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Fantasy Shubham - Ek Rakshak ya Bhakshak

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Wow.... superb update

Us Laash mein aisa kya hai aur kyun usko Dafnaya gaya hai ......

Shbham ka us jagah se nikalnaa bhi chunoutipurn hoga

Elika ne kya dekha aur aage kya hua .....

Aliya jo ki Shubham ki strength hai...woh kya kar rahi hai

Wo ladki koun hai jo kahti hai ki wo amar hai naa mar sakti hai na hi khatm ho sakti hai.....

:waiting: to know all these....
 

Shubham

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jabardast wapsi........ keep it up bro

waiting for todays post

Wow.... superb update

Us Laash mein aisa kya hai aur kyun usko Dafnaya gaya hai ......

Shbham ka us jagah se nikalnaa bhi chunoutipurn hoga

Elika ne kya dekha aur aage kya hua .....

Aliya jo ki Shubham ki strength hai...woh kya kar rahi hai

Wo ladki koun hai jo kahti hai ki wo amar hai naa mar sakti hai na hi khatm ho sakti hai.....

:waiting: to know all these....

Thank You Very Much Brother.....

Laash ka dafnane ka raaj aaj khul jaayega.... Shubham ko uss jagah tak pahuchna hai jaha usse Swaroopa ki maut kaise hogi par vaha ka raste mei muskile jarur hogi aur unn mushkilo ko paar karna Shubham ki majburi....

Elika na jinko dekha hai, ab Elika unke saath kaise kya karti hai dekhte jaye.... Kyunki Elika itni asani se Shubham ka khilaf jaane vale ko chodne se rahi.....

Aaliya ko abhi gayab kar diya hai aur jo vo kar rahi hai uske baare mei aage ka update mei.... Uss ladki ka raaj aaj khulega aur Swaroopa ki maut bhi.....

Keep reading and commenting....
 

Shubham

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JABARDUST SHAANDAAR AUR INTERESTING UPDATE BHAI.BHAI AAP SE AB BAS EK HI REQUEST HAI KI SUSPENSE KO AB KAM KARO YAAR.JAB SE STORY SURU HUYI HAI SIVAY SUSPENSE BADHANE KE KAM NAHI HO RAHI HAI.AURAGER SACH KAHA JAYE TOH IN SUSPENSE KI WAJAH SE KAHANI PURI ULAJHI HUYI LAG RAHI HAI .KAB KAHA KYA KYU HO RAHA HAI SAMAJH KE PARE DIKH RAHA HAI.BHAI AGER KUCH GALAT BOL DIYA HO TOH MAAF KARNA.

Thank You very much Friend....

Bhai aap jo kahe rahe hai ki story mei suspense kab hona cahaiye toh uski taraf humne kalse apne kadam bada diye hai aur jaldi hi ya sabhi suspense khatam hone lagega...... Dhere Dhere story mei se sabhi tarah ka raaj par se parda uthne lagega aur uski taraf kadam humne bada diye hai.....

Vaise brother aapne jo kaha ki suspense ki vajah se kahani ulajhi hui lag rahi hai toh ya sahi hai, par suspense daale hi islye jaate hai ki kahani ulajh jaaye taaki sabhi ka interest bana rahe ki kaha se kab kya hoga ya jaane ka liye, par fir bhi agar aapko lagta hai ki kuch jada hi ulajh gaye hai toh bus aap nishchint ho jaaye kyunki ab uljhan suljhane ka samaye aa raha hai....

Keep reading and commenting.....
 

Viraj Raj

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Shandar update bhai
 
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