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Fantasy Shubham - Ek Rakshak ya Bhakshak

Shubham

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Hi Everyone...

Firstly apologies for being away for such a long time...

Secondly, thank you everyone for being supportive all those period where I was writing this story. You guys has encourged me a lot for writing and whatever I wrote had one of this reason.

Now coming to the story to continue, so frankly speaking I thing there are many flaws which I can see while re reading the story again... I missed many things from small to big and the story seems been stuck or moved on wrong track specially the earth part. I am disappointed with what I wrote during that time because of these small and big flaws.

But since it was my first story and always had a special connection with me, so I will re starting the entire story in a different way so this thread is closed for writing. I will begin writing this entire story once again which is most likely be different from what I had already written but on the promise that it be liked by you again. It will be a more interesting & entertaining in comparison to the old one.

But the important note is, I need some more time to restart the thread. One I will start again, you will be informed on this threat as well as by the story section. Till that time see you guys.

Please stay healthy and safe.

Warm Regards
Shubham Agarwal
 

ragish7357

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Hi Everyone...

Firstly apologies for being away for such a long time...

Secondly, thank you everyone for being supportive all those period where I was writing this story. You guys has encourged me a lot for writing and whatever I wrote had one of this reason.

Now coming to the story to continue, so frankly speaking I thing there are many flaws which I can see while re reading the story again... I missed many things from small to big and the story seems been stuck or moved on wrong track specially the earth part. I am disappointed with what I wrote during that time because of these small and big flaws.

But since it was my first story and always had a special connection with me, so I will re starting the entire story in a different way so this thread is closed for writing. I will begin writing this entire story once again which is most likely be different from what I had already written but on the promise that it be liked by you again. It will be a more interesting & entertaining in comparison to the old one.

But the important note is, I need some more time to restart the thread. One I will start again, you will be informed on this threat as well as by the story section. Till that time see you guys.

Please stay healthy and safe.

Warm Regards
Shubham Agarwal
welcome bro
intzar rahega aapka
or plz jb bho dobara start kro to use complete jarur krna
waitinggggggggg
 
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ashish_1982_in

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Hi Everyone...

Firstly apologies for being away for such a long time...

Secondly, thank you everyone for being supportive all those period where I was writing this story. You guys has encourged me a lot for writing and whatever I wrote had one of this reason.

Now coming to the story to continue, so frankly speaking I thing there are many flaws which I can see while re reading the story again... I missed many things from small to big and the story seems been stuck or moved on wrong track specially the earth part. I am disappointed with what I wrote during that time because of these small and big flaws.

But since it was my first story and always had a special connection with me, so I will re starting the entire story in a different way so this thread is closed for writing. I will begin writing this entire story once again which is most likely be different from what I had already written but on the promise that it be liked by you again. It will be a more interesting & entertaining in comparison to the old one.

But the important note is, I need some more time to restart the thread. One I will start again, you will be informed on this threat as well as by the story section. Till that time see you guys.

Please stay healthy and safe.

Warm Regards
Shubham Agarwal
welcome back brother.. Good to see you again... We will wait for your story
 

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Welcome back to bro ab jab bhi story start karo to please isko complete jarur karna waiting. For update
 
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[color=d82230]Update 9[/color]

[color=476f97]Pichle update tak aapna dekha ki kaisa mei aur Willy sara saman kharid kar ek shop mei ghus jata hai kuch khana ka liya, jo ki Willy ka hisab sa yaha ki sabsa badiya jagah thi khana ka liya... vaha mjhe duniya ka sabsa kimati mouth organ milta hai....[/color]

Ab AAge....

Shubham : Prince kya aap mjhe bata sakta hai ya category ka kya matlab hai......
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Willy : Ha kyu nahi, dekho is duniya mei essa mana jata hai ki har insan ka janam kisi na kissi khaas kam ka liya hua hai.. aur sath hi vo kissi na kissi ek kaam mei mahir bhi hota hai.... par iska ya matlab nahi hai ki vo ek sa jada kaam nahi kar sakta hai.... vo ek sa jada kaam karna ki kabiliyat bhi rakhta hai..... par ya kuch hi logo mei hoti hai...... thik essa hi weaponary art ka logo ko bhi iss duniya mei alag alag category mei bata hua hai....

Category sa matlab yaha hota hai ki usko kiss kaam ka liya chuna gaya hai..... ya kaha sakta hai vo kiss kaam mei maharat haasil karega..... Weaponary Art mei hoti to bhut sari category hai, par in sab category ko agar ek jaisa group mei dala jaye to ya keval 4 tarah ka hi raha jata hai.....

Inka naam hai...

1) : Rakshak

2) : Yodha

3) : Ruler (raja type)

4) : Guptchar....

Shubham : In sabmei kya antar hai....
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Ya sab to ek jaisa hi hota hai, sabka kaam to ek hi hai.....

WIlly : Nahi in sabmei bhut antar hai..... Sabsa pheli baat to ya jaan lo ki iss category mei kun kiss position par aata hai....

no. 4 par aata hai.... Ruler
no. 3 par aata hai.... Yodha
no. 2 par aata hai.... Guptchar
no. 1 par aata hai.... Rakshak.....

Inn sabka kaam ko dhyan mei rakh kar hi inki ranking ki gayi hai.....
Iss duniya mei ek Rakshak ki bhumika sabsa important hai, aur bhut kam logo ko ya category milti hai......

Ya category duniya mei jo log kamjor hota hai unko dhyan mei rakh kar banai gai hai....

Ruler vali category mei sabsa nicha aana ka karan hota hai ki sabhi raja ek dusra ka rajya ko paana cahata hai jiska chalta yudh hota hai aur jo kamjor log hota hai unko sabsa jada nuksaan uthana hota hai islye.....
Inka kaam hota hai bus ek rajya ko sambhalna, jiska liya bhi usko manage karna ka liya inka pass hajaro tarah ka sadhan hota hai jiski vajah sa ya sabsa low category mei mana jata hai....

Yodha : inka teesra no. par aana ka karan ya hai ki ya apni desh ki praja ka liya jeeta hai aur unki raksha bhi karta hai, par sath hi sath ya ek raja ki baat par kisi ko bhi mar deta hai bina socha samjha.... islye ya iss position par aaye hai...

Guptchar : Inki category dusri isliya hai kyunki pheli baat to ya apni jaan jokhim mei daal kar alag alag jagah sa info collect karta hai aur usko sahi sa samaj kar vo khabar raja tak pahuchata hai jiska chalta raja dusra rajya ki kabhar rakhta hai.... ya iss information ka through hi na jana kitna logo ki jaan bacha leta hai ....

Rakshak : Ya sabsa upar islye aata hai kyunki inka kaam hota hai raksha karna, ya kisi raaja ya rajya ka liya nahi hota hai, inka kaam hota hai duniya mei sabhi log jo khud lad nahi sakta hai unki raksha karna aur iss duniya mei shanti banaye rakhna..... Ya kaam bhut mushkil hota hai aur ya bina kisi svarth ya fayda ka ya logo ka liya jeeta hai, ya apna jeevan mei jada tar apni har khushi kurban karka bhi logo ka chehra par muskan bani raha yahi koshish karta hai....

Shubham : Chalo ya to samaj gaya, par ya baat abhi bhi nahi samjha ki armor sa ya kaisa pata chalta hai kun kis category ka hai.....
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Willy : Ya saval tmna bhut acha pucha.... actually iss duniya mei hajaro tarah ka armor hota hai ya baat to tmna dekhi hi hogi abhi ki vaha kitna tarah ka armor tha.... har vo insan jo weaponary art mei mahir hota hai vo har tarah ka weapons mei mahir nahi hota hai, tmna kabhi dekha ho to har tarah ka insan ka pass uska apna ek weapon hota hai jisma usse maharat haasil hoti hai, vo talwar kunsa hoga ya huma armor sa hi pata chalta hai.... har tarah ka weapons ko rakhna ka liya armor mei jagah hoti hai aur isse hi pata chalta hai kun kis weapon mei maharat haasil karta hai.... ab kaisa pata chalta hai ki kun kis category mei hai, to uska liya aapka armor ki power kunsi hai bus ussi sa pata chalta hai kun kaha aata hai..... Actually jab armor banta hai to usko ek khaas tarah ki energy milti hai aur duniya ka sabsa acha armor ki energy LAND OF MOUNTAINS AND RIVER naam ka rajya mei milti hai......

Total Paanch tarah ki energy hoti hai iss duniya mei jo armor mei paayyi jati hai...... Jisma sa 4 energy to humari life elements hi hota hai.... Vo hota hai Water, Air , Fire, Earth..... Par jo paanchvi energy hoti hai vo ek dum alag hai, vo kya hai aur kya kar sakti hai ya kisi ko nahi pata hai..... uss energy ka armor aaj tak kissi na nahi dekha hai......

Jiska armor par fire energy hoti hai vo Ruler category hoti hai, Jo Water category hoti hai vo yodha ko denote karti hai, jo air energy hoti hai vo Guptchar ko denote karti hai aur sabsa aakhiri Earth denote karti hai Rakshak ko kyunki vo humsha land ki taraf sabka liya saman rahata hai.....

Jab hum armor pehan leta hai to humari energy jo huma iss jivan mei phele sa mili hai vo energy aur armor ki energy match hona par ek music play hota hai, jaisa tmhara armor pehnana par hua tha bs ussi sa pata chalta hai.... ek baat aur bata deta hu jisko jiss energy ka armor mila hai uska upar uss tarah ka magic kuch bhi harm nahi kar skta hai.....

Shubham : Ab samjha dhang sa ab ya bhi bata do mjhe kunsa weapon mei marath milegi .......
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Willy : Ya javab mera pass nahi hai, kyunki tmhara armor ek dum alag hai, essa meina kabhi nahi dekha hai kyunki ismei lagbhag har weapon ki jagah hai par jo sabsa alag hai vo hai ki ismei koi bhi shield rakhna ki jagah nahi hai.... mei to samaj hi nahi paa raha hu ki ya kaisa armor hai..... Mjhe lagta hai huma Isabella sa hi pata chal sakta hai iss armor ka bara mei......

Shubham : Yar ya Isabella kun hai ab???

Willy : Ary maaf karna meina to tmhai apna group ka intro hi nahi diya...... Chalo tmhai ab apna group ko uska naam bata deta hu......

Dekho humara group ka naam hai FUN ADVENTURER, Ya naam group ka Madam Mariana na rakha hai..... Yaha school mei sabhi logo ko group mei raha kar hi apni education puri karni hoti hai..... Sabhi logo ka apna alag alag group ka naam hota hai jo teachers rakhta hai..... Sabhi logo ko apni pasand ka teacher ka sath education puri karna ki permission hoti hai, aur agar koi bich mei cahaiye to vo group badal sakta hai, par uska liya dono group ka teacher usko essa karna ki permission de deta hai to..... har group mei maximum 12 log ho sakta hai.... ismei aap senior ka sath aur unka bina sabhi tarah ka logo ko ka mila jula group ho jata hai......

Ab aap karta hai apna group ki..... Jaisa tmhai phele hi bataya humara group mei 8 log ho gaye hai tmhai mila kar......

Chalo to sabka intro de deta hu ab tmhai...

1) Wilson ( Willy) ; Prince of Elf, iska physique bilkul perfect gym tonned hai, iski height 5ft 6" ki hogi, ya bhai sahab dekhna mei ek dum doodh ki taraf safaid hai...... inka kaan thoda jada nikla hua hai.....inka bara mei sabsa khaas baat ya hai ki ya kahi bhi khudko adjust kar leta hai, inmei ego naam ki koi bimari nahi hai..... ya kissi ko apna dil de chuka hai par kisko vo aage pata chalega.....inka weapon vasa to Dhanush hi hai, jisma inko maharat haasil hai...... Inki category hai Guptchar ki.... inko weapon mei dagger bhi acha chala sakta hai par maharat hassil nahi hogi... Abhi inki umar hai 17 saal.....

2) Nisham : ya Prince of Dedo hai.... inka rajya bhut bada nahi hai, par bhut chota bhi nahi hai.....yaha ka log bhut khushal hai..... Inka bara mei baat kara to ya bhai sahab dikhhna mei average hai.... inki height 5ft 5" hai, ya dikhna mei dusky color ka hai.... inka weapon hai talwar..... aur inki category hai Ruler ki.... Ya bhai sahab apna padosi rajya ki rajkumari sa prem karta hai, jiska naam hai Rimjhim.... Inko cockroach sa bhut dar lagta hai..... inki umar hai 18 saal...

3) Jhiku : Ya Shanderabad naam ka rajya ka pramukh jadugar ka beta hai.... Ya dikhna mei ek dum kaala hai, par dil sa ek dum saaf hai, iski height 5ft 8" ki hai..... ya thoda shant svabhav ka insan hai.... par agar inko gussa aa jaye to ya bhut khatarnak ho jata hai..... Inka pas weapons ki koi shakti nahi hai..... par inka pass magic power hai apna pita aur maa ki tarah, par inki magical power bhut khatarnak hai...... ya apni magical power sa kissi bhi insan ka dimak sa khel sakta hai....
Inki bhi ek premika hai jiska naam hai Avantika.......ya bhai uski har baat manta hai......inki shadi usse honi fix hai.... inki umar hai 20 saal

4) Isabella : ya hai Princess of Land of Mountains and Rivers ki, ya dikhna mei ek dum barbie doll ki tarah dikhti hai, inko koi dekhle to yahi smjhega ki ya to ek dum chui mui hai.... jisko jara sa touch karo to dar jaye..... par ya hai uski bilkul ulti..... Ya ek dum fair color ki hai..... Inki height 6ft ki hai..... regular exercise karna ki vajah sa inka figure stats hai 34-24-36, ya madam bhi guptchar category mei aati hai..... Inka pass weaponary mei to dagger weapon mei expert hassil hoti hai..... par ya without weapon combat mei bhi ek dum mahir hai..... inko duniya ki sari non weaponary combat skill mei expertise hai..... Inko aaj tak koi essa nahi mila jisse ya pyar kar saka..... ya apna prince charm ki talash mei hai abhi bhi.... inki umar abhi keval 16 saal hai....

5) Rimjhim ; Ya madam Princess of Swarna hai...... Inka baremei baat kara to ya dikhna mei khubsurat hai... inka color thoda yellowish hai.... Ya madam ki strenght hai inka magic...... Inka pass healing magic hai jo ki bhut rare category magic hai..... ya weapons mei interested nahi hai..... Inki figure stats 32-26-34 ki hai.... aur inki umar bhi 18 saal ki hai....

6) Avantika : Ya madam Orion desh ka mantri ki beti hai..... Par inko vaha ka raja na apnibeti ki tarah ki mana hai...... islye ya kaha ja sakta hai ki ya vaha ki princess bhi hai..... Inka bara mei bata du ya wheatish color ki hai.... but inka facial impression bhut acha hai..... ya madam weapons mei talwar chalana mei mahir hai..... inki category Yodha vali hai..... Inki hi shadi Jhiku sa honi hai...... par ya abhi sa usse apna sab kuch manti hai aur iski har choti badi baat ka khayal rakhti hai..... Inki stats hai 35-27-34..... Inki height hai 5ft 5" aur inki umar hai 18 years...

7) Nancy: Ya madam Princess of Arington hai..... Ya dikhna mei bhut pretty hai.... Inka color fair hai par sath hi inka gaal humsha gulabi hi rehata hai..... Inki Height hai 5ft 9".... Ya magic bhi karti hai aur weapons mei bhi expert hai..... Inki category hai Yodha vali..... Inka magic hai water element ka..... inko jo weapon mila hai vo hai axe..... Inki figure stats hai 34-28-36..... Ya madam ki age abhi 18 hai..... Ya madam apna dil Prince of Tareham ko de chuki hai, par aaj tak na unsa kabhi baat kari hai, aur na hi vo inko janta hai..... ya ek tarfa pyar hai.....

Shubham ; Humm ab samjha...... Iska matlab jo aaj subh tea stall mei logo ki saaf safai kar rahi thi vo hai Isabella..... aur jo unka haath jod raha tha vo hai Nisham aur Ladki 2 thi vo hai Rimjhim..... sahi kaha na.....

Willy : ek dum sahi kaha tmna ......

Idhar ya sab baate khatam hi hui thi ki humara order aa gaya......

Willy : Lo yaar tmhai sab kuch batana mei pata hi nahi chala ki kab itna tym ho gaya hai..... Chalo ab hum khana suru karta hai....

Aapko bata du jo humna mangwaya tha vo tha Srirum aur sath mei MASKA...... Maska ko aap earth ka sizzler kaha sakta hai veg....... aur SRIRUM ek alag si drink hai vaha ki jo ki strawberry ka juice, mint, lemon, sugar, and some amount of red wine jisma alchool bilkul na ka barabar hota hai....

Chaliye dosto ab hum log khana kha leta hai aap sab bhi kha lijiye.... fir milta hai next update mei abhi Intro update pura nahi hua hai..... abhi huma School aur baki bhut si chijo ka bara mei janana hai....

SO stay tunned for next update...... aap sabka valuable comments ka intejar rahega.......
Bahut hi sandar kahani hai bhai Update no. 7 mising hai bhai
 
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Hi Everyone...

Firstly apologies for being away for such a long time...

Secondly, thank you everyone for being supportive all those period where I was writing this story. You guys has encourged me a lot for writing and whatever I wrote had one of this reason.

Now coming to the story to continue, so frankly speaking I thing there are many flaws which I can see while re reading the story again... I missed many things from small to big and the story seems been stuck or moved on wrong track specially the earth part. I am disappointed with what I wrote during that time because of these small and big flaws.

But since it was my first story and always had a special connection with me, so I will re starting the entire story in a different way so this thread is closed for writing. I will begin writing this entire story once again which is most likely be different from what I had already written but on the promise that it be liked by you again. It will be a more interesting & entertaining in comparison to the old one.

But the important note is, I need some more time to restart the thread. One I will start again, you will be informed on this threat as well as by the story section. Till that time see you guys.

Please stay healthy and safe.

Warm Regards
Shubham Agarwal
Welcome back bro
 
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Hi Everyone...

Firstly apologies for being away for such a long time...

Secondly, thank you everyone for being supportive all those period where I was writing this story. You guys has encourged me a lot for writing and whatever I wrote had one of this reason.

Now coming to the story to continue, so frankly speaking I thing there are many flaws which I can see while re reading the story again... I missed many things from small to big and the story seems been stuck or moved on wrong track specially the earth part. I am disappointed with what I wrote during that time because of these small and big flaws.

But since it was my first story and always had a special connection with me, so I will re starting the entire story in a different way so this thread is closed for writing. I will begin writing this entire story once again which is most likely be different from what I had already written but on the promise that it be liked by you again. It will be a more interesting & entertaining in comparison to the old one.

But the important note is, I need some more time to restart the thread. One I will start again, you will be informed on this threat as well as by the story section. Till that time see you guys.

Please stay healthy and safe.

Warm Regards
Shubham Agarwal
Welcome back bro
 
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