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Fantasy Shubham - Ek Rakshak ya Bhakshak
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Hello Everyone....
I know meine kal raat koi update nahi diya hai but frankly and truly speaking mere pas abhi koi idea nahi hai naya ki mei aage update likhu.... Sach yahi hai ki jab meine story suru kari thi uss samaye meine kabhi ya nahi socha tha ki mujhe aap sabhi ka itna support milega aur ya story itni lambi chalegi.....
Meine suruvat ki kuch chije hi sochi thi aur uske baad ka kuch nahi kyunki meine umeed hi sirf 30-40 updates tak ki kari thi.... Par aap sabhi na itna support kara ki meine aage ya story likhi....
Kal raat ko jab mei update likhne baitha tab meine kuch likha but usse vapas padhne ka baad meine usse delete kar diya kyunki mujhe sach mei hi kuch bhi pasand nahi aaya.... Mei khud apni likhi hui chij pasand nahi kar saka toh mei kaise aap logo se umeed rakhu ki mera likha pasand aa raha hoga.....
Jab Meine ya suru kari thi toh bus yahi soch kar ki kuch naya aur unique likhunga aur iske liye hi ya plot banaya tha, par pichle kuch updates ko chod kar bich ka sabhi updates ache nahi tha ya mei janta hu....
Aur islye meine decide kara hai ki I am stop writing this further for next few days so that I can think over about the future updates and also something new which will again develop interest among you people..... Kyunki isko likhne ka sirf maksad kuch alag tarah ki chije dikhana tha......
So I on a long vacation for 10-12 days...... Mei jiss din se updates resume karunga mei usse phele hi aapko message chod dunga story par......
Shayad kuch ko lagega ki mein sirf bahane bana kar yaha se bhag raha hu, then also I am ohk with it aur baaki ko kuch aur, but jab tak mei khud kuch acha nahi likh aur soch leta I will not resume it....... But in next few days I will be back with few new twists and again with some unique concepts till then Good Bye Everyone and Thank You All for Supporting and Liking Till Yet.....
Shubham Agarwal.....
I know meine kal raat koi update nahi diya hai but frankly and truly speaking mere pas abhi koi idea nahi hai naya ki mei aage update likhu.... Sach yahi hai ki jab meine story suru kari thi uss samaye meine kabhi ya nahi socha tha ki mujhe aap sabhi ka itna support milega aur ya story itni lambi chalegi.....
Meine suruvat ki kuch chije hi sochi thi aur uske baad ka kuch nahi kyunki meine umeed hi sirf 30-40 updates tak ki kari thi.... Par aap sabhi na itna support kara ki meine aage ya story likhi....
Kal raat ko jab mei update likhne baitha tab meine kuch likha but usse vapas padhne ka baad meine usse delete kar diya kyunki mujhe sach mei hi kuch bhi pasand nahi aaya.... Mei khud apni likhi hui chij pasand nahi kar saka toh mei kaise aap logo se umeed rakhu ki mera likha pasand aa raha hoga.....
Jab Meine ya suru kari thi toh bus yahi soch kar ki kuch naya aur unique likhunga aur iske liye hi ya plot banaya tha, par pichle kuch updates ko chod kar bich ka sabhi updates ache nahi tha ya mei janta hu....
Aur islye meine decide kara hai ki I am stop writing this further for next few days so that I can think over about the future updates and also something new which will again develop interest among you people..... Kyunki isko likhne ka sirf maksad kuch alag tarah ki chije dikhana tha......
So I on a long vacation for 10-12 days...... Mei jiss din se updates resume karunga mei usse phele hi aapko message chod dunga story par......
Shayad kuch ko lagega ki mein sirf bahane bana kar yaha se bhag raha hu, then also I am ohk with it aur baaki ko kuch aur, but jab tak mei khud kuch acha nahi likh aur soch leta I will not resume it....... But in next few days I will be back with few new twists and again with some unique concepts till then Good Bye Everyone and Thank You All for Supporting and Liking Till Yet.....
Shubham Agarwal.....
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Shubham bhai story acchi chal rahi hain lekin aap itney pareshan na ho better hain ki jitne cheeze aapne failayi hain unko ek ek kar ke samet lijiye aur uske liye better hoga ki ek baar puri stoey dobara read karey aur jahan jahan aapko lage is aapne sawal chora ya future je liye chora hai. Un un points ko close karna shuru kare story khud ba khud intresting jo jayegi but 10 to 15 days gap story ko bilkul neeras kar dega. Kyuki agar ab kuch naya karne ki koshish karege ya naya layege to usko phir sametna mushkil hoga aut story ka kabada hoga to better hain 1or 2 day story read karey aur saare loopholes ko close kar dijiye.
Humay aap pe bharosa hain aur sath sath hain aapke.
Humay aap pe bharosa hain aur sath sath hain aapke.
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Bhai koi masla nhi hai muje pata hai aisa hi hota aksar flow ke sath chalne ke baad story thodi boring lgti hai
But apki story sach me kafi interesting hai
Bhot ache se likh rhe ho
But I think ab ko cheezo ko wrap up karna chahiye
Baki jitne din apko chahiye koi masla nhi
Keep going
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Story achi chal Rahi hai
"Kuch masala mile to
achi se best ho jayegi"
Ye ek suggestion hai
Apke liye bura mat maanana iske liye
Eagerly waiting for your reply
ND waiting for the next update
"Kuch masala mile to
achi se best ho jayegi"
Ye ek suggestion hai
Apke liye bura mat maanana iske liye
Eagerly waiting for your reply
ND waiting for the next update