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Sukriya xabhi bhai jo aapne meri galti batayi mai aage dhyan rakhunga .Sandar update bhai to rider sabse weak hai Apne group me Jiska sab log mjak udate hai, rider apni ma ki dvaiyo ke bill bharne ke liye hi yha kaam karta hai...
Bhai aap ek ko Ak likh rhe ho Kai jagah dekh ligiyega...
Agr aapko jina hai to jitne km log aapki kamjori jane uthana acha h .Rider apni majboori kisi ke samne nhi btana chahta use Lagta hai Ydi Usne vo sab btaya to log Uspr or hasenge, ek gufa ka gate mila hai or vo Bahut lambi hai dekhte hai kya hota hai usme Jane pr, group leader ne sabse vote karne ko kaha hai or usne sabko condition bhi btai hai ki kuchh bhi ho sakta hai fir bhi rider ne andar Jane ka faisla kiya hai... Superb update bhai sandar jabarjast
Instructions ke bare me aapne bilkul sahi smjha h .To yah ek temple Jaisa hai or vha khade ek stachu me ek patthar hai jispr instructions likhe huye hai ki kaise bahar nikal sakte hai vo... Is temple me bahut se stachu hai or unme se ek Bahut hi bda bhi hai or uski ankhe movement hoti hai Jise healer ne dekha tha pr uska kisi ne visvash nhi kiya pr gate band hone pr ek banda use kholne ko hota hai to ek stachu use bina mauka diye hi Bich se kaat deta hai... Sandar update bhai jabarjast
Thanks for review and sahi kaha hero weak jarur hai bt mind hai hero m aur will power bhi h usme .Update 3 bi bahut he shandar tha bro keep writing and keep posting hero weak jarur h but heematwala h aur dimag h
Bahot behtareen shaandaar update bhai
Aapko pasand aaya yahi bahut h .Behtareen shaandaar update bhai
Hmmmmm to hero fight kar kar k ya feel kar sakta hai k kuch bura hony wala hai acha hai baki dhakty hain ya statue kis level ka hai or apna hero kasy is ma sy bahir niklta hai good story broUPDATE - 4
Last Update me aapne dekha kaise hm guffa ke ander ja rahe hote h , aur m Anjana ko manata hu . Uske baad guffa me hme kya kya milta h aur last me ak hunter ki death ho jati h aur end me sbse big statue ki eye chmakne lagti h......
AB AAGE....
" kya ..... Kya such me ye statue hil skte h ? "
" The hell !! hme inse fight krni hogi ? "
" Kya such me hme in sb se fight krni hogi ? "
Mai us hunter ki body aur us statue ko dekhte hue sochta hu ' abhi kuch der phle jo hunter mara uska Rank kya tha ?
Haa yaad aaya sayad D Rank ?
Maan lo agr ye utna acha hunter na hua , but fir bhi wo mere jaise ak E Rank ke hunter se to bahut strong tha .
Lakin wo bhi mara gaya bs ak hi war ne !!
Wait ,wait a second...'
Ab mai shocked ke sath confuse bhi hone laga Qki m soch raha tha ' jitna mujhe yaad hai ye Dungeon jyada se jyada ak D Rank ka hai .
Maine aisa kabhi nahi suna hai ki kisi D Rank ke Dungeon ka monster is statue ke monster jitna powerful ho . '
Tbhi Rahul kahta hai " agar yaha kitne statue hai wo sare hil skte ho to ??
Mai to aisa soch bhi nahi skta "
Tabhi kisi ne kaha " Kya ye sbse big statue bhi move kr skta h ? "
Itna sunte h chro taraf silence ho gaya
Mai mud kr fir se wo big statue dekhta hu aur m bhut jyada dar jata hu Qki uski eye fir se bright ho gayi thi aur is baar mere hi taraf dekh rahi thi !!
Ye pahli baar nahi tha jb mera death se saamna itni paas se hua h ...
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In past ~~
Mere phle Raid ke time mai galti se apne Guild se alag ho gaya tha aur khoo gaya tha !!!
Ak baar ak E Rank monster ne mere back pr bahut gahra ghaw bana diya tha jiske karan mujhe kai week hospital me rahna pada tha !!!
Ak baar mai ak Dungeon ke ander fas kr almost marne hi wala tha !!!
Jbki socha jaye to sare hi Dungeon low Rank wale hi the tb bhi mostly time mujhe apni jaan jokhim me dalni padi ...
Jaha baki hunter apne Magical core km a use new aur advance weapons khridne me karte hai , taki wo strong monster ko hara kr maar sake aur jyada treasures dundh sake .
Pr mai aisa nahi kr skta . Qki mujhe apni bimar maa ke hospital ka bill pay krna hota h , apni choti sister ka khrcha uthana hota h .
In sb ke karan hi mai hmesa khali hath hi rahta hu , aur agar mai koi purani sword buy kru to uska result ye niklega ki wo bhut jldi hi tut jayegi .
Aur Healer ke rahne ke karan meri chot jldi heal ho jati h , bs wo chot jyada bada aur gahra na ho tabhi .
Mai hmesa se logo ki bs bate sunta rahta hu jo ki mere bare me hoti hai ....
" Ye ullu fir se chot kha ke bahar aaya h !! "
" Ye E Rank Dungeon me se bhi chot kha ke aaya h ? "
" Mujhe un healer pr taras aata h jo iske sath Raid me jate h !! "
" Unhe double mehnat krni padti h iske rahne se !! "
" Kya tum jante ho ?
Aaj kl ise world ka sbse weakest hunter kahte h !! "
" yani Hunter hote hue bhi vah bekaar hai "
na jane kitani baar Mere shoe's kharab ho gaye the !!
Jis bhi din mai chot kha kr bahar aata tha mai baki sb ki bato pr koi dhyan nahi deta tha aur puri mehnat krke apna kaam karta tha jisme kabhi bhi meri jaan ja sakti thi .
Mere khyal se wo ise liye Qki ye such mai bhi bahut ache se janta tha .
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BUZZZZZZZZ........
Mai abhi inhi yado me khoya hua tha ki achanak mai dekhta hu us sbse big statue ke eye se bahut teji se koi power niklne lagti h . Ye dekh kr mai shock ho gaya aur apne bagal me khadi Anjana ko pakad kr( jo bhi abhi bhi bahut dari hui thi ) jldi se power se bachane ke liye dusri taraf kud jata hu !!
Aur sath me bahut jor se chillata hu " sb log niche jhuk jao !!!!!!!
Sb dar aur shock se apne hi khyalo me khoye hue the tabhi suddenly meri aawaj sun kr meri taraf dekhte h , fir aur bhi jyada shock me chle jate h Qki unki taraf koi power bahut teji se aa rahi thi fir sb jldi se power se bachane ke liye dusri taraf jamin pr kud jate h
Uske baad bahut tej BUZZZZZZZZ....... ke sound ke sath power aati h aur hm sb jaha khade the waha ke jamin se takrati hai !!!
Kuch der baad power aani band ho jati h aur jaha hm khade se wo jagah melt ho cuki thi . Hm sb abhi bhi apni eye close kiye hue the . Jb sb silence hota h to hm sb dhire dhire uthte h .
" Hey utho "
"Hey "
Abhi Rohan se " tm thik to ho ? "
Rohan " haa .. aur tm ? "
Abhi " mai bhi thik hu ."
Ak HUNTER girl kisi ka cuta hua hath dekh kr chillane lagti h " ahhhhhhhhh...... "
Abhi bhi wo dekh kr bolta h " ye to kuch nahi h , bahut se Hunter mar cuke hai !! "
Rohan (udhar hi dekhte hue ) " main badi muskil se usase bach paya , agar Rider ne chillaya na hota to ..
Hm kuch nahi kr pate , hm sb bhi mare jate "
Mai Anjana ko uthane ki kosis kar raha hota hu " Miss Anjana .... Miss Anjana...."
Tabhi Rahul ( jor se chillata hue )" koi bhi khada mt hona jaise ho waise hi raho , Qki agar hm fir se khade hue to wo dubara attack kr skta h "
" Thik h Mr Rahul "
" Jaisa aap kahe "
Mai rahul se " Mr Rahul, Anjana ko dekhiye !! "
Rahul " Miss Anjana behos ho gayi h, Qki ye jyada dar sahan nahi kr payi . Isi liye ye bs low level ke Raid me hi participate krti h jbki ye ak B Rank healer h . "
" Lakin yaha ....
Ye basic level ka Dungeon nahi lag raha h "
" Jisne bhi tmhari baat mani wo hi bs bach paye aur jisne nahi mani wo sare mar cuke hai "
Mai " kya .... Ye such hai ? "
Rahul " wait ! Kya Tm is liye nahi chillaye the ki tmko pata tha kya hone wala h ? "
Mai " nahi ... Mai to bs is liye chillaya tha qki mujhe kuch dangerous hone ka feel hua tha "
Tabhi suddenly mera dhyan Rahul ke hath pr gaya aur meri eye fati ki fati rah gayi .
Mai ( unke hath ke taraf isara krte hue ) " sir aapka hath !!! "
Rahul " mai thik hu ! Bs meri madad kr do blood ka flow rokne me . thik h ? "
(Qki unka left hand elbow se pura alag ho gaya tha )
Mai unke hath me patti bandh kr blood ka flow rokne lagta hu aur wo mere se baat krte rahte h .
Rahul ( upar ki taraf dekhte hue ) " Rider tumhe kya lagta tha is Raid ka rank kya hoga ? "
Mai " mai nahi janta .
Mai aaj tk kabhi bhi kisi aisi Raid ka hissa nahi bana jo D Rank se upar ho "
Rahul " maine kewal ak ya do time hi B Rank raid ka hissa raha hu . Mai pakka bata skta hu ye place ak B Rank Dungeon se bhi upar ka hai ."
Us big statue ki taraf dekhte hue
" Balki B rank ke monster bhi itne powerful nahi hote h .
Kya ye A Rank ka h ......
Nahi !! Mere khyal se S Rank ...... "
Rahul wo wing wale statue ke tarf dekh kr
" Abhi to hmare paas kewal ye CARTHENON TEMPLE'S ke rule hi hai "
" 1st bhagawaan ki pooja kre "
" 2nd bhagwaan se prathna kre "
" 3rd apne faith ko prove kre "
" Jo koi bhi ye rule follow nahi krega wo wapas jinda nahi ja sakta . Ba yahi likha huaa h is pr ... "
" Mr. Rider... Aapke hisab se bhagwan kon ho skta h ? "
Mai ( big statue ki taraf dekhte hue ) " mere khyal se ...."
Rahul " tmhara mtlb ye big statue ..."
" In sb statue ko marne me bhi to bahut jyada time lagega "
Aaj ke liye itna hi dosto !!
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Apna pyar banaye rakhiyega !!
Sukriya bhai , keep supportingNice story
Ji ha apne hero ki 6th sense aachi h bs ...Hmmmmm to hero fight kar kar k ya feel kar sakta hai k kuch bura hony wala hai acha hai baki dhakty hain ya statue kis level ka hai or apna hero kasy is ma sy bahir niklta hai good story bro