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so bhai log mai hu apka dost rebel.. hazir hu ek new kahani ke sath.. i know ki meri pehli story adhuri hai phir bhi ye story shuru kar rha hu..
ye kahani ek ese ladke ki hai jisko dard aur takleef ke alawa ku6 dekhne ko nahi mila.. par ek din use esa kuchh mila jisne sab badal diya and use bana dia ek yoddha..
SHIVAM THE WARRIOR
CHARECTERS
SHIVAM HERO AGE 22.. abhi abhi apna job join kia hai.. hight 6'6" ..
SHILPI shivam ki best friend and guide.. age 26 .. ye ek anath hai and shivam ke sath hi rehti hai.. use martial arts bahot pasand hai and she is bit expert in street fighting also.. iske bhole chehre par mat jana ye silently apki band baja kar nikal legi and apko pata bhi nhi chalega
krishna.. age 22.. kehne ko shivam ki dushman but dil se soft nature ki.. and shivam ko kabhi directly support nhi karti.. acts like secret guardian for shivam and shilpi..
baki ke charecters story me aate rahege and they will be introduced..
update 00.. URENOS THE UNDIENG
kehte hai ki hamare brahmand ka janm ek bade dhamake se hua tha jise big bang bhi kaha jata hai.. par koi nahi janta ki brahmand ki utpatti ki prakriya kisne ki.. kon tha jisne sab banaya.. jawab kahi na antrix me hi kahi dabe hue hai...
ye shabd the professor kaustubh ke jo m.j.patil college of space science me abhi lecture le rahe the..
hamara hero shivam unka hi student tha and abhi unke gyan ki ganga me khud ko dubo rha tha..
shivam : to kya sir hame puri jankari mil sakti hai?
prof. : sach kahu to puri ki puri jankari kisi ke pas nahi hai.. par ek bat zarur hai ki universe ka janmdata kahi na kahi betha hua hai..
tabhi lecture khatm hone ki bell baj jati hai and wo chale jate hai and shivam apni hi soch me ghum ho jata hai.. ye aj ke din ka last lecture tha to wo apna bag uthata hai and parking me jakar apni bike nikalkar ghar ke lie nikal lia..
shivam ka ghar baht hi sundar aur manmohak tha.. outer area me sundar sa garden tha jaha par chhota sa lake bhi banaya hua tha..
ghar me abhi shilpi drawing room me laptop pe kam kar rahi thi.. door knock hone par shilpi ne door khola and shivam andar aa gya..
shilpi ne usko pani dia and wo fresh ho kar chala gaya.. esa nahi tha ke shivam and shilpi ek dusre se bat nahi karte the bas shivam ko kabhi kabhi silent rehna hi pasand tha.. sham ho gai and dono ne dinner kia and dono apne room me jakar sone lage..
at mid night shivam so raha tha and usne sapne me dekha ki charo tarf aag hi aag lagi hui hai.. asman se dher sare astroids dharti par gir rhe hai un sab ke bich ek bhayanak insan khada tha.. use dekh kar use insan to nahi keh sakte the..
uske samne shivam khada tha bahot hi buri tarha ghayal avastha me.. usne ek hi punch me shivam ki sari haddia tod di..and wo bola tum kabhi bhi judgement day rok nahi paoge..
and tabhi shivam ek chikh ke sath uth gaya and uski chikh sun kar shilpi bhi room me aa gai thi.. shivam pasine se bhig chuka tha..
shilpi ne use puchha.. ''kya aaj bhi wohi sapna aaya tha? " shivam ne han me apna sir hila dia.. uske muh se ek hi shabd nikla URANOS..
kon hai urenos? kya matlab hai shivam ko dikhne wale sapno ka?
bhailog is story ka nexxt update thodi der me upload karunga
NEXT DAY MORNING 7BAJE JAB SHILPI KI AANKH KHULI TO USKE CHEHRE PAR EK PYARI SI MUSKAN AA GAI.. SHIVAM USKO HUG KIE HUE USKE SINE PE APNA SAR RAKH KAR SO RAHA THA AND SOTE HUE WO BAHOT MASOOM LAG RAHA THA..
USKE BAD USNE BAT NAHI KI JYADA AND NASHTA KARNE LAGA.. AT 9AM WO APNA BAG LE KAR NIKAL HI RAHA THA KI USKE DIL ME KYA AYA WO GATE SE WAPIS AYA AND DINING TABLE PE BETHI SHILPI KE PAS GAYA AND USKE GAAL PE KISS KAR DIA AND BINA KUCHH KAHE WAHA SE NIKAL GAYA..
BECHARI SHILPI SHARM AND KHUSHI KE MARE KUCHH KARNE YA BOLNE KI HALAT ME HI NAHI RAHI THI..
image upload
ye kahani ek ese ladke ki hai jisko dard aur takleef ke alawa ku6 dekhne ko nahi mila.. par ek din use esa kuchh mila jisne sab badal diya and use bana dia ek yoddha..
SHIVAM THE WARRIOR
CHARECTERS
SHIVAM HERO AGE 22.. abhi abhi apna job join kia hai.. hight 6'6" ..
SHILPI shivam ki best friend and guide.. age 26 .. ye ek anath hai and shivam ke sath hi rehti hai.. use martial arts bahot pasand hai and she is bit expert in street fighting also.. iske bhole chehre par mat jana ye silently apki band baja kar nikal legi and apko pata bhi nhi chalega
krishna.. age 22.. kehne ko shivam ki dushman but dil se soft nature ki.. and shivam ko kabhi directly support nhi karti.. acts like secret guardian for shivam and shilpi..
baki ke charecters story me aate rahege and they will be introduced..
update 00.. URENOS THE UNDIENG
kehte hai ki hamare brahmand ka janm ek bade dhamake se hua tha jise big bang bhi kaha jata hai.. par koi nahi janta ki brahmand ki utpatti ki prakriya kisne ki.. kon tha jisne sab banaya.. jawab kahi na antrix me hi kahi dabe hue hai...
ye shabd the professor kaustubh ke jo m.j.patil college of space science me abhi lecture le rahe the..
hamara hero shivam unka hi student tha and abhi unke gyan ki ganga me khud ko dubo rha tha..
shivam : to kya sir hame puri jankari mil sakti hai?
prof. : sach kahu to puri ki puri jankari kisi ke pas nahi hai.. par ek bat zarur hai ki universe ka janmdata kahi na kahi betha hua hai..
tabhi lecture khatm hone ki bell baj jati hai and wo chale jate hai and shivam apni hi soch me ghum ho jata hai.. ye aj ke din ka last lecture tha to wo apna bag uthata hai and parking me jakar apni bike nikalkar ghar ke lie nikal lia..
shivam ka ghar baht hi sundar aur manmohak tha.. outer area me sundar sa garden tha jaha par chhota sa lake bhi banaya hua tha..
ghar me abhi shilpi drawing room me laptop pe kam kar rahi thi.. door knock hone par shilpi ne door khola and shivam andar aa gya..
shilpi ne usko pani dia and wo fresh ho kar chala gaya.. esa nahi tha ke shivam and shilpi ek dusre se bat nahi karte the bas shivam ko kabhi kabhi silent rehna hi pasand tha.. sham ho gai and dono ne dinner kia and dono apne room me jakar sone lage..
at mid night shivam so raha tha and usne sapne me dekha ki charo tarf aag hi aag lagi hui hai.. asman se dher sare astroids dharti par gir rhe hai un sab ke bich ek bhayanak insan khada tha.. use dekh kar use insan to nahi keh sakte the..
uske samne shivam khada tha bahot hi buri tarha ghayal avastha me.. usne ek hi punch me shivam ki sari haddia tod di..and wo bola tum kabhi bhi judgement day rok nahi paoge..
and tabhi shivam ek chikh ke sath uth gaya and uski chikh sun kar shilpi bhi room me aa gai thi.. shivam pasine se bhig chuka tha..
shilpi ne use puchha.. ''kya aaj bhi wohi sapna aaya tha? " shivam ne han me apna sir hila dia.. uske muh se ek hi shabd nikla URANOS..
kon hai urenos? kya matlab hai shivam ko dikhne wale sapno ka?
bhailog is story ka nexxt update thodi der me upload karunga
UPDATE 01.. THE FIRST KISS...
SHIVAM BAHOT DARA HUA THA LIKE NEVER BEFORE.. ESA NAHI THA KE USE YE SARE DREAMS PEHLE NAHI AATE THE PAR IS BAR THEY WERE LIKE VERY REALISTIK.. WO SHILPI KI GOD ME SAR RAKH KAR SO GAYA USKA HATH PAKDE HUE AND SHILPI BHI WOHI BETHI RAHI AND THODI DER BAD WO BHI WAHI SHIVAM KE SIDE PAR HI SO GAI..
NEXT DAY MORNING 7BAJE JAB SHILPI KI AANKH KHULI TO USKE CHEHRE PAR EK PYARI SI MUSKAN AA GAI.. SHIVAM USKO HUG KIE HUE USKE SINE PE APNA SAR RAKH KAR SO RAHA THA AND SOTE HUE WO BAHOT MASOOM LAG RAHA THA..
PAR SHILPI ACHHI TARHA SE WAKIF THI IS CHEHRE KE PICHHE KE DARD AND USKE GUSSE KO JO USNE BARSO SE APNE ANDAR DABAKE RAKHA HUA THA.. USNE SHIVAM KO SIDE PE SULA DIA AND JANE LAGI TO SHIVAM NE NIND ME HI USKA HATH PAKAD LIA AND USKO FIR SE BITHA DIA.. AND USKI KAMAR KO PAKAD KAR SO GAYA..
KEHTE HAI KI JAHA PE PYAR HOTA HAI WAHA PAR SHABDO KI JARURAT NAHI PADTI INSAN EK DUSRE KO SAMAJ HI JATE HAI BINA BOLE.. ESA HI IN DONO KA THA.. SHILPI SHIVAM KO PICHHLE 3SAAL SE PYAR KARTI THI PAR KABHI KEH NAHI PAI THI.. THODI DER BAD SHIVAM KI NIND KHULI TO USNE KHUD KI HALAT DEKHI TO WO SHARMA GAYA AND BINA KUCHH BOLE BATHROOM ME GHUS GAYA.. YE HAR BAR KA THA JAB BHI ESA KUCHH HOTA THA TAB WO KUCHH BOL NAHI PATA THA.. KAHI NA KAHI WO BHI SHILPI SE BAHOT PYAR KARTA THA..
1HRS. BAD WO DONO READY HO GAYA COLLEGE JANE KE LIE AND NICHE BREAKFAST KE LIE SHILPI KE SATH BETH GAYA.. WO SHILPI KE SATH BETH TO GAYA THA PAR WO KAL RAT ME USNE NIND ME SHILPI KE SINE PAR SAR RAKH KAR SONE WALI BAT YAD AANE KE WAJAH SE WO THODA SHY FEEL KAR RAHA THA AND SHAYAD SHILPI BHI IS BAT SE WAKIF THI IS LIE SHILPI NE HI BAT KARNE KA SOCHA..
SHILPI : SO HERO, AJKA KYA PLAN HAI?
SHIVAM : NOTHING COLLEGE KE BAD OFFICE KA EK CHAKKAR LAGANE KA SOCH RAHA HU TAKI PATA CHALE KI WAHA PAR CHAL KYA RAHA HAI AND NOTHING MUCH..
SHIVAM KE DAD EK MULTINATIONAL ROBOTICS COMPANY KE OWNER THE PAR KISMAT NE UNSE UNKA SAB KUCHH CHHIN LIA THA.. AND UNKE PAS KUCHH NAHI BACHA THA SHIVAM AND UNKI WIFE KE ALAWA.. AND UN DONO KI BHI DEATH KUCHH SAAL PEHLE HO CHUKI THI.. PAR AAJ SHIVAM NE WOHI COMPANY WAPIS PAA KAR USE TOP10 COMPANIES ME NUMBER 1 PAR LA KAR KHADA KAR DIA THA.. YE SAB KESE HUA YE AAGE STORY ME PATA CHALEGA..
USKE BAD USNE BAT NAHI KI JYADA AND NASHTA KARNE LAGA.. AT 9AM WO APNA BAG LE KAR NIKAL HI RAHA THA KI USKE DIL ME KYA AYA WO GATE SE WAPIS AYA AND DINING TABLE PE BETHI SHILPI KE PAS GAYA AND USKE GAAL PE KISS KAR DIA AND BINA KUCHH KAHE WAHA SE NIKAL GAYA..
SHILPI WAS SHOCKED FOR ONCE.. SHILPI NE KABHI YE EXPECT NAHI KIA THA.. WO AND SHIVAM LAST 5SAAL SE DOST THE PAR SHIVAM NE KABHI USE TOUCH NAHI KIA THA NOT THIS WAY.. WO KHUSHI SE PAGAL HO GAI.... THIS WAS HER FIRST MOMENT WHEN HE SHOWED SOME LOVE TO HER.. ESA NAHI THA KI WO USKI CARE NAHI KARTA THA YA USKE LIE KUCHH FEEL NAHI KARTA THA PAR USNE KABHI JATAYA NAHI THA..
BECHARI SHILPI SHARM AND KHUSHI KE MARE KUCHH KARNE YA BOLNE KI HALAT ME HI NAHI RAHI THI.. image upload
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