Fantasy Shubham - Ek Rakshak ya Bhakshak

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Pichle update tak aapne dekha ki Shubham caller ko maar deta hai aur uske baad Guruji ka saath Magical City pahuch jaata hai aur uske piche piche Aaliya bhi aati hai


Ab Aage....


Shubham: Jab meine uss magical door ka raste mei sa jaise ander gaya toh mere samne k najara ek dum samanye tha, par ek chij na mera dhyan apni taraf khicha tha aur vo thi logo ki halat...... Hum jaha pahuche tha vo thi Magical City, par ya main city sa bahar bani ek jagah thi, jo jungle mei basi thi...... Yaha logo ki halat bhut kharab thi, sabhi ka sharir dekhne par hi paa chal raha tha ki sabhi ka saath sharirik yaatnaye hui hai, sabhi ko bhut maara gaya hai aur sabhi bhut dukhi hai......


Guruji: Shubham ya hai vo Magical City ka dakshin hissa...... Yaha par hum sabhi rahete hai.....


Shubham: Guruji, mujhe ek baat samajh nahi aa rahi, agar vo aap logo ko dhund sakta hai aur maar sakta hai, toh fir usne aaj tak aap logo ko maar kyu nahi diya aur iss tarah jinda rakhna ka karan......

Guruji: Vo hume nahi maar sakta hai kyunki vo iss jungle mei nahi aa sakta hai..... Iss jungle mei sa inn sabhi ko jbardasti lekar jaane vale humare apne hi hai...... Humare kuch logo na unki gulami swikar lee hai, aur yahi karan hai ki
vo log yaha sa inn logo ko jabardasti lekar jaate hai aur fir ine maar peet karke apna kaam karate hai.......



Shubham: Aapke apne log.....

Unhone essa kyu kara.....

Guruji: Kyunki........


Tabhi ek awaj aati hai...... Vo jalta hai humare ashwariye sa......


Guruji: Pranam Maharaj...... (Jee dosto ya hai Magical City ka Maharaj...... Inka bhut role nahi hai, islye hum inhe yaha
MM likhege....)


Shubham: Pranam Maharaj......


MM: Guruji aap kaha rahe tha k kissi esse vyakti ko lekar aayege jo Sword of Destruction ko paa sake aur uss Shetan ko
maar kar hume humara Raajye bhi dila sake..... Par ya toh ek dum chota sa balak hi lagta hai...... HUme nahi lagta hai ki ya uss jungle ko bhi paar kar sakega jismei Sword of Destruction hai......


Guruji: Maharaj aap thoda dhariye aur samay rakhe, kyunki Sword ki pariksha mei koi na koi safal jarur hoga.....


SHubham: Mei Guruji ka javab sa thoda sochne par majbur hua, ki aakhir us jungle mei essi kunsi samasya hai.....


Shubham: Guruji aap mujhe jaldi sa jaldi uss jagah pahuchne ka rasta bata de, mera pass samaye kam hai..... Mujhe jaldi sa jaldi Sword ko hassil karni hai aur apne logo ko bachana hai......


Guruji: Unhone bina kuch jaada bole, bus mujhe uss jungle mei jaha Sword thi, uska rasta bata diya.... Par saath hi unhone mujhe aagah bhi kara ki raste mei musibat ka samna karna padh sakta hai.....


Vahi dusri taraf jaha Aaliya pahuchi thi, vo jagah apne aap mei dekhne ka layak thi...... Vo uss jagah ko dekh kar shock mei chali gayi......


Aaliya: Jaise hi samne ka najara dekha, uska muh khula hua tha aur uska karan sirf ek aur ek hi tha..... Uke samne ek bhut hi khoobsurat jagah hai, essi jagah vo har din aur raat apne khayalo mei dekha karti thi......


Aaliya: Mei yaha kaise aa gay, ya jagah toh meine sapne mei dekhi hai, par.......


Back to Shubham


Shubham: Mei vaha sa nikal kar uss jungle ki taraf chal diya, par ek baa badi ajeeb thi aur vo thi ki abhi tak mujhe bich mei rokne ka liye koi bhi nahi mila, jabki Guruji na kaha tha ki mujhe aage bhut sa khatro ka samna karna padega....


Shubham: Par mei bhi masti mei aage badte chala jaa raha tha, jitni tej ho sake utni tej jaa raha tha...... Par koi tha jo lagatar mera picha kar raha tha aur mei iss baat sa anjan tha, vo thodi der mera picha karta raha aur uske baad vo vaha sa gayab ho gaya.....


Jo mera picha kar raha tha, vo gayab hokar sidha pahucha ek Mahal mei...... (Yaha picha karne vale ko P1 likhunga aur Mahal ka sabhi logo ko M 1, M2, etc......)


P1: Senapati M1, aapka shak sahi tha, vo ladka koi samanye nahi hai...... Meine kaafi der uska picha kara aur uski urja bhi jaane ki koshish kari, par usmei sa kissi bhi tarah ki urja nahi nikal rahi thi..... Aur iss duniya mei koi bhi essa nahi hai jismei koi urja nahi ho......


M1: Iska matlab ya vahi hai, jiske aane ka baare mei Maha Mahim na kaha tha....... Dhyan rahe vo kissi bhi halat mei uss jungle mei ghusna sa nahi rahe sake.....


P1: Jee Maha Mahim......


M1: Toh aakhir kaar Trisha aur Nabila ka beta aa gaya, saalo phele Nabila na jiss kaam ka liye mujhe iss duniya mei bheja tha ab jaakar mera kaam pura hone vala hai.......


Tabhi ek awaj aati hai.......


Guruji: Sahi kaha rahe ho M1, aakhir jiska hum sadiyo sa intezaar kar rahe tha vo aa gaya hai, par mujhe essa lag raha hai ki Maha Mahim usse itni aasani sa usse vo jungle mei ghusne nahi dega.....


M1: Vo abhi nahi hai aur jab tak vo aayega, tab tak Shubham uss jungle mei pahuch chuka hoga, aur aap jaante hi uske
ander vo kabhi nahi jaa sakta hai......


Guruji: M1 par tum bhul rahe ho vo iss jungle ko ek dum band bhi kar sakta hai, jisse todna Sword of Destruction ka bas ka bhi nahi hai, islye jitna ho sake usse ya baat nahi pata chalni cahaiye.....


M1: Maaf karna Guruji, par usse batana hi padega kyunki aap jaante hai uski aankhe kabhi na band hoti hai aur na hi kabhi usse kuch chupaya jaa sakta hai......


Guruji: Thik hai......


Chaliye chalte hai Aaliya ka pass......


Aaliya: Agar mera sapna sach hai, toh iska matlab iss jagah vo ek vishal kaaye Narbhakshi bhi milega, jisse dekhne mei hi aadmi bhagwan ko pyara ho jaaye...... Par.....


Abhi Aaliya ki baat adhuri thi ki uske man mei ek awaj aayi......


Awaj: Putri ya nagri tumhari banayi hui hai, ismei um jo sochogi, jaisa sochogi vaisa hi hoga...... Aur rahi Narbhakshi ki
baat toh bata du, vo tumhai kabhi bhi haani nahi pahucha sakta hai.......


Aaliya: Awaj sun vo dar gayi...... Kun bol rahe hai aap....

Aur aapko kaise pata ya sab.....

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Awaj: Mei vo hu jisse tumhai ya sakti mili hai.......


Aaliya: Shakti, kaisi shalti.....

Aur aap kun hai samne kyu nahi aate hai......

Awaj: Mei tumhare samne nahi aaunga, par ek baat yaad rakho tum khaas ho, kyunki tumhai ek khaas shakti mili hai, jiski jarurat tumhare bhai ko hi padegi aur uss samaye tumhai bhi baakiyo ka saath uski madat karni hogi......


Aaliya: Mera bhai, ya kun hai aur vo kaha hai...... Mei usse milna cahati hu......


Awaj: Jaldi hi vo tumhai milega aur saath hi saath vo tumhai apni shakti ka istemaal karna bhi sikhayega......


Aaliya:
Abhi Aaliya kuch kahati ki usse phele hi uske shabd uske ander hi rahe gaye aur samne sa aate hua ek bade sa haathi ko aate dekh Aaliya ki halat kharab ho gayi, kyunki vo haathi puri tarah sa khoon sa nahaya hua tha.......


Vo haathi Aaliya ka pass pahuch kar, usse apni sund(trunk) mei lapet kar utha deta hai......


CHaliye ab chalte hai vapas Shubham ke pass......


Shubham: Idhar mei kuch hi dhur tha jungle ka ki mujhe uss jungle mei ghusne sa phele hi vaha kuch Raakshaas bhi dikha...... Mei samajhne laga tha ki ya itni aasani sa mujhe aage nahi badne dega, islye mei bina samaye lagaye ek manatr padha....... " HIDARIUM BHAVISAHA" (MEANING ILLUSION) ya magic meine uss kitab sa sikha tha jo mujhe mili thi...... Iska ek sabse bada fayda ya tha ki ab mei unke samne sa nikal bhi jaata toh vo mujhe nahi dekh sakte tha......


Mei bade aram sa unke samne sa aage nikal gaya aur uss jungle mei ghusna ka liye bad gaya......


Par jaise hi meine Jungle mei enter kari, vaha ki puri jagah hil gayi aur mei bhi na jaane kaise apne asli roop mei..... Jo ki mere Rakshak ka roop tha..... Par sirf yahi jagah nahi, baaki ki bhut saari jagah mei bhi dharti mei kampan mehsoos hu tha....... Iss jhatka ko MM na bhi mehsoos kara tha......


MM: Ya kaise ho sakta hai, humare purvajo na apni kitab mei likha tha, jo bhi Sword ko paane vala hoga, uske kadam jaise hi Sword ka uss jungle mei padege uss samaye Magical City ki saari jamin kaap jaayegi aur fir suru hogi do bade takatwar logo mei youdh......


Iss youdh ka parinam sirf aur sirf ek ki haar sa hi nikalega, par kun jeetega aur kun haarega ya kaha paana bhut mushkil hai, kyunki dono hi bade ShaktiShali aur apne lakshay ko paane ka liye aakhri saas tak haar nahi maanege......


Idhar mei jab jungle mei apne asli roop mei aa gaya, toh bahar mera jaadu khatam ho gaya...... Unn logo ko bhi ya baat pata cha gayi ki mei ander daakhil ho gaya hu......


Idher mere kaano mei ek awaj sunayi di......


Awaj: Yaha sa tumhai mujhtak pahuchne sa phele bahut si kathinayi ka samna karna padega, aur vo chunauti.....


Shubham: Tum kun ho nahi pata, par itna pata hai ki mei yaha sa bina Sword ko liye nahi jaaunga...... Cahaiye uske liye mujhe tumhari ya iss pure grah ki jaan hi kyu na leni pade......


Awaj: Thik hai, toh fir apne kadam badao aur dekho......


Shubham: Muskurate hua, ab tumhai jab mei bacha lag hi raha hu, toh phir bache to masti khor hote hai....... aur ya kaha kar SHubham ek haath aage kar deta hai......


Jaise hi Shubham ka haath aage hote hai uss pure jungle mei aag lag jaati hai.........


Awaj: Bhut ache, tumne apni kabar khud khod li hai......


Dekhte h dekhte uss jagah na baraf mei badal li....... Aur dekhte hi dekhte jaha aag lagi thi ab vo jagah ek barfili duniya jaisi ho gayi thi.......


Awaj: Kaha tha na tumne galti kardi hai...... Ya aag ka nuksaan tumhai hoga, ab dekho.....


SHubham: Mukurate hua aage nikalne lagta hai..... Jaise hi bus vo aage badta hai, vo jagah ek baar baraf mei badal gayi thi uss jagah fir sa aag lag jaati hai.......


Awaj: Ya kaise ho sakta hai, tumhari aag meine bhuja di thi......

Shubham: Ya koi sadharan aag nahi hai, ya aag uss duniya ki hai jiss duniya mei keval aag hi hai....... Ab jab um isse bhuja sakoge tab mei jaanunga ki kissi barabar vale sa mila hu......


Awaj: Bahut ache bache, aaj sadiyo baad koi essa aaya hai jisne iss aag ka istemaal kara hai...... Par ab ya dekho......


Jaise hi unhone ya kaha, toh mere samne ek bhut badi dariya aa gayi...... Uss dariya mei jo paani tha vo uss aag ko apne andar khichne laga aur dekhte hi dekhte uss paani ka dariye mei hi saari aag simat gayi aur uske baad vo dariya gayab ho gaya......


Shubham: Aag ke dariya mei gayab hote dekh mera muh khul gaya..... Meine uss kitab mei padha tha ki iss aag ko koi bhi khatam nahi kar sakta hai.......


Awaj: Bache, tumne jiss kitab sa ya sab padha hai na meine uss kitab ka nirman kara hai....... Yaha chunauti badti hi jaayegi......


Aur uske baad vo awaj aana band ho jaati hai......


Shubham: Iska matlab hai ki Sword ki badha koi samanye nahi hogi..... Mujhe apna har kadam badi hi savdhani sa rakhna padega..... Ya soch kar mei jungle mei aage bad gaya......


Abhi mei kuch dhur hi chala tha ki mei vapas vahi pahuch gaya tha jaha se mei chalna suru kara tha...... Ya kya hai, ya koi bhul bhulaya toh hai nahi kyunki mere samne toh essa koi rasta nahi aaya jiske baare mei mujhe sochna pade.....


Meine apni aankhe band karke ek baar fir sa kuch manatr padhe...... Mere esse karte hi mere sharir mei sa ek laal roshni nikalne lagi aur vo uss pure jungle mei failne lagi,,,,, par mere sharir sa nikalne vali roshni na uss puri jagah ko laal kar diya, jab meine samne dekha toh mei ya dekh kar shock ho gaya kyunki uss puri jagah par bhul bhulaiya ka jaadu tha, jisse mei jaha bhi jaau ghum kar ek baar fir sa vahi aa jaaunga.......


Meine dhyan sa dekha toh vaha sa nikalne ka keval ek hi raasta tha, par uss raste ko paar karna aasan nahi lag raha tha kyunki usmei kaafi bade bade kaate nikale hua tha, jo ki ek insaan ka sharir ka aar paar bhi ho sakte tha aur saath hi vaha kuch esse colour ka phool dikh rahe tha jinhe meine kabhi nahi dekha tha.......


Shubham: Mei vaha sa aage bada uss raste ki taraf kyunki mere pass jaada samaye nahi bacha tha, mujhe jaldi hi Sword ko haasil karna hi tha...... Par abhi meine apna phela kadam hi vaha rakha hoga ki vo jagah hilne lagi aur ek pathar nikal kar bahar aa gaya......


Pathar: Agar tumhai yaha se aage badna hai toh tumhai yaha lage inn patharo mei sa sahi pathar ko chunna hoga aur uss utha kar jiss disha mei faikoge uss taraf ka rasta khul jaayega....... Par yadi tum 2 baar mei sahi rasta nahi chun sake toh aage kya hoga uske jimmedar tum hoge......


Aur uske baad vo vaha sa gayab ho gaya aur vaha uski jagah 10 alag alag colour ka pathar aa gaye, jinka colour blue, green, red, yellow, white, black, organe, pink, purple, marhoon tha. Par ab saval ek hi tha mei kunsa pathar chunu aur kis basis par chunu ya dono hi baate nahi pata thi..... Ya sab bus mere luck par tha ki mei sahi pathar utha paata hu ya nahi......


Meine kuch der tak atharo ko dekha aur uske baad meine usmei sa Marhoon colour utha liya, kyunki mera logic ya tha ki vaha baaki sabhi colour ka phool lage hua tha, par marhoon colur ka phool nahi tha, islye shayad yahi hoga jisse rasta khulega......


Meine usse utha kar uss raste par faik diya...... Jaise hi meine uss raste par feka vo vaha gira aur uske baad kuch nahi hua..... Meine sabhi taraf dekha toh kuch badlav nahi hua tha, par jaise hi meine apna pair aage rakha toh vaha lage sabhi kaate side ho gaye..... Ya dekh meine dusra kadam bhi aage bada diya....


Par abhi mei do kadam hi aage bada tha ki jiss jagah mei khada tha vaha ki jamin fati aur mei usse niche jaakar gir gaya..... Mei vaha sa niche ek na jaane kaisi jagah aa gaya tha, kyunki vaha sabhi taraf sirf aur sirf khoon hi khoon najar aa raha tha.....


Awaj: Tum aadam khor shero ka jungle mei aa gaye ho yaha ka shero ka pass tumhara ek putla hai yadi tum uss putle ko haasil kar sake toh hi tum aage bad sakoge, par yadi ya shero na tumhai khaa liya toh tumhari maut......


Par ha yaad rakhna ya jagah keval 3 ghante ka liye hi hai, yadi inn 3 ghanto mei tum iss duniya sa apne putle ko nahi haasil kar sake toh tum humesha humesha ka liye yahi rahe jaaoge......


Iske baad vo awaj band ho gayi aur mere samne ek sand hour glass ki ghadi aa gayi...... aur usse dhere dhere sand girne lagi......


Shubham: isse kehate hai, aasman sa utra aur khajur par latke..... Abhi mei ya baat bola hi tha ki mujhe ek dil dehalane vali awaj sunayi di..... Ya awaj ek ya usse jada pata nahi kitne shero ka ek saath dahardne ki thi..... Mein ya awaj sunkar hi ghabra gaya tha......


Chaliye dsto aage kya hua ya jaane ka liye bane rahe...... Aaj kuch dino baad update de raha hu aur abhi bhi puri tarah sa samaye nahi nikal saka hu, par aapse wada kara tha islye ya update de raha hu.....


Aapke comments ka intezar rahega aur kal sa regular bade bade update aane lagege.....

 

[Acme]

Bahut hi badhiya update hai bhai ..maza aa gaya.. waiting for next update

 

[Ankit Agarwal]

Superb update bhai
Aakhir kar shubham ne sword pane ke liye nikal gaya aur saath mein chunati bhi bohat kathin hae

 

[Genius]

 

[sonukale]

Fantastic update Lajawab story
Keep posting

 

[CG]

bahut hi shandaar update hai...... lagtaa hai ki Alia mein bhi Trisha aur Nabila ka ansh hai..... kaafi interesting ho rahi hai story.

shayad aliya ko bataa dea Shubham wapas jaane ke time..... dekhte hain aage kya hota hai....

update thoda chhota lagaa dost... lekin itne din baad aaye ho to next update tak shayad wapas big updates dene lag jaaoge ....

isi tarah mast story likhte raho

 

[Raj142]

Jabrdust update bhai
Keep posting...

 

[deep500]

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