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Fantasy SOLO LEVELING

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  • Bahut achi lagi .

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Itachi_Uchiha

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:congrats: for the story Bhai
Mera sujhav hai Aap Pahle se kuchh update likh kr save kr lo Yadi kisi din time na mile pr aap use post kr sako, support Aapko jarur milega pr bahut se writer ke story bich me band kr dene ke chalte Bahut se readero ne 50 update pure hone ke baad story pr reaction ya revo dete hai to aap nirash na ho support dhire dhire badhta jayega jaise jaise updateo ki sankhya badhti jayegi...
Ji jarur mai aapka sujhav jrur manunga qki ye ak bahut hi acha sujhav hai nd sukriya aapke itne ache sujhav ke liye..
 

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Good going!!! :good: But at least give credits in your description to the original author or manga artist of the Solo levelling. Since, you are translating this in Hindi, at least mention their names. Good Luck!! :goteam:
Mai bhool gaya tha Werewolf bhai , sukriya jo aapne mujhe yaad dila diya ...
Mai bhi aapke story ka die hard fan hu , kosis krunga mai bhi aapki tarah ak achi story likh sakhu !!
 

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Mai bhool gaya tha Werewolf bhai , sukriya jo aapne mujhe yaad dila diya ...
Mai bhi aapke story ka die hard fan hu , kosis krunga mai bhi aapki tarah ak achi story likh sakhu !!
Don't worry!! Keep writing!! Keep a consistent schedule. People will come. :thumbup:
 

Xabhi

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UPDATE - 1

Delhi , India

Mera name RIDER hai aur mai Ak E-Rank HUNTER hu.
yadi aap meree thodee asaamaany strength aur regeneration ko najar andaaj karate hain to mujhe khud ko hunter kahana me bhee sharm lagta h .
Mai itta weak hu Jiske karan Hamesa hi mujhe bahut baar chote lagi hai aur kai baar to nearly death ka experience kiya h.

Ak aisa kaam jisme aapke life and death ke bich bs ak line ka anter ho use hunter kahte h , aur mai ye job is liye nahi karta qki ye mujhe pasand hai ....!
Mai badi muskil se apni bimar maa ke medical bills ko pay kr pata hu jo mujhe HUNTER GUILD pay krta h is kaam ke liye isi liye mai ye kaam krta hu .
Ak aam insan ke liye jiske paas koi particular talent na ho , aise me mere paas aur koi choice nahi h siway hunter banane ke.


Ak construction site in delhi....

Ak food truck khada tha aur uske aas paas bahut se log tea nd breakfast kr rahe the....

Food truck wala ak customer se ..
"Ye rahi tmhari tea nd good luck tmhare aaj ke raid ke liye."

Coustomer "thanks"

Tabhi piche se koi us coustomer ko aawaj deta h " hey Rohan ! "
" Bahut samay ho gaye tmse mile hue "

Rohan " are abhi tm yaha kya kar rahe ho ? Tmne to chor diya tha na tha na qki tm hunter nahi banana cahte the !! "

Abhi " actually meri wife 2nd time pregnant hai , ha ha..."

Rohan " sahi kaha raid ke jaisa kuch nahi h jaha aap apni kismat aajma skte ho "

Abhi " jindgi jina aasan nahi hai . Mujhe fikar hai ki ... Itna kafi time bita gaya h kahi mai piche na rah jau "
" Meri skill phle se hi khrab hai , aur ab to wo aur khrab ho gayi h itte time ke break ke karan jo maine liya h "

Tabhi samne se kuch aawaj aati h ...

" Rider tum aa gaye ! "
" Rider aane ke liye sukriya "
"Bahar thand hai na ? "

Rider " haha ... aisa kuch nahi h , mai aaj bhi tmhare sath hi rahunga "
Wo aadmi " Achi baat hai "

Tabhi Rohan riderko aawaj lagata hai ..
" rider tmne ab tk breakfast kiya ? "

Rider " haa Mr Rohan maine khaa liya , mere bare me fikar krne ke liye sukriya "

Itta kah kr rider aage nikal jata hai aur abhi use dekh kr Rohan se puchta hai..
"Kya ye ladka powerful hunter hai ? Har koi ise dekh kr bahut happy hai !"

Rohan " hehehehe.... Tm ise nahi jante qki jb tmne chora tha ye uske baad aaya hai . Iska nike name hai WORLD WEAKEST "

Abhi " kya duniya me sbse kamjor ? na ki sbse powerful!! "

Rohan " bro tabhi to aise logo ko hm S - Rank hunter kahte hai . Rider unmen sbse weak hai "
"Mera matlab hai ki wo itta weak hai ki wo E rank ke Dengoun se bhi hurt ho jata h "

Abhi " kya such me wo itta weak hai "

Rohan " haa !! Mere hisab se to wo hm sb me sbse weak hai "

Abhi " kya such me !!"

Rohan " ha iska mtlb hai humara Dengoun iske aane ke baad se weak ho gaya h "

Abhi " ahhh !! Aisa hai kya "

Rohan " hay ! Sayad wo hame sun skta hai hame. Is baat ko hm yahi khtam krte hai fu fu..."

(Ab Rider ke views se story )

Mai apne mn me 'mai suru se sb sun raha hu you old geezers '

Mai food truck ke paas chla jata hu usse bolta hu " kya mujhe ak cup coffee milegi ?"

Food truck wala " are hunter rider .. I m sorry , bs abhi kuch der phle hi sari coffee khtam ho gayi "

Mai bad feel karte hue sochta hu coffee bhi ni mili..

Food truck wala " I m really sorry rider coffee khtam hone ke liye "

Mai " koi baat nahi "


Aur m waha se aage chla jata hu .
Kuch der chalne ke baad ak ladki ki aawaj aati h " rider tmko fir se chot lag gayi !! "

Mai " ohh hi ! Aisa lagta h miss Anjana bhi raid me sath chl rahi h ?"

Anjana " of course , lakin problem ye nahi h ! Tmhare face pr fir se chot kaise lagi ?"

Mai " pata nahi .... Sayad tb laga hoga jb mai hunting kr raha hunga haha..."

Anjana " really..ab such such batao kya huaa tha. Kya tm hospital bhi gaye the ?"

Mai " ha mai gaya tha . Hm sb ak E rank dungeon me the aur mai akela hi jise chot lagi "

Anjana " huh ? Ye kaise ho gaya ?"

Mai " baki dusre hunter mere se higher ranked ke the to wo apne sath ak bhi healer nahi le gaye the "

Anjana " fir bhi wo bs is liye healer nahi le gaye qki unko lagta tha wo safe rahenge "

Mai " it's ok , ye sb is liye huaa qki mai weak hu , mujhe in sb ki aadat ho gayi h miss Anjana bhi ye baat janti h ,right ? "
" Well lagta h sb log gate ke ander jane ke liye ready h hme bhi chlna cahiye ..."

Anjana " ok "


Hm sb gate ke samne ikatha ho gaye the tabhi ak aadmi bich me ja kr sbke samne kahta hai " sun log suniye . Hm sb hunting pr jane ko taiyar aur khush hai , mai ye kahane ke liye qualified to nahi hu pr fhir bhi mai is raid ke liye party ka leader banane ko ready hu , isme aap me se kisi ko koi dikkat to nahi hai ?"

Rohan " Mr Rahul aap yaha present sb logo me sbse high rank wale h mujhe aapke leader bananese koi problem nahi hai "

Abhi " well Mr Rahul hame aap pr pura yakin hai . Mujhe bahut time ho gaya h aapke skills dekhe hue "

Baki sb log bhi Bolte hai
"Mai aapke leader banane se sahmat hu "
"Mai bhi "
" Meri bhi haa hai "

Mai " hamara dhyan rakhiyega Mr Rahul"

Rahul " all right to hm chlte hai Dungeon me "
Aur sb chl dete hai gate ke ander tb chlte chlte Mr Rahul mujhse kahte hai " Mr rider kosis karna hamare piche chot mt khaa jana "
Mai haste huee " haha okay"

Anjana " rider jldi chlo "

Mai " ha chlo "

Mai chlte huee kud se kahta hu 'mai aaj apna best karne ki kosis karunga '




aaj ke liye itta hi .
Bhai log 1st story hai to koi bhi problem ya suggestions ho comments krke jarur bataiyega . Bs aapka pyar milte rahe story jarur complete hogi enjoy story....
Sandar update bhai to rider sabse weak hai Apne group me Jiska sab log mjak udate hai, rider apni ma ki dvaiyo ke bill bharne ke liye hi yha kaam karta hai...
Bhai aap ek ko Ak likh rhe ho Kai jagah dekh ligiyega...
 

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Aise krte huee sb gate ke ander chale jate h . Waha bs food truck wale hi bachte h .

Tabhi ak food truck wala 1st food truck wale se puchta hai " tm kya soch rahe ho ?"

1st food truck wala " mai bs hunter rider ke bare me soch kr paresan hu , ki hum use coffee bhi nahi de paye "

2nd food truck wala " acha , wahi hunter na jo E category me sbse weakest hunter hai ? Is Dungeon ka rank kya hai ? "

1sy food truck wala gate ki taraf dekhte hue " wo kah rahe the ye ak D rank Dungeon ke barabar hai "
" Jb se main kaam kar raha hu, maine hunter rider ko kabhi bhi bina chot lage is hunter guild me nahi dekha hai "

2nd food truck wala " ak D rank Dungeon , well kuch bura hoga aisa mt socho , chalo hm chlte hai !!"


D rank Dungeon ke ander ak jagah mai niche baitha huaa tha . Mujhe kai jagah chot lagi hui thi aur anjana mujhe heal kr rahi thi qki Anjana ak healer thi . Uske hatho se green colour ke anergy ka gola nikalta hai aur mujhe heal krna start kr deta hai .

Wo heal krte hue mujhse bolti hai " rider tum hunter ka kaam chor q nahi dete .."
"Is tarah fight krne se to tum kewal kud ke liye risk bada rahe ho "

Mai " sorry "

Anjana " maine tumhe ye is liye nahi kah rahi hu ki tm mujhse mafi mango ."
Meri aankho me dekhte hue " Mujhe bs tmhari fikar hai "

Humse hi kuch duri pr baki sb members monster se fight kr rahe the . Rahul apne fire ability to use kr raha tha , Rohan apni sward se monster ko tukdo me cut kr raha tha , aise hi sb log apni apni power ka use krke monster ko maar rahe the .

Kuch der baad Anjana kahti hai " aakhirkar ye raid to khatam to hui "

Anjana abhi bhi mere knee ko heal kr rahi thi , mai piche mud kr dekhta hu to fight end ho gayi thi aur sare log aapas me bate kr rahe the .

Rohan abhi se majak karte hue kahta h " are Abhi, tm abhi tk mare nahi !!"

Abhi " nahi ye to mere liye bhut aasan tha "

Tabhi rahul kahta h " lagta h sb monster mar cuke hai ab yaha karne ko kuch nahi h "

Mai ye sb sun hi raha tha ki abhi Anjana kahti h " raider tumhare paas koi ak reason hai ki tum hunter ka kaam na choro ? "

Mai " mai hunter bs is liye bna hu qki mujhe isme maza aata h , agar mai ye kaam na kru to mai actually bore ho ke mar jaunga "
Mai apne mn me sochta hu ' agar maine Anjana ko such bataunga to mujhe aur jyada sharminda hona padega '

Anjana " jaisa ki tm kah rahe ho ki tm maze ke liye krte ho but iske karan two time raid marte hue tmharai jaan jate jate bachi h "

Ye sun kr mai hasne lagta hu aur mujhe hasta huaa dekh kr Anjana gusse se aag babula ho jati h " haso mat , isase tmhare chot wapas se ubhar aayenge "

Mai bs apni gardan haa me hila deta hu


Sb wapas se ak jagah iktha ho jate h tb rahul kahta h " ak monster ko marne ke baad tmlogo ko ye milta h THE MAGICAL CORE "

Ak magical core jo ki ak c rank ke monster ka ho uski kimat thousands me
hoti h !!

Pr Rider ak E rank hunter hai to uske liye C Rank monster ko marna impossible hi hai !!

Mai kud se kahta hu ' itti chot aur paresaniya uthane ke baad mai kewal ak E rank magical core hi earn kr paya '
' jabki maine apni life ko risk pr laga diya tha us hisab se to ye bahut kam hai , is tarah se paise kamana ......'

Mai abhi aage soch hi raha tha ki piche se kisi ki aawaj sunayi deti hai " are sb suno yaha ak aur gate hai ......"

Hm sb jldi se us gate se saamne ja kr khadhe ho jate hai aur dekhne lagte hai

Rahul " ye to Double Lair hai , dekh ke to lagta h ye such me asli hai "

Uske baad Rahul apne hath se fire power ka use krke ak aag ka gola banata hai aur use gufa me fek deta hai , aur us fire se hme pata chlta h ki gufa bahut jyada lambi hai

Fir Rahul kahta hai " ak min sb log meri baat suno " bos ke jinda rahane par get band nahin hota .
Qki gate abhi bhi open hai , to aisa ho skta hai ki boss iske ander hi hoga
Usually hme aise situation me apne guild ko contact krke unhe ye sb batana hoga aur unke order ka wait krna hoga lakin ....
Agr dusre hunters waha tk phle phuch gaye to humara profit km ho jayega
To mai cahta hu ki hm sb ander jaye aur boss ko maar de .
Qki ye bahut kahtarnak kaam hai to hm sare 17log iske liye vote kr leta hai
Aur vote ka result jo bhi ho uske baad koi complaint nahi krega "

Aur abhi apna apna vote dene lage !!

Rohan aur abhi sath me " hum dono fight krenge "

" Nahi "

" Mai chalunga "

" Meri tarf se naa hai "

" Chlo fight krte hai "

Anjana " sorry but mai nahi jana cahti "

Sbke vote hone ke baad Rahul kahta hai " to abhi tk 8:8 vote hue h "

Ab sirf mera vote bacha huaa tha to Rahul mujhse puchta h " tmhara kya kahna h rahul ? "

Sb kuch mere vote pr depends krta h sb meri taraf dekh rahe the aur mai soch raha tha ' mere paas abhi enough money nahi huee hai , jldi hi mujhe meri choti sister ko college bhejna hoga ....'
Aur mujhe meri bimar maa ki aur meri family condition ki yaad aane lagti h

Ye sb sochte hi mai turat bolta hu " mai cahlunga "

Aur sb bol padta hai " bs ak baar aur chlo ye krte hai "







Aaj ke liye itta hi !!
Aapke review nd suggestions ka wait rahega comments ke through .
Apna pyar banaye rakhiye qki aage story bhut achi h abhi bs base ready ho raha h !!
Rider apni majboori kisi ke samne nhi btana chahta use Lagta hai Ydi Usne vo sab btaya to log Uspr or hasenge, ek gufa ka gate mila hai or vo Bahut lambi hai dekhte hai kya hota hai usme Jane pr, group leader ne sabse vote karne ko kaha hai or usne sabko condition bhi btai hai ki kuchh bhi ho sakta hai fir bhi rider ne andar Jane ka faisla kiya hai... Superb update bhai sandar jabarjast
 

Xabhi

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Jaisa ki last update me aapne padha ki sb gate ke ander jate h raid ke liye . Waha Rider ko chot lagti h , fir Anjana usko heal krti h . Uske baad unhe pata chlta h ki boss abhi jinda h to uske piche jane ke liye sb vote krte h.....

AB AAGE...

Hm guffa me bhut der se chl rahe the aur bahut ander tak aa gaye the sb aaps me bate kr rahe the .

" Kya hum bahut ander nahi aa gaye hai ? "

"Hme kitne der se chl rahe hai ? "

" Lagbhag 40 min se "

" Boss ko maarane ke ek ghante baad gate band ho jaata hai isalie hamaare paas lagabhag 20 minat bache hain "


Mai aur Anjana sath chl rahe the tabhi m bolta hu Anjana se " hey sorry "

Anjana " kis liye ? "

Mai " mere haa kahne ke karan tmko jabardasti groups ke sath aana pada "

Anjana " m thik hu , to tumhe mere bare me fikar krne ki jarurat nahi h "

Mai " kya tm ... Such me thik ho ? "

Mere itta puchte hi wo gusse me aane lagti h aur bolti h " agr such kahu to ... Nahi mai bilkul thik nahi hu "

Gusse se aag babula hote huee " kya tum paagal ho? abhee agar thodi der phle tmko thoda upar se chhura ghopa gaya hota to tmhare dil mein chhed hota !!!
Aur yaha maine tmhare hath aur pairo ko to count hi nahi kiya jabki maine badi mushkil se unko heal kiya h .
Uske baad bhi kya soch ke tmne andar aane ko haa kaha tha bolo ? Kya tumhare head me bhi chot lagi h ?
Bolo ? "

Aur ye sb sun kr mai sochne lagta hu ' ye such hai ... Mai sirf isi liye jinda hu qki miss Anjana ak B rank healer hai . Mai fir se inka karjdar ho gaya hu ...'

Mere muh se bs itta hi nikala " sorry "

Anjana (abhi bhi gusse se mujhe dekhte hue) " kya tum such me mafi maang rahe ho ? "

Mai (apna head niche kiye hue dhire se bola ) " haa "

Ye sun ke Anjana kuch saant ho gayi aur aage chlte hue mujhse boli " agr tm such me mafi magna cahte ho to .... Mujhe khane ke liye le jana kaisa rahega ? "

Mai ( shock ho kr ) " kya ? "

Anjana ( mujhe ghurte hue ) " kya .. tumhe mere sath khana khane me koi problem hai kya ? "

Mai ( jldi se ) " nahi ! Nahi ! Bilkul bhi nahi "

Hm abhi aage kuch baat krte tabhi hamre group me se ak member chillate hue kahta h " ye raha boss ka room !! "

Hm sb samne dekhne lagte h gufa ke bicho bich ak bahut bada door tha akdam ajib sa

Rohan ( Abhi se door ki tarf dekhte hue ) " hey ...ye jagah kahtarnak nahi lag rahi ? "

Abhi ( door ki taraf hi dekhte hue) " sahi kaha "

Baki sb bhi aisa hi soch rahe hote h tabhi Rahul kahta h " yaha phuchne ke baad bhi kya tm yaha se khali hath jana cahte ho ? "

Rahul door ki tarf badh kr use open krne ki kosis krte hue aage bolta h " sayad hm sb sbse phle log ho sakte hai jo is Dungeon me enter kr rahe ho .... Jo jana cahte h wo ja skte hai . Bhle mujhe akele jana pade pr mai andar jaunga "

Ye sb sun kr baki members bate krne lagte h
" Mr Rahul ki skills amazing hai . Aur wo C rank ke hunters me se sbse jyada offensive style wale hunter hai "

" Ye agar yaha aana nahin hota to vah kisee bade gild mein hote , qki hm Mr Rahul pr trust krte hai tabhi to hm yaha aaye hai, isi liye hme unhen end tk follow krna cahiye "

CREAK.......CREAK.....
Tb tk Rahul ne door open kr diya aur sb usi taraf dekhne lagte hai .

Rahul " jitna maine socha tha ye to usase bhi aaram se open ho gaya , chlo ander chalte hai "

Jaise hi sb door ke ander enter krte hai
Diwar pr lagi sari massal ak ak krke apne aap jal jati h .


Door ke Ander sb phuch kr dekhne lagte h ye ak bahut big room h jo ki circle shape me hai aur uske chro taraf bhut se statues bane huee the aur unke bich me ak bahut big statue bana huaa tha jo ki ak chair pr baitha huaa tha .

Sb ander ka view dekh kr aaps me baat krne lagte h ...
" Ohh light chalu ho gayi , bahut acha hua "

" Maine aisa Dungeon aaj se phle kabhi nahi dekha hai . Chlo sb chro taraf fail jao nd dundho kuch kaam ka milta hai kya "

Is jagah ko dekh ke aisa lag raha tha jaise bahut time se yaha koi nahi aaya h Qki hr taraf dhuul, mitti aur jale lage hue the .
Ye sare statues bhi ... Bahut hi ajeeb lag rahe the dekhne me .
Ye sare statues alg - alg kuch na kuch pakde hue the . Inmen se kuch ne to instrument bhi pakda hua tha .

Mai sochta hu ' ye to bahut sare hai ... Inke karan dar bhi lag raha h Qki ye bahut sare h '

Mai (surprise ho kr ) " wow "

"Aisa nahi lag raha h jaise koi hme dekh raha ho !! "
" Aisi buri bate karna band kro "

Us sbse big statue ko dekh ke ak hunter bolta h " Are wahhh ise dekho ye kitta huge hai !! "

" Ye mt bolna ki yahi boss hai ? "

" Aisa sochna bhi mt , Aakhirkar ye bs ak statue hi hai "

Mai " yaha bs yahi ak itna huge hai "

" Yaha aisa kuch bhi nahi h jise dekh kr ye kah sake yaha koi monster mil sakta h "

"Sahi kaha "

" Huh , ak bhi monster nahi mila "

TAP...TAP...
Tabhi Rahul Ko chlte hue niche kuch aawaj sunayi deti h wo niche dekhta h apne pairo ke paas" Hmm !! Ye kya h ....? Koi magical seal "

" Mr Rahul ... Yaha kuch likha hua hai ! Mere khyal se ye aapko dekhna chahiye "

Mr Rahul piche mud kr aawaj dene wale ke paas chle jaye h sath me baki members bhi .
Waha pr ak statue jiske back pr wings the wo ak big stone apne hath me hold kiye hue tha jispe kuch likha huaa tha .

Rahul " ye to runic language(inke world ki ak old language) me likha hua hai , ruko padh ke dekhta hu .."

" Ye to CARTHENON TEMPLE'S ke rules like hue hai "
" 1st bhagawaan ki pooja kre "
" 2nd bhagwaan se prathna kre "
" 3rd apne faith ko prove kre "

Rahul ye sb read krraha tha aur tabhi Anjana piche se mere shirt ko apni taraf khichti h aur thodi ghbrayi hui voice mebolti h " hey Rider !! "

Big statue ki tarah ishara karke " wo big statue hai na maine uski eye ko jst abhi move hote hue dekha tha wo hamari hi taraf dekh raha tha "

Mai " huh ! Tm such to bol rahi ho ..? Jarur tmne thik se nahi dekha hoga "

Tabhi suddenly mujhe kuch ajeeb sa feel hone lagta h aur air bhi phle se chilled ho gayi thi aisa mujhe feel hota h .

Rahul " ....................... jo koi bhi ye sare rule follow nahi krega wo , jinda wapas nahi ja payega "

Tabbhi piche se THUDDDD........ ki jor se aawaj aati h hm sb mud kr dekhte h to door close ho cuka tha .

" Ye kya door closed ho gaya "
" Ab hm kya karenge ? "

" Damm !! Mai aur yaha aise
hi bina wajagh nahi ruk skta , tm sb faltu me apna time khrab kr rahe ho , yaha aana hi humari ak galti thi !
Mai ja raha hu .."

Itta bol kr ak hunter door ki taraf jane lagta h aur kahta h " wo monster ka boss , khjana aur jo kuch bhi mile sb tm log rakh sakte ho mujhe kuch nahi cahiye .
Good luck "
Aur wo ja kr door ko open krne lagta h .

Tabhi Mr Rahul chilla kr bolte h " ruk jao apna hath door ke handle pr math rakhna ...."

Pr jb tak wo pura bol pate wo hunter apna hath rakh cuka tha handle pr aur tabhi bahut tej Ak sound sunayi diya...

SWOOSSS.......
aur pl bhr me hi us hunter ki body 2part me divide ho cuki thi .
Qki gate ke paas jo status khada tha usne handle pr hath lagte h apne sward se hunter ko bina koi chance diye bahut teji se 2part me divide kr cuka tha . Uske pure sward pr blood hi blood tha aur wo wapas se apni position me khada ho gaya

Yaha hm sb dar aur shock se samne ka najara bs dekhte rah gaye. Hmare muh khule hue the . Anjana ye sb dekh kr bahut dar gayi thi aur apni eye close krke mere gale lagi hui thi baki sb ka bhi haal kuch aisa hi tha....

" Ye statue move bhi kr skte hai ? "
" The hell !!! Hme inse fight krni hogi ? "

Tabhi achanak se mere dimak me khyal aata h ' wait 1min agar kuch der phle Anjana ne jo bola wo agar such hua to '
Aur m turant piche mud kr us big statue ki tarf dekhta hu aur bhut jyada shock me chla jata hu ...
Qki us big statue ki eye chmkne lagti h !!






Aaj ke liye itna hi dosto !!
Aaj ke liye itta hi !!
Aapke review nd suggestions ka wait rahega comments ke through !!!

To yah ek temple Jaisa hai or vha khade ek stachu me ek patthar hai jispr instructions likhe huye hai ki kaise bahar nikal sakte hai vo... Is temple me bahut se stachu hai or unme se ek Bahut hi bda bhi hai or uski ankhe movement hoti hai Jise healer ne dekha tha pr uska kisi ne visvash nhi kiya pr gate band hone pr ek banda use kholne ko hota hai to ek stachu use bina mauka diye hi Bich se kaat deta hai... Sandar update bhai jabarjast
 

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To yah ek temple Jaisa hai or vha khade ek stachu me ek patthar hai jispr instructions likhe huye hai ki kaise bahar nikal sakte hai vo... Is temple me bahut se stachu hai or unme se ek Bahut hi bda bhi hai or uski ankhe movement hoti hai Jise healer ne dekha tha pr uska kisi ne visvash nhi kiya pr gate band hone pr ek banda use kholne ko hota hai to ek stachu use bina mauka diye hi Bich se kaat deta hai... Sandar update bhai jabarjast
Update 3 bi bahut he shandar tha bro keep writing and keep posting hero weak jarur h but heematwala h aur dimag h
 

Naik

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UPDATE 2
Aise krte huee sb gate ke ander chale jate h . Waha bs food truck wale hi bachte h .

Tabhi ak food truck wala 1st food truck wale se puchta hai " tm kya soch rahe ho ?"

1st food truck wala " mai bs hunter rider ke bare me soch kr paresan hu , ki hum use coffee bhi nahi de paye "

2nd food truck wala " acha , wahi hunter na jo E category me sbse weakest hunter hai ? Is Dungeon ka rank kya hai ? "

1sy food truck wala gate ki taraf dekhte hue " wo kah rahe the ye ak D rank Dungeon ke barabar hai "
" Jb se main kaam kar raha hu, maine hunter rider ko kabhi bhi bina chot lage is hunter guild me nahi dekha hai "

2nd food truck wala " ak D rank Dungeon , well kuch bura hoga aisa mt socho , chalo hm chlte hai !!"


D rank Dungeon ke ander ak jagah mai niche baitha huaa tha . Mujhe kai jagah chot lagi hui thi aur anjana mujhe heal kr rahi thi qki Anjana ak healer thi . Uske hatho se green colour ke anergy ka gola nikalta hai aur mujhe heal krna start kr deta hai .

Wo heal krte hue mujhse bolti hai " rider tum hunter ka kaam chor q nahi dete .."
"Is tarah fight krne se to tum kewal kud ke liye risk bada rahe ho "

Mai " sorry "

Anjana " maine tumhe ye is liye nahi kah rahi hu ki tm mujhse mafi mango ."
Meri aankho me dekhte hue " Mujhe bs tmhari fikar hai "

Humse hi kuch duri pr baki sb members monster se fight kr rahe the . Rahul apne fire ability to use kr raha tha , Rohan apni sward se monster ko tukdo me cut kr raha tha , aise hi sb log apni apni power ka use krke monster ko maar rahe the .

Kuch der baad Anjana kahti hai " aakhirkar ye raid to khatam to hui "

Anjana abhi bhi mere knee ko heal kr rahi thi , mai piche mud kr dekhta hu to fight end ho gayi thi aur sare log aapas me bate kr rahe the .

Rohan abhi se majak karte hue kahta h " are Abhi, tm abhi tk mare nahi !!"

Abhi " nahi ye to mere liye bhut aasan tha "

Tabhi rahul kahta h " lagta h sb monster mar cuke hai ab yaha karne ko kuch nahi h "

Mai ye sb sun hi raha tha ki abhi Anjana kahti h " raider tumhare paas koi ak reason hai ki tum hunter ka kaam na choro ? "

Mai " mai hunter bs is liye bna hu qki mujhe isme maza aata h , agar mai ye kaam na kru to mai actually bore ho ke mar jaunga "
Mai apne mn me sochta hu ' agar maine Anjana ko such bataunga to mujhe aur jyada sharminda hona padega '

Anjana " jaisa ki tm kah rahe ho ki tm maze ke liye krte ho but iske karan two time raid marte hue tmharai jaan jate jate bachi h "

Ye sun kr mai hasne lagta hu aur mujhe hasta huaa dekh kr Anjana gusse se aag babula ho jati h " haso mat , isase tmhare chot wapas se ubhar aayenge "

Mai bs apni gardan haa me hila deta hu


Sb wapas se ak jagah iktha ho jate h tb rahul kahta h " ak monster ko marne ke baad tmlogo ko ye milta h THE MAGICAL CORE "

Ak magical core jo ki ak c rank ke monster ka ho uski kimat thousands me
hoti h !!

Pr Rider ak E rank hunter hai to uske liye C Rank monster ko marna impossible hi hai !!

Mai kud se kahta hu ' itti chot aur paresaniya uthane ke baad mai kewal ak E rank magical core hi earn kr paya '
' jabki maine apni life ko risk pr laga diya tha us hisab se to ye bahut kam hai , is tarah se paise kamana ......'

Mai abhi aage soch hi raha tha ki piche se kisi ki aawaj sunayi deti hai " are sb suno yaha ak aur gate hai ......"

Hm sb jldi se us gate se saamne ja kr khadhe ho jate hai aur dekhne lagte hai

Rahul " ye to Double Lair hai , dekh ke to lagta h ye such me asli hai "

Uske baad Rahul apne hath se fire power ka use krke ak aag ka gola banata hai aur use gufa me fek deta hai , aur us fire se hme pata chlta h ki gufa bahut jyada lambi hai

Fir Rahul kahta hai " ak min sb log meri baat suno " bos ke jinda rahane par get band nahin hota .
Qki gate abhi bhi open hai , to aisa ho skta hai ki boss iske ander hi hoga
Usually hme aise situation me apne guild ko contact krke unhe ye sb batana hoga aur unke order ka wait krna hoga lakin ....
Agr dusre hunters waha tk phle phuch gaye to humara profit km ho jayega
To mai cahta hu ki hm sb ander jaye aur boss ko maar de .
Qki ye bahut kahtarnak kaam hai to hm sare 17log iske liye vote kr leta hai
Aur vote ka result jo bhi ho uske baad koi complaint nahi krega "

Aur abhi apna apna vote dene lage !!

Rohan aur abhi sath me " hum dono fight krenge "

" Nahi "

" Mai chalunga "

" Meri tarf se naa hai "

" Chlo fight krte hai "

Anjana " sorry but mai nahi jana cahti "

Sbke vote hone ke baad Rahul kahta hai " to abhi tk 8:8 vote hue h "

Ab sirf mera vote bacha huaa tha to Rahul mujhse puchta h " tmhara kya kahna h rahul ? "

Sb kuch mere vote pr depends krta h sb meri taraf dekh rahe the aur mai soch raha tha ' mere paas abhi enough money nahi huee hai , jldi hi mujhe meri choti sister ko college bhejna hoga ....'
Aur mujhe meri bimar maa ki aur meri family condition ki yaad aane lagti h

Ye sb sochte hi mai turat bolta hu " mai cahlunga "

Aur sb bol padta hai " bs ak baar aur chlo ye krte hai "







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UPDATE - 3

Jaisa ki last update me aapne padha ki sb gate ke ander jate h raid ke liye . Waha Rider ko chot lagti h , fir Anjana usko heal krti h . Uske baad unhe pata chlta h ki boss abhi jinda h to uske piche jane ke liye sb vote krte h.....

AB AAGE...

Hm guffa me bhut der se chl rahe the aur bahut ander tak aa gaye the sb aaps me bate kr rahe the .

" Kya hum bahut ander nahi aa gaye hai ? "

"Hme kitne der se chl rahe hai ? "

" Lagbhag 40 min se "

" Boss ko maarane ke ek ghante baad gate band ho jaata hai isalie hamaare paas lagabhag 20 minat bache hain "


Mai aur Anjana sath chl rahe the tabhi m bolta hu Anjana se " hey sorry "

Anjana " kis liye ? "

Mai " mere haa kahne ke karan tmko jabardasti groups ke sath aana pada "

Anjana " m thik hu , to tumhe mere bare me fikar krne ki jarurat nahi h "

Mai " kya tm ... Such me thik ho ? "

Mere itta puchte hi wo gusse me aane lagti h aur bolti h " agr such kahu to ... Nahi mai bilkul thik nahi hu "

Gusse se aag babula hote huee " kya tum paagal ho? abhee agar thodi der phle tmko thoda upar se chhura ghopa gaya hota to tmhare dil mein chhed hota !!!
Aur yaha maine tmhare hath aur pairo ko to count hi nahi kiya jabki maine badi mushkil se unko heal kiya h .
Uske baad bhi kya soch ke tmne andar aane ko haa kaha tha bolo ? Kya tumhare head me bhi chot lagi h ?
Bolo ? "

Aur ye sb sun kr mai sochne lagta hu ' ye such hai ... Mai sirf isi liye jinda hu qki miss Anjana ak B rank healer hai . Mai fir se inka karjdar ho gaya hu ...'

Mere muh se bs itta hi nikala " sorry "

Anjana (abhi bhi gusse se mujhe dekhte hue) " kya tum such me mafi maang rahe ho ? "

Mai (apna head niche kiye hue dhire se bola ) " haa "

Ye sun ke Anjana kuch saant ho gayi aur aage chlte hue mujhse boli " agr tm such me mafi magna cahte ho to .... Mujhe khane ke liye le jana kaisa rahega ? "

Mai ( shock ho kr ) " kya ? "

Anjana ( mujhe ghurte hue ) " kya .. tumhe mere sath khana khane me koi problem hai kya ? "

Mai ( jldi se ) " nahi ! Nahi ! Bilkul bhi nahi "

Hm abhi aage kuch baat krte tabhi hamre group me se ak member chillate hue kahta h " ye raha boss ka room !! "

Hm sb samne dekhne lagte h gufa ke bicho bich ak bahut bada door tha akdam ajib sa

Rohan ( Abhi se door ki tarf dekhte hue ) " hey ...ye jagah kahtarnak nahi lag rahi ? "

Abhi ( door ki taraf hi dekhte hue) " sahi kaha "

Baki sb bhi aisa hi soch rahe hote h tabhi Rahul kahta h " yaha phuchne ke baad bhi kya tm yaha se khali hath jana cahte ho ? "

Rahul door ki tarf badh kr use open krne ki kosis krte hue aage bolta h " sayad hm sb sbse phle log ho sakte hai jo is Dungeon me enter kr rahe ho .... Jo jana cahte h wo ja skte hai . Bhle mujhe akele jana pade pr mai andar jaunga "

Ye sb sun kr baki members bate krne lagte h
" Mr Rahul ki skills amazing hai . Aur wo C rank ke hunters me se sbse jyada offensive style wale hunter hai "

" Ye agar yaha aana nahin hota to vah kisee bade gild mein hote , qki hm Mr Rahul pr trust krte hai tabhi to hm yaha aaye hai, isi liye hme unhen end tk follow krna cahiye "

CREAK.......CREAK.....
Tb tk Rahul ne door open kr diya aur sb usi taraf dekhne lagte hai .

Rahul " jitna maine socha tha ye to usase bhi aaram se open ho gaya , chlo ander chalte hai "

Jaise hi sb door ke ander enter krte hai
Diwar pr lagi sari massal ak ak krke apne aap jal jati h .


Door ke Ander sb phuch kr dekhne lagte h ye ak bahut big room h jo ki circle shape me hai aur uske chro taraf bhut se statues bane huee the aur unke bich me ak bahut big statue bana huaa tha jo ki ak chair pr baitha huaa tha .

Sb ander ka view dekh kr aaps me baat krne lagte h ...
" Ohh light chalu ho gayi , bahut acha hua "

" Maine aisa Dungeon aaj se phle kabhi nahi dekha hai . Chlo sb chro taraf fail jao nd dundho kuch kaam ka milta hai kya "

Is jagah ko dekh ke aisa lag raha tha jaise bahut time se yaha koi nahi aaya h Qki hr taraf dhuul, mitti aur jale lage hue the .
Ye sare statues bhi ... Bahut hi ajeeb lag rahe the dekhne me .
Ye sare statues alg - alg kuch na kuch pakde hue the . Inmen se kuch ne to instrument bhi pakda hua tha .

Mai sochta hu ' ye to bahut sare hai ... Inke karan dar bhi lag raha h Qki ye bahut sare h '

Mai (surprise ho kr ) " wow "

"Aisa nahi lag raha h jaise koi hme dekh raha ho !! "
" Aisi buri bate karna band kro "

Us sbse big statue ko dekh ke ak hunter bolta h " Are wahhh ise dekho ye kitta huge hai !! "

" Ye mt bolna ki yahi boss hai ? "

" Aisa sochna bhi mt , Aakhirkar ye bs ak statue hi hai "

Mai " yaha bs yahi ak itna huge hai "

" Yaha aisa kuch bhi nahi h jise dekh kr ye kah sake yaha koi monster mil sakta h "

"Sahi kaha "

" Huh , ak bhi monster nahi mila "

TAP...TAP...
Tabhi Rahul Ko chlte hue niche kuch aawaj sunayi deti h wo niche dekhta h apne pairo ke paas" Hmm !! Ye kya h ....? Koi magical seal "

" Mr Rahul ... Yaha kuch likha hua hai ! Mere khyal se ye aapko dekhna chahiye "

Mr Rahul piche mud kr aawaj dene wale ke paas chle jaye h sath me baki members bhi .
Waha pr ak statue jiske back pr wings the wo ak big stone apne hath me hold kiye hue tha jispe kuch likha huaa tha .

Rahul " ye to runic language(inke world ki ak old language) me likha hua hai , ruko padh ke dekhta hu .."

" Ye to CARTHENON TEMPLE'S ke rules like hue hai "
" 1st bhagawaan ki pooja kre "
" 2nd bhagwaan se prathna kre "
" 3rd apne faith ko prove kre "

Rahul ye sb read krraha tha aur tabhi Anjana piche se mere shirt ko apni taraf khichti h aur thodi ghbrayi hui voice mebolti h " hey Rider !! "

Big statue ki tarah ishara karke " wo big statue hai na maine uski eye ko jst abhi move hote hue dekha tha wo hamari hi taraf dekh raha tha "

Mai " huh ! Tm such to bol rahi ho ..? Jarur tmne thik se nahi dekha hoga "

Tabhi suddenly mujhe kuch ajeeb sa feel hone lagta h aur air bhi phle se chilled ho gayi thi aisa mujhe feel hota h .

Rahul " ....................... jo koi bhi ye sare rule follow nahi krega wo , jinda wapas nahi ja payega "

Tabbhi piche se THUDDDD........ ki jor se aawaj aati h hm sb mud kr dekhte h to door close ho cuka tha .

" Ye kya door closed ho gaya "
" Ab hm kya karenge ? "

" Damm !! Mai aur yaha aise
hi bina wajagh nahi ruk skta , tm sb faltu me apna time khrab kr rahe ho , yaha aana hi humari ak galti thi !
Mai ja raha hu .."

Itta bol kr ak hunter door ki taraf jane lagta h aur kahta h " wo monster ka boss , khjana aur jo kuch bhi mile sb tm log rakh sakte ho mujhe kuch nahi cahiye .
Good luck "
Aur wo ja kr door ko open krne lagta h .

Tabhi Mr Rahul chilla kr bolte h " ruk jao apna hath door ke handle pr math rakhna ...."

Pr jb tak wo pura bol pate wo hunter apna hath rakh cuka tha handle pr aur tabhi bahut tej Ak sound sunayi diya...

SWOOSSS.......
aur pl bhr me hi us hunter ki body 2part me divide ho cuki thi .
Qki gate ke paas jo status khada tha usne handle pr hath lagte h apne sward se hunter ko bina koi chance diye bahut teji se 2part me divide kr cuka tha . Uske pure sward pr blood hi blood tha aur wo wapas se apni position me khada ho gaya

Yaha hm sb dar aur shock se samne ka najara bs dekhte rah gaye. Hmare muh khule hue the . Anjana ye sb dekh kr bahut dar gayi thi aur apni eye close krke mere gale lagi hui thi baki sb ka bhi haal kuch aisa hi tha....

" Ye statue move bhi kr skte hai ? "
" The hell !!! Hme inse fight krni hogi ? "

Tabhi achanak se mere dimak me khyal aata h ' wait 1min agar kuch der phle Anjana ne jo bola wo agar such hua to '
Aur m turant piche mud kr us big statue ki tarf dekhta hu aur bhut jyada shock me chla jata hu ...
Qki us big statue ki eye chmkne lagti h !!






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UPDATE - 4
Last Update me aapne dekha kaise hm guffa ke ander ja rahe hote h , aur m Anjana ko manata hu . Uske baad guffa me hme kya kya milta h aur last me ak hunter ki death ho jati h aur end me sbse big statue ki eye chmakne lagti h......

AB AAGE....

" kya ..... Kya such me ye statue hil skte h ? "
" The hell !! hme inse fight krni hogi ? "
" Kya such me hme in sb se fight krni hogi ? "
Mai us hunter ki body aur us statue ko dekhte hue sochta hu ' abhi kuch der phle jo hunter mara uska Rank kya tha ?
Haa yaad aaya sayad D Rank ?
Maan lo agr ye utna acha hunter na hua , but fir bhi wo mere jaise ak E Rank ke hunter se to bahut strong tha .
Lakin wo bhi mara gaya bs ak hi war ne !!
Wait ,wait a second...'

Ab mai shocked ke sath confuse bhi hone laga Qki m soch raha tha ' jitna mujhe yaad hai ye Dungeon jyada se jyada ak D Rank ka hai .
Maine aisa kabhi nahi suna hai ki kisi D Rank ke Dungeon ka monster is statue ke monster jitna powerful ho . '

Tbhi Rahul kahta hai " agar yaha kitne statue hai wo sare hil skte ho to ??
Mai to aisa soch bhi nahi skta "

Tabhi kisi ne kaha " Kya ye sbse big statue bhi move kr skta h ? "
Itna sunte h chro taraf silence ho gaya

Mai mud kr fir se wo big statue dekhta hu aur m bhut jyada dar jata hu Qki uski eye fir se bright ho gayi thi aur is baar mere hi taraf dekh rahi thi !!


Ye pahli baar nahi tha jb mera death se saamna itni paas se hua h ...
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In past ~~

Mere phle Raid ke time mai galti se apne Guild se alag ho gaya tha aur khoo gaya tha !!!

Ak baar ak E Rank monster ne mere back pr bahut gahra ghaw bana diya tha jiske karan mujhe kai week hospital me rahna pada tha !!!

Ak baar mai ak Dungeon ke ander fas kr almost marne hi wala tha !!!

Jbki socha jaye to sare hi Dungeon low Rank wale hi the tb bhi mostly time mujhe apni jaan jokhim me dalni padi ...

Jaha baki hunter apne Magical core km a use new aur advance weapons khridne me karte hai , taki wo strong monster ko hara kr maar sake aur jyada treasures dundh sake .

Pr mai aisa nahi kr skta . Qki mujhe apni bimar maa ke hospital ka bill pay krna hota h , apni choti sister ka khrcha uthana hota h .
In sb ke karan hi mai hmesa khali hath hi rahta hu , aur agar mai koi purani sword buy kru to uska result ye niklega ki wo bhut jldi hi tut jayegi .
Aur Healer ke rahne ke karan meri chot jldi heal ho jati h , bs wo chot jyada bada aur gahra na ho tabhi .

Mai hmesa se logo ki bs bate sunta rahta hu jo ki mere bare me hoti hai ....
" Ye ullu fir se chot kha ke bahar aaya h !! "
" Ye E Rank Dungeon me se bhi chot kha ke aaya h ? "
" Mujhe un healer pr taras aata h jo iske sath Raid me jate h !! "
" Unhe double mehnat krni padti h iske rahne se !! "
" Kya tum jante ho ?
Aaj kl ise world ka sbse weakest hunter kahte h !! "
" yani Hunter hote hue bhi vah bekaar hai "

na jane kitani baar Mere shoe's kharab ho gaye the !!
Jis bhi din mai chot kha kr bahar aata tha mai baki sb ki bato pr koi dhyan nahi deta tha aur puri mehnat krke apna kaam karta tha jisme kabhi bhi meri jaan ja sakti thi .
Mere khyal se wo ise liye Qki ye such mai bhi bahut ache se janta tha .

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BUZZZZZZZZ........

Mai abhi inhi yado me khoya hua tha ki achanak mai dekhta hu us sbse big statue ke eye se bahut teji se koi power niklne lagti h . Ye dekh kr mai shock ho gaya aur apne bagal me khadi Anjana ko pakad kr( jo bhi abhi bhi bahut dari hui thi ) jldi se power se bachane ke liye dusri taraf kud jata hu !!
Aur sath me bahut jor se chillata hu " sb log niche jhuk jao !!!!!!!

Sb dar aur shock se apne hi khyalo me khoye hue the tabhi suddenly meri aawaj sun kr meri taraf dekhte h , fir aur bhi jyada shock me chle jate h Qki unki taraf koi power bahut teji se aa rahi thi fir sb jldi se power se bachane ke liye dusri taraf jamin pr kud jate h

Uske baad bahut tej BUZZZZZZZZ....... ke sound ke sath power aati h aur hm sb jaha khade the waha ke jamin se takrati hai !!!

Kuch der baad power aani band ho jati h aur jaha hm khade se wo jagah melt ho cuki thi . Hm sb abhi bhi apni eye close kiye hue the . Jb sb silence hota h to hm sb dhire dhire uthte h .

" Hey utho "
"Hey "


Abhi Rohan se " tm thik to ho ? "

Rohan " haa .. aur tm ? "

Abhi " mai bhi thik hu ."

Ak HUNTER girl kisi ka cuta hua hath dekh kr chillane lagti h " ahhhhhhhhh...... "

Abhi bhi wo dekh kr bolta h " ye to kuch nahi h , bahut se Hunter mar cuke hai !! "

Rohan (udhar hi dekhte hue ) " main badi muskil se usase bach paya , agar Rider ne chillaya na hota to ..
Hm kuch nahi kr pate , hm sb bhi mare jate "

Mai Anjana ko uthane ki kosis kar raha hota hu " Miss Anjana .... Miss Anjana...."

Tabhi Rahul ( jor se chillata hue )" koi bhi khada mt hona jaise ho waise hi raho , Qki agar hm fir se khade hue to wo dubara attack kr skta h "

" Thik h Mr Rahul "
" Jaisa aap kahe "

Mai rahul se " Mr Rahul, Anjana ko dekhiye !! "
Rahul " Miss Anjana behos ho gayi h, Qki ye jyada dar sahan nahi kr payi . Isi liye ye bs low level ke Raid me hi participate krti h jbki ye ak B Rank healer h . "
" Lakin yaha ....
Ye basic level ka Dungeon nahi lag raha h "
" Jisne bhi tmhari baat mani wo hi bs bach paye aur jisne nahi mani wo sare mar cuke hai "

Mai " kya .... Ye such hai ? "

Rahul " wait ! Kya Tm is liye nahi chillaye the ki tmko pata tha kya hone wala h ? "

Mai " nahi ... Mai to bs is liye chillaya tha qki mujhe kuch dangerous hone ka feel hua tha "

Tabhi suddenly mera dhyan Rahul ke hath pr gaya aur meri eye fati ki fati rah gayi .

Mai ( unke hath ke taraf isara krte hue ) " sir aapka hath !!! "

Rahul " mai thik hu ! Bs meri madad kr do blood ka flow rokne me . thik h ? "
(Qki unka left hand elbow se pura alag ho gaya tha )

Mai unke hath me patti bandh kr blood ka flow rokne lagta hu aur wo mere se baat krte rahte h .

Rahul ( upar ki taraf dekhte hue ) " Rider tumhe kya lagta tha is Raid ka rank kya hoga ? "

Mai " mai nahi janta .
Mai aaj tk kabhi bhi kisi aisi Raid ka hissa nahi bana jo D Rank se upar ho "

Rahul " maine kewal ak ya do time hi B Rank raid ka hissa raha hu . Mai pakka bata skta hu ye place ak B Rank Dungeon se bhi upar ka hai ."

Us big statue ki taraf dekhte hue
" Balki B rank ke monster bhi itne powerful nahi hote h .
Kya ye A Rank ka h ......
Nahi !! Mere khyal se S Rank ...... "

Rahul wo wing wale statue ke tarf dekh kr
" Abhi to hmare paas kewal ye CARTHENON TEMPLE'S ke rule hi hai "

" 1st bhagawaan ki pooja kre "
" 2nd bhagwaan se prathna kre "
" 3rd apne faith ko prove kre "
" Jo koi bhi ye rule follow nahi krega wo wapas jinda nahi ja sakta . Ba yahi likha huaa h is pr ... "

" Mr. Rider... Aapke hisab se bhagwan kon ho skta h ? "

Mai ( big statue ki taraf dekhte hue ) " mere khyal se ...."

Rahul " tmhara mtlb ye big statue ..."
" In sb statue ko marne me bhi to bahut jyada time lagega "







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