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Update 64

Jaisa unhone plan kara tha, vaisa hi unhone kara…….. Fasal ko kido sa bachane ka liye logo na bazar sa dawai kharidka unhe fasal ka upar chidak diya, uss dawai mei seth na phele sa hi kuch essa milwa diya tha jiski vajah sa yaha ki saari jamin ki upaj Shakti khatam ho gayi aur ya jamin banzar ho gayi…..

Banzar ho gayi jamin ka badle logo ko koi kya hi paisa deta…… Islye seth na logo sa vo jamin bhut saste daam mei kharidne ka prastav ek baar fir rakh diya……. Ya baat mera Pitaji ko jab pata chali, vo sab kuch samajh gaye……

Unhe yaha ka logo ki chinta thi, jiski vajah sa unhona sabhi logo ko Seth ka prastav na maane ka aadesh de diya aur sabhi ko ek achi rakam unki jamin ka badle de di….. Saath hi saath mera pita na Veer ka Pita ko apne gaav ka logo ko unke gaav mei jamin aur rahana ka liye jagah dena ko kaha, jiske badle mei Pitaji na Veer ka Pita ko bhi ek achi rakam de di, jisse gaav ka logo ko dusra gaav mei rahane ko bhi mil saka aur unka kaam kaaz bhi chalta raha……

Iss tarah sa ya Pura gaav ki jamin meri hai, kyunki apna pita ki mei ek lauti santan thi……. Dusri baat ya lab essa islye hai kyunki yaha ki research private hands mei hai, par uska maksat duniya ki bhalai hai…… Either India or other country, mankind ka benefit ka liya ya jagah hai…..Mere Pitaji mante tha ki iss duniye mei jaisa dharti ek grah hai, vase hi aneko grah hai, jaha jeevan sambhav hai aur vo humari aur hum unki madat kar sakta hai....

Shubham: Hummmm, quite interesting……. Mankind ka liye itna kuch……. Par aapka fayda kya hai…..
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Nirmala: Mera fayda ya hai ki log khush rahe…. Apne Pita ki tarah logo ki jindagi khushi mei raha yahi mera fayda hai…..

Shubham: Madam, thank you very much…….

Nirmala: Kis liya…..
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Shubham: Islye ki aapna mujhe isse judna ka mauka diya……. Mei yaha ki lab ka liye tayar hu…… Aur iski funding ka saara jimaa SAW group ka hai ab…… Iss lab ki madat sa hum logo ki bhalai jarur karega…….

Nirmala: Good…… Par filhal kahi gaadi roko, bhuk lagi hai….. Din ka 1:30 baj raha hai……..

Shubham: Aap bataye vahi rok dunga, mujhe yaha ka kuch nahi pata hai…..

Nirmala: Aage ek dhaba hai, tum uss dhaba par rok dena…. Yaha ka khana sabse badiya hai……Iske baad dono ki baate humara liye irrelevant hai…..

Shyam ka 4 baje Nirmala aur Shubham pahuche Ranjhana ka ghar……. Ranjhana ke pura ghar ko phoolo sa sajaya gaya
tha….. Uss ghar ko dekh essa lag raha tha, jaise ki yaha kissi ki shadi ho…..


Shubham: Yaha itni sajawat kyu hai……
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Koi khaas baat…..


Nirmala: Ya mujhe bhi nahi pata hai, bus ya pata hai ki beti na bola hai ki aaj dawat hai, koi khushi mei par kya nahi pata…..

Shubham: Par mei yaha kya karunga…..

Nirmala: Tum mera guest ho, islye tumhai toh laana hi tha, issi bahane meri beti sa bhi mil lo, kya pata kabhi usse bhi tumhari jarurat pad jaaye……

Shubham: Chaliye, aapki baat pata nahi kyu mei kabhi taal nahi pata hu…….

Dono ander aate hai….. Ander ka mahol hi ek dum alag tha…… Ghar ka hall mei iss samay bhut saare log baithe hua tha aur baate kar raha tha aur kuch ghar mei kaam kar raha tha……

Nirmala: Phele toh Singhaniya Masion ka sabhi bado sa namaskar karti hai…… Vahi chota unsa aashirbad leta hai….. Vaise meri beti kaha hai, dikh nahi rahi hai……

Piche sa awaj aati hai….. Yaha hai aapki beti……. Aur aapse bhut jada naaraj hai…… Ya hai Ranjhana…..

Nirmala: Uske pass jaakar, oooooohhhhh meri beti mujhse naraj kyu hai, ya toh bata do……
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Ranjhana: Ek toh aapne mujhe Priya ka aane ki baat nahi batayi, aur jab meina aapko subha hi aane ko kaha tha, toh aap shyam ko aa rahi hai….

NIrmala: Beti kya karu, tu jaanti hai na mera kaam kabhi bhi kahi bhi aa jaata hai…… Maaf karde…..

Ranjhana: Ek shart par……

Nirmala: Mujhe sab shart manjur hai…..

Ranjhana: Aapko aur baaki sabhi ko kuch din yahi rahana padega humara saath…..

Nirmala: Ary nahi beti, tu toh jaanti hai na………

Ranjhana: Meine bol diya, ab aapko maana hai ya nahi ya aapki marji…….

Jaswant: Maa ab aapko yaha kam sa kam 5 din humare saath raha kar hi jaana hoga…… Ismei koi aapki nahi sunega aur sirf aap hi nahi sabhi ko rukna padega……

Ab koi kuch nahi bol sakta tha, kyunki ghar ka damad na bol diya, inke yaha ghar ke damad ki baat ka saman karne ki pratha thi……

Nirmala: Jee thik hai…… Vaise Ranjhana tum mujhe kis khuskhabri ka baare mei batane vali thi……
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Ranjhana: Maa mei aapko dikhati hu…… Uska baad vo awaj lagati hai Nitin dekho kun aaya hai……

Ek ladka andar se bahar aata hai…… Vo ladka jab Nirmala ko dekhta hai toh…….

Nitin: Nani Maa……. Iss awaj ka saath hi vo aakar Nirmala Thakur ka gale lag jaata hai…..

Nirmala: Uske muh sa Nani sunkar hi shock ho gayi……. Unke face ka expression badal gaye, par khudko sambhala……

Nitin: Naani mujhe maaf kardo, aapne toh mujhe yaha aane sa mana kara tha, par mujhe Maa sa milne ka bhut man tha,
jiski vajah sa mei nahi rok saka aur yaha aa gaya bina bataye……


Nirmala: Vo ab tak khudko sambhal chuki thi…… Koi baat nahi beta….. Ab tu aa gaya hai toh yahi rehana…..

Nirmala ka javab sunkar, isbaar Nitin ko shock hua…… Kyunki ya aap vaise samajh gaye hoga, aur nahi bhi samjha hai toh aage pata chal jaayega…..

Ranjhana: Kyu Maa kaisa laga mera surprise, bhut shocking tha na…..

Nirmala: Ha beta, bhut jor ka jhatka laga…… Islye hi tune ya party rakhi hai…….

Ranjhana: Ha Maa…..

Idhar sabhi apni baato mei ek baar fir Shubham ko bhul gaye……

Jaswant: Maa ya kun hai….. Phele kabhi nahi dekha….
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Nirmala: Ary mei bhi baato baato mei bhul gayi……. Ya hai Shubham…… Ya Indian Goverment ka liye Archaleogical
Department mei kaam karte hai…… Abhi haal mei hi Goverment na ek nayi project chalayi hai, jisme inke department ko sabhi purane jagah jo Nakshe sa lupt ho gayi hai ya vo prachin jagah jiska phele kabhi bhut naam tha par ab vo jagah nahi hai, unhe dhundne ya unse judi jaankari ikhate ka jima mila hai….. Islye ya yaha aaye hai…… Yaha ka jungle mei bhut kuch chupa hai na……


Ab yaha rahane ka liye koi guest house ya hotel hai nahi….. Toh PM na mujhe inke tumhare yaha rahane ka liye pucha jisse meine ha kar diya, bina tumhai puche…… Maaf karna…..

Rukmani: Intro kuch samay mei….. Nirmala Ji ya kaisi baat kar rahi hai, ya ghar aapka nahi hai kya….. Aur vasa bhi itna bada ghar rehana vala kam hai par jagah bhut hai.....

Shyamli sahab ko guest room dikha do……

Nirmala: Ary Rukmani JI…… Ya na aapke samne jo vo lakdi ka ghar hai usmei raha lega, kyunki inke kaam ki vajah sa kab aana jaana aur fir kuch logo ka aana jaana bhi rahega…….

Ranjhana: Par Maa vo jagah saalo sa band hai....... Vaha bhut gandagi hogi……

Shubham: Jee Madam uski chinta mat kariye….. Vo mei khud hi saaf kar lunga….. Aap bus mujhe jagah dikha dijiye……

Jaswant: Ary nahi esse kaise…..
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Aap aaj ki raat yaha raha lijiye, subha samna vale ghar ki saafi kara dega, uska baad aap aram sa raha lijiyega……


Shubham: Jee thik hai…… Nirmala Madam kya yaha aas pass mei koi city hai……..
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Nirmala: Ha yaha sa 30km dhur hi hai ek city, par kyu…..
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Shubham: Jee mujhe kuch kaam hai, kya mei aapki gadi lekar jau kuch samay ka liya…… Mei jaldi hi aa jaunga…..

Nirmala: Thik hai…..

Iska baad Shubham vaha sa nikal gaya…… Idhar baaki sabhi bhi baith kar baate karne lagte hai, vahi ghar ki ladkiya apne bhai sa baate karne lagti hai….. Jisse vo kaafi samay baad mili thi….. Par Nirmala Thakur ko dekh kar essa lag raha tha ki vo kissi gheri soch mei dubi hui thi…… Vo sabhi mei maujod hokar bhi vaha nahi thi……

Kuch samay beeta aur sabhi log tayar hone chale gaye aur uske baad shyam ki party suru hui….. Iss party mei kaafi log aaye tha…… Singhaniya family ka friends, business collegues, sahar ka kuch khaas log bhi maujood tha…..

Ya party vasa toh ek gaav mei thi, par Singhaniya Mansion apna aap mei ek gaav sa kam nahi tha…. 1000 acres mei faila hua tha Singhaniya Mansion……. Singhaniya Mansion mei hi sabhi tarah ki suvidha thi sabhi ka liya……
Sabhi log aa chukka tha aur party ab bus Shuru hona vali thi, tabhi gate sa enter hota hai Shubham……. Jiski najar bhi Shubham par padi, sabhi log bus usse hi dekhna mei kho gaye….. Iss samay Shubham kuch essa hi lag raha tha….. Usna iss samay bhartiya sanskrati ka hisab sa Kurta Pajama pehana tha, par vo ek dum body fit tha, aur Shubham ki body powers milna aur Indra ki hard training ka baad bhut badal gayi thi…. Shubham ab ek foreign model sa kam nahi lag raha tha, jo iss samay Indian Attire ka liya modeling kar raha ho…… Essa hi uski taraf aur aakarshit karti hui uski Neeli Aankhe………


Shubham: Party mei enter hota hi vo Nirmala ko dekhna laga….. Usse unhe unki gaadi ki chabi deni thi…..

Usse vo mili bhi par iss samay vo logo sa ghiri hui thi, jiski vajah sa usna unka pass jaana sahi nahi samjha…..

Par ab ek problem iss party mei ya ho gayi thi ki vo kisiko nahi janta tha, toh ab yaha akele mei vo bor ho jaana vala tha……
Fir bhi ab koi option nahi tha….. Vo ghar ka ander akele bhi nahi jaana cahata tha, kyunki vo nahi cahata tha ki log usse galat samjha….. Islye vo chup chap ek jagah jaakar khada ho gaya……


Priya: Kya baat hai sir, lagta hai aapko party pasand nahi aayi….??

Shubham: Jee madam essi koi baat nahi hai, bus mujhe parties ki aadat nahi……

Priya: Pheli baat don’t call mei Madam…… Mera itna acha naam hai Priya, toh bus vahi bolo…… Second Parties ki aadat
mujhe bhi nahi, mei bhi bor ho rahi hu…..


Inn dono ka bich essa hi faltu baate hoti rahi….. Chaliya tab tak hum jaan leta hai Singhania Mansion aur unka pariwar ka baare mei……

Singhaniya Family
Mr. Yogendra Singhaniya: - Singhaniya Mansion ha Head…… Iss Pariwar ka mukhya hai aur inki age 60 ki hai…..
Mrs. Sushila Singhaniya: - Ya Yogendra Singhaniya ki patni hai…… Age 55….. Figure 38-30-38
Mrs. Mamta Singhaniya: - Mr. Yogendra Singahniya ka chota bhai ki patni hai……. Unka bhai ab nahi raha iss duniya mei…… Inki Age 53 hai…… Inki figure 38-32-36 hai…..

Ab baat karta hai inka bacho ki……

Mr. Deepak Singhaniya: - Mr. Singhaniya ka beta…… Iss ghar mei sabsa bada….. Age 45…… Apni umar sa phele hi Buddha ho gaye hai……. By Profession Doctor hai……. City mei bhut bada Clinic Hai…..
Mrs. Aarti Singhaniya: Mr. Deepak Singhaniya ki patni…… Age 43….. By profession ya Doctor hai aur inka City mei bhut bada apna Clinic bhi hai……

Inn dono ka bacha…..
Richa- Age 25…. Inki Figure hai 34-27-33….. She is Married…… Lives in Australia…… Business Woman hai…. Husband Name Rohan…..
Rani: Age 24…. Inki Figure hai 35-30-35…… She is also Married….. Lives in London….. Husband Name Edward Charles….. Singhaniya Group ki London Subsidary ki CEO hai…..
Rashi – Inki Age 23 hai….. Inki Figure hai 33-26-34……. MBA kar rahi hai IIM (A) sa….
Rani: Age 22…… Inki Figure hai 33-28-36….. Ya Madam Engg complete karka abhi aram kar rahi hai…..

Mrs. Neha Shah: Ya Yogendra Singhaniya aur Sushila Singhaniya ki Beti hai….. Inki Age 43 hai….. She lives in Ahmedabad……. Figure hai 35-28-38…… Pati ka Diamond business sambhalti hai…..
Mr. Jignesh Shah: Ya Neha ka Husban hai……. Ae 40 hai ……. Inka Diamond Business hai…..
Bacha
Gunjan Shah: Age 22….. Inki Figure 33-29-33…. Apni jindagi ka maja le rahi hai duniya ghumkar…..
Garima Shah: Age 21….. Inki Figure 34-28-32…… Abhi Padh rahi hai BBA…..
Gayatri Shah: Age 20…… Inki Figure 33-26-33….. Ahmedabad sa padh rahi hai……
Gargi Shah: Age 18….. Inki Figure…. 35-26-35……. Esha sa achi dosti hai….. Ya bhi uska saath Delhi hi rahati hai….

Jaswant Singhaniya: Mr. Yogendra ka second Son….. Inki Age 40 hai….. Inki ghar mei bhut chalti hai….. He is Managing Director of Singhaniya Group…..
Ranjhana Singhaniya: Mr. Jaswant Singhaniya ki Patni……. Inki Age hai 40….. Aur ya bhi Business mei kabhi kabhi help kr deti hai….. Inki figure hai 37-28-38
Bacha….
Manisha : Age 22….. Inki Figure 34-28-34…… College ka last year mei hai….. Business Studies kar rahi hai….
Mayuri: Age 21…… Inki Figure 33-27-35….. She loved dancing islye bus dancing mei carrier banana cahati hai…..
Minal: Age 20….. Inki Figure hai…. 34-27-33……. She loves living with family….. Islye apna ghar par rahati hai…..
Aaliya : Age 18….. Inka baare mei humna bhut kuch phele hi pad liya……

Mrs. Damini Shah: Ya Mr. Yogendra aur Sushila ki beti hai….. Inki Age 38 hai….. Inki Shadi Jayant Shah sa hui hai…… Business mei help karti hai….. Inki Figure hai 34-26-33
Mr. Jayant Shah: Damini ka pati….. Age 39….. Ya Jignesh shah ka chota bhai hai aur dono bhai ka business common mei hai…..

Ab Baat karta hai Mamta Singhaniya ka bacho ki…..
Shekhar Singhaniya: Age 44…. Ya Singhaniya Group ka member hai…… Business Sense bhut acha hai…..
Shalini Singhaniya…. Ya Shekhar Singhaniya ki patni hai….. Age 42…… Ya house wife hai……. Inka Figure hai….. 33-30-36
Bacha
Khyati…. Inki age hai 23…. Inki Figure hai (32-28-32)
Komal…. Inki age hai 22…. Inki Figure hai (33-27-33)

Shantanu Singhaniya: Inki Age 43 hai….. Inhe Singhaniya Group ka business mei interest nahi hai…… Inki apni Cement Factory hai……
Sakshi Singhaniya: Shantanu SInghaniya ki Patni…… Inki Age 40…… Inka figure hai 35-28-36…. Ya bhi business women hai….. Inka textile ka business hai…… Ya Shalini ki choti bhen hai…..
Yachi: Age 21….. Figure 33-30-35
Yogita: Age 20… Figure 33-28-35
Yamini: Age 19…. Figure 32-29-32

Roopa Raichand: Inki Age hai 40…… Inki Figure hai 35-30-38….. Housewife
Shyam Raichand: Roopa ka husband…. Inki Age hai 45…… Inka Jewellery Outlets hai India mei kayi jagah…..
Amisha: Age 22….. Figure 34-27-34
Amrita: Age 20….. Figure hai 34-27-36
Riddhi Shekhawat: Inki Age 39…… Inki figure 36-29-36……. Shekhawat Builders ki owner…..
Tarun Shekhawat: Inki Age 40 hai……


Ab baat karta hai Singhaniya Mansion ki toh meina phele hi bataya tha ki Singhaniya Mansion kitni bada hai…… Iss Mansion 10 Manjila hai….. Ismei karib 70 kamra hai…… Singhaniya Mansion mei do lift bhi lagi hui hai logo ka aana jaana ka liya…… Ghar ki building Main gate sa karib 800 meter ander hai…… Uss bich ek bhut badi Road hai, jiska dono taraf kaafi bada saare garden bana hua hai, jo ki poori tarah Phoolo sa saja hua hai…… Ghar ki building ka right mei ek wooden Outhouse hai 3-4 kamro ka….. Usmei sabhi facility available hai….. Samna ki taraf ek sundar sa fountain laga hua hai….. Ghar ki building ka piche 3 bada Swimming pool hai….. Ghar mei bacho ka khlena ki saari vyavastha hai….. Ghar mei do bada gym hai….. Ghar sa thoda dhur servant quaters hai…….. Ghar mei karib 1 darjan naukar hai…… Ghar ka chaaro taraf guards hai…… Main gate ki suraksha ka liya 5 guards humesha rahata hai….. Basement mei gaadiyo ka kaafila laga hua hai……
Chaliye dosto chalta hai story par……


Dono kaafi samay baat karta raha, iss bich Nitin ko bhi bulaya gaya…… Usse sabhi ko milaya gaya……. Sabhi log khush tha…… Par Nirmala Thakur ka cehara ka bhav ya darsha rahe tha jaise vo kuch acha nahi mehsoos kar rahi thi….. Khair issi tarha party mei aaye sabhi guest chala gaye….. Aur sabhi ander aa gaye……

Raat ka karib 1:30 baje Shubham ki aankh khul gayi, na jaane usse essa laga ki koi abhi uska room ka bahar sa nikla hai…..
Shubham uth kar darwaja ka pass gaya, par usse vaha kuch nahi dikha…… Usna par ek baar dekh lena ka man bana liya….. Islye vo kamra ka bahar nikal gaya….. Usna bahar aakar dekha toh ghar ka main entrance gate khula hua tha…..


Shubham: Vo badi hi savdhani sa niche utarna laga, kyunki usko jo room mila tha, vo 7th floor par tha….. Usna sabhi corridors aur floor acha sa dekha, par usse kissi bhi floor par kuch bhi ajeeb nahi laga….. Vo dhire dhire chalta hua bahar aa gaya……

Bahar aakar jab vo dekhta hai toh, usse gardan mei iss samay koi dikhta hai….. Garden mei baithna ka liya kuch chairs lagi hui thi, aur saath hi saath vaha lakdi ki bhi kaafi achi stool types banaye hua tha….. Vo bhi uss taraf chal diya dekhna , ki aakhir kun hai jo itni raat mei iss samay yaha hai….. Usna vaha jaakar dekha toh vaha Nirmala thi…….

Shubham: Madam aapko nind nahi aa rahi hai kya….
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Nirmala: Nahi, meri Nin dud gayi hai…… Ek Maa kaisa so sakti hai, jab uski beti par khatra ka sankat mandra raha ho…….

Shubham: Matlab……
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Nirmala: Jo ya ladka yaha aaya hai, vo mera Naati nahi hai…… Vo iss ghar ka aur Thakur pariwar ka waris nahi hai…… Vo koi essa hai jo iss ghar mei raha kar iss ghar ko nuksaan pahuchana cahata hai……

Shubham: Par usna toh sabhi ka samna aapsa ya kaha ki aap usse milna nahi de rahi thi, kaafi samay sa……

Nirmala: Jhuth kaha usna…… Iss baat sa hi ya confirm hua, ki vo mera Naati nahi hai aur usna mujhe khula challenge de diya indirectly ki bacha sakti hu apna ghar ko toh bacha lu……

Shubham: Toh fir asli kun hai…..
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Nirmala: Pata nahi…..

Shubham: Matlab?
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Nirmala: Uski jaan ko khatra tha, islye meina usse apni ek naukrani ko de diya tha, kissi khaas tak pahuchana ka liya…… Par uss naukrani par bhi humla ho gaya, jiski vajah sa usne usse kisko diya pata nahi aur vo bhi jinda nahi rahi........ Meine sabhi sa jhut bol diya ki mere naati ki jaan bachane ka liye meine usse kahi dusri jagah rakha hai aur jab sahi samay hoga vo sabhi sa milega……

Shubham: Toh aap sach kyu nahi bata deti hai…..
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NIrmala: Kyunki meri beti tut jaayegi…… Usna badi mushkil sa usse paaya tha……

Shubham: Par jab baadmei pata chalega tab……
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Nirmala: Tab tak mei kuch kar lungi…… Par abhi mera liya samasya ya hai ki aakhir mei ya kaisa pata karu ki kun hai iss puri sajish ka piche…..

Shubham: Aapna mera baare mei jhuth kyu bola sabhi sa……
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Nirmala: Kyunki mei cahati hu ki tum iss ghar mei raho kuch samay, taaki tum iss ladka ki harkato par najar rakh sako……
Please iss pariwar ka rakshak ban jaao…… Aur uska samna haath jod deti hai…..


Shubham: Ary ya aap kya kar rahi hai….
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Mei koshish puri karunga……


Vasa aapko Thank You ki aap mujhe yaha le aayi….

Nirmala: Kyu???

SHubham: Kyunki yaha sa meri bhi kuch yaade judi hui hai….. Khair chodiya aur chaliya sota hai……

Iska baad dono so jaate hai aur essa hi din khatam ho jaata hai……

Vahi dusri taraf Naaz Shubham ko pura Moscow mei dhund li, par vo usse kahi nahi mila……

Naaz: Boss meina sab koshish kari, par vo mujhe kahi nahi mila……
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Boss: Essa kaisa ho sakta hai……. Sabhi ko usko dhundna ka liya laga do….. Tumhai humara godown mei sa kuch toh mila hoga uska baare mei…..

Naaz: Nahi boss….. Humara koi bhi godown mei ek tinka bhi nahi bacha hai……

Boss: Gussa mei uski aankhe kaali ho jaati…… Aakhir kun hai vo, jisne mujhc ulajhne ki koshish kari….. Naaz tum India chali jaao….. Vaha bhi Indian Goverment na kuch naya Panga khada kar diya hai….. Vo nay bana ISRO ka scientist ka bus mei nahi hai humara business sambhalna….. Islye tum khud jaao aur vaha kissi acha aadmi ko ya business handover karo….

Naaz: Ohk boss…. Par fir Dhruv ka……

Boss: Finish him….. Agar vo nahi samjha toh…… Vasa bhi huma uski jarurat nahi hai…… Huma usse jo cahaiye tha vo huma mil gaya hai…..

Naaz: Ohk boss……

Lijiye dosto Naaz India ka liya nikal gayi hai…….

Chaliya ab dekhta hai aage kya hota hai…… Tab tak hum hokar aata hai uske pass, jo Nirmala Thakur ka dushman hai…..

(Isse mei yaha Boss 1 likhunga……)

Boss1: Raja meina tumhai ek kaam diya tha, kya hua uska…..
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Raja: Boss1 aapna aaj tak jo bhi kaam diya,essa hua hai kya ki pura nahi hua ho……
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Aapka kaam ho gaya hai….. Mujhe
chun liya gaya hai, Rajneet Singh ki Special Unit mei…..


Boss1: Ya acha hua…… Abhi thoda din tum shant rahana…… Vaha sa khabar jab tak badi nahi ho leak mat karna….. Kyunki ek baar tum unka bharosa jeet lo, uska baad aayega maja toh…..

Raja: Ohk boss……. Vasa boss1 sunna hai ki Russian Mafia aur duniya ka sabhi bada group na ek aadmi ka liya kaam karna ka prastav maan liya hai….. Mujhe lagta hai huma bhi usse haath mila lena cahaiye…… Huma kaafi fayda hoga…..

Boss1:Baat sahi hai teri, par India mei vo phele hi kissi ko ya kaam de chukka hai….. Fir bhi koshish karta hai ki vo huma yaha ka saara kaam de de……… Chal jaa ab tu yaha sa……
Shubham bhai story to zabardast hain magar itnay characters daal diye hain ki yaad hi nahi rehta ki kaun kia hainbihat confusion ho jaata hain jaisay multi star movies bohat confused kar deti hain. Isi tarah sirf unhi charcters ko daley jinka koi impact ho story me. Like singhania parivaar ke itne logo ko dikha dia jitna koi ek story me bhi nahi dalta hai.
 

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Update 70

Pichle update tak aapne dekha ki kaise ek aadmi Nirmala Thakur ki gaadi mei ghus gaya aur unki madat karne laga…… Vahi Elika Willy and Company bhi Dharti par aa rahe hai…….


Ab Aage……

Abhi kaanch tuta hi tha ki aasman sa unn humla karne vale logo ki gaadiyo par goliya chalni suru ho gayi…… Humla karne vale kuch samajh nahi paaye usse phele hi do rocket aakar unki gaadiyo sa lage aur unki gaadiyo ka parkhache uda diye……

Apne saathiyo ki gaadiyo ka esse parkhache hote dekh unke man mei ek tarah ka dar na jagah le li thi….. Unhe nahi laga tha ki koi itni jaldi aakar bhi un logo par humla kara dega…… Ab toh dekhte hi dekhte, gundo ki sankhiya kam hone lagi, kyunki ek taraf sa rocket aakar unki gaadiyo ko lagte aur dusri tarah sa goliyo ki bauchar kam hone ka naam nahi le rahi thi…..

Gundo na apni jaan bachane mei hi apni bhalai samjhi aur vo vaha sa gayab ho gaye…… Unke jaate hi teeno Helicopter mei sa do Helicopter niche aaye aur ek vapas laut gaya…. Niche jo helicopter aaye tha, vo tha Shubham ka guards…….
Shubham khud vaha nahi ruka aur vo vaha sa nikal kar jaha usse jaana tha vaha pahuch gaya…..


Idhar sabhi gaadiyo sa nikalte hai……

Raghuveer: Aapki madat ka liye bhut bhut sukhriya…… Vaise aap kun hai aur iss samaye iss ilake mei kya kar rahe tha….??(Ya baat uss ladke sa ho rahi hai Jisne Nirmala Thakur aur unke pariwar ko bachaya….)

Ladka: Jee mera naam Shyam hai….. Mei yahi pass mei hi rehata hu….. Mei apni banduk chalane ki practice ka liye jaa raha tha, tabhi aap sabhi ko dekha aur aapki madat karne ka liye aa gaya…..

Raghubeer: Banduk chalane ki practice……
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Yaha aas pass gaav mei kaha hai….
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Ladka: Sahab yaha ander jungle mei aadmi hai, vo sikhate hai hume aur unhone hi ya banduk aur goliya di hai hume…..

Nirmala: Thik hai tumhara bhut bhut sukhriya….. Yadi kabhi koi jarurat ho to hume batana…… Ya kaha kar vo usse apna card de deti hai……

Idhar inki baate khatam hoti hai, utni der mei hi gaadiya aa jati hai……. Ya gaadiya SHubham na hi bheji thi inke liye…….
Sabhi log gaadiyo mei beith jaate hai aur sabhi guards ka protection mei nikal jaate hai Thakur Haweli ki taraf……


Dusri taraf SHubham pahuch gaya tha ek khaas lab mei….. Ya lab Shubham ki personel lab hai….. Iss lab mei alag alag tarah ka medical experiments hote hai, jinke jariye Shubham iss duniya mei maujood laa ilaaj bimariyo ka liye unki dawa banana ki koshish kar raha hai….. Vo ismei aayurvedic aur allopathic dono ka istemaal karta hai…… (Bhai log ya mat sochna ki SHubham ka pass medical related degree nahi hai….. Aapko yaad hoga SHubham suru mei jiss kabile mei rehata tha, vaha ya ek Vaid ka pass raheta tha, ya meine phele bhi bataya tha…..)

Aaj yaha aane ka karan tha, desh mei badti ladke ladkiyo ka drugs lene ki aadat aur usse nashe ki vajah sa badti kaam ki aag, jisse bhujane ka liye log kissi bhi had tak ka bure kaam karne ko tayar hai…… Shubham ki iss lab mei kaam karne vale keval do log hai…… EK hai Shubham aur dusri hai Neeta…… Neeta Shubham ki PA hone ka saath saath kaafi talented hai……. Uske pass Medical mei MD hai, par SHubham ka ehsaano ki vajah sa vo uske saath hi kaam karti hai vo bhi icha sa koi jabardasti nahi hai……

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Neeta: SHubham hum iss drugs ko body mei sa khatam karne ki dawa bana rahe hai pichle kitne hi mahino sa, par abhi tak
hum kaamiyab nahi ho paa rahe hai……. Jo bhi ya drugs banata hai, usne bhut hi uche level ka Synthetic ka use kara hai jisse hum isse reduce nahi kar paa rahe hai….


Shubham: Neeta tumhari ya aadat bhut buri hai….. Tum har chij ka liye bhut jaldi khush aur dukhi ho jaati ho…… Tum bhul rahi ho, iss duniya mei yadi ya synthetic bana hai, toh iska koi na koi antidote bhi bana hoga……

Vaise bhi duniya mei itna gun kaari paid paudha hai, yadi hum unka sahi sa istemal kare toh har rog ka ilaaj sambhav hai….. Aur ha hum iss Synthetic ka hal bhi dhund lega, par aaj nahi kabhi aur……

Neeta: Aaj kyu nahi…..
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Shubham: Kyunki aaj tum mujhe bataogi ki tum kisse date kar rahi ho,,,,,, Kal meine tumhe call kara tha, tab mujhe piche sa kissi ki awaj sunayi de rahi thi…….

Neeta: Itna sunte hi vo had bada jaati hai…… VO VO….??

Shubham: Dekho Neeta, tum sirf meri P.A. nahi ho ya tum janti ho…… Mera liye tum meri sabse achi dost ho iss dharti par…… Meine apne baare mei kabhi kissi ko nahi bataya, par tumse kuch nahi chupaya hai…… Toh fir mujhc hi dar rahi ho…..
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Neeta: Actually mei Kartik ko date kar rahi hu…… Vo Singhaniya group ka M.D. ka P.A. hai…… Hum dono pichle 1 mahine sa date kar rahe hai….. Mujhe vo acha lagta hai, par abhi humari gaadi aage nahi badi hai……

Shubham: Hhhhmmmm, Kartik milna padega isse, aakhir meri dost ki shadi ki baat jo karni hai…..

Neeta: OOOHHHHH helo, shadi ki abhi mujhe koi jaldi nahi hai….. Phele usse jaan lu, samajh lu, thoda life ko enjoy karlu, uske baad sochungi….. Vaise bhi mujhe SHadi ka iss jhamele mei abhi nahi panda hai…..

Shubham: Tu na sach mei Jungli Billi hi hai….. (Iss kahanai mei iss lab mei hui ya samvad aage bhut kuch kaand karegi, islye friends essa na soche ya irrelevant hi chipka di meine….)

Vahi dusri Shantanu apne ek kamre mei beitha tha, tabhi usse ek call aata hai…..

Samne sa : ……………

Shantanu: Kya ya kaise ho sakta hai……. Ma******d, tujhe ek kaam diya tha, tujhc vo bhi dhang sa nahi hua…… Aaj teri
vajah sa mujhe pheli baar apna sir jhukana padega…..


Samne: ……………………….

Shantanu: Tujhe kal raat ka samaye de raha hu, iske baad tujhe sirf aur sirf maut hi milegi…..

Aur call cut ho jaata hai…….

Vo turant hi kissi aur ko bhi call karta hai……..

Shantanu: Lakha tera liye kaam hai…… Yadi kal raat tak Dardu sa kaam nahi ho, toh usse uda dena aur uske kaam ko anjam tak pahucha dena…..

Lakha: Thik hai bhai…..

Ek baar fir sa Shantanu ka call bajta hai, par iss baar phone par No. dekh kar hi uski halat kharab ho jaati hai…..

Shantanu: Bhai kaam nahi hua, bich mei hi kissi na taang ada di…..

Samne sa: Ek baat sunle SHantanu, ya kaam nahi hua, toh tera kaam mei laga dunga aur tu jaanta hai mei kabhi shikar nahi
chodta hu…..


Shantanu: Bhai iss baar aapka kaam ho jaayega…… ek hafte ka ander uski maut ki khabar aapke pass pahuch jaayegi…..

Samne : GUd……

Fir call disconnect…..

Ya dekhna hoga ki aakhir vo kun hai jiski maut ka sauda Shantanu kar raha hai…… Kahi ya Nirmala Thakur par humla isne hi toh nahi karaya……. Ya dekhna kaafi interesting hoga……..

Esse hi 2 din nikal gaye aur iss bich jaada kuch khaas nahi hua…… Aaj vo din aa gaya tha, jab SHubham ko Ramswaroop ka saath unke Guruji sa milne ka liye jaana tha…..

Abhi raat ka koi 8 baj rahe tha, jab Shubham ussi jungle mei khada tha jaha vo Ramswaroop sa milta hai….. Tabhi uske samne sa ek darwaja khulta hai…… Usmei sa nikal kar aate hai ek kaafi aayu ka vyakti…..

Shubham: Kun hai aap, aur yaha kya kar rahe hai….
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Samne vale….. Mei vahihu jisse milne ka tum abhi laashi tha SHubham….. Mei hi Ramswaroop ka Guru, jiske kahane par vo DHarti par aaya,,,,,,

(Yaha sa inhe RG kaha kar likhunga……)

Shubham: Unhe pranam karta hai…….

RG: Vijayi Bhawa….

Shubham: Guruji, aap mera naam kaise jaante hai……
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RG: Kyunki mei saalo sa tumhari hi raha dekh raha hu….. Tumse mujhe aur Mera Raja ka nagar ko kaafi umeed hai……..
Tumhei dhundne ka liye hi meine Raswaroop ko yaha bhej rakha tha…..


Shubham: Mujhc par kyu…..
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RG: Shubham, mujhe pata hai tum Maharani Trisha ka beta ho….. Mujhe tumhare baare mei sab kuch pata hai…… Tum dharti par aaye ho apni Maa ko dhundne, jiske liye tumhai do sadhu ki aatma ko aaad karane ka badle ek moti mila tha, par tumse vo kho gaya hai….. Jab tumhare jahaj par humla hua tha……

Shubham: Shock?
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Aapko kaise pata…..


RG: Meine kaha na, mujhe bhut kuch pata hai…… Khair vo chodo aur ya lo…… Ya raha tumhara Moti…. Jisse tumne kho diya
tha….. Par tumhai iski jarurat nahi padegi ab…..


Shubham: Matlab……
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RG: Matlab ya ki tumhara Pariwar kun hai mei ya bhi jaanta hu…..

Shubham: Guruji, mujhe bataye kun hai mera Pariwar……. Mei aapka har kaam karne ko tayar hu uske badle……

RG: Shubham, vo mei tumhai esse hi bata dunga….. Tumhai uske liye kissi kaam ko karne ki zarurat nahi hai, tumhari Maa ka naam hai Ranjhana Singhaniya…… Tum hi Singhaniya aur Thakur Pariwar ka ek laute waris ho….. Jo ladka tumhari jagah vaha
aaya hai, vo tumhare Pariwar sa unke duwara kare gaye apradho mei sa ek apradh ka pratishod lene aaya hai…….


SHubham: Guruji, kya sach mei hi vo mera apne hai….. Kyunki meine humesha Nirmala Thakur sa mila, mujhe essa hi laga jaise mei unhe jaanta hu, par ya nahi samajh saka kaise……

RG: Beta ya sach hai, tum cahao toh apne iss moti ka prayog karke dekh lena….. Meri baat sach hai ya nahi ya tumhai khud hi pata chal jaayega…..

Shubham: Nahi mujhe aapki baat par vishwas hai….. Aapka bhut bhut dhanyawad…… Vaise aapne kaha ki aapke Raja aur logo ko mujhc bhut umeed hai….. Essi kya baat ho gayi hai, aap bataye, mei puri koshish karunga uspar khada utarne ki…..

RG: Beta abhi uska sahi samaye nahi aaya hai….. Mei tumhai aajse ek week baad fir milunga aur tab tumhai apne saath lekar chalunga….. Tab tumhai sab samajh aa jaayega…….

SHubham: Jee jaisa aap kahe…..

RG: Ek baat aur mei tumhai kehana cahata hu,,,,, Tumhai yaad hoga tumhare pass do kitab hai, par tumne unhe kabhi nahi khola……

Shubham: Guruji, vo hai nahi thi….. Vo dono kitab bhi kho gayi hai…..

RG: Nahi beta, vo kitab kabhi nahi kho sakti hai….. Vo jab tak tumhare iss sharir mei pran hai tab tak vo kitab humesha tumhare pass rahegi…… Tum unhe yaad karo aur vo tumhai mil jaayegi…..

Shubham: Kya….?? Kaise….
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RG: Beta vo khaas kitabe hai….. Unn kitabo mei sa ek kitab hai Magical Book….. Uss book mei esse jaadu ka baare mei likha hai, jo kabhi iss duniya mei hua karte tha, par saalo phele hi unka gyan kabhi kissi ko nahi mila, tab sa aaj tak logo na bus
suna hai unke baare mei, par kabhi na dekha hai aur na hi kabhi kissi na istemal kare hai…..


Dusri jo kitab hai, vo hai iss brahamand mei chupa hua vo rahasiye ka baare mei, jiske baare mei tumhai jaana jaruri hai, par ya bata du ya kitab adhuri hai…… Iss kitab mei suru ka prashth (Page) khali hai…… Aur uske baad aage kuch likha hai……

Shubham: Par aadhi kitab kyu likhi hui hai….. Aur mujhe aadhi kitab samajh kaise aayegi…..

RG: Tumhai aadhi kitab ka gyan Guru Trajang sa milega, par unhe kabhi kissi na nahi dekha hai…… Unhe dhundna tumhai hi hoga, aur jab vo tumhai jab aadha rahasiye bata dega, uske baad hi tum iss kitab ka istemaal kar sakoge……

Shubham: Jee Guruji….. Mei jaldi hi Guru Trajang ko dhundna ka liye nikal jaaunga……

RG: achi baat hai….. Par yaad rahe, aaj se jaadu ki kitab ka magic ko padhna suru kar dena….. Kyunki ya tumhai aage bhut kaam aayega…..Acha ab mei chalta hu, jaldi hi milunga ek baar fir sa……

Shubham: Guruji, ek baat aur puchni thi……

RG: Janta hu, tum Sword of Destruction ka baare mei jaana cahate ho, mei tumhai jaldi hi uske baare mei bata dunga, par tab tak ka liye intezar karo…..

Shubham: Jaisa aap cahaiye…..

Chaliye inka kaam khatam hua, hum chalte hai Willy and Company aur Lemphard ka kabile ki taraf……

Aaj Willy and Company raat mei Nigro ka pass pahuch jaate hai……

NIgro: Aap sabhi Rajkumariyo aur Rajkumaro ko mera pranam…… Meine jaisa AS na mujhe yaha ka kaam saupa tha, meine
kar diya hai…..


Willy: KYa kaam diya tha AS na aapko…..
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NIgro: Rajkumar, mera kaam tha iss duniya mei kuch logo ko humare saath jodna, jiske jariye hume yaha ki sabhi khabar mil
sake aur hum iss duniya ki raksha kar sake…. Meine iss duniya ka har kone mei apne jasoos chod diye hai, ab hume har taraf
sa khabar milti raheti hai…..


Ya jagah humara base hai, jaha sa hum unn sabhi par najar rakh sakte hai….. Yaha jarurat ki sabhi chije hai……

Willy: Nigro, aapne bhut acha kaam kara hai….. Vaise SHubham kaha hai…..
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Nigro: Shubham abhi yahi hai…… Issi sehar mei hai….. Par ek baat bata du, vo iss duniya ka sabse bade rahiso mei sa ek hai….. Unki sampada bhut adhik hai aur har din bad hi rahi hai……

Iszy: Thik hai Nigro, aage ka kaam hum dekh lega….. Ab aap vapas apne ghar jaa sakte hai….. AS na kaha hai aapka kaam yaha ka pura hua….. Ab aap apne pariwar sa mil sakte hai….. Vo aapke vaha pahuchne ki pratiksha kar rahe hai…..

Nigro: Jee aapka bhut bhut dhanyawad……

Vahi dusri taraf Lemphard aur Ghost World ka ghost aapas mei vichar kar rahe tha…..

Ghost 1: Hume SHubham ka upar siddha humle ki jagah uske upar phele Kaalu ka istemaal hi karna cahaiye…..

NV10: Mei bhi yahi sochta hu…… Sardar Nicaroo na bhi kaha tha ki hum usse kam samajhne ki galti na kare,,,,, Aur yadi usse ek humare baare mei pata chal gaya toh vo hume nahi chodega……

NV8: Ya thik hai…. Kaalu, humla kaise karna hai ya meine tumhai samjha hi diya hai….. Yaad rakhna usse humare baare mei kuch bhi nahi pata chalna cahaiye, varna……

Kaalu: NV8 aap bharosa rakhe, aaj tak meine aapke kissi kaam mei aapka naam nahi aane diya, to hiss baar kaise aane
dunga….. Aapka kaam ho jaayega…..
Guru ji se Shubham ko apne parivaar ka to pata chal hi gaya hain ab dekhna hain ki Shubham kaisay unki madad kar ke unsai milta hai. Aur kia singhania family usay accept karegi. Nitin ka kia banega but yah masla to bohat hi pechida hota jaa raha hain Kartik ki wajah sai.
 
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