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Fantasy Shiva the common man

Should i continued the story or ,it fills forced on you guys


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Siraj Patel

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Hello, Ladies :kiss: & Gentleman, :hi:
We are so glad to Introduce Ultimate Story Contest of this year.

Jaise ki aap sabhi Jante Hain is baar Hum USC contest chala rahe hain aur Kuch Din pahle hi Humne Rules & Queries Thread ka announce kar diya tha aur ab Ultimate Story Contest ka Entry Thread air kar diya hai jo 17th, Nov 2019, 11:59 PM ko close hoga.

Khair ab main point Par Aate Hain Jaisa ki entry thread aired ho chuka hai isliye aap Sabhi readers aur writers se Meri personally request hai ki is contest mein aap Jarur participate kare aur
Apni kalpnao ko shabdon ka rasta dikha ke yaha pesh kare ho sakta hai log use pasand kare.
Aur Jo readers nahi likhna chahte wo bakiyo ki story padhke review de sakte hai mujhe bahut Khushi Hogi agar aap is contest mein participate lekar apni story likhenge to.

Ye aap Sabhi Ke liye ek bahut hi sunhara avsar hai isliye Aage Bade aur apni Kalpanao ko shabdon Mein likhkar Duniya Ko dikha De.

Ye ek short story contest hai jisme Minimum 800 words se maximum 6000 words tak allowed hai itne hi words mein apni story complete Karni Hogi, Aur ek hi post mein complete karna hai aur
Entry Thread mein post karna hai.
I hope aap mujhe niraash nahi Karenge aur is contest Mein Jarur participate Lenge.


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On Behalf of Admin Team
Regards :-
Siraj Patel


 

Secretshiva1

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Yaha raat ke 10 baje,
Mein Deepak ka intezaar me hotel ke dinning launge me kar raha tha aur soch raha tha deepak ke baare me, ki kaise mera sabase pyara dost jo sirf logo ko pyar hi karna janta tha aaj kya ban gaya aaj bo dost ek saitaan ban chuka hai jise ab sirf aur sirf nafrat karna hi aata hai. Aur aaj usi nafrat ka shikar hui thi ek aur lachar ladki jiski ki zindagi aaj deepak kharab karne par tula tha.
Abhi mein ye sab baate sochte hue apni coffee pi hi raha tha ki Deepak ka message aaya. Jise padkar mein deepak ke room me jane laga mene jaise hi gate par knock kiya toh andar se abaz aayi.
Deepak- aaja bhai andar aaja darbaja khula hai.
Mein- nahi tu bahar aa jana jab tera ye sab khatam ho jaye.
Deepak turant darbaja khol ke mujhe andar bula leta hai.
Andar ka nazara dekh ke toh me shock hi ho gaya, anadar bo ladki bed par bandhi hui padi thi uske body par ek safed chaadar padi hui thi. Jise dekh ke meine turant Deepak se poocha.
Mein- ye kya kiya maar diya ladki ko.

Pehle toh aap sabhi se sorry itni lait update ke liye.
But guys honestly last update ke baad mujhe realise hua ki ye kahani mere liye kitni important hai. So mene thoda sa time liya.
I know ki aap sab ko intejaar karna pada par yakeen maniye chahe kuch bhi hi jaye ye kahani puri hoke hi rahegi.
Pls guys stay tuned.
Reply with your priceless opinion.
Thanks you guys.....
 
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Secretshiva1

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Mein- ye kya kiya maar diya ladki ko.
Ab aage....
Deepak- nahi re abhi jinda hai. Par ab sex ke naam se hi dar jayegi.
Mein- kyu karta hai aisa kya mil jata hai tujhe apni havas mita di aur ho gaya gussa thanda.
Deepak(gusse me)- nafrat karta hu mein uss naam se aur uss naam baliyon se.
Mein- janta hu bhai par iss bichari ka kya dosh jiski tune zindgi kharab kar di.
Deepak- kya zindagi kharab kar di haaa, kuch nahi kiya maine, sirf drink me kuch sex pills mila ke khila di aur haath pair bandh kar chod diya bed par.
Mein- bas itne me hi behosh ho gayi kya.
Deepak- kisne kaha sirf bed par bandhne se behosh ho gayi, mene isse bed se bandh diya pura nude aur samne T.V. me porn chala diya. Aur baaki ke kaam toh usi porn ne kar diya bechari orgasam me hi behosh ho gayi.
Mein- phir ab kya.
Deepak- ab kya kuch nahi jab ye hosh me aayegi tab isse 1 lakh aur ek note milega.
Mein- kaisa note?
Deepak- note sorry ka.
Mein- kis liye sorry?
Deepak- aaj raat iske sath kiye behaviour ke liye.
Mein(shocked)- yeh chamtkaar kaise hua, matlab ab tak toh sirf tu ladkiyon ko khilona hi samjhta tha ab ye sab kya hai.
Deepak- sab teri bajah se hi hua hai, jis din tu mujhe chod ke chala gaya toh ek dum akela pad gaya tha me. Mahino tak na kisi se milna bas tere aur Sachin ke sath bitaye vo time hi yaad kar kar ke rota rehta tha. Phir ek din didi ne samjhaya ki agar me teri yaad me rota rahoonga toh tujhe kitna dukh hoga aur bas tabhi se mene khud ko hi shiva bana diya har problem ka simple aur satisfied solutions nikal ne laga aur dekh aaj me kitna badal gaya hu.
Deepak ki baat sun kar meri bhi ankh nam ho gayi phir khuf ko samhalte huye.
Mein- chal pagal mujhe miss kar raha tha arey tera dost koi chota bacha thodi na hai jo kho jayega.

Thanks for reading guys..


 
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Mein- ye kya kiya maar diya ladki ko.
Ab aage....
Deepak- nahi re abhi jinda hai. Par ab sex ke naam se hi dar jayegi.
Mein- kyu karta hai aisa kya mil jata hai tujhe apni havas mita di aur ho gaya gussa thanda.
Deepak(gusse me)- nafrat karta hu mein uss naam se aur uss naam baliyon se.
Mein- janta hu bhai par iss bichari ka kya dosh jiski tune zindgi kharab kar di.
Deepak- kya zindagi kharab kar di haaa, kuch nahi kiya maine, sirf drink me kuch sex pills mila ke khila di aur haath pair bandh kar chod diya bed par.
Mein- bas itne me hi behosh ho gayi kya.
Deepak- kisne kaha sirf bed par bandhne se behosh ho gayi, mene isse bed se bandh diya pura nude aur samne T.V. me porn chala diya. Aur baaki ke kaam toh usi porn ne kar diya bechari orgasam me hi behosh ho gayi.
Mein- phir ab kya.
Deepak- ab kya kuch nahi jab ye hosh me aayegi tab isse 1 lakh aur ek note milega.
Mein- kaisa note?
Deepak- note sorry ka.
Mein- kis liye sorry?
Deepak- aaj raat iske sath kiye behaviour ke liye.
Mein(shocked)- yeh chamtkaar kaise hua, matlab ab tak toh sirf tu ladkiyon ko khilona hi samjhta tha ab ye sab kya hai.
Deepak- sab teri bajah se hi hua hai, jis din tu mujhe chod ke chala gaya toh ek dum akela pad gaya tha me. Mahino tak na kisi se milna bas tere aur Sachin ke sath bitaye vo time hi yaad kar kar ke rota rehta tha. Phir ek din didi ne samjhaya ki agar me teri yaad me rota rahoonga toh tujhe kitna dukh hoga aur bas tabhi se mene khud ko hi shiva bana diya har problem ka simple aur satisfied solutions nikal ne laga aur dekh aaj me kitna badal gaya hu.
Deepak ki baat sun kar meri bhi ankh nam ho gayi phir khuf ko samhalte huye.
Mein- chal pagal mujhe miss kar raha tha arey tera dost koi chota bacha thodi na hai jo kho jayega.

Thanks for reading guys..

nice one
 

ashish_1982_in

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Nice story bhai lekin update bhaut late aa rhe hai is liye story ka interest kam ho jata hai agar aap regular updates dete rehoge to aapko review bhi milenge
 
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