
Deepak's Dad- thik hai beta jao.
Deepak- toh me jau.
Deepak's Dad- haa ja.
Deepak's mom- aree kuch paise toh do isse kaise jayega ye.
Deepak's Dad- ohh ye baat hai toh jaake le andar hi toh rakhe hai.
Deepak- agar khud hi lene hote toh itna kehta aapse.
Deepak's Dad- le liya ka r khud, achha kitne chahiye.
Deepak- de do jo thik lage.
Deepak's Dad- ye le 50 rupee. Ja aish kar aur haa bacha laiyo kuch inme se.
Deepak's mom- arre kaisi baat kar rahe ho itne din baad beta kahi ja raha hai jabse shiva gaya hai aur aaj bhi aap majak kar rahe ho.
Mein- kon kaha gaya hai aunty ji.
Deepak's mom- (bina meri taraf dekhe) hamara beta shiva...
Bolte bolte ruk gayi.aur uppar dekhe hue.
Aa gaya beta tu kaisa hai kaha tha bata na.
Mein- arre aunty kaha tha chodo ab jaldi se paise do hum dono ghumne ja rahe hai.
Deepak's mom- haa ruk abhi layi.
phir unhone 1 lakh laa kar deepak ko diye.
Deepak's mom- dekh shiva ka pait jaldi kharab ho jata hai toh kuch bhi kachra mat khila diyo aur dekh kitna dubla ho gaya hai dhayan rakhiyon ab iska.
Mein- aunty ab baaki baat baad me hum lait ho rahe hai.
Aee paise mil gaye na ab chal jaldi bahut lait ho rahe hai pehle se hi.
Phir mein aur deepak nikal gaye aunty uncle ko bye bol kar.

Aaj ke liye itna hi dosto.next update me kuch naya karne ki koshish hai so tiayaar rehna.
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Nice one , laikin ghumne jaane k liye 1lakh.
Agar shoping pe jayenge to 1Cr de shayed.
 
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