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Thriller Soch: Dushman kaun?"

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Episode 4: Raavan Ka Pehla Waar

Raat ke do baj rahe the. Shehar ek ajeeb si shanti mein dooba tha, lekin Aveer ka dimaag ek dum active mode mein tha. Zara uske saath thi, lekin abhi tak uspe pura bharosa nahi ho raha tha.

Gaadi ek purani warehouse ke paas ruk gayi. Yaha ek purana contact Aveer ka wait kar raha tha—Rehan.

Rehan ek ex-informant tha, jo underworld ke har chhoti-badi movement ka pata rakhta tha. Zara ko dekh ke usne thoda surprise reaction diya. "Yeh kaun hai?"

Aveer ne short answer diya, "Meri team ka hissa."

Rehan ne ek second ke liye Zara ko dekha, fir bola, "Tumhe pata hai na ki Raavan ka naam lena bhi kitna risky hai?"

Aveer ne ek halki si muskurahat di. "Isiliye toh usse dhundhna hai."

Rehan ne ek file Aveer ki taraf badhayi. "Pichle ek mahine se Raavan ka ek hi focus hai—tumhe khatam karna. Usne naye log recruit kiye hain, aur wo kisi bhi waqt move karega."

Aveer file khol ke dekh raha tha. Raavan ke aadmi ka ek naam highlight ho raha tha—"Kabir Khan"

Zara ne us naam pe nazar daali aur ek second ke liye freeze ho gayi.

Aveer ne turant ye notice kiya. "Tum Kabir ko jaanti ho?"

Zara ne dheere se sir hilaya. "Kabir sirf Raavan ka aadmi nahi hai. Wo ek aur kaam karta hai—loyalty test."

Rehan ne confusion se poocha, "Loyalty test?"

Zara ne ek gehri saans li. "Raavan kisi pe aasani se bharosa nahi karta. Jo bhi uske liye kaam karta hai, uska loyalty test hota hai. Aur Kabir wo test leta hai—ek dangerous game khelke."

Aveer ne files band ki aur Zara ki taraf dekha. "Aur ye game kya hai?"

Zara ne dheere se jawab diya. "Ek jaan lo, taaki tum Raavan ke team ka part ban sako."

Silence.

Aveer samajh gaya tha ki Kabir sirf ek aadmi nahi, ek psychological game bhi hai. Agar usse Raavan tak pahuchna hai, toh pehle Kabir se nipatna padega.

Lekin tabhi ek teekha awaaz hawa mein gunja.

“DHUMMM!”

Ek sniper bullet sirf ek second ka gap leke Aveer ke paas se guzar gayi.

"SNIPER!" Rehan cheekh utha.

Aveer ek second bhi waste nahi kiya. Usne Zara ka haath pakda aur warehouse ke andar kood gaya.

Dusri goli shatter hote hue sheeshe se andar aayi, sirf inches ka gap chhod ke.

Aveer ne turant apni gun nikali aur ek corner mein chhup gaya. Zara bhi saans roke ek wall ke peeche thi.

Rehan chhupne ki koshish kar raha tha, lekin tabhi ek aur bullet hawa mein gunji.

“DHUMM!”

Blood splatter.

Rehan zameen pe gir chuka tha.

Zara ne shock mein dekha, par Aveer ka chehra ek dum cold tha. "Raavan ka pehla warning aa chuka hai."

Zara ne dheere se bola, "Aur ab?"

Aveer ne apni gun reload ki aur ek muskurahat di. "Ab hum chhupenge nahi. Attack karenge."


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Next Episode: Aveer aur Zara ka agla move kya hoga? Kya Kabir Khan pehla target banega?
 
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Episode 5: Shikaari Ya Shikaar?

Raat abhi bhi gehri thi, lekin Aveer ka dimaag ekdum active mode pe chala gaya tha. Raavan ne apna pehla waar kar diya tha. Ab bas ek hi sawaal tha—shikaari kaun hai aur shikaar kaun banega?

Rehan ka laash zameen pe thi, uske aaspaas khoon ka ek chhota sa talab ban chuka tha. Zara ne ek second ke liye aankhein band ki, lekin Aveer ne ek bhi moment waste nahi kiya.

"Sniper kidhar hai?"

Zara ne ek window ki taraf dekha jo warehouse ke opposite building mein thi. "Waha se aaya hoga shot."

Aveer ne bina waqt gawaye apni gun reload ki aur ek sharp observation mode pe chala gaya. Sniper ka ek hi maksad tha—Aveer ko khatam karna.

Par Aveer koi aam target nahi tha.

Maut Ka Saamna

Aveer ne Zara ka haath pakda. "Main count karunga teen tak. Jaise hi main bhaagun, tum dusri side jao."

Zara ne halki si nafrat bhari muskurahat di. "Tum mujhe ek weak target samajh rahe ho?"

Aveer ne bina muskuraye sirf ek line boli, "Mujhe sirf ye pata hai ki agar tum slow rahi, toh mar jaogi."

Zara ne ek pal ke liye uski aankhon mein dekha. Fir sir hilaya.

"Ek… Do…"

Aveer ek dum se move kiya, full speed pe ek side se bhaaga. Aur tabhi ek aur bullet hawa mein gunji.

"DHUMMM!"

Bullet sirf ek second ka gap chhod ke guzar gayi. Par Aveer chhup chuka tha.

Zara bhi dusri side jump kar chuki thi.

Aveer ne ab finally apni positioning set kar li. Sniper ko dikhna mushkil tha, lekin wo chhup nahi sakta tha.

Usne Zara ko ishara kiya. Zara ne turant apni gun nikali.

"Ek hi tareeka hai sniper ko out karne ka."

Zara ne poocha, "Kya?"

Aveer ne ek dead serious expression diya. "Mujhe usse open target banna padega."

Zara ne turant mana kiya. "Are you mad? Wo pakka shot lega!"

Aveer ne uski taraf dekha. "Agar wo fail karega, toh bas ek second ka gap milega. Aur uss second mein mujhe usse khatam karna hoga."

Zara ko samajh nahi aaya ki ye pagalpan hai ya ek genius plan. Par Aveer ki aankhon mein koi darr nahi tha.

Ek Second Ka Game

Aveer ne ek gehri saans li aur apni position chhod di.

Ek dum se wo open area mein aa gaya.

Aur jaise hi sniper ne usse dekha, ek bullet hawa mein chhod di.

Aveer ke paas sirf ek option tha. Ek side flip, ek perfect dive.

Bullet sirf ek inch ka gap leke guzar gayi.

Aur ussi second Zara ne apni gun raise ki.

"DHUMMM!"

Ek aur goli chali. Is baar sniper ki taraf.

Sniper direct impact pe gir chuka tha.

Zara ne ek gehri saans li aur Aveer ki taraf dekha.

Aveer ab bhi wahi calm expression mein khada tha. "Ek second ka game tha."

Zara ne dheere se kaha, "Aur tumne jeet liya."

Par Aveer jaanta tha—ye sirf ek shuruwaat thi. Raavan ka asli plan abhi baaki tha.


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Next Episode: Raavan ka agla move kya hoga? Kabir Khan scene mein kab aaye
 
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Episode 6: Kabir Khan Ka​

Sniper khatam ho chuka tha, par Aveer jaanta tha ki ye sirf ek trial tha. Asli game abhi baaki thi.

Warehouse se nikalne ke baad, Zara aur Aveer ek secure location pe pahuche—ek chhota sa apartment jo Aveer ke emergency hideouts me se ek tha.

"Raavan seedha attack nahi karega," Aveer ne Zara ki taraf dekha, "wo apne next move se mujhe surprise karega."

Zara ne ek file nikaali jo uske bag me thi. "Agar tumhe Raavan tak pahuchna hai, toh pehle uske trusted logon tak pahuchna padega."

Aur sabse bada naam—Kabir Khan.

Zara ne file kholke ek photo Aveer ke samne rakhi. Ek strong, well-built aadmi, jiske chehre pe ek alag level ka arrogance dikh raha tha.

"Ye hai Kabir Khan. Raavan ka sabse purana aadmi, aur uska executioner."

Aveer ne file padni shuru ki.

  • Kabir ka kaam sirf orders execute karna nahi tha, wo dushman ka dimaag todne me expert tha.
  • Har naye aadmi ka loyalty test leta tha—aur jo fail ho jaaye, wo zinda nahi bachta tha.
  • Kabir sirf paise ke liye kaam nahi karta, uske liye sirf ek rule tha—jo Raavan ka dushman hai, wo sirf ek tareeke se zinda rahega… yaani mara hua.
Zara ne dheere se kaha, "Agar hum Raavan tak pahuchna chahte hain, toh Kabir ko pehle handle karna hoga."

Aveer ne Zara ki taraf dekha. "Mujhe handle karna aata hai. Bas mujhe us tak pahuchna hai."

Maut Ka Invitation​

Aveer ko ek idea aaya. "Agar Kabir har naye aadmi ka loyalty test leta hai, toh humein ek naye bande ki zaroorat hai."

Zara confuse ho gayi. "Naya banda?"

Aveer ne ek halki si muskurahat di. "Main."

Zara shock ho gayi. "Tum khud ek naye aadmi ki tarah jaaoge? Wo tumhe pehchaan lega!"

Aveer ne calm expression me kaha, "Isiliye mujhe ek naye chehre ki zaroorat hai."

Zara ne ek second socha, fir kaha, "Plastic surgery ya disguise ka time nahi hai, Aveer."

Aveer ne ek deep breath li. "Isiliye mujhe andar se badalna hoga."

Zara ab bhi confused thi, par Aveer ka dimaag ek naya plan bana chuka tha. Agar Raavan ke aadmi sirf uske bande ko hi accept karte hain, toh Aveer ko ek naya naam, ek naya look aur ek naya tareeka chahiye.

Aveer ne Zara ki taraf dekha. "Tum sirf ek kaam karo—Kabir tak ek message pahucha do. Bata do ki ek naye aadmi ko kaam chahiye. Ek aadmi jo bina kisi rules ke sirf maarna jaanta hai."

Zara ne ek second ke liye uske chehre pe dekha. Ye Aveer ab bhi wahi tha, ya kuch aur banne wala tha?

Par usne sirf ek line boli, "Theek hai. Main message pahucha dungi."

Aveer ek naye mission ke liye ready ho chuka tha. Ye sirf ek game nahi thi—ye ek maut ka invitation tha.




 
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