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Fantasy Shubham - Ek Rakshak ya Bhakshak

RAAZ

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Pichle update tak aapne dekha ki Shubham ko pata chalta hai Swaroopa ka baare mei saath hi usse ya bhi pata chalta hai ki uski do powers ko surakshit karne ka liye AS na hi ya sab drama racha tha…. Vahi Shubham 5 Professor ka pass pahuchta hai unse kissi chij ka baare mei baat karta hai….


Ab Aage….


Shubham5: Professor kya aapke Pita na aapko bataya tha kya ki ya kis chij se juda hai….???


Professor: Nahi Shubham, unhone kabhi mujhe ya nahi bataya ki ya kis chij se juda hua hai, par unhone kaayi baar kayi logo ki madat se par vo kabhi ismei kamyab nahi ho sake….. Iske baare mei kayi logo ko pata hai par mere Pita ka alawa aaj tak koyi vaha se vapas nahi lauta essa Pitaji kahete tha….


Shubham5: Thik hai professor kya mei ya sab apne saath le jaa sakta hu…..???


Professor: Ha kyu nahi tumhari hi amanat hai, toh tum jaise cahao iska istemaal kar sakte ho….. Aaj mei isse azad hua…. Ab mujhe koi chinta nahi yadi mujhe maut bhi mili toh….


Shubham5: Nahi Professor itni jaldi maut ko gale laga kar aap kya karege…. Abhi aapko bahut kuch karna hai iss duniya ka liye…..


Professor: Ary tum serious ho gaye…. Abhi mujhe marne ki koi jaldi nahi hai…. Mei abhi khushi khushi kuch saal aur jeena cahata hu….


Iske baad Shubham vaha se saara saman lekar chala gaya…. Aur pahucha sidhe Mathira ka ghar jo ki abhi uska iss Dharti par kaam karne ka liye bana secret quarter bhi tha….


Mathira: Shubham5 tum Professor ka yaha se saara saman lekar aa gaye na…..


Shubham5: Ha Mathira….. Par kya aapko ya pata hai kya ki ya kya hai…..???


Mathira: Bahut jada toh nahi pata bus itna pata hai ki iss jagah par Dharti mei ek khaas weapon hai jo Shubham ko cahaiye….. Iss weapon ka baare mei Alvace aur Shubham hi jante hai…. Guruji na bhi kabhi iske baare mei kuch nahi bataya…..


Shubham 5: Par fir ya Professor ka pitaji ko kaise mil gaya aur kabhi koi kyu nahi dhund saka…..??


Mathira: Professor ka Pita ko kaise mila ya Professor na bataya hi hai, kyu mila mujhe nahi pata aur kisi dusre ko kyu nahi mila yabhi nahi pata….. In short mujhe iske baare mei kuch nahi pata hai…..


Shubham 5: Toh aba age kya karu iska….???


Mathira: Ek kaam karo, iski madat se koshish karo uss jagah ko dhundne ki…. Vaise ya Map tumhai vaha lekar jarur jaayega, par hume ya dekhna hai ki vaha kya kya musibat hai aur kaise hum usse paar kar sakte hai…..


Shubham 5: Thik hai, mei kuch din mei nikal jaata hu, kyunki varna abhi Maa aur Nani jaane nahi degi…..








Place: School of Magical and Weaponary Arts…


Iss samaye Shubham vapas School mei hi tha…… AS se baat karne ka baad Shubham vaha se nikal kar apne school ka kamre mei aa gaya aur kuch der vaha aaram karne laga….. Par aaj uski aankho se nind dhur thi…….. Vo apne kamre mei leta jarur tha par uska man shant nahi tha…. Kyunki usse ya samajh aa gaya tha ki uski Black Energy ki powers dhere dhere bad rahi hai…… Usse bus issi baat ki chinta thi ki jab uski saari Black Energy azad ho jayegi toh uske baad vo khudko kaise sambhalega….


Usse Mathila (Jo log bhul gaye ho unhe bata du, ya unn 5 mei se ek hai jisse Maharani Trisha na Guruji ka duwara kuch sandesh bheja tha……..) ki baate bhi yaad aa rahi thi jab uski aur Mathila ki baat hui thi, jaha unhone ya bataya tha ki mere ander Black Energy ki shamta bahut adhik hai, par unhe badne mei kaafi samaye lagega…. Jaise Jaise vo badne lagegi uske saath hi mei apne upar niyantaran khone laguga aur jaise jaise mere niyantaran kam hoga, mei iss duniya ka liye ek abhishap mei badal jaunga…….


Shubham: Kuch der baithne ka bhi jab uske man se ya baate nahi nikali toh Shubham vaha se gayab ho gaya aur pahuch gaya Training session room mei…. Aaj Shubham bahut samaye baad vapas yaha aaya tha….. Usne aankhe band kari aur kuch mantar budbudane laga…. Dekhte hi dekhte vaha Shubham na kuch esse yodha khade kar diye tha jo kissi tarah se nahi marne vale tha aur unke shamta Shubham ki jitni thi…. Unn yodha ki sankhiya 4 thi…..


Shubham: Vo bhi unke saath maidan mei khud gaya Talwar lekar…. Aur iske saath hi ho gaya mukabala shuru…. Iss mukabale ka asli karan sirf ek hi tha aur vo tha ki Shubham apne man ki frustration nikal raha tha…. Jiss baat ka liye vo khudko shant nahi kar sak raha tha uska gussa vo apni training ko aur bada kar aur saath hi unn logo ka upar nikalna cahata tha jinhe kissi bhi chij se koi nuksan nahi hota….


Kaafi der tha Shubham na unn logo ka saath pasina bahaya aura lag alag taraf ka weapons ka use kara, par iske ander usne kissi bhi tarah ka apne magic ya usse judi koi Power ka istemaal nahi kara…. Ya Keval aur Keval alag alag yodh ki kala aur hathiyar ka hi istemaal kara…. Aur aakhir mei thak haar kar vo vapas ussi kamre mei bani hui uss bench par baith gaya….


Abhi vo baitha hi tha ki uske kaano mei awaj aayi….


Awaj: Itne ashant man se yodh ki tayari karoge toh kahi na kahi khudko hi nuksaan pahucha loge….


Shubham: AS (Awaj unki hi thi….) aur Alvace aap dono se kuch bhi nahi chupa hua hai…… Aap dono jante hai ki meri shakti badne ka saath saath mere ander jo Kaali takat abhi tak dabi hui hai, vo bhi nikalne lagi hai…. Mujhe khudko shant karne ka koi tarika nahi samajh aa raha hai….. Aur agar vo puri tarah se azad hui toh……


Alvace: Usse azad hone se koi nahi rok sakta hai…. Abhi tak tum Maharani Trisha ki tarah lad rahe ho, jaldi Maharani Nabila ki tarah bhi lad sakoge….. Tum dhyan mei baitho, tumhai madat milegi…..


Shubham: Alvace aap aakhir cahate kya hai, agar mei dhyan mei abhi baith gaya toh fir jiss energy ko azad hone mei samaye hai, vo sab bhi azad ho jaayegi….Aapko pata hai aajkal mera gussa badne laga hai aur kuch samaye toh essa mehsoos hota hai ki jaise bus mere ander se koi bahar nikalne ka liye chatpata raha hai…..


AS: Shubham ya sab baato ko dimak se nikal do….. Kyunki abhi kuch aur bhi bahut saari baate hai jinke baare mei hume sochna padega…..


SHubham: Kya baat hai AS, kuch jada hi pareshan hai aap dono aaj….? Iss Sansar mei essa kya ho gaya jisne aap dono ka cehare ko pareshani mei daal diya hai….


AS: Asal mei Shubham mujhe lagta hai humare apne hi humara vidhroh kar rahe hai aur humari pith mei chura ghusane ki koshish kar rahe hai….


Shubham: AS aap kiske baare mei baat kar rahe hai saaf saaf bataye…. Aakhir baat kya hai….???


AS: Shubham Noora na mujhe ya tasveer di hai jo ki uske hisab se Aaliya ko uss World of Dream mei kaid karne ka liye gaya tha……


Shubham: Thik hai toh iska pata lagate hai aakhir isse humse kya dushmani hai…. Aur ya kon hai…..???


AS: Shubham puri baat suno aur isko thoda seriously lo…… Noora na jo hume tasveer di hai, vo tasveer Aaliya ki di hui tasveer se ek dum alag hai…….


Shubham: Toh ho sakta hai do log hoge…. Noora na jisse dekha vo ya hoga aur jisse Aaliya na dekha hoga vo ya hoga…. Toh ismei pareshani kya hai….???


Alvace: Pareshani ya hai ki ya sach nahi hai…. Vaha keval ek hi vyakti gaya tha….. Jisne Aaliya ko vaha kaid kara…. Par problem ya hai ki ya samajh nahi aa raha hai ki aakhir dono mei se sahi kon hai……???


Shubham: Par Alvace aap itne yakin se kaise kahe sakte hai ki do log nahi ho sakte hai…..???


Alvace: Shubham kyunki meine Aaliya se ya baat puchi thi nikalte hi ki Aaliya vaha kitne log tha, toh Aaliya na bataya tha ki keval ek hi tha….. Vahi meine Noora se bhi yahi baat puchi thi toh usne bhi yahi bataya tha ki keval ek hi vyakti tha……


Aaliya ka dreams ki raksha kyunki koi kar raha tha jiski vajah se cahaiye uss world mei ek ho ya anek kitne bhi shatru ko uss rakshak se ladna hi padega tabhi vo aage bad sakta hai…. Humne jaha Noora ko chupaya tha ya vahi jagah thi jaha Rakshak ko hona tha, toh fir yadi vaha ek hi aadmi tha toh fir ander jakar badal kaise gaye…..


Shubham: Alvace essa nahi ho sakta hai kya ki usne ander apna roop badal liya ho…..???


Alvace: Shubham ya bhi sambhav nahi hai……. Koi bhi dream world mei apne asli roop ka alawa koi dusre roop mei nahi jaa sakta hai aur na hi vaha apna roop badal sakta hai…..


Shubham: Toh aap ya kahana cahate hai ki Noora ya fir Aaliya dono mei se koi ek essa hai jo hume dhoka de raha hai…… Par ya kaise ho sakta hai, Kyunki Aaliya toh meri hi bhen aur meri hi shakti hai toh fir vo mere against nahi ho sakti hai….. Noora bhi Maharani Indra ki beti hai, aur Maharani na mujhe humesha apne bete ki tarah hi maana hai….. Toh fir vo kyu hume dhoka degi…..


Alvace: Iska javab abhi nahi hai mere pass, par mei jaldi hi iska karan jaan lunga….. Mei iss baat ko yahi khatam nahi hone dunga…..


AS: Pareshani sirf yahi nahi hai….. Ek pareshani ya bhi hai ki Pilaso iss duniya mei kya kar raha hai….Pilaso ko Orion ka gayab ka saath hi Orion ka saath chale jaana cahaiye tha….. Toh fir aakhri samaye mei vo Orion se gayab hokar yaha kya kar raha hai…. Usse badi baat ab uske pass apni takat bhi nahi rahi….. Aakhir ya sab chal kya raha hai….


Alvace: Mujhe Shasha aur Pilaso dono par shuru se hi yakin hai….. Mujhe humesha hi lagta hai dono kuch bahut bada plan kar rahe hai aur humse chupa rahe hai…. Isse phele bhi unki vajah se kitne hi logo ko jindagi se haath dhona pada….


Shubham: Unki vajah se…. Essa kya kiya Pilaso aur Shasha na….


Alvace: Vo vahi baat Shubham ko batate hai jo baat Glimo na Shubham ko batayi thi uski duniya ka baare mei….


SHubham: Iska matlab Glimo sach kahe raha tha,,,,, Uski duniya abhi bhi hai bus unhe dono Maa ka magic na chupa rakha hai….


AS: Tum kis baare mei baat kar rahe ho…. Glimo na kya bataya tumhai…..


SHubham: Vo Glimo ki saari baat unn dono ko bata deta hai….. Jisse sun dono ka hosh udd jaate hai…..


Alvace: Tum ya kahana cahate ho ki White aur Black Dragon dono ki takat iss duniya mei abhi bhi hai…. Aur job hi Glimo ki duniya ko dhundega usse hi vo dono takat milegi…… Par uss takat ko koi kaise sambhalega….. Kyunki ek saath dono ki takat itni adhik hogi ki duniya ka bade se bada Jaadugar bhi usse apne ander nahi utar sakta hai….


AS: Utar sakta hai Alvace….. Aap kuch bhul gaye hai shayad…..


Shubham aur Alvace: Kaise…..???


AS: Satrangi Shakti jiske ander bhi hogi, agar vo inn dono takato ko apne ander lega toh uske ander jiski matra jada hogi Black ya White mei se, vo energy bad jaayegi aur dusri energy ko Satrangi Shakti apne ander mila legi jiski vajah se dusri energy body ko harm nahi kar sakegi…..


Alvace: Baat toh tumhari sahi hai….. par fir bhi koi bhi normal body itni ek dum badi shakti ko sambhal bhi nahi sakta hai na…..


AS: Par jiske pass Satrangi Shakti hogi uski body essi chije behad aram se absorb kar legi…..


Shubham: Acha, Acha mei samajh gaya….. Ya toh mei ya fir Imosopher hum dono ka alawa koi usse hassil nahi kar sakta hai…. Vaise abhi ka hisab se ya kaam keval Elika hi kar sakti hai…..


Alvace: Sahi kaha…. Chalo ab hum jaate hai aur iska pata karte hai jaldi se jaldi hi aakhir kya chal raha hai….


Shubham: Thik hai, par aap ek kaam kare iss Tasveer ko Mathira aur Elika dono ko hi bhej de…. Shayad unhe kuch pata ho….


AS: Hmm thik hai…. Vaise tu agar free hai toh tu khud hi kyu nahi Paristan chala jata….. Vaha tu Elika se bhi mil lena aur Pilaso bhi mil jaayega usse bhi baat ho jaayegi….


Shubham: Ya bhi sahi hai…. Vaise bhi kaafi samaye se usse baith kar shanti se baat nahi hui hai…. Aur uss saaye ko marne jaane ka liye abhi bhi do pure din hai….. Ya do din nikal jaaye fir uska no. lagata hu….


Aur yaha se teeno hi gayab ho jaate hai….





Place: Fair Mount…..


Iss samaye Maharani Indra aur Noora dono hi ek kamre mei maujood hai aur dono ka bich kissi baat ko lekar bahut gambhir baat chal rahi hai…. Essa lag raha hai ki jaise dono kissi Vishay par bahut hi jada serious hai….. Chaliye sunte hai ki aakhir baat kya hai……


Indra: Noora ya tu kya kar rahi hai…..??? Tera dimak kharab ho gaya hai kya….??


Noora: Maa aap kis vishey mei baat kar rahi hai ya toh bataye…. Aakhir meine essa kya kar diya hai…..????


Indra: Mujhe pata hai tu kya kar rahi hai…. Tu Zooma aur Badshah ka saath milkar Shubham ko dhoka de rahi hai…..??? Tu essa karne ki soch bhi kaise sakti hai…… Aaj uski vajah se hi hume ek baar firse Fairmount mila hai aur tu usse hi nuksaan pahuchana cahati hai…..


Noora: Maa iska matlab aapko mere upar bharosa nahi hai na……Aapne mere piche apne khabri laga rakhe hai…. Ya achi baat nahi hai….


Indra: Noora baat ko badalne ki jarurat nahi hai….???


Noora: Maa aap hi toh kaheti hai na ki aankho dekhi har baat aur kaano suni baate humesha sahi nahi hoti hai…. Toh fir aaj aap kaise iss baat par yakin kar sakti ho…. Aapko kya lagta hai ki mei Shubham ko nuksaan pahucha sakti hu….


Indra: Matlab tu kahana kya cahati hai…..???


Noora: Maa aapko nahi pata hai abhi kuch bhi…. Mei Zooma aur Badshah ka saath mili hui hu ya khabar jitni sach hai utni hi jhut bhi…. Mei unke saath toh hu, par Shubham ko nuksaan pahuchane ka liye nahi unhe nuksaan pahuchane ka liye…. Maa Badshah(Nitin) koi aur nahi vahi hai jisne Pitaji ki jaan li thi, kyunki vo Maharani Trisha ko mante tha……


Indra: Tujhe ya baat kaise pata jabki kissi ko bhi nahi pata kit ere Pitaji ki maut kaise hui thi….???


Noora: Kyunki jab unki maut hui thi mei uss samaye ussi kamre mei chupi hui thi…. Meine apni aankho se dekha hai vaha jo kuch bhi hua tha…. Ya tabki maat hai jab mei keval 7 saal ki thi…. Mei uss din Pitaji ka kaksh mei chupi hui thi, kyunki meine soch liya tha ki aaj mei unhe daraungi…. Kuch samaye baad Pitaji bhi kaksh mei aa gaye aur unke saath hi maujood tha humare Maha Mantri….


Maha Mantri Pitaji ko kuch samjha rahe tha aur vo baar baar Pitaji ko unki baat maane ka liye kahe rahe tha…. Par Pitaji unki baato se sehamat nahi tha aur unhone usse kaha diya.....


Pitaji: Maha Mantri hum aapki baato ka baare mei sochega, aur saath hi Maharani Trisha se bhi iske vishey mei baat karege…. Unki raaye bhi jaan lete hai…..


Maha Mantri: Par Maharaj hum humare rajye ka faisle khud le sakte hai, hume unki koi jarurat nahi…. Aur vaise bhi ya toh humari suraksha ka liye hi hai….


Pitaji: Maha Mantri meine aapse jo kaha hai aap bus utna karo…. Maharaj hum hai, hume pata hai ki hume kab kya karna hai…. Iss rajye ka liye faisle lene ka adhikaar sirf hume hai….


Maha Mantri: Nahi Maharaj aap ache shashak nahi hai…. Aap apni praja ka fayde ki nahi soch rahe hai….. Hume kitna fayda hoga aur hum kitne shaktishali ho jaayega….


Pitaji: Maha Mantri behatar yahi hoga ki yaha se chale jaaye, varna hum sainiko ko kahe kar aapko kaid kar lege….


Tabhi vaha Badshah(Nitin) aa pahucha…. Jisse Dekh Maha Mantri ka cehare par ek kutil muskaan aa gayi, vahi Pitaji shock ho gaye….


Pitaji: Kon ho tum aur yaha kya karne aaye ho…..??


Maha Mantri: Hahahahhaha, yay aha tumhai maarne aaya hai…. Meine iske master ko tumhai maarne ka liye paise diye hai aur usse badi baat ya Maharani Trisha ko maane vale har vyakti se nafrat karta hai….


Badshah: Usne ek bhi minute ka samaye nahi lagaya aur ek ka baad ek do choti choti sui Pitaji ko chubha di…. Jaise hi dono sui Pitajo ko lagi, Pitaji ka sharir mei do behad hi chote chote kide ghus gaye aur vahi Pitaji behosh ho kar gir gaye….


Maha Mantri: Ya toh behosh ho gaya, meine tumhai maarne ko kaha tha…..???


Badshah: Jaisa tumne kaha tha, ya maara jayega aur iska karan sabhi ko achanak maut hi lagegi…. Ya jo kide meine iske ander chode hain na iski body ko kuch hi second mei na ander se puri tarah sada dege aur saath hi iske dil ko bhi dhadakne se rok dega….. Iski vajah se kisiko kuch nahi pata chalega ki iski maut kaise hui hai…..


MahaMantri: Tum behad kabil ho…. Tumhare Master na tumhai behad kuch sikhaya hai….


Badshah: Usne ek sui Maha Mantri ko bhi chubha di…. Aur vo bhi Pitaji ki tarah behosh ho gaya….


Noora:Aur kuch der mei hi dono mar gaye aur sabhi ko laga ki ya apne aap hi maut ka hawale ho gaye…. Kisi na bhi ya nahi socha ki do logo ki maut ek saath ek jagah aur ek jaisi kaise ho sakti hai…..???


Indra: apni beti ki ya baat sunkar unki aankho se aasu nikal rahe tha… Unhone Noora ko apne gale se laga liya…. Beti tu itne samaye se apni Maa se ya sab chupa kar kaise rakh sakti hai…. Khud dukh leti rahi par kabhi kisiko kuch nahi bola….. Par ek baat samajh nahi aa rahi hai aakhir tune abhi tak usse kyu nahi maar diya….


Noora: Nahi Maa, sone ka anda dene vali murgi ko halal nahi kiya jata hai….. Usse sambhal ka rakha jaata hai….. Bus ya Badshah bhi vahi hai….. Iski vajah se mujhe ya pata chalta hai ki humare Rajye ka kon esse log hai jo hume nuksaan pahuchana cahate hai…. Saath hi iske jariye mujhe Draco ki har khabar raheti hai aur mujhe ya bhi pata hota hai ki ya kab aur kaise Shubham par humla karne vala hai….


Jiski vajah se mei sahi samaye par vaha pahuch kar usko bacha leti hu…. Phele bhi do baar Isne Shubham ko maarne ki sajish rachi thi, ek baar Fair Mount ka unn chote chote taapu par aur ek baar Zooma ka dost ko Shubham ko maarne bheja tha…. Uss din meine sahi samaye par pahuch kar usse maut ka ghaat utaar diya…….


(Friends yaha ek saval do savalo ka javab mil gaye hai…… Noora hi vo hai jo Shubham ko kadam kadam par bacha rahi hai aur saath hi vo Nitin ka saath usse khatam karne ka liye hai…..)


Indra: Toh tu Shubham ko ya sab kyu nahi bata deti hai….???


Noora: Maa aapki ladli student aur Beti Elika(Indra Elika ko apni Beti ki tarah treat karti hai kyunki Elika Noora ki dost bhi hai, ya baat meine phele bhi updates mei batayi hai..……) na mana kar rakha hai batane ka liye…. Uska kahana hai ki Shubham ka upar phele hi bahut si samasya hai, toh kyu na hum sabhi uski ya choti choti problems ko dhur karde usse bina bataye hi…… Taaki vo badi badi samasya par hi dhyan de sake….


Indra: Ya Elika dikhti behad hi masum aur pyari hai, par iska dimak mei kya kya chalta hai kisiko nahi pata hota hai….


Noora: Maa aapki student hai khatarnak toh honi hi hai….


Chaliye aaj hum bhi yahi rukte hai….. Kal fir milte hai jaha humare samne shayad koi naya raaj khule ya fir koi naya raaj janam le le…. Jaane ka liye bane rahe story ka saath….


Stay Tunned……


Note: Sorry friends meine kaha tha ki update 5000 aur usse bada dunga, but kuch kaam mei busy hone ki vajah se itna bada nahi de saka par fir bhi somewhere around 3300 words ka hai….. Kal ka update Mega Update hoga jaha Shubham saaye ko na sirf khatam kar dega, saath hi Shubham ka bhakshak ka roop ki ek jhalak dikhayi degi….
Both saari guthi sulajh gayi aur kuch nayi pareshani shubam ke aage khadi ho gayo hain jisay wo kald hi nibta bhi lega coz problem hai. To solution bhi hain jaisay vish hain to amrit bhi hai.
Baaqi 3300 words bhi bohat hotay hain. Hat's off to your dedication bro
 

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