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Bhai update aa gaya hai short hi sahi padhkar batao kaisa hai achha laga toh aage bhi dunga.
Romance Shruti ka chakkar lafange Bilal ke saath.
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Don't worry Bhai tum story enjoy karo aaj large update dene ki koshish karta hoon taaki readers ka maza bana rahe
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4 Saal baad :-
Maqbool Bhai :- Bilal tu waqayi bada himmat wala hai jo kaam mere gang ka koi bhi Aadmi apne haath mein lene se darta tha tune woh kar dikhaya. Mere sabse bade dushman ko gang war mein dher kar diya tune. Ilyeas yeh kisi aam shaqs ki aulaad toh nahin ho sakta bata kahan se laaya tha isey tu aur yeh pichhle 4 saal se mere liye kaam kar raha hai par aaj jakar meri nazar mein aaya hai.
Ilyeas :- Bhai jaan yeh apne Asrar chacha jaan ka ladka hai Jo Kolkata ke Don thhay aur apne dushmano ki sajish ka shikar ho gaye.
Maqbool Bhai :- Ya Allah toh kya tu hi Asrar Miyan ka ladka hai Bilal Badshah Khan aray yeh mujhe kisi ne pehle kyun nahi bataya ?? Aray beta tere Abbu ke bahut ehsaan rahe hain mujhpar aur phir 4 saal tak ek heera yu dar dar ki thokre khata raha ek khaandaani ladka aam logon si zindagi guzarta raha aur mujhe ab jaakar pata chala.
Bilal :- Bhai jaan aap afsos na karein yeh meri taqdeer thi mere bure waqt ka hissa jo ab tak chal raha hai.
Maqbool Bhai :- Chal raha hai nahi chal raha tha samjho miyan tum bhi hamari tarah khaandaani ho aur tumhare Abbu ke rasookh aur shaano shaukat se main waaqif hoon.
Bilal :- Bhai Jaan maafi chahunga lekin woh sab mera ateet tha mera guzra hua kal ab na toh mere sar par Abbu ka haath aur na unki sultanate ka saaya ab main ek yateem hoon.
Ilyeas :- Abey pagal hai kya kaun kehta hai ki tu yateem hai tera Bhai Ilyeas abhi zinda hai.
Maqbool Bhai :- Ilyeas theek keh raha hai Bilal tu akela nahi hai aur yateem toh apne aap ko bilkul bhi mat samajhna. Aaj se tu mera business sambhalega, meri underworld ki duniya ko tu hi unchaiyon par lekar ja sakta hai kyunki tu naujwan bhi hai aur hosh se kaam lekar faisle bhi karta hai aur plan banane ki maharath jo tujhe haasil hai uska saboot toh main dekh hi chuka hoon ki tune kis tarah mere dushman ko khatam kar diya. Meri ab umar ho chali hai main chahunga ki tu ab meri gaddi sambhaal le kyunki mera sapna tha ki main apne gang ko Delhi aur Mumbai tak le jaaun jo ki main na kar saka aur mera koi beta bhi nahi sirf ek beti hai us par bhi kuch wahshi darinde dushmano ki nazar hai agar tu Bilal uss se nikaah kar le aur mera takht sambhal le aur mere sultanate ko aage badhaye toh tera iss Maqbool par bahut bada ehsaan hoga.
Ilyeas :- Soch kya raha hai Bilal Maqbool Bhai ne aaj tak kisi ke saamne yeh prastaav nahin rakha aur na hi kisi se aise baat ki hai waqt ne tujhe ek baar phir mauka diya hai. Aaj tujhse ek Mafia nahin ek BAAP baat kar raha hai apni beti ki aabru ke liye minnaten kar raha hai aur apne mehnat se khade kiye gang aur uski sultanate ko bachaye rakhne ki guhaar laga raha hai kyunki Maqbool Bhai ko tujhpe bharosa hai ki tu unki umeedon par khada utrega.
Maqbool Bhai ab bhi meri taraf ummeed bhari nigahon se dekh rahe thhay aur main iss mauke mein chhupe ek aur sunhere mauke ko dekh raha tha. Maine unki beti se nikaah ke liye haami bhar di aur unke karobaar ki zimmedari bhi le li. Par yeh main bhi jaanta tha ki yeh maine sirf Shruti se badla lene ki taraf ek kadam badhaya tha kyunki ab mere paas phir se woh sab kuch tha jiski wajah se main ek shahenshah ki zindagi jee sakta tha. Jise chahe usey apne raaste se hata sakta tha aur jo cheez paane ki thaan loon usey haasil bhi kar sakta tha. Maqbool Bhai ne mujhe apna sab kuch saunp diya unki beti Nagma ka mujhse nikaah bhi ho gaya. Oh haan yahan main beech mein Maqbool Bhai aur unki family ka ek short description de doon.
Maqbool Bhatt
Age 50
Indore ke Don toh nahin keh sakte lekin yahan ke musalmano mein inki bahut izzat thi aur uss se zyada inka khauff bolta tha kyunki kahin na kahin sabhi jaante thhay ki Maqbool Bhai ek Bahubali hain aur unke dher saare illegal dhandhe hain. Jaise Black Money ko white money karna, Gold smuggling, Drugs smuggling, Sex racket chalana, Desi sharaab ke theke wagera wagera.
Ab aate hain unke pariwar ke dusre sadasya par jo thi unki eklauti beti :-
Nagma
Age 23 saal
Yahan main uski tasveer nahi de raha hoon kyunki kahani mein woh utna matter nahi karti aur na hi iss short story mein uske utne scenes honge.
Nagma ek average complexion ki ladki thi. Saanvli si but figure uska kaafi attractive tha. 34 28 36.
Har aam musalmaan ladki ki tarah woh bhi bahut conservative thi jo parde mein rehti thi, Burqa pehenti thi jab bhi baahar jaati, Darasal usey jab maine pehli baar dekha toh mujhe woh pasand nahi aayi lekin mujhe power aur paise ki zarurat thi jo sirf Nagma se shaadi karke hi mil sakti thi aur uske liye mujhe jhoothi shaadi ka naatak bhi karna pada toh maine kiya. Maqbool Bhai hamare nikaah ke baad apna sab kuch mujhe saunp kar Hajj ke liye rawana ho gaye aur maine Ilyeas se kehkar Maqbool Bhai ke India wapas na laut sakne ka intezaam bhi karwa diya taaki ab main apna asli kaam berok tok kar sakoon.
Friends short story toh update bhi short hi de raha hoon par jaldi hi next update lekar haazir hota hoon but please agar story khaas lag rahi hai toh like na sahi comment karke toh batao yaar ek comment karne mein kaun se lakh rupye kharch hone hain. Aaj toh Sunday hai updates ki jhadi laga dunga bhale hi chhote chhote updates doon.
Maqbool Bhai :- Bilal tu waqayi bada himmat wala hai jo kaam mere gang ka koi bhi Aadmi apne haath mein lene se darta tha tune woh kar dikhaya. Mere sabse bade dushman ko gang war mein dher kar diya tune. Ilyeas yeh kisi aam shaqs ki aulaad toh nahin ho sakta bata kahan se laaya tha isey tu aur yeh pichhle 4 saal se mere liye kaam kar raha hai par aaj jakar meri nazar mein aaya hai.
Ilyeas :- Bhai jaan yeh apne Asrar chacha jaan ka ladka hai Jo Kolkata ke Don thhay aur apne dushmano ki sajish ka shikar ho gaye.
Maqbool Bhai :- Ya Allah toh kya tu hi Asrar Miyan ka ladka hai Bilal Badshah Khan aray yeh mujhe kisi ne pehle kyun nahi bataya ?? Aray beta tere Abbu ke bahut ehsaan rahe hain mujhpar aur phir 4 saal tak ek heera yu dar dar ki thokre khata raha ek khaandaani ladka aam logon si zindagi guzarta raha aur mujhe ab jaakar pata chala.
Bilal :- Bhai jaan aap afsos na karein yeh meri taqdeer thi mere bure waqt ka hissa jo ab tak chal raha hai.
Maqbool Bhai :- Chal raha hai nahi chal raha tha samjho miyan tum bhi hamari tarah khaandaani ho aur tumhare Abbu ke rasookh aur shaano shaukat se main waaqif hoon.
Bilal :- Bhai Jaan maafi chahunga lekin woh sab mera ateet tha mera guzra hua kal ab na toh mere sar par Abbu ka haath aur na unki sultanate ka saaya ab main ek yateem hoon.
Ilyeas :- Abey pagal hai kya kaun kehta hai ki tu yateem hai tera Bhai Ilyeas abhi zinda hai.
Maqbool Bhai :- Ilyeas theek keh raha hai Bilal tu akela nahi hai aur yateem toh apne aap ko bilkul bhi mat samajhna. Aaj se tu mera business sambhalega, meri underworld ki duniya ko tu hi unchaiyon par lekar ja sakta hai kyunki tu naujwan bhi hai aur hosh se kaam lekar faisle bhi karta hai aur plan banane ki maharath jo tujhe haasil hai uska saboot toh main dekh hi chuka hoon ki tune kis tarah mere dushman ko khatam kar diya. Meri ab umar ho chali hai main chahunga ki tu ab meri gaddi sambhaal le kyunki mera sapna tha ki main apne gang ko Delhi aur Mumbai tak le jaaun jo ki main na kar saka aur mera koi beta bhi nahi sirf ek beti hai us par bhi kuch wahshi darinde dushmano ki nazar hai agar tu Bilal uss se nikaah kar le aur mera takht sambhal le aur mere sultanate ko aage badhaye toh tera iss Maqbool par bahut bada ehsaan hoga.
Ilyeas :- Soch kya raha hai Bilal Maqbool Bhai ne aaj tak kisi ke saamne yeh prastaav nahin rakha aur na hi kisi se aise baat ki hai waqt ne tujhe ek baar phir mauka diya hai. Aaj tujhse ek Mafia nahin ek BAAP baat kar raha hai apni beti ki aabru ke liye minnaten kar raha hai aur apne mehnat se khade kiye gang aur uski sultanate ko bachaye rakhne ki guhaar laga raha hai kyunki Maqbool Bhai ko tujhpe bharosa hai ki tu unki umeedon par khada utrega.
Maqbool Bhai ab bhi meri taraf ummeed bhari nigahon se dekh rahe thhay aur main iss mauke mein chhupe ek aur sunhere mauke ko dekh raha tha. Maine unki beti se nikaah ke liye haami bhar di aur unke karobaar ki zimmedari bhi le li. Par yeh main bhi jaanta tha ki yeh maine sirf Shruti se badla lene ki taraf ek kadam badhaya tha kyunki ab mere paas phir se woh sab kuch tha jiski wajah se main ek shahenshah ki zindagi jee sakta tha. Jise chahe usey apne raaste se hata sakta tha aur jo cheez paane ki thaan loon usey haasil bhi kar sakta tha. Maqbool Bhai ne mujhe apna sab kuch saunp diya unki beti Nagma ka mujhse nikaah bhi ho gaya. Oh haan yahan main beech mein Maqbool Bhai aur unki family ka ek short description de doon.
Maqbool Bhatt
Age 50
Indore ke Don toh nahin keh sakte lekin yahan ke musalmano mein inki bahut izzat thi aur uss se zyada inka khauff bolta tha kyunki kahin na kahin sabhi jaante thhay ki Maqbool Bhai ek Bahubali hain aur unke dher saare illegal dhandhe hain. Jaise Black Money ko white money karna, Gold smuggling, Drugs smuggling, Sex racket chalana, Desi sharaab ke theke wagera wagera.
Ab aate hain unke pariwar ke dusre sadasya par jo thi unki eklauti beti :-
Nagma
Age 23 saal
Yahan main uski tasveer nahi de raha hoon kyunki kahani mein woh utna matter nahi karti aur na hi iss short story mein uske utne scenes honge.
Nagma ek average complexion ki ladki thi. Saanvli si but figure uska kaafi attractive tha. 34 28 36.
Har aam musalmaan ladki ki tarah woh bhi bahut conservative thi jo parde mein rehti thi, Burqa pehenti thi jab bhi baahar jaati, Darasal usey jab maine pehli baar dekha toh mujhe woh pasand nahi aayi lekin mujhe power aur paise ki zarurat thi jo sirf Nagma se shaadi karke hi mil sakti thi aur uske liye mujhe jhoothi shaadi ka naatak bhi karna pada toh maine kiya. Maqbool Bhai hamare nikaah ke baad apna sab kuch mujhe saunp kar Hajj ke liye rawana ho gaye aur maine Ilyeas se kehkar Maqbool Bhai ke India wapas na laut sakne ka intezaam bhi karwa diya taaki ab main apna asli kaam berok tok kar sakoon.
Friends short story toh update bhi short hi de raha hoon par jaldi hi next update lekar haazir hota hoon but please agar story khaas lag rahi hai toh like na sahi comment karke toh batao yaar ek comment karne mein kaun se lakh rupye kharch hone hain. Aaj toh Sunday hai updates ki jhadi laga dunga bhale hi chhote chhote updates doon.
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Chhota hi update diya hai but padho toh agla update bhi taiyar rakha hai aaj Sunday hai aaj updates ki barsaat hogi.
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Sorry guys but I think yahan par sirf kahani sabko padhni hai par kuch kehna nahi hai apna ek like aur comment dene mein logon ko jab itni hi dikkat hai toh mujhe lagta hai mere jaise writer ko yeh kahani yahi rokni padegi mujhe pichhli story pe bhi likes comment nahi milne ki vajah se woh story beech mein hi rokni padi thi. Iss story ke saath bhi aisa hi hua I think mujh mein hi koi kami hai. Main ek achha Writer nahi hoon isliye sorry main iss website par naakam raha ek kamyaab Writer ke taur par successful story likhne mein. Sorry Bye doston.
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