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Itachi_Uchiha

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UPDATE NO - 148(B) post kar diya hai dosto.
Read nd enjoy it.

Nd aaj ab tak ke comments ka aaj reply mil jayega.
 

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UPDATE - 11
Last Update me dosto aapne dekha ki rahul Anjana ko mujhe door se bahr le jane ko bolte hai , tabhi achanak bahut jyada power use krne ke karan Anjana ke pair kaam krne bnd kr dete hai aur wo gir jati h . Aur aakhir me mai rahul ko Anajan ko bahar le jane ko bolta hu . Unke jane ke baad sare statue mere pr attack kr dete h aur tabhi achanak se mere same kuch screen dikhayi deti h sath me aawaje bhi sunayi deti h aur mujhe player banane ka puchti h so mai ha kr deta hu .

AB AAGE....

[ ! ALARM ]
[ WELCOME , PLAYER ]

AAAHHH........


HUHHHH......HUHHHH....
HUHHHH........ HUHHH.....

DAKKKKK.... DAKKKKKK.....DAKKK..... DAKKKK.....

Mai jldi se jaag jata hu , meri puri body pasine se bhigi hui thi . Aur mai bahut jor jor se sanse le raha hota hu mere dil ki dhadkan bhi bahut tej chl rahi hoti h. Mai apne right hath apne chest pr dil ke paas rak leta hu aur normal karne ke kosis karta hu .


" Ek dream ? "

" Kya ye ak dream tha ? "

Ye bol kr Mai apne chro taraf dekhta hu to akdam shocked 😲 ho jata hu Qki mai us statue wale room me nahi tha mai to kisi bed pe tha aur dekhne se lag raha tha mai kisi hospital me hu .


" Hospital ? "


CHUUUUUU.............

Aur tabhi room ka door open hota h aur 2 aadmi black nd white suite Boot me andar mere taraf aate h . Aur unme se ak aadmi bolta h ...


" To aakhirkar tumhe ab hose aa hi gaya ? "

Mai " tum kon ho ? "

1st man " mujhe maaf kr dena agr hmne tmko surprised kr diya ho to . "

Ye bol ke 1st man ne ak card meri taraf aage kiya aur m use ke kr dekhne lagta hu . Aur kahta hu .

" Indian Hunter guild ke inspectors ... "
" Inspectors mujhe q dekhne aaye h ..?"

Tb mujhe wo inspectors batate hai ki mai 3din se behos pada hua tha . Ye sun ke mai akdam shocked 😲 ho jata hu ..

" Kya ? Mai 3din se behos tha ? "

Tbhi mujhe Rahul , Anjana aur baki sb ki yaad aati h aur m inspectors se puchta hu ..

" Miss Anjana aur Mr Rahul unka kya hua ? "
" Kya wo surakshit hai ? "

1st inspector " ha wo surakshit hai lakin ..."

" Mr Rahul ka kata hua hath ab se unke kaam me baadha banega to wo ab retired ho jayenge jaha tk mujhe lgta h . "
"Aur Hunter miss Anjana ka abhi bhi ilaj chl rha h Qki unhe bhut hi gahra sadma laga hai. "
" Kuch kah nhi sakte ki wo aage bhi Hunter rakhengi ya nahi !! "

2nd inspector " aur baki ke Hunter jaise Mr Rohan ..... "

Abhi wo aage kuch bolta tbhi mai bich me hi bol deta hu ..

" Nahi ..... "
" Thik h !! "
" Itna kafi hai . "

Qki mujhe un sb ka waha se hme akela chor ke bhag jana yaad aane lagta h .

1st inspector " to kul 6 log hi double layer me bach paye hai . "
" Mai janta hu hunter hr time hi khtre me rahte hai . Lakin aisa hatyaakaand hona bhut hi rare hai ... "


" Jb inspectors aur white tiger guild wale us jagah phuche , "
" Tb tk sare ja chuke the "
" Waha us room me kewal tum hi the jo ki vedee pr lete hue the . "
" Koi bhi statue ya kuch bhi aisa ni mila jaisa baki sb ne bataya tha . "

Mai ( shock se ) " aisa nahi ho skta hai ? "

1st inspector " hme kud is baat pr Vishwas nahi ho raha tha . "
" yadi jeevit bache logon kee gavaahee mein thoda bhee antar hota "
" ya yadi mare hue logo ke shareer ke kuchh ang vahaan nahi pae jaate hain, to hamane ek alag spashteekaran ke baare mein socha hota .. "
" Ye bs hamari soch hai lakin .... "

Meri taraf ghur ke dekhte hue..
" Hame lagta h ki tmne DOUBLE AWAKEING payi hai "

Mai ( sadme se mn me sochta hu ) ' DOUBLE AWAKEING '


~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Aap logo ko DOUBLE AWAKEING ke bare me bata deta hu phle .
Ak hunter ki stats fix ho jate hai jb uski AWAKENING ( power jagna ) hoti hai .
Lakin kuch hunters aise bhi hoti h jinki AWAKEING ak baar fir se hoti h phli baar hone ke baad .
Aise kai se example dekhne ke mile hai jinme C Rank ka Hunter directly A Rank ke Hunter me chla jata h aur A RANK ka direct S rank me qki unki power dubara jagti h .

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Mere samne ak instrument rakhte hue jiske bich me thik upar ak dark blue color ka crystal laga hua tha aur usase ak wire nikli hui thi jo kisi remot jaise device se connect thi usi me power ki reading dikhti thi .


1st inspector " ye ak magic power ka pata lagane wala instrument hai

" Tmhe bs is mana crystal pr apna hath rakhna hai "

Aur iske baad wo inspector sochne lagta hai ..
' agr waha such me aise death level ke monster the to normal huntur unse bilkul nahi bach sakte the . '
' kewal A Rank aur S Rank ke Hunter hi ek sath mil kr aise situation ka hal nikal skte hai . '
' lakin we sare monster akdam se gayab ho gaye '
' ye dekhne ke baad ki Mr Rider waha akele huntur the jo jinda rahe aise me ye namumkin hai ki aise situation m hum Mr Rider pr shak na kre ki unko DOUBLE AWAKEING na mili ho . '

Wo ye sb soch raha tha aur mai tb tk apna R8 hath us mana crystal pr rakh cuka tha aur wo crystal bilkul na kr barabar chmkne laga .

PEE PEE PEE PEE PEE........

Wo inspector ye aawaj sun kr device ke taraf dekhta h aur uske screen pr bs mana reading bs 10 hi show kr rahi thi .


Ye sb dekh kr mai sochta hu ....
' mere khyal se kabaad , kabaad hi rahega aaj bhi aur aage aane wale samay me bhi '
' ak sbse khrab E Rank HUNTER ka bhi mana reading km se km 70hota h . '

Mai inspector se puchta hu " result kya raha ? "

Inspector " dekh ke aisa lagta h hm bekar me tumhare upar sandeh kr rahe the . "

DUDDDDD.........

wo dono inspector aaps me baat krte hue room se chle jate h . Aur m unhe jate hue dekh kr sochta hu ' mtlb kuch nahi hua ? '

' lekin kya un logon ko isakee jaanakaaree nahin hai? '

Mai ye sb soch hi raha tha ki tabhi ......

DING........


[ MASSAGE ]
[ You have unread mail ]

mere samne hawa me ak screen open ho jati h , Aur m kud se bolta hu ' kya undono ko ye screen nahi dikhi thi ? '


Aur mera dhyan mere left leg pr jata h aur ye kya ......
Mere kata hua pair ab thik h . Aur mere dil ki dhadkan ab thik h .
Mai abhi kuch nahi bata skta kya such hai ? Aur kya Sapna hai ?

Mai hawa me open hue screen ki taraf dekh kr ....
" kya mujhe un logo ko ye sb bata dena chahiye ? "
" Ki mai kya dekh skta hu ! "

Aur us screen ko touch krne ke liye apne ak ungli aage badhata hu aur screen ko touch krke kud se bolta hu " sayad ye touch screen nahi h ! "

CHUUUUU................

abhi mai apne bed pr khada ho kr us screen ko hawa me touch krne ki kosis krta hu tabhi ek bhut hi cute nd beautiful ladki school uniform me mere room me aa kr mujhe aisa krte Hue dekh kr confused ho jati h aur kahti h ..


" Bhai tum kya kr rahe ho ? "
" Kahi tmhare sir me bhi to chot nahi lagi h ? "

Ji ha ye koi aur nahi meri choti sister Kavya hi thi Aur mere bed ke paas aa kr mujhe gusse se chillate hue bolti h ..

Kavya " Kya maine tumse nahi kaha tha ki ab aur chot khana bnd kr do ? "
" Tmhe pata bhi hai mai kitna dar gayi thi tmhare liye ? "

Mai ( uski eye me dekh kr ) " sorry .. "

Kavya " dusre baki to safe bahar aa gaye to hamesa tm hi q chot khaa kr bahar aate ho ? "
"
Wo ye sb bole ja rahi thi aur m soch raha tha ' mujhe yakin nahi ho raha h , maine almost isko akela chor hi diya tha ! '
' mujhe abhi bhi nahi lag raha h ki mai us sapne se bahr aa paya hu abhi tk , lakin .... '

Kavya " kya tmhe smjh me aaya ? Agr tmhe ak aur baar chot lagi to mai study krna chor dungi uski jagah job krne lagungi taki tum ye Hunter ka job chor sako . "

Mai ( kavya se screen ki taraf isara krke ) " kavya !! "
" Kya tmhe ye dikh raha h ? "

Kavya ( confused 😕 ho kr ) " kya ? "

Mai smjh jata hu ise bhi ye screen nahi dikh rahi h mtkb sayad sirf mai hi ise dekh skta hu .
To mai usase aage bolta hu ( screen ki taraf dekhte hue ) ..
" Ohhh !! "
" Agar kisi game me koi unread mail pada ho to .."
" Tum kaise use read kr skte ho ? "

Kavya ( chinta aur confus ho kr ) " pakka na tumhare sir me chot nahi lagi h na ? "

Mai na me gardan hila deta hu .
To kavya kahti h " well ! Tmhe phle mail box ko open krna hoga "

Mai " mail box ko open kro ? "

Aur mere bolne se hi agle pal screen ka massage open ho gaya .


{ [ MASSAGE ]
[ Welcome player ( unread ) ]
[ Daily Quest : Prepared to become strong , Has arrived ( unread ) ] }

Screen pr ye likha hua tha sath me ye mujhe sunayi bhi de raha tha . Ye sb dekh kr mai soch raha hota hu .
Tabhi kavya puchti h " kyu ! Kya huaa? "

Mai use aise hi idhar udhar ki bate bata kr kuch nahi batata . Tb wo khti b ..

Kavya " acha mai ab ja rahi hu . "

Mai " thik hai . "

Uske baad wo room se bahr chli jati h . Room se bahr aa kr wo apne ak frnd jo ki usi ke sath aayi thi ko bolti h " chlo hm chalte hai . "
Aur wo dono chle jati h .

Jbki idhar mai apne bed pr is system ko smjhne ki kosis krta hu . Mere samne ak ak krke kai screen hawa me open ho jata h .

DING.......
DING.......
DING.......


1st screen ...

[ ALARM !]
[ The system will help the 'players' growth. ]

2nd screen...

[ ALARM !]
[ If he fails to obey the system's order . Their may be a penalty. ]

3rd screen....

[ ALARM ! ]
[ Your rewards have arrived.]

Ye sb padh kr mai kud se kahta hu " mujhe to kuch smjh hi nahi aa raha h ye sb kahna kya cahte hai ."
Jb mai ye sb ke bare me dekh aur soch raha tha tabhi mujhe yaad aaya h maine aisa hi kuch milta julta tb bhi dekha tha jb m vedee pr leta hua tha . Jo ki kuch aisa tha...

{ [ ALARM ! ]
[ You have completed all the necessary requirements of the SECRET QUEST " COURAGE OF THE WEAK " ] }

Tbhi ak new screen aati hai aur mai use dekhne lg jata hu.

DING......

[ MASSAGE ]
[ Daily Quest : preparing to become strong ]
[ Has arrived ( unread ) ]

Mai " preparing to become strong. Ab ye kya h ? "
" Check kro ise "

Mere itna Bolte hi ak new big screen open hoti h .

{ [ QUEST DIRECTION ]
Daily Quest - Getting ready to become powerful

GOLE

[ Push-ups ( 0/100 ) incomplete ]
[ Curl-ups ( 0/100 ) incomplete ]
[ Squats ( 0/100 ) incomplete ]
[ Running ( 0/10Km ) incomplete ]

Warning : - Failing to complete the daily Quest will bring a panishment associated with the quest. }

Aur sbse last me ak watch ⌚ bani hui thi jisme count down chl rahi thi .

Ye sb dekh kr mai kud se bolta hu ..
" Hahaha .... Ye sb kya hai ? "
" Ye ak majak hai . Hai ki nahi ? "
" Mere jaisa koi jo ki hospital me admit hai wo ye sb kaise kr skta hai ? "
" Mai ise baad me dekhunga . "
" Jb mai so kr uth jaunga tb . "

Aur mai apne bed pr let jata hu , aur so jata hu .
Lakin screen me jo watch thi iska timer chlta rahta h uska colour phle greens se yellow fir jb time khtam hone wala hota h to red colour me change ho jata h .
Aur jb time khtam ho jata h tb an new screen aati h ...

DING.....

[ALARM ]
[ Aapne Daily Quest ko pura nahi kiya . Ab aapko " PENALTY ZONE " me jana hoga ak nirdharit time ke liye .]

ZIKKKKKK.....ZIKKKKK....

achanak se mera bed hilne lagta h mai apni eye open krta hu aur tabhi mujhe lagta h mere niche ki jamin bahut tej hil rahi hai

Mai " earth quake ye kaise aa gaya ? "

CRACK...... CRACK......

Mai bed se niche gir jata hu aur mere niche ka floor tutne lagta h aur kuch second me hi mai dekhta hu mai floor pr nahi blki ret mai baitha hu .
Mai turant samne dekhta hu aur akdam shocked 😲 ho jata hu QKI mai achanak se hospital se registan me aa gaya tha mere chro taraf ret hi ret thi aur samne suraj tha .

Mai ( shocked ho kr ) " ye jagah ...."
" Ak registan ! "
" nahi ye nahi ho skta . Mai pakka koi spna dekh raha hu !! "

SISSSS.................

Tabhi mujhe mere piche ret ke girne ki aawaj sunayi deti h aur mai dhire se piche mud kr dekhta hu.
Aur bahut jayada dar jata hu QKI ret me se ak bahut bada , jahrile nakhun wala registani Bicchu nikla tha .
Sath me ak screen bhi open hoti h

DING......

{ [ QUEST DIRECTION ]
[ PENALTY QUEST : JINDA BACHE RAHNA ]

GOLE : time khtam hone tk jinda bache rahna.

[ Time required : 4 hour ]
[ Time remaining : 3H 59Min 55Sec] }


Ye sb sun kr mai darte hue smile krne ki kosis krta hu aur us bicchu ki taraf dekh kr kahta hu jo ki apni lambhi jib nikal kr mujhe hi dekh raha tha " tum majak kar rahe ho na ... ? "






Aaj ke liye bs itna hi dosto !!
Aapke review nd suggestions ka wait rahega comments ke through !!

Apna pyar aise hi banaye rakhiye !!
Shandar update bro aur is baar update bada tha toh maza aya ha ha ha rider ne mazak mai liya toh lag gayi lanka 😀😀😎😎
 

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Superb story bro... keep posting
Thank you bro .
Keep supporting ☺️
 

Itachi_Uchiha

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Shandar update bro aur is baar update bada tha toh maza aya ha ha ha rider ne mazak mai liya toh lag gayi lanka 😀😀😎😎
Sahi kaha Lanka lag gayi . Riderbhi smjh gaya system se majak nahi
 

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UPDATE - 11
Last Update me dosto aapne dekha ki rahul Anjana ko mujhe door se bahr le jane ko bolte hai , tabhi achanak bahut jyada power use krne ke karan Anjana ke pair kaam krne bnd kr dete hai aur wo gir jati h . Aur aakhir me mai rahul ko Anajan ko bahar le jane ko bolta hu . Unke jane ke baad sare statue mere pr attack kr dete h aur tabhi achanak se mere same kuch screen dikhayi deti h sath me aawaje bhi sunayi deti h aur mujhe player banane ka puchti h so mai ha kr deta hu .

AB AAGE....

[ ! ALARM ]
[ WELCOME , PLAYER ]

AAAHHH........

HUHHHH......HUHHHH....
HUHHHH........ HUHHH.....

DAKKKKK.... DAKKKKKK.....DAKKK..... DAKKKK.....

Mai jldi se jaag jata hu , meri puri body pasine se bhigi hui thi . Aur mai bahut jor jor se sanse le raha hota hu mere dil ki dhadkan bhi bahut tej chl rahi hoti h. Mai apne right hath apne chest pr dil ke paas rak leta hu aur normal karne ke kosis karta hu .


" Ek dream ? "
" Kya ye ak dream tha ? "

Ye bol kr Mai apne chro taraf dekhta hu to akdam shocked 😲 ho jata hu Qki mai us statue wale room me nahi tha mai to kisi bed pe tha aur dekhne se lag raha tha mai kisi hospital me hu .

" Hospital ? "

CHUUUUUU.............

Aur tabhi room ka door open hota h aur 2 aadmi black nd white suite Boot me andar mere taraf aate h . Aur unme se ak aadmi bolta h ...


" To aakhirkar tumhe ab hose aa hi gaya ? "

Mai " tum kon ho ? "

1st man " mujhe maaf kr dena agr hmne tmko surprised kr diya ho to . "

Ye bol ke 1st man ne ak card meri taraf aage kiya aur m use ke kr dekhne lagta hu . Aur kahta hu .

" Indian Hunter guild ke inspectors ... "
" Inspectors mujhe q dekhne aaye h ..?"

Tb mujhe wo inspectors batate hai ki mai 3din se behos pada hua tha . Ye sun ke mai akdam shocked 😲 ho jata hu ..

" Kya ? Mai 3din se behos tha ? "

Tbhi mujhe Rahul , Anjana aur baki sb ki yaad aati h aur m inspectors se puchta hu ..


" Miss Anjana aur Mr Rahul unka kya hua ? "
" Kya wo surakshit hai ? "

1st inspector " ha wo surakshit hai lakin ..."

" Mr Rahul ka kata hua hath ab se unke kaam me baadha banega to wo ab retired ho jayenge jaha tk mujhe lgta h . "
"Aur Hunter miss Anjana ka abhi bhi ilaj chl rha h Qki unhe bhut hi gahra sadma laga hai. "
" Kuch kah nhi sakte ki wo aage bhi Hunter rakhengi ya nahi !! "

2nd inspector " aur baki ke Hunter jaise Mr Rohan ..... "

Abhi wo aage kuch bolta tbhi mai bich me hi bol deta hu ..

" Nahi ..... "
" Thik h !! "
" Itna kafi hai . "

Qki mujhe un sb ka waha se hme akela chor ke bhag jana yaad aane lagta h .


1st inspector " to kul 6 log hi double layer me bach paye hai . "
" Mai janta hu hunter hr time hi khtre me rahte hai . Lakin aisa hatyaakaand hona bhut hi rare hai ... "


" Jb inspectors aur white tiger guild wale us jagah phuche , "
" Tb tk sare ja chuke the "
" Waha us room me kewal tum hi the jo ki vedee pr lete hue the . "
" Koi bhi statue ya kuch bhi aisa ni mila jaisa baki sb ne bataya tha . "

Mai ( shock se ) " aisa nahi ho skta hai ? "

1st inspector " hme kud is baat pr Vishwas nahi ho raha tha . "
" yadi jeevit bache logon kee gavaahee mein thoda bhee antar hota "
" ya yadi mare hue logo ke shareer ke kuchh ang vahaan nahi pae jaate hain, to hamane ek alag spashteekaran ke baare mein socha hota .. "
" Ye bs hamari soch hai lakin .... "

Meri taraf ghur ke dekhte hue..
" Hame lagta h ki tmne DOUBLE AWAKEING payi hai "

Mai ( sadme se mn me sochta hu ) ' DOUBLE AWAKEING '


~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Aap logo ko DOUBLE AWAKEING ke bare me bata deta hu phle .
Ak hunter ki stats fix ho jate hai jb uski AWAKENING ( power jagna ) hoti hai .
Lakin kuch hunters aise bhi hoti h jinki AWAKEING ak baar fir se hoti h phli baar hone ke baad .
Aise kai se example dekhne ke mile hai jinme C Rank ka Hunter directly A Rank ke Hunter me chla jata h aur A RANK ka direct S rank me qki unki power dubara jagti h .

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Mere samne ak instrument rakhte hue jiske bich me thik upar ak dark blue color ka crystal laga hua tha aur usase ak wire nikli hui thi jo kisi remot jaise device se connect thi usi me power ki reading dikhti thi .


1st inspector " ye ak magic power ka pata lagane wala instrument hai
" Tmhe bs is mana crystal pr apna hath rakhna hai "

Aur iske baad wo inspector sochne lagta hai ..
' agr waha such me aise death level ke monster the to normal huntur unse bilkul nahi bach sakte the . '
' kewal A Rank aur S Rank ke Hunter hi ek sath mil kr aise situation ka hal nikal skte hai . '
' lakin we sare monster akdam se gayab ho gaye '
' ye dekhne ke baad ki Mr Rider waha akele huntur the jo jinda rahe aise me ye namumkin hai ki aise situation m hum Mr Rider pr shak na kre ki unko DOUBLE AWAKEING na mili ho . '


Wo ye sb soch raha tha aur mai tb tk apna R8 hath us mana crystal pr rakh cuka tha aur wo crystal bilkul na kr barabar chmkne laga .

PEE PEE PEE PEE PEE........

Wo inspector ye aawaj sun kr device ke taraf dekhta h aur uske screen pr bs mana reading bs 10 hi show kr rahi thi .


Ye sb dekh kr mai sochta hu ....
' mere khyal se kabaad , kabaad hi rahega aaj bhi aur aage aane wale samay me bhi '
' ak sbse khrab E Rank HUNTER ka bhi mana reading km se km 70hota h . '

Mai inspector se puchta hu " result kya raha ? "


Inspector " dekh ke aisa lagta h hm bekar me tumhare upar sandeh kr rahe the . "

DUDDDDD.........

wo dono inspector aaps me baat krte hue room se chle jate h . Aur m unhe jate hue dekh kr sochta hu ' mtlb kuch nahi hua ? '

' lekin kya un logon ko isakee jaanakaaree nahin hai? '

Mai ye sb soch hi raha tha ki tabhi ......

DING........


[ MASSAGE ]
[ You have unread mail ]

mere samne hawa me ak screen open ho jati h , Aur m kud se bolta hu ' kya undono ko ye screen nahi dikhi thi ? '

Aur mera dhyan mere left leg pr jata h aur ye kya ......
Mere kata hua pair ab thik h . Aur mere dil ki dhadkan ab thik h .
Mai abhi kuch nahi bata skta kya such hai ? Aur kya Sapna hai ?

Mai hawa me open hue screen ki taraf dekh kr ....
" kya mujhe un logo ko ye sb bata dena chahiye ? "
" Ki mai kya dekh skta hu ! "


Aur us screen ko touch krne ke liye apne ak ungli aage badhata hu aur screen ko touch krke kud se bolta hu " sayad ye touch screen nahi h ! "

CHUUUUU................

abhi mai apne bed pr khada ho kr us screen ko hawa me touch krne ki kosis krta hu tabhi ek bhut hi cute nd beautiful ladki school uniform me mere room me aa kr mujhe aisa krte Hue dekh kr confused ho jati h aur kahti h ..


" Bhai tum kya kr rahe ho ? "
" Kahi tmhare sir me bhi to chot nahi lagi h ? "

Ji ha ye koi aur nahi meri choti sister Kavya hi thi Aur mere bed ke paas aa kr mujhe gusse se chillate hue bolti h ..

Kavya " Kya maine tumse nahi kaha tha ki ab aur chot khana bnd kr do ? "
" Tmhe pata bhi hai mai kitna dar gayi thi tmhare liye ? "

Mai ( uski eye me dekh kr ) " sorry .. "

Kavya " dusre baki to safe bahar aa gaye to hamesa tm hi q chot khaa kr bahar aate ho ? "
"
Wo ye sb bole ja rahi thi aur m soch raha tha ' mujhe yakin nahi ho raha h , maine almost isko akela chor hi diya tha ! '
' mujhe abhi bhi nahi lag raha h ki mai us sapne se bahr aa paya hu abhi tk , lakin .... '

Kavya " kya tmhe smjh me aaya ? Agr tmhe ak aur baar chot lagi to mai study krna chor dungi uski jagah job krne lagungi taki tum ye Hunter ka job chor sako . "

Mai ( kavya se screen ki taraf isara krke ) " kavya !! "
" Kya tmhe ye dikh raha h ? "

Kavya ( confused 😕 ho kr ) " kya ? "

Mai smjh jata hu ise bhi ye screen nahi dikh rahi h mtkb sayad sirf mai hi ise dekh skta hu .
To mai usase aage bolta hu ( screen ki taraf dekhte hue ) ..
" Ohhh !! "
" Agar kisi game me koi unread mail pada ho to .."
" Tum kaise use read kr skte ho ? "

Kavya ( chinta aur confus ho kr ) " pakka na tumhare sir me chot nahi lagi h na ? "

Mai na me gardan hila deta hu .
To kavya kahti h " well ! Tmhe phle mail box ko open krna hoga "

Mai " mail box ko open kro ? "

Aur mere bolne se hi agle pal screen ka massage open ho gaya .



{ [ MASSAGE ]
[ Welcome player ( unread ) ]
[ Daily Quest : Prepared to become strong , Has arrived ( unread ) ] }

Screen pr ye likha hua tha sath me ye mujhe sunayi bhi de raha tha . Ye sb dekh kr mai soch raha hota hu .
Tabhi kavya puchti h " kyu ! Kya huaa? "

Mai use aise hi idhar udhar ki bate bata kr kuch nahi batata . Tb wo khti b ..

Kavya " acha mai ab ja rahi hu . "

Mai " thik hai . "

Uske baad wo room se bahr chli jati h . Room se bahr aa kr wo apne ak frnd jo ki usi ke sath aayi thi ko bolti h " chlo hm chalte hai . "
Aur wo dono chle jati h .

Jbki idhar mai apne bed pr is system ko smjhne ki kosis krta hu . Mere samne ak ak krke kai screen hawa me open ho jata h .


DING.......
DING.......
DING.......


1st screen ...
[ ALARM !]
[ The system will help the 'players' growth. ]

2nd screen...
[ ALARM !]
[ If he fails to obey the system's order . Their may be a penalty. ]

3rd screen....
[ ALARM ! ]
[ Your rewards have arrived.]

Ye sb padh kr mai kud se kahta hu " mujhe to kuch smjh hi nahi aa raha h ye sb kahna kya cahte hai ."
Jb mai ye sb ke bare me dekh aur soch raha tha tabhi mujhe yaad aaya h maine aisa hi kuch milta julta tb bhi dekha tha jb m vedee pr leta hua tha . Jo ki kuch aisa tha...


{ [ ALARM ! ]
[ You have completed all the necessary requirements of the SECRET QUEST " COURAGE OF THE WEAK " ] }

Tbhi ak new screen aati hai aur mai use dekhne lg jata hu.

DING......

[ MASSAGE ]
[ Daily Quest : preparing to become strong ]
[ Has arrived ( unread ) ]

Mai " preparing to become strong. Ab ye kya h ? "
" Check kro ise "

Mere itna Bolte hi ak new big screen open hoti h .


{ [ QUEST DIRECTION ]
Daily Quest - Getting ready to become powerful

GOLE

[ Push-ups ( 0/100 ) incomplete ]
[ Curl-ups ( 0/100 ) incomplete ]
[ Squats ( 0/100 ) incomplete ]
[ Running ( 0/10Km ) incomplete ]

Warning : - Failing to complete the daily Quest will bring a panishment associated with the quest. }

Aur sbse last me ak watch ⌚ bani hui thi jisme count down chl rahi thi .

Ye sb dekh kr mai kud se bolta hu ..
" Hahaha .... Ye sb kya hai ? "
" Ye ak majak hai . Hai ki nahi ? "
" Mere jaisa koi jo ki hospital me admit hai wo ye sb kaise kr skta hai ? "
" Mai ise baad me dekhunga . "
" Jb mai so kr uth jaunga tb . "

Aur mai apne bed pr let jata hu , aur so jata hu .
Lakin screen me jo watch thi iska timer chlta rahta h uska colour phle greens se yellow fir jb time khtam hone wala hota h to red colour me change ho jata h .
Aur jb time khtam ho jata h tb an new screen aati h ...


DING.....

[ALARM ]
[ Aapne Daily Quest ko pura nahi kiya . Ab aapko " PENALTY ZONE " me jana hoga ak nirdharit time ke liye .]

ZIKKKKKK.....ZIKKKKK....

achanak se mera bed hilne lagta h mai apni eye open krta hu aur tabhi mujhe lagta h mere niche ki jamin bahut tej hil rahi hai

Mai " earth quake ye kaise aa gaya ? "


CRACK...... CRACK......

Mai bed se niche gir jata hu aur mere niche ka floor tutne lagta h aur kuch second me hi mai dekhta hu mai floor pr nahi blki ret mai baitha hu .
Mai turant samne dekhta hu aur akdam shocked 😲 ho jata hu QKI mai achanak se hospital se registan me aa gaya tha mere chro taraf ret hi ret thi aur samne suraj tha .

Mai ( shocked ho kr ) " ye jagah ...."
" Ak registan ! "
" nahi ye nahi ho skta . Mai pakka koi spna dekh raha hu !! "


SISSSS.................

Tabhi mujhe mere piche ret ke girne ki aawaj sunayi deti h aur mai dhire se piche mud kr dekhta hu.
Aur bahut jayada dar jata hu QKI ret me se ak bahut bada , jahrile nakhun wala registani Bicchu nikla tha .
Sath me ak screen bhi open hoti h


DING......

{ [ QUEST DIRECTION ]
[ PENALTY QUEST : JINDA BACHE RAHNA ]

GOLE : time khtam hone tk jinda bache rahna.

[ Time required : 4 hour ]
[ Time remaining : 3H 59Min 55Sec] }


Ye sb sun kr mai darte hue smile krne ki kosis krta hu aur us bicchu ki taraf dekh kr kahta hu jo ki apni lambhi jib nikal kr mujhe hi dekh raha tha " tum majak kar rahe ho na ... ? "






Aaj ke liye bs itna hi dosto !!
Aapke review nd suggestions ka wait rahega comments ke through !!

Apna pyar aise hi banaye rakhiye !!
Nice story bhai waiting for next update
 

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UPDATE - 1

Delhi , India

Mera name RIDER hai aur mai Ak E-Rank HUNTER hu.
yadi aap meree thodee asaamaany strength aur regeneration ko najar andaaj karate hain to mujhe khud ko hunter kahana me bhee sharm lagta h .
Mai itta weak hu Jiske karan Hamesa hi mujhe bahut baar chote lagi hai aur kai baar to nearly death ka experience kiya h.

Ak aisa kaam jisme aapke life and death ke bich bs ak line ka anter ho use hunter kahte h , aur mai ye job is liye nahi karta qki ye mujhe pasand hai ....!
Mai badi muskil se apni bimar maa ke medical bills ko pay kr pata hu jo mujhe HUNTER GUILD pay krta h is kaam ke liye isi liye mai ye kaam krta hu .
Ak aam insan ke liye jiske paas koi particular talent na ho , aise me mere paas aur koi choice nahi h siway hunter banane ke.


Ak construction site in delhi....

Ak food truck khada tha aur uske aas paas bahut se log tea nd breakfast kr rahe the....

Food truck wala ak customer se ..
"Ye rahi tmhari tea nd good luck tmhare aaj ke raid ke liye."

Coustomer "thanks"

Tabhi piche se koi us coustomer ko aawaj deta h " hey Rohan ! "
" Bahut samay ho gaye tmse mile hue "

Rohan " are abhi tm yaha kya kar rahe ho ? Tmne to chor diya tha na tha na qki tm hunter nahi banana cahte the !! "

Abhi " actually meri wife 2nd time pregnant hai , ha ha..."

Rohan " sahi kaha raid ke jaisa kuch nahi h jaha aap apni kismat aajma skte ho "

Abhi " jindgi jina aasan nahi hai . Mujhe fikar hai ki ... Itna kafi time bita gaya h kahi mai piche na rah jau "
" Meri skill phle se hi khrab hai , aur ab to wo aur khrab ho gayi h itte time ke break ke karan jo maine liya h "

Tabhi samne se kuch aawaj aati h ...

" Rider tum aa gaye ! "
" Rider aane ke liye sukriya "
"Bahar thand hai na ? "

Rider " haha ... aisa kuch nahi h , mai aaj bhi tmhare sath hi rahunga "
Wo aadmi " Achi baat hai "

Tabhi Rohan riderko aawaj lagata hai ..
" rider tmne ab tk breakfast kiya ? "

Rider " haa Mr Rohan maine khaa liya , mere bare me fikar krne ke liye sukriya "

Itta kah kr rider aage nikal jata hai aur abhi use dekh kr Rohan se puchta hai..
"Kya ye ladka powerful hunter hai ? Har koi ise dekh kr bahut happy hai !"

Rohan " hehehehe.... Tm ise nahi jante qki jb tmne chora tha ye uske baad aaya hai . Iska nike name hai WORLD WEAKEST "

Abhi " kya duniya me sbse kamjor ? na ki sbse powerful!! "

Rohan " bro tabhi to aise logo ko hm S - Rank hunter kahte hai . Rider unmen sbse weak hai "
"Mera matlab hai ki wo itta weak hai ki wo E rank ke Dengoun se bhi hurt ho jata h "

Abhi " kya such me wo itta weak hai "

Rohan " haa !! Mere hisab se to wo hm sb me sbse weak hai "

Abhi " kya such me !!"

Rohan " ha iska mtlb hai humara Dengoun iske aane ke baad se weak ho gaya h "

Abhi " ahhh !! Aisa hai kya "

Rohan " hay ! Sayad wo hame sun skta hai hame. Is baat ko hm yahi khtam krte hai fu fu..."

(Ab Rider ke views se story )

Mai apne mn me 'mai suru se sb sun raha hu you old geezers '

Mai food truck ke paas chla jata hu usse bolta hu " kya mujhe ak cup coffee milegi ?"

Food truck wala " are hunter rider .. I m sorry , bs abhi kuch der phle hi sari coffee khtam ho gayi "

Mai bad feel karte hue sochta hu coffee bhi ni mili..

Food truck wala " I m really sorry rider coffee khtam hone ke liye "

Mai " koi baat nahi "


Aur m waha se aage chla jata hu .
Kuch der chalne ke baad ak ladki ki aawaj aati h " rider tmko fir se chot lag gayi !! "

Mai " ohh hi ! Aisa lagta h miss Anjana bhi raid me sath chl rahi h ?"

Anjana " of course , lakin problem ye nahi h ! Tmhare face pr fir se chot kaise lagi ?"

Mai " pata nahi .... Sayad tb laga hoga jb mai hunting kr raha hunga haha..."

Anjana " really..ab such such batao kya huaa tha. Kya tm hospital bhi gaye the ?"

Mai " ha mai gaya tha . Hm sb ak E rank dungeon me the aur mai akela hi jise chot lagi "

Anjana " huh ? Ye kaise ho gaya ?"

Mai " baki dusre hunter mere se higher ranked ke the to wo apne sath ak bhi healer nahi le gaye the "

Anjana " fir bhi wo bs is liye healer nahi le gaye qki unko lagta tha wo safe rahenge "

Mai " it's ok , ye sb is liye huaa qki mai weak hu , mujhe in sb ki aadat ho gayi h miss Anjana bhi ye baat janti h ,right ? "
" Well lagta h sb log gate ke ander jane ke liye ready h hme bhi chlna cahiye ..."

Anjana " ok "


Hm sb gate ke samne ikatha ho gaye the tabhi ak aadmi bich me ja kr sbke samne kahta hai " sun log suniye . Hm sb hunting pr jane ko taiyar aur khush hai , mai ye kahane ke liye qualified to nahi hu pr fhir bhi mai is raid ke liye party ka leader banane ko ready hu , isme aap me se kisi ko koi dikkat to nahi hai ?"

Rohan " Mr Rahul aap yaha present sb logo me sbse high rank wale h mujhe aapke leader bananese koi problem nahi hai "

Abhi " well Mr Rahul hame aap pr pura yakin hai . Mujhe bahut time ho gaya h aapke skills dekhe hue "

Baki sb log bhi Bolte hai
"Mai aapke leader banane se sahmat hu "
"Mai bhi "
" Meri bhi haa hai "

Mai " hamara dhyan rakhiyega Mr Rahul"

Rahul " all right to hm chlte hai Dungeon me "
Aur sb chl dete hai gate ke ander tb chlte chlte Mr Rahul mujhse kahte hai " Mr rider kosis karna hamare piche chot mt khaa jana "
Mai haste huee " haha okay"

Anjana " rider jldi chlo "

Mai " ha chlo "

Mai chlte huee kud se kahta hu 'mai aaj apna best karne ki kosis karunga '




aaj ke liye itta hi .
Bhai log 1st story hai to koi bhi problem ya suggestions ho comments krke jarur bataiyega . Bs aapka pyar milte rahe story jarur complete hogi enjoy story....
Mast he or meri favourite bhi sir thank you and thoda masala bhi dalana sir ilke you
 

Sameer

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UPDATE 2
Aise krte huee sb gate ke ander chale jate h . Waha bs food truck wale hi bachte h .

Tabhi ak food truck wala 1st food truck wale se puchta hai " tm kya soch rahe ho ?"

1st food truck wala " mai bs hunter rider ke bare me soch kr paresan hu , ki hum use coffee bhi nahi de paye "

2nd food truck wala " acha , wahi hunter na jo E category me sbse weakest hunter hai ? Is Dungeon ka rank kya hai ? "

1sy food truck wala gate ki taraf dekhte hue " wo kah rahe the ye ak D rank Dungeon ke barabar hai "
" Jb se main kaam kar raha hu, maine hunter rider ko kabhi bhi bina chot lage is hunter guild me nahi dekha hai "

2nd food truck wala " ak D rank Dungeon , well kuch bura hoga aisa mt socho , chalo hm chlte hai !!"


D rank Dungeon ke ander ak jagah mai niche baitha huaa tha . Mujhe kai jagah chot lagi hui thi aur anjana mujhe heal kr rahi thi qki Anjana ak healer thi . Uske hatho se green colour ke anergy ka gola nikalta hai aur mujhe heal krna start kr deta hai .

Wo heal krte hue mujhse bolti hai " rider tum hunter ka kaam chor q nahi dete .."
"Is tarah fight krne se to tum kewal kud ke liye risk bada rahe ho "

Mai " sorry "

Anjana " maine tumhe ye is liye nahi kah rahi hu ki tm mujhse mafi mango ."
Meri aankho me dekhte hue " Mujhe bs tmhari fikar hai "

Humse hi kuch duri pr baki sb members monster se fight kr rahe the . Rahul apne fire ability to use kr raha tha , Rohan apni sward se monster ko tukdo me cut kr raha tha , aise hi sb log apni apni power ka use krke monster ko maar rahe the .

Kuch der baad Anjana kahti hai " aakhirkar ye raid to khatam to hui "

Anjana abhi bhi mere knee ko heal kr rahi thi , mai piche mud kr dekhta hu to fight end ho gayi thi aur sare log aapas me bate kr rahe the .

Rohan abhi se majak karte hue kahta h " are Abhi, tm abhi tk mare nahi !!"

Abhi " nahi ye to mere liye bhut aasan tha "

Tabhi rahul kahta h " lagta h sb monster mar cuke hai ab yaha karne ko kuch nahi h "

Mai ye sb sun hi raha tha ki abhi Anjana kahti h " raider tumhare paas koi ak reason hai ki tum hunter ka kaam na choro ? "

Mai " mai hunter bs is liye bna hu qki mujhe isme maza aata h , agar mai ye kaam na kru to mai actually bore ho ke mar jaunga "
Mai apne mn me sochta hu ' agar maine Anjana ko such bataunga to mujhe aur jyada sharminda hona padega '

Anjana " jaisa ki tm kah rahe ho ki tm maze ke liye krte ho but iske karan two time raid marte hue tmharai jaan jate jate bachi h "

Ye sun kr mai hasne lagta hu aur mujhe hasta huaa dekh kr Anjana gusse se aag babula ho jati h " haso mat , isase tmhare chot wapas se ubhar aayenge "

Mai bs apni gardan haa me hila deta hu


Sb wapas se ak jagah iktha ho jate h tb rahul kahta h " ak monster ko marne ke baad tmlogo ko ye milta h THE MAGICAL CORE "

Ak magical core jo ki ak c rank ke monster ka ho uski kimat thousands me
hoti h !!

Pr Rider ak E rank hunter hai to uske liye C Rank monster ko marna impossible hi hai !!

Mai kud se kahta hu ' itti chot aur paresaniya uthane ke baad mai kewal ak E rank magical core hi earn kr paya '
' jabki maine apni life ko risk pr laga diya tha us hisab se to ye bahut kam hai , is tarah se paise kamana ......'

Mai abhi aage soch hi raha tha ki piche se kisi ki aawaj sunayi deti hai " are sb suno yaha ak aur gate hai ......"

Hm sb jldi se us gate se saamne ja kr khadhe ho jate hai aur dekhne lagte hai

Rahul " ye to Double Lair hai , dekh ke to lagta h ye such me asli hai "

Uske baad Rahul apne hath se fire power ka use krke ak aag ka gola banata hai aur use gufa me fek deta hai , aur us fire se hme pata chlta h ki gufa bahut jyada lambi hai

Fir Rahul kahta hai " ak min sb log meri baat suno " bos ke jinda rahane par get band nahin hota .
Qki gate abhi bhi open hai , to aisa ho skta hai ki boss iske ander hi hoga
Usually hme aise situation me apne guild ko contact krke unhe ye sb batana hoga aur unke order ka wait krna hoga lakin ....
Agr dusre hunters waha tk phle phuch gaye to humara profit km ho jayega
To mai cahta hu ki hm sb ander jaye aur boss ko maar de .
Qki ye bahut kahtarnak kaam hai to hm sare 17log iske liye vote kr leta hai
Aur vote ka result jo bhi ho uske baad koi complaint nahi krega "

Aur abhi apna apna vote dene lage !!

Rohan aur abhi sath me " hum dono fight krenge "

" Nahi "

" Mai chalunga "

" Meri tarf se naa hai "

" Chlo fight krte hai "

Anjana " sorry but mai nahi jana cahti "

Sbke vote hone ke baad Rahul kahta hai " to abhi tk 8:8 vote hue h "

Ab sirf mera vote bacha huaa tha to Rahul mujhse puchta h " tmhara kya kahna h rahul ? "

Sb kuch mere vote pr depends krta h sb meri taraf dekh rahe the aur mai soch raha tha ' mere paas abhi enough money nahi huee hai , jldi hi mujhe meri choti sister ko college bhejna hoga ....'
Aur mujhe meri bimar maa ki aur meri family condition ki yaad aane lagti h

Ye sb sochte hi mai turat bolta hu " mai cahlunga "

Aur sb bol padta hai " bs ak baar aur chlo ye krte hai "







Aaj ke liye itta hi !!
Aapke review nd suggestions ka wait rahega comments ke through .
Apna pyar banaye rakhiye qki aage story bhut achi h abhi bs base ready ho raha h !!
Msst bro kkeep
 

Xabhi

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Last Update me dosto aapne dekha ki rahul Anjana ko mujhe door se bahr le jane ko bolte hai , tabhi achanak bahut jyada power use krne ke karan Anjana ke pair kaam krne bnd kr dete hai aur wo gir jati h . Aur aakhir me mai rahul ko Anajan ko bahar le jane ko bolta hu . Unke jane ke baad sare statue mere pr attack kr dete h aur tabhi achanak se mere same kuch screen dikhayi deti h sath me aawaje bhi sunayi deti h aur mujhe player banane ka puchti h so mai ha kr deta hu .

AB AAGE....

[ ! ALARM ]
[ WELCOME , PLAYER ]

AAAHHH........

HUHHHH......HUHHHH....
HUHHHH........ HUHHH.....

DAKKKKK.... DAKKKKKK.....DAKKK..... DAKKKK.....

Mai jldi se jaag jata hu , meri puri body pasine se bhigi hui thi . Aur mai bahut jor jor se sanse le raha hota hu mere dil ki dhadkan bhi bahut tej chl rahi hoti h. Mai apne right hath apne chest pr dil ke paas rak leta hu aur normal karne ke kosis karta hu .


" Ek dream ? "
" Kya ye ak dream tha ? "

Ye bol kr Mai apne chro taraf dekhta hu to akdam shocked 😲 ho jata hu Qki mai us statue wale room me nahi tha mai to kisi bed pe tha aur dekhne se lag raha tha mai kisi hospital me hu .

" Hospital ? "

CHUUUUUU.............

Aur tabhi room ka door open hota h aur 2 aadmi black nd white suite Boot me andar mere taraf aate h . Aur unme se ak aadmi bolta h ...


" To aakhirkar tumhe ab hose aa hi gaya ? "

Mai " tum kon ho ? "

1st man " mujhe maaf kr dena agr hmne tmko surprised kr diya ho to . "

Ye bol ke 1st man ne ak card meri taraf aage kiya aur m use ke kr dekhne lagta hu . Aur kahta hu .

" Indian Hunter guild ke inspectors ... "
" Inspectors mujhe q dekhne aaye h ..?"

Tb mujhe wo inspectors batate hai ki mai 3din se behos pada hua tha . Ye sun ke mai akdam shocked 😲 ho jata hu ..

" Kya ? Mai 3din se behos tha ? "

Tbhi mujhe Rahul , Anjana aur baki sb ki yaad aati h aur m inspectors se puchta hu ..


" Miss Anjana aur Mr Rahul unka kya hua ? "
" Kya wo surakshit hai ? "

1st inspector " ha wo surakshit hai lakin ..."

" Mr Rahul ka kata hua hath ab se unke kaam me baadha banega to wo ab retired ho jayenge jaha tk mujhe lgta h . "
"Aur Hunter miss Anjana ka abhi bhi ilaj chl rha h Qki unhe bhut hi gahra sadma laga hai. "
" Kuch kah nhi sakte ki wo aage bhi Hunter rakhengi ya nahi !! "

2nd inspector " aur baki ke Hunter jaise Mr Rohan ..... "

Abhi wo aage kuch bolta tbhi mai bich me hi bol deta hu ..

" Nahi ..... "
" Thik h !! "
" Itna kafi hai . "

Qki mujhe un sb ka waha se hme akela chor ke bhag jana yaad aane lagta h .


1st inspector " to kul 6 log hi double layer me bach paye hai . "
" Mai janta hu hunter hr time hi khtre me rahte hai . Lakin aisa hatyaakaand hona bhut hi rare hai ... "


" Jb inspectors aur white tiger guild wale us jagah phuche , "
" Tb tk sare ja chuke the "
" Waha us room me kewal tum hi the jo ki vedee pr lete hue the . "
" Koi bhi statue ya kuch bhi aisa ni mila jaisa baki sb ne bataya tha . "

Mai ( shock se ) " aisa nahi ho skta hai ? "

1st inspector " hme kud is baat pr Vishwas nahi ho raha tha . "
" yadi jeevit bache logon kee gavaahee mein thoda bhee antar hota "
" ya yadi mare hue logo ke shareer ke kuchh ang vahaan nahi pae jaate hain, to hamane ek alag spashteekaran ke baare mein socha hota .. "
" Ye bs hamari soch hai lakin .... "

Meri taraf ghur ke dekhte hue..
" Hame lagta h ki tmne DOUBLE AWAKEING payi hai "

Mai ( sadme se mn me sochta hu ) ' DOUBLE AWAKEING '


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Aap logo ko DOUBLE AWAKEING ke bare me bata deta hu phle .
Ak hunter ki stats fix ho jate hai jb uski AWAKENING ( power jagna ) hoti hai .
Lakin kuch hunters aise bhi hoti h jinki AWAKEING ak baar fir se hoti h phli baar hone ke baad .
Aise kai se example dekhne ke mile hai jinme C Rank ka Hunter directly A Rank ke Hunter me chla jata h aur A RANK ka direct S rank me qki unki power dubara jagti h .

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Mere samne ak instrument rakhte hue jiske bich me thik upar ak dark blue color ka crystal laga hua tha aur usase ak wire nikli hui thi jo kisi remot jaise device se connect thi usi me power ki reading dikhti thi .


1st inspector " ye ak magic power ka pata lagane wala instrument hai
" Tmhe bs is mana crystal pr apna hath rakhna hai "

Aur iske baad wo inspector sochne lagta hai ..
' agr waha such me aise death level ke monster the to normal huntur unse bilkul nahi bach sakte the . '
' kewal A Rank aur S Rank ke Hunter hi ek sath mil kr aise situation ka hal nikal skte hai . '
' lakin we sare monster akdam se gayab ho gaye '
' ye dekhne ke baad ki Mr Rider waha akele huntur the jo jinda rahe aise me ye namumkin hai ki aise situation m hum Mr Rider pr shak na kre ki unko DOUBLE AWAKEING na mili ho . '


Wo ye sb soch raha tha aur mai tb tk apna R8 hath us mana crystal pr rakh cuka tha aur wo crystal bilkul na kr barabar chmkne laga .

PEE PEE PEE PEE PEE........

Wo inspector ye aawaj sun kr device ke taraf dekhta h aur uske screen pr bs mana reading bs 10 hi show kr rahi thi .


Ye sb dekh kr mai sochta hu ....
' mere khyal se kabaad , kabaad hi rahega aaj bhi aur aage aane wale samay me bhi '
' ak sbse khrab E Rank HUNTER ka bhi mana reading km se km 70hota h . '

Mai inspector se puchta hu " result kya raha ? "


Inspector " dekh ke aisa lagta h hm bekar me tumhare upar sandeh kr rahe the . "

DUDDDDD.........

wo dono inspector aaps me baat krte hue room se chle jate h . Aur m unhe jate hue dekh kr sochta hu ' mtlb kuch nahi hua ? '

' lekin kya un logon ko isakee jaanakaaree nahin hai? '

Mai ye sb soch hi raha tha ki tabhi ......

DING........


[ MASSAGE ]
[ You have unread mail ]

mere samne hawa me ak screen open ho jati h , Aur m kud se bolta hu ' kya undono ko ye screen nahi dikhi thi ? '

Aur mera dhyan mere left leg pr jata h aur ye kya ......
Mere kata hua pair ab thik h . Aur mere dil ki dhadkan ab thik h .
Mai abhi kuch nahi bata skta kya such hai ? Aur kya Sapna hai ?

Mai hawa me open hue screen ki taraf dekh kr ....
" kya mujhe un logo ko ye sb bata dena chahiye ? "
" Ki mai kya dekh skta hu ! "


Aur us screen ko touch krne ke liye apne ak ungli aage badhata hu aur screen ko touch krke kud se bolta hu " sayad ye touch screen nahi h ! "

CHUUUUU................

abhi mai apne bed pr khada ho kr us screen ko hawa me touch krne ki kosis krta hu tabhi ek bhut hi cute nd beautiful ladki school uniform me mere room me aa kr mujhe aisa krte Hue dekh kr confused ho jati h aur kahti h ..


" Bhai tum kya kr rahe ho ? "
" Kahi tmhare sir me bhi to chot nahi lagi h ? "

Ji ha ye koi aur nahi meri choti sister Kavya hi thi Aur mere bed ke paas aa kr mujhe gusse se chillate hue bolti h ..

Kavya " Kya maine tumse nahi kaha tha ki ab aur chot khana bnd kr do ? "
" Tmhe pata bhi hai mai kitna dar gayi thi tmhare liye ? "

Mai ( uski eye me dekh kr ) " sorry .. "

Kavya " dusre baki to safe bahar aa gaye to hamesa tm hi q chot khaa kr bahar aate ho ? "
"
Wo ye sb bole ja rahi thi aur m soch raha tha ' mujhe yakin nahi ho raha h , maine almost isko akela chor hi diya tha ! '
' mujhe abhi bhi nahi lag raha h ki mai us sapne se bahr aa paya hu abhi tk , lakin .... '

Kavya " kya tmhe smjh me aaya ? Agr tmhe ak aur baar chot lagi to mai study krna chor dungi uski jagah job krne lagungi taki tum ye Hunter ka job chor sako . "

Mai ( kavya se screen ki taraf isara krke ) " kavya !! "
" Kya tmhe ye dikh raha h ? "

Kavya ( confused 😕 ho kr ) " kya ? "

Mai smjh jata hu ise bhi ye screen nahi dikh rahi h mtkb sayad sirf mai hi ise dekh skta hu .
To mai usase aage bolta hu ( screen ki taraf dekhte hue ) ..
" Ohhh !! "
" Agar kisi game me koi unread mail pada ho to .."
" Tum kaise use read kr skte ho ? "

Kavya ( chinta aur confus ho kr ) " pakka na tumhare sir me chot nahi lagi h na ? "

Mai na me gardan hila deta hu .
To kavya kahti h " well ! Tmhe phle mail box ko open krna hoga "

Mai " mail box ko open kro ? "

Aur mere bolne se hi agle pal screen ka massage open ho gaya .



{ [ MASSAGE ]
[ Welcome player ( unread ) ]
[ Daily Quest : Prepared to become strong , Has arrived ( unread ) ] }

Screen pr ye likha hua tha sath me ye mujhe sunayi bhi de raha tha . Ye sb dekh kr mai soch raha hota hu .
Tabhi kavya puchti h " kyu ! Kya huaa? "

Mai use aise hi idhar udhar ki bate bata kr kuch nahi batata . Tb wo khti b ..

Kavya " acha mai ab ja rahi hu . "

Mai " thik hai . "

Uske baad wo room se bahr chli jati h . Room se bahr aa kr wo apne ak frnd jo ki usi ke sath aayi thi ko bolti h " chlo hm chalte hai . "
Aur wo dono chle jati h .

Jbki idhar mai apne bed pr is system ko smjhne ki kosis krta hu . Mere samne ak ak krke kai screen hawa me open ho jata h .


DING.......
DING.......
DING.......


1st screen ...
[ ALARM !]
[ The system will help the 'players' growth. ]

2nd screen...
[ ALARM !]
[ If he fails to obey the system's order . Their may be a penalty. ]

3rd screen....
[ ALARM ! ]
[ Your rewards have arrived.]

Ye sb padh kr mai kud se kahta hu " mujhe to kuch smjh hi nahi aa raha h ye sb kahna kya cahte hai ."
Jb mai ye sb ke bare me dekh aur soch raha tha tabhi mujhe yaad aaya h maine aisa hi kuch milta julta tb bhi dekha tha jb m vedee pr leta hua tha . Jo ki kuch aisa tha...


{ [ ALARM ! ]
[ You have completed all the necessary requirements of the SECRET QUEST " COURAGE OF THE WEAK " ] }

Tbhi ak new screen aati hai aur mai use dekhne lg jata hu.

DING......

[ MASSAGE ]
[ Daily Quest : preparing to become strong ]
[ Has arrived ( unread ) ]

Mai " preparing to become strong. Ab ye kya h ? "
" Check kro ise "

Mere itna Bolte hi ak new big screen open hoti h .


{ [ QUEST DIRECTION ]
Daily Quest - Getting ready to become powerful

GOLE

[ Push-ups ( 0/100 ) incomplete ]
[ Curl-ups ( 0/100 ) incomplete ]
[ Squats ( 0/100 ) incomplete ]
[ Running ( 0/10Km ) incomplete ]

Warning : - Failing to complete the daily Quest will bring a panishment associated with the quest. }

Aur sbse last me ak watch ⌚ bani hui thi jisme count down chl rahi thi .

Ye sb dekh kr mai kud se bolta hu ..
" Hahaha .... Ye sb kya hai ? "
" Ye ak majak hai . Hai ki nahi ? "
" Mere jaisa koi jo ki hospital me admit hai wo ye sb kaise kr skta hai ? "
" Mai ise baad me dekhunga . "
" Jb mai so kr uth jaunga tb . "

Aur mai apne bed pr let jata hu , aur so jata hu .
Lakin screen me jo watch thi iska timer chlta rahta h uska colour phle greens se yellow fir jb time khtam hone wala hota h to red colour me change ho jata h .
Aur jb time khtam ho jata h tb an new screen aati h ...


DING.....

[ALARM ]
[ Aapne Daily Quest ko pura nahi kiya . Ab aapko " PENALTY ZONE " me jana hoga ak nirdharit time ke liye .]

ZIKKKKKK.....ZIKKKKK....

achanak se mera bed hilne lagta h mai apni eye open krta hu aur tabhi mujhe lagta h mere niche ki jamin bahut tej hil rahi hai

Mai " earth quake ye kaise aa gaya ? "


CRACK...... CRACK......

Mai bed se niche gir jata hu aur mere niche ka floor tutne lagta h aur kuch second me hi mai dekhta hu mai floor pr nahi blki ret mai baitha hu .
Mai turant samne dekhta hu aur akdam shocked 😲 ho jata hu QKI mai achanak se hospital se registan me aa gaya tha mere chro taraf ret hi ret thi aur samne suraj tha .

Mai ( shocked ho kr ) " ye jagah ...."
" Ak registan ! "
" nahi ye nahi ho skta . Mai pakka koi spna dekh raha hu !! "


SISSSS.................

Tabhi mujhe mere piche ret ke girne ki aawaj sunayi deti h aur mai dhire se piche mud kr dekhta hu.
Aur bahut jayada dar jata hu QKI ret me se ak bahut bada , jahrile nakhun wala registani Bicchu nikla tha .
Sath me ak screen bhi open hoti h


DING......

{ [ QUEST DIRECTION ]
[ PENALTY QUEST : JINDA BACHE RAHNA ]

GOLE : time khtam hone tk jinda bache rahna.

[ Time required : 4 hour ]
[ Time remaining : 3H 59Min 55Sec] }


Ye sb sun kr mai darte hue smile krne ki kosis krta hu aur us bicchu ki taraf dekh kr kahta hu jo ki apni lambhi jib nikal kr mujhe hi dekh raha tha " tum majak kar rahe ho na ... ? "






Aaj ke liye bs itna hi dosto !!
Aapke review nd suggestions ka wait rahega comments ke through !!

Apna pyar aise hi banaye rakhiye !!
Rider ne quest ko seriously nhi liya use ye sab ek majak Lagta hai isliye vo use Andekha kr deta hai or so jata hai Lekin time khatam hone pr use ek penalty milti hai jo 4 ghante jinda rahne ke liye kahti hai vo bhi ek jahrile bicchu se... Dekhte hai ab kya rider is baat ko seriously leta hai ya nhi...
Rider ki bahan Kavya apne bhai ka Bahut jyada care karti hai jisko uske 1st appearance ne ham sabke samne show bhi kiya...
Inspector aaye the 2, rider ko sandeh se dekh rhe the or uska mana bhi check kiya lekin vo abhi tk utna hi hai jitna mission me Jane se Pahle tha, rider ne healer or Rahul ke bare me puchha pr baki sabke bare me koi baat nhi ki healer abhi recovery period me hai to vhi Rahul ko ab retired karne ka socha hai inspector logo ne... Superb update bhai sandar jabarjast
 
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