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Achchi shuruwatUPDATE - 1
Delhi , India
Mera name RIDER hai aur mai Ak E-Rank HUNTER hu.
yadi aap meree thodee asaamaany strength aur regeneration ko najar andaaj karate hain to mujhe khud ko hunter kahana me bhee sharm lagta h .
Mai itta weak hu Jiske karan Hamesa hi mujhe bahut baar chote lagi hai aur kai baar to nearly death ka experience kiya h.
Ak aisa kaam jisme aapke life and death ke bich bs ak line ka anter ho use hunter kahte h , aur mai ye job is liye nahi karta qki ye mujhe pasand hai ....!
Mai badi muskil se apni bimar maa ke medical bills ko pay kr pata hu jo mujhe HUNTER GUILD pay krta h is kaam ke liye isi liye mai ye kaam krta hu .
Ak aam insan ke liye jiske paas koi particular talent na ho , aise me mere paas aur koi choice nahi h siway hunter banane ke.
Ak construction site in delhi....
Ak food truck khada tha aur uske aas paas bahut se log tea nd breakfast kr rahe the....
Food truck wala ak customer se ..
"Ye rahi tmhari tea nd good luck tmhare aaj ke raid ke liye."
Coustomer "thanks"
Tabhi piche se koi us coustomer ko aawaj deta h " hey Rohan ! "
" Bahut samay ho gaye tmse mile hue "
Rohan " are abhi tm yaha kya kar rahe ho ? Tmne to chor diya tha na tha na qki tm hunter nahi banana cahte the !! "
Abhi " actually meri wife 2nd time pregnant hai , ha ha..."
Rohan " sahi kaha raid ke jaisa kuch nahi h jaha aap apni kismat aajma skte ho "
Abhi " jindgi jina aasan nahi hai . Mujhe fikar hai ki ... Itna kafi time bita gaya h kahi mai piche na rah jau "
" Meri skill phle se hi khrab hai , aur ab to wo aur khrab ho gayi h itte time ke break ke karan jo maine liya h "
Tabhi samne se kuch aawaj aati h ...
" Rider tum aa gaye ! "
" Rider aane ke liye sukriya "
"Bahar thand hai na ? "
Rider " haha ... aisa kuch nahi h , mai aaj bhi tmhare sath hi rahunga "
Wo aadmi " Achi baat hai "
Tabhi Rohan riderko aawaj lagata hai ..
" rider tmne ab tk breakfast kiya ? "
Rider " haa Mr Rohan maine khaa liya , mere bare me fikar krne ke liye sukriya "
Itta kah kr rider aage nikal jata hai aur abhi use dekh kr Rohan se puchta hai..
"Kya ye ladka powerful hunter hai ? Har koi ise dekh kr bahut happy hai !"
Rohan " hehehehe.... Tm ise nahi jante qki jb tmne chora tha ye uske baad aaya hai . Iska nike name hai WORLD WEAKEST "
Abhi " kya duniya me sbse kamjor ? na ki sbse powerful!! "
Rohan " bro tabhi to aise logo ko hm S - Rank hunter kahte hai . Rider unmen sbse weak hai "
"Mera matlab hai ki wo itta weak hai ki wo E rank ke Dengoun se bhi hurt ho jata h "
Abhi " kya such me wo itta weak hai "
Rohan " haa !! Mere hisab se to wo hm sb me sbse weak hai "
Abhi " kya such me !!"
Rohan " ha iska mtlb hai humara Dengoun iske aane ke baad se weak ho gaya h "
Abhi " ahhh !! Aisa hai kya "
Rohan " hay ! Sayad wo hame sun skta hai hame. Is baat ko hm yahi khtam krte hai fu fu..."
(Ab Rider ke views se story )
Mai apne mn me 'mai suru se sb sun raha hu you old geezers '
Mai food truck ke paas chla jata hu usse bolta hu " kya mujhe ak cup coffee milegi ?"
Food truck wala " are hunter rider .. I m sorry , bs abhi kuch der phle hi sari coffee khtam ho gayi "
Mai bad feel karte hue sochta hu coffee bhi ni mili..
Food truck wala " I m really sorry rider coffee khtam hone ke liye "
Mai " koi baat nahi "
Aur m waha se aage chla jata hu .
Kuch der chalne ke baad ak ladki ki aawaj aati h " rider tmko fir se chot lag gayi !! "
Mai " ohh hi ! Aisa lagta h miss Anjana bhi raid me sath chl rahi h ?"
Anjana " of course , lakin problem ye nahi h ! Tmhare face pr fir se chot kaise lagi ?"
Mai " pata nahi .... Sayad tb laga hoga jb mai hunting kr raha hunga haha..."
Anjana " really..ab such such batao kya huaa tha. Kya tm hospital bhi gaye the ?"
Mai " ha mai gaya tha . Hm sb ak E rank dungeon me the aur mai akela hi jise chot lagi "
Anjana " huh ? Ye kaise ho gaya ?"
Mai " baki dusre hunter mere se higher ranked ke the to wo apne sath ak bhi healer nahi le gaye the "
Anjana " fir bhi wo bs is liye healer nahi le gaye qki unko lagta tha wo safe rahenge "
Mai " it's ok , ye sb is liye huaa qki mai weak hu , mujhe in sb ki aadat ho gayi h miss Anjana bhi ye baat janti h ,right ? "
" Well lagta h sb log gate ke ander jane ke liye ready h hme bhi chlna cahiye ..."
Anjana " ok "
Hm sb gate ke samne ikatha ho gaye the tabhi ak aadmi bich me ja kr sbke samne kahta hai " sun log suniye . Hm sb hunting pr jane ko taiyar aur khush hai , mai ye kahane ke liye qualified to nahi hu pr fhir bhi mai is raid ke liye party ka leader banane ko ready hu , isme aap me se kisi ko koi dikkat to nahi hai ?"
Rohan " Mr Rahul aap yaha present sb logo me sbse high rank wale h mujhe aapke leader bananese koi problem nahi hai "
Abhi " well Mr Rahul hame aap pr pura yakin hai . Mujhe bahut time ho gaya h aapke skills dekhe hue "
Baki sb log bhi Bolte hai
"Mai aapke leader banane se sahmat hu "
"Mai bhi "
" Meri bhi haa hai "
Mai " hamara dhyan rakhiyega Mr Rahul"
Rahul " all right to hm chlte hai Dungeon me "
Aur sb chl dete hai gate ke ander tb chlte chlte Mr Rahul mujhse kahte hai " Mr rider kosis karna hamare piche chot mt khaa jana "
Mai haste huee " haha okay"
Anjana " rider jldi chlo "
Mai " ha chlo "
Mai chlte huee kud se kahta hu 'mai aaj apna best karne ki kosis karunga '
aaj ke liye itta hi .
Bhai log 1st story hai to koi bhi problem ya suggestions ho comments krke jarur bataiyega . Bs aapka pyar milte rahe story jarur complete hogi enjoy story....
Good start i hope your story is going good and to much funUPDATE - 1
Delhi , India
Mera name RIDER hai aur mai Ak E-Rank HUNTER hu.
yadi aap meree thodee asaamaany strength aur regeneration ko najar andaaj karate hain to mujhe khud ko hunter kahana me bhee sharm lagta h .
Mai itta weak hu Jiske karan Hamesa hi mujhe bahut baar chote lagi hai aur kai baar to nearly death ka experience kiya h.
Ak aisa kaam jisme aapke life and death ke bich bs ak line ka anter ho use hunter kahte h , aur mai ye job is liye nahi karta qki ye mujhe pasand hai ....!
Mai badi muskil se apni bimar maa ke medical bills ko pay kr pata hu jo mujhe HUNTER GUILD pay krta h is kaam ke liye isi liye mai ye kaam krta hu .
Ak aam insan ke liye jiske paas koi particular talent na ho , aise me mere paas aur koi choice nahi h siway hunter banane ke.
Ak construction site in delhi....
Ak food truck khada tha aur uske aas paas bahut se log tea nd breakfast kr rahe the....
Food truck wala ak customer se ..
"Ye rahi tmhari tea nd good luck tmhare aaj ke raid ke liye."
Coustomer "thanks"
Tabhi piche se koi us coustomer ko aawaj deta h " hey Rohan ! "
" Bahut samay ho gaye tmse mile hue "
Rohan " are abhi tm yaha kya kar rahe ho ? Tmne to chor diya tha na tha na qki tm hunter nahi banana cahte the !! "
Abhi " actually meri wife 2nd time pregnant hai , ha ha..."
Rohan " sahi kaha raid ke jaisa kuch nahi h jaha aap apni kismat aajma skte ho "
Abhi " jindgi jina aasan nahi hai . Mujhe fikar hai ki ... Itna kafi time bita gaya h kahi mai piche na rah jau "
" Meri skill phle se hi khrab hai , aur ab to wo aur khrab ho gayi h itte time ke break ke karan jo maine liya h "
Tabhi samne se kuch aawaj aati h ...
" Rider tum aa gaye ! "
" Rider aane ke liye sukriya "
"Bahar thand hai na ? "
Rider " haha ... aisa kuch nahi h , mai aaj bhi tmhare sath hi rahunga "
Wo aadmi " Achi baat hai "
Tabhi Rohan riderko aawaj lagata hai ..
" rider tmne ab tk breakfast kiya ? "
Rider " haa Mr Rohan maine khaa liya , mere bare me fikar krne ke liye sukriya "
Itta kah kr rider aage nikal jata hai aur abhi use dekh kr Rohan se puchta hai..
"Kya ye ladka powerful hunter hai ? Har koi ise dekh kr bahut happy hai !"
Rohan " hehehehe.... Tm ise nahi jante qki jb tmne chora tha ye uske baad aaya hai . Iska nike name hai WORLD WEAKEST "
Abhi " kya duniya me sbse kamjor ? na ki sbse powerful!! "
Rohan " bro tabhi to aise logo ko hm S - Rank hunter kahte hai . Rider unmen sbse weak hai "
"Mera matlab hai ki wo itta weak hai ki wo E rank ke Dengoun se bhi hurt ho jata h "
Abhi " kya such me wo itta weak hai "
Rohan " haa !! Mere hisab se to wo hm sb me sbse weak hai "
Abhi " kya such me !!"
Rohan " ha iska mtlb hai humara Dengoun iske aane ke baad se weak ho gaya h "
Abhi " ahhh !! Aisa hai kya "
Rohan " hay ! Sayad wo hame sun skta hai hame. Is baat ko hm yahi khtam krte hai fu fu..."
(Ab Rider ke views se story )
Mai apne mn me 'mai suru se sb sun raha hu you old geezers '
Mai food truck ke paas chla jata hu usse bolta hu " kya mujhe ak cup coffee milegi ?"
Food truck wala " are hunter rider .. I m sorry , bs abhi kuch der phle hi sari coffee khtam ho gayi "
Mai bad feel karte hue sochta hu coffee bhi ni mili..
Food truck wala " I m really sorry rider coffee khtam hone ke liye "
Mai " koi baat nahi "
Aur m waha se aage chla jata hu .
Kuch der chalne ke baad ak ladki ki aawaj aati h " rider tmko fir se chot lag gayi !! "
Mai " ohh hi ! Aisa lagta h miss Anjana bhi raid me sath chl rahi h ?"
Anjana " of course , lakin problem ye nahi h ! Tmhare face pr fir se chot kaise lagi ?"
Mai " pata nahi .... Sayad tb laga hoga jb mai hunting kr raha hunga haha..."
Anjana " really..ab such such batao kya huaa tha. Kya tm hospital bhi gaye the ?"
Mai " ha mai gaya tha . Hm sb ak E rank dungeon me the aur mai akela hi jise chot lagi "
Anjana " huh ? Ye kaise ho gaya ?"
Mai " baki dusre hunter mere se higher ranked ke the to wo apne sath ak bhi healer nahi le gaye the "
Anjana " fir bhi wo bs is liye healer nahi le gaye qki unko lagta tha wo safe rahenge "
Mai " it's ok , ye sb is liye huaa qki mai weak hu , mujhe in sb ki aadat ho gayi h miss Anjana bhi ye baat janti h ,right ? "
" Well lagta h sb log gate ke ander jane ke liye ready h hme bhi chlna cahiye ..."
Anjana " ok "
Hm sb gate ke samne ikatha ho gaye the tabhi ak aadmi bich me ja kr sbke samne kahta hai " sun log suniye . Hm sb hunting pr jane ko taiyar aur khush hai , mai ye kahane ke liye qualified to nahi hu pr fhir bhi mai is raid ke liye party ka leader banane ko ready hu , isme aap me se kisi ko koi dikkat to nahi hai ?"
Rohan " Mr Rahul aap yaha present sb logo me sbse high rank wale h mujhe aapke leader bananese koi problem nahi hai "
Abhi " well Mr Rahul hame aap pr pura yakin hai . Mujhe bahut time ho gaya h aapke skills dekhe hue "
Baki sb log bhi Bolte hai
"Mai aapke leader banane se sahmat hu "
"Mai bhi "
" Meri bhi haa hai "
Mai " hamara dhyan rakhiyega Mr Rahul"
Rahul " all right to hm chlte hai Dungeon me "
Aur sb chl dete hai gate ke ander tb chlte chlte Mr Rahul mujhse kahte hai " Mr rider kosis karna hamare piche chot mt khaa jana "
Mai haste huee " haha okay"
Anjana " rider jldi chlo "
Mai " ha chlo "
Mai chlte huee kud se kahta hu 'mai aaj apna best karne ki kosis karunga '
aaj ke liye itta hi .
Bhai log 1st story hai to koi bhi problem ya suggestions ho comments krke jarur bataiyega . Bs aapka pyar milte rahe story jarur complete hogi enjoy story....
Nice start bhai
Sukriya bhai log...Nice start bro
Sukriya bhai .Achchi shuruwat
Dekhte h aage kia kia padhne ko milta h & CONGRATULATIONS for new story
Bahut bhut shukriya bhaiGood start i hope your story is going good and to much fun
Mention not bro ap asy hi likty jain or hum like or comments kar k ap ka husla barhte jain gy waiting for the next updateBahut bhut shukriya bhai
8bje tk aa jayega bro next updateMention not bro ap asy hi likty jain or hum like or comments kar k ap ka husla barhte jain gy waiting for the next update
Kosis krunga daily updates de du bro ...Very interesting story bro kuch naya dhekne ko milega hero abi weak h bahut ab dhekhte h andar kaise khud ko safe rakhta h apke updates kab kab ayenge bro ok uparwale vomment mai update ki detail mil gayi h keep writing bro
Again nice story....