Fantasy SOLO LEVELING

[Itachi_Uchiha]

UPDATE NO - 148(B) post kar diya hai dosto.
Read nd enjoy it.
Nd aaj ab tak ke comments ka aaj reply mil jayega.

 

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

Aj kab doge update valentine bhai......

 

[Smart killer]

UPDATE - 11
Last Update me dosto aapne dekha ki rahul Anjana ko mujhe door se bahr le jane ko bolte hai , tabhi achanak bahut jyada power use krne ke karan Anjana ke pair kaam krne bnd kr dete hai aur wo gir jati h . Aur aakhir me mai rahul ko Anajan ko bahar le jane ko bolta hu . Unke jane ke baad sare statue mere pr attack kr dete h aur tabhi achanak se mere same kuch screen dikhayi deti h sath me aawaje bhi sunayi deti h aur mujhe player banane ka puchti h so mai ha kr deta hu .​

AB AAGE....

[ ! ALARM ]
[ WELCOME , PLAYER ]​

AAAHHH........

HUHHHH......HUHHHH....
HUHHHH........ HUHHH.....
DAKKKKK.... DAKKKKKK.....DAKKK..... DAKKKK.....

Mai jldi se jaag jata hu , meri puri body pasine se bhigi hui thi . Aur mai bahut jor jor se sanse le raha hota hu mere dil ki dhadkan bhi bahut tej chl rahi hoti h. Mai apne right hath apne chest pr dil ke paas rak leta hu aur normal karne ke kosis karta hu .

" Ek dream ? "
" Kya ye ak dream tha ? "

Ye bol kr Mai apne chro taraf dekhta hu to akdam shocked ho jata hu Qki mai us statue wale room me nahi tha mai to kisi bed pe tha aur dekhne se lag raha tha mai kisi hospital me hu .

" Hospital ? "

CHUUUUUU.............

Aur tabhi room ka door open hota h aur 2 aadmi black nd white suite Boot me andar mere taraf aate h . Aur unme se ak aadmi bolta h ...

" To aakhirkar tumhe ab hose aa hi gaya ? "

Mai " tum kon ho ? "

1st man " mujhe maaf kr dena agr hmne tmko surprised kr diya ho to . "

Ye bol ke 1st man ne ak card meri taraf aage kiya aur m use ke kr dekhne lagta hu . Aur kahta hu .

" Indian Hunter guild ke inspectors ... "
" Inspectors mujhe q dekhne aaye h ..?"

Tb mujhe wo inspectors batate hai ki mai 3din se behos pada hua tha . Ye sun ke mai akdam shocked ho jata hu ..

" Kya ? Mai 3din se behos tha ? "

Tbhi mujhe Rahul , Anjana aur baki sb ki yaad aati h aur m inspectors se puchta hu ..

" Miss Anjana aur Mr Rahul unka kya hua ? "
" Kya wo surakshit hai ? "

1st inspector " ha wo surakshit hai lakin ..."

" Mr Rahul ka kata hua hath ab se unke kaam me baadha banega to wo ab retired ho jayenge jaha tk mujhe lgta h . "
"Aur Hunter miss Anjana ka abhi bhi ilaj chl rha h Qki unhe bhut hi gahra sadma laga hai. "
" Kuch kah nhi sakte ki wo aage bhi Hunter rakhengi ya nahi !! "

2nd inspector " aur baki ke Hunter jaise Mr Rohan ..... "

Abhi wo aage kuch bolta tbhi mai bich me hi bol deta hu ..

" Nahi ..... "
" Thik h !! "
" Itna kafi hai . "

Qki mujhe un sb ka waha se hme akela chor ke bhag jana yaad aane lagta h .

1st inspector " to kul 6 log hi double layer me bach paye hai . "
" Mai janta hu hunter hr time hi khtre me rahte hai . Lakin aisa hatyaakaand hona bhut hi rare hai ... "

" Jb inspectors aur white tiger guild wale us jagah phuche , "
" Tb tk sare ja chuke the "
" Waha us room me kewal tum hi the jo ki vedee pr lete hue the . "
" Koi bhi statue ya kuch bhi aisa ni mila jaisa baki sb ne bataya tha . "

Mai ( shock se ) " aisa nahi ho skta hai ? "

1st inspector " hme kud is baat pr Vishwas nahi ho raha tha . "
" yadi jeevit bache logon kee gavaahee mein thoda bhee antar hota "
" ya yadi mare hue logo ke shareer ke kuchh ang vahaan nahi pae jaate hain, to hamane ek alag spashteekaran ke baare mein socha hota .. "
" Ye bs hamari soch hai lakin .... "

Meri taraf ghur ke dekhte hue..
" Hame lagta h ki tmne DOUBLE AWAKEING payi hai "

Mai ( sadme se mn me sochta hu ) ' DOUBLE AWAKEING '


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Aap logo ko DOUBLE AWAKEING ke bare me bata deta hu phle .
Ak hunter ki stats fix ho jate hai jb uski AWAKENING ( power jagna ) hoti hai .
Lakin kuch hunters aise bhi hoti h jinki AWAKEING ak baar fir se hoti h phli baar hone ke baad .
Aise kai se example dekhne ke mile hai jinme C Rank ka Hunter directly A Rank ke Hunter me chla jata h aur A RANK ka direct S rank me qki unki power dubara jagti h .

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Mere samne ak instrument rakhte hue jiske bich me thik upar ak dark blue color ka crystal laga hua tha aur usase ak wire nikli hui thi jo kisi remot jaise device se connect thi usi me power ki reading dikhti thi .

1st inspector " ye ak magic power ka pata lagane wala instrument hai
" Tmhe bs is mana crystal pr apna hath rakhna hai "

Aur iske baad wo inspector sochne lagta hai ..
' agr waha such me aise death level ke monster the to normal huntur unse bilkul nahi bach sakte the . '
' kewal A Rank aur S Rank ke Hunter hi ek sath mil kr aise situation ka hal nikal skte hai . '
' lakin we sare monster akdam se gayab ho gaye '
' ye dekhne ke baad ki Mr Rider waha akele huntur the jo jinda rahe aise me ye namumkin hai ki aise situation m hum Mr Rider pr shak na kre ki unko DOUBLE AWAKEING na mili ho . '

Wo ye sb soch raha tha aur mai tb tk apna R8 hath us mana crystal pr rakh cuka tha aur wo crystal bilkul na kr barabar chmkne laga .

PEE PEE PEE PEE PEE........

Wo inspector ye aawaj sun kr device ke taraf dekhta h aur uske screen pr bs mana reading bs 10 hi show kr rahi thi .

Ye sb dekh kr mai sochta hu ....
' mere khyal se kabaad , kabaad hi rahega aaj bhi aur aage aane wale samay me bhi '
' ak sbse khrab E Rank HUNTER ka bhi mana reading km se km 70hota h . '

Mai inspector se puchta hu " result kya raha ? "

Inspector " dekh ke aisa lagta h hm bekar me tumhare upar sandeh kr rahe the . "

DUDDDDD.........

wo dono inspector aaps me baat krte hue room se chle jate h . Aur m unhe jate hue dekh kr sochta hu ' mtlb kuch nahi hua ? '
' lekin kya un logon ko isakee jaanakaaree nahin hai? '

Mai ye sb soch hi raha tha ki tabhi ......

DING........

[ MASSAGE ]
[ You have unread mail ]​

mere samne hawa me ak screen open ho jati h , Aur m kud se bolta hu ' kya undono ko ye screen nahi dikhi thi ? '

Aur mera dhyan mere left leg pr jata h aur ye kya ......
Mere kata hua pair ab thik h . Aur mere dil ki dhadkan ab thik h .
Mai abhi kuch nahi bata skta kya such hai ? Aur kya Sapna hai ?

Mai hawa me open hue screen ki taraf dekh kr ....
" kya mujhe un logo ko ye sb bata dena chahiye ? "
" Ki mai kya dekh skta hu ! "

Aur us screen ko touch krne ke liye apne ak ungli aage badhata hu aur screen ko touch krke kud se bolta hu " sayad ye touch screen nahi h ! "

CHUUUUU................

abhi mai apne bed pr khada ho kr us screen ko hawa me touch krne ki kosis krta hu tabhi ek bhut hi cute nd beautiful ladki school uniform me mere room me aa kr mujhe aisa krte Hue dekh kr confused ho jati h aur kahti h ..

" Bhai tum kya kr rahe ho ? "
" Kahi tmhare sir me bhi to chot nahi lagi h ? "

Ji ha ye koi aur nahi meri choti sister Kavya hi thi Aur mere bed ke paas aa kr mujhe gusse se chillate hue bolti h ..

Kavya " Kya maine tumse nahi kaha tha ki ab aur chot khana bnd kr do ? "
" Tmhe pata bhi hai mai kitna dar gayi thi tmhare liye ? "

Mai ( uski eye me dekh kr ) " sorry .. "

Kavya " dusre baki to safe bahar aa gaye to hamesa tm hi q chot khaa kr bahar aate ho ? "
"
Wo ye sb bole ja rahi thi aur m soch raha tha ' mujhe yakin nahi ho raha h , maine almost isko akela chor hi diya tha ! '
' mujhe abhi bhi nahi lag raha h ki mai us sapne se bahr aa paya hu abhi tk , lakin .... '

Kavya " kya tmhe smjh me aaya ? Agr tmhe ak aur baar chot lagi to mai study krna chor dungi uski jagah job krne lagungi taki tum ye Hunter ka job chor sako . "

Mai ( kavya se screen ki taraf isara krke ) " kavya !! "
" Kya tmhe ye dikh raha h ? "

Kavya ( confused ho kr ) " kya ? "

Mai smjh jata hu ise bhi ye screen nahi dikh rahi h mtkb sayad sirf mai hi ise dekh skta hu .
To mai usase aage bolta hu ( screen ki taraf dekhte hue ) ..
" Ohhh !! "
" Agar kisi game me koi unread mail pada ho to .."
" Tum kaise use read kr skte ho ? "

Kavya ( chinta aur confus ho kr ) " pakka na tumhare sir me chot nahi lagi h na ? "

Mai na me gardan hila deta hu .
To kavya kahti h " well ! Tmhe phle mail box ko open krna hoga "

Mai " mail box ko open kro ? "

Aur mere bolne se hi agle pal screen ka massage open ho gaya .

{ [ MASSAGE ]
[ Welcome player ( unread ) ]
[ Daily Quest : Prepared to become strong , Has arrived ( unread ) ] }​

Screen pr ye likha hua tha sath me ye mujhe sunayi bhi de raha tha . Ye sb dekh kr mai soch raha hota hu .
Tabhi kavya puchti h " kyu ! Kya huaa? "

Mai use aise hi idhar udhar ki bate bata kr kuch nahi batata . Tb wo khti b ..

Kavya " acha mai ab ja rahi hu . "

Mai " thik hai . "

Uske baad wo room se bahr chli jati h . Room se bahr aa kr wo apne ak frnd jo ki usi ke sath aayi thi ko bolti h " chlo hm chalte hai . "
Aur wo dono chle jati h .

Jbki idhar mai apne bed pr is system ko smjhne ki kosis krta hu . Mere samne ak ak krke kai screen hawa me open ho jata h .

DING.......
DING.......
DING.......

1st screen ...

[ ALARM !]
[ The system will help the 'players' growth. ]​

2nd screen...

[ ALARM !]
[ If he fails to obey the system's order . Their may be a penalty. ]​

3rd screen....

[ ALARM ! ]
[ Your rewards have arrived.]​

Ye sb padh kr mai kud se kahta hu " mujhe to kuch smjh hi nahi aa raha h ye sb kahna kya cahte hai ."
Jb mai ye sb ke bare me dekh aur soch raha tha tabhi mujhe yaad aaya h maine aisa hi kuch milta julta tb bhi dekha tha jb m vedee pr leta hua tha . Jo ki kuch aisa tha...

{ [ ALARM ! ]
[ You have completed all the necessary requirements of the SECRET QUEST " COURAGE OF THE WEAK " ] }​

Tbhi ak new screen aati hai aur mai use dekhne lg jata hu.

DING......

[ MASSAGE ]
[ Daily Quest : preparing to become strong ]
[ Has arrived ( unread ) ]​

Mai " preparing to become strong. Ab ye kya h ? "
" Check kro ise "

Mere itna Bolte hi ak new big screen open hoti h .

{ [ QUEST DIRECTION ]
Daily Quest - Getting ready to become powerful

GOLE

[ Push-ups ( 0/100 ) incomplete ]
[ Curl-ups ( 0/100 ) incomplete ]
[ Squats ( 0/100 ) incomplete ]
[ Running ( 0/10Km ) incomplete ]

Warning : - Failing to complete the daily Quest will bring a panishment associated with the quest. }​

Aur sbse last me ak watch bani hui thi jisme count down chl rahi thi .

Ye sb dekh kr mai kud se bolta hu ..
" Hahaha .... Ye sb kya hai ? "
" Ye ak majak hai . Hai ki nahi ? "
" Mere jaisa koi jo ki hospital me admit hai wo ye sb kaise kr skta hai ? "
" Mai ise baad me dekhunga . "
" Jb mai so kr uth jaunga tb . "

Aur mai apne bed pr let jata hu , aur so jata hu .
Lakin screen me jo watch thi iska timer chlta rahta h uska colour phle greens se yellow fir jb time khtam hone wala hota h to red colour me change ho jata h .
Aur jb time khtam ho jata h tb an new screen aati h ...

DING.....

[ALARM ]
[ Aapne Daily Quest ko pura nahi kiya . Ab aapko " PENALTY ZONE " me jana hoga ak nirdharit time ke liye .]
​

ZIKKKKKK.....ZIKKKKK....

achanak se mera bed hilne lagta h mai apni eye open krta hu aur tabhi mujhe lagta h mere niche ki jamin bahut tej hil rahi hai

Mai " earth quake ye kaise aa gaya ? "

CRACK...... CRACK......

Mai bed se niche gir jata hu aur mere niche ka floor tutne lagta h aur kuch second me hi mai dekhta hu mai floor pr nahi blki ret mai baitha hu .
Mai turant samne dekhta hu aur akdam shocked ho jata hu QKI mai achanak se hospital se registan me aa gaya tha mere chro taraf ret hi ret thi aur samne suraj tha .

Mai ( shocked ho kr ) " ye jagah ...."
" Ak registan ! "
" nahi ye nahi ho skta . Mai pakka koi spna dekh raha hu !! "

SISSSS.................

Tabhi mujhe mere piche ret ke girne ki aawaj sunayi deti h aur mai dhire se piche mud kr dekhta hu.
Aur bahut jayada dar jata hu QKI ret me se ak bahut bada , jahrile nakhun wala registani Bicchu nikla tha .
Sath me ak screen bhi open hoti h

DING......

{ [ QUEST DIRECTION ]
[ PENALTY QUEST : JINDA BACHE RAHNA ]

GOLE : time khtam hone tk jinda bache rahna.

[ Time required : 4 hour ]
[ Time remaining : 3H 59Min 55Sec] }​

Ye sb sun kr mai darte hue smile krne ki kosis krta hu aur us bicchu ki taraf dekh kr kahta hu jo ki apni lambhi jib nikal kr mujhe hi dekh raha tha " tum majak kar rahe ho na ... ? "






Aaj ke liye bs itna hi dosto !!
Aapke review nd suggestions ka wait rahega comments ke through !!
Apna pyar aise hi banaye rakh

Yani un statue ny hero koi koi system wali power dy di hai system jo mission dy gi wo complete karo or strong bano abhi to ik fail kiya hai or 4 hours tak hud ko bachna hai dhakty hain kya hota hai

 

[A.B.KING]

Nice update

 

[Itachi_Uchiha]

Nice story bhai waiting for next update

Thanks bro.
Keep supporting
Bs 15min me updated de dunga.

Mast he or meri favourite bhi sir thank you and thoda masala bhi dalana sir ilke you

Sukriya bro jo aapko story itni pasand aayi . Fantasy story ke hisab se aap jo masala maang rahe h wo bhut km hi dekhne ko milega . Lakin mera promise hai aapka intrust story se kabhi bhi khtam nahi hoga.
Keep supporting bro.

Msst bro kkeep

Thank you
Keep supporting.

Waiting for next update Bhai

Bs kuch hi der me bhai .
Keep supporting.

 

[Itachi_Uchiha]

Rider ne quest ko seriously nhi liya use ye sab ek majak Lagta hai isliye vo use Andekha kr deta hai or so jata hai Lekin time khatam hone pr use ek penalty milti hai jo 4 ghante jinda rahne ke liye kahti hai vo bhi ek jahrile bicchu se... Dekhte hai ab kya rider is baat ko seriously leta hai ya nhi...
Rider ki bahan Kavya apne bhai ka Bahut jyada care karti hai jisko uske 1st appearance ne ham sabke samne show bhi kiya...
Inspector aaye the 2, rider ko sandeh se dekh rhe the or uska mana bhi check kiya lekin vo abhi tk utna hi hai jitna mission me Jane se Pahle tha, rider ne healer or Rahul ke bare me puchha pr baki sabke bare me koi baat nhi ki healer abhi recovery period me hai to vhi Rahul ko ab retired karne ka socha hai inspector logo ne... Superb update bhai sandar jabarjast

Sukriya Xabhi bahi . Is valuable feedback ke liye .
Ha ab dekhna h kya rider system ko aage bhi majak me leta h ya ab series ho jata h .

 

[Itachi_Uchiha]

Aj kab doge update valentine bhai......

Bs 15min me bro

Yani un statue ny hero koi koi system wali power dy di hai system jo mission dy gi wo complete karo or strong bano abhi to ik fail kiya hai or 4 hours tak hud ko bachna hai dhakty hain kya hota hai

Haa sahi smjhe mission pura kro aur kud ko strong banai ab wo mission kaise honge wo dekhna hoga.
Keep supporting
Thank you

Nice update

Sukriya bhai .

 

[Itachi_Uchiha]

UPDATE - 12

Ab tk aapne dekha dosto kaise m us room se jinda bach jata h aur baki 5 hunturs bhi.
Mai ak hospital me admit rahta hu mujhse Hunter ke inspector DOUBLE AWAKING ke bare me puchte h aur mana crystal se check karte h but mai phle jaisa hi rahta hu .
Uske baad meri choti sis kavya aa kr apni chinta jahir krti h aur uske jane ke baad mai system ko thoda thoda smjhne ki kosis krta hu end me mujhe Daily Quest krne ko milta h aur m majak smjh kr so jata h aur time limit khtam ho jati h Daily Quest ki aur m ak registan me aa jata hu aur mere piche monster lag jata h .
​

AB AAGE....

​

HAH..... HAH...... HAH......

Suraj pura aasman me chda hua tha jiske karan bahut jyada garmi thi aur m jitna ho ske utna tej bhage ja raha tha . Mai na jane kb se bhag raha tha aur pasine se pura bhig gaya tha aisa lag raha tha jaise m abhi naha ke bahar nikala hua hu . Mai bhut jyada thak gaya tha lakin m ruk nhi skta tha QKI mere piche jahrile nakhun wala registani BICCHU lga hua .

CRRRRR........ CRRRRRR........
AAAAAAA...........

Ab tk mere piche kai sare BICCHU lag chuke the aur mai unse bhchne ke liye chillate hue lagatar bhage ja raha raha tha .

DING........
Aur tbhi mujhe screen me dikhta h ...

{ [ ALARM !]
[ PENALTY QUEST : JINDA BACHE RAHNA ]

GOLE : time khtam hone tk jinda bache rahna.

[ Time required : 4 hour ]
[ Time remaining : 0 H 0 Min 5 Sec] }​

Waha hospital me morning ke 4 bjne hi wale the aur screen me mujhe bs 5sec time bacha hua tha . Uske baad ye PENALTY QUEST khtam ho jana tha lakin ab tk mai bhut thak gaya tha jiske karan mujhe lg raha tha ye sare BICCHU ab kabhi bhi mujhe pakad lenge aur chir faad karke khaa jayenge.

YAHHHHH...........
AAAAAA.....

Tabhi ek BICCHU mere bikul krib aa jata h, ye dekh kr mai bhut jyada dar jata hu aur wo BICCHU mujhe katne ke liye jaise hi apna muh open krta h . waise hi screen pr new massage aata h aur mujhe sunayi deta h ...

DING....

[ALARM ! ]
[ Aapne PENALTY QUEST ko pura kr liya h ] ​

Aur ye sunayi dete h jaise hi mai apna alga kadam badata hu mai registan se nikal kr hospital me apne room ke floor se hote hue bahar nikal aata hu .

HAH....... HAH....... HAH......

Aur m floor pr ghutno ke bal baith kr bahut jor jor se hafhne lagta hu . Mere room me chro taraf floor pr jagah jagah ret padi hui rahti h . Mai apni sanso ko control karte hue bolta hu ...

" PENALTY QUEST ? "

DING....

Aur tbhi ak new screen open ho jati h jisme likha hua tha ..

{ [ MASSAGE ]
[ Your reward for completing the PENALTY QUEST have arrived ]

[ Kya aap ise lena chahenge ? ]
[ ACCEPT ] [ REFUSED ] }​

DHHDDD...

Ye sunane ke baad m bina koi ans diye jyada thake hone ke karan wahi floor pr behos ho jata hu .

CHUUUUU.....

Aur tbhi ak nurse round ke liye aati h . Aur jaise hi mera door open krke andar ka najara dekhti h akdam shock ho jatai h . QKI mai floor pr behos , pasine se bhiga hua rahta hu aur floor pr jagah jaghr ret padi hui rahti h .
Wo chilla ke madad ke liye kuch hospital staff ke bulati h ..
" Hay bhagwan ! Yaha kya hua tha ? "
" Please ! Koi aao aur aa kr madad kro meri . "

Kuch dino baad ....

Hospital staff ke kisi room me break time me 2 nurse window ke paas khadi ho kr coffee pite hue aaps me baat kr rahi hoti h .

1st nurse " kya tum Rider name ke ak patient ko janti ho ?
Maine suna h wo ak huntur hai . "

2nd nurse ( coffee ka ek ghut pite hue ) " are haa haa ,
Wo roj running ke liye jata h , jbki abhi bs kuch din phle hi wo behosi ke halat se bahar aaya h . "
" Doctor ka kya kahna h uske bare me ? "

1st nurse " doctor ka kahna h ki hunturs log normal logo se jldi thik ho jate hai .
So halki exercise krne me koi dikkat nhi h . "

1st nurse ( window ke bahr ak person ki taraf isara krte hue ) " wo dekho bahar wo abhi bhi running kr raha h ! "

2nd nurse ( meri taraf dekhte hue ) " agr ye ak halki exercise hai ....
To kya ye such me thik rahega abhi ke liye iska ye sb krna ? "
" Roj ye kitne hour running krta h . "

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Mai running krte hue kud se baat krta hu
" aaj pure 4din ho gaye mujhe , jbse mai behosi se wapas hos me aaya hu .
Ab tk maine kuch bate system ke bare me jaan li h . "

HAH...... HAH....... HAH.......
DING......

Aur mai bhagte bhagte ruk jata hu aur apne ghutno ke bal jujh kr jor jor se hafhne lagta hu . Mere body se pasina tapak raha tha tabhi ak screen mere samne aa jati h ( screen ki taraf dekh ke )...
" Pahli baat to ye ki ....
Ye mere aakho ke samne jo screen jaisa h ye koi bhram nahi h . Ye bilkul asli h ."
" Ha wo alg baat h ki koi aur ise nahi dekh skta jbki mai ise apni aakho ke samne bikul saaf saaf dekh skta hu . "

{ [ ALARM ! ]
[ ( Running ) 10Km : Completed ( 10/10Km ) ] }​

Mai " thik hai. "

Fir se new screen open hui ...

{ [ QUEST DIRECTION ]

GOLE

[ Push-ups ( 100/100 ) ]
[ Curl-ups ( 100/100 ) ]
[ Squats ( 100/100 ) ]
[ Running ( 10/10Km ) ] }​

Mai ( screen ki traf dekh kr ) " ok "

Again new screen open hui ...

{ [ QUEST REWARD ]

[ CHOOSE YOUR REWARD :- ]
[ Aap apna reward niche chun sakte h ]
[ REWARD #1 : Statue recovery ]
[ Not open now ]
[ Not open now ]
[ Will you accept ]
( Accept ) ( Reject ) }​

Mai " accept recovery statue. "

Mere itna Bolte hi mere body chro taraf se goldan light se cover ho jati h . Aur slowly slowly wo mere andar chli jati h .
Ye ak aisa magica light thi jisase exercise krne ke baad aapke body me jitna bhi thakan ho sara ak pal me khtam ho jata h .
Ak aisa thakan jo ki itni exercise krne ke baad jarur mere body me rahta aur thik thak time tk rahta lakin is magic seba kuch pal me aisa ho jata h jaise mujhe kabhi thakan name ki koi chij hi nahi thi .

In sb ke alawa bhi aur bhi bahut si chijen thi jo maine itne dino me smjh liya tha .
Jaise ki STAT POINT ka aur RANDOM BOX ITEMS ka ek alag se window open hota tha .

[ ALARM ! ]
[ You have received the RANDOM BOX ]​

Iske baad ak gift type ka box mere hath me aa jata h aur mere touch hote h open ho jata h .
RANDOM BOX hmesa Daily Quest pura karne pr milta tha lakin jaruri nahi h ki hamesa usme se kuch nikle hi QKI kabhi kabhi usme se kuch kaam ka mil jata tha aur kabhi wo khali hi rahta tha.

Aap apne charector ke kisi bhi Statue ko increase kr skte the jb tk ki aapke paas Stat point bache hue h .

{ [ STATUS ]

( Name : Rider )
( Job : None )
( Tital : None )
( HP : 100 )
( MP : 10 )
( Level : 1 )
( Fatigue : 0 )
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( Strength : 16 )
( Agility : 10 )
( Sense : 10 )
( Vitality : 10 )
( Intelligence : 10 )
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( Remaining point : 3 ) }​

Aur in sb se mujhe itna to pata chal gaya tha jaise jaise mai apne character ka status increase krunga mai bhi strong hota jaunga .
Aur haa level o bhdhane pr bhi thik yahi baat hogi .
Statue , skills, items , inventory, item storage aur bhi aise hi na jane kitne options available the is system me .
Ye mujhe kisi game ki taraf lag raha tha . jaise game me koi character hota h aur uske sare strong aur weak point aap options se dekh sakte ho aur jaise jaise aap unhen increase karoge aap ka character bhi sting hota jayega . Mujhe bhi aisa hi lg raha tha jaise koi strong power mujhe control kr rahi h .

AHHHHH...

Aur mai side me rakhe ak table pr baith jata hu aur yahi sb dekhte hue sochne lagta h ...
" Haha aakhir yaha ho kya raha h ye abhi tk puri tarah se mujhe smjh me nahi aaya tha "

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Saam ke time reception pr ...

Mai ( receptionist se ) " kya mai aaj yaha se chutti le skta hu ? "

Receptionist ( meri taraf dekhte hue ) " haa thik h tum chutti le skte ho , lakin tum ja kaha rahe ho ? "

Mai " mujhe bahar kuch kaam se jana h . "

Uske baad mai hospital se naikl jata hu apne aaj ki manjil ki taraf .

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Kuch time baad mai ek railway station ke gate ke bahr khada tha . Railway station ka name MANDA tha .
Mai gate no. 3 ke samne khda ho kr sidhiyo ki taraf dekhta hu jo ki nice ki or ja rahi thi . Fir main apne pocket me hath daal kr kuch nikalta hu, mere hath me ak ajib se green colour ki chabhi aa jati h .

Mai ( chabhi ko dekhte hue ) " ab samaya aa gaya h ye dekhne ka ki aakhir ye krti kya hai ? "
" QKI jo RANDOM BOX mujhe hr roj DAILY QUEST ko complete krne ke baad milta tha usme se kabhi bandage , kabhi pen , to most of time khali rahta tha kl usi me se mujhe ye chabhi mili h . "

About green key :

[ Item : DENGEON KEY ]
[ Item class : E ]
[ Type : key ]
[ Ye ak aisa key hai jiske use se aap turant ak DENGEON bana sakte hai . Ise aap kewal MANDA railway station ke gate no. 3 me use kr skte hai. ]​

Mai ( key ko dekh kr ) " to ye ak key hai jisase mai abhi yaha pr ak DENGEON bana skta hu. "

Fir mai sochne lagta hu ' kya such me ye DOUBLE AWAKING ke karna ho raha h ? '
' ya ye sayad koi procedure hai DOUBLE AWAKING ke milne ka. '

Mai ( key ko jor se muthi me band krte hue ) " agr such me aisa h to mujhe is chance ko use ke hi dekhna hoga isi me mera fayda h ."
" Duniya ke sbse kamjor Hunter ko DOUBLE AWAKING mila h . "
" Dusre log jb ye sunenge to wo sb bhut hasenge "

Mai ( sidhiyo ki tarf dekh kr ) " ab mujhe apne bhagne ki kabiliyat pr pura bharosa hai. "
" To agar ye aakhiri baar ki tarah khatarnak hua to mai waha se turant bhag jaunga cahe jo ho jaye. "

Itna bol kr mai us green key ko hawa me hi ghumane lagta hu jaise koi lock open kr raha hu .

TIK.......
BUZZZZZZ........BUZZZZZZZ.......

aur hua bhi aisa wo key hawa me hi kisi invisible lock ko open kr deta h aur gate no. 3ke samne blue light chmakne lagti h . Aur mere samne blue light ki ak invisible diwar bn jati h .

Tap..tap....

Aur mai us invisible diwar me se ghus krke uske dusari side aa jata hu . Tabhi ak screen open hoti h aur mujhe ye information deti h .

DING....

[ ALARM ! ]
[ Aapne INSTANT DENGOUN me Parvesh kiya hai ]
​

CRACK...... CRACK.....

​

Achanak se mere piche se ye sound sunayi deta h aur jaise hi mai piche mud kr dekhta hu ye kya m chauk jata h . QKI mai jis invisible diwar se andar aaya tha wo stone me transform ho gayi thi aur mujh us paar ka kuch nhi dikh rha tha .
Mai apna hath aage bada kr us side jane ki kosis krta hu lakin mera hath stone ke paar ja hi nahi pa raha tha .

Mai bikul paresan ho jata hu .

" Nahi ! Ye nahi ho skta "
" Bahar jane ka rasta band ho gaya ?! "

​

SWOOSSS.........

​

Tabhi mere piche se ak girl aati h aur apna smartphone use krte hue wo is stone ke diwar ke paar chli jati h . Jise uske liye koi diwar ho hi na .
Ye dekh mai bikul shock ho jata hu .

Mai ( shock se ) " kya ye koi aur dimension hai ? "
" Ye baki dusre normal DENGOUN se alag hai. "
" Maine aisa phle kabhi nahi dekha hai . Lakin ye Red gate ke jaisa hi hai . "

Mai ( apne sir pr hath rakhte hue ) " ab mai kya kru ? Maine to planning ki thi ki agr kuch bura hua to yaha se bhag jaunga. "
" Lakin agar bahar jane ka rasta hi band ho gaya h to ab mai yaha se bhag bhi nahi skta. "

​

Ding....

Mere itna Bolte h an new screen mere samne aati h ...

[ ALARM ! ]
[ Aap yaha se tb tk bahr nahi ja skte jb tk ki aap yaha ke BOSS ko na maar de ya fir aap RETURN CRYSTAL ka use na kre. ]
​

Mai ( screen ko dekh kr gusse se ) " ye kya mai tb tk yaha se bahr nahi ja sakta jb tk ki yaha ke BOSS ko na maar du.... "
" abhi kuch din phle ki hi baat hai jaha mai ek E Rank monster ke khilaf struggle kr raha tha . Aur ek aaj ka din hai jaha mujhe akele is pure DENGOUN ko saaf krna hai aur yaha ke monsters ko marna h ... "
" Damm!! Tm mujhse majak kr rahe ho . "

​

AAAAAAA..........HUUUUU......RORRRR.......

​

Mujhe niche se monsters ke bhut tej tej chillane ki aawaje aa rahi thi . Jise sun kr mai kud se kahta hu ( dara hua )
" kya mai such me kud se aisi ummid kr raha hu ...
Ki mai in sb se bina kisi Hunter ke group ke fight ke jit paunga. "

​

AAAAAA....... HUUUUUUU...... RORRRR......

​

Aur fir se niche se monsters ki aawaje lagatar gunjane lagti h .

​

Aaj ke liye bs itna hi dosto !!
Aapke review nd suggestions ka wait rahega comments ke through !!
Apna pyar aise hi banaye rakhiye !!

​

 

[Ajay]

UPDATE - 12

Ab tk aapne dekha dosto kaise m us room se jinda bach jata h aur baki 5 hunturs bhi.
Mai ak hospital me admit rahta hu mujhse Hunter ke inspector DOUBLE AWAKING ke bare me puchte h aur mana crystal se check karte h but mai phle jaisa hi rahta hu .
Uske baad meri choti sis kavya aa kr apni chinta jahir krti h aur uske jane ke baad mai system ko thoda thoda smjhne ki kosis krta hu end me mujhe Daily Quest krne ko milta h aur m majak smjh kr so jata h aur time limit khtam ho jati h Daily Quest ki aur m ak registan me aa jata hu aur mere piche monster lag jata h .
​

AB AAGE....

​

HAH..... HAH...... HAH......

Suraj pura aasman me chda hua tha jiske karan bahut jyada garmi thi aur m jitna ho ske utna tej bhage ja raha tha . Mai na jane kb se bhag raha tha aur pasine se pura bhig gaya tha aisa lag raha tha jaise m abhi naha ke bahar nikala hua hu . Mai bhut jyada thak gaya tha lakin m ruk nhi skta tha QKI mere piche jahrile nakhun wala registani BICCHU lga hua .

CRRRRR........ CRRRRRR........
AAAAAAA...........

Ab tk mere piche kai sare BICCHU lag chuke the aur mai unse bhchne ke liye chillate hue lagatar bhage ja raha raha tha .

DING........
Aur tbhi mujhe screen me dikhta h ...

{ [ ALARM !]
[ PENALTY QUEST : JINDA BACHE RAHNA ]

GOLE : time khtam hone tk jinda bache rahna.

[ Time required : 4 hour ]
[ Time remaining : 0 H 0 Min 5 Sec] }​

Waha hospital me morning ke 4 bjne hi wale the aur screen me mujhe bs 5sec time bacha hua tha . Uske baad ye PENALTY QUEST khtam ho jana tha lakin ab tk mai bhut thak gaya tha jiske karan mujhe lg raha tha ye sare BICCHU ab kabhi bhi mujhe pakad lenge aur chir faad karke khaa jayenge.

YAHHHHH...........
AAAAAA.....

Tabhi ek BICCHU mere bikul krib aa jata h, ye dekh kr mai bhut jyada dar jata hu aur wo BICCHU mujhe katne ke liye jaise hi apna muh open krta h . waise hi screen pr new massage aata h aur mujhe sunayi deta h ...

DING....

[ALARM ! ]
[ Aapne PENALTY QUEST ko pura kr liya h ] ​

Aur ye sunayi dete h jaise hi mai apna alga kadam badata hu mai registan se nikal kr hospital me apne room ke floor se hote hue bahar nikal aata hu .

HAH....... HAH....... HAH......

Aur m floor pr ghutno ke bal baith kr bahut jor jor se hafhne lagta hu . Mere room me chro taraf floor pr jagah jagah ret padi hui rahti h . Mai apni sanso ko control karte hue bolta hu ...

" PENALTY QUEST ? "

DING....

Aur tbhi ak new screen open ho jati h jisme likha hua tha ..

{ [ MASSAGE ]
[ Your reward for completing the PENALTY QUEST have arrived ]

[ Kya aap ise lena chahenge ? ]
[ ACCEPT ] [ REFUSED ] }​

DHHDDD...

Ye sunane ke baad m bina koi ans diye jyada thake hone ke karan wahi floor pr behos ho jata hu .

CHUUUUU.....

Aur tbhi ak nurse round ke liye aati h . Aur jaise hi mera door open krke andar ka najara dekhti h akdam shock ho jatai h . QKI mai floor pr behos , pasine se bhiga hua rahta hu aur floor pr jagah jaghr ret padi hui rahti h .
Wo chilla ke madad ke liye kuch hospital staff ke bulati h ..
" Hay bhagwan ! Yaha kya hua tha ? "
" Please ! Koi aao aur aa kr madad kro meri . "

Kuch dino baad ....

Hospital staff ke kisi room me break time me 2 nurse window ke paas khadi ho kr coffee pite hue aaps me baat kr rahi hoti h .

1st nurse " kya tum Rider name ke ak patient ko janti ho ?
Maine suna h wo ak huntur hai . "

2nd nurse ( coffee ka ek ghut pite hue ) " are haa haa ,
Wo roj running ke liye jata h , jbki abhi bs kuch din phle hi wo behosi ke halat se bahar aaya h . "
" Doctor ka kya kahna h uske bare me ? "

1st nurse " doctor ka kahna h ki hunturs log normal logo se jldi thik ho jate hai .
So halki exercise krne me koi dikkat nhi h . "

1st nurse ( window ke bahr ak person ki taraf isara krte hue ) " wo dekho bahar wo abhi bhi running kr raha h ! "

2nd nurse ( meri taraf dekhte hue ) " agr ye ak halki exercise hai ....
To kya ye such me thik rahega abhi ke liye iska ye sb krna ? "
" Roj ye kitne hour running krta h . "

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Mai running krte hue kud se baat krta hu
" aaj pure 4din ho gaye mujhe , jbse mai behosi se wapas hos me aaya hu .
Ab tk maine kuch bate system ke bare me jaan li h . "

HAH...... HAH....... HAH.......
DING......

Aur mai bhagte bhagte ruk jata hu aur apne ghutno ke bal jujh kr jor jor se hafhne lagta hu . Mere body se pasina tapak raha tha tabhi ak screen mere samne aa jati h ( screen ki taraf dekh ke )...
" Pahli baat to ye ki ....
Ye mere aakho ke samne jo screen jaisa h ye koi bhram nahi h . Ye bilkul asli h ."
" Ha wo alg baat h ki koi aur ise nahi dekh skta jbki mai ise apni aakho ke samne bikul saaf saaf dekh skta hu . "

{ [ ALARM ! ]
[ ( Running ) 10Km : Completed ( 10/10Km ) ] }​

Mai " thik hai. "

Fir se new screen open hui ...

{ [ QUEST DIRECTION ]

GOLE

[ Push-ups ( 100/100 ) ]
[ Curl-ups ( 100/100 ) ]
[ Squats ( 100/100 ) ]
[ Running ( 10/10Km ) ] }​

Mai ( screen ki traf dekh kr ) " ok "

Again new screen open hui ...

{ [ QUEST REWARD ]

[ CHOOSE YOUR REWARD :- ]
[ Aap apna reward niche chun sakte h ]
[ REWARD #1 : Statue recovery ]
[ Not open now ]
[ Not open now ]
[ Will you accept ]
( Accept ) ( Reject ) }​

Mai " accept recovery statue. "

Mere itna Bolte hi mere body chro taraf se goldan light se cover ho jati h . Aur slowly slowly wo mere andar chli jati h .
Ye ak aisa magica light thi jisase exercise krne ke baad aapke body me jitna bhi thakan ho sara ak pal me khtam ho jata h .
Ak aisa thakan jo ki itni exercise krne ke baad jarur mere body me rahta aur thik thak time tk rahta lakin is magic seba kuch pal me aisa ho jata h jaise mujhe kabhi thakan name ki koi chij hi nahi thi .

In sb ke alawa bhi aur bhi bahut si chijen thi jo maine itne dino me smjh liya tha .
Jaise ki STAT POINT ka aur RANDOM BOX ITEMS ka ek alag se window open hota tha .

[ ALARM ! ]
[ You have received the RANDOM BOX ]​

Iske baad ak gift type ka box mere hath me aa jata h aur mere touch hote h open ho jata h .
RANDOM BOX hmesa Daily Quest pura karne pr milta tha lakin jaruri nahi h ki hamesa usme se kuch nikle hi QKI kabhi kabhi usme se kuch kaam ka mil jata tha aur kabhi wo khali hi rahta tha.

Aap apne charector ke kisi bhi Statue ko increase kr skte the jb tk ki aapke paas Stat point bache hue h .

{ [ STATUS ]

( Name : Rider )
( Job : None )
( Tital : None )
( HP : 100 )
( MP : 10 )
( Level : 1 )
( Fatigue : 0 )
-------------------
( Strength : 16 )
( Agility : 10 )
( Sense : 10 )
( Vitality : 10 )
( Intelligence : 10 )
-------------------
( Remaining point : 3 ) }​

Aur in sb se mujhe itna to pata chal gaya tha jaise jaise mai apne character ka status increase krunga mai bhi strong hota jaunga .
Aur haa level o bhdhane pr bhi thik yahi baat hogi .
Statue , skills, items , inventory, item storage aur bhi aise hi na jane kitne options available the is system me .
Ye mujhe kisi game ki taraf lag raha tha . jaise game me koi character hota h aur uske sare strong aur weak point aap options se dekh sakte ho aur jaise jaise aap unhen increase karoge aap ka character bhi sting hota jayega . Mujhe bhi aisa hi lg raha tha jaise koi strong power mujhe control kr rahi h .

AHHHHH...

Aur mai side me rakhe ak table pr baith jata hu aur yahi sb dekhte hue sochne lagta h ...
" Haha aakhir yaha ho kya raha h ye abhi tk puri tarah se mujhe smjh me nahi aaya tha "

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Saam ke time reception pr ...

Mai ( receptionist se ) " kya mai aaj yaha se chutti le skta hu ? "

Receptionist ( meri taraf dekhte hue ) " haa thik h tum chutti le skte ho , lakin tum ja kaha rahe ho ? "

Mai " mujhe bahar kuch kaam se jana h . "

Uske baad mai hospital se naikl jata hu apne aaj ki manjil ki taraf .

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Kuch time baad mai ek railway station ke gate ke bahr khada tha . Railway station ka name MANDA tha .
Mai gate no. 3 ke samne khda ho kr sidhiyo ki taraf dekhta hu jo ki nice ki or ja rahi thi . Fir main apne pocket me hath daal kr kuch nikalta hu, mere hath me ak ajib se green colour ki chabhi aa jati h .

Mai ( chabhi ko dekhte hue ) " ab samaya aa gaya h ye dekhne ka ki aakhir ye krti kya hai ? "
" QKI jo RANDOM BOX mujhe hr roj DAILY QUEST ko complete krne ke baad milta tha usme se kabhi bandage , kabhi pen , to most of time khali rahta tha kl usi me se mujhe ye chabhi mili h . "

About green key :

[ Item : DENGEON KEY ]
[ Item class : E ]
[ Type : key ]
[ Ye ak aisa key hai jiske use se aap turant ak DENGEON bana sakte hai . Ise aap kewal MANDA railway station ke gate no. 3 me use kr skte hai. ]​

Mai ( key ko dekh kr ) " to ye ak key hai jisase mai abhi yaha pr ak DENGEON bana skta hu. "

Fir mai sochne lagta hu ' kya such me ye DOUBLE AWAKING ke karna ho raha h ? '
' ya ye sayad koi procedure hai DOUBLE AWAKING ke milne ka. '

Mai ( key ko jor se muthi me band krte hue ) " agr such me aisa h to mujhe is chance ko use ke hi dekhna hoga isi me mera fayda h ."
" Duniya ke sbse kamjor Hunter ko DOUBLE AWAKING mila h . "
" Dusre log jb ye sunenge to wo sb bhut hasenge "

Mai ( sidhiyo ki tarf dekh kr ) " ab mujhe apne bhagne ki kabiliyat pr pura bharosa hai. "
" To agar ye aakhiri baar ki tarah khatarnak hua to mai waha se turant bhag jaunga cahe jo ho jaye. "

Itna bol kr mai us green key ko hawa me hi ghumane lagta hu jaise koi lock open kr raha hu .

TIK.......
BUZZZZZZ........BUZZZZZZZ.......

aur hua bhi aisa wo key hawa me hi kisi invisible lock ko open kr deta h aur gate no. 3ke samne blue light chmakne lagti h . Aur mere samne blue light ki ak invisible diwar bn jati h .

Tap..tap....

Aur mai us invisible diwar me se ghus krke uske dusari side aa jata hu . Tabhi ak screen open hoti h aur mujhe ye information deti h .

DING....

[ ALARM ! ]
[ Aapne INSTANT DENGOUN me Parvesh kiya hai ]
​

CRACK...... CRACK.....

​

Achanak se mere piche se ye sound sunayi deta h aur jaise hi mai piche mud kr dekhta hu ye kya m chauk jata h . QKI mai jis invisible diwar se andar aaya tha wo stone me transform ho gayi thi aur mujh us paar ka kuch nhi dikh rha tha .
Mai apna hath aage bada kr us side jane ki kosis krta hu lakin mera hath stone ke paar ja hi nahi pa raha tha .

Mai bikul paresan ho jata hu .

" Nahi ! Ye nahi ho skta "
" Bahar jane ka rasta band ho gaya ?! "

​

SWOOSSS.........

​

Tabhi mere piche se ak girl aati h aur apna smartphone use krte hue wo is stone ke diwar ke paar chli jati h . Jise uske liye koi diwar ho hi na .
Ye dekh mai bikul shock ho jata hu .

Mai ( shock se ) " kya ye koi aur dimension hai ? "
" Ye baki dusre normal DENGOUN se alag hai. "
" Maine aisa phle kabhi nahi dekha hai . Lakin ye Red gate ke jaisa hi hai . "

Mai ( apne sir pr hath rakhte hue ) " ab mai kya kru ? Maine to planning ki thi ki agr kuch bura hua to yaha se bhag jaunga. "
" Lakin agar bahar jane ka rasta hi band ho gaya h to ab mai yaha se bhag bhi nahi skta. "

​

Ding....

Mere itna Bolte h an new screen mere samne aati h ...

[ ALARM ! ]
[ Aap yaha se tb tk bahr nahi ja skte jb tk ki aap yaha ke BOSS ko na maar de ya fir aap RETURN CRYSTAL ka use na kre. ]
​

Mai ( screen ko dekh kr gusse se ) " ye kya mai tb tk yaha se bahr nahi ja sakta jb tk ki yaha ke BOSS ko na maar du.... "
" abhi kuch din phle ki hi baat hai jaha mai ek E Rank monster ke khilaf struggle kr raha tha . Aur ek aaj ka din hai jaha mujhe akele is pure DENGOUN ko saaf krna hai aur yaha ke monsters ko marna h ... "
" Damm!! Tm mujhse majak kr rahe ho . "

​

AAAAAAA..........HUUUUU......RORRRR.......

​

Mujhe niche se monsters ke bhut tej tej chillane ki aawaje aa rahi thi . Jise sun kr mai kud se kahta hu ( dara hua )
" kya mai such me kud se aisi ummid kr raha hu ...
Ki mai in sb se bina kisi Hunter ke group ke fight ke jit paunga. "

​

AAAAAA....... HUUUUUUU...... RORRRR......

​

Aur fir se niche se monsters ki aawaje lagatar gunjane lagti h .

​

Aaj ke liye bs itna hi dosto !!
Aapke review nd suggestions ka wait rahega comments ke through !!
Apna pyar aise hi banaye rakhiye !!

​

Nice update Bhai

 

[Scorpionking]

UPDATE - 12

Ab tk aapne dekha dosto kaise m us room se jinda bach jata h aur baki 5 hunturs bhi.
Mai ak hospital me admit rahta hu mujhse Hunter ke inspector DOUBLE AWAKING ke bare me puchte h aur mana crystal se check karte h but mai phle jaisa hi rahta hu .
Uske baad meri choti sis kavya aa kr apni chinta jahir krti h aur uske jane ke baad mai system ko thoda thoda smjhne ki kosis krta hu end me mujhe Daily Quest krne ko milta h aur m majak smjh kr so jata h aur time limit khtam ho jati h Daily Quest ki aur m ak registan me aa jata hu aur mere piche monster lag jata h .
​

AB AAGE....

​

HAH..... HAH...... HAH......

Suraj pura aasman me chda hua tha jiske karan bahut jyada garmi thi aur m jitna ho ske utna tej bhage ja raha tha . Mai na jane kb se bhag raha tha aur pasine se pura bhig gaya tha aisa lag raha tha jaise m abhi naha ke bahar nikala hua hu . Mai bhut jyada thak gaya tha lakin m ruk nhi skta tha QKI mere piche jahrile nakhun wala registani BICCHU lga hua .

CRRRRR........ CRRRRRR........
AAAAAAA...........

Ab tk mere piche kai sare BICCHU lag chuke the aur mai unse bhchne ke liye chillate hue lagatar bhage ja raha raha tha .

DING........
Aur tbhi mujhe screen me dikhta h ...

{ [ ALARM !]
[ PENALTY QUEST : JINDA BACHE RAHNA ]

GOLE : time khtam hone tk jinda bache rahna.

[ Time required : 4 hour ]
[ Time remaining : 0 H 0 Min 5 Sec] }​

Waha hospital me morning ke 4 bjne hi wale the aur screen me mujhe bs 5sec time bacha hua tha . Uske baad ye PENALTY QUEST khtam ho jana tha lakin ab tk mai bhut thak gaya tha jiske karan mujhe lg raha tha ye sare BICCHU ab kabhi bhi mujhe pakad lenge aur chir faad karke khaa jayenge.

YAHHHHH...........
AAAAAA.....

Tabhi ek BICCHU mere bikul krib aa jata h, ye dekh kr mai bhut jyada dar jata hu aur wo BICCHU mujhe katne ke liye jaise hi apna muh open krta h . waise hi screen pr new massage aata h aur mujhe sunayi deta h ...

DING....

[ALARM ! ]
[ Aapne PENALTY QUEST ko pura kr liya h ] ​

Aur ye sunayi dete h jaise hi mai apna alga kadam badata hu mai registan se nikal kr hospital me apne room ke floor se hote hue bahar nikal aata hu .

HAH....... HAH....... HAH......

Aur m floor pr ghutno ke bal baith kr bahut jor jor se hafhne lagta hu . Mere room me chro taraf floor pr jagah jagah ret padi hui rahti h . Mai apni sanso ko control karte hue bolta hu ...

" PENALTY QUEST ? "

DING....

Aur tbhi ak new screen open ho jati h jisme likha hua tha ..

{ [ MASSAGE ]
[ Your reward for completing the PENALTY QUEST have arrived ]

[ Kya aap ise lena chahenge ? ]
[ ACCEPT ] [ REFUSED ] }​

DHHDDD...

Ye sunane ke baad m bina koi ans diye jyada thake hone ke karan wahi floor pr behos ho jata hu .

CHUUUUU.....

Aur tbhi ak nurse round ke liye aati h . Aur jaise hi mera door open krke andar ka najara dekhti h akdam shock ho jatai h . QKI mai floor pr behos , pasine se bhiga hua rahta hu aur floor pr jagah jaghr ret padi hui rahti h .
Wo chilla ke madad ke liye kuch hospital staff ke bulati h ..
" Hay bhagwan ! Yaha kya hua tha ? "
" Please ! Koi aao aur aa kr madad kro meri . "

Kuch dino baad ....

Hospital staff ke kisi room me break time me 2 nurse window ke paas khadi ho kr coffee pite hue aaps me baat kr rahi hoti h .

1st nurse " kya tum Rider name ke ak patient ko janti ho ?
Maine suna h wo ak huntur hai . "

2nd nurse ( coffee ka ek ghut pite hue ) " are haa haa ,
Wo roj running ke liye jata h , jbki abhi bs kuch din phle hi wo behosi ke halat se bahar aaya h . "
" Doctor ka kya kahna h uske bare me ? "

1st nurse " doctor ka kahna h ki hunturs log normal logo se jldi thik ho jate hai .
So halki exercise krne me koi dikkat nhi h . "

1st nurse ( window ke bahr ak person ki taraf isara krte hue ) " wo dekho bahar wo abhi bhi running kr raha h ! "

2nd nurse ( meri taraf dekhte hue ) " agr ye ak halki exercise hai ....
To kya ye such me thik rahega abhi ke liye iska ye sb krna ? "
" Roj ye kitne hour running krta h . "

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Mai running krte hue kud se baat krta hu
" aaj pure 4din ho gaye mujhe , jbse mai behosi se wapas hos me aaya hu .
Ab tk maine kuch bate system ke bare me jaan li h . "

HAH...... HAH....... HAH.......
DING......

Aur mai bhagte bhagte ruk jata hu aur apne ghutno ke bal jujh kr jor jor se hafhne lagta hu . Mere body se pasina tapak raha tha tabhi ak screen mere samne aa jati h ( screen ki taraf dekh ke )...
" Pahli baat to ye ki ....
Ye mere aakho ke samne jo screen jaisa h ye koi bhram nahi h . Ye bilkul asli h ."
" Ha wo alg baat h ki koi aur ise nahi dekh skta jbki mai ise apni aakho ke samne bikul saaf saaf dekh skta hu . "

{ [ ALARM ! ]
[ ( Running ) 10Km : Completed ( 10/10Km ) ] }​

Mai " thik hai. "

Fir se new screen open hui ...

{ [ QUEST DIRECTION ]

GOLE

[ Push-ups ( 100/100 ) ]
[ Curl-ups ( 100/100 ) ]
[ Squats ( 100/100 ) ]
[ Running ( 10/10Km ) ] }​

Mai ( screen ki traf dekh kr ) " ok "

Again new screen open hui ...

{ [ QUEST REWARD ]

[ CHOOSE YOUR REWARD :- ]
[ Aap apna reward niche chun sakte h ]
[ REWARD #1 : Statue recovery ]
[ Not open now ]
[ Not open now ]
[ Will you accept ]
( Accept ) ( Reject ) }​

Mai " accept recovery statue. "

Mere itna Bolte hi mere body chro taraf se goldan light se cover ho jati h . Aur slowly slowly wo mere andar chli jati h .
Ye ak aisa magica light thi jisase exercise krne ke baad aapke body me jitna bhi thakan ho sara ak pal me khtam ho jata h .
Ak aisa thakan jo ki itni exercise krne ke baad jarur mere body me rahta aur thik thak time tk rahta lakin is magic seba kuch pal me aisa ho jata h jaise mujhe kabhi thakan name ki koi chij hi nahi thi .

In sb ke alawa bhi aur bhi bahut si chijen thi jo maine itne dino me smjh liya tha .
Jaise ki STAT POINT ka aur RANDOM BOX ITEMS ka ek alag se window open hota tha .

[ ALARM ! ]
[ You have received the RANDOM BOX ]​

Iske baad ak gift type ka box mere hath me aa jata h aur mere touch hote h open ho jata h .
RANDOM BOX hmesa Daily Quest pura karne pr milta tha lakin jaruri nahi h ki hamesa usme se kuch nikle hi QKI kabhi kabhi usme se kuch kaam ka mil jata tha aur kabhi wo khali hi rahta tha.

Aap apne charector ke kisi bhi Statue ko increase kr skte the jb tk ki aapke paas Stat point bache hue h .

{ [ STATUS ]

( Name : Rider )
( Job : None )
( Tital : None )
( HP : 100 )
( MP : 10 )
( Level : 1 )
( Fatigue : 0 )
-------------------
( Strength : 16 )
( Agility : 10 )
( Sense : 10 )
( Vitality : 10 )
( Intelligence : 10 )
-------------------
( Remaining point : 3 ) }​

Aur in sb se mujhe itna to pata chal gaya tha jaise jaise mai apne character ka status increase krunga mai bhi strong hota jaunga .
Aur haa level o bhdhane pr bhi thik yahi baat hogi .
Statue , skills, items , inventory, item storage aur bhi aise hi na jane kitne options available the is system me .
Ye mujhe kisi game ki taraf lag raha tha . jaise game me koi character hota h aur uske sare strong aur weak point aap options se dekh sakte ho aur jaise jaise aap unhen increase karoge aap ka character bhi sting hota jayega . Mujhe bhi aisa hi lg raha tha jaise koi strong power mujhe control kr rahi h .

AHHHHH...

Aur mai side me rakhe ak table pr baith jata hu aur yahi sb dekhte hue sochne lagta h ...
" Haha aakhir yaha ho kya raha h ye abhi tk puri tarah se mujhe smjh me nahi aaya tha "

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Saam ke time reception pr ...

Mai ( receptionist se ) " kya mai aaj yaha se chutti le skta hu ? "

Receptionist ( meri taraf dekhte hue ) " haa thik h tum chutti le skte ho , lakin tum ja kaha rahe ho ? "

Mai " mujhe bahar kuch kaam se jana h . "

Uske baad mai hospital se naikl jata hu apne aaj ki manjil ki taraf .

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Kuch time baad mai ek railway station ke gate ke bahr khada tha . Railway station ka name MANDA tha .
Mai gate no. 3 ke samne khda ho kr sidhiyo ki taraf dekhta hu jo ki nice ki or ja rahi thi . Fir main apne pocket me hath daal kr kuch nikalta hu, mere hath me ak ajib se green colour ki chabhi aa jati h .

Mai ( chabhi ko dekhte hue ) " ab samaya aa gaya h ye dekhne ka ki aakhir ye krti kya hai ? "
" QKI jo RANDOM BOX mujhe hr roj DAILY QUEST ko complete krne ke baad milta tha usme se kabhi bandage , kabhi pen , to most of time khali rahta tha kl usi me se mujhe ye chabhi mili h . "

About green key :

[ Item : DENGEON KEY ]
[ Item class : E ]
[ Type : key ]
[ Ye ak aisa key hai jiske use se aap turant ak DENGEON bana sakte hai . Ise aap kewal MANDA railway station ke gate no. 3 me use kr skte hai. ]​

Mai ( key ko dekh kr ) " to ye ak key hai jisase mai abhi yaha pr ak DENGEON bana skta hu. "

Fir mai sochne lagta hu ' kya such me ye DOUBLE AWAKING ke karna ho raha h ? '
' ya ye sayad koi procedure hai DOUBLE AWAKING ke milne ka. '

Mai ( key ko jor se muthi me band krte hue ) " agr such me aisa h to mujhe is chance ko use ke hi dekhna hoga isi me mera fayda h ."
" Duniya ke sbse kamjor Hunter ko DOUBLE AWAKING mila h . "
" Dusre log jb ye sunenge to wo sb bhut hasenge "

Mai ( sidhiyo ki tarf dekh kr ) " ab mujhe apne bhagne ki kabiliyat pr pura bharosa hai. "
" To agar ye aakhiri baar ki tarah khatarnak hua to mai waha se turant bhag jaunga cahe jo ho jaye. "

Itna bol kr mai us green key ko hawa me hi ghumane lagta hu jaise koi lock open kr raha hu .

TIK.......
BUZZZZZZ........BUZZZZZZZ.......

aur hua bhi aisa wo key hawa me hi kisi invisible lock ko open kr deta h aur gate no. 3ke samne blue light chmakne lagti h . Aur mere samne blue light ki ak invisible diwar bn jati h .

Tap..tap....

Aur mai us invisible diwar me se ghus krke uske dusari side aa jata hu . Tabhi ak screen open hoti h aur mujhe ye information deti h .

DING....

[ ALARM ! ]
[ Aapne INSTANT DENGOUN me Parvesh kiya hai ]
​

CRACK...... CRACK.....

​

Achanak se mere piche se ye sound sunayi deta h aur jaise hi mai piche mud kr dekhta hu ye kya m chauk jata h . QKI mai jis invisible diwar se andar aaya tha wo stone me transform ho gayi thi aur mujh us paar ka kuch nhi dikh rha tha .
Mai apna hath aage bada kr us side jane ki kosis krta hu lakin mera hath stone ke paar ja hi nahi pa raha tha .

Mai bikul paresan ho jata hu .

" Nahi ! Ye nahi ho skta "
" Bahar jane ka rasta band ho gaya ?! "

​

SWOOSSS.........

​

Tabhi mere piche se ak girl aati h aur apna smartphone use krte hue wo is stone ke diwar ke paar chli jati h . Jise uske liye koi diwar ho hi na .
Ye dekh mai bikul shock ho jata hu .

Mai ( shock se ) " kya ye koi aur dimension hai ? "
" Ye baki dusre normal DENGOUN se alag hai. "
" Maine aisa phle kabhi nahi dekha hai . Lakin ye Red gate ke jaisa hi hai . "

Mai ( apne sir pr hath rakhte hue ) " ab mai kya kru ? Maine to planning ki thi ki agr kuch bura hua to yaha se bhag jaunga. "
" Lakin agar bahar jane ka rasta hi band ho gaya h to ab mai yaha se bhag bhi nahi skta. "

​

Ding....

Mere itna Bolte h an new screen mere samne aati h ...

[ ALARM ! ]
[ Aap yaha se tb tk bahr nahi ja skte jb tk ki aap yaha ke BOSS ko na maar de ya fir aap RETURN CRYSTAL ka use na kre. ]
​

Mai ( screen ko dekh kr gusse se ) " ye kya mai tb tk yaha se bahr nahi ja sakta jb tk ki yaha ke BOSS ko na maar du.... "
" abhi kuch din phle ki hi baat hai jaha mai ek E Rank monster ke khilaf struggle kr raha tha . Aur ek aaj ka din hai jaha mujhe akele is pure DENGOUN ko saaf krna hai aur yaha ke monsters ko marna h ... "
" Damm!! Tm mujhse majak kr rahe ho . "

​

AAAAAAA..........HUUUUU......RORRRR.......

​

Mujhe niche se monsters ke bhut tej tej chillane ki aawaje aa rahi thi . Jise sun kr mai kud se kahta hu ( dara hua )
" kya mai such me kud se aisi ummid kr raha hu ...
Ki mai in sb se bina kisi Hunter ke group ke fight ke jit paunga. "

​

AAAAAA....... HUUUUUUU...... RORRRR......

​

Aur fir se niche se monsters ki aawaje lagatar gunjane lagti h .

​

Aaj ke liye bs itna hi dosto !!
Aapke review nd suggestions ka wait rahega comments ke through !!
Apna pyar aise hi banaye rakhiye !!

​

Shaandar update bhai maza aa gaya ab dekhte hai age kya hota hai or apna hero dungun kaise paar karta hai .

 

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

UPDATE - 12

Ab tk aapne dekha dosto kaise m us room se jinda bach jata h aur baki 5 hunturs bhi.
Mai ak hospital me admit rahta hu mujhse Hunter ke inspector DOUBLE AWAKING ke bare me puchte h aur mana crystal se check karte h but mai phle jaisa hi rahta hu .
Uske baad meri choti sis kavya aa kr apni chinta jahir krti h aur uske jane ke baad mai system ko thoda thoda smjhne ki kosis krta hu end me mujhe Daily Quest krne ko milta h aur m majak smjh kr so jata h aur time limit khtam ho jati h Daily Quest ki aur m ak registan me aa jata hu aur mere piche monster lag jata h .
​

AB AAGE....

​

HAH..... HAH...... HAH......

Suraj pura aasman me chda hua tha jiske karan bahut jyada garmi thi aur m jitna ho ske utna tej bhage ja raha tha . Mai na jane kb se bhag raha tha aur pasine se pura bhig gaya tha aisa lag raha tha jaise m abhi naha ke bahar nikala hua hu . Mai bhut jyada thak gaya tha lakin m ruk nhi skta tha QKI mere piche jahrile nakhun wala registani BICCHU lga hua .

CRRRRR........ CRRRRRR........
AAAAAAA...........

Ab tk mere piche kai sare BICCHU lag chuke the aur mai unse bhchne ke liye chillate hue lagatar bhage ja raha raha tha .

DING........
Aur tbhi mujhe screen me dikhta h ...

{ [ ALARM !]
[ PENALTY QUEST : JINDA BACHE RAHNA ]

GOLE : time khtam hone tk jinda bache rahna.

[ Time required : 4 hour ]
[ Time remaining : 0 H 0 Min 5 Sec] }​

Waha hospital me morning ke 4 bjne hi wale the aur screen me mujhe bs 5sec time bacha hua tha . Uske baad ye PENALTY QUEST khtam ho jana tha lakin ab tk mai bhut thak gaya tha jiske karan mujhe lg raha tha ye sare BICCHU ab kabhi bhi mujhe pakad lenge aur chir faad karke khaa jayenge.

YAHHHHH...........
AAAAAA.....

Tabhi ek BICCHU mere bikul krib aa jata h, ye dekh kr mai bhut jyada dar jata hu aur wo BICCHU mujhe katne ke liye jaise hi apna muh open krta h . waise hi screen pr new massage aata h aur mujhe sunayi deta h ...

DING....

[ALARM ! ]
[ Aapne PENALTY QUEST ko pura kr liya h ] ​

Aur ye sunayi dete h jaise hi mai apna alga kadam badata hu mai registan se nikal kr hospital me apne room ke floor se hote hue bahar nikal aata hu .

HAH....... HAH....... HAH......

Aur m floor pr ghutno ke bal baith kr bahut jor jor se hafhne lagta hu . Mere room me chro taraf floor pr jagah jagah ret padi hui rahti h . Mai apni sanso ko control karte hue bolta hu ...

" PENALTY QUEST ? "

DING....

Aur tbhi ak new screen open ho jati h jisme likha hua tha ..

{ [ MASSAGE ]
[ Your reward for completing the PENALTY QUEST have arrived ]

[ Kya aap ise lena chahenge ? ]
[ ACCEPT ] [ REFUSED ] }​

DHHDDD...

Ye sunane ke baad m bina koi ans diye jyada thake hone ke karan wahi floor pr behos ho jata hu .

CHUUUUU.....

Aur tbhi ak nurse round ke liye aati h . Aur jaise hi mera door open krke andar ka najara dekhti h akdam shock ho jatai h . QKI mai floor pr behos , pasine se bhiga hua rahta hu aur floor pr jagah jaghr ret padi hui rahti h .
Wo chilla ke madad ke liye kuch hospital staff ke bulati h ..
" Hay bhagwan ! Yaha kya hua tha ? "
" Please ! Koi aao aur aa kr madad kro meri . "

Kuch dino baad ....

Hospital staff ke kisi room me break time me 2 nurse window ke paas khadi ho kr coffee pite hue aaps me baat kr rahi hoti h .

1st nurse " kya tum Rider name ke ak patient ko janti ho ?
Maine suna h wo ak huntur hai . "

2nd nurse ( coffee ka ek ghut pite hue ) " are haa haa ,
Wo roj running ke liye jata h , jbki abhi bs kuch din phle hi wo behosi ke halat se bahar aaya h . "
" Doctor ka kya kahna h uske bare me ? "

1st nurse " doctor ka kahna h ki hunturs log normal logo se jldi thik ho jate hai .
So halki exercise krne me koi dikkat nhi h . "

1st nurse ( window ke bahr ak person ki taraf isara krte hue ) " wo dekho bahar wo abhi bhi running kr raha h ! "

2nd nurse ( meri taraf dekhte hue ) " agr ye ak halki exercise hai ....
To kya ye such me thik rahega abhi ke liye iska ye sb krna ? "
" Roj ye kitne hour running krta h . "

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Mai running krte hue kud se baat krta hu
" aaj pure 4din ho gaye mujhe , jbse mai behosi se wapas hos me aaya hu .
Ab tk maine kuch bate system ke bare me jaan li h . "

HAH...... HAH....... HAH.......
DING......

Aur mai bhagte bhagte ruk jata hu aur apne ghutno ke bal jujh kr jor jor se hafhne lagta hu . Mere body se pasina tapak raha tha tabhi ak screen mere samne aa jati h ( screen ki taraf dekh ke )...
" Pahli baat to ye ki ....
Ye mere aakho ke samne jo screen jaisa h ye koi bhram nahi h . Ye bilkul asli h ."
" Ha wo alg baat h ki koi aur ise nahi dekh skta jbki mai ise apni aakho ke samne bikul saaf saaf dekh skta hu . "

{ [ ALARM ! ]
[ ( Running ) 10Km : Completed ( 10/10Km ) ] }​

Mai " thik hai. "

Fir se new screen open hui ...

{ [ QUEST DIRECTION ]

GOLE

[ Push-ups ( 100/100 ) ]
[ Curl-ups ( 100/100 ) ]
[ Squats ( 100/100 ) ]
[ Running ( 10/10Km ) ] }​

Mai ( screen ki traf dekh kr ) " ok "

Again new screen open hui ...

{ [ QUEST REWARD ]

[ CHOOSE YOUR REWARD :- ]
[ Aap apna reward niche chun sakte h ]
[ REWARD #1 : Statue recovery ]
[ Not open now ]
[ Not open now ]
[ Will you accept ]
( Accept ) ( Reject ) }​

Mai " accept recovery statue. "

Mere itna Bolte hi mere body chro taraf se goldan light se cover ho jati h . Aur slowly slowly wo mere andar chli jati h .
Ye ak aisa magica light thi jisase exercise krne ke baad aapke body me jitna bhi thakan ho sara ak pal me khtam ho jata h .
Ak aisa thakan jo ki itni exercise krne ke baad jarur mere body me rahta aur thik thak time tk rahta lakin is magic seba kuch pal me aisa ho jata h jaise mujhe kabhi thakan name ki koi chij hi nahi thi .

In sb ke alawa bhi aur bhi bahut si chijen thi jo maine itne dino me smjh liya tha .
Jaise ki STAT POINT ka aur RANDOM BOX ITEMS ka ek alag se window open hota tha .

[ ALARM ! ]
[ You have received the RANDOM BOX ]​

Iske baad ak gift type ka box mere hath me aa jata h aur mere touch hote h open ho jata h .
RANDOM BOX hmesa Daily Quest pura karne pr milta tha lakin jaruri nahi h ki hamesa usme se kuch nikle hi QKI kabhi kabhi usme se kuch kaam ka mil jata tha aur kabhi wo khali hi rahta tha.

Aap apne charector ke kisi bhi Statue ko increase kr skte the jb tk ki aapke paas Stat point bache hue h .

{ [ STATUS ]

( Name : Rider )
( Job : None )
( Tital : None )
( HP : 100 )
( MP : 10 )
( Level : 1 )
( Fatigue : 0 )
-------------------
( Strength : 16 )
( Agility : 10 )
( Sense : 10 )
( Vitality : 10 )
( Intelligence : 10 )
-------------------
( Remaining point : 3 ) }​

Aur in sb se mujhe itna to pata chal gaya tha jaise jaise mai apne character ka status increase krunga mai bhi strong hota jaunga .
Aur haa level o bhdhane pr bhi thik yahi baat hogi .
Statue , skills, items , inventory, item storage aur bhi aise hi na jane kitne options available the is system me .
Ye mujhe kisi game ki taraf lag raha tha . jaise game me koi character hota h aur uske sare strong aur weak point aap options se dekh sakte ho aur jaise jaise aap unhen increase karoge aap ka character bhi sting hota jayega . Mujhe bhi aisa hi lg raha tha jaise koi strong power mujhe control kr rahi h .

AHHHHH...

Aur mai side me rakhe ak table pr baith jata hu aur yahi sb dekhte hue sochne lagta h ...
" Haha aakhir yaha ho kya raha h ye abhi tk puri tarah se mujhe smjh me nahi aaya tha "

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Saam ke time reception pr ...

Mai ( receptionist se ) " kya mai aaj yaha se chutti le skta hu ? "

Receptionist ( meri taraf dekhte hue ) " haa thik h tum chutti le skte ho , lakin tum ja kaha rahe ho ? "

Mai " mujhe bahar kuch kaam se jana h . "

Uske baad mai hospital se naikl jata hu apne aaj ki manjil ki taraf .

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Kuch time baad mai ek railway station ke gate ke bahr khada tha . Railway station ka name MANDA tha .
Mai gate no. 3 ke samne khda ho kr sidhiyo ki taraf dekhta hu jo ki nice ki or ja rahi thi . Fir main apne pocket me hath daal kr kuch nikalta hu, mere hath me ak ajib se green colour ki chabhi aa jati h .

Mai ( chabhi ko dekhte hue ) " ab samaya aa gaya h ye dekhne ka ki aakhir ye krti kya hai ? "
" QKI jo RANDOM BOX mujhe hr roj DAILY QUEST ko complete krne ke baad milta tha usme se kabhi bandage , kabhi pen , to most of time khali rahta tha kl usi me se mujhe ye chabhi mili h . "

About green key :

[ Item : DENGEON KEY ]
[ Item class : E ]
[ Type : key ]
[ Ye ak aisa key hai jiske use se aap turant ak DENGEON bana sakte hai . Ise aap kewal MANDA railway station ke gate no. 3 me use kr skte hai. ]​

Mai ( key ko dekh kr ) " to ye ak key hai jisase mai abhi yaha pr ak DENGEON bana skta hu. "

Fir mai sochne lagta hu ' kya such me ye DOUBLE AWAKING ke karna ho raha h ? '
' ya ye sayad koi procedure hai DOUBLE AWAKING ke milne ka. '

Mai ( key ko jor se muthi me band krte hue ) " agr such me aisa h to mujhe is chance ko use ke hi dekhna hoga isi me mera fayda h ."
" Duniya ke sbse kamjor Hunter ko DOUBLE AWAKING mila h . "
" Dusre log jb ye sunenge to wo sb bhut hasenge "

Mai ( sidhiyo ki tarf dekh kr ) " ab mujhe apne bhagne ki kabiliyat pr pura bharosa hai. "
" To agar ye aakhiri baar ki tarah khatarnak hua to mai waha se turant bhag jaunga cahe jo ho jaye. "

Itna bol kr mai us green key ko hawa me hi ghumane lagta hu jaise koi lock open kr raha hu .

TIK.......
BUZZZZZZ........BUZZZZZZZ.......

aur hua bhi aisa wo key hawa me hi kisi invisible lock ko open kr deta h aur gate no. 3ke samne blue light chmakne lagti h . Aur mere samne blue light ki ak invisible diwar bn jati h .

Tap..tap....

Aur mai us invisible diwar me se ghus krke uske dusari side aa jata hu . Tabhi ak screen open hoti h aur mujhe ye information deti h .

DING....

[ ALARM ! ]
[ Aapne INSTANT DENGOUN me Parvesh kiya hai ]
​

CRACK...... CRACK.....

​

Achanak se mere piche se ye sound sunayi deta h aur jaise hi mai piche mud kr dekhta hu ye kya m chauk jata h . QKI mai jis invisible diwar se andar aaya tha wo stone me transform ho gayi thi aur mujh us paar ka kuch nhi dikh rha tha .
Mai apna hath aage bada kr us side jane ki kosis krta hu lakin mera hath stone ke paar ja hi nahi pa raha tha .

Mai bikul paresan ho jata hu .

" Nahi ! Ye nahi ho skta "
" Bahar jane ka rasta band ho gaya ?! "

​

SWOOSSS.........

​

Tabhi mere piche se ak girl aati h aur apna smartphone use krte hue wo is stone ke diwar ke paar chli jati h . Jise uske liye koi diwar ho hi na .
Ye dekh mai bikul shock ho jata hu .

Mai ( shock se ) " kya ye koi aur dimension hai ? "
" Ye baki dusre normal DENGOUN se alag hai. "
" Maine aisa phle kabhi nahi dekha hai . Lakin ye Red gate ke jaisa hi hai . "

Mai ( apne sir pr hath rakhte hue ) " ab mai kya kru ? Maine to planning ki thi ki agr kuch bura hua to yaha se bhag jaunga. "
" Lakin agar bahar jane ka rasta hi band ho gaya h to ab mai yaha se bhag bhi nahi skta. "

​

Ding....

Mere itna Bolte h an new screen mere samne aati h ...

[ ALARM ! ]
[ Aap yaha se tb tk bahr nahi ja skte jb tk ki aap yaha ke BOSS ko na maar de ya fir aap RETURN CRYSTAL ka use na kre. ]
​

Mai ( screen ko dekh kr gusse se ) " ye kya mai tb tk yaha se bahr nahi ja sakta jb tk ki yaha ke BOSS ko na maar du.... "
" abhi kuch din phle ki hi baat hai jaha mai ek E Rank monster ke khilaf struggle kr raha tha . Aur ek aaj ka din hai jaha mujhe akele is pure DENGOUN ko saaf krna hai aur yaha ke monsters ko marna h ... "
" Damm!! Tm mujhse majak kr rahe ho . "

​

AAAAAAA..........HUUUUU......RORRRR.......

​

Mujhe niche se monsters ke bhut tej tej chillane ki aawaje aa rahi thi . Jise sun kr mai kud se kahta hu ( dara hua )
" kya mai such me kud se aisi ummid kr raha hu ...
Ki mai in sb se bina kisi Hunter ke group ke fight ke jit paunga. "

​

AAAAAA....... HUUUUUUU...... RORRRR......

​

Aur fir se niche se monsters ki aawaje lagatar gunjane lagti h .

​

Aaj ke liye bs itna hi dosto !!
Aapke review nd suggestions ka wait rahega comments ke through !!
Apna pyar aise hi banaye rakhiye !!

​

Shandar bahut he pyara update dil he khus kar diya update size way of return story grip everything is perfect real main dil se kuch he stories ke update ka wait karta hu unmai se apki top 2 mai h sabse important update timing ...jo perfect h
Bahut ache velentine bhai....