Fantasy Shubham - Ek Rakshak ya Bhakshak

[ashish_1982_in]

Update 77​

Pichle update mei aapne dekha ki Shubham Delhi mei hi bani ek essi jagah jaata hai, jaha usse Neeta ka hone ki sambhavna thi, par jab vo vaha pahuchta hai, toh jo vaha dekhta hai usse uska dimag hi ghum jaata hai……. Usse Karuna ki madat sa ek clue milta hai……

Ab Aage……

Shubham: Ab bus intezar tha toh raat ka, jab mei unke upar humla bol du…… Mei apne room mei aakar humle ka liye jin chijo ki jarurat thi vo sab kuch arrange kar raha tha aur saath hi saath meine ek baar fir sa apne plan ko execute karne sa phele usko check kara aur apne unn paancho khaas agents ki bhi madat li…… Sabhi na har chij ko bade dhyan deta hua ek plan banaya…….

Thik Raat 12 baje mei apne kamre sa nikal kar, pahuch gaya uss Dharamshala ka uss Electricity board ka pass jaha sa sabhi jagah light distribute hoti hai uss jagah……. Meine Light to band kar diya, par jaise hi meine light band kari, vaha par goli chalne lagi…….

SHubham: Vaha goliyo ka chalne ka matlab tha, unhe mere yaha hone ki khabar hona……. Par kyunki vo andhere mei andha dun firing kar rahe tha, islye unhe ya nahi pata tha mei kaha hu, kyunki phele insaan ka goli chalate hi mein apni jagah chod chukka tha aur vaha sa thoda dhur nikal gaya tha……..

Mein badi hi savdhani sa unki taraf bada aur unn sabhi ko apne pass maujood khanjar sa upar pahucha diya……

Shubham: Par ab mere liye bhi khatra bad gaya tha, kyunki unhe ya toh pata chal hi gaya tha ki mei issi dharamshala mei hu…… Islye samaye tha naye plan ka aur mere backup plan ka……. Jisse meine phele hi essi paristhiti ka liye bana rakha tha……

Ab kyunki mei sidhe tarike sa uss kamre tak nahi pahuch sakta tha, jaha unhone ladki ko rakha tha, islye meine piche ka darwaje ko kaam mei lene ki sochi, bole toh uss kamre ki khidki ko kaam mei lene ki sochi…… Iske liye meine phele hi apne dhanush ka istemaal karke uss kamre ki khidki tak pahuchne ka liye apne teero ko uss dharamshala ki deewar ko bhed kar unmei gaad diya tha, jisse mei latak kar unki madat sa upar chad saku……(SHayad aapne ya scene Prince of Persia mei dekha hoga, jab dastan suru mei gate kholne ka liye deewar sa kaise chaat par jaata hai……

Mein apne teero ki madat sa uss khidki tak pahucha aur usse ander ghus gaya…… Jaise hi mei ander ghussa, uss pura Dharamshala ki light vapas aa gayi thi…… Aur vaha samne khada tha vahi Caller jisse Meine Neeta ko chudane ka liye kaha tha……

Caller: Welcome bro Welcome…….. Vaise lagta hai bada yaarana hai tumhare aur uss ladki ka bich….. Jo uss mamuli si ladki ko bachane ka liye yaha aa gaye……. Par afsoos vo toh yaha hai hi nahi……. Usse toh meine kahi dusri jagah rakh rakha hai……

Vo toh tujhe ab kabhi nahi milegi iss jeevan mei…… Ab toh vo tujhe upar jaane ka baad hi mil sakegi…….

Shubham: Mein bus uske pass gaya aur uske upar jor jor sa hasne laga…….

Caller: Mujhe esse hasta hua dekh usko kuch samajh nahi aaya……. Kya be tu pagal ho gaya hai kya….. Jo esse has raha hai…… Lagta hai apni maut ko samne dekh tera dimak kharab ho gaya hai……..

Shubham: Mei badi mushkil sa apni hasi rokte hua……. Abe chirkut, tujhe kya laga tha tere jaise mamuli log mujhe bevakuf bana dega aur mei ban jaunga…… Tujhe lagta hai mujhe pata nahi hai ki tu pichle 1 saal sa mere piche hai……..(Friends iss time period mei mera judwa include hai…..) Abe mujhe toh ya bhi yaad hai ki tune abhi haal mei hi 3 mahine phele mere hi guards ko kharid kar mujhe marne ka plan banaya, par usse phele hi Neeta na unhe maar diya…….

Tune kya socha tha, jab tune call kara aur piche sa Neeta ki awaj aur yaha ka indication bataye toh mei tere iss plan mei aa jaunga……. Munna abhi tu iss game mei bhut chota hai re…….

Tabhi uss Caller ka phone bajne lagta hai……

Shubham: Uthale Uthale, tere jeevan ka aakhri call hai…… Iske baad tu kabhi call na sun sakega aur na hi kabhi kisi ko call ka sakega……

Caller: Hello…… Ha pakiya bol……

Samne sa:…………..

Caller: Ya sunte hi vo mujhe esse dekhne laga jaise ki meine uski bina tel ka hi le li ho……..

Shubham: Kya hua, pakiya na bus yahi bola na ki jab vo factory pahucha toh tere saare aadmi mare hua tha aur Neeta bhi nahi thi…… Tujhe ek raaj ki baat batau, pakiya bhi nahi raha ab…… Ab tak uske praan nikal gaye hoge Yamraj ka pass pahuchne ka liye……

Caller: Tune cahaiye Neeta ko chuda liya hoga, par ab tu yaha sa kaise jaayega……..??? Dekh raha hai, yaha hum kitne hai aur tu akela…….

Shubham: Kya yaar jab baat karta hai choti hi karta hai…… Ruk aur mei ek baar sitti baja deta hu…… Dekhte hi Dekhte uss dharamshala ka saare kamro ka gate khulte hai, aur usmei sa nikalte hai haatho mei hathiyaar liye hua guards……

Dekh ab kiske pass kitne log hai…… Tujhe kya laga ya sab guests hai….. Ya sab mere hi aadmi hai….. Jinhe meine kuch din phele hi yaha pahucha diya…… Mujhe tera ya plan toh bhut phele sa hi pata tha, par meine tujhe roka nahi kyunki mei dekhna cahata tha ki tere piche kun hai, jo ya sab tujhc kara raha tha……

Caller: Apne piche itne log dekh usse ya samajh aa gaya tha ki aaj uska jeevan khatam…….. Tujhe ya sab kaise pata chala……???

Shubham: tu jaana cahata hai toh sun……. Tera jo right hand tha, vo koi aur nahi mera hi guard tha…… tu kab kya krega vo mujhe batata raheta tha……

Caller: Par vo toh 6 mahine phele hi chod kar chala gaya tha, toh kaise pata chala……??

Shubham: Ary vo gaya nahi meine hi bhagaya tha…… Tu jaanta nahi hai usne tere phone mei teri sim badal di thi….. Usne teri original sim ki jagah mere duwara banayi gayi vo sim laga di, jisse mei teri har baat jo tu call par karta tha, usse sun sakta tha……

Aur usse hi mujhe pata chala ki tere piche koi hai, par tune kabhi uska naam nahi liya islye pata nahi chala ki vo kun hai……..
Par saale tune aakhri minute mei plan badal kar, Neeta ko apne hi Boss Shanti Bhushan ki band hui uss Factory mei rakha jisse usne aajse koi 30 saal phele hi band kar diya tha…… Par ya acha hua ki meine phele hi Neeta ko ek device inject kar rakha tha Nano technology ka, jisse mujhe ya pata chalta raheta hai ki vo kab kaha hai…..

Par chod ya sab aur sirf aur sirf ya bata ki aakhir vo kun hai jisne Warehouse Godown mei mere dosto par humla kara tha…….. Aur jhut bolne ki sochna bhi nahi, kyunki mujhe pata hai ya kaam tere boss ka nahi hai……

Caller: hahahaha……. Tu kabhi nahi jaan sakega uska naam….. Aur ya bhi mat sochna ki Shanti Bhushan iss game ka khiladi hai……. Vo toh iss game mei ek bakri hai, jisse sher ka shikar karne ka liye bandha gaya tha…..

Tera Pariwar na phele, na aaj aur na hi aane vale samaye mei surakshit hai…… Tu toh ya bhi nahi janta hai ki kun tera dushman hai aur kun dost

Shubham: Uski iss hassi aur baat na mujhe apna aapa khone par majbur kar diya tha…… Mere liye khudko rokna na mumkin tha islye meine uske sharir ka ek dum chote chote tukda kar diya…… Iss bich na jaane kaise mei apne aapko nahi rok saka…….

Aaj toh jaise mera upar hawaniyat hi savar ho gayi thi…… Ussi ka chalte meine uss Caller ka sharir ko pura chote chote tukde mei kaat diya tha….. Jo log uss caller ka saath tha, unn logo ki aage aur piche sa dono taraf sa hi geeli ho gayi thi, aur kuch toh behosh hi ho gaye tha……

Mere Saath jo tha, vo bhi ya dekh shok mei tha, kyunki unhone kabhi meri essi hawaniyat nahi dekhi thi……

Agli subha News aur paper par sirf aur sirf ek hi khabar thi…… Vo thi uss Caller ki Dil dehlane vali maut…… Saath hi saath uske saath tha ek message…… Agar Delhi ka gundo na ab bhi apna rasta nahi badla, toh agli maut isse kahi gunna bhayanak hogi……

Ya khabar mei aur Neeta dono hi Hospital mei baith kar TV par dekh rahe tha……

Neeta: Shubham, ab samaye aa gaya hai ki Sword of Destruction ko laaya jaaye aur inn sabhi ko jaldi hi thik kara jaaye…..
Aur tum yaha ki saari chinta chod do…… Ab mei yaha sab dekh lungi, tum bus Magical City jaao aur jald sa jald Magical City sa Sword of Destruction ko laana hoga…..

Tabhi piche sa ek awaj aati hai…..

Awaj: Sword of Destruction, Magical City……. Ya kya baat kar rahe ho tum dono……????

Shubham: Ya awaj sunte hi Neeta aur mujhe jhatka lagta hai…… Kyunki hum iss awaj ko pehachante tha…… Ya awaj thi
Aaliya ki…… Jo na jaane yaha kya karne aayi thi…….

Neeta: Ary Aaliya kuch nahi…… Ya kya hai meine na ek magical book mei padha tha, toh…….

Aaliya: Bich mei….. Neeta yaha kya tumhai mere sar par kuch likha dikh raha hai, jo bacho jaise bevakuf banane ki koshish kar rahi ho…… Mujhe sirf aur sirf sach jaana hai…… Aakhir yaha kya chal raha hai……???

Neeta: Vo na…..

Shubham: Nahi Neeta, ab aur kuch nahi…… Shayad yahi vo samaye hai jab huma sach ko bata dena cahaiye, vaise bhi aage aur piche mujhe ya baat batani hai…….

Shubham: Aaliya mei tumhai sab kuch sach sach bata deta hu……. Sachai ya hai ki mei koi aam insan nahi hu…… Mujhmei kuch SuperNatural Powers hai, par abhi mei unhe use nahi kar sakta hu…… Bus unn Powers ko vapas use kar sakne ka liye mujhe Sword of Destruction ko paana hoga, jo ki ek dusri duniya mei, jisse Magical City ka naam sa jaante hai sabhi……

Aaliya: Kuch der mere kahane ka baad sirf aankh gadaye meri taraf dekhti rahi, aur uske baad piche mudkar chali gayi……

Neeta: Ya kaisa reaction tha…… Kya vo gussa hai ya fir khush……

SHubham: Mujhe nahi pata….. Mujhe nahi lagta hai, usse meri baat par bharosa hua hai….. Khair chodo meine usse sach bata diya, ab jo usse acha lage vo vahi kare…… Vaise huma jo ladki mili thi, uska kya hai…..????

Neeta: Meine sab pata kar liya hai….. Ek garib ghar ki ek lauti ladki hai….. Sehar mei Maa Baap na padhne bheja tha, yaha hostel mei saath ki ladkiyo na uske kuch adult videos aur images leli, aur usse jor jabardasti karke iss kaam mei laga diya…….. Ya uska first time tha, par khushi ki baat ya hai ki unhone uske saath kuch nahi kara tha aur usse keval behosh karke rakha tha……

Par ab vo thik hai aur usse har tarah ki madat aur iss baat ko bhulne mei madat kar rahi hai humari staff ki ladkiya……. Par ek baat batao, tumne uss caller ka ghar itne paise kyu bheja……???

Shubham: Kyunki mei nahi cahata hu ki iss duniya mei ek caller fir koi bane…… Tumhai pata hai caller na ya kaam majburi mei suru kara tha…… Sabse phele usne ya sab kuch apni kitabo ka liye paisa jama karne ka liye suru kara tha….. Par halat ko kuch aur manjur tha, samaye na uske jeevan ko esse badla ki uska jeevan kitabo ki jagah sirf yahi sab mei ulajh kar raha gaya…… Vo jo nahi kar saka tha, vo apne bête ka jariye karna cahata tha…… Vo usse ek bade aur ache English Medium school mei padha raha tha aur saath hi saath uski padhai mei kissi tarah ki problem na ho uska pura dhyan rakhta tha……

Uske ghar valo ko nahi pata ki vo kya karta tha……. Islye meine uske ghar paise bheja, taaki uska beta padh sake aur uske pariwar ki jarurate bhi puri ho sake…… Neeta yaad rakhna uske Pariwar ko koi taklif na ho kabhi sirf islye ki unke pass paise nahi hai…..

Neeta: Tum sach mei Rakshak ho, uss pariwar ki madat karke unki Raksha kar rahe ho aur Caller ko maar kar iss duniya ki Raksha kar rahe ho…….

Mein kuch kahu, usse phele ek awaj aati hai…… Ya tha Ramswaroop (Eravat)……

Ramswaroop: SHubham meri Guruji sa baat ho gayi hai, unhone tumhai aaj hi raat mei jungle bulaya hai…..

Shubham: Thik hai, mei aaj raat hi vaha pahuch jaaunga…...

Shubham: ya baat ka baad mei Elika ka room mei gaya….. Vo vaha comma mei thi….. Uski essi halat ka kahi na kahi jimmedar
mei hi tha…… Uske sharir mei kaafi jagah patti aur kaafi saari pipes lagi hui thi….. Iss humle mei sabse jaada vahi chotil hui thi…… Uski essi halat dekh mei rok na saka khudko aur do boond aasu aa hi gaye meri aankho mei…. Khair meine khudko
sambhala……..

Shubham: Elika mei jaldi hi vapas Sword of Destruction lekar aaunga….. Aur meine uske sir par ek kiss kar diya……

Iske baad mei nikal gaya hospital sa sab kuch Neeta ko sambhla kar….. Ab mujhe bus jaldi sa jaldi uss Talwar ko paana tha…… Aur iske liye jaruri tha uss kitab ko padhna….. Kyunki ho sakta hai, kuch esse mantr mujhe mil jaaye, jiski madat sa mei vaha ki baadha paar kar saku…… Iske liye mei ghar gaya aur uss kitab ko kholkar padhne laga…..

Vahi dusri taraf Delhi mei ek basement mei kuch bade bade Aadmi baithe hua tha aur kissi baat ka baare mei discuss kar rahe tha……

Aadmi 1: Rajveer jab tumne Special Unit banane ki baat kari thi, tab tumne internally India ko strong karne ki baat kahi thi, aur aaj Delhi mei ek itna bada hathiyakand ho jaata hai, aur tum kaha rahe ho tumhai kuch nahi pata……

Human Rights aur Media na humara jeena mushkil kar rakha hai……

Rajveer: (Friends please note, iss Story mei Rajveer aur Rajbeer do alag alag log hai…… Jaha phela vala hai vo Desh Bhakt hai, ek Officer…… Vahi dusra vala Radha Thakur ka beta hai…… Jo kiRajneeti karta hai Nirmala Thakur ka saath….. Second vala apne party ka head ki Wife ka saath tha……)

Rajveer: With Due respect sir, par jiski Human Rights ki baat ho rahi hai, uske upar 30 murder aur 120 sa upar robberies aur extortion money ka case hai, par aajtak hum usse ek hour bhi pura nahi jail mei rakh sake hai….. Kyunki iss desh ka bade sa bade aadmi ka saath uske link tha…..Par aaj jab koi esse insaan ka safaya kar raha hai, toh hum Media aur Human Rights ki baat kar rahe hai……

Sir ya Media, jab sehar mei kahi chori aur daketi hoti hai ya fir kahi kuch galat, toh humse puchte hai ki kya hum apni duty immandari sa kar rahe hai……Aur aaj jab kuch acha hua hai, toh bhi inhe problem hai….

Aadmi 2: Mr. Rajveer baate sunne mei achi lagti hai…… But just think if someday usne aap par ya hum sabhi mei sa kissi par bhi humla kar diya toh aur saath hi saath huma jaldi sa jaldi usse pakadne ka Home Minister sa order hai…..

Rajveer: Sir aapka toh pata nahi, par mera mujhe pura bharosa hai vo kabhi mere saath essa nahi karega, kyunki vo sirf bure ka saath hi bura karne vala hai…… Aur rahi arrest ki baat toh sir aap shayad bhul rahe hai, mujhe order HM nahi de sakte hai…… Meri unit directly PM ya President ka control mei hai….. Aur hume order sirf vahi de sakte hai…… So I hope you understand…… Ab aapko hi ispar action lena hoga….. Now please excuse me……

Idhar Aaliya hospital mei Shubham sa hui baat ka baad ek bhut badi soch mei kho jaati hai….. Usse samajh nahi aa raha tha ki vo Shubham ki baat ko sach maane ya fir jhut……. Kyunki usne ya sab kuch keval Fantasy stories ya movies mei dekha hai…… Vahi dusri taraf usse vo din bhi yaad aata hai, jab usne Guruji ka ek sishye ko jaadu karte hua dekha tha……

Vo iss samaye iss soch mei buri tarah sa ghiri hui thi….. Tabhi uske Pass ek call aata hai…… Madam SHubham abhi abhi Hospital sa nikla hai aur apne ghar jaa raha hai…..

Aaliya: Thik hai, uspe najar rakhna…… Aur mujhe uske har pal ki khabar dete rahena…….

Aaliya: AB ya jaana hi hoga ki aakhir vo sach bol raha tha ya jhut……..

Esse hi raat ka time bhi aa jaata hai, aur mei jungle pahuch jaata hu, iss baat sa anjan ki mere piche piche Aaliya bhi aa gayi hai….

Shubham: Abhi kuch der hi hui thi mujhe aaye, ki ek door open hota hai…. Aur usmei sa Guruji bahar aate hai…..

Guruji: Kya tum tayar ho chalne ka liye……

SHubham: Jee bilkul…… Aur iske saath hi hum bhi ander bad chalte hai….. yaha aap sabhi ko batana cahaunga ki ek magic
door ko kholne ka baad usse band hone mei do minute ka samaye lagta hai…..

Idhar Aaliya na jaise hi mujhe ander ghuste hua dekha, vo bhi mere piche piche pahuch uss darwaje mei ghus gayi…… Aur jab vo vaha sa bahar nikli, toh usne jo dekha samne usse dekhne ka baad uski aankhe bus badi badi ho gayi……..

Vo ek dum pathar ka jaise ho gayi…… Essa Aaliya na kya dekh liya aur iss Sword of Destruction ka safar mei kya kya baadha aati hai, jaane ka liye bane rahe aapki apni kahani par……. Aapke comments ka intezar rahega……

Stay Tunned……

very nice update bhai

 

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Update

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Pichle update tak aapne dekha ki Shubham caller ko maar deta hai aur uske baad Guruji ka saath Magical City pahuch jaata hai aur uske piche piche Aaliya bhi aati hai


Ab Aage....


Shubham: Jab meine uss magical door ka raste mei sa jaise ander gaya toh mere samne k najara ek dum samanye tha, par ek chij na mera dhyan apni taraf khicha tha aur vo thi logo ki halat...... Hum jaha pahuche tha vo thi Magical City, par ya main city sa bahar bani ek jagah thi, jo jungle mei basi thi...... Yaha logo ki halat bhut kharab thi, sabhi ka sharir dekhne par hi paa chal raha tha ki sabhi ka saath sharirik yaatnaye hui hai, sabhi ko bhut maara gaya hai aur sabhi bhut dukhi hai......


Guruji: Shubham ya hai vo Magical City ka dakshin hissa...... Yaha par hum sabhi rahete hai.....


Shubham: Guruji, mujhe ek baat samajh nahi aa rahi, agar vo aap logo ko dhund sakta hai aur maar sakta hai, toh fir usne aaj tak aap logo ko maar kyu nahi diya aur iss tarah jinda rakhna ka karan......

Guruji: Vo hume nahi maar sakta hai kyunki vo iss jungle mei nahi aa sakta hai..... Iss jungle mei sa inn sabhi ko jbardasti lekar jaane vale humare apne hi hai...... Humare kuch logo na unki gulami swikar lee hai, aur yahi karan hai ki
vo log yaha sa inn logo ko jabardasti lekar jaate hai aur fir ine maar peet karke apna kaam karate hai.......



Shubham: Aapke apne log.....

Unhone essa kyu kara.....

Guruji: Kyunki........


Tabhi ek awaj aati hai...... Vo jalta hai humare ashwariye sa......


Guruji: Pranam Maharaj...... (Jee dosto ya hai Magical City ka Maharaj...... Inka bhut role nahi hai, islye hum inhe yaha
MM likhege....)


Shubham: Pranam Maharaj......


MM: Guruji aap kaha rahe tha k kissi esse vyakti ko lekar aayege jo Sword of Destruction ko paa sake aur uss Shetan ko
maar kar hume humara Raajye bhi dila sake..... Par ya toh ek dum chota sa balak hi lagta hai...... HUme nahi lagta hai ki ya uss jungle ko bhi paar kar sakega jismei Sword of Destruction hai......


Guruji: Maharaj aap thoda dhariye aur samay rakhe, kyunki Sword ki pariksha mei koi na koi safal jarur hoga.....


SHubham: Mei Guruji ka javab sa thoda sochne par majbur hua, ki aakhir us jungle mei essi kunsi samasya hai.....


Shubham: Guruji aap mujhe jaldi sa jaldi uss jagah pahuchne ka rasta bata de, mera pass samaye kam hai..... Mujhe jaldi sa jaldi Sword ko hassil karni hai aur apne logo ko bachana hai......


Guruji: Unhone bina kuch jaada bole, bus mujhe uss jungle mei jaha Sword thi, uska rasta bata diya.... Par saath hi unhone mujhe aagah bhi kara ki raste mei musibat ka samna karna padh sakta hai.....


Vahi dusri taraf jaha Aaliya pahuchi thi, vo jagah apne aap mei dekhne ka layak thi...... Vo uss jagah ko dekh kar shock mei chali gayi......


Aaliya: Jaise hi samne ka najara dekha, uska muh khula hua tha aur uska karan sirf ek aur ek hi tha..... Uke samne ek bhut hi khoobsurat jagah hai, essi jagah vo har din aur raat apne khayalo mei dekha karti thi......


Aaliya: Mei yaha kaise aa gay, ya jagah toh meine sapne mei dekhi hai, par.......


Back to Shubham


Shubham: Mei vaha sa nikal kar uss jungle ki taraf chal diya, par ek baa badi ajeeb thi aur vo thi ki abhi tak mujhe bich mei rokne ka liye koi bhi nahi mila, jabki Guruji na kaha tha ki mujhe aage bhut sa khatro ka samna karna padega....


Shubham: Par mei bhi masti mei aage badte chala jaa raha tha, jitni tej ho sake utni tej jaa raha tha...... Par koi tha jo lagatar mera picha kar raha tha aur mei iss baat sa anjan tha, vo thodi der mera picha karta raha aur uske baad vo vaha sa gayab ho gaya.....


Jo mera picha kar raha tha, vo gayab hokar sidha pahucha ek Mahal mei...... (Yaha picha karne vale ko P1 likhunga aur Mahal ka sabhi logo ko M 1, M2, etc......)


P1: Senapati M1, aapka shak sahi tha, vo ladka koi samanye nahi hai...... Meine kaafi der uska picha kara aur uski urja bhi jaane ki koshish kari, par usmei sa kissi bhi tarah ki urja nahi nikal rahi thi..... Aur iss duniya mei koi bhi essa nahi hai jismei koi urja nahi ho......


M1: Iska matlab ya vahi hai, jiske aane ka baare mei Maha Mahim na kaha tha....... Dhyan rahe vo kissi bhi halat mei uss jungle mei ghusna sa nahi rahe sake.....


P1: Jee Maha Mahim......


M1: Toh aakhir kaar Trisha aur Nabila ka beta aa gaya, saalo phele Nabila na jiss kaam ka liye mujhe iss duniya mei bheja tha ab jaakar mera kaam pura hone vala hai.......


Tabhi ek awaj aati hai.......


Guruji: Sahi kaha rahe ho M1, aakhir jiska hum sadiyo sa intezaar kar rahe tha vo aa gaya hai, par mujhe essa lag raha hai ki Maha Mahim usse itni aasani sa usse vo jungle mei ghusne nahi dega.....


M1: Vo abhi nahi hai aur jab tak vo aayega, tab tak Shubham uss jungle mei pahuch chuka hoga, aur aap jaante hi uske
ander vo kabhi nahi jaa sakta hai......


Guruji: M1 par tum bhul rahe ho vo iss jungle ko ek dum band bhi kar sakta hai, jisse todna Sword of Destruction ka bas ka bhi nahi hai, islye jitna ho sake usse ya baat nahi pata chalni cahaiye.....


M1: Maaf karna Guruji, par usse batana hi padega kyunki aap jaante hai uski aankhe kabhi na band hoti hai aur na hi kabhi usse kuch chupaya jaa sakta hai......


Guruji: Thik hai......


Chaliye chalte hai Aaliya ka pass......


Aaliya: Agar mera sapna sach hai, toh iska matlab iss jagah vo ek vishal kaaye Narbhakshi bhi milega, jisse dekhne mei hi aadmi bhagwan ko pyara ho jaaye...... Par.....


Abhi Aaliya ki baat adhuri thi ki uske man mei ek awaj aayi......


Awaj: Putri ya nagri tumhari banayi hui hai, ismei um jo sochogi, jaisa sochogi vaisa hi hoga...... Aur rahi Narbhakshi ki
baat toh bata du, vo tumhai kabhi bhi haani nahi pahucha sakta hai.......


Aaliya: Awaj sun vo dar gayi...... Kun bol rahe hai aap....

Aur aapko kaise pata ya sab.....

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Awaj: Mei vo hu jisse tumhai ya sakti mili hai.......


Aaliya: Shakti, kaisi shalti.....

Aur aap kun hai samne kyu nahi aate hai......

Awaj: Mei tumhare samne nahi aaunga, par ek baat yaad rakho tum khaas ho, kyunki tumhai ek khaas shakti mili hai, jiski jarurat tumhare bhai ko hi padegi aur uss samaye tumhai bhi baakiyo ka saath uski madat karni hogi......


Aaliya: Mera bhai, ya kun hai aur vo kaha hai...... Mei usse milna cahati hu......


Awaj: Jaldi hi vo tumhai milega aur saath hi saath vo tumhai apni shakti ka istemaal karna bhi sikhayega......


Aaliya:
Abhi Aaliya kuch kahati ki usse phele hi uske shabd uske ander hi rahe gaye aur samne sa aate hua ek bade sa haathi ko aate dekh Aaliya ki halat kharab ho gayi, kyunki vo haathi puri tarah sa khoon sa nahaya hua tha.......


Vo haathi Aaliya ka pass pahuch kar, usse apni sund(trunk) mei lapet kar utha deta hai......


CHaliye ab chalte hai vapas Shubham ke pass......


Shubham: Idhar mei kuch hi dhur tha jungle ka ki mujhe uss jungle mei ghusne sa phele hi vaha kuch Raakshaas bhi dikha...... Mei samajhne laga tha ki ya itni aasani sa mujhe aage nahi badne dega, islye mei bina samaye lagaye ek manatr padha....... " HIDARIUM BHAVISAHA" (MEANING ILLUSION) ya magic meine uss kitab sa sikha tha jo mujhe mili thi...... Iska ek sabse bada fayda ya tha ki ab mei unke samne sa nikal bhi jaata toh vo mujhe nahi dekh sakte tha......


Mei bade aram sa unke samne sa aage nikal gaya aur uss jungle mei ghusna ka liye bad gaya......


Par jaise hi meine Jungle mei enter kari, vaha ki puri jagah hil gayi aur mei bhi na jaane kaise apne asli roop mei..... Jo ki mere Rakshak ka roop tha..... Par sirf yahi jagah nahi, baaki ki bhut saari jagah mei bhi dharti mei kampan mehsoos hu tha....... Iss jhatka ko MM na bhi mehsoos kara tha......


MM: Ya kaise ho sakta hai, humare purvajo na apni kitab mei likha tha, jo bhi Sword ko paane vala hoga, uske kadam jaise hi Sword ka uss jungle mei padege uss samaye Magical City ki saari jamin kaap jaayegi aur fir suru hogi do bade takatwar logo mei youdh......


Iss youdh ka parinam sirf aur sirf ek ki haar sa hi nikalega, par kun jeetega aur kun haarega ya kaha paana bhut mushkil hai, kyunki dono hi bade ShaktiShali aur apne lakshay ko paane ka liye aakhri saas tak haar nahi maanege......


Idhar mei jab jungle mei apne asli roop mei aa gaya, toh bahar mera jaadu khatam ho gaya...... Unn logo ko bhi ya baat pata cha gayi ki mei ander daakhil ho gaya hu......


Idher mere kaano mei ek awaj sunayi di......


Awaj: Yaha sa tumhai mujhtak pahuchne sa phele bahut si kathinayi ka samna karna padega, aur vo chunauti.....


Shubham: Tum kun ho nahi pata, par itna pata hai ki mei yaha sa bina Sword ko liye nahi jaaunga...... Cahaiye uske liye mujhe tumhari ya iss pure grah ki jaan hi kyu na leni pade......


Awaj: Thik hai, toh fir apne kadam badao aur dekho......


Shubham: Muskurate hua, ab tumhai jab mei bacha lag hi raha hu, toh phir bache to masti khor hote hai....... aur ya kaha kar SHubham ek haath aage kar deta hai......


Jaise hi Shubham ka haath aage hote hai uss pure jungle mei aag lag jaati hai.........


Awaj: Bhut ache, tumne apni kabar khud khod li hai......


Dekhte h dekhte uss jagah na baraf mei badal li....... Aur dekhte hi dekhte jaha aag lagi thi ab vo jagah ek barfili duniya jaisi ho gayi thi.......


Awaj: Kaha tha na tumne galti kardi hai...... Ya aag ka nuksaan tumhai hoga, ab dekho.....


SHubham: Mukurate hua aage nikalne lagta hai..... Jaise hi bus vo aage badta hai, vo jagah ek baar baraf mei badal gayi thi uss jagah fir sa aag lag jaati hai.......


Awaj: Ya kaise ho sakta hai, tumhari aag meine bhuja di thi......

Shubham: Ya koi sadharan aag nahi hai, ya aag uss duniya ki hai jiss duniya mei keval aag hi hai....... Ab jab um isse bhuja sakoge tab mei jaanunga ki kissi barabar vale sa mila hu......


Awaj: Bahut ache bache, aaj sadiyo baad koi essa aaya hai jisne iss aag ka istemaal kara hai...... Par ab ya dekho......


Jaise hi unhone ya kaha, toh mere samne ek bhut badi dariya aa gayi...... Uss dariya mei jo paani tha vo uss aag ko apne andar khichne laga aur dekhte hi dekhte uss paani ka dariye mei hi saari aag simat gayi aur uske baad vo dariya gayab ho gaya......


Shubham: Aag ke dariya mei gayab hote dekh mera muh khul gaya..... Meine uss kitab mei padha tha ki iss aag ko koi bhi khatam nahi kar sakta hai.......


Awaj: Bache, tumne jiss kitab sa ya sab padha hai na meine uss kitab ka nirman kara hai....... Yaha chunauti badti hi jaayegi......


Aur uske baad vo awaj aana band ho jaati hai......


Shubham: Iska matlab hai ki Sword ki badha koi samanye nahi hogi..... Mujhe apna har kadam badi hi savdhani sa rakhna padega..... Ya soch kar mei jungle mei aage bad gaya......


Abhi mei kuch dhur hi chala tha ki mei vapas vahi pahuch gaya tha jaha se mei chalna suru kara tha...... Ya kya hai, ya koi bhul bhulaya toh hai nahi kyunki mere samne toh essa koi rasta nahi aaya jiske baare mei mujhe sochna pade.....


Meine apni aankhe band karke ek baar fir sa kuch manatr padhe...... Mere esse karte hi mere sharir mei sa ek laal roshni nikalne lagi aur vo uss pure jungle mei failne lagi,,,,, par mere sharir sa nikalne vali roshni na uss puri jagah ko laal kar diya, jab meine samne dekha toh mei ya dekh kar shock ho gaya kyunki uss puri jagah par bhul bhulaiya ka jaadu tha, jisse mei jaha bhi jaau ghum kar ek baar fir sa vahi aa jaaunga.......


Meine dhyan sa dekha toh vaha sa nikalne ka keval ek hi raasta tha, par uss raste ko paar karna aasan nahi lag raha tha kyunki usmei kaafi bade bade kaate nikale hua tha, jo ki ek insaan ka sharir ka aar paar bhi ho sakte tha aur saath hi vaha kuch esse colour ka phool dikh rahe tha jinhe meine kabhi nahi dekha tha.......


Shubham: Mei vaha sa aage bada uss raste ki taraf kyunki mere pass jaada samaye nahi bacha tha, mujhe jaldi hi Sword ko haasil karna hi tha...... Par abhi meine apna phela kadam hi vaha rakha hoga ki vo jagah hilne lagi aur ek pathar nikal kar bahar aa gaya......


Pathar: Agar tumhai yaha se aage badna hai toh tumhai yaha lage inn patharo mei sa sahi pathar ko chunna hoga aur uss utha kar jiss disha mei faikoge uss taraf ka rasta khul jaayega....... Par yadi tum 2 baar mei sahi rasta nahi chun sake toh aage kya hoga uske jimmedar tum hoge......


Aur uske baad vo vaha sa gayab ho gaya aur vaha uski jagah 10 alag alag colour ka pathar aa gaye, jinka colour blue, green, red, yellow, white, black, organe, pink, purple, marhoon tha. Par ab saval ek hi tha mei kunsa pathar chunu aur kis basis par chunu ya dono hi baate nahi pata thi..... Ya sab bus mere luck par tha ki mei sahi pathar utha paata hu ya nahi......


Meine kuch der tak atharo ko dekha aur uske baad meine usmei sa Marhoon colour utha liya, kyunki mera logic ya tha ki vaha baaki sabhi colour ka phool lage hua tha, par marhoon colur ka phool nahi tha, islye shayad yahi hoga jisse rasta khulega......


Meine usse utha kar uss raste par faik diya...... Jaise hi meine uss raste par feka vo vaha gira aur uske baad kuch nahi hua..... Meine sabhi taraf dekha toh kuch badlav nahi hua tha, par jaise hi meine apna pair aage rakha toh vaha lage sabhi kaate side ho gaye..... Ya dekh meine dusra kadam bhi aage bada diya....


Par abhi mei do kadam hi aage bada tha ki jiss jagah mei khada tha vaha ki jamin fati aur mei usse niche jaakar gir gaya..... Mei vaha sa niche ek na jaane kaisi jagah aa gaya tha, kyunki vaha sabhi taraf sirf aur sirf khoon hi khoon najar aa raha tha.....


Awaj: Tum aadam khor shero ka jungle mei aa gaye ho yaha ka shero ka pass tumhara ek putla hai yadi tum uss putle ko haasil kar sake toh hi tum aage bad sakoge, par yadi ya shero na tumhai khaa liya toh tumhari maut......


Par ha yaad rakhna ya jagah keval 3 ghante ka liye hi hai, yadi inn 3 ghanto mei tum iss duniya sa apne putle ko nahi haasil kar sake toh tum humesha humesha ka liye yahi rahe jaaoge......


Iske baad vo awaj band ho gayi aur mere samne ek sand hour glass ki ghadi aa gayi...... aur usse dhere dhere sand girne lagi......


Shubham: isse kehate hai, aasman sa utra aur khajur par latke..... Abhi mei ya baat bola hi tha ki mujhe ek dil dehalane vali awaj sunayi di..... Ya awaj ek ya usse jada pata nahi kitne shero ka ek saath dahardne ki thi..... Mein ya awaj sunkar hi ghabra gaya tha......


Chaliye dsto aage kya hua ya jaane ka liye bane rahe...... Aaj kuch dino baad update de raha hu aur abhi bhi puri tarah sa samaye nahi nikal saka hu, par aapse wada kara tha islye ya update de raha hu.....


Aapke comments ka intezar rahega aur kal sa regular bade bade update aane lagege.....

very nice update bhai

 

[ashish_1982_in]

Update​

Pichle update tak aapne dekha ki kaise Shubham Sword Ko Lene jungle mei enter karta hai aur uska Samna vaha par maujoot chutnotiyo se hota hai…..

Ab aage….

Shubham: Abhi Mei vaha par Sambhala hi tha ki mujhe ek Tej dahad sunayi di, ya dahad Sher ki thi ya Sheri ki kahana mushkil tha….. Tabhi mere samne kuch lines aane lagti hai aur unn lines MEI ek jagah red mark hui Hoti hai…..

MEI jaise hi USS jagah Ko chuta hu toh vo jagah ek dum khulti hai…. Ismei dikhta hai ya vo jagah hai jaha se mujhe mere putle Ko lekar aana hai…… par jiss jagah vo dikh Raha tha, uske aas pass bhut se laal nishaan bhi dikh rahe tha, jinhe dekh essa lag Raha tha ki vaha bhut khatra hai…..

Par mere pass koi aur option nahi tha,
sirf 3ghante ka samaye ki ghadi bhi chalne lagi thi…. Islye meine Par ab mere pas koi aur option nahi tha kyunki 3 ghante ka samaye ki suruvat bhi ho gayi thi jiski vajah sa ab mere liye karo ya maro ki hi ghadi thi, kyunki 3 ghante ka khatam hote hi mi humesha ka liye iss jagah mei kho jaane vale tha aur yadi mei shero ko pass jaata toh maut pakki..... Toh humesha ka liye yaha rehane sa meine marna sahi samjha aur mei aage bad gaya.....
Update

Pichle update tak aapne dekha ki kaise Shubham Sword Ko Lene jungle mei enter karta hai aur uska Samna vaha par maujoot chutnotiyo se hota hai…..

Ab aage….

Shubham: Abhi Mei vaha par Sambhala hi tha ki mujhe ek Tej dahad sunayi di, ya dahad Sher ki thi ya Sheri ki kahana mushkil tha….. Tabhi mere samne kuch lines aane lagti hai aur unn lines MEI ek jagah red mark hui Hoti hai…..

MEI jaise hi USS jagah Ko chuta hu toh vo jagah ek dum khulti hai…. Ismei dikhta hai ya vo jagah hai jaha se mujhe mere putle Ko lekar aana hai…… par jiss jagah vo dikh Raha tha, uske aas pass bhut se laal nishaan bhi dikh rahe tha, jinhe dekh essa lag Raha tha ki vaha bhut khatra hai…..

Par mere pass koi aur option nahi tha, sirf 3ghante ka samaye ki ghadi bhi chalne lagi thi…. Islye meine Par ab mere pas koi aur option nahi tha kyunki 3 ghante ka samaye ki suruvat bhi ho gayi thi jiski vajah sa ab mere liye karo ya maro ki hi ghadi thi, kyunki 3 ghante ka khatam hote hi mi humesha ka liye iss jagah mei kho jaane vale tha aur yadi mei shero ko pass jaata toh maut pakki..... Toh humesha ka liye yaha rehane sa meine marna sahi samjha aur mei aage bad gaya.....

Shubham: Mei aage bada aur abhi kuch dhur chala tha ki mujhe vo mil gaya jisse mei milna nahi cahata tha, vahi apna sher jiski awaj meine suni thi...... Par ek baat thi ya Sher aam sher ka mukable 10 gunna bada aur lamba tha aur uske muh mei daant esse dikh rahe tha jaise ki vo cheer faad dega sab kuch.....

Mujhe dekhte hi vo sher bina samaye gavaye mere upar jhapata maara, par kyunki iss jungle mei aane ka baad sa hi mei apne asli roop mei tha aur meri sabhi shaktiya ek dum free flow mei thi, jiski vajah sa mujhe ek shan bhi nahi laga ya samajhte hua ki ya sher mere upar humla karne vala hai.....

Meine jaldi sa apne magic ka pitare mei sa ek magic nikala "SARVRAKSHAM" (meaning Surkasha Kavach), vaise mujhe iski jarurat nahi thi kyunki mere pass already ek bhut bada aur shakti shai kavach tha, jo Nabila aur Trisha Maa ki shaktiyo sa bana tha......

Par mei uska istemaal abhi nahi karna cahata tha, kyunki inke Maharaj ka liye bhi kuch surprise toh hona hi cahaiye na....... Jaise hi vo mere upar kuda mei toh khada tha, par usse jhatka laga kyunki vo mera kavach nahi thod saka tha, aur uss jhatke ki vajah sa mere sa dhur jaakar gira.....

Shubham: Ab meine bhi samaye gavana sahi nahi samjha, kyunki 3 ghante ki ghadi kaafi teji se aage bad rahi thi, essa mujhe lag raha tha, jiski vajah se meine apni aankhe band kari aur ek magic aur bola "PATRATI SINGHA PRAKATAM"(meaning pato sa bana sher bahar aaye) aur apni aankhe khol di.... Mere aankhe kholte hi, uss jungle ka paidose pate nikal kar ek sher ka roop le liya tha aur uska aakar samne vale sher ka aakar ka barabar hi tha..... Par mere sher mei ek khasiyat thi aur vo ya ki vo samne vale ki sabhi shaktiyo ko jaldi hi apne andar apna leta tha aur lagatar iski powers badti raheti hai......

Meine islye essa kara kyuni mei iss sher sa ulajh kar apna samaye nahi kharab karna cahata tha, kyunki mere samaye ki ghadi kaafi teji sa aage bad rahi thi, jiski vajah sa mujhe jaldi hi aage badna hoga aur mei ek sher sa ulajh kar apna te kharab nahi karna cahata tha, vaise bhi mera sher uss dusre sher ko ache sa sambhal sakta tha.....

Idhar mei aage bad gaya aur udhar unn dono shero mei ladai suru ho gayi, par jaisa meine phele bola tha ki mere sher ki shakti har samaye badti raheti hai, jiski vajah sa kuch hi der mei dusre sher ki chikhne ki awaj aayi, jo ki pure jungle mei bilkul saaf sunayi de sakti thi aur iski vajah sa iss jungle mei maujood sabhi shero ko ya awaj sunayi di.......

Shero ka Maharaj: Ya awaj toh humare saathi sher ki hai, aur iss awaj sa essa lagta hai ki jungle mei koi essa hai, jisse uska samna hua aur usne usse maar giraya ho.....Tum sab tayar ho jaao, jo bhi hai usse hum nahi chodege......

Unke essa kehate hi unke sabhi sher tayar ho gaye aur nikal gaye mujhe maarne ka liye, vahi mujhe bhi iss baat ka pata chal gaya tha ki koi meri taraf aa raha hai, islye meine apna rasta badal diya aur khud alag raste sa aage badne laga, par mjhe ya pata tha ki mujhe inn sabhi ko maar kar hi aage bada padega......

Par meine khudpar control karke rakha aur sidha usne bhidne ki jagah ek baar apne aapko uss jagah tak pahucha dena cahata tha, jiski vajah sa mei unse ladu toh bhi apne target sa bhatak nahi jaau...... Islye mei chupte chupate hua aage bad raha tha aur vahi dusri taraf sa vo bhi aage bad rahe tha..... Mei lagatar unko dekh sak raha tha ki vo kaha sa aa rahe, par mera dhyan sirf samne tha, piche nahi aur yahi galti ho gayi, kyunki mere piche sa bhi ek bhut badi toli shero ki aa rahi thi....

Mere aage sa aur piche dono taraf sa sher aage bad rahe tha aur mei bhi aage valo ka dhyan rakh kar aage bad raha tha, par kuch dhur jaane ka baad na jaane kya hua ki sabhi na mujhe gher liya, jabki map par abhi bhi vo dusre raste par jaa rahe tha, par actual mei vo mere raste par tha aur unlogo na mujhe chaaro taraf sa gher liya tha......

Shubham: Mujhe jaada samajh nahi aaya ki aakhir ya kaise hua aur na hi meine iske baare mei jaada sochne ki icha jatayi, unhone mujhe gher toh liya hi tha ab unse ladne ka alawa koi aur option tha bhi nahi…..

Sher: Toh tu hai vo jisne humare saathi Ko maara……. Aaj tujhe essi maut milegi ki koi fir kabhi iss duniya mein apna kadam rakhne se phele 100 Baar sochega aur uske Baad hlbhi kadam nahi rakh sakega….

Shubham: Dekh bhai na mujhe tujhc koi dikat hai aur na hi iss duniya se, mujhe bus tu mera putla de de jo iss duniya mein hai aur uske Baad tu Apne raste aur MEI Apne….

Sher: Putla, toh tu yaha Sword Ko Lene aaya hai….. Par bache tu ya nahi jaanta hai ki Sword tak pahuche ka koi rasta nahi hai, tu upar cahaiye koi bhi pathar utha let’s, tujhe iss duniya mein aana hi padhta, kyunki vaha ka har pathar galat hai….. Ya kaha kar vaha maujood sabhi Sher hasne Lage…..

Shubham: Unki ya baat sunkar ki mere saath dikhana hua hai MEI khud bhi hasne Laga……

Sher: Mujhe hasta hua dekh kar, Abe tu pagal ho Gaya hai kya, phele khud hi toh bewakuf Bana aur uske Baad maut ki dekh has Raha hai…..

Shubham: apni Hasi Ko control karte hua, ary bhai MEI islye has Raha hu, kyunki jo bhi aata hai yaha sabhi ka sabhi Ko tum log esse hi bewakuf Bana dete ho aur vo bechara sochta hai ki vo yaha immandari se ladne aaya hai…..

Sher: Oye ladke, ya chaal karne ka kaam tum logo ka hota hai humara nahi, hum kisiko yaha nahi bulate hai, ya Sab Guruji ki vajah se hai…..

Shubham: meri najar achanak SA hi ghadi par PADI aur jab meine dekha ki samaye bhut teji se nikalne Laga tha aur ab bus kuch 30 minute hi bache tha, islye ab bakwas ka tym khatam hua aur meine apni aankhe band karke kuch socha aur aankhe khol di…. Meri aankhe Puri tarah SA Neeli ho gayi thi aur meri aankhon se Neeli roshni nikalne lagi thi….

Jab tak vo log kuch samajhta aur uske hisab se Apne aapko sambhalte, usse phele hi Neeli roshni unke upar girne lagi aur dekhte hi dekhte vo sab Dard se tadapne Lage….

Shubham: Meine unhe esse tadapta hua chod kar aage bad Gaya, kyunki mujhe pata tha ab unhe koi nahi bacha sakta hai, unki maut biscuit hai islye mein aage bad Gaya, thodi der MEI hi pure jungle ka Ander sirf aur sirf Sheri ka chikhne ki awaje hi sunayi de Rahi thi kyunki in sabhi Ko maut Apne pass bula Rahi thi dheere dheere tadpa tadpa kar…..

Kuch aage badne par vo jagah bhi as gayi jaha mera putla Rakha hua tha…. Jaise hi mei vaha pahuche, vaha maujood aakhri Sher jo ki Inka raaja tha, vo mere samne aaya aur mere samne Apna sir jhuka kar usne mujhe ek Talwar de di…..

Shero ka Maharaj: Tum kon ho ya nahi jaanta, bus ya jaanta hu tum hi vo ho jiska intezar hum kar rahe tha, ya Talwar lo aur mere praan lekar mujhe bhi iss shrap ki duniya SA aazad Kara do….. Hazaro saalo se tumhari hi Pratiksha thi, ki kab tum aaoge aur hume iss duniya SA Mukti dilaoge…..

Shubham: kya MATLAB???

Sher: Hum log koi Sher prajati SA nahi hai, ya toh Hume shrap Mila hai, kyunki meri Praja aur MEI saalo tak Sher ka shikar karte tha aur usse apni ek pasand hi Bana Liya tha…. Ek din hum jab shikar kar rahe tha, USS samaye iss jagah Hume ek bhut hi bada aur khatarnak Sher Hume dikha aur hum sabhi usse maarna ki icha mei lagataar aage badne Lage, kuch samaye Baad ab sabhi na USS Sher Ko gher Liya aur uske upar humla kar diya…..

Kuch der lagataar humla karne ka Baad bhi hum MEI se koi bhi USS Sher ka kuch nahi bigad saka, par achanak hi vo Sher na Insaan ka roop le Liya aur dekhte hi dekhte vo Sher ek saadhu ka roop le Liya tha,

Saadhu: Tum sabhi saalo se Nirdosh Shero Ko maare Jaa rahe ho, islye aaj se tum sabhi humesha humesha ka liye shero MEI Badal jaaoge aur iss jagah Ko chod kar Kahi nahi Jaa sakoge,…..

Shero ka Maharaj: saadhu hum sabhi par thoda Reham kare, hume essa shrap na de, krapiya hum tuch Manav par thodi data dikhaya..,…

Saadhu: meri Kahi baat Khali nahi Jaa sakti, par ek din essa aayega jab ek Manav dharti se aayega aur vo tumhare sabhi saathiyo Ko jo Sher ka roop le Chuka hai, unhe maar kar iss shrap se Mukt karega….

Shero ka Maharaj: Aaj vo din aa Gaya hai, jab tumne humare sabhi saathiyo Ko maar kar unhe USS shrap se Mukt kar diya aur ab mujhe bhi kardo…..

Shubham: Meine uski baat Maan kar usse khatam kar diya, jaise hi meine usse maara vo jagah jo phele ek jungle tha, vo Apne aap ek khubsurat bagiche MEI Badal gayi thi aur ek awaj aayi…..



Abhi ka liye yahi rokta hu aur aaj ek update aur aayega….. stay Tunned

very nice update bhai

 

[ashish_1982_in]

Update
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Pichle update tak aapne dekha ki Shubham Sword ko paane ka raste mei mili chunauti ko vo paar karta hai.....


Ab Aaage....


Awaj: Bhut ache tumne Sword ko paane ka liye jo sabse jaruri tha vo tumne kar liya hai...... Tumne ya samajh liya ki kissi ko maar kar bhi tum uske jeevan ko sudhar sakte ho, jaldi hi tumhai iss sikhsha ki jarurat padegi......


Shubham: Dekhiye aap jo bhi hai, mei aapki chunauti ko paar karne ka liye tayar hu, mujhe jadi sa jaldi aapki baaki chunautiyo ka baare mei bataye, mei unhe paar karke jadi hi Sword ko lena cahata hu......


Awaj: Tumhari sabhi chunauti puri ho gayi hai, yaha sa purv ki disha mei Sword or mei dono tumhara intezar kar rahe hai...... Aage ki baat vahi karunga......


Iske baad awaj band aur Hero bhi aage bad jaata hai......


Ab hum chalte hai Aaliya ka pass.....


Humne dekha tha ki Aaliya ko ek bada sa haathi apni sund(Trunck) mei utha leta hai...... Jaise hi vo haathi Aaliya ko
uthata hai, Aaliya jor sa chilane lagti hai......


Haathi: Rajkumari aap chilla kyu rahi hai...... Mei aapko nuksaan nahi pahuchane aaya hu...... Mei toh aapka rakshak hu......


Aaliya: Kya Rajkumari aur mere Rakshak.....

? Ya sab kya hai.....

Haathi: Mei vahi hu jisse aap sapne mei dekhti thi aur jo aapko humesha bachata tha......


Aaliya: Tum mere sapne ka baare mei kaise jante ho......

? Ek minute, tum haathi hokar bol bhi sakte ho, ya kya hai,,,,,

Haathi: Rajkumari aap kyu bhul jaati hai, ya sab aapne hi mujhe diya hai aur aapki icha ka bina mere liye ya sab asambhav hai.....


Aaliya: Meine.....

Ya sab tum kya bol rahe ho....

Awaj: Aaliya, tum jada saval nahi karo, aur jaha ya tumhai lekar jaa raha hai vaha chali jaao...... Aaj tum apne bhai sa milne vali ho..... Aaj tumhare jeevan mei vo samaye aa gaya hai, ab tumahre bhai aur tumhari jaan ko khatra nahi hai aur
tum dono ab saath rahe sakte ho......


Aaliya: (Man mei) na jaane ya kaisi duniya hai, jaha mei man mei kuch bhi sochti hu sab kuch sun liya jaata hai aur na jaane vo kun hai jisse mere baare mei sab kuch pata hai...... Abhi Aaliya aage kuch aur sochti usse phele.....


Haathi Rajkumari kya hum chale......


Aaliya: Chalo, mei apne bhai sa milne ka liye badi bechan hu.......


Aaliya aur Shubham dono hi nikal jaate hai Awaj sa milne, iss baat sa anjan ki dono ek hi disha mei bad rahe hai.....

Back To Hero.....


Shubham: Kuch samaye purab disha meiaage badne ka baad mei pahuchta hu ek pahadi par, jaha na bhut sardi thi aur na hi bhut garmi aur vaha ka temprature bhi dharti ka temprature ka barabar tha.....


Awaj: Aao, mei tumhari hi pratiksha kar raha tha..... Meine sadiyo sa jiss din ka intezar kara hai aaj vo aa gaya hai...... Sword of Destruction tumhari hai, par mei usse phele tumhai ek baat samjha dena cahatu, Sword of Destruction koi aam nahi hai, aur na isse sambhalna...... Sword ko tum abhi paa jarur loge par istemaal karne ka socha bhi nahi, varna tum usse nahi sambhal sakoge aur uske baad jo iss duniya mei tabahi hogi usse koi nahi rok sakta hai,,,,,, Kyunki Satrangi Shakti ka baare mei koi nahi jaanta hai jisse ya sab kuch roka jaa sakta hai......


Shubham: Toh aap mujhe bataye mei kaise iski Shakti ko sambhal sakunga..... Kyunki mujhe iski jarurat hai, mere sabhi dost bhut gambhir hai......


Awaj: Meine tumhai talwar ka istemaal karne ka liye mana kara hai, apni khudki Shaktiyo ka istemaal karne ka liye nahi....... Sword ko paate hi tum apni shaktiyo ka istemaal kar sakoge...... Aur rahi Sword ka istemaal ki, toh uske liye tumhai jaana ho ek dusri duniya mei jaha tum nirantar abyaas karoge uske baad hi tum Sword ko kaabu paa sakoge.....


Shubham: Thik hai, ab mujhe aagya de mujhe jaana hai...... Mei aapse vapas aakar duniya ka aadha sach jo mujhe aapse jaana hai vo le lunga.......


Awaj: Nahi essa sambhav nahi hai...... Mujhc gyan tumhai hassil nahi hoga, kyunki meine saare gyan ko 7 ratno mei thod kar iss pure brahmand mei chod diya hai, jisse kabhi koi bhi saare gyan ko na paa sake..... Tumhai vo sabhi ratno ko dhundna hoga aur jab vo tumhai mil jaayege, uske baad ek puri chandni raat mei unhe lekar Swarn Jheel ki gehrayi mei jaana ho, vaha tumhai iss brahmand ka rahasiye milega......


Aur Sword ko hassil karne sa phele ek khaas insaan sa mil lo..... Tumhai aage iski bhut jarurat padegi.....


Shubham: Guruji, meri jindagi mei khaas isthan par rahae vali mujhe phele hi mil gayi hai, uske baad ya kun hai....

Abhi vo kuch javab dete, usse phele hi vaha Aaliya aa jaati hai...... Jaise hi Shubham aur Aaliya dono ek dusre ko dekhte hai dono ko ek bhut bada shock lagta hai......


Jaha Shubham ya soch raha tha ki Aaliya iss duniya mei kya kar rahi hai, vahi Aaliya ya soch rahi thi ki kahi Shubham kahi uska bhai toh nahi.....


Dono apne hi khayalo mei khoye hua tha, ki unki tandra tuti Guruji ki Awaj sa......


Guruji: Aaliya ya raha tumhara bhai aur Shubham ya hai vo khaas insan jiski jarurat tumhai hai bhut adhik..... EK baat samajh lo, tum dono ek dusre ki sabse badi Shakti aur sabse badi Kamjori dono ho......


Aaliya: Nahi ya mera bhai nahi ho sakta hai...... Mera bhai khud apni Nani ki jaan nahi le sakta hai......


Guruji: Shubham iska sahi javab tum doge ya mei du......


Shubham: Guruji abhi ka liye shayad yahi sahi hai ki hum dono hi chup rahe.......


Aaliya: Mei samajh nahi rahi hu..... Aakhir baat kya hai.....

Guruji: Aaliya, tumhari Nani jinda hai aur vo mehfus hai, ya sab kuch Shubham na plan kara tha tumhare Pariwar ka dushmano ka liye, bus isse ek galti ho gayi aur vo ya ki isne apne logo sa uss jagah ki suraksha karne sa roka, jiski vajaha sa vaha kissi na bomb lga diya aur ya ghatna ho gayi......


Aaliya: Toh aap kehana cahate hai Nani jinda hai aur saath hi aadha Shubham ka kiya dhara hai aur baaki kissi anjan dushman ka......


Guruji: Ha Aaliay ya sahi hai.....


Aaliya: Par aap kun hai.....

Guruji: Mei hu Guru Trajang.......


Shubham: Kya, toh aap hai vo jinhe duniya mei koi nahi hara sakta hai aur jinhone iss duniya mei keval ek hi vyakti ko
apni shiksha di hai aur vo kun hai aur kaha kissi ko nahi pata hai......

Guruji: Ha mei hi vo ...... Aur ab koi baat nahi, samaye ka saath tumhai sab kuch pata chal jaayega...... DO aakhri baat pheli baat Shubham tumhai Aaliya ko dhyan lagana aur apni shaktiyo ko dhundne mei madat karni hogi aur dusra ab mei Talwar mei jaa raha hu, kyunki mei hi vo Power of Destruction jo iss talwar ko sabse khaas banayegi.....


Aur iske baad Guruji ek Laal roshni mei badal jaate hai aur ek Talwar jamin sa nikal kar aati hai aur uss roshni ko apne ander khich leti hai...... Jaise hi vo roshni uss talwar mei jaanti hai vo Talwar kuch essi ho jaati hai.....'

Shubham: Mei uss Talwar ko jaise hi haath mei leta hu, vo mere ander gayab ho jaati hai..... Aur vaha ek gate khulta hai..... Aaliya hume yaha sa chalna cahaiye.....


Aaliya bina kuch kahe uss gate se nikal gayi aur saath hi mei bhi nikal gaya..... Hum dono gate sa nikal kar sidha hospital pahuch gaye.....


Aaliya: Hum yaha kyu aaye.....

Shubham: Kyunki hume sabhi ko sahi karna hai..... Ya sabhi mere dost jo hai unpar dharti ki dawa kaam nahi karti aur unhe mujhe hi thik karna padega.....


Aaliya: Tum unhe kaise thik karoge.....

Shubham: Mei sabhi javab de dunga, par abhi jo jaruri hai vo karne ka samaye aa gaya hai......


Ya kaha kar mei hospital mei ghus gaya bina ya dekhe ki Aaliya mere piche aa rahi hai ya nahi........


Neeta: Shubham, tum itni jaldi kaise aa gaye.....

Tumhai Sword mil gayi itni jaldi......??


Shubham: Ha Neeta, mujhe mil gayi hai...... Meine usse hataya apne samne sa aur apni aankhe band kar di...... Meine jaise hi apni aankhe band kari mei apne asli roop mei Rakshak ka roop mei aa gaya tha aur meri aankhe khulte hi meri aankho sa Green Light nikalne lagi..... Vo light uss hospital mei maujood mere dosto aur Aaliya ka team members ka sharir mei samane lagi aur dekhte hi dekhte sabhi ka ghaav bharne lage aur sabhi thik ho gaye..... Par abhi bhi unhe hosh nahi aaya tha......


Neeta: Shubham, tumhare magic use karne ka baad bhi ya sab abhi tak hosh mei kaise nahi aaye.....

Shubham: Neeta kyunki mere magic na hi inhe behosh karke rakha hai aur thode samaye mei sabhi ko hosh bhi aa jaayega...... Par tum ab doctor ko kaise sambhalogi tum jaano, meine mera kaam kar diya hai.....


Neeta: Mujhe bhi Sword of Destruction dekhni hai.....


Shubham: Abhi nahi, abhi mujhe kuch khaas kaam hai......


Aur ya kaha kar mei Aaliya ko lekar bahar aa gaya aur gaadi mei bitha kar lekar chal diya uss ghar mei jo meine kabhi kissi ko nahi bataya tha......


Vahi dusri taraf jaise hi Guru Trajang na apne jeevan ko khatam kara ek ladki ki aankhe apne aap khul gayi......


Ladki: Guruji aapne apna jeevan aakhir kaar Sword ko de diya..... Par mei humesha aapko yaad karungi aur jo siksha aapne mujhe di hai usse mei kissi bhi halat mei iss duniya aur duniya ka Rakshak ki sahayta ka liye istemaal karungi......


Aur uski aankho sa kuch bund paani girne lagta hai aur jaise hi vo paani jamin par girta hai, toh uss jagah bhut hi tej aur musla dhar barish suru ho jaati......


Vahi Magical City mei ya baat aag ki tarah fail jaati hai ki Sword ko kissi na paa liya hai......


MM: Ya kaise ho sakta hai, ek itne chote bache ko Sword mil gayi, jabki usse paane ki koshish na jaane kitne logo na kari thi...... Jauru vo koi khaas tha.....


Vahi Magical City ka Mehal mei maujood Senapati ko bhi ya khabar mil jaati hai ki Shubham na Sword ko hassil kar liya hai.....


Senapati: Nabila meine jo wada tumhai kara tha usse pura kara...... Shubham aur iss duniya ka kissi vyakti ko Sword ka raaj nahi pata karne diya...... Varna Sword ko koi bhi phele hi hassil kar leta...... Ab jaldi hi uss Shetan ka ant bhi karne aayega Shubham...... Mei bhi ab apna jeevan chod dena cahata hu...... Tumne mujhe apne pyar ka vasta dekar itne lambe samaye tak rok liya, par ab mei aur iss jeevan ko nahi jeena cahata hu......


Tabhi vaha aata hai ek Shetan, jisse dekhte hi Senapati apni jagah sa khada ho jaata hai aur vahi vo Shetan Senapati ko dekhte hi gusse mei aag babula ho jaata hai......


Shetan: Vo aage badkar uss Senapati ka gala pakad leta hai...... Tum ho vo gadar jisse hum sadiyo sa dhund rahe tha, jo itne samaye sa hume nuksaan pahucha raha hai.....


Senapati: Maha mahim aapko kuch galat femi hui hai..... Mei aapke saath gadari karne ka soch bhi nahi sakta hu......


Shetan: Vo apni pakad uski gardan par aur kas deta hai aur uske baad apne ek haath ko uske sar par rakh deta hai......

Jaise hi shetan apna haath uske sar par rakhta hai vo Senapati tadapne lagta hai aur vahi Shetan ki aankho ka samne vo sab kuch aa jata hai, jo aaj tak Senapati na dekha aur kara tha aur saath hi saath usse Shubham ka baare mei bhi pata chal jaata hai.....


Shetan: Jaise Jaise vo SHubham ka baare mei dekhta hai, vaise vaise hi uska gussa badne lagta hai aur uski pakad Senapati par ek dum kasti hi chali jaati hai......


Abhi Shetan gusse mei uss Senapati ko maar hi daalta, ki usse phele hi na jaane kaha sa ek roshni aati hai aur Senapati ko lagti hai...... Jaise hi vo Senapati ko lagti hai, Senapati na jaane kaha gayab ho jaata hai......


Shetan: Apne haath sa Senapati ka esse gayab hote hi uska gussa aur bad jaata hai, kyunki ya pheli baar tha jab uske haath mei aaya hua shikar uske haath sa nikal gaya aur saath hi saath vo Senapati ka dimak sa kuch aur jaankari jo bachi thi vo bhi hassil nahi kar saka......


Shetan: Gusse mei bokhla jaata hai...... Abhi vo kuch karta ya kehata ki vaha koi aata hai......


Shetan: Tum yaha......

Ya aadmi jo aaya hai aakhir ya kun hai aur Senapati Achanak kaha gayab ho gaya...... Inn sabhi savalo ka javab aapko milege aage...... Islye bane rahe aapki apni kahani par.......


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Fantastic update bhai

 

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Update​

Pichle updte tak aapne dekha ki Shubham na Elika aur baaki sabhi par apni healing magic ka use karke sabhi ka ghaav bhar diye, vahi Aaliya ko ya pata chala ki Shubham hi uska bhai hai..... Vahi Magical City ka Shetan ko bhi Sword ka milne ka pata chal jaata hai......

Ab Aage.....

Shubham: Mei Aaliya ko lekar hospital sa nikal gaya tha aur mei usse lekar pahucha esse jagah jiske baaremei koi bhi nahi janta tha mere alawa..... Ya jagah meine khaas banayi thi apne liye, jaha meine apni training ka liye aur apne kuch khaas saman rakhe tha, jinke baare mei aapko aage pata chal jaayega.....

Aaliya: Pure raste vo kuch nahi boli aur jaise hi usne uss jagah ko dekha jaha mei usse lekar gaya, ya jagah bhi tumhari hai kya.....???

Shubham: Ha, par yaha mere alawa koi nahi aa sakta tha aur ab tum aa sakti ho...... Ander chalo aur tumhare sabhi savalo ka javab mei tumhai de dunga.....

Ander.....

Shubham: Meine ander jaakar apne haatho ko aage kara toh samne ek screen si ban gayi aur uske ander aaj tak mere jeevan ka baare mei Aaliya ka samne aane laga.....

Aaliya: Jaise Jaise mere jeevan ko vo dekh rahi thi, uski aankho mei sa aasu nikal rahe tha, kyunki usne vo bhi dekha jo mera bachpan mei meine saha tha......

Kuch lambe samaye tak vo uss screen ko dekhti rahi aur kuch samaye baad vo screen gayab ho gayi aur meri kahani bhi band ho gayi......

Shubham: Umeed karta hu, tumhai apne sabhi savalo ka javab mil gaye hoge......

Aaliya: Uski aankho mei abhi bhi aasu tha, vo apni jagah sa uthi aur mere pass aayi aur ek khich kar thapad pad gaya mujhe......

Shubham: Thapad padhte hi meri aankhe bahar nikalne ko aa gayi, aur mei bus muh faade usse hi dekh raha tha.......

Aaliya: Usne mujhe thapad maar kar mere gale lag gayi aur khud continous roye jaa rahi thi.....

Shubham: Ya kya hai, thapad tumne mujhe maara, aur ro khud rahi ho.......

Aaliya: Ha toh tu kaam hi esse karta hai....... Itne saalo se mujhc dhur tha aur baad mei bhi aakar mujhc nahi mila aur na hi mujhe bataya..... Toh ab tujhe kya iske liye tofa dugi...... Abhi toh meine bus ek maara hai..... Abhi toh kitno sa khaane hai tu soch bhi nahi sakta hai......

Shubham: Wah ya sahi hai...... EK toh itne din baad bhai mila hai aur usse ya puchne ki jagah ki vo kaisa hai ulta usse maar pit rahi hai.....

Aaliya: Jada nautanki kari hai na toh tera vo haal karungi ki tu soch bhi nahi sakta hai..... Chal ab ghar chalte hai aur Nani ko bhi ghar bula le, sabhi log tujhc aur Nani sa milkar bahut khush hoge.....

Shubham: Nahi, abhi ya baat apne alawa kisi ko nahi batana kyunki abhi vo samaye nahi aaya hai ki mei ghar valo ko apni sachai batau..... Ya baat Nani ko bhi nahi pata hai ki mei unka Nawasa hu.....

Aaliya: Nahi ab aur koi baat nahi sunne vali mei..... Tujhe pata hai Maa kitna yaad karti thi tujhe aur baaki sabhi bhi..... Tu nahi jaanta hai ki sabhi log kitne khush hoge jab tu unse milega.....

Shubham: Aaliya, please samjho..... Abhi aga mei khul kar samne aa gaya toh jo ladka ghar mei hai aur jo bhi vo karna cahata hai hum kabhi nahi jaan sakege ki vo kyu aur kis vajah sa ya sab kar raha hai.....

Aaliya: Mei na abhi jaakar usse do thapad lagati hu aur sab kuch pata chal jaayega.....

Shubham: Essa nahi karna hai..... Dekho abhi tum bus mujhe kuch samaye do, mei sab sahi kar dunga..... Bs tab tak apna ya roop samanye kar lo aur ghar jaao..... Vaha Nani tumhara intezar kar rahi hogi..... Unhe tumse kissi ko milana hai..... Par yaad rahe kissi ko kuch nahi bolna......

Idhar hum dono vaha sa nikal gaye..... Aaliya nikal gayi ghar ka liye aur Mei nikal gaya Hospital ka liye.....

In Hospital......

Mere jaane ka kuch samaye baad sabhi ko hosh aa gaya tha aur sabhi logo ka ek hi saval tha ki mei kaha hu..... Vahi doctors achanak hi sabhi ka hosh mei aane aur unke ghaav bhar jaane ki essi halat dekh shock mei chale jaate hai..... Vo puchna bhut kuch cahate tha, par Neeta ka samne muh kholne ki unki halat nahi thi..... Yahi haal meri uss team ka bhi tha jo ki mere liye specially kaam karte tha.....

Shubham: Abhi mei hospital ka ander ghusa hi tha ki bahar hospital ko News Reporters na gher liya tha..... Sabhi logo ko Neeta sa milna aur usse baat karni thi......

Neeta: Aa gaye, makhi ki tarah.... Jaha mitthe ki khushbu mili nahi ki aa jaate hai......

Shubham: Acha hua, unhone mujhe ander aate hua nahi dekha...... Vaise ya log ander kaise ghus gaye..... Guards na inhe roka nahi......

Neeta: Unhe meine hi mana kara tha..... Inhe samaye par javab dene sa ya humara picha kam karte hai......

Shubham: Thik hai, tum jaano aur tumhara kaam jaane..... Aaliya ko kuch samaye lagega..... Usse abhi involve nahi karna...... Vaise baaki sab kaha hai......???

Neeta: Sabhi tumhare baare mei puch rahe hai..... Tum upar jaao, aur mei niche.....

Mei upar pahucha, toh dekha ki sabhi log ek jagah hi baithe hua tha...... Vaha mere dosto ka alawa Aaliya ka team members bhi tha.....

Shubham: kaise ho tum sab.....??? Maaf karna, meri vajah sa tum sabhi ki jaan khatre mei aa gayi thi.....

Willy: Ho gaya..... Ab kuch kaam ki baat karle...... Aur rahi maafi teri, toh vo esse nahi milegi...... Uske badle tujhe saja milegi jo samaye aane par tujhe bata dege .........

SHubham: Hmm bolo....

Willy: Nani aur Neeta kaise bach gayi ya bata aur ya sab kya tha......

Shubham: Willy Nani ko kidnap meine hi karaya tha..... Naaz aur Reshma ya dono hi saalo sa Nani ka liye kaam kar rahi hai aur inhone abhi abhi pata lagaya tha ki iss Egypt ka koi aadmi iss duniya ko apne adhin karne ki soch rakhta hai...... Ya dono na usse join kar liya.....

Par jab mei India aaya toh ya bhi India aa gayi, inse meri mulakat Nani ka saath hi hui, jab unhoe mujhe inn dono sa milaya aur uss samaye inn dono sa pata chala ki koi Nani aur unke apno ko haani pahuchana cahata hai......

Islye meine inn dono ka saath milkar Nani ko gayab karna ka plan banaya taaki unka dushman khul kar samne aaye...... PAr usse shayad ya sab phele hi pata chal gaya tha, jiski vajah sa usne aakhri samaye mei ya sab kuch kara aur uske baare mei kissi ko kuch bhi pata nahi chala......

Uske baad kya hua ya tumhai pata hi hai...... Par Neeta ka kidnap aur baaki sabhi kuch mere haath mei nahi tha aur uske saath kya hua aur kaise ya sab kuch meine unhe bata diya......

Nancy: Iska matlab Nani aur Neeta dono ka dushman ek bhi ho sakta hai aur alag bhi..... Par abhi tak hum dono ki nahi jaante hai.....

Elika: Aur vo dono itne smart khele ki humare plan ka baare mei unhe sab kuch pata chal gaya, iska matlab koi essa hai jo humari baate idhar ki udhar kar raha hai.....

SHubham: Ya sab kuch mujhe nahi pata, par abhi ek problem aur hai aur usse bhi solve karna baaki hai.....

Iszy: Aur vo kya hai.....??? Aur ek baat hum sab thik kaise ho gaye.....??

Shubham: Dono ka javab tumhai kuch der mei de dunga..... Abhi ka liye hume yaha sa nikalna hoga aur Aaliya ki team ko yahi rahena hoga..... Tum sabhi log Aaliya sa contact karlo aur usse kahana ki Hospital mei Media aayi hui hai..... Islye vo yaha nahi aye aur tum log bhi Media ka jaate hi yaha sa nikal jaao..... Details Aaliya tumhai de degi.....

Kajal: Par, hum tumhare orders kyu maane...... Ek baar phele bhi tumhari vajah sa humari jaan jaate jaate bachi hai.....

Shubham: Kajal, I know aur uske liye meine Maafi mangi hai..... Aur mei tumhai orders nahi de raha hu suggestions de raha hu..... Maana ya nahi ya tumhari marji hai aur usse bhi badi baat ........ Meine tumhari jaan khatre mei daali uske badle tumhai jo saja deni ho de lena, par abhi mei busy hu......

Ya kaha kar mei vaha sa nikal gaya aur mere dost bhi mere saath ho liye...... Hum log hospital ka parking mei aaye aur vaha sa piche sa nikal kar pahuch gaye mere ghar.......

Vahi dusri taraf Singhaniya Mansion jaha ek dum Matam ka mahool tha, jaha sabhi ki aankho mei aasu tha..... Par tabhi Achanak kisse ka aane sa sabhi log shock mei chale gaye aur unhe muhhh faad kar dekhne lage...... Ya koi aur nahi Nirmala Thakur hi thi......

Sabhi log Thakur Haweli mei achanak Nirmala Thakur ko jinda dekh kar hi shock mei chale gaye, kyunki sabhi ko abhi tak yahi lag raha tha ki Nirmala Thakur ab duniya mei nahi rahi..... Sabse jaada apni Maa ko dekh kar khush Ranjhana hui, kyunki apni Maa sa sabse jaada pyar bhi vahi karti thi.....

Yahi haal Pratibha ka bhi tha...... Vo bhi apni dadi ko dekh kar ek dum khush ho gayi..... Aakhir uski sabhi badmashiyo ko vahi toh sahi kar deti hai......

Inn sabhi mei kuch log esse bhi tha, jinke expression ya bata rahe tha ki vo Nirmala ko vaha dekh kar khush nahi tha......

Nirmala: Ary yaar, tum sabhi ko kya laga ki mujhc itni jaldi chutkara mil jayega tumhai..... Abhi toh bhut kuch bacha hai mujhe tum sabhi ko pareshan karne ka liye......

Ranjhana: Apni Maa ka jaakr gale lag gayi....... Uski aankho mei kuch boond aasu tha...... Maa aap kaha chali gayi thi...... Aur uss din jo sab kuch vaha hua tha uska kya......???

Nirmala: Beta ya sab kuch khaas baat hai, isse mere tak hi rehane do....... Vaise na tum logo na mere upar jaane ki kriya karam sahi sa nahi kara..... Islye Bhagwaan na vapas bhej diya.....

Itne mei hi Pratibha bhi aakar apni dadi sa gale mil gayi.....

Pratibha: Dadi, aap na bhut kharab ho..... Aapne hume itna rulaya ab na aapko iski saja milegi..... Aapko hum sabhi ko shoping karani hogi.....

Niramala: Hey bhagwan, tu ayr teri Shoping kabhi khatam hone ka naam hi nahi leti hai...... Chal thik hai......... Vaise Aaliya nahi dikh rahi.......???

Aaliya: Mei aapke piche hu...... Mujhe pata hai aap kaha kaha ghum rahi thi itne dino sa...... Ab aapko na iski saja milegi......

Nirmala: Acha, toh tu bhi ab mujhe saja dene lagi,,,,,, Jara mei bhi dekhu toh.....

Aaliya: Aur nahi toh kiya...... Aapko iski saja milegi aur saja ya hai ki aapko apne haatho se bana kar mujhe aalu ka paratha khilana padega...... Meine bade din sa nahi khaya hai aapke haath ka aalu ka paratha......

Nirmala: Had hai yaar, isse acha toh mei aati hi nahi.......

Ranjhana: Maa...... Tum na kuch jaada hi ulta sidha bolne lagi ho.....

Abhi inki baato ka bich Aaliya ko Kajal ka call aata hai aur uski baat hoti hai, jaisa meine kaha tha Aaliya na bhi unhe vaisa hi kaha aur unhe ya bhi bata diya ki unhe kaha aakar milna hai.....

Idhar Shubham and Friends Pahuch gaye tha Shubham ka ghar......

Iszy: Shubham ab bata aakhir hum thik kaise hua......??? Kyunki humari halat essi thi ki hume koi bhi nahi bacha sakta tha......???

Shubham: Iszy, tum bhul rahi ho ki mei bhi Healing magic kar sakta hu...... Tum sabhi ko heal meine hi kara hai......

Willy: Wait, tune hume Heal kara hai, iska matlab ya hua ki tu jaadu use kar sakta hai, iska matlab tune Sword of Destruction ko hassil kar liya hai...... Kya sahi mei.......????

Shubham: Ha Willy...... Tum sabhi ko bachane ka liye meine Sword of Destruction ko hassil kar liya hai..... Par ab humare upar ek bhut badi responsibility hai...... Hume Magical City ko bachana hai aur vaha ka uss Shetan ko bhi khatam karna hai...... Islye aaj tum aram karo, hum kal sabhi chal rahe hai.....

Mei bhi tab tak jo jaruri kaam hai vo pura kar leta hu...... Kyunki hume vaha kitna samaye lagega ya hum nahi jaante hai....

Nisham: Shubham hum sabhi toh abhi bhi ready hai..... Hum aaj hi chalte hai tumne hume heal kara uske baad kaise hum logo ko koi problem ho sakti hai.....

Shubham: Nahi yaar, fir bhi thodi tayari aur abhiyaas karlo uske baad hum chalege..... Mei bhi kuch kaam kar leta hu jaane sa phele..... Ab mei chalta hu......

Idhar mei bahar nikal gaya aur meine kissi ko call kara..... Mera number dekh kar uss bande ka pasine aane lage aur usne darte hua mera call pick kara.....

Shubham: Mei 15 minute baad aakar tumse milta hu..... Apni jagah par hi milna......

Aadmi: Ohk Sir aur usne call cut kar diya...... Hey bhagwan isse ab kya kaam aa gaya......

Tabhi vaha koi aur bhi aata hai......

Aadmi 2: Itna dar kyu raha hai...... Vo koi shetan toh hai nahi jo tujhe nuksaan pahucha dega..... Aur vaise bhi abhi usse aane mei 15 minute hai, humara kaam ho jaayega.......

Aadmi: Tu usse nahi jaanta hai....... Vo kab kya dekh lega, tu soch bhi nahi sakta hai...... Sabhi kuch sahi ho, yahi behatar hoga, varna humari shamat aane vali hai......

Abhi usne ya baat boli hi thi ki uske sharir ka aar paar ek goli ho gayi...... Samne khade aadmi ko dekh Aadmi 2 ki bhi halat bahut kharab ho gayi.......

Aadmi 2: Tum yaha......????

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very nice update bhai

 

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Update​

Pichle Update tak aapne dekha ki Shubham apni team ko thik kar deta hai aur saath hi saath Nani bhi ghar aa jaati hai….. Vahi dusri taraf Shubham ki team Shubham Magical City jaane ka liye tayar thi, par Shubham na unh eek din ka aram karne ko kaha….. Shubham na Kissi ko call kara aur uske baad uss aadmi ka pass koi aata hai……

Ab Aage…..

Aadmi 2:Tum Yaha……??

Ajnabi: Ha mei yaha…… Mei bhi dekhna cahata hu ki aakhir vo dikhta kaisa hai….. Bhut logo se suna hai uske baare mei, ab jara mei bhi dekh lu ki aakhir usmei sach mei itna dum hai ya fir sabhi usse esse hi itna Mahan maante hai……

Aadmi 2: Tum Pagal ho gaye ho kya…… Tum jante ho vo sach mei bhut shaktishali hai aur ab toh usse uski Shaktiya istemaal karne ka liye Sword of Destruction bhi mil gayi hai…… Tu uske samne mat aao…..

Ajnabi: Chinta mat karo, mei uske samne uska dost hi bankar aaunga….. Vo mujhe kabhi nahi pehachan sakega….. Aur ya bol usne apni aankhe band kari aur uska roop badal gaya…… Uska roop uss Aadmi ki tarah ho gaya tha jisse abhi abhi isne goli maari thi…..

Aadmi 2: Tumne roop toh badal liya, par unn dono ka bich ki baate unka kya…..???

Ajnabi: Tum na darte bahut ho….. Dekho mera kamal…… Usne apne haath aage kar uss mare hua aadmi ka sharir ko apne pass khich liya aur uske sar par jor sa hamla karke uske dimag ko nikal liya…… Uss mare hua aadmi ka sharir se khoon hi khoon nikalne laga…..

Iss aadmi na uss dimak ko apne sar par rakha aur dekhte hi dekhte Aadmi ka dimak uss Ajnabi ka dimak mil gaya, jaise vo uske sharir ka hi hissa ho….. Aur uske baad usne uss aadmi ko jala diya….. kuch second mei hi uss aadmi ka sharir dhuwa mei badal gaya….

Aadmi 2: Ya dekh uski halat kharab ho gayi…… Ya kya kiya tumne…..???

Ajnabi: Jo puchna hai sab baad mei bus itna dhyan rakhna galti se bhi usse sak nahi hona cahaiye……

Abhi inki baate khatam hui thi ki itni der mei Shubham vaha pahuch gaya…..

Shubham: Suno mei kuch din ka liye bahar jaa raha hu, jab mei laut kar vapas aau toh mujhe Nitin aur usse juda hua logo ka baare mei sab kuch jaana hai….. Mujhe vaha se aane mei 3 din ka samaye lagega……

Aadmi (Ajnabi): Jaisa aapne kaha hai vaisa ho jaayega….. Hum jaldi se jaldi uske baare mei pata karne ki koshish karege…..

Shubham: Aur ha mere pariwar par bhi najar rakhna….. Dhyan rakhna koi unhe kissi bhi tarah ka nuksaan nahi pahucha sake…… Unki raksha karna tumhara kaam hai……

Aadmi (Ajnabi) : Thik hai hum dhyan rakhege……

Iske baad Shubham vaha se nikal gaya, aur apni gaadi mei baithne ka saath hi usne kissi ko call kara ….. Iss call par kya baat hui ya aapko aage pata chal jaayega…… Iss phone ka baad usne Aaliya ko call kara aur usse milne ka liye bulaya…

Kuch Samay baad dono ek Coffee Shop mei baithe hua tha…..

Aaliya: Tumne mujhe yaha kyu bulaya…… Tum khud ghar bhi aa sakte tha na….

Shubham: Aaliya abhi nahi aa sakta tha….. Vo kya hai na mei kal kuch samaye ka liye bahar jaa raha hu….. Vaha se aane mei kitna samaye lagega ya mei nahi jaanta…. Islye ab yaha apne pariwar ki raksha tumhai hi karni padegi…..

Aaliya: Tum kaha ja rahe ho aur kab tak vapas aaoge…..

Shubham: Aaliya, abhi nahi bata sakta hu,…… Aakar tumhai sab bata dunga…..

Aaliya: Shayad tum ya bhul rahe ho Guruji na kaha tha ki hum ek dusre ki shakti hai, toh tum mujhe bata sakte ho……

Shubham: Mujhe yaad hai, par tum shayad ya bhul rahi ho ki abhi tumhai kuch bhi nahi aata hai, iski vajah se tum abhi kahi nahi jaa sakti ho….. Aur vaise bhi mei tumhai saath nahi lekar jaane vala hu cahaiye kuch bhi ho jaaye……

Aaliya: Shubham apne aapko jada hoshiyar mat bano, bus iss baar ka liye mei tumhai akele jaane de rahi hu, par uske baad mei akele jaane nahi dungi….. Aur meri training kabse suru kar rahe ho…..

Shubham: Meine tumhai yaha islye hi bulaya hai ki agle kuch din tum mere uss hi ghar mei jaao aur vaha training karo….. Tumhai sabse phele apni sharirik Shakti badani padegi…..

Aaliya: Thik hai….. Par ek baat yaad rakhna iss baar aao phir tujhe line par laati hu…..

Shubham: Thik hai aur ha agar ho sake toh Nitin ka kuch pata karna…..

Iske baad Shubham vaha se nikal gaya…… Par koi aur bhi tha jo Shubham ka picha kar raha tha aur uski har activity par najar rakhe hue tha……. Par iss baat ka pata Shubham ko nahi tha…..

Place : - Magical City

Shetan: Tum yaha kya kar rahe ho…..???? Tumhe yaha nahi aana cahaiye tha, shayad tum ya bhul rahe ho ki tumhare maalik aur mere bich mei nahi banti hai…….

NM 8: Janta hu, par mei ya bhi janta hu ki koi tumhari naak ka niche sa Sword of Destruction aur saath hi saath tumhara Senapati dono gayab ho gaye aur tum kuch nahi kar sake….. Mujhe ya bhi yaad hai ki ab vo samaye dhur nahi hai jab ya Magical City bhi ab tumhare haath se jaane vali hai…..

Shetan: Tum apni had bhul rahe ho….. Mei tumhai abhi ka abhi yahi maar dunga……

NM8: Mujhe maarne se kya hoga, tumhara dushman Shubham aa raha hai aur vo kun hai ya tum jaante ho, kyunki Nabila aur Trisha ka beta hai aur usse bina kissi chalaki ka tum hara nahi sakte ho….. Aur chalaki karne ka liye tumhai kissi ki jarurat toh padegi hi……

Shetan: Tum apni sima bhul rahe ho…..??? Tumhai shayad yaad nahi hai, par uss ladke ka Pita ko meine hi apne haatho se maara tha……

NM8: Mei nahi bhula hu, mujhe ya bhi yaad hai ki uske baad bhi usne kissi ko bhi uss taraf se Satrangi Desh mei hume ghusne nahi diya…… Aur apni ya akad chodo aur mujhe tumhara saath dene do, jisse hum dono milkar Shubham ko maar sake….. Humari dushmani toh hum aapas mei fir usse maut ka ghaat utarne ka baad bhi puri kar sakte hai…..

Shetan: Usse bhi ya baat sdahi lagi kyunki usse Shubham ka baare mei pata tha…… Thik hai mei tayar hu, batao tumhara kya plan hai……

NM8: ……………………….. (Ya plan aage dekhte hai…….)

Place: Hero’s Mansion

Shubham: Mei sabhi logo se milkar aur unhe unka kaam samjha kar ghar vapas aa gaya…… Par jaise hi mei ander ghusa samne ka najara dekh kar mere cehare par ek bhut badi muskurahat aa gayi thi…..

Kyunki samne iss samaye mere sabhi dost aram karne ki jagah kal ka liye apne aapko tayar kar rahe tha….. Vo sabhi log youdh abhyaas kar rahe the…… Mei bhi unn logo ki taraf bad gaya,………

Shubham: Tum logo ko meine aram karne ko kaha tha, aur tum sabhi yaha inn hathiyaro ka saath kya kar rahe ho…..??

Iszy: Vahi jo ek ache aur sache youdha ko karna cahaiye……. Kissi bhi chunauti ya youdh se phele abhyaas samjha……

Avantika: Aur vaise bhi hum Rakshak toh hai nahi jisse koi hara na sake…… Hume toh apne aapko har chunauti ka liye tayar karna hi padega na……. Kya pata kabhi galti se hi Rakshak ko humari jarurat padh jaaye…..

Shubham: Acha thik hai, tum log yaha apne abhyaas mei dhyan lagao mei…… Mei tab tak khud bhi dhyan mei baitha hu…… Kaafi samaye se mei dhyaan mei nahi baitha hu…… Aur ha yaad rakhna cahaiye kitna bhi samaye lag jaaye, tu log mujhe dhyan se nahi uthaoge…..

Iske baad mei dhyan mei baith gaya……. Mei karib 5 ghante ka upar dhyan mei baitha raha aur jab mei dhyan se utha toh uss samaye raat ki 8 baj gayi thi….. Sabhi log ander hi baithe tha……

Agle din hum log subha ka phele hi prahar mei Magical City ka liye Magical Door se teleport ho gaye…… Hum jab vaha pahuche toh vaha ek dum ghor andhera tha aur hum Magical City mei jaha nikale tha, vo jagah vahi jungle tha jaha se mere Sword ka safar ki suruwat hui thi…..

Elika: Ya kaisi jagah hai….. Meine toh suna tha ki Magical City mei humesha hi Suraj uday rehata hai….. Vaha ka Surye kabhi asth hi nahi hota hai….. Par yaha toh andhera hi andhera hai…....

Nisham: Ha aur meine bhi suna hai ki Magical City mei sabhi ka liye rehane ka liye bhut achi vyavastha hai……. Saath hi Magical City mei koi bhi Magical Door aapko vaha ka Nagar mei lekar nahi aa sakta hai……

Shubham: Tumne job hi suna hai sab sahi hai aur jo tum dekh rahe ho vo bhi sab sach hai…… Bus kuch galat hai toh vo tumhare dekhne ka najariya……. Tum dhyan se dekhte toh tumhai samajh aa jaata ki humare aane ka anuman aur hum kaha aayege ya sab kuch humare dushman ko lag chuka hai, islye hume yaha se aage bhut sambhal kar badna hoga……

Rimjhim: Sahi kaha Shubham na……. Apne piche dekho……. Humare swagat ka liye yaha phele se hi ek puri tukdi humara intejar kar rahi hai……

Sabhi log Rimjhim ki baat sun piche mude toh apne piche ka najara sach mei hila dene vala tha……

Place: Earth

Aaliya: Subha apne samaye se Aaliya apne ghar se office ka liye nikal gayi…..Samaye par office pahuchne par usse vaha par Rajveer phele se hi office mei mila aur uske saath Raja bhi vahi baitha hua tha…… Vo dono kissi topic par serious discussion kar rahe tha……

Rajveer: Acha hua Aaliya tum aa gayi…. Mei abhi tumhai hi call karne vala tha…..

Aaliya: Kya hua sir, is everything fine…..???

Rajveer: Aaliya, actually mujhe kuch information mili hai aur hum uss hi lead ko follow kar rahe hai….. Ya actually tumhari Family se related hai…..

Aaliya: Mei aapka matlab samjhi nahi sir…..

Rajveer: Aaliya, mere kuch informer na mujhe khabar di hai ki tumhari family ka iss desh mei hone vale har bure kaam mei involvement hai…..

Aaliya: What……??? Aap kehana cahate hai ki iss desh mei hone vale illegal kaamo meri family mili hui hai…… Sir aap essa soch bhi kaise sakte hai….. Aap toh personally meri family ko jaante hai na…..

Rajveer: Dekho Aaliya mei janta hu, par mujhe upar se Special orders mile hai aur Raja ko bhi upar se hi special powers ka saath iss case ko handle karne ka liye kaha hai…… Tumhai har best possible way mei Raja ki madat karni hai aur jaisa vo kahe tumhai follow karna hi hoga…..

Aaliya: But Sir…..

Rajveer: Aaliya its an Order aur aaj se tum kissi bhi case par kaam nahi karogi…..

Aaliya: Thank You Sir, mei bhi aaj aapse yahi kahene aayi thi ki aaj ka baad mei iss unit ka liye kaam nahi karungi….. Ya raha mera resignation letter……. And Mr. Raja aapko meri taraf se har possible help milegi, toh bataye aap kaha se suru karna cahate hai…..

Rajveer: Aaliya, ya tum kya kaha rahi ho…..?? Tum thande dimak se apne resignation ka baare mei soch lo, mei abhi isse aage forward nahi kar raha hu…..

Aaliya: Sir mei already aage bhej chuki hu and mera decision last hai……. Ha agar ab mera koi kaam nahi ho toh mei jaau……

Raja: Ek minute aap jaa sakti hai, par aapko kal mujhe apne Pariwar se milana hoga aur unke bich rehane ki vyavastha bhi karni hogi, taaki mei sabhi ko samajh saku……

Aaliya: Ohk, kal subha aap aa jaaye humare ghar aapka kaam ho jaayega…….

Iske baad Aaliya vaha se nikal gayi…..

Place: Magical City

Tayon: Ya kya hai, humare Swagat ka liye itne saare bhediye…….. Yaar hum itne se aur ya itna saare…… Hum kaise inse bachege……

Nancy:: Vaise hi jaise aaj tak bache hai har musibat se….. Inse ladege aur inhe maar girayege….. simple

Willy: Ha, toh chalo der kis baat ki hum sabhi unke upar humla kar dete hai……

Aur iske baad kyat ha hum sabhi unn bhediyo se bhid gaye….. Ya ladai kuch samaye tak chali, Iss ladai ka douran sabhi logo na bhut saare bhediyo ko maar giraya, par ek baat bhut alag thi aur vo ya ki ek ko maarte, toh uske sharir se ek ka badle do bhadiya ho jaate….. Aur is vajah se unki sankhiya do guna se bhi adhik ho gayi…..

Jhiku: Ya kaisi musibat hai….. Hum inhe maarte hai aur ya log ek ki jagah do jinda ho jaate hai….. Esse toh hum inhe maar hi nahi sakege aur inki sankhiya itni badi ho gayi hai ki inhe hara paana humare liye mushkil hai…..

Siyam: Ha Jhiku sahi bol raha hai….. Na jaane essa kya ha hai pata nahi, par mujhe lagta hai hum sabhi ko yaha se nikal jaana cahaiye tha….

Willy: Shubham tu kya kehata hai iske baare mei…..

Shubham: Meine Willy ki baat ka koi javab nahi diya aur apne dhanush ko nikal kar uske upar teer chada kar usse ek khaali paid ki taraf chala diya…..

Sabhi logo ko mera essa khaali nishana dekh sabhi chowk gaye kyunki mera Nishana ek khaali jagah par hi kyu…..?? Abhi koi mujhc kuch puchta ya mei kuch kehata, usse phele hi mera teer uss jagah par pahucha jaha mei usse dekhna cahata tha…… Vo teer jaakar siddha essi jagah laga ki uske lagte hi ek bahut hi tej ek bhediye ka rone ki awaj aayi aur saath hi saath vo sabhi bhediye jo humse mukabla kar rahe tha vo sab bhi gayab hone lage aur ab rahe gaye mere dost aur vo ghayal bhediya……

Aak ka lye itna aage jaane ka liye bane rahe aapki apni kahani par....... Dosto abhi puri tarah recover nahi hua hu, par aap sabhi ka saath judne ka liye update de diya hai...... Update ki size jaldi hi badegi.....

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very nice update bhai

 

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Update ​

Pichle update tak aapne dekha ki Shubham Aaliya se milta hai aur usse ghar ka dhyan rakhne ko kehata hai, vahi dusri taraf koi Shubham ka picha kar raha tha jiska usse pata nahi tha…… Ek taraf Aaliya na apni naukri chod di, par uske ghar mei ek naye vyakti ki entry hone ki tayari hai……. Magical City mei Shubham aur uske friends ka samne suruwat hi ek Chalave se hui…..


Ab Aage…..


Marium: Shubham tujhe kaise pata chala ki uss paid par koi hai….. Aur ya sab bhediye ek chalava hai…..???


Shubham: Jab hum yaha aaye tha uss samaye iss paid par mujhe kuch aahat sunayi di thi aur uske saath hi jab mei ek bhediye ko maar raha tha, uss samaye meine uske dimak mei jhak kar dekha to mujhe pata chala ki ya sab sirf aur sirf chalawa hai aur kuch nahi…..


Rimjhim: Iss bhediye ka vapas hosh mei aane se phele hi isse maar do, varna ya fir se hum sabhi par humla kar dega……


Hum sabhi uske pass pahuche aur Nisham ne usse maarne ka liye apni talwar uthayi aur usse ek jordar swing kara bhediye ko maarne ka liye…… Lekin ya kya vo Talwar bhediyo ko lagne ki jagah siddha jamin par hi jaakar lagi……


Shubham: Ruk jaao Nisham, isse maarne ki jarurat nahi hai…..




Iszy: Par essa kyu…..?? Isne hume maarne ki koshish kari fir bhi tum isse bacha rahe ho…..


Shubham: Ha Iszy aur iska reason kuch der mei tumhai mil jaayega…….. Meine ya kaha kar apne haath par ek bada sa cut laga kar apna khoon uss bhediye ka muh mei daal diya…..


Dekhte hi dekhte mera ghaav bhar gaya…… Vahi dusri taraf jaise hi mere khoon ki ek boond uss bhediye ka sharir ka khoon se mili, uske saath hi uss bhediye ka sharir mei badlaav aane lage…… Sabhi lo vaha jo ho raha tha usse dekh kar shock ho gaye ki aakhir ya sab ho kya raha hai…..


Dekhte hi Dekhte uss bhediye na ek sundar si ladki ka roop le liya tha….. Vo ladki dikhne mei kuch essi thi…..


Elika: Uss ladki ko dekhte hi uske muh se bus ek hi shabd nikala……. Narshiya tu…..


Ladki (Narshiya): Jaise hi usne Elika ko dekha vo bhi apni khushi ko nahi rok saki aur uske gale lag gayi……


Sabhi log bus dekh rahe tha, par kissi ko samajh nahi aa raha tha ki aakhir ya ho kya raha hai….. Kuch der ki unn dono ka bharat milap hua aur uske baad baat aage badi…..


Nancy: Shubham ab kuch bolega ya fir…..


Shubham: Nancy mujhe ya sab abhi pata chala, jab Nisham isse maarne vala tha uss samaye iski aankho (mei mujhe ek ladki ki chavi najar aayi…… Uss chavi ko dekhte hi mujhe ya baat yaad aa gayi ki ya vahi ladki hai jisse sadiyo phele Shetan na apne jaadu se ek bhediya ka roop mei badal diya tha aur uss ladki ko sirf aur sirf ek Rakshak ka khoon hi uske Shetan ka jaadu se chuda sakta hai…..


Siyam: Toh kya ya uss aadhe manav aur aadhe bhediya kabile se hai, jinko saalo phele Shetan na maar diya tha……


Narshiya: Badkismati se ya sach hai….. Mei apne Kabile ki aakhri vansh hi bachi hu jo ek aam ladki ki tarah se aur bhediye ka roop mei badal sakti hu…… Aur ab aaj iss jaadu se azad hone ka baad bhi mei jeevan mei kabhi bhi kahi bhi jab cahau bhediya ke roop mei badal sakti hu…..


(Dear readers Narshiya aur Elika ek dusre ko kaise jaante hai vo irrelevant hai islye usse yaha nahi dikhaya gaya hai….)


Shubham: Narshiya, tum aaj se Shetan ka jaadu se azad ho, ab tum apna jeevan aram se fir se suru kar sakti ho….


Narshiya: Shubham mere iss duniya mei ab koi nahi raha….. Na meri prajati ka aur na hi Elika ka alawa koi mujhe jaane vala….. Toh agar tumhai koi dikat nahi ho toh kya mei tum logo ka saath aage bad sakti hu…… Mei uss SHetan ki maut apni aankho ka samne dekhna cahati hu……


Shubham: Narshiya, hum logo ka aage ka safar bhut hi khatre se bhara hua hai, tum ya jaanti ho ki Shetan kaisa hai aur uska samna karne ka liye hume bhut si pareshani ka samna karna padega……


Narshiya: Shubham tum ya jaante ho ki humare yaha ye pratha hai ki job hi hume humari musibat se bachayega uski jindagi ka aakhri saas tak hume uske saath hi rehana hoga…… Islye ab tum cahao ya nahi mei toh tumhari hi chaya ban kar rehane vali hu…..


Elika: Shubham tum kuch bhi karlo ya nahi maane vali…… Bachpan mei bhi isne jo soch liya ya vahi karti hai, islye behatar yahi hoga ki hum yaha samaye waste na kare aura age bade….


Nisham: Lo ab faisla ho gaya hai, ab toh Shubham kuch kehane se raha…… Vaise na mujhe bhut bhook lagi hai, subha bhi hum kuch khaa kar nahi aaye.,……


Rimjhim: Chup kar bhukad humesha khaane ka liye hi mara rehata hai…….


Essi masti karte hua hum aage bad gaye……


Place: Earth


Yaha dharti par Aaliya na agle din Raja ka kahe anusar usse apne ghar lekar gayi aur usse vaha apne Pariwar valo se milwaya……


Aaliya: Dadaji, ya hai Raja ya dhur se aaye hai, ya kuch din humare yaha rahege, ya humare gaav aur aas pass ki sabhi jagah ka nirikshan karne aaye hai……


Kuch der dadaji se baat karke Aaliya aur Raja bahar aa gaye……


Aaliya: Mr. Raja jaisa aap cahate hai meine vaisa kar daiya hai……. Par aap meri ek baat dhyan rakhiyega yadi mere pariwar ko koi bhi pareshani hui toh na aapki sarkar aur na hi koi dusra aapki madat kar sakega…..


Raja: Miss Aaliya, aapko apne upar kuch jada hi ghamand nahi hai…… Aap bhul rahi hai mei Special Forces ka Agent hu……


Aaliya: Raja mei aapko ya baat saaf shabdo mei samjha deti hu,…. Yadi kuch bhi karne ki sochi toh aapki Special Unit hi sabse phele shikar hogi aur vaise ya bhi jaan lijiye aapki Special Forces mei itna dum nahi ki vo aapko bacha sakegi…..


Ab aap apna kaam kariye yahi behatar hoga…..


Iske baad Aaliya vaha se nikal gayi, aur vahi Raja Aaliya ki kahi baat ko gambhirta se sochne laga….. Kyunki Raja koi essa vaisa gunda nahi tha jisse uksa kar maara jaa sake….. Vo har chij ko badi hi samajhdari se samajh kar kaam mei leta tha….. Yaha bhi usne Aaliya ka iss confident aur dhamki ka taha tak jaane ka socha…..


Vahi Earth par kahi ek kamre mei do ladkiya baithi thi, aur dono aapas mei baat kar rahi thi….


Ladki2: (Ladki 1 se) Aapne jaisa kaha tha meine vaisa hi kara hai….. Thakur aur Singhaniya Pariwar ka sabhi logo ka piche apne do do aadmi laga diye hai,,,,


Ladki 1: Thik hai, par dhyan rakhna unhe kissi bhi tarah shak na ho aur iss kaam mei apne best ko hi lagana…..


Ladki 2: Jee Madam, par kya mei jaan sakti hu kya ki aakhir essi kya khaas baat hai uss ladke mei ki aap uske liye aur uske pariwar ka liye itna dhyan de rahi hai raksha ka liye…..


Ladki 1: Muskurate hua, tum sab samajh jaaogi kuch din ka intezar karo…… Aur rahi khaas baat toh bs ya jaan lo Gurudev ki Talwar ka malik vo ladka hi hai….. Ab toh tumhai samajh aa gaya hoga ki vo kitna khaas hai…..


Ladki 2: Kya……? Gurudev ki Talwar ka malik vo hai….. Par essa kaise ho sakta hai….. Usse dekh kart oh lagta hi nahi hai…… Usse dekh kar toh ya lagta hai ki vo koi sadharan sa ladka hai…..


Ladki 1: Samaye do, uski khaasiyat bhi dekhne ko milegi tumhai…..


Place : Magical City….


Idhar Shubham and friends uss jungle se nikal kar bahar aa gaye tha….. Jaise hi vo jungle se bahar aaye unhe Magical City ka jo Gurudev hai vo unka intezar karte hua bahar hi mile…..


Shubham: Pranam Gurudev....... Jaisa meine vada kara tha ki aapke Rajye ko bachane mei ek baar fir se aaunga, lijiye mei aa gaya……


Guru.: Mujhe phele bhi bharosa tha ki tum jarur aaoge, kyunki Guru Trajang ki uss Talwar ko koi bhi hassil nahi kar sakta tha….. Kyunki jinn Shero ko tumne maara unhe duniya mei sirf aur sirf Achayi aur Burai ki dono Takat milkar hi khatam kar sakti hai…..


Elika: ( Ya Gurudev saara bhanda hi fod dege….. Abhi Shubham ko nahi pata hai ki usmei burai ki takat ka bhi samavesh hai…..) Guruji aap hume uss Shetan ka baare mei batao, jisse hum usse aram se khatam kar sake…..


Guru: Beti ya mei nahi janta hu….. Uss Shetan ki Takat aur usko harane ka liye kya karna cahaiye ya koi nahi janta hai…..


Shubham: Gurudev vo Shetan hume kaha milega….. Taaki usse aamna samna kar saku…..


Guru: Aao mere saath mei hi tumhai apne saath lekar chalta hu….. Aur ya kaha kar unhone hum sabhi ka haatho ko ek dusre ka saath jodne ko kaha….. Aur dekhte hi dekhte hum Magical City ka Mahal ka RajBhawan mei pahuch gaye…..


Jab Meine chaaro taraf apni najar ghumayi toh dekha ki uss bhawan par ek khambe par Maharaj aur Dusre Khambe par Guru ji bandhe hua tha….. Sabhi log do do Guru ko dekh Aaschariye chakit ho gaye….


NM 8(Guru jo humare saath tha): Usne haath aage kiye aur hum sabhi bhi uss Mahal ka khambo par bandh gaye….


Shetan: Hahahahahaha….. Tum sab toh meri soch se bhi jaada bewakuf nikale….. Itni aasani se na tumne Guru par vishwas kar liya aura b tum sab yaha bebas se bandhe hua ho….


NV8: Bhut suna tha tere baare mei…… Trisha aur Nabila ka beta hai usmei itni Shakti hai ki vo pure brahmand ko hi khatam kar sakta hai…… Usse koi nahi rok sakta hai….. Par tu toh apni Maa se bhi kamjor nikala….. Tujhe itni aasamni se kaid kar diya….. Ab apne aapko iss kaid se chuda kar dikha…..


Willy: NV8 tum apne aapko bahut shakti shali samajhte ho na, toh esse kayar ki tarah nahi samne se humla karo tabhi mei manuga ki tum sach mei bahut Shakti Shali ho…..


NV8: OOOHhh mei toh bhul hi gaya tha ki yaha Prince of Elf bhi hai…. Iss duniya ka sabse namchin Rajkumar jo kissi bhi mushkil se nikalne ko tayar hai…. Toh aaj kyu nahi…. Mei bhi dekhu tum apne aapko iss kaid se aazad kaise karte ho….


Shetan: Usne kuch Mantar padhe aur ek tej kaali roshni aakar hume lagi….. Uss roshni ka hume chuta hi humare sharir mei ek tej dard utha….. Aur sabhi ki chikhe sunayi dene lagi…..


Hume Chikhta dekh uss Rajsabha mei maujood NV8, Shetan aur sabhi uski sena ka log jo maujood tha vo hasne lage…..


Shetan: Tu janta hai, tere pita aur uss Satrangi desh ka Maharaj ko meine apne inn hi haatho se maara hai,,,, Aur aaj tujhe bhi maar kar mei tujhe unke pass bhej dunga…...


Uski ya baat sunkar sabhi log hasne lage…… Abhi unka hasna jaari hi tha ki ek Sainik Mahal ka bahar se bhagta hua ander aaya……


Sainik: Shetan ki Jai Ho….. Humare Rajye par White Eagle aur Bhediyo na humla kar diya hai,….. Vo humare sabhi Sainiko ko maarte hua aage bad rahe hai….. Unki agvayi ek ladka kar raha hai….. Jisse hum rok nahi paa rahe hai…..


Shetan: Koi ladka aur White Eagle uss ladke ki baat maan rahi hai….. Ya kaise ho sakta hai,…… Kaisa dikhta hai vo ladka…..


Sainik: Shetan, vo ladka…… Achanak hi uski najar Shubham par padi….. Aur usse dekh uski aankhe badi ho gayi….. Vo ladka iss bandhe hua ladke ki tarah hi dikhta hai,,,,


NV8: Kya kaha….. Iske jaisa…… Tumhara dimak kharab ho gaya hai kya….???? Ya toh yaha bandha hua hai,……


Shetan: Ruko….. Aur usne ek chaku mere aar paar kar diya….. Jaise hi vo chaku mere aar paar hua, uss Mahal mei mere sabhi dosto ki chikh nikal gayi….. Vahi Shetan aur NV8 na jab samne mere taraf dekha toh unke hosh hi ud gaye,…..


NV8 aur Shetan ka hosh kyu ud gaye ya jaane ka liye bane rahe aage ka updates par….. Aaj raat ek update aur aayega…..


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fantastic update bhai

 

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Update 82​

Pichle update tak aapne dekha ki Earth par Aaliya apne saath Raja ko lekar aati hai aur saath hi usse dhamka bhi deti hai ki yadi Raja na kuch kara ulta toh aage kya hoga ya vo bhi nahi janti ….. Dusri taraf Shubham apne dosto ka saath Magical City jaata hai jaha usse Narshiya milti hai, jo aadhe bhediya aur aadhe manav prajati ka vansh mei ek lauti bachi hai……


Ab Aage…..


Jaise hi Shetan na Shubham ko chaku maara uss Mahal ka darbar mei sabhi ki chikhe nikal gayi…… Vahi dusri taraf Shetan aur NV8 dono hi chowk gaye, kyunki unke samne jo hua tha uski kalpana bhi unhone nahi kari thi…..


NV8: Ya nahi ho sakta hai…… Ya kaise ho sakta hai…… ???


Shetan: Apne samne jisse abhi abhi chaku laga tha usse dekh Shetan ki aankho mei se aasu nikalne lage, par ya aasu paani ka nahi khoon ka aasu tha……


Vahi jab Willy aur baaki sabhi na Shubham ki taraf dekha toh unn sabhi ko bhi shock laga, unhe samajh hi nahi aa raha tha ki aakhir ya sab ho kya raha hai,,,,,,


Uss Mahal ka darbar mei hui abhi ki ghatna ko dekh sabhi shock mei tha, par ek esse vyakti tha jo muskura rahe tha….. Ya tha Guru Magical City ka…..


Guru: Kya hua Shetan tumhai kya laga tha ki tum log iss duniya ka rakshak ko itni aasani se apne iss chote aur bacho jaise chalawe se pakad kar usko khatam kar doge…. Uska shikar karna itna asan nahi hai…..


Shetan: Guru ki baat sunne ka baad bhi uske muh se ek bhi shabd nahi nikala….. Uski aankho se lagatar aasu hi nikal rahe tha…..


Abhi aage koi kuch kehata usse phele hi Mahal mei Shubham ki entry hoti hai…..


Shubham: Kyu Shetan, kaisa laga mera chalawa…… Aaj mere man ko shanti aur meri Maa ki kahi baat sach ho gayi…… Yaad hai vo din jab tune mere Pita aur Satrangi Desh ka Maharaj ko maara tha…… Uss din tune mere Pita ko meri Ma aka roop lekar maara tha na…… Aaj meine bhi vahi kiya…….Tere haatho tere hi bête ko marwa kar meine apna badla pura kara aur meri maa ki baat ki tere aankho se khoon ka aasu jarur nikalege……


Par teri saja abhi khatam nahi hui hai…… Tere iss bête ko na hi marne ka baad dharti nasib hogi aur na hi aag……. Tere bête na barso phele jo ek pariwar ka saath kara tha, aaj vahi sab iske saath hoga…..


Shubham: Ya bol Shubham na apne haath aage kar diye, uske haatho mei se ek roshni nikali aur vaha par bandhe hua Shubham ka dost aur MM aur Guruji sabhi azad ho gaye…..


Shubham: Narshiya apne man mei jiss pratishod ki aag ko aaj tak tumne jalaya hua hai aaj uss aag ko iss Shetan ka bête ka khoon se thanda karlo….. Isne tumhari aankho ka samne tumhare chote bhai ko apne bhukhe janwaro ko khila diya tha na, aaj tum isse iske baap ka samne hi cheer faad do….. Iske sharir ki ek bhi hadi ka ek ansh bhi dharti ya aag ko na mil sake…… Jaao aage bado…..


Narshiya: Shubham ki kahi baat aur apne chote bhai ka saath hua sadiyo purine najarene uske ander ka bhediye ko jaga diya….. Vo ek pal ka ander hi bhediye ka roop mei aa gayi aur uski aankhe ek dum laal ho chuki thi…… Usse shan bhar bhi nahi laga Shetan ka bête ka upar humla karne mei…..


Shetan: Meri baat sunkar aur apne bête par hote humle ko dekh kar vo gusse mei aa gaya….. Vo abhi Narshiya ko maarne ka liye kuch karta usse phele hi Shubham ka ishare par do White Eagle teji se Shetan ki taraf ud chali aur uske pass pahuchte hi apne aapko rasi mei badal kar Shetan ko apne bandhan mei le liya……. Ab Shetan caha kar bhi apne aapko na unn Rashiyo ki pakad se khudko azad kara sakta tha aur na hi ab vo kuch kar sakta tha…… Saath hi saath vo rasiya dhere dhere Shetan ki saari kaali Shakti ko apne ander khich rahi thi aur apni White powers ko uss Shetan ka sharir mei bhej rahi thi, jisse Shetan ka sharir ander se jal raha tha aur vo apne aapko kamjor mehsoos kar raha tha…..


(Yaha mei bata du White Eagle iss duniya ka sabse khatarnak aur ShaktiShali pakshi ya essa kahe janwaro mei sabse khatarnak hai…… Apne aapko rasi mei badal lena ya inki shaktiyo mei se ek Shakti ka namuna hai….. Baaki samaye ka saath pata chal jaayegi……)


Vahi Narshiya na Shetan ka bête ka sharir ko puri tarah se cheer faad diya tha, Shetan ka bête ka sharir ki har hadi, ya kahu chamdi ka niche ka maas bhi gayab ho gaya tha…… Par Narshiya yaha bhi nahi ruki….. Usne apne jabdo ka bich uska sar rakha aur uske sar ko uske sharir se alag karke Shetan ka pairo mei fek diya…..


Narshiya ka pura sharir Shetan ka khoon se san gaya tha…. Par vo abhi bhi shant nahi hui thi….. Ab vo apne aape se bahar hone lagi thi aur pagalo ki tarah chela rahi thi….. Uski essi halat dekh Elika uske pass gayi aur pyar sa Narshiya ka sar par apna haath fera…..


Elika ka haath ferte hi Narshiya jo bhediye ka roop mei thi, uska roop badal kar ek baar fir ladki ka roop le liya,,,,, Par uski aankho se abhi bhi lagatar aasu nikal rahe tha….. Aaj uske samne vo atit ka pane aa gaye tha jisne uska sab kuch usse chin liya tha….. Aaj uski bebasi ka ant tha….. Barso se apne man mei apne chote bhai ko marne vale se uske man mei badle ki aag thi aaj jakar vo thandi hogi…..


Narshiya ladki ka roop mei aane ka baad bhi uski aankho se aasu nikalne lage tha….. Narshiya kaafi samaye tak apne pariwar ko yaad karke aasu bahati rahi….. Elika Narshiya ko lekar vaha se gayab ho gayi…..


Shubham: Guruji aap baki sabhi ko lekar yaha se chale jaaye….. Mei aapse vahi aakar milunga jaha meine milna ka aapse kaam khatam karke milne ka vada kara tha….


Guruji: Jaisa tum kaho….


Mere kissi bhi dost na bich mei ek bhi shabd nahi bola…. Vo sab chup chap vaha se Guruji ka saath chale gaye…..


Shubham: Unke jaate hi mei chalkar Shetan ka pass gaya…… Dekha tumne aaj meine tumse tumhare kiye hua har uss chij ka badla le liya hai jisse kabhi tumari vajah se kissi ko bhi pareshani hui hogi….


Shetan: Mujhe maar dalo, maar dalo mujhe….. Mere bête ko tu tumne maar diya ab mujhe bhi maar dalo…..


Shubham: Shetan ki baat sun SHubham jor jor se hasne laga…… Hahahahaha…. Maar dalu tumhai….. Nahi Shetan ya kabhi nahi hoga,,,,,, Tum apne bête ki maut ka badla lene aur uske saath jo hua usse yaad karke tadapoge vo hai tumhari saja…… Aur tum cahaiye kitni bhi koshish karlena, par agle 10000 saal tak tum har pal har shan apne bête ki yaad mei maroge, par tumhai maut nasib nahi hogi, aur tab tumhai samajh aayega tumne aaj tak jo logo ka saath kara usse unhe kitna dukh hoga…..


Shubham: NV8 jaao yaha se chale jaao aur jaakar apne Malik aur Draco ka paltu kutte Nicaroo ko kehana, jada fadfadane ki jarurat nahi hai….. Mei jaldi hi uski duniya mei aakar uska samna karunga…… Mujhe dhundne ya maarne ka liye usne apne jo gadhe bheje hai unhe vapas bula le…..


Aur ha ek baat aur yaad rakhna aaj ka baad yadi tum mujhe kabhi bhi kahi bhi mil gaye toh vahi tumhari jindagi ka aakhri din bhi hoga,…..


Iske baad Shubham ka ishare par White Eagles na Shetan ka sharir mei se uski saari Kaali shaktiya sok li….. Aur vo White Eagles Shetan ko lekar kahi dhur fek diya…..


Place : Earth….


Yaha humare Raja sahab saara din bus Aaliya ki kahi baat ka baare mei sochte rahe…… Usse ya samajh nahi aa raha tha ki aakhir Aaliya na itni badi baat usse kahi hai iska matlab koi hai jo bhut Shakti shali hai….. Par kun hai vo……


Abhi Raja issi udhen bund mei laga hua tha…… Achanak hi uske dimak mei kuch aaya aur usne bina der kiye ek call kar diya…..


Raja: Sun ek ladki ki photo bheji hai uske upar saaye ki tarah najar rakho….. uski har movement ki khabar cahaiye….. Par yaad rahe usse kuch nahi pata chale….. Saali bhut tej hai….


Samne se: ……………


Raja: Thik hai,…. Kaam hone par mei milta hu tujhc…..


Raja: Agar mei sahi soch raha hu toh jaldi hi mei ek teer se 4 shikar karunga……


Chaliye dosto hum isse yahi chodte hai, kyunki na jaane humare Raja ka dimak mei kya aaya hai…. Par job hi aaya hai uska pata hume jarur chal jaayega par aage ka updates mei…..


Idhar Aaliya ghar se nikalne ka baad siddha vahi gayi jaha Shubham na usse training karne jaane ka liye kaha tha….. Aaliya jab vaha pahuchi toh uske samne ek instructor khada tha…..


Aaliya: Kon ho tum…..??? Aur yaha kaise aa gaye…..???


Instrcutor: Mei tumhara instructor hu aur Shubham na hi mujhe tumhai tumhari initial training mei tumhai guide aur help karne ka liye bulaya hai….. Mera parichay mei aapse baad mei kar lunga, filhal hum aapki training suru karte hai, kyunki abhi humare pass samaye kam hai…..


Aaliya: Thik hai…. Par meri training hai kis chij ki…..???


Instructor: Shubham na aapko Martial Arts aur aapki body ko majbut karne ka liye kaha hai, so hum vahi se suru karte hai…..


Aaliya: Martial Arts mujhe aate hai,…. Aur mei World Champion hu usmei…..


Instructor: Chaliye toh fir aap aur mei ek fight karte hai, jisse pata chal jaayega ki aap kitni best hai…..


Aaliya: Thik hai mujhe koi dikat nahi hai…..


Iske baad suru hua Aaliya aur Instructor ka bich ek mukabla…..


Iss Mukabale mei kya hua aur aage Shubham jab apne dosto ka pass jaagega toh kya hoga ya jaane ka liye bane rahe aapki apni kahani par…… Aapke valuable comments ka intezar rahega…..


Stay Tunned….

Awesome update bhai

 

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Update 82​

Pichle update tak aapne dekha ki Shubham na Shetan ko na sirf haraya bulki usse essi saja di hai ki vo aane vale samaye mei bhi usse nahi bhul sakega….. Vahi dusri taraf Earth par Aaliya na Raja ko dhamka diya jiske badle Raja na apne hi logo ko uske piche laga diya hai….. Vahi Shubham na Aaliya ki Training ka liye ek instructor ko bhi appoint kara hai,,,,,,


Ab Aage…..


Aaliya Instructor ka duwara di gayi chunauti ko swikar karti hai aur dono ander bane Martial Arts Practice room mei jaate hai jaha sabhi chijo ko phele se hi puri tayari karke rakhi hui thi…..


Instructor: Toh Aaliya kya tum tayar ho……


Aaliya: Mei humesha hi tayar raheti hu esse chijo ka liye…… Aaj mei tumhai hara kar apni 101 vi jeet hassil karungi…..


Iske saath hi suru hota haidono ka bich Martial Arts ka ek mukabla….. Mukable ka suru hote hi Aaliya na uss Instructor ka upar humla suru kar diya….. Vo puri tarah se attacking khel rahi thi…… Par Instructor toh Aaliya se bhi jaada sanki tha…. Vo bhi attacking hi khel raha tha…. Dono hi ek dusre par humla kar rahe tha…. Par dono ka humle mei kuch antar tha….. Jaha Aaliya lagatar Instructor par power se marne ki koshish kar rahi thi, vahi Instructor Aaliya ka upar har bar kuch dheere aur kuch power humle kar raha tha…..


Aaliya nab hut koshish kari par vo Instructor ko ek baar bhi nahi maar saki….. Vahi Instructor na Aaliya ka kaafi chote pahucha di thi, jiski vajah se ab Aaliya aur ladne ka layak nahi rahi thi….. Aur Instructor ka ek punch ka saath hi vo jamin par gir gayi aur behosh ho gayi…..


Instructor: Aaliya ka behosh hone par usse hassi aa gayi……. Jaisa socha tha vaisa hi paya….. Aakhir hai toh uss Rajye se na jaha koi kabhi ladne se mana nahi karta hai….. Vo Aaliya ka cehare par ek jug se paani daalne lagte hai…..


Aaliya: Uske upar paani girne se vo hosh mei aa jati hai, par ab usmei itni bhi jaan nahi bachi thi ki vo uth kar baith sake…..


Instructor: Usne aage badkar Aaliya ko uthaya aur usse vaha maujood ek chair par baitha diya….. Usne pass padi table par rakhe ek glass ki taraf ishara kara aur bola isse pee lo….. Tumhai job hi dard hai sharir mei vo sab kaafi had tak kam ho jaayega…..


Aaliya: Usne vo glass utha kar jaise hi apni naak ka pass liya, usse uski smell kuch mare hua chuha (Rat) ka jaisi lagi…. Aur usne usse apne se dhur rakh diya….. Chhheee Ya kya hai….. Tum mujhe Mara hua chuha ka soup pila rahe ho…..


Instructor: Ya koi mare hua chuha ka soup nahi hai….. Ya ek khaas jadi buti hai jisse insan ka sharir ka saare dard shan bhar mei hi khatam ho jaati hai…. Usne vo glass uthaya aur jabardasti usse Aaliya ko pila diya…..


Aaliya: Vo sara peene ka baad usse essa lagne laga ki vo abhi vomit kar degi….. Par kuch seconds ka baad hi usse apne sharir mei uth rahe dard ka ehsaas hi khatam sa mehsoos hua….


Ya kaise ho sakta hai…. Abhi toh meri body mei itna pain tha aur ab jaise saara pain hi gayab ho gaya hai….


Instructor: Aaliya essa bhut kuch hai jo abhi tum nahi janti ho, vaise ab bhi mere se sikhna suru karogi ya fir ek baar fir se mukabla ho jaye…..


Aaliya: Nahi ab toh mei aage aur sikhna cahati hu….. Tum sach mei bhut hi ache se ladte ho…. Mujhe bhi apne jaisa ladna sikha do….


Vahi dusri taraf Ajnabi aur Aadmi2 aapas mei baat kar rahe tha…..


Aadmi 2: Aakhir tumhare dimak mei chal kya raha hai,,,,,???


Ajnabi: Mere dimak mei kya hai ya toh tumhai baad mei pata chal jaayega, par phele ya batao ki kya tumhai uss Nitin ki Singhaniya Pariwar se dushmani ka karan pata chala ki nahi…. Mei jaana cahata hu ki aakhir uski dushmani kitni gheri hai….. Vo humare bhut kaam aa sakta hai…..


Shubham ko harane aur uske pariwar ko taklif dene mei ek alag hi maja aayega……. Uski aankho ka samne uske apne ko tadpa tadpa kar maarunga, par usse phele uski saari taqat ko mei chus lunga…..


Aadmi 2: Tum pagal ho gaye ho kya….??? Tum jante ho na uske Pariwar ki suraksha karne ka liye Mishi aur uske log 24 ghante unke upar baaj ki tarah najar rakhe hua hai….. Har vyakti ka piche 2-2 jane hai…..


Abhi vo bolna band hi karat ha ki ek aadmi ander aata hai aur Aadmi 2 ka kaan mei kuch kaha kar chala jaata hai….


Aadmi 2: Lo ho gaya kalian b sab yahi baaki raha gaya tha…..


Ajnabi: Kya ho gaya ab….???


Aadmi 2: Tum jante ho na Raja ko usne kissi tarah Singhaniya Mansion mei apni jagah bana li hai aur uske 2 aadmi bhi ab Aaliya ka piche lag gaye hai….. Raja ko na jaane ab Singhaniya Pariwar se kya dushmani hai…..


Ajnabi: Ya toh achi khabar hai humare liye….. Agar Raja Singhaniya ka Pariwar mei ghus gaya hai toh fir hume Nitin tak pahuchne mei jaada samaye nahi lagega…… Ab aayega Maja, kis kis se bachata rahega apne Pariwar ko Rakshak….. Aur duniya aur Pariwar ka bich kisko chunta hai par ya baat pakki hai ki usse kissi ek ko khona hi hoga…. Ya toh apne Pariwar ko ya fir apni Rakshak ki Shaktiyo ko…..


Suno ek kaam karo, kaise bhi Raja tak ya khabar pahuchao ki mei usse milna cahata hu…..Jaldi se Jaldi aakar mile… Ab suru hoga khel…..


Place: Hotel Burkadiya, India


Iss hotel ka ek kamre mei do log baithe baate kar rahe tha….. Ya do log hai Nitin aur Neeta….


Neeta: So Mr. Nitin tell me, aap kyu milna cahate tha aur aapke pass essi kya business deal hai humare liye….???


Nitin: See Miss Neeta mei ya ache se janta hu aap log Singhaniya jaha rahete hai uss gaav mei invest kyu kar rahe hai, taaki aap log ek acha aur bhut bada vaha IT park develop kar sake…. Mei ya bhi jantahu aap logo na vaha Nirmala Thakur se unki ek bhut badi jamin ka tukda bhi le liya hai iss kaam ka liye…..


Neeta: Dekhiye faltu time waste mat kariye aur job hi deal hai siddha uspar aa jaye, humari company kya kar rahi hai aur kya sochti hai ya mujhe aapse jada ache se pata hai….


NItin: Thik hai as you wish, so deal ya hai ki mei aapko Singhaniya Business ka har quotation ki rate bataunga uss har business aur projects ki jismei SAW already established hai aur saath hi unki bhi jaha SAW established nahi hai jiski vajah se SAW family easily sabhi contracts achieve kar sakegi………


Neeta: Hummm I can see, but tumhai iske badle kya cahaiye ya batao…. Because jab tum mujhe itni badi aura chi deal de rahe ho toh tumhai bhi kuch bhut khaas cahaiye hoga mujhc…..


Nitin: SInghaniya’s ka business kuch samaye mei hi khatam aur vo log apna loan amount nahi chukka sakege, jiski vajah se unki Haweli nilam ho jaayegi, toh mei bus uske badle mei ya cahata hu ki tum uss Haweli k kharido aur usse ek Hotel mei convert kardo….


Neeta: No, No No No….. Ya deal nahi ho sakti hai, because tumhai deal ka badle mei kuch bhi nahi cahaiye ya kaise ho sakta hai…..


Nitin: Kisne kaha mujhe kuch nahi mil raha hai… Mujhe vo mil raha hai, jisse paana bhut mushkil hai iss duniya mei aur vo hai sukoon….. Unki barbadi hi mera inam hai iss deal ka badle….. Agar tumhai deal manjur hai toh ohk otherwise mei kissi aur ko ya offer de deta hu….. Ismei tumhara bhut profit hai….


Neeta; Ohk, mujhe manjur hai….. But on two condition…..


Nitin: Kya condition hai….???


Neeta: Pheli condition hai tumhai mere saath ek cup coffee peeni hogi aur dusri ya hai ki tumhai mujhe Singhaniya family se dushmani ka karan batana hoga….


Nitin: Sorry, mei aapki pheli condition aur dusri condition dono ka liye ready nahi hu….. Kyunki mujhe aapki shart maane ki koi jarurat nahi hai….. Fayda aapko hai but agar aapki koi conditions hai toh ya deal cancel…..


Neeta: HHmmm nice attitude…. Vaise agar mei yahi sab baat mei Singhaniya Family ko bata du toh kya hoga….???


Nitin: Kuch nahi, vo log aapko fraud samjhega….. Meine apna colour already itna chada diya hai ki koi bhi aapki baat par bharosa nahi karega…..


Neeta: Interesting……. Chalo mujhe tumhari deal manjur hai without condition, but agar tum apni baat se badal gaye toh I promise mujhe Singhaniya family ko yakeen dilane mei ki tum kun ho aur kya cahate ho jada problem nahi hogi… Because I am best in this business….. Now you may leave….. Mere Assistant tumhai call karke apna no. bata dega uske touch mei hi rahena…..


Nitin idhar se nikal gaya…..


Neeta: Rascal, bhut pahucha hua hai,….. Saale na sab kuch phele se bhut ache se plan kar rakha hai…… Isse kamjor samajhna SHubham ka liye pareshani bada sakta hai….. Samajh nahi aata hai ki aakhir ya chij kya hai….??? Na koi background aur na hi koi jaane vala….. Aakhir ya bala aayi kaha se hai….. Aasman se gira hai ya dharti se nikala hai…..


Tabhi vaha ek awaj aati hai…..


Awaj: Dono se bana hai ya….


Neeta: Awaj sun Neeta shock mei pahuch jaati hai….. Kyunki vo ya toh jaanti thi ki awaj kiski hai….. Par uske liye ya jaana ki Nitin normal insan nahi hai bhut shocking tha….. Nahi agar ya vahi hai toh iske saathi bhi dharti par azad ghum rahe hoge….. Duniya ka liye iska azad ghumna bahut khatarnak hai….


Place: Magical City….


Shubham: Mei gayab hokar uss jagah pahucha jaha MM, Guruji aur mere dost tha…. Mei vaha pahucha toh vaha sabhi maujood tha sirf ek Narshiya nahi thi, jisse Elika na sula diya tha apne magic se, jisse vo thodi shant ho sake….


Mere vaha pahuchte hi MM aur unke unke Rajye ka sabhi log sar jhuka diye mere samne…..


MM: Duniya ka Rakshak ko MM ka pranam…… Aapne humare Rajye ko uss dhust Shetan se azad kara kar hum sabhi logo par ek bahut bada ehsaan kara hai….. Hum sabhi humesha aapke rini rahege…..


SHubham: MM abhi Magical City puri tarah se azad kaha hui hai…… Yaha abhi bhi Shetan maujood hai jisse Magical City aur uske logo ko khatra hai….. Aur na sirf yaha ka logo ko, bulki iss puri duniya ko hi usse khatra hai…..


MM: Par ya kaise ho sakta hai….??? Hume toh Shetan ka alawa kissi aur ka baaremei nahi pata hai….. Kun hai vo aur kaha hai vo….???


Shubham: MM aap bahut ache se jante hai usse….. Aap bus usse pehachan nahi paa rahe hai…..


Guruji: Tum kiski baat kar rahe ho Shubham….. Kun hai vo, jiska khatra abhi bhi Magical City par bana hua hai….


Shubham: Kyu MM bata du kun hai vo jiska khatra aapke upar hai….???


MM: Ha Ha batao na kun hai vo jisse hume khatra hai….


Shubham: Vo Shetan jo abhi bhi Magical City ko nuksaan pahuchana cahata hai vo hai MM…..


Sabhi log ya baat sunkar shock ho gaye, ismei MM bhi tha…..


MM: Ya kya bakwas kar rahe ho…..?? Magical City ko mei kyu nuksaan pahuchaunga….. Mei toh khud itne saalo se yaha apni prja ka bich dar kar raha raha hu….


Guruji: Ha Shubham MM ko iss Jagah ka Raja yah aka khud purine Maharaj na banaya tha…. Toh fir ya Magical City ka liye khatra kaise ho sakte hai….


Shubham: Guruji mei ya sabit kar deta hu ki mei jhut nahi bol raha hu….. Ya kaha kar Shubham apni aankhe band karta hai aur uske haath mei ek pathar aa jata hai….. Guruji ya pathar khaas shaktiyo se bana hai….. Jaise hi koi Shetan isse chuyega uske saath hi uski maut ho jaayegi……


SHubham: Mei apni kahi baat ko sach sabit karne ka liye mei ek shetan ka sainik ka mara hua sharir lekar aaya hu….. Mei isse uskehaah se chua aur vo vahi jal kar raakh ho gaya…..


Shubham: Ab aapki baari MM….. Sabit kar dijiye ki aap sahi hai aur mei galat…… Mei dil se cahata hu ki mei hi galat nikalu…..


MM: Nahi aaj mei nahi marunga, marega toh ya Rakshak…… Phele iski Maa na humari Naak mei dum kar rakha tha aur aaj isne…..


Jaane ka liya ki aakhir SHubham ko ya sab kaise pata chala aur MM ko aage kya karta hai ya sabhi jaane ka liye abne rahe aapki apni kahani par …..


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Update 83​

Pichle update tak aapne dekha ki Aaliya, Instructor se training ka liye ready ho jaati hai, vahi dusri taraf Nitin Neeta se milta hai Singhaniya Pariwar ki barbadi ka liye jaha Neeta Nitin ka sach jaan kar sakte mei aa jati hai…. Idhar Ajnabi Raja ki madat se Shubham aur uske Pariwar ko nuksaan pahuchane ki planning kar raha hai….

Ab Aage…..

Shubham: Ab aapki baari MM….. Sabit kar dijiye ki aap sahi hai aur mei galat…… Mei dil se cahata hu ki mei hi galat nikalu…..

MM: Nahi aaj mei nahi marunga, marega toh ya Rakshak…… Phele iski Maa na humari Naak mei dum kar rakha tha aur aab isne……

MM: Par tujhe ya pata kaise chala ki mei asli Shetan hu…..

Shubham: Shetan tu ek no. ka gadha hai gadha…… Tu ya janta hai ki mei tere dimak mei nahi jhak sakta hu, par ek sadharan Shakti vale ka dimak mei jhakna mere liye badi baat nahi hai….. Bus meine uske dimak mei jhaka jisse mujhe pata chala ki vo toh asli hai hi nahi aur uske dimak se hi pata chala ki asli Shetan kon hai aur kaha hai…. Dusri baat Shetan kabhi apne ki maut ka baad shant nahi raheta…. Vo pagal saand(Bull) ki tarah uske apne maarne vale se ladta hai, par usne essa kuch nahi kara…..

MM: Tu meri soch se aage nikal gaya…. Maan gaya..... Tere pass bahut dimak hai, par tu ab yaha se jinda nahi jaa sakega…. Aur uski ya baat kahete hi uske ander se ek roshni nikali aur Shubham ka saath saath sabhi logo par vo roshni giri…..

Roshni ka khatam hote hi Shetan ka hosh ud gaye, kyunki usne jo kiya tha vo ek essa magic tha jiska vaar 99% khali nahi jaata tha, par ek 1% hi vo kuch behatarin aur sikhe hua log hi thod sakte tha….. Aur essa hi kuch vaha hua…. Iss Magic se sabhi log apni jagah hi bandh jaate hai Rasiyo se aur unn rashiyo mei 1 minute ka ander aag lag jaati hai jisse usmei bandhe log maut ka hawale ho jaate hai….

Par jaise hi usne samne dekha toh usne paya ki uske Magic ka asar kissi par bhi nahi hua…. Sabhi log apni jagah jaise ka jaise hi khade hai…..

Shubham: Esse kya dekh rahe ho Shetan….. Tumne kya socha ki tum hum sabko maar doge vo bhi itni asani se…… Bahut Naainsafi hai….. Mujhe phele hi umeed thi kit u essa kuch karega aur islye hi meine yaha aate hi sabse phele sabhi ka upar apni Shaktiyo ka Suraksha Kavach bana diya tha, jisse bhedna tere jaise ka liye asambhav hai….

Iske baad SHubham na aankhe band apne haath ko aage kara aur uske haath se do White Eagle nikal kar aayi aur unhone Shetan ko kaid kar kar liya….. Uske baad usne Shetan ka niche agni kund bana diya aur Shetan ko dhere dhere uss kund mei jalne ka liye chod diya…. Kuch minute mei Shetan ki halat bat se batar ho gayi…. Uska sharir dhere dhere jalne laga, par achanak hi ek roshni hui aur usne Shetan ko apne ander khich liya aur fir se gayab ho gayi….

Sabhi log roshni ko dekh kar shock hua sirf 3 logo ko chod kar…. Ya 3 log tha Shubham, Guruji aur Elika….. Unhe iss Roshni ka malik ka pata tha….

Place: Earth

Aaj Shubham ko Dharti se gaye hua 3 din ho gaye tha…. Aur inn bête 3 dino mei Aaliya na Instructor se bhut kuch sikh liya tha……. Aaliya ka sikhne ki gati aam insaan se 1000 gunna adhik thi aur issi vajah se jo kaam logo ko sikhne mei bhut samaye lagta hai vo usne 3 din mei hi sikh liya tha……

Instructor: Aaliya tumne samaye se adhik gati se gyan ko hassil kara hai…… Par tumhari siksha ka sabse bada aur sabse jaruri gyan tumhai hassil karna hoga…… Ya gyan tumhai tumhari saari shaktiyo ko kabu mei karne mei madat karega…..

Par mei tumhai ya bata du ki iss shiksha mei tumhari jaan jaane ka bhi khatra hai……. Ho sakta hai tum sada sad aka liye usmei kho jaao ya fir tumhara ya jeevan hi samapt ho jaaye…..

Aaliya: Mei iss gyan ko sikhne ka liye tayar hu, mere bhai ko ya sab pata hai aur usne aapko ya siksha aage sikhane ka liye kaha hai toh mujhe bharosa hai mujhe vo kuch kabhi nahi hone dega….

Instructor: Toh thik hai tayar ho jaao….. Hume yaha se dhur jaana hoga jaha tumhaidhyanmei baithna hoga aur jo mei tumhai dikhaunga usse dekhne ki koshish karni hogi…. Yadi tum uss jagah tak pahuch kar vapas sahi se aa saki tohtum safal hogi, par yadi essa nahi hua toh tum humesha ka liya vaha kaid ho jaaogi….

Aaliya: Thik hai, par hum aaj nahi parso chalege…. Mei ya do din apne pariwar ka saath bitana cahati hu….

Instttructor: Thik hai…. Ab mei tuhai parso milunga……

Place: Malhotra’s Office

Mr. Malhotra: Nitin tum essa kaise kar sakte ho…..??? Humne ya baat phele hi decide kari thi ki SInghaniya ko nuksaan pahucha kar hum apni company ko upar badayge…..

Kartik: Ha Nitin, meine bhi tumhara saath islye diya kyunki tumne mujhe vada kara tha ki SIngahniya Group ka barbaad hone ka baad tum mujhe Mralhotra Group mei 25% Partnership doge….

Nitin: Aap dono abhi iss game ko na hi samjhe hai aur na samajh sakege…… Ya har samaye mohara khel ko dekh kar chalne padhte hai, hum jaisa humne socha tha thik vaise hi nahi chal sakte hai samaye ka saath hume parivartan bhi laana hoga…..

Jaise chess mei samne vali ki chali chaal ko dekh kar hi apni chaal chalni hoti hai, thik yahi meine kara hai…. Yadi mein essa nahi karta toh ismei khatra tha aapko Dad aur Kartik agar dad ko kuch hota toh tumhari sachai samne aane mei kunsa jada samaye lagta aur fir uske baad Singhaniya tumhai essi maut dete ki Partner banane ka khwab khwab hi raha jaate……

Meine yaha ek teer se do shikar karne ka liye ya sab kara hai…..

Kartik: Vo sab kaise….???

Nitin: Nitin tumhai pata hoga ki Thakur Family iss samaye SAW group ka saath business deals kar rahe hai aur vo dono ek ho rahe hai kuch business mei…..

Kartik: Ha pata hai aur iske baad Thakur Group desh ka sabse bada group bhi ban jaayega…..

Nitin: Ha exactly, par iska fayda hume hoga….. Isse Singhaniya aur Thakur Family ka bich business dushmani badegi aur uska siddha asar family relation par hoga, jiski vajah se Nirmala Thakur ka Singhaniya Family se milna jhulna kam aur mujhe Singhaniya Family ko barbad karne mei kam musibat ka samna karna padega…..

Dusra reason Singhaniya aur SAW mei phele hi ek dusre ka khilaf kuch ghama ghami ka mahool hai….. SAW group valo na SInghaniya ka pure gaav ko apne adhin kar liya hai jaha phele kabhi SInghaniya ka kabza hua karta tha….. Ab inn dono ka bich ki iss dushmani ki vajah se koi humpar shak karne ka sochega bhi….

Malhotra: Nitin, itna sab toh humne socha hi nahi….. Tumhai jo sahi lage tum bus vaisa hi karo hum tumhare saath hai….

Nitin: Jee Dad….. Acha ab aap log kuch der mujhe akela chod dijiye mujhe kuch baato ka baare mei akele hi sochna hai….

Iske baad dono vaha se nikal gaye aur unke jaate hi ek roshni se ek aadmi nikal kar Nitin ka samne sar jhuka kar baith gaya….

Nitin: Gulam meine tumhai Aaliya aur uss ladke Shubham par najar rakhne ko kaha tha na….. Kya khabar hai unki…..????

Gulam: Malik meine dono ka picha kiya, aur usse ya pata chala ki ya dono bhai bhen hai….. Vo ladka hi Singhaniya Pariwar ka ek lauta waris hai……Abhi na jaane vo kaha gayab ho gya hai, par Aaliya iss samaye sehar se bahar bane hua ek ghar mei youdh kala ki siksha le rahi hai vo bhi Zafon se….. Aur jaldi hi vo usse World of Thoughts mei lekar jaane vala hai uski aakhri siksha puri karne ka liye…..

Nitin: Bahut ache Gulam….. Abse tum sirf aur sirf ghar mei naye aaye Raja ka picha karo aur mujhe ya jaan kar batao ki aakhir vo kun hai…. Ab tum jaao…..

Place: Factory Basement….

Yaha ek ladki ko bandh rakha tha aur uske samne ek aadmi ek chair par baitha hua tha aur kuch uske piche khade tha….

Lily: Boss tumne mere saath dhoka kara hai aur tum aaj tak mujhc sab kuch jhut bolte rahe….. Tum koi ache insaan nahi ho…. Tum iss desh ka dushman ho….. Tum maasumo ko marte ho….

Boss: Lily mujhe bahut dukh hai ki tumhai meri sachai pata chal gayi…. Mei tumhai kabhi nuksaan nahi pahuchana cahata tha par lagta hai tere Mata Pita aur teri maut mere hi haatho likhi hai….. Unn dono se meine saalo phele ek formula lab mei se bechne ko kaha tha jiske badle unhone mujhe naukri se nikalwa diya aur gusse mei aake meine unhe maar diya…… Ab teri baari hai…..

Boss: Apne aadmiyo se….. Suno isse khatam kardo, par yaad rahe iski maut turant honi cahaiye iss kissi bhi prakar ki pareshani nahi honi cahaiye…. Mei jaa raha hu…..

Aur vo vaha se nikal jaata hai…… (Yaha Boss ka logo ko G, G2 etc likhunga….)

G1: Chao bhai isse khatam karke hum log bhi apni item ka pass chalte hai,….

G2: Ary ruk saale….. Samne dekh dhyan se….. Ya saali toh humari item se laakh guna saja rasili dikh rahi hai, aaj hum isko hi chakh lete hai….. Vaise bhi isse hume marna hi toh hai….. EK baar humara kaam ho jaaye uske baad hum isse khatam kar dege….

G3: Bilkul sahi bola bhai….. Aaj toh humko sharab aur shabab dono hi mufat mei mil jaayega….. Bada maja aayega…..

Issi tarah vaha khade sabhi log gande gande comments pass karte rahe……

Next Day…..

Agli subha Boss na jab subha subha newspaper khola toh samne ki news padh kar uske hosh hi ud gaye aur aankhe jaise bus nikal hi jaayegi bahar, kyunki uss paper mei chapi news thi hi essi…. Abhi vo kuch samajhta usse phele hi uska mobile phone baj utha…..

Raja: Boss apne aaj ka newspaper padha….. Humari Factory mei kal 10 blast hua hai…..

Boss: Ha par ya sab hua kaise aur police ko vaha kya mila….

Raja: Police ko kya mila ya pata nahi,…. Aur saath hi kaise ya kisne kara ya bhi nahi pata….. Aap jaldi se jaldi vaha pahuchiye kahi kuch ulta siddha Policeka haath laga toh….

Boss: CHupkar……. Mei jaldi se jaldi vaha pahuchta hu…..

Chaliye hum chalkar dekhte hai kal raat vaha kya hua……

Abhi G4 kuch bolta usse phele hi uss Factory ka Basement mei bomb blast hua, jisse sun vaha kaam kar rahe saare log hi chauk gaye aur sakte mei aa gaye….. Par ek blast ka baad na toh koi dusra blast hua aur na hi koi hal chal dekhne ko mili….. Iss vajah se sabhi log nishchint ho gaye aur usse accident samajh liya kyunki uss factory mei bombs tayar kiye jaate tha…..

Tabhi achanak hi G2 ki najar samne bandhi hui ladki ki taraf gayi, toh usne dekha ki vaha par ladki bandhi hui nahi thi aur vaha usse bandhne vali rasiya esse hi jamin par padi hui thi…..

G2: Abhi vo kuch karta ya kaheta, usse phele hi ek ka baad ek 12 bombs ek saath factory mei blast hua aur vaha maujood sabhi log aur vaha kaam karne vale log maare gaye…..

Present

Boss: Vo turant hi uss Factory ka pass pahuch gaya…. Jaha phele se hi Media aur Police vale uss jagah ko ghere hua tha….. Tabhi uski najar vaha par maujood ek Police vale par padi….. Ya koi aur nahi uska paltu kutta hi tha….. Usne usko phone laga diya…..

Inspector: Hello….. Sir ek gadbad ho gayi hai…..

Ab kya gadbad ho gayi hai aur aage jaane ka liye ki aakhir vo kun tha jisne ya sab kuch kara bane rahe aapki apni kahani par…..

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