Thriller Soch: Dushman kaun?"

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3.love story isme nhi milegi par kuch keh nahi sakte Ki kab iska ek aur part nikal du usme chance ho sakta hai .
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Update 1 shuruwaat ek raaz

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Episode 1: Shuruwaat Ek Raaz ki

Raat ka andhera har taraf chaaya tha. Shehar ki ek gali mein ek aadmi daud raha tha, saans phuli hui, shakal pe dar. Peeche se ek black SUV tez raftaar se uska peecha kar rahi thi.

Achanak, ek teekhi awaz hawa mein gunjti hai—“Dhummm!” Ek goli nikalti hai aur aadmi ke pair ke ekdum paas se guzar jaati hai.

“Next shot sirf warning nahi hoga,” ek thandi, lekin bhari awaaz gunjti hai.

Aadmi ek jagah ruk jaata hai, pasine mein bheega hua. Uski aankhon mein darr saf dikh raha tha. Aage khada tha ek lamba-chauda aadmi—kale kapde, body ekdum fit, aur chehra emotionless. Uski aankhon mein ek ajeeb si gehraai thi, jaise sab kuch jaan chuki ho.

Aveer.

Shehar ka ek anjaana insaan jo sirf unhi logo ke liye ek kahani tha jo usse mile nahi the. Jo mil chuke the, unke liye wo maut ka ek zinda roop tha.

“Bhai… main nahi jaanta… please…” aadmi haath jodta hai.

Aveer ne ek kadam aage badhaya. “Jis kaam ke liye paise liye, usse mukar raha hai?”

Aadmi ne sir hilaya. “Mujhe chhod do… main sab bata dunga…”

Aveer ne bina kisi emotion ke goli bhar di. Ek seedha shot, bas pair mein. Aadmi cheekh utha.

Aveer uske paas jhuk gaya, thanda sa muskuraya. “Ab bata, ya agli goli…”

“Main… main sirf ek messenger tha…,” aadmi hichkichaya, “Tumhare against kuch bada plan ho raha hai. Underworld ke bade log… tumhe hataana chahte hain… Ek naya aadmi aaya hai scene par. Uska naam—”

Achanak, ek aur goli chali. Aveer ne turant side dive kiya, ek dum professional style mein. Goli seedha us aadmi ke sir mein lag chuki thi. Koi aur tha, jo chahata tha ki wo sach na bata sake.

Aveer ne apni gun ready ki aur side ko dekha. Ek chhaya hawa mein gayab ho chuki thi.

Shehar Ki Andekhi Jung

Aveer ek ordinary ladka nahi tha. Uska past ek raaz tha, aur uska present ek jung. Shehar ka un  derworld uska naam sunte hi kaanp jata tha, lekin koi bhi nahi jaanta tha ki wo aakhir kaun hai. Kahi bhi evidence nahi, koi bhi record nahi. Ek chhaya, jo sirf us logo ko dikhai deti thi jo galat karte the.

Par ab kuch badal raha tha. Kisi aur ne bhi enter liya tha is game mein. Koi jo Aveer ko khatam karna chahta tha.

Kahani Mein Naya Mod

Do din baad, ek party ho rahi thi. Shehar ke high-profile log waha maujood the. Wahiin ek ladki shanti se ek corner mein khadi thi—Zara. Lambi, graceful, lekin aankhon mein ek ajeeb si teekhi baat thi. Uske haath mein ek wine glass tha, par uski nazar sirf ek hi cheez par thi—Aveer.

Usne dheere se kaha, “So, tum wahi ho jiske baare mein sab baat kar rahe hain?”

Aveer ne bina dekhe jawab diya, “Aur tum wahi ho jo chhupke se mujhe dekh rahi ho?”

Zara halki si hasi, “Acha hai, observation skills sharp hai. Par dekhna ye hai ki tum kab tak bach sakte ho.”

Aveer ne ek second ke liye uski aankhon mein dekha. Waha kuch tha—ek challenge, ek raaz.

Aur isi moment se, ek naye safar ki shuruwaat ho gayi.


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Next Episode: Zara ka asli maksad kya hai? Kya Aveer is naye dushman ka samna karne ke liye tayyar hai?

 

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Episode 1: Shuruwaat Ek Raaz ki

Raat ka andhera har taraf chaaya tha. Shehar ki ek gali mein ek aadmi daud raha tha, saans phuli hui, shakal pe dar. Peeche se ek black SUV tez raftaar se uska peecha kar rahi thi.

Achanak, ek teekhi awaz hawa mein gunjti hai—“Dhummm!” Ek goli nikalti hai aur aadmi ke pair ke ekdum paas se guzar jaati hai.

“Next shot sirf warning nahi hoga,” ek thandi, lekin bhari awaaz gunjti hai.

Aadmi ek jagah ruk jaata hai, pasine mein bheega hua. Uski aankhon mein darr saf dikh raha tha. Aage khada tha ek lamba-chauda aadmi—kale kapde, body ekdum fit, aur chehra emotionless. Uski aankhon mein ek ajeeb si gehraai thi, jaise sab kuch jaan chuki ho.

Aveer.

Shehar ka ek anjaana insaan jo sirf unhi logo ke liye ek kahani tha jo usse mile nahi the. Jo mil chuke the, unke liye wo maut ka ek zinda roop tha.

“Bhai… main nahi jaanta… please…” aadmi haath jodta hai.

Aveer ne ek kadam aage badhaya. “Jis kaam ke liye paise liye, usse mukar raha hai?”

Aadmi ne sir hilaya. “Mujhe chhod do… main sab bata dunga…”

Aveer ne bina kisi emotion ke goli bhar di. Ek seedha shot, bas pair mein. Aadmi cheekh utha.

Aveer uske paas jhuk gaya, thanda sa muskuraya. “Ab bata, ya agli goli…”

“Main… main sirf ek messenger tha…,” aadmi hichkichaya, “Tumhare against kuch bada plan ho raha hai. Underworld ke bade log… tumhe hataana chahte hain… Ek naya aadmi aaya hai scene par. Uska naam—”

Achanak, ek aur goli chali. Aveer ne turant side dive kiya, ek dum professional style mein. Goli seedha us aadmi ke sir mein lag chuki thi. Koi aur tha, jo chahata tha ki wo sach na bata sake.

Aveer ne apni gun ready ki aur side ko dekha. Ek chhaya hawa mein gayab ho chuki thi.

Shehar Ki Andekhi Jung

Aveer ek ordinary ladka nahi tha. Uska past ek raaz tha, aur uska present ek jung. Shehar ka un  derworld uska naam sunte hi kaanp jata tha, lekin koi bhi nahi jaanta tha ki wo aakhir kaun hai. Kahi bhi evidence nahi, koi bhi record nahi. Ek chhaya, jo sirf us logo ko dikhai deti thi jo galat karte the.

Par ab kuch badal raha tha. Kisi aur ne bhi enter liya tha is game mein. Koi jo Aveer ko khatam karna chahta tha.

Kahani Mein Naya Mod

Do din baad, ek party ho rahi thi. Shehar ke high-profile log waha maujood the. Wahiin ek ladki shanti se ek corner mein khadi thi—Zara. Lambi, graceful, lekin aankhon mein ek ajeeb si teekhi baat thi. Uske haath mein ek wine glass tha, par uski nazar sirf ek hi cheez par thi—Aveer.

Usne dheere se kaha, “So, tum wahi ho jiske baare mein sab baat kar rahe hain?”

Aveer ne bina dekhe jawab diya, “Aur tum wahi ho jo chhupke se mujhe dekh rahi ho?”

Zara halki si hasi, “Acha hai, observation skills sharp hai. Par dekhna ye hai ki tum kab tak bach sakte ho.”

Aveer ne ek second ke liye uski aankhon mein dekha. Waha kuch tha—ek challenge, ek raaz.

Aur isi moment se, ek naye safar ki shuruwaat ho gayi.


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Next Episode: Zara ka asli maksad kya hai? Kya Aveer is naye dushman ka samna karne ke liye tayyar hai?

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Episode 2: Dushman Chhupkar Nahi, Saamne Hai

Party apni charam seema par thi. Music tej tha, log has rahe the, drinks chal rahi thi. Lekin Aveer ka dimaag kisi aur cheez mein uljha tha.

Zara.

Uski aankhon mein kuch alag tha. Jaise wo sirf ek normal ladki nahi, kuch aur bhi thi.

"Aveer?" Zara ki awaaz phir se gunji.

Aveer ne uski taraf dekha. "Tum mujhe pehle se jaanti ho?"

Zara ne ek halka sip liya aur ek shatir muskurahat di. "Itna bada naam ho tum, aur main na jaanu? Ye ho nahi sakta."

Aveer ne apna drink side rakha aur uske aur kareeb gaya. "Naam jitna bada ho, usse zyada bada hota hai kaam. Tum mujhe itni gaur se kyun dekh rahi thi?"

Zara ne ek pal ke liye kuch socha, fir dheere se boli, "Kyunki mujhe tumhare saath kaam karna hai."

Aveer ne thoda surprise feel kiya, lekin uske chehre pe kuch nahi aaya. "Kaam? Kis tarah ka kaam?"

Zara thoda aage jhuki. "Tumhare against ek bada plan chal raha hai. Agar tum zinda rehna chahte ho, toh tumhe meri madad chahiye."

Aveer ek second ke liye soch mein pad gaya. Zara ki aankhon mein ek ajnabi si sachai thi. Par wo kisi par aise bharosa nahi karta tha.

"Lekin tumhe kaise pata ki mujhe madad ki zaroorat hai?" Aveer ne poocha.

Zara ne sidha jawab diya, "Kyunki jo tumhare peeche hain, unka sirf ek hi mission hai—tumhe khatam karna. Aur main unka ek part thi."

Aveer ka dimaag ek dum alert ho gaya.

"Part thi?" Aveer ne aankhon mein tez dikhate hue poocha.

Zara ne dheere se sir hilaya. "Haan. Par ab nahi. Isiliye main tumhe warn kar rahi hoon. Warna agla din tumhare liye akhri din ho sakta hai."

Aveer ne Zara ki taraf ghoor ke dekha. Uska dil keh raha tha ki ye ladki jhoot nahi bol rahi, lekin dimaag alert tha—agar ye sach hai, toh wo gang ka hissa kyun thi? Aur ab wo madad kyun karna chahti hai?

Isse pehle ki Aveer kuch aur kahe, ek zor ka dhamaka hua.

BOOM!

Party hall ke ek kone mein ek chhota blast hua aur har jagah afra-tafri mach gayi. Log chillane lage, security bhaag rahi thi. Aveer turant action mode mein aaya.

Zara ne tez awaaz mein kaha, "Ye shuruwaat hai! Ab samjhe tum?"

Aveer ne apni gun nikal li, aur party hall ke ek corner ki taraf bada. Waha se ek aadmi bhaag raha tha—ek mask pehne hue shooter.

Aveer ne bina waqt gawaye uske peeche daud lagayi.

Shooter seedha emergency exit ki taraf bhaag raha tha. Lekin Aveer usse aise jaane nahi de sakta tha.

Ek tez move ke saath, Aveer ne ek table pe jump maara aur ek dusri side se shortcut le liya. Shooter ne peeche dekha, wo shock ho gaya.

"Shit!" Shooter ne gun nikali aur Aveer pe fire kiya.

Aveer ne ek side roll maara aur ek pillar ke peeche chhup gaya. Fir ek accurate aim ke saath "DHUMM!" ek goli chala di.

Shooter ke haath se gun gir gayi. Wo pain me chillaya.

Aveer turant uske paas pahucha aur uska collar pakad ke zameen par gira diya. "Kisne bheja tujhe?"

Shooter teeth daba ke bola, "Main nahi bata sakta…"

Aveer ne uske haath pe ek zor ka punch maara. "Bol!"

Shooter cheekh utha. "Main sirf ek messenger hoon! Main kisi ko nahi jaanta!"

Aveer ne use chhod diya. Wo aadmi waise bhi zyada nahi jaanta tha.

Usne apni gun wapas apni jacket mein daali aur Zara ki taraf dekha.

Zara dheere se boli, "Ab samjhe? Tum ab bhi soch rahe ho ki tumhe madad nahi chahiye?"

Aveer ne uski taraf ek gehri nazar se dekha. Fir bola, "Theek hai. Tumhe jo kehna hai, chalo mere saath."


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Next Episode: Zara ka asli agenda kya hai? Aveer ke naye dushman ka asli chehra kab saamne aayega?

 

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Episode 3: Sach Ka Saamna

Aveer apni black SUV mein steering pakde chhup-chhup ke Zara ki taraf dekh raha tha. Zara side seat pe shaant baithi thi, lekin uski aankhon mein ajeeb si bechaini thi.

Gaadi ek chhoti si galli se hoti hui ek sunsaan jagah par ruk gayi.

“Ab bolo,” Aveer ne seedha Zara ki taraf dekha, “tumne jo kaha, wo sach hai ya koi game chal rahi hai?”

Zara ne ek gehri saans li aur dheere se boli, “Mujhe tumpe bharosa nahi hai, Aveer. Par tumhe mujhpe bhi nahi hai.”

Aveer ki aankhein aur tez ho gayi. “Agar mujhe bharosa nahi hota, toh main tumhe zinda nahi chodta.”

Zara ek pal ke liye uske chehre pe nazar daali. "Kya sach mein?" Usne dheere se kaha.

Aveer ne ek second ka bhi wait nahi kiya. Ek dum se usne apni gun nikal ke Zara ke sir pe rakh di.

“Agar tum kisi aur gang ki spy ho, toh abhi bhi time hai sach bata do,” Aveer ki awaaz ekdum thandi thi.

Par Zara ne ek inch bhi move nahi kiya. Uski aankhein ekdum seedha Aveer ki aankhon mein thi.

“Agar main tumhe dhokha dene aayi hoti, toh main kab ka bhaag chuki hoti.”

Aveer ne Zara ki body language observe ki. Koi tension nahi. Koi ghabrahat nahi. Jaise uske andar bhi ek alag level ki himmat ho.

Zara dheere se boli, “Main us gang ka part thi jo tumhe khatam karna chahta hai. Lekin jab mujhe sach pata chala, toh main nikal gayi. Ab wo log mujhe bhi maarna chahte hain.”

Aveer gun neeche kar chuka tha, lekin ab bhi uska mind sharp tha. “Kaun hai wo? Kis gang ki baat kar rahi ho?”

Zara ne thoda ruk ke bola, “Raavan.”

Ek pal ke liye SUV ke andar ek dum silence ho gaya.

Aveer ne dheere se apni fingers table pe tap ki. “Raavan.”

Shehar ka sabse bada crime lord. Koi uska asli naam nahi jaanta tha, par har gang uske saamne chhoti lagti thi.

Ye naam sunte hi Aveer ko samajh aa gaya tha ki game aur bada hone wala hai.

Zara ne kaha, “Raavan tumhe khatam karna chahta hai. Kyunki tumhare kaaran uska ek bada deal barbaad ho gaya tha.”

Aveer ka dimaag flashback mode mein chala gaya. Teen mahine pehle.

Ek secret arms deal hone wali thi. Aveer ne bina kisi warning ke wo deal crash kar di thi. Firefight hua tha, aur shehar ka ek bada arms supplier us raat khatam ho gaya tha. Tab kisi ko nahi pata tha ki uske peeche Raavan tha.

Lekin ab sab clear ho raha tha.

“Agar wo mujhe maarna chahta hai, toh mujhe bhi uske paas pahuchna hoga.” Aveer ki awaaz ekdum thandi ho gayi.

Zara ne sir hilaaya. “Aur iske liye mujhe tumhari madad chahiye. Main tumhe us tak le ja sakti hoon.”

Aveer ne Zara ko dhyan se dekha. Agar wo jhoot bol rahi hoti, toh uski aankhon mein dar hota. Par yaha kuch aur tha. Ek mission, ek maksad.

Aveer ne gaadi start karte hue kaha, “Agar tum mujhe dhoka dogi, toh tum bhi unhi logon ki tarah khatam ho jaogi jo mujhe maarna chahte hain.”

Zara halka sa muskurayi. “Mujhe pata hai. Aur isiliye main yaha hoon.”

SUV ek dum tez speed mein shehar ki andheri sadkon mein chali gayi. Ek naye jung ki shuruwaat ho chuki thi.


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Next Episode: Zara sach bol rahi hai ya ye ek chaal hai? Aveer ka agla kadam kya hoga?