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Fantasy Soul Land

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Hello everyone,
Aaj ek brother ne message kiya ki mai jo bhi likh raha hun,jo original story hai usse baas translate kar ke likh raha hun, aur ye sach bhi hai, agar aap sabhi chahte hai ki mai aage lekhu to please poll mai answer de de, mai usi hisab se kuch karunga.
Aur hun brother jisne bhi likha hai aap soch rahe honge ki mai naraj hoke ye message de raha hun, yesa kuch bhi nahi hai.
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Jo original story he wo manhuas manga he. Haa iska anime bhi he but apni language me padhna ye alag Baat he. Isiliye to hum padh rahe he. Bhai ap update regularly dete raho hum padhenge. Baad me problem na ho uske liye credit me us site ka name likh do Pehle page me. Khatam baat
 
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Thank you.
Kosis rahegi pura likhne ki per kaam ko bhi dekhna hota hai aur har roj update dene ke liye jitna bhi time mil raha hai usse jinta ho sake utna likh ke aap sabhi ke samne pesh kar raha hun.


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Mystrious heaven Treasure mai sirf 6 type ki hi martial art hai;
1. Inner strength internal technique, mysterious heaven skill
2. Hand skill practice technique, Mysterious jade hand
3. Vision skill technique, Purple demon eye
4. Capturing Technique, Controlling Crane Capturing Dragon
5. Light body Technique, Ghost Shadow perplexing Track
6. Hidden weapon use technique, Hidden Weapon Hundred Separation.
Pehle 5 basic hai; akhirkar ek majboot niv (foundation) ke bina, koi Tang sect ke chipe huye hatiyar (weapon) ko kese sabke samne la ke use kar sakta hai ? 3 saal ki umar se mystrious heaven skill ka training suru karne baad, Tang san jo abhi 6 saal ka hai abhi bhi wo apna niv (foundation) rakh raha hai.
Tang San ka pariwaar Holy spirit Village ke West ke side mai village head ke ghar ke paas thy. 3 kamre wale mitti (mud) ke eit (brick) ki bane ghar pure gaon mai sabse kacha ghar tha. Iss ghar ka darwaja 1 meter chouda lakdi ka tha jissme ek hammer ka symbol laga hua tha, iss duniyan mai hammer ka symbol ek blacksmith (lohar) ka hi symbol mana jata hai. Kyun ki Tang San ke pita Tang Hao ek blacksmith thy, jo ki iss village ka ek aur akhri blacksmith thy.
Iss duniya mai blacksmith ko business mai sabse humblest kaha ja sakta hai. Yesa issliye hai kyunki iss duniya ke sabse ache hatiyaro mai se koi bhi ek blacksmith ke hatho nahi bana tha. Fir bhi iss village ke ek hi blacksmith ke roop mai tang San ka pariwaar ko itni kaam income ke sath itna garib nahi hona chahiye tha…..
Ghar mai entry karte huye Tang san ko pehle se hi khane ka bahut acha smell aaraha tha, Wo iss liye kyun ki wo jane se pehle hi khana banne ke liye aag mai rakh ke chala jata tha, ye uska roj ka kaam tha Tang Hao aur khud ke liye khana banana.
4 saal ki umar mai Tang San kitchen counter tak pahunchne ke liye kafi chota tha, khana banana pehle se hi uska daily work tha (pichle life mai); bhale hi usse kitchen counter tak pahunchne ke liye stool pe khada hona kyu na pade. Yesa iss liye nahi tha ki Tang Hao ne iski mang ki thy, balki iss liye ki agar usne yesa nahi kiya to Tang San kabhi bhi apna khud ka pet nahi bhar payega.
Kitchen conter ke samne pahunch kar wo lakdi ka stool per khada ho gaya, aur jo khana basaya hua tha aag mai uska bartan ka dhakan utha diya aur usme wo khana bahut achi tarah se paak bhi gaye thy, bahut acha smell bhi kar raha tha. Wanhi paas mai rakhe bartan mai se 2 ache bartan leke usme khana rakhne laga, khana itna tha ki badi muskil se kisi ek ka pet bhar sakta tha fir bhi khane ke liye do log thy, aur Tang San ke badhte huye sarir ke liye itna khana bhut hi kam tha, yahi karan tha ki Tang San ka sarir dubla patla tha.
“Dad, khana tayar hai aa jayiye” Tang San jor se chilaye huye apne papa ko bulaya tha.
Kuch samay baad, bhitar ke kamre ka darwaja ka parda utha aur ek badi si Akriti, chouka dene bale kadmo ke sath dikhayi di. Ye ek adhed (zyada) umar ka admi tha, uski sakal 50 saal ke karib lag rahi thy. Unka kaad (height) abhi bhi extraordinary roop se bada aur saktisali tha, halaki kisine unki kapde ke bare mai baat karne ki himmat nahi ki.
Uska pehena hua kapde hole se bhara hua tha, bina kisi patch ke, yanha taak ki uske ander se uski body ke colour bhi dekha ja sakta tha. Uska acha khas face aab kafi murjha murjha sa rehta tha. Hamseha nind bhara ankhe aur sar chakra (Dazed) dena wala dhang tha; bikhre huye baal jo kisi chidiya ki ghosla (nest) ki tarah dikhte thy, aur badhi huyi dadhi (beard) uske face ko dhak rahe thy. Uski ankho mai fearless look dekha ja sakta tha, bhale hi raat bit chuki thi fir bhi wo sarab (Alcohol) ke nashe mai tha, ye aur koi nahi Tang San ke pita Tang Hao hi tha.
Tang San ka abhi tak kabhi pata nahi chala ki pita ke prem kya hota hai. Tang Hao ne Jiss tarah se uske sath treat kiya wo hamesha ek Jessa hi tha, bhale hi wo suru se strong raha ho fir bhi dukh to hota tha. Halaki Tang Hao khana pakana janta tha, lekin fir bhi jese jese samay bit ta gaya Tang San ke jariye khana pakane ki pahal suru huya taab se Tang Hao aur bhi laparwa ho gaya. Iss tarah ke bartav ke chalte inke ghar garib ho gaya tha aur inke paas jyada kuch kharid ne ke liye paise thy hi nahi. Aur Khane ka samasya bhi, Tang Hao ka sarab pine ke kharche ke liye tha aur uska thoda sa income ke karan hi tha jo blacksmith ke kaam karke kamata tha. Yesa nahi tha ki wo kaam nahi karta wo karta tha per itna nahi Tang Hao baas har din sarab hi pita rehta tha.
Tang Hao ke behaviour mai Tang San ne kabhi bhi narazgi nahi jatayi. Apne pichle janam mai wo ek anath tha, per iss janam mai Tang Hao chahe jese bhi behave karta tha uske sath, thy to wo dono ek hi pariwaar ke, aur kamse kam wo ek person tha jisse Tang San apna pita keh sakta tha.
Tang Hao ne hath jalne ke chinta kiye bina hi khane ka plate ko apne hatho mai leke kuch hi samay mai apna khana khatam kar diya wo garma garam Khana. Khane ke sath hi uska murjha sa gaya face wapas se thoda bahot chamak wapas aaraha tha.
"Dad, dhire, ye ab bhi garam hai"
Jaab Tang Hao ke plate mai khana khatam hua to Tang San ne uske hatho se plate liya aur usme aur khana rakh diya aur sath mai usne apna plate bhi utha liya khane ke liye.
Tang Hao ne apna khana khatam karke sans chodte huye uska plate ko table pe rakh diya, fir Tang San ko dekhte huye uski jhuki huyi palke thoda sa khula aur bola;
"Tum apna kaam jari rakho, mai dopahar (afternoon) mai kaam karunga, mai abhi thoda aur sone ja raha hun."
Tang Hao ka kaam aur aaram karne ki aadat ka ek same hi pattern tha; puri subha aur raat ko sona, afternoon ko kuch forging karke kuch income karna aur sham (evening) se raat taak daru pina thoda bahut khane ka saman lake ghar mai rakh ne ke baad.
Tang San ne apna sar hila ke, thik hai Dad.
uske baad Tang Hao table se uthke kamre ke aur chal pada sone ke liye.
"Dad" Tang San ne achanak hi apne pita ko bulaya.
Tang San ke bulane se Tang Hao jate jate rukh gaya aur piche muud ke Tang San ko dekhne laga.
Tang San ne ek kone pade kuch iron ke tukde ke aur ishara karke; "Dad kya mai wo iron use kar sakta hun."
Apne pichle janam mai wo Tang sect ke sabse best outer sect disciple tha, aur wo har tarah ke hidden weapon ko banane ke baare mai janta bhi tha. Lekin iss duniya mai wo bahut zyada practice bhi kiya fir bhi uski takat aab tak enough nahi tha. Iske alawa wo kabhi bhi apne hidden weapon banana chodna nahi chahta tha. Aab tak usne hidden weapon banane ki kosis ki thy, lekin isme lagene wali saman ko dhundna bada muskil tha uske liye.
Tang Hao ko material Village wale hi dete thy jisko jo banana hai uss hisab se. Per har baar jo waste nikal te thy wo sabhi bekar thy jisse Tang San hidden weapon bana nahi sakta tha usko use karke, per kal jo material aaya tha wo badhiya tha aur jo waste nikla tha wo bhi badhiya tha jisse wo acha sa hidden weapon bana sakta tha.
Tang Hao ne apna nazar us waste ki aur kiya aur bola, " huh!, kya ye badhiya iron nahi hai." Fir apni nazar Tang San ke aur karke, "kya tumhe blacksmith banna hai ?"


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Tang San ne apna pita ke baat sunke apna sar hilaya, blacksmith banana uske hidden weapon banane ke liye perfect profession tha.
Dad aapki age badh rahi hai, kuch saal ke liye jaab tak mai thoda aur bada (age baat) nahi ho jata taab tak ke liye chota mota chiz banana shika sakte hai to sikha dijiye aur fir baad mai mujhe apka kaam sambhal ne de dena. Yesa isliye Tang San ne kaha tha kyun ki pehle jo bhi usne banaya tha wo saab best hidden weapon thy, wo pehle kabhi bhi koi ashan (easy) forging nahi sikha tha aur nahi kabhi kiya tha. Isiliye wo ye try karna chahta tha aur apne dad se ye bolne ka kehna ka karan ye tha ki wo apne dad ko aur kaam karne nahi dena chahta tha.
Tang Hao, "blacksmith hmmm.”
Fir Ek ghisi piti (worn-out) si kursi (chair) ko khichkar iron ke uss waste ke paas sidhe bethte huye Tang Hao susti ke sath bola, “Tang San, mujhe batao, kis tarah ka blacksmith (lohar) sabse acha blacksmith (lohar) hai.”
Tang San ne to pehle uske bare socha fir jawab diya, “sabse acha blacksmith divine tools banane ke capable hona chahiye”.
Village walo ne jo kaha tha uske hisaab se duniya mai divine tools hai, bhale hi Tang San ye nahi janta tha ki ye divine tools kya hote hai, lekin divine kahe jane ke karan, uske hisaab se wo bahut hi acha hona chahiye isiliye usne ye answer de diya tha.
Tang Hao, Tang San ka jawab sunke uske upar hasne wala express lake, “divine tools ? Little San divine tools ke bare mai bhi janta hai. Thik hai fir batao divine tool banane ke liye kya use karne chahiye”.
Tang San ko yesa question apne pita Tang Hao se unexpected tha to usne immediately hi kaha, “of course sabse acha material use karna chahiye”.
Tang San ka jawab sunke Tang Hao ne apna hath Tang San ke gal ko sahlate huye, ek serious look lake, “agar tumhe ek master blacksmith banna hai to mere word ko hamesha yaad rakhna, koi bhi blacksmith divine tools banane ke liye best material ka use hi nahi karta hai, aur wo jo karte hai wo ache blacksmith nahi hai. Ek acha aur best blacksmith wo hota hai jo sadharan (common) material ka use karke bhi apne skill ke madat se usse divine tool bana paye to wo hi sache mayene mai best blacksmith hai”.
“Divine tool banane me liye sadharan (common) iron/material ka use karte hai ?”, Tang San ne surprise ke sath Tang Hao ke aur dekhne laga. Ordinarily Tang Hao ne bahut kaam hi Tang San se baat ki thy, ye din pehle se hi kisi ek time mai se sabse adhik ke roop mai Gina ja sakta tha.
Tang Hao khada hokar, kamre ke dusri taraf lohe (iron) ke ek 50 square centimetre ke ek block ki aur isara karke, “ agar tumhe blacksmith banne ke liye aur mujhse forging sikhne ke bare soch rahe ho to tumhe pehle isse (iron block) 10000 baar hammering karna hoga, aur jaab tak tum ye nahi karte taab tak mai tumhe kuch bhi nahi sikhaunga.”
Tang San ne pehle uss iron ke block ko dekha, kyun ki wo ek sadharan (common) iron block ka piece tha, jisme bahut si impurities (asudhiya)thy. Iron ke grade ke hisaab se compare kare to wo ye dekh ke bhi nahi bata sakta ki wo iron block kitna kharab ya fir acha hai.
Tang Hao ne apne mann me pehle se hi ander ki kamre ki aur sone liye wapas jana chahta tha, issi liye Tang San se, “tum abhi bhi apna mind change kar sakte ho”.
Tang San ki clear and clam awaj thy, “Dad, mujhe isse try karna hai".
Tang Hao, kuch surprise hoke Tang San ki aur dekha kyun ki usko ye expect hi nahi tha, “thik hai”.
Ek word ke sath, Tang Hao wanha se uth ke uss iron block ke paas pahunch gaya, aur usse wanha se utha ke sidhe forging area mai lake burner ke bhitar rakh diya, aur sath hi aag bhi jala di burner mai. Aur ye burner coal ke madat se jalta tha, yani jaab tak coal jalta rahega taab tak burner bhi jalta rahega.
Ye saab karne ke baad Tang Hao sone ke liye apne ander ki kamre ki aur chal diya, apne bete ko chod ke jo uss block ko 10000 baar hamering karna tha.
Tang San apne aap mai ek genius tha, agar yesa nahi hota to wo Budha Fury Tang Lotus, no.1 hidden weapon kese bana sakta tha, jiske liye usne apne life mai apna 10 saal ka time kho diya tha.
Coal ko jalte huye rakhne ke liye Tang San apna jagah se uth ke us burner mai air ko pump karne laga. Shu….shu…..air pump karne se wo burner ki aag aur bhi jyada hone laga, jisse ki wo iron piece aur bhi ache se burn hone laga,halaki Tang San kabhi bhi forging ke bare nahi janta tha,usne baas har roj Tang Hao ko ye karte huye dekha tha to usne bhi wanhi karne ke bare mai soch ke wanhi kiya.
Jese hi dhire dhire iron garam ho raha tha usne apne pita ke Jessa hammer ko khinch ke wanha le aaya jaha usse uss iron mai 10000 time hammering karna tha, ek aam 6 saal ka bacha wo hammer ko bilkul hila bhi nahi sakta tha, isse forging ke liye chalane ke bare mai baat hi chodiye.
Lekin Tang San abhi bhi uss bade se hatode (hammer) jo ki uske height jitna bada tha, usse pakde hua tha, mysterious heaven skill ke practice karke apne sarir ko majbut karna, bhale hi mysterious heaven skill ke stage 1 ko paar nahi kar pa raha hai fir bhi kisi young person ke Jessa uska body storng hai iss wajah se wo uss bhari bharkam bada sa hammer ko uthane ke kabil tha.
Burner se iron ko nikal ke Tang San ne usse hammering karna start kar deta hai, Tan..Tan…ki awaj nikal rahi thy jaab iron ka hammer uss iron ke piece se takrata to usme se ek clear aur sweet si awaj nikal raha tha. Ye Tang San ki pehli strike thy, aur forging ka shuruat thy.
Ander ke kamre mai, bistar per lete huye Tang Hao palat gaya, bhale hi uske ankh aab bhi band thy, fir bhi uske face mai surprising saaf dekha sakta tha, aur apne aap mai badbadata hai, “wo, wo hammer utha sakta hai, kya ye superhuman strength ke sath janam liya hai”.
Tan..Tan..Tan..lohar (blacksmith) ki dukan se bhi tez awaje aane lagi. Tang Hao aur Tang San, baap aur beta, ne apne profession jari rakha, lekin ek difference ke sath, iss din se Tang Hao ne Tang San ke liye ek aur forge bana diya jisme wo apna kaam kar sake apne wo iron block se. Uss din ke baad Tang Hao ne usse ek bhi instruction nahi diya, per Tang Hao ka sarab pina uss din se kaam ho gaya, iss wajah se pariwaar ka khana pina badh gaya.
Forging ek bilkul dull aur thaka dene wala kaam tha, lekin Tang San ne isko apne sarir ko aur strong banane ke liye sahi tarika samjha. 11 din bit gaye, wo heavy hammer ko chalana aur uss iron piece ko baas marna yahi kaam tha, per iss kaam mai uska inner strength aur bhi strong ho raha tha, jitna hammering karne se uska power lagta tha wo bahut jald hi usse recovery kar pa raha tha, aur ye usse yehsas ho raha tha ki bhale hi uska mystrious heaven skill bhale hi stage 2 ko breakthrough nahi kar pa raha hai per uska power badh raha hai.
In 11 din ke ander Tang San ne uss iron piece ko 8000 se bhi jyada baar usko hammering kar chuka tha aur wo iron piece baas lagatar chota ho ja raha tha, wo 50 square centimetre ka piece abhi uska original form ka 1/3rd hi reh gaya hai. Jesse jesse uska khana badha uska sarir majbut hota ja raha tha aur in 11 dino mai kuch jyada to changes nahi aaye fir bhi thoda thoda change dikhne lag gaya tha, aur jese jese hammering karta uska inner strength bhi badhta ja raha tha, apna inner strength ke sath uska physical strength bhi badh raha tha.
Tang San apne kaam mai bilkul focus tha aur Tang San ka focus Tang Hao ko hadh se jyada surprise kar diya tha. Tang Hao ko yesa lag raha tha ki agar uska beta superhuman strength ke sath janam hua bhi ho, to bhi uske hath mai koi bhi chot ki nishan hi nahi dikh raha tha. Kyun ki iron hammer ka Handel ko khurdura kar gaya tha usko hath se fishle ne na dene ke liye, aur jiss tarah Tang San apne kaam ko focus ke sath kar raha tha uske Komal aur chote hath se jyada chot lagni chahiye thy per uske hath mai yesa kuch dikh hi nahi raha tha na hi koi chot aur to aur nahi koi chale (scratch) ke nishan.
Aur wo kis liye jo raha tha ye baas Tang San hi janta tha, per wo isse kisiko bhi bata nahi sakta tha.
Heaven Dou Continent mai jaab koi bacha 6 saal ho jata hai to uska soul ko awaken kiya jata hai. Aur Tang San abhi kuch hi din mai 6 saal ka ho jayega, aur usse ye bhi lag raha tha ki uska mystrious heaven skill kahi na kahi iss soul se judi huyi hai. Aur wese bhi soul master banne mai Tang San ko koi khas dilchapsi nahi thy kyun ki wo uske bare kuch jyada nahi jatna tha. Wo to baas abhi Tang sect ka hidden weapon banane ke liye pura focus tha.
“Tang Hao, kya tum busy ho?” Tang San ke 10000 baar hammering pura karne ki kafi karib tha ki uske ghar ke bahar ek budhe admi ki awaj sunayi padi.
Abhi dopeher (afternoon) ho chuki thy, Tang Hao kaam kar raha tha, kuch forging kar raha tha, aur jo kaha gaya tha usse sunkar kewal ek hi word kaha, “hmm”.
Tang San bhi uss awaj ko sunke bhi apne kaam ko chod ke bahar ki aur aagaya, kewal wo budha admi ko dekhne ke liye, jo 60 saal se bhi jyada umar ke lag raha tha. Isko Tang San janta tha, Holy Spirit Village ke head Jack thy.
“Little San, aao dadaji ko tumhe dekhne do”, Old jack Tang san ki aur muud ke apna hath lehrate huye ye kaha tha. Ye head Tang San ke liye kabhi kabar kuch khane ke liye la deta tha aur usko apne pote jesse treat karte thy.
“hello, grandpa Jack”, Tang San old jack ke samne aagaya aur uske sanman mai unko greet kiya.
Tang Hao, “ mai abhi busy hun village head”.
Old jack Tang Hao se kam se kam 10 saal age mai bada tha, lekin Tang Hao ko hamesha unhi budhe ke generation mai Gina jata tha isiliye Tang Hao ka hamesha mood kharab hota tha. Aur old jack pehle se hi Tang Hao ke behaviour jante thy isiliye unhone kuch mind hi karte thy Tang Hao ke bato ka.
Old jack, “Tang Hao, little San jald hi 6 saal ho jayega, usse iss saal awakening ceremony mai samil hona chahiye”.
Tang Hao ne Tang San per ek najar dalte huye; “to thik hai wo usme hisa lega, wese konsa din hai”.
Old jack; “3 din mai hai jaab time aayega mai usse khud lene aajaunga, thik hai”. Jesse old jack Tang Hao ke ye kahna chahte ho ki agar wo tumhare sath gaya to wo late ho jayega.
Tang Hao ne apna sar thoda sa niche kiya, aab wo village head per jyada attention nahi de raha tha. Kyun wo janta tha.
Tang San jo kafi excitement mai tha, usne puch hi liya; “Grandpa Jack, ye awakening ceremony kya hai?”
Old jack ne Tang San ke question sunke; “ham tumhe to pata hoga sabhi mai apni khud ki ek soul hota hai, jo hame 6 saal ki umar mai awakening ceremony mai apna soul ko awaken kiya jata hai. Aur har baar ki tarah great soul master iss baar bhi aayenge tum sabhi bache ki soul ko awaken ke liye.
Great soul master ye bolte time old jack ke ankho mai chamak saaf dekha ja sakta tha.
Tang san sirf soul master ke bare mai kuch hi baate hi janta tha aur iske baare mai uska kuch jyad knowledge nahi tha isiliye usne Excitement mai grandpa Jack se ye sawal puch hi leta hai, “ ye Grand soul master kya hota hai, grandpa jack ?”
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Tang San ne apna pita ke baat sunke apna sar hilaya, blacksmith banana uske hidden weapon banane ke liye perfect profession tha.
Dad aapki age badh rahi hai, kuch saal ke liye jaab tak mai thoda aur bada (age baat) nahi ho jata taab tak ke liye chota mota chiz banana shika sakte hai to sikha dijiye aur fir baad mai mujhe apka kaam sambhal ne de dena. Yesa isliye Tang San ne kaha tha kyun ki pehle jo bhi usne banaya tha wo saab best hidden weapon thy, wo pehle kabhi bhi koi ashan (easy) forging nahi sikha tha aur nahi kabhi kiya tha. Isiliye wo ye try karna chahta tha aur apne dad se ye bolne ka kehna ka karan ye tha ki wo apne dad ko aur kaam karne nahi dena chahta tha.

Tang Hao, "blacksmith hmmm.”
Fir Ek ghisi piti (worn-out) si kursi (chair) ko khichkar iron ke uss waste ke paas sidhe bethte huye Tang Hao susti ke sath bola, “Tang San, mujhe batao, kis tarah ka blacksmith (lohar) sabse acha blacksmith (lohar) hai.”
Tang San ne to pehle uske bare socha fir jawab diya, “sabse acha blacksmith divine tools banane ke capable hona chahiye”.
Village walo ne jo kaha tha uske hisaab se duniya mai divine tools hai, bhale hi Tang San ye nahi janta tha ki ye divine tools kya hote hai, lekin divine kahe jane ke karan, uske hisaab se wo bahut hi acha hona chahiye isiliye usne ye answer de diya tha.
Tang Hao, Tang San ka jawab sunke uske upar hasne wala express lake, “divine tools ? Little San divine tools ke bare mai bhi janta hai. Thik hai fir batao divine tool banane ke liye kya use karne chahiye”.
Tang San ko yesa question apne pita Tang Hao se unexpected tha to usne immediately hi kaha, “of course sabse acha material use karna chahiye”.
Tang San ka jawab sunke Tang Hao ne apna hath Tang San ke gal ko sahlate huye, ek serious look lake, “agar tumhe ek master blacksmith banna hai to mere word ko hamesha yaad rakhna, koi bhi blacksmith divine tools banane ke liye best material ka use hi nahi karta hai, aur wo jo karte hai wo ache blacksmith nahi hai. Ek acha aur best blacksmith wo hota hai jo sadharan (common) material ka use karke bhi apne skill ke madat se usse divine tool bana paye to wo hi sache mayene mai best blacksmith hai”.
“Divine tool banane me liye sadharan (common) iron/material ka use karte hai ?”, Tang San ne surprise ke sath Tang Hao ke aur dekhne laga. Ordinarily Tang Hao ne bahut kaam hi Tang San se baat ki thy, ye din pehle se hi kisi ek time mai se sabse adhik ke roop mai Gina ja sakta tha.
Tang Hao khada hokar, kamre ke dusri taraf lohe (iron) ke ek 50 square centimetre ke ek block ki aur isara karke, “ agar tumhe blacksmith banne ke liye aur mujhse forging sikhne ke bare soch rahe ho to tumhe pehle isse (iron block) 10000 baar hammering karna hoga, aur jaab tak tum ye nahi karte taab tak mai tumhe kuch bhi nahi sikhaunga.”
Tang San ne pehle uss iron ke block ko dekha, kyun ki wo ek sadharan (common) iron block ka piece tha, jisme bahut si impurities (asudhiya)thy. Iron ke grade ke hisaab se compare kare to wo ye dekh ke bhi nahi bata sakta ki wo iron block kitna kharab ya fir acha hai.
Tang Hao ne apne mann me pehle se hi ander ki kamre ki aur sone liye wapas jana chahta tha, issi liye Tang San se, “tum abhi bhi apna mind change kar sakte ho”.
Tang San ki clear and clam awaj thy, “Dad, mujhe isse try karna hai".

Tang Hao, kuch surprise hoke Tang San ki aur dekha kyun ki usko ye expect hi nahi tha, “thik hai”.
Ek word ke sath, Tang Hao wanha se uth ke uss iron block ke paas pahunch gaya, aur usse wanha se utha ke sidhe forging area mai lake burner ke bhitar rakh diya, aur sath hi aag bhi jala di burner mai. Aur ye burner coal ke madat se jalta tha, yani jaab tak coal jalta rahega taab tak burner bhi jalta rahega.
Ye saab karne ke baad Tang Hao sone ke liye apne ander ki kamre ki aur chal diya, apne bete ko chod ke jo uss block ko 10000 baar hamering karna tha.
Tang San apne aap mai ek genius tha, agar yesa nahi hota to wo Budha Fury Tang Lotus, no.1 hidden weapon kese bana sakta tha, jiske liye usne apne life mai apna 10 saal ka time kho diya tha.
Coal ko jalte huye rakhne ke liye Tang San apna jagah se uth ke us burner mai air ko pump karne laga. Shu….shu…..air pump karne se wo burner ki aag aur bhi jyada hone laga, jisse ki wo iron piece aur bhi ache se burn hone laga,halaki Tang San kabhi bhi forging ke bare nahi janta tha,usne baas har roj Tang Hao ko ye karte huye dekha tha to usne bhi wanhi karne ke bare mai soch ke wanhi kiya.
Jese hi dhire dhire iron garam ho raha tha usne apne pita ke Jessa hammer ko khinch ke wanha le aaya jaha usse uss iron mai 10000 time hammering karna tha, ek aam 6 saal ka bacha wo hammer ko bilkul hila bhi nahi sakta tha, isse forging ke liye chalane ke bare mai baat hi chodiye.
Lekin Tang San abhi bhi uss bade se hatode (hammer) jo ki uske height jitna bada tha, usse pakde hua tha, mysterious heaven skill ke practice karke apne sarir ko majbut karna, bhale hi mysterious heaven skill ke stage 1 ko paar nahi kar pa raha hai fir bhi kisi young person ke Jessa uska body storng hai iss wajah se wo uss bhari bharkam bada sa hammer ko uthane ke kabil tha.
Burner se iron ko nikal ke Tang San ne usse hammering karna start kar deta hai, Tan..Tan…ki awaj nikal rahi thy jaab iron ka hammer uss iron ke piece se takrata to usme se ek clear aur sweet si awaj nikal raha tha. Ye Tang San ki pehli strike thy, aur forging ka shuruat thy.

Ander ke kamre mai, bistar per lete huye Tang Hao palat gaya, bhale hi uske ankh aab bhi band thy, fir bhi uske face mai surprising saaf dekha sakta tha, aur apne aap mai badbadata hai, “wo, wo hammer utha sakta hai, kya ye superhuman strength ke sath janam liya hai”.
Tan..Tan..Tan..lohar (blacksmith) ki dukan se bhi tez awaje aane lagi. Tang Hao aur Tang San, baap aur beta, ne apne profession jari rakha, lekin ek difference ke sath, iss din se Tang Hao ne Tang San ke liye ek aur forge bana diya jisme wo apna kaam kar sake apne wo iron block se. Uss din ke baad Tang Hao ne usse ek bhi instruction nahi diya, per Tang Hao ka sarab pina uss din se kaam ho gaya, iss wajah se pariwaar ka khana pina badh gaya.
Forging ek bilkul dull aur thaka dene wala kaam tha, lekin Tang San ne isko apne sarir ko aur strong banane ke liye sahi tarika samjha. 11 din bit gaye, wo heavy hammer ko chalana aur uss iron piece ko baas marna yahi kaam tha, per iss kaam mai uska inner strength aur bhi strong ho raha tha, jitna hammering karne se uska power lagta tha wo bahut jald hi usse recovery kar pa raha tha, aur ye usse yehsas ho raha tha ki bhale hi uska mystrious heaven skill bhale hi stage 2 ko breakthrough nahi kar pa raha hai per uska power badh raha hai.

In 11 din ke ander Tang San ne uss iron piece ko 8000 se bhi jyada baar usko hammering kar chuka tha aur wo iron piece baas lagatar chota ho ja raha tha, wo 50 square centimetre ka piece abhi uska original form ka 1/3rd hi reh gaya hai. Jesse jesse uska khana badha uska sarir majbut hota ja raha tha aur in 11 dino mai kuch jyada to changes nahi aaye fir bhi thoda thoda change dikhne lag gaya tha, aur jese jese hammering karta uska inner strength bhi badhta ja raha tha, apna inner strength ke sath uska physical strength bhi badh raha tha.
Tang San apne kaam mai bilkul focus tha aur Tang San ka focus Tang Hao ko hadh se jyada surprise kar diya tha. Tang Hao ko yesa lag raha tha ki agar uska beta superhuman strength ke sath janam hua bhi ho, to bhi uske hath mai koi bhi chot ki nishan hi nahi dikh raha tha. Kyun ki iron hammer ka Handel ko khurdura kar gaya tha usko hath se fishle ne na dene ke liye, aur jiss tarah Tang San apne kaam ko focus ke sath kar raha tha uske Komal aur chote hath se jyada chot lagni chahiye thy per uske hath mai yesa kuch dikh hi nahi raha tha na hi koi chot aur to aur nahi koi chale (scratch) ke nishan.

Aur wo kis liye jo raha tha ye baas Tang San hi janta tha, per wo isse kisiko bhi bata nahi sakta tha.

Heaven Dou Continent mai jaab koi bacha 6 saal ho jata hai to uska soul ko awaken kiya jata hai. Aur Tang San abhi kuch hi din mai 6 saal ka ho jayega, aur usse ye bhi lag raha tha ki uska mystrious heaven skill kahi na kahi iss soul se judi huyi hai. Aur wese bhi soul master banne mai Tang San ko koi khas dilchapsi nahi thy kyun ki wo uske bare kuch jyada nahi jatna tha. Wo to baas abhi Tang sect ka hidden weapon banane ke liye pura focus tha.
“Tang Hao, kya tum busy ho?” Tang San ke 10000 baar hammering pura karne ki kafi karib tha ki uske ghar ke bahar ek budhe admi ki awaj sunayi padi.
Abhi dopeher (afternoon) ho chuki thy, Tang Hao kaam kar raha tha, kuch forging kar raha tha, aur jo kaha gaya tha usse sunkar kewal ek hi word kaha, “hmm”.
Tang San bhi uss awaj ko sunke bhi apne kaam ko chod ke bahar ki aur aagaya, kewal wo budha admi ko dekhne ke liye, jo 60 saal se bhi jyada umar ke lag raha tha. Isko Tang San janta tha, Holy Spirit Village ke head Jack thy.
“Little San, aao dadaji ko tumhe dekhne do”, Old jack Tang san ki aur muud ke apna hath lehrate huye ye kaha tha. Ye head Tang San ke liye kabhi kabar kuch khane ke liye la deta tha aur usko apne pote jesse treat karte thy.
“hello, grandpa Jack”, Tang San old jack ke samne aagaya aur uske sanman mai unko greet kiya.
Tang Hao, “ mai abhi busy hun village head”.
Old jack Tang Hao se kam se kam 10 saal age mai bada tha, lekin Tang Hao ko hamesha unhi budhe ke generation mai Gina jata tha isiliye Tang Hao ka hamesha mood kharab hota tha. Aur old jack pehle se hi Tang Hao ke behaviour jante thy isiliye unhone kuch mind hi karte thy Tang Hao ke bato ka.
Old jack, “Tang Hao, little San jald hi 6 saal ho jayega, usse iss saal awakening ceremony mai samil hona chahiye”.
Tang Hao ne Tang San per ek najar dalte huye; “to thik hai wo usme hisa lega, wese konsa din hai”.
Old jack; “3 din mai hai jaab time aayega mai usse khud lene aajaunga, thik hai”. Jesse old jack Tang Hao ke ye kahna chahte ho ki agar wo tumhare sath gaya to wo late ho jayega.
Tang Hao ne apna sar thoda sa niche kiya, aab wo village head per jyada attention nahi de raha tha. Kyun wo janta tha.

Tang San jo kafi excitement mai tha, usne puch hi liya; “Grandpa Jack, ye awakening ceremony kya hai?”
Old jack ne Tang San ke question sunke; “ham tumhe to pata hoga sabhi mai apni khud ki ek soul hota hai, jo hame 6 saal ki umar mai awakening ceremony mai apna soul ko awaken kiya jata hai. Aur har baar ki tarah great soul master iss baar bhi aayenge tum sabhi bache ki soul ko awaken ke liye.
Great soul master ye bolte time old jack ke ankho mai chamak saaf dekha ja sakta tha.

Tang san sirf soul master ke bare mai kuch hi baate hi janta tha aur iske baare mai uska kuch jyad knowledge nahi tha isiliye usne Excitement mai grandpa Jack se ye sawal puch hi leta hai, “ ye Grand soul master kya hota hai, grandpa jack ?”


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