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Thriller SIPAHI WATAN KA (COMPLETED)

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“problem kahin kuchh nahin hai sir ! rangoon jo khep jaane vaali hai, vah khep puri tarah taiyaar hai । iske alaavaa vo jungli log bhi taiyaar hain, jo hamaare nashille pedarth apne khachchron par laadakar tathaa jadi-butiyon ki aad main chhipaakar jungle main baahar le jaate hain aur phir Burma sarkaar ki aankhon main dhul jhonkakar rangoon tak pahunchaate hain । bas problem ek hi jagah hai sir, aur bahut badi problem hai ।”
“kyaa ?”
“hmaari vo khep jis raaste se hokar rangoon jaane vaali hai, vo jungle kaa vahi raastaa hai, jis par is samay commander Karan Saxena maujud hai ।”
“oh !”

“sir !” Hitman thodaa aage ko jhuk gayaa aur usne sharaab ke do ghunt bhare- “agar ittefhaq se vo khep commander Karan Saxena ki nigaah main aa gayi, to vo hamaari us puri narcotics khep ko tabaah kar saktaa hai, jo hamaare lia badaa nuksaan hogaa ।”
“kyaa vo khep jungle ke kisi aur raaste se hokar rangoon tak nahin pahunch sakti hai ?” Jack Kramer ne apnaa jaam khaali karke table ke upar rakhaa ।
“aap to jaante hi hain sir, dusre raaste ki taraf vishaal daraavni nadi bahti hai aur vo nadi bhi aage jaakar avaruddh ho gayi hai, isalia us taraf se bhi jaanaa mumakin nahin hai ।”
“hun ।”
Jack Kramer ke maathe par chintaa ki gahri lakiren khinch gayi ।
samasyaa vaakaayi jatil thi ।
“phir to bas ek hi tarikaa hai ।”
“kyaa?”
“filhal narcotics khep ko rangoon bheje jaane kaa prograam pospond kar do ।”
“lekin kab tak ke lia ?”
“jab tak commander Karan Saxena maar nahin diyaa jaataa । jab tak dahashat kaa vo maahaul khatm nahin ho jaataa, jo commander ke jungle main aane ki vajah se banaa hai ।”
“parantu agar is mission ke puraa hone main jyaadaa lambaa samay lag gayaa, to phir kyaa hogaa ?” Hitman ne bhi apnaa paig khaali karke saamne table par rakhaa- “jraa sochiye, narcotics kaa kaarobaar hi ham tamaam yauddhaaon ki asli taakat hai । isi kaarobaar ke bal par ham daulat ekatthi kar rahe hain aur ek din pure Burma par kabjaa karne ke apne sapne ko saakaar rup de rahe hain । agar hamaaraa yahi kaarobaar band ho jaayegaa, to phir ham kyaa karenge ?”
“bevkufo ki tarah baat mat karo Hitman !” Jack Kramer ne apne doodh jaise safed baalon ko jhatkaa dekar kursi ke hatthe par ghunsaa maaraa aur phir khadaa ho gayaa- “yah koi aisi samasyaa nahin hai, jo hamishaa rahne vaali hai । ho saktaa hai, aaj ki raat hi commander ke jivan ki aakhiri raat ho ।”
“lekin... !”
“please Hitman, filhal hamain apnaa saaraa dhyaan commander ki taraf lagaanaa chaahiye । is vakt narcotics khep bheje jaane ki koi baat mat karo ।”
“oke sir ।”
Hitman bhi apni kursi chhodakar khadaa ho gayaa ।
“koi aur suchnaa ?”
“nhin sir ! is vakt main radio room main jaa rahaa hun । dekhtaa hun, shaayad vahaan commander se sambandhit koi khabar aayi ho ।”
“behatar hai ।”
Hitman vahaan se chalaa gayaa ।

commander us vakt ‘camouflage kit’ se dhakaa huaa etminaan ki gahri nind so rahaa thaa, jab ekaaak jhatke se uski aankh khul gayi ।
usne sote-sote kuchh aavaaj suni thi ।
kuchh aadamiyon ke jor-jor se chilllaane ki aavaajen ।
ranahunkaar jaisi aavaajen ।
ped ke upar lete-lete commander ne jaldi se ‘camouflage kit’ hataai aur use fold kiyaa । phir usne niche ki taraf jhaankaa ।
niche jhaankte hi uski aankhen phati ki phati rah gayin ।
aashchary se ।
commander ne us ped ke niche kaafi saare jungli log dekhe, jo arddhanagn the aur jinke haath main bade nukile bhaale the । vah un nukile bhaalon se jor-jor se kambal par prhaar kar rahe the aur munh se ajib-ajib aavaajen nikaalte hua uchhal rahe the ।
un sabse thodi hi dur khadaa ek aur jungli apni dholak par jor-jor se thaap diye jaa rahaa thaa ।
chaaron taraf kohraam machaa thaa ।
commander Karan Saxena samajh gayaa, use jitnaa sonaa hai, vah so chukaa hai ।
ab use un khatarnaak jungleiyon se mukaablaa karnaa thaa ।
commander Karan Saxena ne aanan-phaanan ‘camouflage kit’ apne Haversack bag ke andar rakhi । kambal kholakar use bhi bag main rakhaa । phir usne vo bag pahle ki tarah hi achchhi tarah apni pith par kas liyaa ।
uske baad usne punah niche ki taraf dekhaa ।
jungleiyon kaa abhi bhi vahi haal thaa ।
vah jor-jor se ranahunkaar bharte hua kambal par bhaale barsaaye jaa rahe the ।
shukr thaa, abhi unhen is baat kaa pataa nahin chalaa thaa ki vah kitne bade dhokhe main hain ।
commander ne fauran apne Haversack bag main se do 36 H.I. hand grenad bam nikaal lia aur phir daanton se pin khinchakar niche jungleiyo ki taraf phenke ।
dhadaam !
dhadaam ! !
bam phatne ke atyant bhishan dhamaake hua ।
jo jungli thodi der pahle tak khushi se ranahunkaar bhar rahe the, ekaaak unki dahashatnaak chikhon se saaraa jungle tharraa uthaa ।
unki laashon ke chithade udakar idhar-se-udhar uchhalte najar aaye ।
bam kaafi shaktishaali the ।
commander jis ped par baithaa thaa, vah kaafi unchaai par thaa, varnaa binaa shak bamon ke un prachand dhamaakon se vah khud bhi hataahat hotaa ।
commander ne do haind grenad bam aur nikaale tathaa pin khinchakar unhen bhi un jungleiyon ki taraf uchhaalaa ।
dhadaam !

dhadaam ! !
do prachand dhamaake aur hua ।
tab tak kuchh jungleiyon ki nigaah ped par baithe commander par ped chuki thi, unhonne tatkaal nishaanaa saadhakar apne-apne bhaale us taraf uchhaale ।
sirr-sirr !
bhaale is prkaar commander ki taraf jhapte, jaise aasmaan ko chirakar kuchh misaaelen uski taraf udi chali aa rahi hon । un jungleiyon ne apni puri shakti ke saath vo bhaale uski taraf phenke the ।
commander Karan Saxena bhi aakhir marshal art kaa yoddhaa thaa ।
usne second ke sauve hisse main koi do phut niche vaali ped ki ek dusri majbut daal ki taraf chhalaang lagaa di । turant tamaam bhaale sirr-sirr ki aavaaj karte hua uske upar se gujre tathaa ped ki majbut daalon ko paine bladeon ki tarah kaatte aur unki dhajjiyaan udaate chale gaye ।
usi kshan niche vah do haind grenad aur phate, jinhen commander ne phainkaa thaa ।
tatkaal baaki bache jungleiyon ki chikhen bhi vahaan gunj gayin ।
ab sirf chaar jungli jindaa bache the ।
chaar !

 
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tatkaal baaki bache jungleiyon ki chikhen bhi vahaan gunj gayin ।
ab sirf chaar jungli jindaa bache the ।
chaar !
parantu apne chaaron taraf etni saari laashen dekhakar unke bhi hosh ud gaye ।
phir unmain se kisi main itnaa hauslaa n huaa, jo vo vahaan rukte aur commander kaa mukaablaa karte ।
magar bhaagakar bhi ab unhonne kahaan jaanaa thaa ।
commander ne adamy saahas kaa parichay dete hua us kaafi unche ped se niche chhalaang lagaa di ।
vah dhamm se niche jaakar giraa aur spring lage khillaune ki bhaanti uchhalakar khadaa ho gayaa ।
vah uski taraf bhaale taante, usse pahle hi commander Karan Saxena ke haath main vahin kambal ke paas pedi AK 47 assault rifel aa chuki thi । agle hi pal usne us assault rifelen kaa blast fire khol diyaa ।
dhad-dhad-dhad karke goliyaan chalti chali gayin aur vah chaaron jungli bhi dahaade marte hua niche gire ।
phir vahaan khaamoshi chhaa gayin ।
gahri khaamoshi !


aaspaas ab laashen hi laashen pedi thi ।
khun main lathapath laashen !
commander ne rifel vaapas kandhe par taang li ।
khatraa vo abhi bhi apne bilkul sir par mandraataa anubhav kar rahaa thaa ।
vo jaantaa thaa, vahin najdik main hi kahin aur bhi dushman maujud hai । jinhen un jungleiyon ne dholak par thaap de dekar uski vahaan upasthiti ke baare main bataa diyaa hai aur jo ab uske lia kisi bhi pal khatarnaak saabit ho sakte the ।
usne apni wristwatch dekhi ।
raat ke do baje the ।
dushman ko dhokhaa dene vaali fauji training aaj uske kaafi kaam aayi thi ।
tabhi ek ghatnaa ghati ।
nayi ghatnaa ।
usne halki blip-blip ki aavaaj suni ।
us aavaaj ko sunte hi commander teji se phirakni ki tarah aavaaj ki deshaa main ghum gayaa ।
commander jaantaa thaa ki vah kisi transmitter set main se nikalne vaali aavaaj thi ।
turant hi uski nigaah ek jungli ke haath par jaakar thahar gayi । usne apni baai kalaai main ek wristwatch baandhi hui thi, jo kaafi kimti wristwatch thi ।
commander ko ek jungli ke haath main etni kimti wristwatch dekhakar badi hairaani hui ।
blip-blip ki vah aavaaj usi wristwatch ke andar se nikal rahi thi ।
jarur vo wristwatch transmitter set bhi thaa ।
commander ne uskaa transmitter switch on kiyaa । fauran hi uske andar se aavaaj nikalne lagi ।
“hello ! hello ! kyaa report hain ?” vah bilkul anjaan aavaaj thi- “tum kuchh bol nahin rahe ho adagar, tum khaamosh kyon ho ?”
“adagar, report do ! tumhaare transmitter se aisi frequency nikalakar yahaan headquater tak kyon pahunch rahi hain, jaise tumhaare aaspaas bam phat rahe hon । goliyaan chal rahi hon ।”
commander ne traansmission switch vaapas off kar diyaa ।
agar usne us yuvak ki ek baar bhi aavaaj suni hoti, to vah bilkul usi ki aavaaj main transmitter par baat kar saktaa thaa ।
phir usne us jungli ke chehre ki taraf dekhaa, jiske haath main vo wristwatch bandhi hui thi ।
adagar !
to us aadmi kaa naam adagar thaa ।
commander ko sandeh huaa, us aadmi ne jarur apne chehre par makeup kiyaa huaa hai । adagar naam kaa koi aadmi Burma kaa jungli yuvak nahin ho saktaa thaa । commander ne uske chehre ko tatolaa, to fauran ek patli si jhillli utarakar commander ke haath main aati chali gayi । jo fish-maask thaa ।
niche se ab yuvak kaa bilkul safed mukhadaa chamakne lagaa ।
vah angrej thaa aur koi amerikan maalum hotaa thaa ।

“oh, to yah chakkar hai ।” commander honthon hi honthon main budAbudaayaa- “Jack Kramer ne Burma ke jungli aadivaasiyon ke bich bhi apne aadmi ghusaa rakhe hain, jo un sidhe-saade jungleiyon ke bich bhi jaasusi kaa kaam karte honge ।”
transmitter main se blip-blip ki aavaaj nirantar nikal rahi thi ।
commander Karan Saxena ne us angrej yuvak ki hart-bit check ki ।
yah dekhakar vo chaunkaa, uski hart-bit chaalu thi ।
haalaanki hand grenad ke dhamaakon ke kaaran uskaa aadhe se jyaadaa sharir kshatigrast ho chukaa thaa । commander ne adagar kaa gaal pakadakar jor-jor se thapathpaayaa aur phir uske sir ke baal pakadakar jor se upar ki taraf khinchen ।
“p...paani !” adagar dhire se kulAbulaayaa, uski behoshi tuti- “p... paani !”
commander ne apne bag main se cane nikaali aur thodaa saa paani uske munh main daalaa ।
“p... paani !” vah phir budAbudaayaa- “paani ।”
commander ne is baar uski aavaaj jyaadaa dhyaanpurvak suni ।
ab uskaa kaam ban gayaa thaa ।
turant usne kungfu lak kaa action dikhaayaa । usne adagar ki gardan me ungli faasaakar jhatke se niche ki taraf khinch di, uski gardan ki ribs tut gayi । ribs tutte hi vah mar gayaa ।
transmitter main se blip-blip ki aavaaj abhi bhi nikal rahi thi ।
commander ne punah traansamission switch on kiyaa, traansmission switch on karte hi aavaaj aane lagi ।
“adagar, tum bol kyon nahin rahe ho ?” dusri taraf se koi lagaataar chilllaa rahaa thaa ।
“yes sir !” commander ke munh se bilkul us angrej yuvak jaisi aavaaj nikli- “adagar speaking ।”
“tum etni der se khaamosh kyon ho adagar ?” dusri taraf se Jack Kramer bol rahaa thaa- “tum transmitter par baat kyon nahin kar rahe ? aisaa kyon lag rahaa hai, jaise tumhaare aaspaas dhamaake ho rahe hon ।”
“yhaan dushman aur hamaare bich jabaradast yuddh hi chal rahaa thaa sir ।” commander Karan Saxena tatpar lahje main bolaa- “isilia main transmitter on nahin kar sakaa । lekin ab aapke lia ek khushakhabri hai, hamne dushman ko maar daalaa । hamaaraa mission saphal rahaa ।”
“kyaa kah rahe ho tum !” Jack Kramer jor se chaunkaa- “kyaa sachamuch commander Karan Saxena maaraa jaa chukaa hai ?”
“yes sir, commander maaraa jaa chukaa hai । uski laash is vakt meri aankhon ke saamne hi pedi hai । hamne uske sharir ko nukile bhaalon se god daalaa hai ।”

“main yakin nahin kar paa rahaa hun ।”
“aap jab khud yahaan aakar uski laash apni aankhon se dekhenge sir ।” commander Karan Saxena bolaa- “tab aapko yakin bhi aa jaayegaa ।”
“tum is vakt kahaan ho ?”
“main jungle main uttri chhor ke koi chaalis degree angel par hun ।”
“oke, main abhi bhi Marcos ko tumhaare paas bhejtaa hun ।”
commander ne traansmission switch off kar diyaa ।
ek mahatvpurn kaam vo kar chukaa thaa ।
Li Marcos ।
vah naam sunte hi commander ki aankhon ke gird us samuraai fighter kaa chehraa kaundh uthaa, jo apne field kaa grand Master thaa ।
yaani ab uski muthbhad Li Marcos se hone vaali thi ।
commander Karan Saxena ne gahri saans li । phir usne dusraa mahatvpurn kaary anjaam diyaa ।
turant hi uske haath main chamachmaate phal vaalaa apnaa spring blade najar aane lagaa thaa । phir uske baad vahaan jitne bhi jungli logon ki laashen pedi thi, usne un sab laashon ke thik dil main spring blade pevasht karnaa shuru kar diyaa ।
agar thodi bahut kisi main saans baaki bhi thi, to vah bhi khatm ho gayi ।
ab vah sab nishchit rup se mar chuke the ।
phir commander ne un sabke bhaale bhi tod daale aur uske baad jungle ki anaam, anjaan raahon par aage baadnaa shuru kiyaa ।
jahaan kadam-kadam par uske lia maut bichhi thi ।

Li Marcos aur Barbie ki hathiyaaraband tukadiyaan ghanghor jungle main nirantar aage ki taraf baad rahi thi ।
ek baat un donon tukadiyon ke bich pahle hi tay ho chuki thi ki jungle main ek khaas point par pahunchakar vah donon tukadiyaan phir ek jagah milengi aur usi point par vahaan tak ghati tamaam ghatnaaon ki suchnaaon kaa unke bich aadaan prdaan hogaa ।
donon tukadiyaan jab bilkul alag-alag deshaaon se chalti hui us ek khaas point par pahunchi, to aadhi raat ho chuki thi aur andheraa ab us pure jungle main is kadar fail chukaa thaa ki haath ko haath sujhaai denaa bhi mushkil thaa ।
us point par pahunchte hi Barbie ne ek chhotaa saa candle stand jalaayaa, jo paaradarshi kaanch ke ek glob se dhakaa huaa thaa ।
uski roshni vahaan aaspaas fail gayi ।
“dushman kaa kuchh pataa chalaa ?” Li Marcos ne Barbie se sabse pahlaa savaal yahi kiyaa ।
“abhi tak to kuchh maalum nahin huaa, kyaa tumhen pataa chalaa ?”
“nhin, mujhe bhi kuchh pataa nahin chalaa hai । jabaki ham log tin kilomitar aage jaa chuke hain ।” Li Marcos bolaa- “ham jis prkaar vyuh rachnaa karte hua yahaan tak aaye hain, usse to yahi saabit hotaa hai ki dushman 3 kilomitar ke us kshetraphal main thaa hi nahin, varnaa vo hamaari najron se chhipaa n rahtaa ।”
“jungli log kahaan hai ?”
“vah shaayad hamse kaafi aage nikal gaye hain ।” Li Marcos bolaa- “unki aavaajen bhi nahin aa rahi hain ।”
“hun ।”
“ab kyaa karnaa hai ?”
Barbie ne candle stand ke najdik jaakar apni wristwatch dekhi ।
12:35 kaa time thaa ।
“main samajhti hun ।” Barbie boli- “filhal raat kaafi ho chuki hai । saadhe baarah baj rahe hain । ab hamain thodi der yahin aaraam karnaa chaahiye, jab kuchh ghante baad thodi roshni ho jaayegi, tab ham phir aage baadenge । kyaa vichaar hai ?”
“vichaar buraa nahin ।” Li Marcos bolaa- “main bhi yahi soch rahaa thaa ki thodi der aaraam kiyaa jaaye । doston !” Li Marcos hathiyaaraband guardon ki taraf ghumaa- “raat gujaarne kaa yahi entjaam karo । jeep se nikalakar kuchhek tambu gaad lo ।”
“thik hai maarko saahab, abhi raat gujaarne kaa bandobast karte hain ।”
turant hi kayi saare guard jeepon ke andar rakhe chhote-chhote tambu nikaalne lage tathaa unhen vahin jungle main gaadne ke kaaryaklaap main jut gaye ।
un tambuon ki sankhyaa koi das thi, jo jungle main ek hi jagah par thode-thode faasle se gaad diye gaye the ।
 
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tatkaal baaki bache jungleiyon ki chikhen bhi vahaan gunj gayin ।
ab sirf chaar jungli jindaa bache the ।
chaar !
parantu apne chaaron taraf etni saari laashen dekhakar unke bhi hosh ud gaye ।
phir unmain se kisi main itnaa hauslaa n huaa, jo vo vahaan rukte aur commander kaa mukaablaa karte ।
magar bhaagakar bhi ab unhonne kahaan jaanaa thaa ।
commander ne adamy saahas kaa parichay dete hua us kaafi unche ped se niche chhalaang lagaa di ।
vah dhamm se niche jaakar giraa aur spring lage khillaune ki bhaanti uchhalakar khadaa ho gayaa ।
vah uski taraf bhaale taante, usse pahle hi commander Karan Saxena ke haath main vahin kambal ke paas pedi AK 47 assault rifel aa chuki thi । agle hi pal usne us assault rifelen kaa blast fire khol diyaa ।
dhad-dhad-dhad karke goliyaan chalti chali gayin aur vah chaaron jungli bhi dahaade marte hua niche gire ।
phir vahaan khaamoshi chhaa gayin ।
gahri khaamoshi !


aaspaas ab laashen hi laashen pedi thi ।
khun main lathapath laashen !
commander ne rifel vaapas kandhe par taang li ।
khatraa vo abhi bhi apne bilkul sir par mandraataa anubhav kar rahaa thaa ।
vo jaantaa thaa, vahin najdik main hi kahin aur bhi dushman maujud hai । jinhen un jungleiyon ne dholak par thaap de dekar uski vahaan upasthiti ke baare main bataa diyaa hai aur jo ab uske lia kisi bhi pal khatarnaak saabit ho sakte the ।
usne apni wristwatch dekhi ।
raat ke do baje the ।
dushman ko dhokhaa dene vaali fauji training aaj uske kaafi kaam aayi thi ।
tabhi ek ghatnaa ghati ।
nayi ghatnaa ।
usne halki blip-blip ki aavaaj suni ।
us aavaaj ko sunte hi commander teji se phirakni ki tarah aavaaj ki deshaa main ghum gayaa ।
commander jaantaa thaa ki vah kisi transmitter set main se nikalne vaali aavaaj thi ।
turant hi uski nigaah ek jungli ke haath par jaakar thahar gayi । usne apni baai kalaai main ek wristwatch baandhi hui thi, jo kaafi kimti wristwatch thi ।
commander ko ek jungli ke haath main etni kimti wristwatch dekhakar badi hairaani hui ।
blip-blip ki vah aavaaj usi wristwatch ke andar se nikal rahi thi ।
jarur vo wristwatch transmitter set bhi thaa ।
commander ne uskaa transmitter switch on kiyaa । fauran hi uske andar se aavaaj nikalne lagi ।
“hello ! hello ! kyaa report hain ?” vah bilkul anjaan aavaaj thi- “tum kuchh bol nahin rahe ho adagar, tum khaamosh kyon ho ?”
“adagar, report do ! tumhaare transmitter se aisi frequency nikalakar yahaan headquater tak kyon pahunch rahi hain, jaise tumhaare aaspaas bam phat rahe hon । goliyaan chal rahi hon ।”
commander ne traansmission switch vaapas off kar diyaa ।
agar usne us yuvak ki ek baar bhi aavaaj suni hoti, to vah bilkul usi ki aavaaj main transmitter par baat kar saktaa thaa ।
phir usne us jungli ke chehre ki taraf dekhaa, jiske haath main vo wristwatch bandhi hui thi ।
adagar !
to us aadmi kaa naam adagar thaa ।
commander ko sandeh huaa, us aadmi ne jarur apne chehre par makeup kiyaa huaa hai । adagar naam kaa koi aadmi Burma kaa jungli yuvak nahin ho saktaa thaa । commander ne uske chehre ko tatolaa, to fauran ek patli si jhillli utarakar commander ke haath main aati chali gayi । jo fish-maask thaa ।
niche se ab yuvak kaa bilkul safed mukhadaa chamakne lagaa ।
vah angrej thaa aur koi amerikan maalum hotaa thaa ।

“oh, to yah chakkar hai ।” commander honthon hi honthon main budAbudaayaa- “Jack Kramer ne Burma ke jungli aadivaasiyon ke bich bhi apne aadmi ghusaa rakhe hain, jo un sidhe-saade jungleiyon ke bich bhi jaasusi kaa kaam karte honge ।”
transmitter main se blip-blip ki aavaaj nirantar nikal rahi thi ।
commander Karan Saxena ne us angrej yuvak ki hart-bit check ki ।
yah dekhakar vo chaunkaa, uski hart-bit chaalu thi ।
haalaanki hand grenad ke dhamaakon ke kaaran uskaa aadhe se jyaadaa sharir kshatigrast ho chukaa thaa । commander ne adagar kaa gaal pakadakar jor-jor se thapathpaayaa aur phir uske sir ke baal pakadakar jor se upar ki taraf khinchen ।
“p...paani !” adagar dhire se kulAbulaayaa, uski behoshi tuti- “p... paani !”
commander ne apne bag main se cane nikaali aur thodaa saa paani uske munh main daalaa ।
“p... paani !” vah phir budAbudaayaa- “paani ।”
commander ne is baar uski aavaaj jyaadaa dhyaanpurvak suni ।
ab uskaa kaam ban gayaa thaa ।
turant usne kungfu lak kaa action dikhaayaa । usne adagar ki gardan me ungli faasaakar jhatke se niche ki taraf khinch di, uski gardan ki ribs tut gayi । ribs tutte hi vah mar gayaa ।
transmitter main se blip-blip ki aavaaj abhi bhi nikal rahi thi ।
commander ne punah traansamission switch on kiyaa, traansmission switch on karte hi aavaaj aane lagi ।
“adagar, tum bol kyon nahin rahe ho ?” dusri taraf se koi lagaataar chilllaa rahaa thaa ।
“yes sir !” commander ke munh se bilkul us angrej yuvak jaisi aavaaj nikli- “adagar speaking ।”
“tum etni der se khaamosh kyon ho adagar ?” dusri taraf se Jack Kramer bol rahaa thaa- “tum transmitter par baat kyon nahin kar rahe ? aisaa kyon lag rahaa hai, jaise tumhaare aaspaas dhamaake ho rahe hon ।”
“yhaan dushman aur hamaare bich jabaradast yuddh hi chal rahaa thaa sir ।” commander Karan Saxena tatpar lahje main bolaa- “isilia main transmitter on nahin kar sakaa । lekin ab aapke lia ek khushakhabri hai, hamne dushman ko maar daalaa । hamaaraa mission saphal rahaa ।”
“kyaa kah rahe ho tum !” Jack Kramer jor se chaunkaa- “kyaa sachamuch commander Karan Saxena maaraa jaa chukaa hai ?”
“yes sir, commander maaraa jaa chukaa hai । uski laash is vakt meri aankhon ke saamne hi pedi hai । hamne uske sharir ko nukile bhaalon se god daalaa hai ।”

“main yakin nahin kar paa rahaa hun ।”
“aap jab khud yahaan aakar uski laash apni aankhon se dekhenge sir ।” commander Karan Saxena bolaa- “tab aapko yakin bhi aa jaayegaa ।”
“tum is vakt kahaan ho ?”
“main jungle main uttri chhor ke koi chaalis degree angel par hun ।”
“oke, main abhi bhi Marcos ko tumhaare paas bhejtaa hun ।”
commander ne traansmission switch off kar diyaa ।
ek mahatvpurn kaam vo kar chukaa thaa ।
Li Marcos ।
vah naam sunte hi commander ki aankhon ke gird us samuraai fighter kaa chehraa kaundh uthaa, jo apne field kaa grand Master thaa ।
yaani ab uski muthbhad Li Marcos se hone vaali thi ।
commander Karan Saxena ne gahri saans li । phir usne dusraa mahatvpurn kaary anjaam diyaa ।
turant hi uske haath main chamachmaate phal vaalaa apnaa spring blade najar aane lagaa thaa । phir uske baad vahaan jitne bhi jungli logon ki laashen pedi thi, usne un sab laashon ke thik dil main spring blade pevasht karnaa shuru kar diyaa ।
agar thodi bahut kisi main saans baaki bhi thi, to vah bhi khatm ho gayi ।
ab vah sab nishchit rup se mar chuke the ।
phir commander ne un sabke bhaale bhi tod daale aur uske baad jungle ki anaam, anjaan raahon par aage baadnaa shuru kiyaa ।
jahaan kadam-kadam par uske lia maut bichhi thi ।


Li Marcos aur Barbie ki hathiyaaraband tukadiyaan ghanghor jungle main nirantar aage ki taraf baad rahi thi ।
ek baat un donon tukadiyon ke bich pahle hi tay ho chuki thi ki jungle main ek khaas point par pahunchakar vah donon tukadiyaan phir ek jagah milengi aur usi point par vahaan tak ghati tamaam ghatnaaon ki suchnaaon kaa unke bich aadaan prdaan hogaa ।
donon tukadiyaan jab bilkul alag-alag deshaaon se chalti hui us ek khaas point par pahunchi, to aadhi raat ho chuki thi aur andheraa ab us pure jungle main is kadar fail chukaa thaa ki haath ko haath sujhaai denaa bhi mushkil thaa ।
us point par pahunchte hi Barbie ne ek chhotaa saa candle stand jalaayaa, jo paaradarshi kaanch ke ek glob se dhakaa huaa thaa ।
uski roshni vahaan aaspaas fail gayi ।
“dushman kaa kuchh pataa chalaa ?” Li Marcos ne Barbie se sabse pahlaa savaal yahi kiyaa ।
“abhi tak to kuchh maalum nahin huaa, kyaa tumhen pataa chalaa ?”
“nhin, mujhe bhi kuchh pataa nahin chalaa hai । jabaki ham log tin kilomitar aage jaa chuke hain ।” Li Marcos bolaa- “ham jis prkaar vyuh rachnaa karte hua yahaan tak aaye hain, usse to yahi saabit hotaa hai ki dushman 3 kilomitar ke us kshetraphal main thaa hi nahin, varnaa vo hamaari najron se chhipaa n rahtaa ।”
“jungli log kahaan hai ?”
“vah shaayad hamse kaafi aage nikal gaye hain ।” Li Marcos bolaa- “unki aavaajen bhi nahin aa rahi hain ।”
“hun ।”
“ab kyaa karnaa hai ?”
Barbie ne candle stand ke najdik jaakar apni wristwatch dekhi ।
12:35 kaa time thaa ।
“main samajhti hun ।” Barbie boli- “filhal raat kaafi ho chuki hai । saadhe baarah baj rahe hain । ab hamain thodi der yahin aaraam karnaa chaahiye, jab kuchh ghante baad thodi roshni ho jaayegi, tab ham phir aage baadenge । kyaa vichaar hai ?”
“vichaar buraa nahin ।” Li Marcos bolaa- “main bhi yahi soch rahaa thaa ki thodi der aaraam kiyaa jaaye । doston !” Li Marcos hathiyaaraband guardon ki taraf ghumaa- “raat gujaarne kaa yahi entjaam karo । jeep se nikalakar kuchhek tambu gaad lo ।”
“thik hai maarko saahab, abhi raat gujaarne kaa bandobast karte hain ।”
turant hi kayi saare guard jeepon ke andar rakhe chhote-chhote tambu nikaalne lage tathaa unhen vahin jungle main gaadne ke kaaryaklaap main jut gaye ।
un tambuon ki sankhyaa koi das thi, jo jungle main ek hi jagah par thode-thode faasle se gaad diye gaye the ।
Jabardast Bhai... etna romanch wala kahani bahut kam hi milti hai.. aisa lg raha h ab aage k kya scene hone wala h ekdam shandy🔥🔥🔥👌👌👌👌
 
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bahut maja aaya padhakar.ek round muqabla ho chuka hai.jangali mare ja chuke hain. crammer tak apani maut ki suchana bhi bhej di.dekhate hain aage kya hota hai
Jabardast Bhai... etna rom

Jabardast Bhai... etna romanch wala kahani bahut kam hi milti hai.. aisa lg raha h ab aage k kya scene hone wala h ekdam shandy🔥🔥🔥👌👌👌👌
Sorry for delay guys
Diwali ke chalte update rukh gaye the ab wapas start ho rhe hai night me update aayega
 
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“thik hai maarko saahab, abhi raat gujaarne kaa bandobast karte hain ।”
turant hi kayi saare guard jeepon ke andar rakhe chhote-chhote tambu nikaalne lage tathaa unhen vahin jungle main gaadne ke kaaryaklaap main jut gaye ।
un tambuon ki sankhyaa koi das thi, jo jungle main ek hi jagah par thode-thode faasle se gaad diye gaye the ।
vah nili aur safed pattiyon vaale tambu the ।
jahaan jyaadaatar guard un tambuon main aaraam karne ke liye chale gaye the, vahin kuchhek guard aise bhi the, jo apni-apni rifelen lekar tambuon ke baahar pahre par tainaat rahe । unhin main se ek tambu ke andar Li Marcos aur Barbie lete hua the ।
donon hi ek bistar par the ।
vah safed rang ki halki darinumaa bichhaavan thi, jo tambu ke andar kar di gayi thi, vahin us tambu ke ek kone main candle stand bhi rakhaa huaa thaa, jiskaa bahut dhundhlaa-dhundhlaa saa prkaash tambu ke chaaron taraf bikhraa thaa ।
“kyaa soch rahi ho ?” Li Marcos khubsurat goodiyaa-si Barbie ko apni baahon ke daayre main samettaa huaa bolaa ।
“kuchh nahin ।”
“phir bhi, kuchh to ?” Li Marcos ne apne dahakte hua honth Barbie ke honthon par rakhe ।
phir Li Marcos kaa haath sirasraataa huaa Barbie ke pet par rengne lagaa aur usne uski midi ke batan kholne shuru kiye ।
“kyaa kar rahe ho ?” Barbie kulbulaai- “kyaa jungle main bhi chain nahin hai ?”
Li Marcos muskraayaa ।
uski muskaan unmukt thi ।
“daarling !” vah bolaa- “jungle main to aadmi aur bhi jyaadaa shetaan ban jaataa hai । shukr karo, abhi main tumhaare saath shetaanon ki tarah pish nahin aa rahaa hun ।”
Barbie bhi muskraayi ।
tab tak Li Marcos ne uski midi ke saare batan khol diye the aur phir vah uske chehre ke bethaashaa chumban lene lagaa ।
Barbie bhi uske sine se thodaa sat gayi ।
ab use bhi aanand aanaa shuru ho gayaa thaa ।
“tum dekh lenaa ।” Li Marcos garamjoshi ke saath bolaa- “aaj ki raat Karan Saxena ke jivan ki aakhiri raat hogi । meri samuraai uski gardan dhad se alag kar daalegi ।”
“kyaa sachamuch ?” Barbie hansi ।
“bilkul । tum jaanti hi ho Barbie, ek baar agar meraa dushman meri samuraai ke saamne aa jaataa hai, to phir duniyaa ki badi-se-badi taakat bhi use nahin bachaa paati ।”
paati ।”
“lekin mat bhulo Marcos, vah commander Karan Saxena hai । ek antraashtriy jaasus !”
“vah chaahe koi bhi hai ।” Li Marcos phumphkaaraa- “meri samuraai jab saany-saany karti hui chalegi, to vah uski sharm karne vaali nahin hai ।”
Li Marcos ke honth ab Barbie ki gardan par sirasraa rahe the ।
ek haath Barbie ki pith par reng rahaa thaa ।
phir usne do ungaliyon ki madad se uski skart ki jeep khol daali aur phir Li Marcos kaa haath Barbie ki nagn pith par sirasraane lagaa ।
Barbie niche chust pent pahne thi, jismain uske bhare-bhare sudaul nitamb bade jaanlevaa andaaj main mukhar ho rahe the ।
pichhe se skart ki jeep khul jaane ke kaaran ab Barbie kaa kamar tak kaa saaraa bhaag nagn ho gayaa ।
Li Marcos ki aankhon main vaasnaa ke dore khinch gaye ।
tabhi usne Barbie ki skirt pakadakar khinch di । fauran uske gulaabi rang ke behad unnat uroj chamak uthe, jinmain raktim aabhaa daud rahi thi ।
Li Marcos ne ab Barbie ko bilkul sidhaa chit karke litaa diyaa aur uske vakshasthlon par apnaa sir rakh diyaa ।
Barbie ke munh se tej maadak siskaari chhuti ।
usne uttejnaavash Li Marcos ke baal apni mutthi main jakad liye ।
Barbie bahut kheli khaai yuvti thi ।
uskaa aadhe se jyaadaa jivan japan ki saayonaaraa naamak bandargaah ke karib gujraa thaa, jo aaj bhi japan kaa sabse badaa vishyaavriatti kaa addaa samjhaa jaataa hai ।
kabhi japan main etni vishyaavriatti nahin thi । balki garam gosht ke is kaarobaar ko kabhi japani log bahut ghrinaa ki najar se dekhte the । magar etihaas badaltaa hai । dvitiy vishv yudv ke dauraan jab japan main general mekartho kaa shaasan thaa, to americi sainikon ne saayonaaraa naamak bandargaah main ghusakar vishyaavriatti ko janm diyaa । unhonne sundar-sundar japani ladakiyon ke saath saamuhik balaatkaar kiye aur phir unhen chhod diyaa, us shahar ki andheri tathaa gumnaam galiyon main bhatakne ke liye ।
Barbie bhi ek vishyaa maan ki santaan thi ।
parantu bachapan se hi Barbie ne driadh sakanlp kar liyaa thaa ki vah khud vishyaa nahin banegi । tokyo ki galiyon main ghumte hua tathaa aurat ke bhukhe sadakchhaap bhadiyon kaa mukaablaa karte hua usne judo ke andar baarahvaan dan, taaekvaando main aathvaan dan praapt kar liyaa । baharhaal aaj puri duniyaa main usse khatarnaak marshal art kaa yodvaa nahin thaa ।
shighr hi vah donon kamar se upar tak nagn ho chuke the ।
Barbie ab kaafi uttejit thi ।
usne ekaaak jhapatakar Li Marcos ko niche giraayaa tathaa phir apne unnat uroj uske sine se buri tarah chipkaa diye ।
Li Marcos ke haath ab Barbie ke nitambon par jaa pahunche । shighr hi uski ungaliyaan Barbie ki pent ko khol rahi thi ।
“kbhi-kabhi ek vichaar mere dimaag main aane lagtaa hai Marcos ।”
Barbie uske upar bharpur pyaar lutte hua boli ।
“kyaa?”
“hamne Burma ke en jungle lo main aakar apne jivan ki sabse badi galti ki hai । Jack Kramer kaa yahaan aane kaa proposal hamain kabul nahin karnaa chaahiye thaa । jaraa socho Marcos, japan main hi hamaare paas kyaa kami thi । sab kuchh thaa । achchhaa-khaasaa khushhaal jivan thaa ।”
“nhin ।” Li Marcos driadh lahje main bolaa- “hamnen yahaan aakar koi galti nahin ki hai Barbie ।”
“lekin... ।”
“jraa socho !” Li Marcos bolaa- “agar Burma par kabjaa karne vaalaa hamaaraa yah mission kaamyaab ho gayaa, to vah hamaare jivan ki kitni badi upalabdhi hogi । abhi tak tamaam dhan-sampdaa paane ke baavjud bhi hamaari kyaa haisiyat hai । ham sirf kaanun se bachakar bhaagte phirne vaale apraadhi hain, jinhen police pakadakar kabhi bhi salaakhon ke pichhe dhakel sakti hai । jabaki is mission main kaamyaab hote hi ham tamaam yoddhaaon ki haisiyat baadshaahon jaisi hogi । Burma ki tamaam bahumuly dhaatuon se bhari khadaanon par hamaaraa kabjaa hogaa । duniyaa ke bade-bade raashtrapati aur prdhaanamantri hamaare mitr honge । yun to yah saari baaten sapne jaisi lagti hain Barbie ! lekin main jaantaa hun ki ek din ham yoddhaaon kaa yah sapnaa jarur puraa hogaa । jarur puraa hogaa ।”
Li Marcos, Barbie ke saath kuchh aur chipak gayaa ।
is bich vah uski penty kholne main kaamyaab ho gayaa thaa । phir vo dhire-dhire us chust penty ko niche ki taraf khinchne lagaa ।
“tum kuchh bhi kaho Marcos !” Barbie ke munh se punah maadak siskaari chhuti-“mujhe shak hai ki hamaaraa yah mission safal ho paayegaa ।”
“koi shak karne ki jarurat nahin hai । ham jarur kaamyaab honge ।”
Li Marcos ne jhatke ke saath uski penty niche khinch di ।
ab vah nirvastr thi ।
phir vah donon bethaashaa ek dusre ke chumban lene lage ।
Li Marcos use apni baahon main bhare-bhare ghumaa, to Barbie phir uske niche aa gayi ।
Li Marcos ne uske donon kandhe kasakar pakad liye ।
unke sharir main aag dhadhak rahi thi ।
dhadhakti jaa rahi thi ।
vah aag apne charmotkarsh par pahunch paati, usse pahle hi vah chaunk uthe ।
unke sharir ekaaak thamakakar ruk gaye ।
unhonne kuchh aavaajen sunin ।
aavaajen jo abhi bhi nirantar sunaai di rahi thi ।
“kyaa yah dholak bajne ki aavaajen hain ?” Li Marcos ne chihunkakar puchhaa ।
“shaayad !” Barbie bhi bade stabdh bhaav se un aavaajon ko sun rahi thi- “shaayad yah dholak bajne ki hi aavaajen hain, jo kaafi dur se aa rahi hain ।”
“jrur jungleiyon ne commander Karan Saxena ko dhundh nikaalaa hai ।”
“aisaa hi lagtaa hai ।”
tabhi unhen baahar se bhi shor-sharaabe ki aavaajen sunaai dene lagin ।
jarur hathiyaaraband guardon ne bhi dholak bajne ki un aavaajon ko sun liyaa thaa ।
“jaldi chalo ।”
Li Marcos fauran jump lekar khadaa ho gayaa tathaa phir jaldi-jaldi kapede pahanne lagaa ।
Barbie ne bhi aanan-phaanan kapede chadhaane shuru kiye the ।
“kyaa time huaa hai ?” Barbie apne skart ki jeep khinchte hua boli ।
“abhi to do baje hain ।”
jald hi vah donon kapeden pahanakar lagabhag daudte hua tambu se baahar nikle ।
unhonne dekhaa, guard bhi daudte hua hi tambuon se nikal rahe the aur baahar jamaa ho rahe the ।
shighr hi saare tambu khaali ho gaye ।
Barbie candle stand apne saath hi baahar le aayi, jisse vahaan kuchh roshni fail gayi ।
“kyaa ho gayaa ?” Barbie baahar aate hi boli ।
“dholak ki aavaaj aa rahi hain maidam ।” ek guard bolaa- “aisaa maalum hotaa hai, jungleiyon ne commander ko dhundh nikaalaa hai ।”
dholak bajne ki aavaaj abhi bhi aa rahi thi ।
tabhi ek nayi ghatnaa ghati ।
ek bahut jordaar dhamaake ki aavaaj vahaan tak sunaai pedi ।
us dhamaake ki aavaaj ke baad dholak bajni bhi band ho gayi ।

usi kshan ek aur dhamaake ki aavaaj aayi ।
 
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