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CHAPTER – 1
{PAST – RIGHT YA WRONG}
UPDATE – 4
AFTER 1 WEEK (EK HAFTE BAAD) :-
PLACE :- J.B. ROAD (DELHI)
DHABB .. DHABB .. KATTT ..
Ye teen aawazein ek ke baad ek kuchh hi seconds ke darmiyaan huyi jinhe sunkar wahaan khade sabhi aadmiyon ka halak sookh gaya. Is waqt kayi saari gaadiyon ne road ko block kiya hua tha aur un gaadiyon ke paas hi chal rahi thi do groups ke beech ladayi.
Iss ladayi ki kendra bindu ya kahun ke kaaran thi – JAHANVI… Ji sahi padha aapne JAHANVI, joki wahaan khadi saamne chal rahi ghatna ko process karne ki koshish mein lagi thi. Kherr! Scene ko behtar samajhne ke liye chalte hain kuchh 20 minute peechhe…
SOME MINUTES BACK :-
Shaam ka waqt hai JAHANVI aur AABHA ek scooty se shopping mall se waapis apne ghar ki taraf jaa rahi hain. Ji sahi suna aapne AABHA uske saath hai. Iss mudde par baad mein baat karenge par pehle iss scene par focus karte hain. Ye dono aapas mein baat karte huye aage badh rahi thi ke tabhi achanak hi kuchh 9–10 gaadiyan ek ke baad ek unki Scooty ke saamne ruki aur raasta block kar diya.
Abhi ye dono kuchh samajh paati ke itne mein unmein se ek gaadi se ek vyakti baahar nikla aur JAHANVI ko dekhne laga. Usse dekh kar JAHANVI ke chehre ka rang ek pal se bhi kam mein safed pad gaya. Uske haath kaanpne lage aur gala sookhne laga. Aankhon mein ghor aascharya saaf dekha jaa sakta tha. Ab tak AABHA scooty se utar chuki thi aur apni chhoti behen ke chehre par aa rahe badlaav bhali bhaanti dekh paa rahi thi par Kaaran nahi jaanti thi wo iska.
Idhar uss vyakti ke chehre par ek rahasyamayi muskaan aa gayi JAHANVI ki haalat dekhne ke baad. Wo chalta hua uske kareeb aaya aur ussi muskaan ko honthon par liye huye bolo,
“I told you Honey, you’re only mine & I’ll get you. Aur dekho main tumhaare saamne hoon. Tumhe kya laga ke main khokhli baatein kar raha tha. Nahi ek baar maine keh diya to tum sirf meri ho, understand JAAN…”
Waise to uss vyakti ke nazariye se sab sahi jaa raha tha, uski baatein sunkar JAHANVI ki aankhen sehmi huyi si dikhne lagi thi par tabhi anjaane mein hi uss se ye galti ho gayi. Wo aakhiri shab JAAN… Iss shabd ko sunkar achanak se hi JAHANVI ke chehre par alag se hi bhaav aa gaye, ek pal ko puraani yaadon mein khoye huye wo shabd fir se uske mann mein goonja par agle hi pal... Agle hi pal uski nazrein side mein khadi apni behen par gayi aur uski kuchh samay pehle ki haalat ko yaad karke ek bijli si kaundhi JAHANVI ke dil mein aur,
... CHATTTTTAAAKKKK ...
Ek bahut hi tezz aawaz goonji chaaron taraf. Jiske kaaran ko dekh kar AABHA ki, uss vyakti ki aur uske saath mein aaye uske aadmiyon ki aankhein fati ki fati reh gayi.
Khud ek baar to JAHANVI bhi bhauchakki si reh gayi ki usne abhi apne saamne khade us insaan ka jabda hila diya tha. Uske honth side se kat gaye the aur wahaan se halka khoon bhi risna shuru ho gaya tha.
Par filhaal uski aankhein band thi kyonki uss bechaare ke kaan sunn pad gaye the. Aankhein band karke tezz tezz saansein lete huye wo normal hone ki koshish mein laga tha. Idhar JAHANVI ye jaante huye bhi ke usne galat insaan par thappad ka istemaal kar diya hai aur iska nateeja kaafi bura ho sakta hai, ek pal ke liye bhi uske chehre par darr nahi aaya. Uspar thi to sirf ek aag jismein uska dard.. uski kasak.. uski peeda aur akelapan sab jhalak raha tha.
Kherr! Kuchh hi seconds baad jab uss vyakti ne JAHANVI ki taraf dekha to uska gussa foot pada aur usne JAHANVI ki taraf haath badhaya hi tha ke agle hi pal wo paanch feet door muh ke bal gira pada tha. Ye achanak se parivartan aaya tha kyonki jaise hi uss aadmi ka haath JAHANVI ko or badha ek hatta katta mazboot shareer ka maalik aage aaya aur usne us vyakti ke seene mein laat jadh di aur nateeja aapke saamne hai.
Tabhi uss vyakti ke saathi aadmi apne asteen se bandook nikaalkar uss naye aadmi ki taraf karne ko huye par agle hi pal unki aankhen failti chali gayi. Kyonki wahaan ek ke baad ek 20–25 gaadiyan aayi aur unmein se aadhunik guns ke saath utre suit boot mein taiyaar aadmi. Sabhi dikhne mein kisi fighter se kam nahi the aur ye sab dekh kar unn puraane waale aadmiyon ke haath harkat karne se mana kar chuke the.
“Abbe Madar**** jaanta bhi hai kisko maara hai tune. VIRAT THAKUR naam hai mera. Raaj chalta hai yahaan mera. Marega tu mere haath se.”
Ye baat kahi thi zameen par gire uss vyakti ne jab wo karahte huye khade hone ki koshish mein tha. Par uska naam sunkar bhi uss naye aadmi ke chehre par koyi shikan naa aayi ulta ek muskaan tair gayi. Wo aage badha aur ek ke baad ek do tabadtod mukke jama diya VIRAT ke pet mein.
.. DHABB .. DHABB ..
Aur agle hi pal ussi haath ko jiss se wo JAHANVI ko chhoone waala tha usse pakda aur poori shakti se ek jhatka de diya aur,
.. KATT ..
BACK TO PRESENT :-
Aur agle hi second,
... AAAAHHHHHH ... AAAAHHHHHH ...
Ye gala faad cheenkhe nikalne lagi VIRAT ke muh se kyonki uska shoulder aur haath ki bone ek saath hi dislocate ho chuki thi. Wahaan khade VIRAT ke aadmi to apne aap ko mara hua hi samajh rahe the. Ke tabhi,
AADMI – Abbe Saale teri koyi aukaat nahi hai ke tu inke saamne khada bhi reh sake (JAHANVI ki taraf ishaara karte huye). Aur tu inhe haath lagayegaa. Kutte mann to kar raha ke jaan se maar doon tujhe par...
Iss se aage wo kuchh bole tabhi usse JAHANVI ka khayal aaya aur usne uski taraf dekhte huye kaha…
“Aap yahaan se jaaiye. Aur chinta mat kijiye isse to main sahi kiye dete hoon.”
JAHANVI ke mann mein sawaal to kaafi the par filhaal waqt ki nazaqat dekhte huye usse yahaan se nikalna sahi laga.AABHA ki maujoodgi bhi usse dara rahi thi kyonki abhi kuchh din bhi nahi huye the usse theek huye, aise mein iss prakaar ki cheezein uspar bura impact daal sakti thi. To usne AABHA ko Scooty par baithne ko kaha aur wahaan se nikal gayi.
PLACE :- SHUKLA SADAN (DWARKA , DELHI)
“Bata ANVI kaun tha wo aur kya ho raha hai ye sab??”
Ye sawaal poochha tha AABHA ne JAHANVI se jo iss waqt apne ghar ke hall mein maujood thi. Unke Mata – Pita bhi wahin the aur AABHA ne un dono ko aaj ki poori ghatna bata di thi. JAHANVI ko khud kuchh samajh nahi aa raha tha to wo unko kaise bataye ye soch nahi paa rahi thi...
Kuchh der ke baad usne bolna shuru kiya,
JAHANVI – Didu jis din aapko hosh aaya tha uss din raat ko mere mobile par ajeeb ajeeb se message aane lage. Wo sabhi ek hi number se aa rahe the aur un sabmein meri tareef ki huyi thi. Fir agle din jab main office gayi to wahaan bhi mere desk par I Love You ke cards aur ek Teddy Bear pada tha. Maine staff se poocha to kisi ko bhi kuchh nahi pata tha. Jab maine CCTV check karwaaye to usmein recording delete ki huyi thi. Par shaam ko ghar aate waqt ek gaadi ne mera raasta rok liya. Aur wahi aaj waala ladka usmein se nikla. Wo zabardasti mere saath baat karne laga aur tab usne bataya ke wo messages aur office mein sab uska kiya dhara tha. Usne mera haath pakadne ki koshish ki to maine usse achhe se suna diya aur wahaan se aa gayi.
Par pichhle dino har roz mujhe ussike calls aa rahe the ke main uss se milne jaaun par maine mana kar diya. Aaj subah mein uska call aaya tha aur usne kaha ke Agar main uss se milne na aayi to achha nahi hoga. Par maine usse ignore karna behtar samjha aur aaj ka aapko pata hi hai.
J/MOM – JAHANVI tune hame bataya kyon nahi?
JAHANVI – Mujhe laga ke wo koyi sanki hai jo kuchh din pareshaan karega fir apne aap hi sudhar jaayega par…
AABHA – Aur ANVI wo doosra aadmi kaun tha aur usne ye kyon kaha ke – “ Abbe Saale teri koyi aukaat nahi hai ke tu inke saamne khada bhi reh sake aur tu inhe haath lagayegaa. ”
(Haan aapko bata doon ke AABHA , JAHANVI ko ANVI kehkar pukaarti hai),
JAHANVI – Ye to mujhe bhi nahi pata Didu. Par mujhe lagta hai ke maine usse pehle kahin dekha hai lekin sahi se yaad nahi aa raha.
J/DAD – Beta tum dono chinta mat karo. Main abhi police station jaata hoon aur complaint register karwaa kar aata hoon.
JAHANVI – Par Papa usne apna naam VIRAT bataya tha Matlab wo JAGVIJAY THAKUR ka beta hai. Aapko lagta hai Police kuchh karegi.
J/DAD – Nahi Beta aesa mat soch,hame koshish to karni hi hogi baaki bhagwaan ki marzi. Main aata hoon.
JAHANVI – Rukiye Papa main bhi chalti hoon. Meri zaroorat padegi.
Iske baad wo dono wahaan se nikal gaye.
( Saath hi aapko ye bhi bata doon ke AABHA ko do din pehle hi hospital se discharge mila hai kyonki uski condition kaafi hadh tak normal ho chuki thi. Aur doctor Logon ka yahi kehna tha ke wo ghar par better recover karegi. That’s why wo kitne hi saalon baad apne ghar waapis aa chuki thi. Ek emotional scene bann gaya tha jab wo waapis ghar pahunchi. Do din baad aaj usse thoda refreshing environment mil sake isiliye JAHANVI apne saath shopping lekar gayi thi. Haalanki JAHANVI ko ghoomna firna pasand nahi tha par wo apni behen ke liye sab karne ko taiyaar thi. )
PLACE :- POLICE STATION (DWARKA CITY)
JAHANVI – Sir hume ek FIR karwaani hai.
Is waqt ye dono maujood hain police station mein Inspector ke saamne aur JAHANVI ne baat shuru ki.
INSP. – JI kahiye kiske khilaaf aur kyon?
JAHANVI – VIRAT THAKUR...
INSP. ( Interrupts ) – Kya kaha VIRAT THAKUR… Jaanti bhi hain wo kaun hai aur..
Abhi usne itna hi kaha tha ke sabhi police waale savdhaan position mein aa gaye aur saamne se bhaag kar aa rahe ek aadmi ko dekh kar Salute thoka.
Insp. Apni chair se side ho gaya unke baithne ke liye.
INSP. – ACP Saahab aap yahaan. Koyi problem hai kya?
Par wo aadmi police station mein baithe logon ko dekhne mein lage the ke agle hi pal unki nazar JAHANVI par padi. Aur..
ACP – Aap.. aapka naam JAHANVI SHUKLA hai kya??
Uski baat sunka JAHANVI , uske Papa aur wo Inspector teeno hi chaunk gaye.
JAHANVI – Ji. Lekin aako kaise pata?
ACP – Aap VIRAT THAKUR ke khilaaf FIR karwaane aayi hai naa. Aap chinta mat kijiye usse zaroor arrest kiya jaayega. Aap complaint likhwaaiye.
JAHANVI hairat mein thi par koyi aur uss se zyada hairaan tha,
INSP. – Sir, kya bol rahen hain aap. VIRAT THAKUR ke khilaaf FIR. Sir hamari naukri chali jaayegi.
ACP – Tum chup raho. CM Saahab ka seedha call aaya tha inke liye. Chup chaap Complaint likho tum.
CM Ka naam sunkar sabhi achambhit ho gaye. Par kahin na kahin JAHANVI ko ehsaas ho gaya ke zaroor ye ussi Aadmi ka kaam hai jisne aaj uski VIRAT ke khilaaf madad ki thi.
Iske baad dono ne FIR Likhwaayi aur wahaan se nikal gaye. Iss poore samay ACP ne koyi mauka nahi chodda un dono ki khushamad karne ka.
NIGHT TIME :-
PLACE :- SHUKLA SADAN (DWARKA , DELHI)
Iss waqt JAHANVI hamesha ki tarah terrace par akeli khadi chaand ko taak rahi thi. Ke tabhi usse apne kandhe par kisika haath mehsoos hua. Usne palatkar dekha to wahaan AABHA khadi thi. JAHANVI ne apni ukhdi huyi saanson ko sambhaala aur apne antar mann ko bhi kaboo karne ki koshish mein lag gayi,
JAHANVI – Didu aap yahaan?
AABHA – Meri chhod. Aur ye bata ke teen din se dekh rahi hoon raat ko yahaan akeli khadi rehkar chaand ko dekhti rehti hai. Kyun??
JAHANVI – N..Nahi Didu aesi koyi baat nahi. Wo to bas aese hi.
AABHA – Kaun tha wo??
JAHANVI ( Surprised ) – K.. Kaun Didu. Kiski baat kar rahi ho aap?
AABHA – Teri badi behen hoon main. Aaj jab uss ladke VIRAT ne tujhse bolna shuru kiya to tere chehre par sirf darr dikh raha tha. Par jaise hi usne tujhe Jaan kaha tere chehre par ek pal ko khushi aayi aur fir achanak hi gussa. Bata mujhe kaun tha wo ladka?
JAHANVI ( Sehmi huyi ) – Koyi nahi Didu...
AABHA – Dhokha diya naa usne tujhe. (Uski chin ko oopar karte huye aur gaal sehlate huye) Bol ANVI dhokha diya na usne tujhe.
Ek dum se JAHANVI ke aansuon ka baandh toot gaya aur wo AABHA ke gale lagkar rone lagi. Uska rudan itna teevra tha ke ek pal ko AABHA bhi thithak gayi. Usse andaza ho raha tha ke uski behen jisse wo ab bhi ek masoom si Pari samajhti thi kitne bada dukh ko apne seene mein dabaye thi.
AABHA uski peeth sehlaane lagi aur kuchh der baad…
AABHA – Kya naam tha uska?
JAHANVI ( Sobs ) – VI.. VIV.. VIVAN DIXIT...
Aaj ke liye itna hi..
Milte hain agle Update mein..
{PAST – RIGHT YA WRONG}
UPDATE – 4
AFTER 1 WEEK (EK HAFTE BAAD) :-
PLACE :- J.B. ROAD (DELHI)
DHABB .. DHABB .. KATTT ..
Ye teen aawazein ek ke baad ek kuchh hi seconds ke darmiyaan huyi jinhe sunkar wahaan khade sabhi aadmiyon ka halak sookh gaya. Is waqt kayi saari gaadiyon ne road ko block kiya hua tha aur un gaadiyon ke paas hi chal rahi thi do groups ke beech ladayi.
Iss ladayi ki kendra bindu ya kahun ke kaaran thi – JAHANVI… Ji sahi padha aapne JAHANVI, joki wahaan khadi saamne chal rahi ghatna ko process karne ki koshish mein lagi thi. Kherr! Scene ko behtar samajhne ke liye chalte hain kuchh 20 minute peechhe…
SOME MINUTES BACK :-
Shaam ka waqt hai JAHANVI aur AABHA ek scooty se shopping mall se waapis apne ghar ki taraf jaa rahi hain. Ji sahi suna aapne AABHA uske saath hai. Iss mudde par baad mein baat karenge par pehle iss scene par focus karte hain. Ye dono aapas mein baat karte huye aage badh rahi thi ke tabhi achanak hi kuchh 9–10 gaadiyan ek ke baad ek unki Scooty ke saamne ruki aur raasta block kar diya.
Abhi ye dono kuchh samajh paati ke itne mein unmein se ek gaadi se ek vyakti baahar nikla aur JAHANVI ko dekhne laga. Usse dekh kar JAHANVI ke chehre ka rang ek pal se bhi kam mein safed pad gaya. Uske haath kaanpne lage aur gala sookhne laga. Aankhon mein ghor aascharya saaf dekha jaa sakta tha. Ab tak AABHA scooty se utar chuki thi aur apni chhoti behen ke chehre par aa rahe badlaav bhali bhaanti dekh paa rahi thi par Kaaran nahi jaanti thi wo iska.
Idhar uss vyakti ke chehre par ek rahasyamayi muskaan aa gayi JAHANVI ki haalat dekhne ke baad. Wo chalta hua uske kareeb aaya aur ussi muskaan ko honthon par liye huye bolo,
“I told you Honey, you’re only mine & I’ll get you. Aur dekho main tumhaare saamne hoon. Tumhe kya laga ke main khokhli baatein kar raha tha. Nahi ek baar maine keh diya to tum sirf meri ho, understand JAAN…”
Waise to uss vyakti ke nazariye se sab sahi jaa raha tha, uski baatein sunkar JAHANVI ki aankhen sehmi huyi si dikhne lagi thi par tabhi anjaane mein hi uss se ye galti ho gayi. Wo aakhiri shab JAAN… Iss shabd ko sunkar achanak se hi JAHANVI ke chehre par alag se hi bhaav aa gaye, ek pal ko puraani yaadon mein khoye huye wo shabd fir se uske mann mein goonja par agle hi pal... Agle hi pal uski nazrein side mein khadi apni behen par gayi aur uski kuchh samay pehle ki haalat ko yaad karke ek bijli si kaundhi JAHANVI ke dil mein aur,
... CHATTTTTAAAKKKK ...
Ek bahut hi tezz aawaz goonji chaaron taraf. Jiske kaaran ko dekh kar AABHA ki, uss vyakti ki aur uske saath mein aaye uske aadmiyon ki aankhein fati ki fati reh gayi.
Khud ek baar to JAHANVI bhi bhauchakki si reh gayi ki usne abhi apne saamne khade us insaan ka jabda hila diya tha. Uske honth side se kat gaye the aur wahaan se halka khoon bhi risna shuru ho gaya tha.
Par filhaal uski aankhein band thi kyonki uss bechaare ke kaan sunn pad gaye the. Aankhein band karke tezz tezz saansein lete huye wo normal hone ki koshish mein laga tha. Idhar JAHANVI ye jaante huye bhi ke usne galat insaan par thappad ka istemaal kar diya hai aur iska nateeja kaafi bura ho sakta hai, ek pal ke liye bhi uske chehre par darr nahi aaya. Uspar thi to sirf ek aag jismein uska dard.. uski kasak.. uski peeda aur akelapan sab jhalak raha tha.
Kherr! Kuchh hi seconds baad jab uss vyakti ne JAHANVI ki taraf dekha to uska gussa foot pada aur usne JAHANVI ki taraf haath badhaya hi tha ke agle hi pal wo paanch feet door muh ke bal gira pada tha. Ye achanak se parivartan aaya tha kyonki jaise hi uss aadmi ka haath JAHANVI ko or badha ek hatta katta mazboot shareer ka maalik aage aaya aur usne us vyakti ke seene mein laat jadh di aur nateeja aapke saamne hai.
Tabhi uss vyakti ke saathi aadmi apne asteen se bandook nikaalkar uss naye aadmi ki taraf karne ko huye par agle hi pal unki aankhen failti chali gayi. Kyonki wahaan ek ke baad ek 20–25 gaadiyan aayi aur unmein se aadhunik guns ke saath utre suit boot mein taiyaar aadmi. Sabhi dikhne mein kisi fighter se kam nahi the aur ye sab dekh kar unn puraane waale aadmiyon ke haath harkat karne se mana kar chuke the.
“Abbe Madar**** jaanta bhi hai kisko maara hai tune. VIRAT THAKUR naam hai mera. Raaj chalta hai yahaan mera. Marega tu mere haath se.”
Ye baat kahi thi zameen par gire uss vyakti ne jab wo karahte huye khade hone ki koshish mein tha. Par uska naam sunkar bhi uss naye aadmi ke chehre par koyi shikan naa aayi ulta ek muskaan tair gayi. Wo aage badha aur ek ke baad ek do tabadtod mukke jama diya VIRAT ke pet mein.
.. DHABB .. DHABB ..
Aur agle hi pal ussi haath ko jiss se wo JAHANVI ko chhoone waala tha usse pakda aur poori shakti se ek jhatka de diya aur,
.. KATT ..
BACK TO PRESENT :-
Aur agle hi second,
... AAAAHHHHHH ... AAAAHHHHHH ...
Ye gala faad cheenkhe nikalne lagi VIRAT ke muh se kyonki uska shoulder aur haath ki bone ek saath hi dislocate ho chuki thi. Wahaan khade VIRAT ke aadmi to apne aap ko mara hua hi samajh rahe the. Ke tabhi,
AADMI – Abbe Saale teri koyi aukaat nahi hai ke tu inke saamne khada bhi reh sake (JAHANVI ki taraf ishaara karte huye). Aur tu inhe haath lagayegaa. Kutte mann to kar raha ke jaan se maar doon tujhe par...
Iss se aage wo kuchh bole tabhi usse JAHANVI ka khayal aaya aur usne uski taraf dekhte huye kaha…
“Aap yahaan se jaaiye. Aur chinta mat kijiye isse to main sahi kiye dete hoon.”
JAHANVI ke mann mein sawaal to kaafi the par filhaal waqt ki nazaqat dekhte huye usse yahaan se nikalna sahi laga.AABHA ki maujoodgi bhi usse dara rahi thi kyonki abhi kuchh din bhi nahi huye the usse theek huye, aise mein iss prakaar ki cheezein uspar bura impact daal sakti thi. To usne AABHA ko Scooty par baithne ko kaha aur wahaan se nikal gayi.
PLACE :- SHUKLA SADAN (DWARKA , DELHI)
“Bata ANVI kaun tha wo aur kya ho raha hai ye sab??”
Ye sawaal poochha tha AABHA ne JAHANVI se jo iss waqt apne ghar ke hall mein maujood thi. Unke Mata – Pita bhi wahin the aur AABHA ne un dono ko aaj ki poori ghatna bata di thi. JAHANVI ko khud kuchh samajh nahi aa raha tha to wo unko kaise bataye ye soch nahi paa rahi thi...
Kuchh der ke baad usne bolna shuru kiya,
JAHANVI – Didu jis din aapko hosh aaya tha uss din raat ko mere mobile par ajeeb ajeeb se message aane lage. Wo sabhi ek hi number se aa rahe the aur un sabmein meri tareef ki huyi thi. Fir agle din jab main office gayi to wahaan bhi mere desk par I Love You ke cards aur ek Teddy Bear pada tha. Maine staff se poocha to kisi ko bhi kuchh nahi pata tha. Jab maine CCTV check karwaaye to usmein recording delete ki huyi thi. Par shaam ko ghar aate waqt ek gaadi ne mera raasta rok liya. Aur wahi aaj waala ladka usmein se nikla. Wo zabardasti mere saath baat karne laga aur tab usne bataya ke wo messages aur office mein sab uska kiya dhara tha. Usne mera haath pakadne ki koshish ki to maine usse achhe se suna diya aur wahaan se aa gayi.
Par pichhle dino har roz mujhe ussike calls aa rahe the ke main uss se milne jaaun par maine mana kar diya. Aaj subah mein uska call aaya tha aur usne kaha ke Agar main uss se milne na aayi to achha nahi hoga. Par maine usse ignore karna behtar samjha aur aaj ka aapko pata hi hai.
J/MOM – JAHANVI tune hame bataya kyon nahi?
JAHANVI – Mujhe laga ke wo koyi sanki hai jo kuchh din pareshaan karega fir apne aap hi sudhar jaayega par…
AABHA – Aur ANVI wo doosra aadmi kaun tha aur usne ye kyon kaha ke – “ Abbe Saale teri koyi aukaat nahi hai ke tu inke saamne khada bhi reh sake aur tu inhe haath lagayegaa. ”
(Haan aapko bata doon ke AABHA , JAHANVI ko ANVI kehkar pukaarti hai),
JAHANVI – Ye to mujhe bhi nahi pata Didu. Par mujhe lagta hai ke maine usse pehle kahin dekha hai lekin sahi se yaad nahi aa raha.
J/DAD – Beta tum dono chinta mat karo. Main abhi police station jaata hoon aur complaint register karwaa kar aata hoon.
JAHANVI – Par Papa usne apna naam VIRAT bataya tha Matlab wo JAGVIJAY THAKUR ka beta hai. Aapko lagta hai Police kuchh karegi.
J/DAD – Nahi Beta aesa mat soch,hame koshish to karni hi hogi baaki bhagwaan ki marzi. Main aata hoon.
JAHANVI – Rukiye Papa main bhi chalti hoon. Meri zaroorat padegi.
Iske baad wo dono wahaan se nikal gaye.
( Saath hi aapko ye bhi bata doon ke AABHA ko do din pehle hi hospital se discharge mila hai kyonki uski condition kaafi hadh tak normal ho chuki thi. Aur doctor Logon ka yahi kehna tha ke wo ghar par better recover karegi. That’s why wo kitne hi saalon baad apne ghar waapis aa chuki thi. Ek emotional scene bann gaya tha jab wo waapis ghar pahunchi. Do din baad aaj usse thoda refreshing environment mil sake isiliye JAHANVI apne saath shopping lekar gayi thi. Haalanki JAHANVI ko ghoomna firna pasand nahi tha par wo apni behen ke liye sab karne ko taiyaar thi. )
PLACE :- POLICE STATION (DWARKA CITY)
JAHANVI – Sir hume ek FIR karwaani hai.
Is waqt ye dono maujood hain police station mein Inspector ke saamne aur JAHANVI ne baat shuru ki.
INSP. – JI kahiye kiske khilaaf aur kyon?
JAHANVI – VIRAT THAKUR...
INSP. ( Interrupts ) – Kya kaha VIRAT THAKUR… Jaanti bhi hain wo kaun hai aur..
Abhi usne itna hi kaha tha ke sabhi police waale savdhaan position mein aa gaye aur saamne se bhaag kar aa rahe ek aadmi ko dekh kar Salute thoka.
Insp. Apni chair se side ho gaya unke baithne ke liye.
INSP. – ACP Saahab aap yahaan. Koyi problem hai kya?
Par wo aadmi police station mein baithe logon ko dekhne mein lage the ke agle hi pal unki nazar JAHANVI par padi. Aur..
ACP – Aap.. aapka naam JAHANVI SHUKLA hai kya??
Uski baat sunka JAHANVI , uske Papa aur wo Inspector teeno hi chaunk gaye.
JAHANVI – Ji. Lekin aako kaise pata?
ACP – Aap VIRAT THAKUR ke khilaaf FIR karwaane aayi hai naa. Aap chinta mat kijiye usse zaroor arrest kiya jaayega. Aap complaint likhwaaiye.
JAHANVI hairat mein thi par koyi aur uss se zyada hairaan tha,
INSP. – Sir, kya bol rahen hain aap. VIRAT THAKUR ke khilaaf FIR. Sir hamari naukri chali jaayegi.
ACP – Tum chup raho. CM Saahab ka seedha call aaya tha inke liye. Chup chaap Complaint likho tum.
CM Ka naam sunkar sabhi achambhit ho gaye. Par kahin na kahin JAHANVI ko ehsaas ho gaya ke zaroor ye ussi Aadmi ka kaam hai jisne aaj uski VIRAT ke khilaaf madad ki thi.
Iske baad dono ne FIR Likhwaayi aur wahaan se nikal gaye. Iss poore samay ACP ne koyi mauka nahi chodda un dono ki khushamad karne ka.
NIGHT TIME :-
PLACE :- SHUKLA SADAN (DWARKA , DELHI)
Iss waqt JAHANVI hamesha ki tarah terrace par akeli khadi chaand ko taak rahi thi. Ke tabhi usse apne kandhe par kisika haath mehsoos hua. Usne palatkar dekha to wahaan AABHA khadi thi. JAHANVI ne apni ukhdi huyi saanson ko sambhaala aur apne antar mann ko bhi kaboo karne ki koshish mein lag gayi,
JAHANVI – Didu aap yahaan?
AABHA – Meri chhod. Aur ye bata ke teen din se dekh rahi hoon raat ko yahaan akeli khadi rehkar chaand ko dekhti rehti hai. Kyun??
JAHANVI – N..Nahi Didu aesi koyi baat nahi. Wo to bas aese hi.
AABHA – Kaun tha wo??
JAHANVI ( Surprised ) – K.. Kaun Didu. Kiski baat kar rahi ho aap?
AABHA – Teri badi behen hoon main. Aaj jab uss ladke VIRAT ne tujhse bolna shuru kiya to tere chehre par sirf darr dikh raha tha. Par jaise hi usne tujhe Jaan kaha tere chehre par ek pal ko khushi aayi aur fir achanak hi gussa. Bata mujhe kaun tha wo ladka?
JAHANVI ( Sehmi huyi ) – Koyi nahi Didu...
AABHA – Dhokha diya naa usne tujhe. (Uski chin ko oopar karte huye aur gaal sehlate huye) Bol ANVI dhokha diya na usne tujhe.
Ek dum se JAHANVI ke aansuon ka baandh toot gaya aur wo AABHA ke gale lagkar rone lagi. Uska rudan itna teevra tha ke ek pal ko AABHA bhi thithak gayi. Usse andaza ho raha tha ke uski behen jisse wo ab bhi ek masoom si Pari samajhti thi kitne bada dukh ko apne seene mein dabaye thi.
AABHA uski peeth sehlaane lagi aur kuchh der baad…
AABHA – Kya naam tha uska?
JAHANVI ( Sobs ) – VI.. VIV.. VIVAN DIXIT...
Aaj ke liye itna hi..
Milte hain agle Update mein..
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Jaguaar
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Awesome Update
Virat ka band bajane wala shayad koi aur nhi ashfaq hi tha. Aur CM ke taraf se call bhi Vivan ne hi karwaya hogaa.
Dekhte hai aage kya hota hai
parkas
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Thnx Brother.. let's see aapka assumption sahi hai ya nahi..
Thanks again & Be Along..
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jayantaDS
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Lajawab.......lachila........writer shab.......maan gaye....... par ye acp daal me kala na kar de .......upkar kar to raha he par upkartia sajjan ho ye zaruri nehi ..........ye acp jahnavi ko patane ki na kashish kare ......wwuuuu me tor ro dunga re
......... jahnavi kisi ki nehi honi chahiye vivan ke aleva...........vivan jindabad ....... jindabad jindabad ..... vivan 
........lekhni top class......a one likha he....... milte he agle updated me.......tab ke liye ye pathak intezar me rahega.................
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highjeck69
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You write wonderfully sir, this update touched my heart . Very few such stories have been written on this forum, I hope you can do your best in this way.
best update , awesome story & writing skills ... keep it up
best update , awesome story & writing skills ... keep it up
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