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Fantasy Shubham - Ek Rakshak ya Bhakshak

Monkey D. Dragon

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Hello everyone...

Its a small announcement for all the readers, Shubham is busy with his new ventures and therefore he is not able to continue this story....

I asked him if I can continue the same and on that he gave me postive reply therefore I will start posting further updates of this story....

I am in constant touch with and discuss a lot about all the thoughts he had and plot of the story which he thinks for this....

So its a request from you all to support me as I am new here and trying to continue this story which I personally like a lot....

I will start posting updates from tonight or tomorrow...

Thanking You....
Okay bro
You have my support
As it's a tempting story in fantasy section
It would be better than a long wait
Carry on bro
Can't wait to see the next
 
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Update 110..

Pichle update tak aapne dekha ki Shubham na khudko kaise Brown Ash ka chungal se nikala ek kitab aur ek aakrati ki vajah se…. Vaha se nikalne ka baad Shubham apni aage ki shiksha puri karne chala gaya par jaane se phele vo Elika aur baaki sabhi ko bata gaya ki unhe kya karna hai…..


Ab Aage….


After a year…..


Aaj pura ek saal bit gaya hai Shubham ko gaye hua….. Iss ek saal mei Shubham ki gair maujoodgi mei Imosopher aur Draco dono hi behad khukhaar ho gaye kyunki unhe kisika dar nahi tha…. Issi vajah se unhone apni shaktiyo ka istemaal kar sabhi dishao mei apna kabza jamana shuru kar diya…. Jo unke raste mei aata vo sab ya toh Maare jaate ya fir Kaid kiya jaate…..


Marne valo ki shankhiya behad hi kam hoti aur kaid karne valo ki behad jada….. Duniya ka har Rajye ko dhere dhere karke Imosopher na apne adhin kar liya tha ab bus bache tha kewal kuch hi Rajye jinpar uski najar thi…. Ismei lagbhag sabhi chote chote rajye hi tha par do behad bade Rajye tha….. Jismei ek tha Rajkumari Marium ka rajye aur dusra tha Madam Mariana ka Pita ka Rajye…..


Aaj tayari thi Draco ki, usne apne sabse shaktishali aur sabse khaas saathi ko bheja tha apni lakho ki sankhiya mei saina ka saath jismei sab ka sab sirf aur sirf shaitaan hi tha….. Aaj vo sabhi Rajkumari Marium ka rajye par humla karne vale tha…. Rajkumari Marium ka Pita ek sache aur naik dil insaan tha jinhone humesha achayi aur White Energy ka saath diya….. Aaj bhi vo apne sampurn sainya bal ka saath Draco ka shaitaan ka saath ladne ko tayar tha…. Unhone faisla kar rakha tha ki vo aaj cahaiye jeevit na bache par apne sharir ka aakhri saas tak vo apne Rajye aur apni bhumi ko Black Energy ka adhin nahi hone dega…. Marium ka bhai na bhi apne Pita ka saath dena ka faisla kiya aur vo tayar tha apne Pita ka saath aaj ka youdh ka liya……


Idhar Paristan mei aaj ka youdh ki khabar sabhi ko thi….. Elika na Maharaj se baat bhi kari ki vo apni jagah chod de aur sabhi ko bhi par unhone usse saaf kaha diya tha ki unhe maut manjur hai par apne logo ko akele chodna nahi….. Marium apne Pita ki baat sun behad khush hui aur usne bhi faisla le liya ki vo aaj aur abhi apne ghar vapas laut rahi hai….. Vo bhi apne Pita ka saath apne logo ka liya ladegi…


Idhar Shubham ka baaki sabhi dost bhi sab Marium ki baat se sehamat tha kyunki sabhi na behad samaye intezar kar liya par ab vo aur intezar nahi karna cahate tha…. Essa mei sabhi logo na man bana liya aur vo aaj yaha se nikalne ka liya tayar tha…..


Nancy: Elika hum sabhi ko jaana hoga aur hume aaj mat rokna….. Hum sabne aaj tak jo bhi shiksha li hai vo sab bus issi din ka liya li thi ki hum apni duniya ka logo ko bacha sake aur agar ab hum essa karne ka liya nahi gaye toh ya humari shiksha ka apmaan hoga….. Shubham kaha hai aur kaha nahi iska kisiko pata nahi hai, vo kab tak aayega ya bhi nahi pata aur sabse badi baat vo Rakshak ka roop mei aayega ki nahi….. Islye hum sab jaa rahe hai fir cahaiye kuch bhi ho jaaye….


Abhi vo nikalne ki tayari mei tha ki Madam Mariana bhi unke saath jud gayi aur Aaliya bhi…. Vaha sirf AS,Alvace aur Elika hi rahe gaye tha….. Sabhi log vaha se nikal gaye aur Maharaj ka saath jakar youdh ka liya saj ho gaye….. Idhar Draco ka bheja hua khaas aadmi (Nairana) apni sanik bal ka saath Maharaj ka Mahal ki taraf bad raha tha…. Unse jab samne itna saare logo ko ladne ka liya saj dekha toh uske cehare par ek muskaan thi……


Vo unn sabhi mei se nahi tha jo apni baat bol kar samaye barbaad karte tha vo unmei se tha jo bolte kuch nahi bus karte tha…. Usne pal bhar mei hi apne logo ko youdh ki suruwat ka aadesh de diya aur khud dhur youdh se kahada tha…. Uske youdh se dhur rahena ka bus ek hi karan tha aur vo tha ki vo janta tha ki uski Sena sabhi se mukabla kar sakti hai aur agar vo cahata toh inn sabhi ko khatam kar deta siwaye Mariana ka par usse nuksaan behad pahucha sakta tha…..


Par vo apne asli pratidhwandi yaani Elika aur AS ka intezar kar raha tha….. Usse pata tha ki agar ya sab yaha hai toh vo dono jada samaye inse dhur bhi nahi rahega aur yaha aakar youdh bhi karega kyunki uski sena bal ka samne Maharaj ka sena bal kuch nahi tha aur vo unhe behad aasani se gher leta…..


Idhar youdh shuru hua aur sabhi josh se lad rahe tha…. Jaha Nairana ki Sena ka logo andha dhun aage bad rahe tha vahi Maharaj aur unke saathi bus sabhi ko maarte aage bad rahe tha, par unse ek galti ho rahi thi jiska khamiyaza unhe jaldi bhugatna hoga….. Idhar humla behad teji se ho raha tha dono taraf se tabhi Nairana na apne haath aage kiya aur uske haath se nikali kaali roshni jamin par padi…..


Idhar jamin par roshni lagi aur udhar uske Sainik jo sab abhi tak mare hua lag raha tha vo ek baar firse uth khada hua aur fir se youdh mei lag gaye….. Ya manjar dekh vaha maujood har kisi ko saap sungh gaya kyunnki agar essa hua toh vo usse kabhi maar hi nahi sakega…..Vahi vo saare ek saath chaaro taraf se ghir gaye…. Ya galti thi apne samne vale dushman ko na jaane ki ya fir agyanta ki….. Yaha sabhi bina kisi proper strategy ka bus bhid gaye tha aur jiski vajah se ulajh gaye tha…..


Ab jab chaaro taraf se humla hona shuru hua toh Maharaj ka sainik bal ki sankhiya nirantar girti hi chali jaa rahi thi aur essi girti sankhiya ko dekh jab Manobal dagmagana laga tabhi firse vishwas ki kiran liya dharti par pahuchi Elika saath mei tha AS aur Alvace aur paristan ki vishaal sena… Ya dekh iss baar hausla kamjor padh gaye Nairana ka…..


Usne ya toh anumaan laga liya tha ki ya iss youdh mei aayega par usne ya anumaan nahi lagaya tha ki iss youdh mei Paristan ki Sena bhi utar jayegi aur vo bhi iss bhari sankhiya mei….. Iss hui apratyaksh ghatna ka chalte ek baar toh usse sab apne haath se nikalte hua dikha par tabhi uske dimak mei kuch aaya aur uske cehare ki muskaan phir badi ho gayi…. Usne apne haath aage kiya aur fir Kaali roshni nikali aur iss baar vo aasmaan mei kaafi dhur jakar ek baar fir gayab ho gayi….


Idhar roshni gayab hui aur dhur aasmaan se hi lagatar sainik dharti par girna laga…. Ya sainik aam sainiko ka jaise nahi tha bulki ya kamse kam 8” se bade aur haatho mei aur sharir par sabhi taraf sirf loha hi loha tha aur kuch nahi….. Haatho mei bade bade bhala liya….. Par jo inka sabse khatarnak hathiyaar tha vo thi inki jibh jo ki bahar nikalti thi aur apne samne vale ko usmei fasa leti thi kyunki inki jibh jibh kam aur rasi jada thi jaise hi girgith ki hoti hai…..


Ab idhar ek baar fir youdh na behad romanchak rukh le liya tha kyunki iss samaye abhi aaye sainiko na jaisa humla bola tha usse jo Nairana Elika aur uske logo ka samne kamjor padh raha tha vo ek baar firse unhe kadi chunauti dena laga tha….. Ab toh kudh Nairana bhi youdh mei kud pada tha aur iss vajah se manjar behad hi khatarnak hone laga tha….. Par iss youdh mei ek sabse bada minus point tha aur vo ya ki Elika ki sena toh fir bhi nahi par Maharaj ki sena insaan hone ki vajah se vo log behad jaldi thak rahe tha, vahi Nairana ki sena ko jaise koi farak hi nahi padh raha tha…..


Paristaan ki sena apni Maharani ka liya apne pura shaurya se lad rahi thi aur unke ladne mei bilkul bhi kami nahi aa rahi thi…. Unke liya vo 8” ka sainik ki chunauti koi behad badi chunauti nahi thi par vo ya bhi jante tha ki unhe sayam se ladna hai kyunki ya youdh lamba chalta dikh raha tha jiska karan tha insaani sena ka dhire dhire kam hona aur thak jana…..


Nikalte waqt ka saath hi Nairana ki sena na ek baar fir apna dabdaba bana shuru kar diya aur vo log baaki ko behad jada nuksaan pahucha rahe tha…. Elika aur AS ko toh koi chu bhi nahi sak raha tha par baaki sabhi Nairana ka shikaar ho gaye tha aur sabhi ko chota aane ki vajah se unka liya youdh ladna behad mushkil ho raha tha kyunki vo sab behoshi ki tarah bad rahe tha…..


Shyam hota hota youdh samapti ki taraf bad chala tha aur yaha Nairana youdh ko bus jeetna ka kagaar par hi tha ki tabhi essa kuch hua ki sabhi ki aankh bus fati ki fati rahe gayi aur isse toh Nairana bhi khudko shock mei jaane se nahi rok saka….. Vaha ghatit hi aisa kuch hua tha jiski vajah se sabhi bus dekh rahe tha aur kisika muh se shabd nahi nikal rahe tha……


Asal mei hua ya tha ki jab youdh jab laga ki bus khatam hone vala hai bus ussi samaye do behad bade gole aaye aur jamin par phat pade….. Ya dono gola alag alag colour ka tha…. Jaha ek Gola Laal Colour ka tha vahi dusra gola Peela colour ka tha….. Dono gola ka fatne ka baad ho manjar samne aaya ussi na sabka muh khula chod diya…..


Kyunki Jaha Laal Gola fata tha vaha uss area mei aasmaan se dharti par Aag ki varsha hone lagi thi….. Aasmaan se aag ka bade bade gole aakar dharti par lag rahe tha aur unn golo ka dharti par girte hi Nairana ki sena ka khatma shuru ho gaya tha…… Vahi Peela gola jaha gira tha vaha ki jamin dekhta hi dekhta dhas gayi aur uske baad jamin se nikala garama garam lawa…. Ya Lawa ek fuware ki tarah aasmaan mei jaata aur apne aap chota chota golo mei aasmaan mei tabdil hota aur Nairana ka sainiko ko jakar lagta aur vo log aag ka iss lawa ka bane golo ki garmi saha hi nahi paate hai aur pal bhar mei hi raakh ban jaate hai…..


Jaha Nairana abhi apni jeet ki khushi ka jashan manane vala tha vahi vo ab apne logo ki maut ka manjar dekh behad sakte mei tha kyunki essa khatarnak jaadu usne apne jeevan mei phele kabhi nahi dekha tha….. Vahi AS aur Elika toh maano iss jaadu ko dekh nahi bulki uss jaadu se jo energy nikali thi usse dekh achambe mei tha……


Kyunki jiss tarah ki energy Jaadu se nikali thi uss tarah ki energy ka jaadu iss sansaar mei behad kam logo kar sakte tha jismei se kuch yaha maujood tha aur jo yaha maujood nahi tha vo iss youdh mei nahi aane vale tha…… Kyunki agar unhe aana hota toh vo ab tak aa chukka hota….. Iss baat se vo dono hi behad chauka hua tha…. Unhe samajh nahi aa raha tha ki ya kon shaksh hai jiske pass iss prakaar ki urja maujood hai aur uska bhaan kisiko nahi…..


Idhar jaha Elika aur AS apni soch mei khoye hua tha vahi Nairana na sahi samaye dekh vaha se gayab hone mei apni bhalayi samjhi aur vo vaha se nikal gaya…… Idhar ya sab ho raha tha ki tabhi ek safeed roshni ka gola aakar vaha maujood sabhi ghayal sainiko, Maharaj aur baaki sabhi logo ko laga aur pal bhar mei sabhi ka ghaav aur peeda sab nashth ho gayi…..


Sabhi abhi hua iss achanak badlav aur uss White Energy ka unke upar girne se hua badlav ko samajhte tab tak Marium ki awaj sabhi ko sunayi di aur bus sabhi uss disha mei dekhna laga.... Sabhi ki najar jab uss disha mei gayi toh samne dikhta vyakti ko dekh sab muh faade khada rahe gaye……


Kyunki iss waqt samne ek behad bada aur behad sundar sunhare Garud par ek Ladka khada tha jiske haath mei chamchamati ek safeed stick thi aur uske upar ek Halke Hara colour ka ek behad bada gola jo ki bich bich mei chamak raha tha……. Vahi uss ladke ka sharir par upar se niche tak safeed kapde tha aur unke upar ek sunhare aur peela rang se uss chadi ki design bani hui thi…… Par jab sabki najar uss ladke ka cehare par gayi toh sabhi ka muh se bus ek saath nikala……


Sabhi: Willy……. Vo ladka koi aur nahi Willy hi tha jo iss samaye ek sunhara Garud par khada tha vahi Elika aur AS na jab uss sunhara Garud ko dekha dono ko kuch yaad aa gaya aur dono na ek dusre ko dekha aur aankho hi aankho mei kuch baat hui aur fir samne dekhna laga…. Idhar sabhi bus aankhe khola Willy ko dekh rahe tha…..


Idhar Willy na sabhi ko jab dekha toh vo apne Garud se aasman se hi niche kud pada aur jab tak vo jamin par pahucha aasmaan mei hi uske kapde badal gaye aur uske haatho se vo safeed stick gayab ho gayi aur vo humesha ki tarah pehana jaane vale kapdo mei tha…… Jamin par utar kar vo aage bada aur sabse phele AS se mila aur uske baad Elika se……


Willy: Janta hu tum kya soch rahi ho aur sunhara Garud ko dekh behad kuch samajh gayi ho…. Iske baaremei baat abhi nahi fir kabhi karega…….


Elika: Willy ki baat sun usne apni aankhe jhapkadi jiska matlab tha usse bhi yahi thik lagta hai…..


Yaha Willy unn dono se mil baaki sabhi ki taraf bad gaya aur sabse phele mila Marium se jo usse milte hi uske gale lag gayi aur uski aankho mei aasu tha par pal bhar mei hi Willy na uske cehare ka aasu gayab kar diya aur uski cehare par ek muskaan cha gayi…… Kyunki Willy na uske kaan mei kaha hi essa kuch tha ki jisse sun uski muskaan laut gayi…..


Willy: (Marium Ka kaan mei) Kya mujhc shadi karogi…..???


Ya shabd tha behad siddha aur kam par ya vo shabd tha jisse Marium suna ko kabse taras rahi thi, Iszy ki shadi ka waqt hi usne man bana liya tha ki vo jaha Iszy ki shadi ka fera hoga vahi vo Willy se shadi ka liya puch legi par Willy uss samaye vaha se gayab ho gaya tha aur Marium iss baat ko apne ander hi daba kar rakh chodi….


Par aaj jab Willy na usse uske dil ki baat kahe di toh vo apni muskaan ko rok nahi saki aur vo bus muskurane lagi aur saath hi uske cehare ki chamak jo Willy ka jaane ki vajah se gayab ho gayi thi vo fir se laut aayi thi…. Kaafi samaye ek dusre se gale milne ka baad vo alag hua aur Willy apne sabhi dosto se ek ek karke mila…..


Vo sabse aakhir mei Iszy se mila jiske samne baith usne apne kaan pakad liya kyunki vo janta tha ki Iszy usse uski shadi se gayab hone ki vajah se gussa thi par vo thi toh Shubham aur uski bestie….. Usse pata tha ki Iszy ko kaise manana tha…. Islye vo phele hi Iszy ka samne jakar ghutno par baith gaya aur apne dono haath kaano par rakh liya……


Ek min. ka liya dono mei se koi kuch nahi bola par agle pal hi Iszy jakar uske gale lag gayi aur uski peeth par ek mukka jaa mara….. Ya mukka mei na Iszy na jaan lagayi thi aur na hi Willy na koi reaction diya tha….. Ya bus dono ko bich apni dosti mei kiya gaya gussa ka dikhava tha jo ki purn roop se dikhava tha kyunki Iszy Willy aur Shubham se ruth sakti thi par unke bina aur unse jada samaye narajgi usse khudse bardash nahi hoti…..


Inn teeno ka apna ek alag rishta tha jo dosti ka tha par ya dosti kuch essi thi ki teeno ek dusre ko iss kadar samajhte tha aur ek dusre ka aadi tha ki koi chautha inke bich aa jaaye toh bus fir uski khair nahi thi….. Issi vajah se jab Iszy aur Willy ek dusre se mila tab koi bhi unke aas pass nahi maujood tha bus vo dono hi tha aur dono behad lambe samaye tak gale mila…… Kyuni ya ek dusre ko sahi salamat dekhna ki khushi aur ek dusre ka saath ka ehsaas tha……


Willy: Ary yaar tu kab tak chupa rahega….. Aaja jaise tu mujhe dekh aur mehsoos kar sakta hai vaise hi mei bhi tujhe dekh aur mehsoos kar sakta hu….. Vaise bhi behad samaye se tu dikha nahi kamse kam aaj ek acha kaam karke toh samne aa jaa…..


Idhar jaha Willy ka shabd khatam hua vahi sabhi bus Willy ko dekhna laga, aur jaise puch rahe ho ki vo kisse baat kar raha tha…..Sabhi abhi iss baat ka javab maang rahe tha bus usse dekh par bina kuch kahe…..


Willy: Usne bhi sabhi ka dil ka haal samajh liya aur usne bhi bina ek shabd apne muh se nikale apna haath utha diya aur apne haath ki ek ungli kar samne ki taraf dekhna ka ishara kiya…..


Sabhi na ja Willy ka bataye disha ki taraf dekha toh unhe vaha apne samne ek kaala dhua dikhayi dena laga par dekhta hi dekhta uss dhua na aakaar lena shuru kiya aur jab vo dhua pura aakaar mei aa gaya tab samne khade shaks ko dekh jaha sabhi jaise bus jamin mei jam hi gaye tha, muh khula ka khula rahe gaye aur aankhe nikal kar samne aane ko thi…..


Koi kuch kahe nahi raha tha bus apne aaj ka din ka aascharye ki seema se pare drashya dekh rahe tha….. Vahi Willy samne vale shaks ko dekh bus muskura raha tha aur yahi haal samne vale shaks ka bhi tha…..


Willy: Kaisa hai yaar, behad dino baad dikha tu KAIRO…..


(Ya Kairo hi tha jo Shubham se Fairmount mei harne ka baad vaha se chala gaya tha aur ek jagah jakar gayab ho gaya tha….. Aaj fir ya lauta tha par aaj ya purana vala Kairo nahi tha…. Ab ya ek behad hi unda aur behad hi alag insaan tha….. Aaj iska jaadu ki urja ka ek namuna aapne dekha hi tha par ya sirf iske ander aaye inn saalo ka badlaav ka ek bus namuna hi tha kyunki jaise jaise aage badega sabhi ko iske naye roop aur inn saalo mei ya kaha tha sab kuch jaane ko milega……)


Kairo: Kya baat hai aakhir tuna vo paa hi liya jiske liya tera janam hua tha Willy….. Chal acha hai ek baar fir hum barabar istar par pahuch gaye hai….. Iss baar dono ko hi ek dusre se mukabla karne mei behad maza aane vala hai……


Willy: Humara mukabla toh hona hi hai Kairo kyunki hum dono hi humesha ek dusre se bilkul ulta rahe hai…. Aaj bhi dono hi unn alag alag shakti ka dharak hai jinka aapas mei koi mail nahi hai…. Islye humare mukable ka na hone ki sambhavna bilkul nahi hai……


Bus intezar hai toh sahi waqt aur sahi samaye ka….. Khair jab vo aayega tab aayega, par filhaal toh hum gale mil hi sakte hai….. Essa kahe kar Willy do kadam aage bada toh usse dekh Kairo bhi aage bada aur fir dono hi aage bad gale lag gaye…. Dono jiss garam joshi se gale lage tha usse sabhi ko behad azeeb lag raha tha, vahi AS aur Elika ko pata tha ki ya gale jarur lage hai par inn dono ka bich ya sirf ek dusre ka liya apni shakti ka pradarshan hai……


Kairo: Usse alag hokar…. Khair ya sab chod aur abhi filhaal apni shadi Rajkumari Marium se mubarak ho aur essa kahe kar usne aasmaan se phoolo ki varsha kardi aur fir khud ek baar kaale dhua mei badal kar vaha se nikal gaya……


Idhar vo gaya aur udhar Willy ka cehare ki muskaan aur bhi geharagayi…… Vo uske jaane par bus muskurata raha aur fir sabhi ki taraf ho liya……


Aage iss kahani mei kya hota hai aur kaise mod aate hai ya jaane ka liya bane rahe aap sabhi kahani ka saath tab tak ka liya keep reading and commenting…..


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Note: Yaha Kairo ki entry ho gayi hai jiska aap sabhi ko behad lambe samaye se intezar tha….. Yaha behad si baate adhuri hai jinko aage ka updates padhne ka baad hi puri tarah se samajh sakega aap sabhi log…… Bus saath bane rahe…. See ya guys bye…..
 

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