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bahut accha update tha

 

[Nevil singh]

Update 14 (Veer Ka Excitement)

Sirf grandmaster aur uske sathi hi nahi waha maujud logo ko bhi apne aankho par bishwas nhi ho raha tha unhe aisa lag raha tha jaise unke aankho ke samne koi film chal raha ho jaise villain ke nake ke niche se koi hero heroin ko le jata hai unlogo me se kai to grandmaster aur uske sathiyo ko veer ke pichhe bhagte huye dekh kar man hi man has bhi rahe the. Sabhi ke man me bas ekhi sawal tha ki akhir wo rahsyamayi insan hai kon jise jay ne dollar kah ke bulaya tha jaha ek taraf dollar aur uske sathiyo par sab has rahe the wahi dusri taraf dollar urf veer ki image sanke najro me kisi hero se kam nahi rah gyi thi. Jis tarah se veer ne na sirf secret blood alien ka hathiyar balki uski devil's soul bhi churayi thi us hisab se veer ka kisi viral celebrity ki tarah charcha banna to lazmi tha aur rahi bat grandmaster ki to jo log kuchh samay pahle usse impress the wahi log ab uska majak uda rahe the. Akhir grandmaster ne sirf us secret blood alien ka hathiyar devil's soul ko hi nahi balki apne pass maujud 6 pankho wali baraiya ke devil's soul se bane hathiyar ko bhi kho giya tha to aise me to use sabka majak banana lazmi tha kuchh ko to yaha tak sak tha ki kahi is hadse ke bad grandmaster apna mansik santulan na kho baithe sab logo ke bich chal rahe is discussion me ek bat comman thi aur wo thi dollar ki asali pahchan kya hai. Jab jay ne dollar ka name liya tha tab waha maujud kai log thik se use sun nahi paye the is liye unlogo ko bas doll hi sunayi diya bhale hi sabki sunne me ye name ajib laga par dollar ya doll name ke is adami ne jo karnama kiya tha wo is name se bhi ajib tha. Sab log apas me veer grandmaster aur us secret blood alien ke charcha kar hi rahe the tabhi un sab ka najar grandmaster aur uske sathiyo par padi itani badi har ke wahaj se un sabhi ke chehro me 12 baje the. Unlogo ke aisi halat dekh kar kuchh logo ko to andar se bahut khusi huyi kyuki kahi na kahi wo log bhi grandmaster aur uske sathiyo ke nainsafi ka shikar bane the sayad isi ko karma kahte hai sabko tang karne wala adami ek anjan insan se har gaya tha wo anjan insan unko dhul chata gya tha. Wapas aate hi grandmaster sidha jay ke pass gya aur use dhamkate huye dollar ke bare me sari jankari lene laga usne kaha.

-Tum... tum jante ho na us doll ya dollar jo bhi hai uska name batao kaha rahta hai wo nahi to tum jante ho anjam achha nahi hoga

Grandmaster ko pata tha ki jay ne us adami ko dollar kahke bulaya hai to aisa ho hi nahi sakta hai ki jay us adami ke bare me kuchh bhi nahi janta ho. Grandmaster ke guse se bhara chehra dekh kar jay grandmaster ko dollar se apni pahli mulakat ke bare me batane ke alawa aur koi chara nahi bacha tha waise bhi jay ke pass iske alawa batane ke liye aur tha bhi kya siwaye dollar name ke wo kuchh aur janta bhi to nahi tha. Wo to ye tak bhi nahi janta tha ki dollar ka ye adami dikhta kaisa hai fir wo kaha rahta hai kya karta hai uske bat hi chhod do grandmaster ko jay ke bat par bharosa to nahi tha par wo aur kar bhi kya sakta tha jay avani ke gang ka adami hai aur isiliye grandmaster use jyada dhamka bhi nhi sakta tha. Agar jay uske gang me hota to grandmaster use ulta latka kar sab sach pata kar leta par abhi wo kuchh kar nahi sakta tha aur iski do wajah thi pahli wo avani par apna impression kharab nahi karna chahta tha pahle hi us dollar ke wajah se grandmaster ki image avani ke najar me aisi ki taisi ho gyi thi ab agar wo avani ki gang ke kisi bhi adami ke sath batmiji karta hai to avani usse impress hona dur sayad use apne aas pass bhatakne bhi Na degi. Dusri wajah ye thi ki grandmaster ke pass aisa kuchh proof nahi tha jisse ki wo jay ke bato ko wo galat thahra sake aise me uske pass nirash hoke dev ashram wapas jane ke alava koi aur rasta bacha bhi nahi tha. Is dollar ne use bahubali se jony leaver bana diya tha jise dekho wahi usko dekh kar has raha tha par ye bat alag hai ki kisi ke bhi itani himat nahi thi ki wo grandmaster ke muh par hase. Lekin apne kamre ko andar se band karke baithe grandmaster ne muthiya bhichte huye khud se wada kiya.

-Dollar teri wajah se aaj sabki najaro me meri ijat aisi ki taisi huyi hai aur to aur avani par mera impression bhi kharab ho gya kasam hai mujhe jis din tum mere hath lag gaya na beta usi din tere tukde tukde kar ke unhi tukdo se yaha ke alien treat dunga nahi tomera name bhi grandmaster nahi..

Ab wo apne is Wade ko pura kar payega ya nahi mujhe nahi pata par ha filhal abhi kuchh samay ke liye dollar ya doll grandmaster aur us secret blood alien aur secret blood alien ke devil's soul pure dev ashram me sabse popular topic the. Is taraf grandmaster ke kasam se anjan veer pahad ke pass ek gadha khodne me byast tha wo janta tha ki grandmaster aur uska sathi itani asani se to har nahi man manege isliye usne apne sunhare kulhadi ko us gadhe me chhupane ka decision liya. Is tarah se grandmaster aur uske sathi dev ashram me baki logo ki tarah uski bhi talashi lete hai to unhe veer ke pass kuchh milega nahi aur na unlogo ko veer par sak hoga kyuki abhi bhi veer unlogo se mukabla karne ke liye puri tarah se taiyar nahi hai. Bhale hi is samay veer apna roop badal kar nikal gya ho lekin roop badalne ka bhi ek time period hota hai wo kuchh hi samay ke liye apne badle huye roop me rah sakta hai abhi uske jin itne strong nahi hai ki wo itne takatwar alien ke devil's soul se jyada der tak apne badle huye roop me rah sake. Jitna takatwar alien hoga veer ko utna jyada jin point aur utani hi takatwar body ki jarurat hogi is samay veer ke pass 8 secret jin poin hai aur itne jin points ke sath veer 8 minutes tak hi apne badle huye roop me rah sakta hai itna samay grandmaster aur uske sathiyo se bach nikalne ke liye kafi tha. Lekin un logo ka mukabla karne ke liye use aur jin point ki jarurat thi itne kam samay me to ek ya do ko hi mar payega un sab se mukabla karne ke liye use abhi aur strong hone ki jarurat hai ab devil's soul ko to koi tabtak nahi dekh sakta jabtak ki use bulaya na jaye par sunhari kulhadi to invisible nahi ho sakti na aaj nahi to kal sabko uske pass sunhari kulhadi dikh hi jayegi. Iske sath usne grandmaster hi nahi avani aur bhim ke sath bhi panga le liya hai bhale hi us secret blood alien ko admara us grandmaster ne kiya ho par is mission me teeno gang samil the isliye us sunahari kulhadi ko milne se un teeno gang ko barabar ka fayda hota par aisa huya nahi aur ab veer ne ek nahi teeno gang se dusmani mol leli hai. To aise me samajhdari isime hai ki is sunahri kulhadi ko veer isi surkshit jagah pe chhupa de jabtak ki is sunahari kulhadi ka achha kharidar nahi milta tabtak yaha ye sabke najro se safe rahegi.

-Is sunahari kulhadi ko bech kar to mujhe 2 crore to asani se mil jayenge aur mere pass jo sunahare kachhuye ka jo saman pada hai usse mai asani se 1 crore tak kama sakta hu yani ki ghar ki problem to solve ho jayegi par abhi ke liye mujhe is kulhadi ko yahi chhupana hoga ek bar jab ye situation cantrol me aa jayegi tab mai janta hu ki ye sari chije kaha bechani hai...

US sunahri kulhadi ko jamin me gadte huye veer bahut hi excited tha yahi excitement uske chehre par najar aa rahi thi fir wo jis maksad ke liye taitan grah aaya tha wo pura jo hone wala tha bhale secret blood devil's soul ke mukable secret blood gear utna kimati nahi tha is liye veer itna sure tha ki is kulhadi ke 2 crore to mil hi jayenge rahi bat secret blood alien ke devil's soul ki to use bechne ke bare me to veer soch bhi nahi sakta. Yahi to ek chij hai jo dev ashram me bane rahne aur success hasil karne me uski madat karegi ise bechna matalab sone ke ande dene wale murgi ko marna hoga aur veer aisa bilkul bhi nahi chahta tha uske liye dev ashram me ek STATUS hasil karna itna hi jaruri ho gya tha jitna yaha aane se pahle 3 crore rupay kamana tha ab uske aur 3 crore rupay me jyada duri nahi bachi hai tab wo apna sara focus physical development me laga sakta hai par jis jagah pe uske itne dusman hai us jagah pe veer kaise survive karega ye dekhna dilchasp hoga.

Fantastic update sahiba

 

[Nevil singh]

Update 14 (Veer Ka Excitement)

Sirf grandmaster aur uske sathi hi nahi waha maujud logo ko bhi apne aankho par bishwas nhi ho raha tha unhe aisa lag raha tha jaise unke aankho ke samne koi film chal raha ho jaise villain ke nake ke niche se koi hero heroin ko le jata hai unlogo me se kai to grandmaster aur uske sathiyo ko veer ke pichhe bhagte huye dekh kar man hi man has bhi rahe the. Sabhi ke man me bas ekhi sawal tha ki akhir wo rahsyamayi insan hai kon jise jay ne dollar kah ke bulaya tha jaha ek taraf dollar aur uske sathiyo par sab has rahe the wahi dusri taraf dollar urf veer ki image sanke najro me kisi hero se kam nahi rah gyi thi. Jis tarah se veer ne na sirf secret blood alien ka hathiyar balki uski devil's soul bhi churayi thi us hisab se veer ka kisi viral celebrity ki tarah charcha banna to lazmi tha aur rahi bat grandmaster ki to jo log kuchh samay pahle usse impress the wahi log ab uska majak uda rahe the. Akhir grandmaster ne sirf us secret blood alien ka hathiyar devil's soul ko hi nahi balki apne pass maujud 6 pankho wali baraiya ke devil's soul se bane hathiyar ko bhi kho giya tha to aise me to use sabka majak banana lazmi tha kuchh ko to yaha tak sak tha ki kahi is hadse ke bad grandmaster apna mansik santulan na kho baithe sab logo ke bich chal rahe is discussion me ek bat comman thi aur wo thi dollar ki asali pahchan kya hai. Jab jay ne dollar ka name liya tha tab waha maujud kai log thik se use sun nahi paye the is liye unlogo ko bas doll hi sunayi diya bhale hi sabki sunne me ye name ajib laga par dollar ya doll name ke is adami ne jo karnama kiya tha wo is name se bhi ajib tha. Sab log apas me veer grandmaster aur us secret blood alien ke charcha kar hi rahe the tabhi un sab ka najar grandmaster aur uske sathiyo par padi itani badi har ke wahaj se un sabhi ke chehro me 12 baje the. Unlogo ke aisi halat dekh kar kuchh logo ko to andar se bahut khusi huyi kyuki kahi na kahi wo log bhi grandmaster aur uske sathiyo ke nainsafi ka shikar bane the sayad isi ko karma kahte hai sabko tang karne wala adami ek anjan insan se har gaya tha wo anjan insan unko dhul chata gya tha. Wapas aate hi grandmaster sidha jay ke pass gya aur use dhamkate huye dollar ke bare me sari jankari lene laga usne kaha.

-Tum... tum jante ho na us doll ya dollar jo bhi hai uska name batao kaha rahta hai wo nahi to tum jante ho anjam achha nahi hoga

Grandmaster ko pata tha ki jay ne us adami ko dollar kahke bulaya hai to aisa ho hi nahi sakta hai ki jay us adami ke bare me kuchh bhi nahi janta ho. Grandmaster ke guse se bhara chehra dekh kar jay grandmaster ko dollar se apni pahli mulakat ke bare me batane ke alawa aur koi chara nahi bacha tha waise bhi jay ke pass iske alawa batane ke liye aur tha bhi kya siwaye dollar name ke wo kuchh aur janta bhi to nahi tha. Wo to ye tak bhi nahi janta tha ki dollar ka ye adami dikhta kaisa hai fir wo kaha rahta hai kya karta hai uske bat hi chhod do grandmaster ko jay ke bat par bharosa to nahi tha par wo aur kar bhi kya sakta tha jay avani ke gang ka adami hai aur isiliye grandmaster use jyada dhamka bhi nhi sakta tha. Agar jay uske gang me hota to grandmaster use ulta latka kar sab sach pata kar leta par abhi wo kuchh kar nahi sakta tha aur iski do wajah thi pahli wo avani par apna impression kharab nahi karna chahta tha pahle hi us dollar ke wajah se grandmaster ki image avani ke najar me aisi ki taisi ho gyi thi ab agar wo avani ki gang ke kisi bhi adami ke sath batmiji karta hai to avani usse impress hona dur sayad use apne aas pass bhatakne bhi Na degi. Dusri wajah ye thi ki grandmaster ke pass aisa kuchh proof nahi tha jisse ki wo jay ke bato ko wo galat thahra sake aise me uske pass nirash hoke dev ashram wapas jane ke alava koi aur rasta bacha bhi nahi tha. Is dollar ne use bahubali se jony leaver bana diya tha jise dekho wahi usko dekh kar has raha tha par ye bat alag hai ki kisi ke bhi itani himat nahi thi ki wo grandmaster ke muh par hase. Lekin apne kamre ko andar se band karke baithe grandmaster ne muthiya bhichte huye khud se wada kiya.

-Dollar teri wajah se aaj sabki najaro me meri ijat aisi ki taisi huyi hai aur to aur avani par mera impression bhi kharab ho gya kasam hai mujhe jis din tum mere hath lag gaya na beta usi din tere tukde tukde kar ke unhi tukdo se yaha ke alien treat dunga nahi tomera name bhi grandmaster nahi..

Ab wo apne is Wade ko pura kar payega ya nahi mujhe nahi pata par ha filhal abhi kuchh samay ke liye dollar ya doll grandmaster aur us secret blood alien aur secret blood alien ke devil's soul pure dev ashram me sabse popular topic the. Is taraf grandmaster ke kasam se anjan veer pahad ke pass ek gadha khodne me byast tha wo janta tha ki grandmaster aur uska sathi itani asani se to har nahi man manege isliye usne apne sunhare kulhadi ko us gadhe me chhupane ka decision liya. Is tarah se grandmaster aur uske sathi dev ashram me baki logo ki tarah uski bhi talashi lete hai to unhe veer ke pass kuchh milega nahi aur na unlogo ko veer par sak hoga kyuki abhi bhi veer unlogo se mukabla karne ke liye puri tarah se taiyar nahi hai. Bhale hi is samay veer apna roop badal kar nikal gya ho lekin roop badalne ka bhi ek time period hota hai wo kuchh hi samay ke liye apne badle huye roop me rah sakta hai abhi uske jin itne strong nahi hai ki wo itne takatwar alien ke devil's soul se jyada der tak apne badle huye roop me rah sake. Jitna takatwar alien hoga veer ko utna jyada jin point aur utani hi takatwar body ki jarurat hogi is samay veer ke pass 8 secret jin poin hai aur itne jin points ke sath veer 8 minutes tak hi apne badle huye roop me rah sakta hai itna samay grandmaster aur uske sathiyo se bach nikalne ke liye kafi tha. Lekin un logo ka mukabla karne ke liye use aur jin point ki jarurat thi itne kam samay me to ek ya do ko hi mar payega un sab se mukabla karne ke liye use abhi aur strong hone ki jarurat hai ab devil's soul ko to koi tabtak nahi dekh sakta jabtak ki use bulaya na jaye par sunhari kulhadi to invisible nahi ho sakti na aaj nahi to kal sabko uske pass sunhari kulhadi dikh hi jayegi. Iske sath usne grandmaster hi nahi avani aur bhim ke sath bhi panga le liya hai bhale hi us secret blood alien ko admara us grandmaster ne kiya ho par is mission me teeno gang samil the isliye us sunahari kulhadi ko milne se un teeno gang ko barabar ka fayda hota par aisa huya nahi aur ab veer ne ek nahi teeno gang se dusmani mol leli hai. To aise me samajhdari isime hai ki is sunahri kulhadi ko veer isi surkshit jagah pe chhupa de jabtak ki is sunahari kulhadi ka achha kharidar nahi milta tabtak yaha ye sabke najro se safe rahegi.

-Is sunahari kulhadi ko bech kar to mujhe 2 crore to asani se mil jayenge aur mere pass jo sunahare kachhuye ka jo saman pada hai usse mai asani se 1 crore tak kama sakta hu yani ki ghar ki problem to solve ho jayegi par abhi ke liye mujhe is kulhadi ko yahi chhupana hoga ek bar jab ye situation cantrol me aa jayegi tab mai janta hu ki ye sari chije kaha bechani hai...

US sunahri kulhadi ko jamin me gadte huye veer bahut hi excited tha yahi excitement uske chehre par najar aa rahi thi fir wo jis maksad ke liye taitan grah aaya tha wo pura jo hone wala tha bhale secret blood devil's soul ke mukable secret blood gear utna kimati nahi tha is liye veer itna sure tha ki is kulhadi ke 2 crore to mil hi jayenge rahi bat secret blood alien ke devil's soul ki to use bechne ke bare me to veer soch bhi nahi sakta. Yahi to ek chij hai jo dev ashram me bane rahne aur success hasil karne me uski madat karegi ise bechna matalab sone ke ande dene wale murgi ko marna hoga aur veer aisa bilkul bhi nahi chahta tha uske liye dev ashram me ek STATUS hasil karna itna hi jaruri ho gya tha jitna yaha aane se pahle 3 crore rupay kamana tha ab uske aur 3 crore rupay me jyada duri nahi bachi hai tab wo apna sara focus physical development me laga sakta hai par jis jagah pe uske itne dusman hai us jagah pe veer kaise survive karega ye dekhna dilchasp hoga.

Fantastic update sahiba

 

[ragish7357]

Update 14 (Veer Ka Excitement)

Sirf grandmaster aur uske sathi hi nahi waha maujud logo ko bhi apne aankho par bishwas nhi ho raha tha unhe aisa lag raha tha jaise unke aankho ke samne koi film chal raha ho jaise villain ke nake ke niche se koi hero heroin ko le jata hai unlogo me se kai to grandmaster aur uske sathiyo ko veer ke pichhe bhagte huye dekh kar man hi man has bhi rahe the. Sabhi ke man me bas ekhi sawal tha ki akhir wo rahsyamayi insan hai kon jise jay ne dollar kah ke bulaya tha jaha ek taraf dollar aur uske sathiyo par sab has rahe the wahi dusri taraf dollar urf veer ki image sanke najro me kisi hero se kam nahi rah gyi thi. Jis tarah se veer ne na sirf secret blood alien ka hathiyar balki uski devil's soul bhi churayi thi us hisab se veer ka kisi viral celebrity ki tarah charcha banna to lazmi tha aur rahi bat grandmaster ki to jo log kuchh samay pahle usse impress the wahi log ab uska majak uda rahe the. Akhir grandmaster ne sirf us secret blood alien ka hathiyar devil's soul ko hi nahi balki apne pass maujud 6 pankho wali baraiya ke devil's soul se bane hathiyar ko bhi kho giya tha to aise me to use sabka majak banana lazmi tha kuchh ko to yaha tak sak tha ki kahi is hadse ke bad grandmaster apna mansik santulan na kho baithe sab logo ke bich chal rahe is discussion me ek bat comman thi aur wo thi dollar ki asali pahchan kya hai. Jab jay ne dollar ka name liya tha tab waha maujud kai log thik se use sun nahi paye the is liye unlogo ko bas doll hi sunayi diya bhale hi sabki sunne me ye name ajib laga par dollar ya doll name ke is adami ne jo karnama kiya tha wo is name se bhi ajib tha. Sab log apas me veer grandmaster aur us secret blood alien ke charcha kar hi rahe the tabhi un sab ka najar grandmaster aur uske sathiyo par padi itani badi har ke wahaj se un sabhi ke chehro me 12 baje the. Unlogo ke aisi halat dekh kar kuchh logo ko to andar se bahut khusi huyi kyuki kahi na kahi wo log bhi grandmaster aur uske sathiyo ke nainsafi ka shikar bane the sayad isi ko karma kahte hai sabko tang karne wala adami ek anjan insan se har gaya tha wo anjan insan unko dhul chata gya tha. Wapas aate hi grandmaster sidha jay ke pass gya aur use dhamkate huye dollar ke bare me sari jankari lene laga usne kaha.

-Tum... tum jante ho na us doll ya dollar jo bhi hai uska name batao kaha rahta hai wo nahi to tum jante ho anjam achha nahi hoga

Grandmaster ko pata tha ki jay ne us adami ko dollar kahke bulaya hai to aisa ho hi nahi sakta hai ki jay us adami ke bare me kuchh bhi nahi janta ho. Grandmaster ke guse se bhara chehra dekh kar jay grandmaster ko dollar se apni pahli mulakat ke bare me batane ke alawa aur koi chara nahi bacha tha waise bhi jay ke pass iske alawa batane ke liye aur tha bhi kya siwaye dollar name ke wo kuchh aur janta bhi to nahi tha. Wo to ye tak bhi nahi janta tha ki dollar ka ye adami dikhta kaisa hai fir wo kaha rahta hai kya karta hai uske bat hi chhod do grandmaster ko jay ke bat par bharosa to nahi tha par wo aur kar bhi kya sakta tha jay avani ke gang ka adami hai aur isiliye grandmaster use jyada dhamka bhi nhi sakta tha. Agar jay uske gang me hota to grandmaster use ulta latka kar sab sach pata kar leta par abhi wo kuchh kar nahi sakta tha aur iski do wajah thi pahli wo avani par apna impression kharab nahi karna chahta tha pahle hi us dollar ke wajah se grandmaster ki image avani ke najar me aisi ki taisi ho gyi thi ab agar wo avani ki gang ke kisi bhi adami ke sath batmiji karta hai to avani usse impress hona dur sayad use apne aas pass bhatakne bhi Na degi. Dusri wajah ye thi ki grandmaster ke pass aisa kuchh proof nahi tha jisse ki wo jay ke bato ko wo galat thahra sake aise me uske pass nirash hoke dev ashram wapas jane ke alava koi aur rasta bacha bhi nahi tha. Is dollar ne use bahubali se jony leaver bana diya tha jise dekho wahi usko dekh kar has raha tha par ye bat alag hai ki kisi ke bhi itani himat nahi thi ki wo grandmaster ke muh par hase. Lekin apne kamre ko andar se band karke baithe grandmaster ne muthiya bhichte huye khud se wada kiya.

-Dollar teri wajah se aaj sabki najaro me meri ijat aisi ki taisi huyi hai aur to aur avani par mera impression bhi kharab ho gya kasam hai mujhe jis din tum mere hath lag gaya na beta usi din tere tukde tukde kar ke unhi tukdo se yaha ke alien treat dunga nahi tomera name bhi grandmaster nahi..

Ab wo apne is Wade ko pura kar payega ya nahi mujhe nahi pata par ha filhal abhi kuchh samay ke liye dollar ya doll grandmaster aur us secret blood alien aur secret blood alien ke devil's soul pure dev ashram me sabse popular topic the. Is taraf grandmaster ke kasam se anjan veer pahad ke pass ek gadha khodne me byast tha wo janta tha ki grandmaster aur uska sathi itani asani se to har nahi man manege isliye usne apne sunhare kulhadi ko us gadhe me chhupane ka decision liya. Is tarah se grandmaster aur uske sathi dev ashram me baki logo ki tarah uski bhi talashi lete hai to unhe veer ke pass kuchh milega nahi aur na unlogo ko veer par sak hoga kyuki abhi bhi veer unlogo se mukabla karne ke liye puri tarah se taiyar nahi hai. Bhale hi is samay veer apna roop badal kar nikal gya ho lekin roop badalne ka bhi ek time period hota hai wo kuchh hi samay ke liye apne badle huye roop me rah sakta hai abhi uske jin itne strong nahi hai ki wo itne takatwar alien ke devil's soul se jyada der tak apne badle huye roop me rah sake. Jitna takatwar alien hoga veer ko utna jyada jin point aur utani hi takatwar body ki jarurat hogi is samay veer ke pass 8 secret jin poin hai aur itne jin points ke sath veer 8 minutes tak hi apne badle huye roop me rah sakta hai itna samay grandmaster aur uske sathiyo se bach nikalne ke liye kafi tha. Lekin un logo ka mukabla karne ke liye use aur jin point ki jarurat thi itne kam samay me to ek ya do ko hi mar payega un sab se mukabla karne ke liye use abhi aur strong hone ki jarurat hai ab devil's soul ko to koi tabtak nahi dekh sakta jabtak ki use bulaya na jaye par sunhari kulhadi to invisible nahi ho sakti na aaj nahi to kal sabko uske pass sunhari kulhadi dikh hi jayegi. Iske sath usne grandmaster hi nahi avani aur bhim ke sath bhi panga le liya hai bhale hi us secret blood alien ko admara us grandmaster ne kiya ho par is mission me teeno gang samil the isliye us sunahari kulhadi ko milne se un teeno gang ko barabar ka fayda hota par aisa huya nahi aur ab veer ne ek nahi teeno gang se dusmani mol leli hai. To aise me samajhdari isime hai ki is sunahri kulhadi ko veer isi surkshit jagah pe chhupa de jabtak ki is sunahari kulhadi ka achha kharidar nahi milta tabtak yaha ye sabke najro se safe rahegi.

-Is sunahari kulhadi ko bech kar to mujhe 2 crore to asani se mil jayenge aur mere pass jo sunahare kachhuye ka jo saman pada hai usse mai asani se 1 crore tak kama sakta hu yani ki ghar ki problem to solve ho jayegi par abhi ke liye mujhe is kulhadi ko yahi chhupana hoga ek bar jab ye situation cantrol me aa jayegi tab mai janta hu ki ye sari chije kaha bechani hai...

US sunahri kulhadi ko jamin me gadte huye veer bahut hi excited tha yahi excitement uske chehre par najar aa rahi thi fir wo jis maksad ke liye taitan grah aaya tha wo pura jo hone wala tha bhale secret blood devil's soul ke mukable secret blood gear utna kimati nahi tha is liye veer itna sure tha ki is kulhadi ke 2 crore to mil hi jayenge rahi bat secret blood alien ke devil's soul ki to use bechne ke bare me to veer soch bhi nahi sakta. Yahi to ek chij hai jo dev ashram me bane rahne aur success hasil karne me uski madat karegi ise bechna matalab sone ke ande dene wale murgi ko marna hoga aur veer aisa bilkul bhi nahi chahta tha uske liye dev ashram me ek STATUS hasil karna itna hi jaruri ho gya tha jitna yaha aane se pahle 3 crore rupay kamana tha ab uske aur 3 crore rupay me jyada duri nahi bachi hai tab wo apna sara focus physical development me laga sakta hai par jis jagah pe uske itne dusman hai us jagah pe veer kaise survive karega ye dekhna dilchasp hoga.

nice update aditi ji

 

[krish1152]

Mast shaandar update

 

[Ramesh628]

Update 14 (Veer Ka Excitement)

Sirf grandmaster aur uske sathi hi nahi waha maujud logo ko bhi apne aankho par bishwas nhi ho raha tha unhe aisa lag raha tha jaise unke aankho ke samne koi film chal raha ho jaise villain ke nake ke niche se koi hero heroin ko le jata hai unlogo me se kai to grandmaster aur uske sathiyo ko veer ke pichhe bhagte huye dekh kar man hi man has bhi rahe the. Sabhi ke man me bas ekhi sawal tha ki akhir wo rahsyamayi insan hai kon jise jay ne dollar kah ke bulaya tha jaha ek taraf dollar aur uske sathiyo par sab has rahe the wahi dusri taraf dollar urf veer ki image sanke najro me kisi hero se kam nahi rah gyi thi. Jis tarah se veer ne na sirf secret blood alien ka hathiyar balki uski devil's soul bhi churayi thi us hisab se veer ka kisi viral celebrity ki tarah charcha banna to lazmi tha aur rahi bat grandmaster ki to jo log kuchh samay pahle usse impress the wahi log ab uska majak uda rahe the. Akhir grandmaster ne sirf us secret blood alien ka hathiyar devil's soul ko hi nahi balki apne pass maujud 6 pankho wali baraiya ke devil's soul se bane hathiyar ko bhi kho giya tha to aise me to use sabka majak banana lazmi tha kuchh ko to yaha tak sak tha ki kahi is hadse ke bad grandmaster apna mansik santulan na kho baithe sab logo ke bich chal rahe is discussion me ek bat comman thi aur wo thi dollar ki asali pahchan kya hai. Jab jay ne dollar ka name liya tha tab waha maujud kai log thik se use sun nahi paye the is liye unlogo ko bas doll hi sunayi diya bhale hi sabki sunne me ye name ajib laga par dollar ya doll name ke is adami ne jo karnama kiya tha wo is name se bhi ajib tha. Sab log apas me veer grandmaster aur us secret blood alien ke charcha kar hi rahe the tabhi un sab ka najar grandmaster aur uske sathiyo par padi itani badi har ke wahaj se un sabhi ke chehro me 12 baje the. Unlogo ke aisi halat dekh kar kuchh logo ko to andar se bahut khusi huyi kyuki kahi na kahi wo log bhi grandmaster aur uske sathiyo ke nainsafi ka shikar bane the sayad isi ko karma kahte hai sabko tang karne wala adami ek anjan insan se har gaya tha wo anjan insan unko dhul chata gya tha. Wapas aate hi grandmaster sidha jay ke pass gya aur use dhamkate huye dollar ke bare me sari jankari lene laga usne kaha.

-Tum... tum jante ho na us doll ya dollar jo bhi hai uska name batao kaha rahta hai wo nahi to tum jante ho anjam achha nahi hoga

Grandmaster ko pata tha ki jay ne us adami ko dollar kahke bulaya hai to aisa ho hi nahi sakta hai ki jay us adami ke bare me kuchh bhi nahi janta ho. Grandmaster ke guse se bhara chehra dekh kar jay grandmaster ko dollar se apni pahli mulakat ke bare me batane ke alawa aur koi chara nahi bacha tha waise bhi jay ke pass iske alawa batane ke liye aur tha bhi kya siwaye dollar name ke wo kuchh aur janta bhi to nahi tha. Wo to ye tak bhi nahi janta tha ki dollar ka ye adami dikhta kaisa hai fir wo kaha rahta hai kya karta hai uske bat hi chhod do grandmaster ko jay ke bat par bharosa to nahi tha par wo aur kar bhi kya sakta tha jay avani ke gang ka adami hai aur isiliye grandmaster use jyada dhamka bhi nhi sakta tha. Agar jay uske gang me hota to grandmaster use ulta latka kar sab sach pata kar leta par abhi wo kuchh kar nahi sakta tha aur iski do wajah thi pahli wo avani par apna impression kharab nahi karna chahta tha pahle hi us dollar ke wajah se grandmaster ki image avani ke najar me aisi ki taisi ho gyi thi ab agar wo avani ki gang ke kisi bhi adami ke sath batmiji karta hai to avani usse impress hona dur sayad use apne aas pass bhatakne bhi Na degi. Dusri wajah ye thi ki grandmaster ke pass aisa kuchh proof nahi tha jisse ki wo jay ke bato ko wo galat thahra sake aise me uske pass nirash hoke dev ashram wapas jane ke alava koi aur rasta bacha bhi nahi tha. Is dollar ne use bahubali se jony leaver bana diya tha jise dekho wahi usko dekh kar has raha tha par ye bat alag hai ki kisi ke bhi itani himat nahi thi ki wo grandmaster ke muh par hase. Lekin apne kamre ko andar se band karke baithe grandmaster ne muthiya bhichte huye khud se wada kiya.

-Dollar teri wajah se aaj sabki najaro me meri ijat aisi ki taisi huyi hai aur to aur avani par mera impression bhi kharab ho gya kasam hai mujhe jis din tum mere hath lag gaya na beta usi din tere tukde tukde kar ke unhi tukdo se yaha ke alien treat dunga nahi tomera name bhi grandmaster nahi..

Ab wo apne is Wade ko pura kar payega ya nahi mujhe nahi pata par ha filhal abhi kuchh samay ke liye dollar ya doll grandmaster aur us secret blood alien aur secret blood alien ke devil's soul pure dev ashram me sabse popular topic the. Is taraf grandmaster ke kasam se anjan veer pahad ke pass ek gadha khodne me byast tha wo janta tha ki grandmaster aur uska sathi itani asani se to har nahi man manege isliye usne apne sunhare kulhadi ko us gadhe me chhupane ka decision liya. Is tarah se grandmaster aur uske sathi dev ashram me baki logo ki tarah uski bhi talashi lete hai to unhe veer ke pass kuchh milega nahi aur na unlogo ko veer par sak hoga kyuki abhi bhi veer unlogo se mukabla karne ke liye puri tarah se taiyar nahi hai. Bhale hi is samay veer apna roop badal kar nikal gya ho lekin roop badalne ka bhi ek time period hota hai wo kuchh hi samay ke liye apne badle huye roop me rah sakta hai abhi uske jin itne strong nahi hai ki wo itne takatwar alien ke devil's soul se jyada der tak apne badle huye roop me rah sake. Jitna takatwar alien hoga veer ko utna jyada jin point aur utani hi takatwar body ki jarurat hogi is samay veer ke pass 8 secret jin poin hai aur itne jin points ke sath veer 8 minutes tak hi apne badle huye roop me rah sakta hai itna samay grandmaster aur uske sathiyo se bach nikalne ke liye kafi tha. Lekin un logo ka mukabla karne ke liye use aur jin point ki jarurat thi itne kam samay me to ek ya do ko hi mar payega un sab se mukabla karne ke liye use abhi aur strong hone ki jarurat hai ab devil's soul ko to koi tabtak nahi dekh sakta jabtak ki use bulaya na jaye par sunhari kulhadi to invisible nahi ho sakti na aaj nahi to kal sabko uske pass sunhari kulhadi dikh hi jayegi. Iske sath usne grandmaster hi nahi avani aur bhim ke sath bhi panga le liya hai bhale hi us secret blood alien ko admara us grandmaster ne kiya ho par is mission me teeno gang samil the isliye us sunahari kulhadi ko milne se un teeno gang ko barabar ka fayda hota par aisa huya nahi aur ab veer ne ek nahi teeno gang se dusmani mol leli hai. To aise me samajhdari isime hai ki is sunahri kulhadi ko veer isi surkshit jagah pe chhupa de jabtak ki is sunahari kulhadi ka achha kharidar nahi milta tabtak yaha ye sabke najro se safe rahegi.

-Is sunahari kulhadi ko bech kar to mujhe 2 crore to asani se mil jayenge aur mere pass jo sunahare kachhuye ka jo saman pada hai usse mai asani se 1 crore tak kama sakta hu yani ki ghar ki problem to solve ho jayegi par abhi ke liye mujhe is kulhadi ko yahi chhupana hoga ek bar jab ye situation cantrol me aa jayegi tab mai janta hu ki ye sari chije kaha bechani hai...

US sunahri kulhadi ko jamin me gadte huye veer bahut hi excited tha yahi excitement uske chehre par najar aa rahi thi fir wo jis maksad ke liye taitan grah aaya tha wo pura jo hone wala tha bhale secret blood devil's soul ke mukable secret blood gear utna kimati nahi tha is liye veer itna sure tha ki is kulhadi ke 2 crore to mil hi jayenge rahi bat secret blood alien ke devil's soul ki to use bechne ke bare me to veer soch bhi nahi sakta. Yahi to ek chij hai jo dev ashram me bane rahne aur success hasil karne me uski madat karegi ise bechna matalab sone ke ande dene wale murgi ko marna hoga aur veer aisa bilkul bhi nahi chahta tha uske liye dev ashram me ek STATUS hasil karna itna hi jaruri ho gya tha jitna yaha aane se pahle 3 crore rupay kamana tha ab uske aur 3 crore rupay me jyada duri nahi bachi hai tab wo apna sara focus physical development me laga sakta hai par jis jagah pe uske itne dusman hai us jagah pe veer kaise survive karega ye dekhna dilchasp hoga.

BAHUT HI SANDAR UPDATE HAI MADAM JI

 

[Shahrukh]

Awesome update bhai keep posting

 

[Thakur008]

Hii friends ye meri story nahi hai writer ka name nav hai mai ye sochi ki ye story Xforum pe hona chahiye is liye mai ise yaha likh rahi hu
IS story me apko magic aur scientific sab kuchh milega
YE story bas ek kalpanik hai isme jivit ya mritya byakti ya koi sthan se sambhandh nhi hai agar milta bhi hai to wo mahaj ek sanyog hoga
DHANYABAD

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[mashish]

Update 14 (Veer Ka Excitement)

Sirf grandmaster aur uske sathi hi nahi waha maujud logo ko bhi apne aankho par bishwas nhi ho raha tha unhe aisa lag raha tha jaise unke aankho ke samne koi film chal raha ho jaise villain ke nake ke niche se koi hero heroin ko le jata hai unlogo me se kai to grandmaster aur uske sathiyo ko veer ke pichhe bhagte huye dekh kar man hi man has bhi rahe the. Sabhi ke man me bas ekhi sawal tha ki akhir wo rahsyamayi insan hai kon jise jay ne dollar kah ke bulaya tha jaha ek taraf dollar aur uske sathiyo par sab has rahe the wahi dusri taraf dollar urf veer ki image sanke najro me kisi hero se kam nahi rah gyi thi. Jis tarah se veer ne na sirf secret blood alien ka hathiyar balki uski devil's soul bhi churayi thi us hisab se veer ka kisi viral celebrity ki tarah charcha banna to lazmi tha aur rahi bat grandmaster ki to jo log kuchh samay pahle usse impress the wahi log ab uska majak uda rahe the. Akhir grandmaster ne sirf us secret blood alien ka hathiyar devil's soul ko hi nahi balki apne pass maujud 6 pankho wali baraiya ke devil's soul se bane hathiyar ko bhi kho giya tha to aise me to use sabka majak banana lazmi tha kuchh ko to yaha tak sak tha ki kahi is hadse ke bad grandmaster apna mansik santulan na kho baithe sab logo ke bich chal rahe is discussion me ek bat comman thi aur wo thi dollar ki asali pahchan kya hai. Jab jay ne dollar ka name liya tha tab waha maujud kai log thik se use sun nahi paye the is liye unlogo ko bas doll hi sunayi diya bhale hi sabki sunne me ye name ajib laga par dollar ya doll name ke is adami ne jo karnama kiya tha wo is name se bhi ajib tha. Sab log apas me veer grandmaster aur us secret blood alien ke charcha kar hi rahe the tabhi un sab ka najar grandmaster aur uske sathiyo par padi itani badi har ke wahaj se un sabhi ke chehro me 12 baje the. Unlogo ke aisi halat dekh kar kuchh logo ko to andar se bahut khusi huyi kyuki kahi na kahi wo log bhi grandmaster aur uske sathiyo ke nainsafi ka shikar bane the sayad isi ko karma kahte hai sabko tang karne wala adami ek anjan insan se har gaya tha wo anjan insan unko dhul chata gya tha. Wapas aate hi grandmaster sidha jay ke pass gya aur use dhamkate huye dollar ke bare me sari jankari lene laga usne kaha.

-Tum... tum jante ho na us doll ya dollar jo bhi hai uska name batao kaha rahta hai wo nahi to tum jante ho anjam achha nahi hoga

Grandmaster ko pata tha ki jay ne us adami ko dollar kahke bulaya hai to aisa ho hi nahi sakta hai ki jay us adami ke bare me kuchh bhi nahi janta ho. Grandmaster ke guse se bhara chehra dekh kar jay grandmaster ko dollar se apni pahli mulakat ke bare me batane ke alawa aur koi chara nahi bacha tha waise bhi jay ke pass iske alawa batane ke liye aur tha bhi kya siwaye dollar name ke wo kuchh aur janta bhi to nahi tha. Wo to ye tak bhi nahi janta tha ki dollar ka ye adami dikhta kaisa hai fir wo kaha rahta hai kya karta hai uske bat hi chhod do grandmaster ko jay ke bat par bharosa to nahi tha par wo aur kar bhi kya sakta tha jay avani ke gang ka adami hai aur isiliye grandmaster use jyada dhamka bhi nhi sakta tha. Agar jay uske gang me hota to grandmaster use ulta latka kar sab sach pata kar leta par abhi wo kuchh kar nahi sakta tha aur iski do wajah thi pahli wo avani par apna impression kharab nahi karna chahta tha pahle hi us dollar ke wajah se grandmaster ki image avani ke najar me aisi ki taisi ho gyi thi ab agar wo avani ki gang ke kisi bhi adami ke sath batmiji karta hai to avani usse impress hona dur sayad use apne aas pass bhatakne bhi Na degi. Dusri wajah ye thi ki grandmaster ke pass aisa kuchh proof nahi tha jisse ki wo jay ke bato ko wo galat thahra sake aise me uske pass nirash hoke dev ashram wapas jane ke alava koi aur rasta bacha bhi nahi tha. Is dollar ne use bahubali se jony leaver bana diya tha jise dekho wahi usko dekh kar has raha tha par ye bat alag hai ki kisi ke bhi itani himat nahi thi ki wo grandmaster ke muh par hase. Lekin apne kamre ko andar se band karke baithe grandmaster ne muthiya bhichte huye khud se wada kiya.

-Dollar teri wajah se aaj sabki najaro me meri ijat aisi ki taisi huyi hai aur to aur avani par mera impression bhi kharab ho gya kasam hai mujhe jis din tum mere hath lag gaya na beta usi din tere tukde tukde kar ke unhi tukdo se yaha ke alien treat dunga nahi tomera name bhi grandmaster nahi..

Ab wo apne is Wade ko pura kar payega ya nahi mujhe nahi pata par ha filhal abhi kuchh samay ke liye dollar ya doll grandmaster aur us secret blood alien aur secret blood alien ke devil's soul pure dev ashram me sabse popular topic the. Is taraf grandmaster ke kasam se anjan veer pahad ke pass ek gadha khodne me byast tha wo janta tha ki grandmaster aur uska sathi itani asani se to har nahi man manege isliye usne apne sunhare kulhadi ko us gadhe me chhupane ka decision liya. Is tarah se grandmaster aur uske sathi dev ashram me baki logo ki tarah uski bhi talashi lete hai to unhe veer ke pass kuchh milega nahi aur na unlogo ko veer par sak hoga kyuki abhi bhi veer unlogo se mukabla karne ke liye puri tarah se taiyar nahi hai. Bhale hi is samay veer apna roop badal kar nikal gya ho lekin roop badalne ka bhi ek time period hota hai wo kuchh hi samay ke liye apne badle huye roop me rah sakta hai abhi uske jin itne strong nahi hai ki wo itne takatwar alien ke devil's soul se jyada der tak apne badle huye roop me rah sake. Jitna takatwar alien hoga veer ko utna jyada jin point aur utani hi takatwar body ki jarurat hogi is samay veer ke pass 8 secret jin poin hai aur itne jin points ke sath veer 8 minutes tak hi apne badle huye roop me rah sakta hai itna samay grandmaster aur uske sathiyo se bach nikalne ke liye kafi tha. Lekin un logo ka mukabla karne ke liye use aur jin point ki jarurat thi itne kam samay me to ek ya do ko hi mar payega un sab se mukabla karne ke liye use abhi aur strong hone ki jarurat hai ab devil's soul ko to koi tabtak nahi dekh sakta jabtak ki use bulaya na jaye par sunhari kulhadi to invisible nahi ho sakti na aaj nahi to kal sabko uske pass sunhari kulhadi dikh hi jayegi. Iske sath usne grandmaster hi nahi avani aur bhim ke sath bhi panga le liya hai bhale hi us secret blood alien ko admara us grandmaster ne kiya ho par is mission me teeno gang samil the isliye us sunahari kulhadi ko milne se un teeno gang ko barabar ka fayda hota par aisa huya nahi aur ab veer ne ek nahi teeno gang se dusmani mol leli hai. To aise me samajhdari isime hai ki is sunahri kulhadi ko veer isi surkshit jagah pe chhupa de jabtak ki is sunahari kulhadi ka achha kharidar nahi milta tabtak yaha ye sabke najro se safe rahegi.

-Is sunahari kulhadi ko bech kar to mujhe 2 crore to asani se mil jayenge aur mere pass jo sunahare kachhuye ka jo saman pada hai usse mai asani se 1 crore tak kama sakta hu yani ki ghar ki problem to solve ho jayegi par abhi ke liye mujhe is kulhadi ko yahi chhupana hoga ek bar jab ye situation cantrol me aa jayegi tab mai janta hu ki ye sari chije kaha bechani hai...

US sunahri kulhadi ko jamin me gadte huye veer bahut hi excited tha yahi excitement uske chehre par najar aa rahi thi fir wo jis maksad ke liye taitan grah aaya tha wo pura jo hone wala tha bhale secret blood devil's soul ke mukable secret blood gear utna kimati nahi tha is liye veer itna sure tha ki is kulhadi ke 2 crore to mil hi jayenge rahi bat secret blood alien ke devil's soul ki to use bechne ke bare me to veer soch bhi nahi sakta. Yahi to ek chij hai jo dev ashram me bane rahne aur success hasil karne me uski madat karegi ise bechna matalab sone ke ande dene wale murgi ko marna hoga aur veer aisa bilkul bhi nahi chahta tha uske liye dev ashram me ek STATUS hasil karna itna hi jaruri ho gya tha jitna yaha aane se pahle 3 crore rupay kamana tha ab uske aur 3 crore rupay me jyada duri nahi bachi hai tab wo apna sara focus physical development me laga sakta hai par jis jagah pe uske itne dusman hai us jagah pe veer kaise survive karega ye dekhna dilchasp hoga.

very nice update

 

[Avir]

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